JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size) [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

HappyRocket88

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

HappyRocket88 2016-01-04T02:55:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 23 de junio de 2016 at 11:12:40

Artist: JP
Title: Boku ni Invitation (TV size)
Source: しろくまカフェ
Tags: ezek Voli MkGuh Jusenkyo opening Shirokuma Café Sloth ナマケモノ Pengin ペンギン Panda パンダ Sasako 笹子 Grizzly グリズリ Polar Bear シロクマ Llama ラマ John Paul Lam Yoshiharu Shiina
BPM: 131,2
Filesize: 18099kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Hard (2,77 stars, 183 notes)
Insane (3,45 stars, 229 notes)
Jusen's Rain (3,31 stars, 259 notes)
Mk's Normal (2 stars, 127 notes)
Rockezek's Easy (1,38 stars, 74 notes)
Voli's Special Blend (3,84 stars, 235 notes)

Download: JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size)
Download: JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Guys above are really good mappers. =w=/

Full Version Here

By ezek and me.

By Mkguh

By Voli

By Jusenkyo

Very thanks to newtoniorock8 for his platter! Download newtoniorock8's Platter here

Tons of thanks to Renia Xenophere for his Insane! Download Renia Xenophere's Insane here

Shirokuma Cafe Party

Make sure to check these openings/endings too!

Metadata Confirmation Here

IamKwaN wrote:
Unicode Title: ボクにインビテーション (TV size)
Romanised Title: Boku ni Invitation (TV size)

from the OST booklet

My sincere thanks go to

ezek for providing the super video and overall helping with skinning =w=
Voli for making the first banner and helping out with the skin too. °v°)/
BoatKrab for making the renovated banner. >w</
IamKwan for the metadata clarification. \:D/

Anime Information

Shirokuma Cafe

Shirokuma Cafe is a Japanese manga series by Aloha Higa. It revolves around the everyday lives of a group of animals mingling with humans at a café run by a polar bear. An anime adaptation by Studio Pierrot aired in Japan between April 2012 and March 2013. While it never received an official international release (mostly due to its heavy emphasis on puns), it is available on the streaming website Crunchyroll alongside the television broadcast for global audiences.

Genre: Slice of life, slapstick

Star Rating:

Watch it here: here
Read the manga: here

Last edited by HappyRocket88 2016-06-25T03:42:21+00:00, edited 188 times in total.

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-01-04T03:25:08+00:00

/me dances

sir, this is private.

