1. Beginner (1.11 stars, 51 notes)
2. Hard (2.68 stars, 164 notes)
3. Normal (1.75 stars, 88 notes)

1. There are no hitsounds at some parts.
2. The CS is too high for a normal, maybe set the CS to 3? There will be the little problem that some notes will faintly stack on the outside, so I recommend
   to make the DS a little bit higher
3. 00:32:530 (2) - This slider next to the same slider doesn't look very great. I think should CTRL + G this slider, move it a little bit (for example x:380 y:204)
   and fix the distance.
   00:33:315 (3) - You should put two circles here instead of a slider, that fits more to the beat.
   00:41:852 (1,1) - These long sliders don't look very well, maybe you should put sliders with the lenght of 00:46:036 (1) here.
   00:46:036 (1,2,3) - I mentioned this before, I think that such slider which look like completely the same don't look that good. You could take 00:47:082 (2) , CTRL + G and move it a little bit too the left. Here is an example of what I mean it should look like: http://puu.sh/nf2OB/83e2980e91.jpg
   00:54:405 (1,2) - You picked the wrong beat in this part imo. There are those piano sounds which are in the foreground, you should take those.
   01:02:251 (4) - Blanket with 01:02:774 (1)
   01:03:820 (2) - I think I don't need to mention this anymore
   01:11:143 (1) - Why is there a clapsound and not at 01:10:881 (4) D;

1. Maybe add more distance between 00:08:469 (1) and 00:09:516 (2) ? All other parts have bigger distance. I recommend to put this in x: 256 y:280.
2. 00:12:392 (7) - x:120 y:264 so it is exactly between the two notes.
3. 00:13:177 (2) - I wouldn't stack this with the end of 00:12:654 (1) . Make it like you did it in the next parts.
4. 00:16:315 - I think you can add some great things in this part. For example you could put a spinner, with the beginning at 00:15:792 and the end at 00:16:577 , or you could add a slider at 00:16:446 because there are two tones which you could emphasize.
5. Nice clap hitsounds!
6. 00:21:023 (1) - x:452 y:204 for exact ds
7. 00:40:899 - Look what I said before ^^
8. 00:50:220 - The inherited point isn't placed at a beat. You can find more of them in the next part, you should fix them
9. 00:49:959 (5) - Two circles instead of a slider would fit better
10. 00:52:313 (2,3) - There is no beat here, maybe delete those two sliders and have a break here (without putting a break in)?
11. 00:55:189 (3) - Blanket with sliderend of 00:54:405 (1)
12. 01:01:727 (3) - Try to have this circle in the grid. You should move 01:01:727 (3,4,5,6,7,1) a little bit down
13. 01:04:343 (6) - Maybe give a special shape to this slider?
14. 01:10:881 (9) - x:280 y:288
15. 01:13:627 (2,3) - This is very far away from 01:13:235 (1) . You should make the distance a little smaller here
16. 01:14:281 (4) - Why no clap?
17. 01:26:311 (5) - I would delete this, it doesn't fit here
18. 01:29:973 - You could add a spinner here and the end of it at 01:31:542

Beafowl wrote:

Hi from your queue c:

Won't mod Easy diff I'm too dump to mod them

Normal

1. There are no hitsounds at some parts. Just keep 'em natural
2. The CS is too high for a normal, maybe set the CS to 3? There will be the little problem that some notes will faintly stack on the outside, so I recommend Well, it's more like a advanced I guess
   to make the DS a little bit higher
3. 00:32:530 (2) - This slider next to the same slider doesn't look very great. I think should CTRL + G this slider, move it a little bit (for example x:380 y:204) You're right uh.
   and fix the distance.
   00:33:315 (3) - You should put two circles here instead of a slider, that fits more to the beat. Fixed
   00:41:852 (1,1) - These long sliders don't look very well, maybe you should put sliders with the lenght of 00:46:036 (1) here. Well, it's not a really difficult dff so I placed them to make the players not stressed out.
   00:46:036 (1,2,3) - I mentioned this before, I think that such slider which look like completely the same don't look that good. You could take 00:47:082 (2) , CTRL + G and move it a little bit too the left. Here is an example of what I mean it should look like: http://puu.sh/nf2OB/83e2980e91.jpg You're not wrong, but it's kinda like my own mapping style, so I won't change.
   00:54:405 (1,2) - You picked the wrong beat in this part imo. There are those piano sounds which are in the foreground, you should take those. Still, a relaxing moment.
   01:02:251 (4) - Blanket with 01:02:774 (1) Nope.
   01:03:820 (2) - I think I don't need to mention this anymore Yep.
   01:11:143 (1) - Why is there a clapsound and not at 01:10:881 (4) D; Fixed

