1. 02:00:147 (3,4) - DS is bit off

1. 00:26:489 (1,2,3) - can you use same distance in 00:26:489 (1) - 's end and 00:26:854 (2) - 's head and 00:27:220 (3) - ?
   it's just for better looks lol
2. 00:36:184 (4) - when player playing this, this overlapping might get confuse imo, you should avoid this in someway
3. 01:24:842 (6) - NC for consistency with Insane
4. 03:03:257 (4) - add NC?
5. 03:25:940 (6) - same as 01:24:842 (6) -

1. OD7 or 7.5 is better spread imo
2. 00:27:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - can you make more spacing? this sound is still strong
3. 00:35:269 (1) - I'd stack it on 00:35:452 (2) - 's head, up to you tho
4. 00:54:293 (1) - ctrl+G for better flow?
5. 01:45:513 (1) - same as 00:35:269 (1) -
6. 02:03:440 (7) - umm... I know you following drums, but following vocals better at this part imo, so I'd move this circle to 02:03:623 -
7. 02:07:830 (7) - ^
8. 03:45:147 (1) - unsnapped

fuyuyu- wrote:

hi promapper
Normal

1. 02:00:147 (3,4) - DS is bit off…… fix

Hard

1. 00:26:489 (1,2,3) - can you use same distance in 00:26:489 (1) - 's end and 00:26:854 (2) - 's head and 00:27:220 (3) - ?
   it's just for better looks lol …… ok
2. 00:36:184 (4) - when player playing this, this overlapping might get confuse imo, you should avoid this in someway …… ok
3. 01:24:842 (6) - NC for consistency with Insane…… fix
4. 03:03:257 (4) - add NC?…… e …… bule when kiai start
5. 03:25:940 (6) - same as 01:24:842 (6) - …… ok

Insane

1. OD7 or 7.5 is better spread imo…… all diff OD = AR-1
2. 00:27:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - can you make more spacing? this sound is still strong…… a bit …… lazy
3. 00:35:269 (1) - I'd stack it on 00:35:452 (2) - 's head, up to you tho…… for the voice Segmentation rhythm …… i think jump 00:35:452 (2) - better
4. 00:54:293 (1) - ctrl+G for better flow?…… bad flow/jump when downbeat
5. 01:45:513 (1) - same as 00:35:269 (1) -
6. 02:03:440 (7) - umm... I know you following drums, but following vocals better at this part imo, so I'd move this circle to 02:03:623 -
7. 02:07:830 (7) - ^
8. 03:45:147 (1) - unsnapped…… fix

gl

Rakuen wrote:

很抱歉，前两个月被去掉BN了呜呜;_;

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Easy

1. 01:38:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这部分Drum/Clap好像放错了……fix
2. 03:02:525 (2) - 较难击中，换像这样的滑条如何01:23:561 (3) - ……ok

Normal

1. 01:11:123 (5) - Normal Sampleset + Soft Additions？……fix
2. 01:17:342 (4) - 碰到HP了……no problem
3. 02:01:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 旋律有点怪，建议都换成这一类的：……ok
   
   Image

   

Hard

1. 00:15:330 (1,2,3) - 因为Normal只放1/2，所以觉得Hard不能直接放1/8连打+跳。这得看上面的人怎么说 :3……那種廁所裏的石頭我見一個踢一個
2. 02:11:489 (4) - NC?……別的難度也都沒加

Nice map! Give star~

Good luck!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

1. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider isnt straight but 00:44:050 (4) - is? Make either both straight or both slightly angled pls.
2. 00:51:367 (1) - i would personally make this slider bend the other way to avoid overlap and for slightly better flow but up to you!
3. 01:48:440 (4) - i think this would look cleaner if it had the same angle as 01:46:977 (3) -

1. 02:03:257 (6) - you can place this note better.
2. 02:04:903 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this a perfect triangle? You are close
3. 02:11:489 (4) - i really like this idea - but i think you need to move it a little closer as it seems forced.
4. 03:26:123 - spinner?

