Bump! \o/
Joined August 2013
bump.... waiting repair ship in kancolle...., create signature for change again
Joined November 2015
I just made this, let me know if you like it :3
Joined April 2014
-[Jess]- wrote:
We call this over-GFXedstill beautiful
Gosh, I'm tired. But I need to do something with GFX today. wip for another forum.
-[Jess]- wrote:
We call this over-GFXedOvergfxed indeed.
Let's start off with the good. The colors mesh pretty well for the most part and I like your placement of text. Your focals are also placed rather well. Probably the best of this bunch is the first piece since it has all of the things I've listed as good, plus the circle on Amatsukaze's face gives the piece a good focus on the focal.
Unfortunately, I have more problems with these pieces that I have more compliments about them. The lighting is messed up to hell and back where it's in places where it's not supposed to be. Last I checked, lights don't go into the folds of clothing or under armpits. I also mentioned earlier that one of the good things in these pieces were the colors? Yeah, it's also a weakness, but more so the coloring than the colors themselves, and combined with the textures that you've used, it makes some of them look like a mess. The worst offender of all of this is probably the last one, where it's just texture spam on top of texture spam with one color all over it (though you probably knew that already). It's just really hard to focus the focal and to be honest, it kind of hurts my eyes a little.
With that said, some advice:
- Limit your light sources to just one part of the canvas
- Rely less on coloring
- Try not to use as many textures spread across the canvas
Unfortunately, I have more problems with these pieces that I have more compliments about them. The lighting is messed up to hell and back where it's in places where it's not supposed to be. Last I checked, lights don't go into the folds of clothing or under armpits. I also mentioned earlier that one of the good things in these pieces were the colors? Yeah, it's also a weakness, but more so the coloring than the colors themselves, and combined with the textures that you've used, it makes some of them look like a mess. The worst offender of all of this is probably the last one, where it's just texture spam on top of texture spam with one color all over it (though you probably knew that already). It's just really hard to focus the focal and to be honest, it kind of hurts my eyes a little.
With that said, some advice:
- Limit your light sources to just one part of the canvas
- Rely less on coloring
- Try not to use as many textures spread across the canvas
Joined March 2014
SSShaymin wrote:
I love this comment-[Jess]- wrote:
We call this over-GFXedOvergfxed indeed.Let's start off with the good. The colors mesh pretty well for the most part and I like your placement of text. Your focals are also placed rather well. Probably the best of this bunch is the first piece since it has all of the things I've listed as good, plus the circle on Amatsukaze's face gives the piece a good focus on the focal.
Unfortunately, I have more problems with these pieces that I have more compliments about them. The lighting is messed up to hell and back where it's in places where it's not supposed to be. Last I checked, lights don't go into the folds of clothing or under armpits. I also mentioned earlier that one of the good things in these pieces were the colors? Yeah, it's also a weakness, but more so the coloring than the colors themselves, and combined with the textures that you've used, it makes some of them look like a mess. The worst offender of all of this is probably the last one, where it's just texture spam on top of texture spam with one color all over it (though you probably knew that already). It's just really hard to focus the focal and to be honest, it kind of hurts my eyes a little.
With that said, some advice:
- Limit your light sources to just one part of the canvas
- Rely less on coloring
- Try not to use as many textures spread across the canvas
Well,I think pic4 was overspamed with texture and stuff,looking back this remind me overspamed is not good and too messy to look at,I can't find this can catch any of my eyes.i will try to redo it later.really thanks for point out of the mistake
Joined March 2014
-[Jess]- wrote:
I love this comment
Well,I think pic4 was overspamed with texture and stuff,looking back this remind me overspamed is not good and too messy to look at,I can't find this can catch any of my eyes.i will try to redo it later.really thanks for point out of the mistake
Joined April 2016
oops, had to try again
but something is off and idk what :/
(Im not copying Leafy i just like the style f f s)
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