Hard

1. Maybe add more distance between 00:08:469 (1) and 00:09:516 (2) ? All other parts have bigger distance. I recommend to put this in x: 256 y:280.
2. 00:12:392 (7) - x:120 y:264 so it is exactly between the two notes.
3. 00:13:177 (2) - I wouldn't stack this with the end of 00:12:654 (1) . Make it like you did it in the next parts.
4. 00:16:315 - I think you can add some great things in this part. For example you could put a spinner, with the beginning at 00:15:792 and the end at 00:16:577 , or you could add a slider at 00:16:446 because there are two tones which you could emphasize.
5. Nice clap hitsounds!
6. 00:21:023 (1) - x:452 y:204 for exact ds
7. 00:40:899 - Look what I said before ^^
8. 00:50:220 - The inherited point isn't placed at a beat. You can find more of them in the next part, you should fix them
9. 00:49:959 (5) - Two circles instead of a slider would fit better
10. 00:52:313 (2,3) - There is no beat here, maybe delete those two sliders and have a break here (without putting a break in)?
11. 00:55:189 (3) - Blanket with sliderend of 00:54:405 (1)
12. 01:01:727 (3) - Try to have this circle in the grid. You should move 01:01:727 (3,4,5,6,7,1) a little bit down
13. 01:04:343 (6) - Maybe give a special shape to this slider?
14. 01:10:881 (9) - x:280 y:288
15. 01:13:627 (2,3) - This is very far away from 01:13:235 (1) . You should make the distance a little smaller here
16. 01:14:281 (4) - Why no clap?
17. 01:26:311 (5) - I would delete this, it doesn't fit here
18. 01:29:973 - You could add a spinner here and the end of it at 01:31:542

Nice map m8 keep it going

fattypikachu wrote:

Alright, hello from your M4M queue! ^_^

[General]

The kiai isn't snapped properly. It looks a little better if you resnap it.

[Easy]

I suggest you map the ending, even if it ends up being simple. Having 15 seconds unused is kinda weird, especially considering the length of the song.

[Normal]

00:29:130 (4,1) - Move it a little bit closer to 00:28:346 (3) - ; it's too far away right now.

00:48:913 (4) - This note doesn't feel like it's mapped to anything. Try moving it to 00:49:174 - instead.

01:02:774 (1) - Move to x: 264 y: 252 so that it blankets 01:02:251 (4) - (Then just adjust everything accordingly.)

Again, like Easy, I suggest you map the ending.

[Hard]

00:21:284 (2) - Remove the whistle hitsounds, except the 1st one. The 1/6s don't match up with the background music, and having 3 so close together sounds weird.

00:31:222 (8,1) - Since you had 2 stacked 1/4s right before this, people will assume this is also a stacked 1/4 instead of a stacked 1/2 and click too early. I suggest you don't stack these two together.

00:54:405 (1) - Remove the last repeat and put a note at 00:54:797 - in its place.

01:06:958 (1) - I think this should be a 1/4 slider with 1 repeat. Also, get rid of the whistle hitsounds, except for the 1st one.

01:29:450 - Put a note here, so that it follows the rhythm you had going on earlier.

Hope I've helped! Good luck!

1. There is an audio track on your video. Don't forget to remove it with an editor.

1. 00:08:469 (1) - You don't need 2 points to have a curved slider. Simplify like this one: http://s8.postimg.org/o94hi9ksl/img1.png
2. 00:10:562 (2) - ^
3. 00:21:023 (1) - ^
4. 00:31:484 (4) - New combo
5. 01:12:712 (1) - Remove new combo
6. 00:56:497 (1,1) - Break time after the spinner seems very short, imo.
7. 00:50:220 - Unsnapped green timing line. This may be due to change of offset.
8. 00:58:589 - ^
9. 01:15:327 - ^
10. 00:52:313 - Insert break time??

1. 00:12:392 - Add circle here
2. 00:12:654 (2) - Make this a slider like 00:10:562 (1)
3. 00:52:313 - Insert break time??

1. 00:50:220 - Unsnapped green timing line. This may be due to change of offset.
2. 00:58:589 - ^
3. 01:15:327 - ^
4. 01:13:758 (3,4) - Make the sliderhead of (4) blanket (3)