• 
  Fine~

• maybe the best Easy I have seen in 2016

1. 01:11:123 (5) - change to normal-clap?
2. 03:12:220 (5) - ^

• 
  Fine

• 
  Fine

1. 01:28:684 (5) - like this?
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:38:013 (2,3,4,5) - like this?
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:50:086 (4) - move this to x:440 y:136 ?

NucleaRaven wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

[Easy]

1. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider isnt straight but 00:44:050 (4) - is? Make either both straight or both slightly angled pls. …… want not use ctrl+v all aprt …… i like random 【
2. 00:51:367 (1) - i would personally make this slider bend the other way to avoid overlap and for slightly better flow but up to you!……ok
3. 01:48:440 (4) - i think this would look cleaner if it had the same angle as 01:46:977 (3) -

thats all i need to put down for this diff - its pretty much perfect i think - just your slider angles are a tad off sometimes.

[Insane]

1. 02:03:257 (6) - you can place this note better.……don't mind it xd
2. 02:04:903 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this a perfect triangle? You are close……perfect triangle look like dull , i want to random
3. 02:11:489 (4) - i really like this idea - but i think you need to move it a little closer as it seems forced.
4. 03:26:123 - spinner? …… no

Nice map and amazing hitsounds!
Gl!

Xinely wrote:

• 
  Easy

1. 00:22:098 - would suggest finish too here because the cymbal …… i think normal-whistle better
2. 00:16:245 - 00:27:952 - ^
3. 00:44:050 (4) - make this a bit not straight like 00:42:586 (3) - , keep same the level position node tail …… all parallel not my wish
4. 01:55:757 (1) - i'd say drag the middle node to 404,92. the slider looks quite curve but not for making blanket. somehow looks a bit forced for me …… too nazi lol
5. 02:03:806 (2) - i'd say make this slider curved more a bit, better to see and having better flow too i guess …… ↑↑↑ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524270
6. 02:08:196 (2) - same with above if you agree
7. 02:40:757 - well SV change usually isnt recommended in easy, also imo 0,4x is already slooww, and i feel 0,25x slower and i would confuse to reduce my actual moving mouse speed from i got 2 mins 30 sec before face up this part …… i don't think so ……

• 
  Normal

1. 00:39:293 - add note for consistency with 00:33:440 (3) - …… e …… skip click here , 00:39:659 - more obviously
2. 00:56:123 - should map this imo, the vocal is so strong
3. 00:59:781 - ^
4. 01:05:635 (4) - 84,320 has better (smoother flow)
5. 01:19:903 (4) - i would say to not use 1/8 here, the vocal is ambiguous but almost in 01:20:269 - and that sound in 1/8 appears in 01:20:269 - too so would be weird if you map the 1/8 but not for 1/2, try other rhythm will be nicer …… player will follow voice , because it's obviously than drum
6. 02:27:220 (2) - 32,108 will give better flow for me as it doesnt go too down while you doing the curve in downward too, if agree then 02:28:318 (3) - 76,328
7. 02:30:147 - should map this, it's part of snare sound from 02:30:513 -
8. 02:38:562 - 02:38:928 - 02:38:928 - map them, would be very empty if you have no notes for full measure
9. 02:45:513 - if you map piano then you should map this too, i think you follow piano more here as you skip vocals like 02:46:245 - 02:41:854 - so would suggest to map it really
10. 02:57:220 - ^
11. 03:03:257 (4) - really suggest to map with easier rhythm or whatever, you map 1/6 when your Easy full of 1/1 , will be dangerous for sure …… no problem imo
12. 03:12:952 (1) - if you want to make a circle flow from 03:11:489 (3) - till this then i'd say ctrl+g, looks cute for me

• 
  Hard

1. 00:23:928 (2) - since you did this pattern in begining, try ctrl+g to give a variation? …… same direction is my wish ……
2. 00:32:251 (4) - there is a music for this but quite ambigious and hard to hear in 100% speed. just like overmap in 100% speed imo …… no problem imo
3. 00:38:104 (5) - ^
4. 01:03:074 (1) - stack in previous slider's tail instead, i'd read this for catch in 1/4 if use anti jump …… follow the music , none will think it's 1/4
5. 01:07:464 (1,2) - ctrl+g for better flow …… ok
6. 01:11:123 (3) - curve this like (4) for keep the flow
7. 01:28:318 (2) - i'd say ctrl+g, you did many jumps for this diff, the spread somehow looks quite big for me
8. 02:04:354 (2) - the jump is quite far imo
9. 02:34:903 (1) - no 1/8 music following from this slider, yeah prefer make to 1/2 slider because the music sounds like that …… a …… it's 1/3