18:32 ezek: klik
18:56 HappyRocket88: Ezek!
18:56 HappyRocket88: Tengo una insane \o.o/
18:56 ezek: :OOO
18:56 ezek: donde?
18:56 HappyRocket88: ¿Te podría pedir un testplay? >w<
18:57 ezek: sure~
18:57 ezek: aunque soy malo para las insanes xD
18:57 ezek: pero ya sabes que todo por ti :)
18:57 ezek: yu solo mandame sin preguntar~
18:57 *HappyRocket88 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/871599 JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV Size)]
18:57 HappyRocket88: >w</
18:57 ezek: downloading~
18:57 ezek: 100%
18:59 HappyRocket88: ay
18:59 HappyRocket88: espera
19:00 ezek: me estan hablando irl
19:00 ezek: 30 secs
19:00 ezek: listo~
19:00 ezek: estas ahi?
19:00 HappyRocket88: sep
19:00 HappyRocket88: Sólo que...
19:01 ezek: hm?
19:01 HappyRocket88: no era necesario
19:01 HappyRocket88: que dieras retry
19:01 HappyRocket88: XD
19:01 ezek: xD
19:02 HappyRocket88: ayyy kdfsalkdf
19:02 HappyRocket88: XD
19:02 HappyRocket88: por alguna razón
19:02 HappyRocket88: estoy sonriendo ><sakhdfasdf
19:03 ezek: nice~ aunque tu estilo en ocasiones lo siento rarito, talvez soy yo :p
19:03 HappyRocket88: Gracias por el testplay, ezek >w</
19:03 HappyRocket88: Al menos la pudiste pasar >w<
19:03 ezek: ahora con el osz ya puedo buscarte bien el video :D
19:03 ezek: la puedo jugar mejor, es que estaba jugando con el humo
19:05 HappyRocket88: ayy
19:05 HappyRocket88: nice A :D
19:05 ezek: 00:49:695 (2) -  Hermoso *.*
19:07 ezek: 00:43:750 (1,2,3) -  simetria forzada ?)
19:08 HappyRocket88: hahahah
19:08 HappyRocket88: XD
19:08 HappyRocket88: YES! XD
19:11 ezek: 01:01:928 (7,1) - Fluyen mejor [http://puu.sh/miPi4/178f87f94d.jpg asi] ~
19:12 HappyRocket88: ohhhh
19:12 HappyRocket88: nice!
19:12 HappyRocket88: dun
19:18 ezek: 01:23:536 (5) - Deberia ser igual a 01:23:994 (1) -         Quedaria [http://puu.sh/miPAW/03a525c1eb.jpg asi]
19:18 ezek: Se ve mejor imo
19:19 ezek: puedes copiar 01:23:994 (1) - y hacerle Ctrl+h, Ctrl+J y Ctrl+G
19:20 ezek: asi lo hacer rapido y bonito~
19:20 ezek: Haces*
19:20 HappyRocket88: dun!
19:20 HappyRocket88: :o
19:22 ezek: 01:26:280 (2) - Personalmente, me gusta mas [http://puu.sh/miPPS/01642430da.jpg asi] por como se siente
19:24 HappyRocket88: dun!
19:24 ezek: y por ultimo, la resolucion de tu BG no es aceptable, no es por la calidad, es por la resolucion. Te recomiendo usar una 1366x768
19:26 HappyRocket88: ay
19:26 HappyRocket88: XD
19:26 HappyRocket88: Necesitaré buscar
19:26 HappyRocket88: cosas de Shirokuma café
19:26 HappyRocket88: XD
19:26 ezek: se van a venir mas cosas, yo no soy muy bueno modeando~
19:27 ezek: quieres que postee el log?
19:27 HappyRocket88: sure >w</
19:27 ezek: :D

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,693 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2016-01-04T03:37:47+00:00

irc

22:08 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: pinche tableta
22:09 HappyRocket88:

22:09 HappyRocket88: ¿es tan dura?
22:09 HappyRocket88: ahh
22:09 HappyRocket88: Xd
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: no taaanto
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: pero..
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: ese espaciado está muy exagerado
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: es una mezcla entre mapa chino y Saten
22:09 HappyRocket88: See... algunos jumps
22:09 HappyRocket88: los siento overdone
22:09 HappyRocket88: HAHAHA
22:09 HappyRocket88: indeed
22:09 HappyRocket88: XD
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: muchos*
22:11 HappyRocket88: quisiera arreglarlos
22:11 HappyRocket88: pero no se me ocurre
22:11 HappyRocket88: que hacer
22:11 HappyRocket88: XD
22:11 ErunamoJAZZ: seguir el rirmo?
22:11 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
22:12 ErunamoJAZZ: el mapa me acordó de este
22:12 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/136319 Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)]
22:13 HappyRocket88: Yo tome referencias de este
22:13 *HappyRocket88 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/112817 Yousei Teikoku - Senketsu no Chikai]
22:13 HappyRocket88: XDDDDDD
22:14 ErunamoJAZZ: Saten mapea muy bacano
22:14 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, una cosa es una canción a 200bpm, y otra una a 130

22:14 HappyRocket88: hahahha
22:14 HappyRocket88: XD
22:14 HappyRocket88: Que forma tan
22:14 HappyRocket88: sútil de decirlo
22:14 HappyRocket88: xD
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: ud sabe que yo la estimo mucho, no voy a ser tan tosco pa decirle algo asó
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: así
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: ^^
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: a su insane, hay partes que podríaponerle más notas
22:15 HappyRocket88:

22:16 HappyRocket88: dónde dónde! Xd
22:16 ErunamoJAZZ: y del espaciado, es que se sienten exagerados por lo lento de la canción, supongo
22:16 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:05:221 -
22:16 ErunamoJAZZ: acorte el slider y ponga una nota acá
22:17 HappyRocket88: dun!
22:17 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:08:308 -
22:17 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:10:594 -
22:18 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:15:625 -
22:18 ErunamoJAZZ: en casi todos los espacios mejor dicho (?
22:18 HappyRocket88: XDD
22:18 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:28:658 - acabelo acá, y pone nota luego
22:19 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:48:094 (2) - overmap
22:20 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:53:811 (3,4) - Ctrrl + G
22:20 HappyRocket88: Vale, hay unos espacios que los deje así intencionalmente porque no escuchaba batería. XD
22:20 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:00:442 -
22:21 ErunamoJAZZ: sí, aunque en casi todo creo que se siente más la voz
22:22 HappyRocket88: vaya, ese del ctrl g se oye genial!
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: eso con el ritmo
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: ya con lo otro...
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: le toca ud misma
22:22 HappyRocket88: yep
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: FIND A WAY, HAPPY
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: :3
22:22 HappyRocket88: miraré como coloco las notas. XD
22:22 HappyRocket88: Gracias por el mod, Eru! >w</
22:22 HappyRocket88: XD
22:23 ErunamoJAZZ: conque no exagere los jumps, le va bien
22:23 ErunamoJAZZ: si quiere, fijese en algo que hice en el mapa de yousei
22:23 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/721420 Yousei Teikoku - Kami, Nozomu sekai to hakoniwa gensou - Intro [EruJazz]]
22:24 HappyRocket88: xd
22:24 HappyRocket88: CS 3 o 2.5 creo
22:24 ErunamoJAZZ: pero no eso
22:24 ErunamoJAZZ: jajaja
22:24 ErunamoJAZZ: pere
22:25 ErunamoJAZZ: miento, eso no lo hice en ese mapa
22:25 ErunamoJAZZ: agg
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: osea, la cosa de subirle la velocidad a los sliders, pero bajar el espaciado
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: eso puede ser util, quizás
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: asdas
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: no sé
22:26 HappyRocket88: es que
22:26 HappyRocket88: el SV es altísimo XDD
22:26 HappyRocket88: No sé que estaba pendejiando en el timing
22:26 HappyRocket88: xD
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: jajaja
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: o..
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: puede pensar en mapear para DT
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ:

22:27 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/308908 yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou]
22:30 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, chao
22:30 ErunamoJAZZ: mañana hay que trabajar
22:31 HappyRocket88: Sino le da pereza mañana de
22:31 HappyRocket88: postear el log >w<
22:31 HappyRocket88: Se lo agradecería. o.o7
22:31 HappyRocket88: Buenas noches, Eru!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-01-04T05:40:58+00:00

¡Hola! Moderación que no es de IRC.
Estoy de vuelta, ahora moderando la versión TV Size.

General

Inconsistency in video offset: Mapset: 185 / Voli's Special Blend: 189
Inconsistency in BG sizes: Required: 1366x768 / Unrankable: i.jpg, people.jpg
Inconsistency in title: Romanised: Boku ni Invitation (TV Size) / Unicode: ボクにインビテーション TV size is missing in Unicode title
Elimina el .osb, no sirve para nada
Easy and Mk's Normal - 00:01:667 - delete green line, is useless
Sugiero poner un normal-sliderslide.wav / soft-sliderslide.wav que esté en silencio. Es decir, para que la deslizada no suene tan mal.
Si bien el set ya tiene todas las dificultades, entonces mueve esto como mapa pendiente

Easy

El HP debe ser 2.
00:07:154 (2) - Está mal la forma de en medio
~~00:27:276 (1) - Este deslizador es extraño~~ Ya no, es hermoso
00:32:764 (3) - No topa con la barra de vida, pero casi lo hace, muévelo un poco
00:52:886 - Imo este descanso no debería terminar aquí, haz que termine por default
01:14:837 (1) - No es buena idea esta "M"
Buen mapeo, pero el DS de este map está muy distanciado

Mk's Normal

Ã£Æ’Å“Ã£â€šÂ¯Ã£ÂÂ«Ã£â€šÂ¤Ã£Æ’Â³Ã£Æ’â€œÃ£Æ’â€ Ã£Æ’Â¼Ã£â€šÂ·Ã£Æ’Â§Ã£Æ’Â³? What is this? Just fix it cause the title and source is conflicting
I can mod in Portuguese but I'm too lazy to do that (?
00:03:496 (1,2,3) - DS problem
00:23:389 (3,2) - Overlap
00:36:423 (3) - No beat in 00:36:766 there, so, don't need for a reverse slider.
01:03:633 - Hit circle here
01:07:520 (1) - Not good shape
01:13:008 (3) - Is touching HP bar
01:27:642 (1,2) - Remove whistle and leave clap enabled
01:29:471 (1) - Finish is not good for the song

