1. Easy (1.43 stars, 185 notes)
2. Hard (3.2 stars, 679 notes)
3. Normal (1.8 stars, 289 notes)

eclipselotus wrote:

Finish This Map Please~
Mikami Shiori always in heart~

wajinshu wrote:

hi
[General]
Uncheck countdown Fixxed
[Hard]
00:00:550 (1,2) -make this a 1/1 slider. slider end at 00:00:978 Fixed
00:03:550 (1,2,3) -

Try this

Fixed

00:08:050 (1) - In white tick piano sound why did you decide to skip it Fixed
00:23:264 (8) - ^ I didn't skip the white piano here
00:13:978 - Here I can't get to this exact timing point..
00:26:907 (4,1) - Overlap Fixed
00:35:264 (3,2) - stack the circle with the head of the slider, will look much better imo, no need in these overlaps Fixed
00:58:621 - missed circle Fixed
01:14:264 (1,2) - improve this blanket please xd Uhh idk whats wrong with it though
01:22:835 (3,1) - Stack please Fixed
01:35:692 (5,1) - Maybe blanket Fixed
02:05:692 (5,6) - Blanket please Fixed
03:13:407 (1) - X: 288 Y: 208 Fixed
04:27:550 (5,1) - Stack Fixed
GL

1. maybe this need more than one red line, you'd better retiming it imo.

1. lower sv might be better
2. 00:01:407 (2) - change to a 2/1 slider
3. 00:07:835 miss a note
4. 00:13:835 (1) - i think this should start from 00:14:264
5. 00:22:407 miss a note
6. 00:17:692 to 00:24:550 piano but after 00:25:407 change to vocal? That's kinda werid.
7. 00:27:978 (3,4) - change to a 2/1 slider imo
8. 00:34:835 (2) - change to two 1/1 slider started from 00:34:835 and 00:35:692
9. 01:04:835 (2) - dont change sv
10. in fact i'm really confused about what you mapping to, i suggest to map consistly

1. 00:02:692 (2,3) - single note is better
2. 00:05:692 (4) - slider here?
3. 00:06:978 (3) - 25% to hear it
4. 00:09:121 (9) - slider here?
5. 00:13:621 (1,2,3) - 25% to hear it

1. 00:02:692 - Think about only using whistle on the on-beat, 4 sounds a bit much.
2. 00:05:907 - Also random sounding whistles, they don't feel on purpose to me.
3. 00:36:764 (2) - is placed too far, there is no piano playing to suggest it should be played on next beat so needs to be closer to tell the player it's continuing.
4. 00:38:692 (8) - not far enough. You've placed plenty other circles this far at 1/4 time away, it's not easy to know this has a 1/2 gap instead.
5. 00:45:978 (3,4,5) - first instance of pianist playing an arpeggiated chord at 1/8 time on the beat, your arpeggiated circles are in 1/4 and end up off the beat
6. 00:58:407 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - all even notes yet all spaced in doubles, and even the doubles are spaced unevenly... pretty confusing imhio
7. 01:13:407 (2,3,4,5) - Again, uneven placement of doubled notes (particularly spacing from previous slider) suggests something other than even notes to the player. At least giving them roughly even spacing in between the two surrounding sliders.
8. 01:43:835 - Again, spacing here doesn't indicate timing, and the previous group was in double time to the piano
9. 02:03:978 - could be spaced further
10. 02:59:692 (2,3,4,5) - questionable placement again, why are the notes grouped into twos when that's not how they're played.
11. 03:54:978 (2,3,4,5) - same as above, this time its even worse. Player having seen notes from last comment, now they will see these and expect they are even timing as well...