• 
  Insane

1. AR 8,3 or 8,5 please, AR 9 too fast really for slow bpm …… ar9 is best ar for new player

good luck ~

Mikkuri wrote:

[Sharlo's Rosa]

1. 01:28:684 (5) - like this? k
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:38:013 (2,3,4,5) - like this?
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:50:086 (4) - move this to x:440 y:136 ?

Xinely wrote:

• 
  Sharlo

1. OD 8,5 would be nice for Insane+ k

Kibbleru wrote:

sharlo's diff is new im guessing
00:29:415 (1) - why bezier slider here xD
02:34:903 (1) - i think the 1/3 starts here so i would use one of these 02:35:635 (1) -

fixed all.

IamKwaN wrote:

Probably this.

http://puu.sh/nIcSQ/06d9a64aea.png from http://shimotsukin.com/753/af2/
http://puu.sh/nIcZw/d588104f43.png from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtK5G9MGkZE

Need some time to check the romanisations. Will approach you again later.

SPOILER

17:43 Kibbleru: can u take a look at a romanization for me owo
17:43 -[Koinuri]: ok owo
17:43 Kibbleru: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/401324
17:43 Kibbleru: just wana know if its correct or not owo
17:48 -[Koinuri]: http://nakae-mitsuki.net/retrotica/crbanner500.jpg I think found a banner or something for that album
17:49 -[Koinuri]: Konpeitou is a Japanese word so I think it should be the same but "Retorochika" is probably a made up word that combines English words so I think it should be "retrotica" like this thing
17:49 Kibbleru: what does retrotica even mean lol ><
17:50 -[Koinuri]: lol Idk
17:50 -[Koinuri]: I think it's "Retro" + something with "~tica"
17:50 Kibbleru: i doubt thats an english word lol
17:51 Kibbleru: google doenst recognize it http://puu.sh/nLqap/255189acc3.png
17:51 -[Koinuri]: Yeah, that's why I think it's made up, like
17:51 *-[Koinuri] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/249435 Zips - Mushikui Psychedelism [Guard Up!]]
17:52 Kibbleru: psychedelism
17:52 -[Koinuri]: psychedelism
17:53 Kibbleru: man
17:53 Kibbleru: metadata ><
17:53 -[Koinuri]: rip

KSHR wrote:

It's the first time for me to see the mapper adding the vocalist's nickname (シモツキン) to Tags.. lol …… my english lv1 and my japanese lv0, i don't know it's nickname 233

I have no idea how to read 幾丹弥吹 …… i can read it use chinese

IamKwaN wrote:

\o

Unicode Title: 金平糖レトロチカ - Another Flower ver. -
Romanised Title: Confetti Retrotica - Another Flower ver. -
Unicode Artist: 霜月はるか
Romanised Artist: Haruka Shimotsuki

References:
http://puu.sh/nIcSQ/06d9a64aea.png from http://shimotsukin.com/753/af2/
http://puu.sh/nIcZw/d588104f43.png from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtK5G9MGkZE
http://puu.sh/nIdcR/09c1ff0f50.jpg from http://nakae-mitsuki.net/retrotica/#link
http://puu.sh/nIdfV/dd7a20e7bc.jpg from ^
http://puu.sh/nOmfR/cc0dce0018.jpg from http://shimotsukin.com/project/melo/
http://puu.sh/nOmgf/a0ceaf570d.jpg from http://shimotsukin.com/
http://puu.sh/nOmgJ/5f6021c16e.png from ^

Good luck la o/

Shurelia wrote:

Star because Shimotsuki Haruka.

Hit me up if you need mod!

already bubbled , hype