Advanced

Está bien

Hard

00:14:243 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - No se si poner saltos es una buena idea
00:29:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lo mismo
00:30:477 (7) - Este deslizador debería terminar en el tick rojo
00:40:081 (1) - Mueve esto a x:32 y:196, ya que esto está muy pegado con este deslizador: 00:39:167 (3)
00:57:231 (4,5,6) - Elimina esto y que ahí empieze la ruleta para un buen flujo rítmico
00:57:917 (1) - La ruleta debe terminar en el tick blanco
01:13:923 - 01:29:471 - ¿?

Insane

00:15:853 (6,7) - Pienso que las vocales no dan ritmo
00:19:969 (1) - Se superpone a si mismo
00:24:085 (2) - Mueve esto a x:230 y:82, esto para lograr un buen flujo rítmico
00:32:774 (1) - Casi topa con la barra de vida, muévelo un poco hacia abajo
00:49:695 (2) - (esto x3 veces), ¡Feliz navidaaaad! (léase con voz de Santa :'v) Creo que este deslizador no se ve bien para los jugadores
00:53:811 (3) - Lo mismo que 00:32:774 (1)
00:57:241 (3,4,5,6) - Recomiendo eliminar esto y que en ese tiempo, empieze la ruleta. Eso mejoraría el ritmo, imo.
01:02:500 (2) - Quita el silbido, no suena bien
01:10:274 (4) - Muy largo, recomiendo 2 deslizadores en vez de esto.
01:26:737 (3,4) - Nada, solo me gustan estos deslizadores, especialmente por que son una familia y unos hermanos
01:28:109 (2,3) - Estos 2 círculos están muy lejos de este salto: 01:28:795 (4,5,6)
01:29:024 (5) - Mueve esto a x:157 y:220 para que el salto se vea bien.
01:29:481 (1) - Agrega un sonido final.

Voli's Special Bland

00:01:667 (1) - This slider should be end on red tick
00:45:569 (5) - Put NC
00:49:685 (3) - This is not symmetrical
01:11:179 (1,3) - Same
01:11:179 (1,3,1,2,3) - Not neccesary so many finish
01:29:472 (8) - I suggest remove finish

Feedback
No eres malo/a haciendo Expertos (Insane), solo que necesitas mejorar un poco para futuros mapas. De todas formas, debo admitir que está muy bien hecho.
Buena suerte con tu café (mapa).

Last edited by Underforest 2016-01-10T09:12:16+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-04T14:23:55+00:00

Can i make easy or hard? >v<

snz

877 posts

Joined February 2015

snz 2016-01-04T18:01:43+00:00

~~I Can Make One Extra Or Taiko GD?~~ This Map Is Too Bad!

Last edited by snz 2016-01-06T17:19:03+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-01-05T23:00:41+00:00

Awh Rocket, you don't ask me for GD Dx

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-05T23:58:48+00:00

I fixed somethings by myself, and cause Rocket said O3O

Mk's Normal aaaaaaaaaaaa sdsdsdsadksadsadçlsadjmakçldjmsakçldjm

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59517
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.5
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Artist:JP
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Creator:HappyRocket88
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Tags:
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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-01-06T01:08:14+00:00

(modding anterior)

Last edited by Underforest 2016-01-10T03:41:06+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-01-06T10:59:16+00:00

some small suggestions
feel free to ignore them lol

[Mk's Normal]

00:23:389 (3,2) - stack?
00:38:252 (1,1) - these 2/1 slider reverse makes a bit boring in this diff imo (since it has the low bpm the 2/1 sliders are pretty long)
01:07:520 (1) - newbs are used to follow the simple curved or linear sliders so consider to change the slider like this
01:18:496 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:22:246 (3,5) - nazi
00:41:682 (6,7,1) - it will be nice if they have same DS on this triple.
jump spacing 00:53:801 (3,4) - between 00:54:487 (5,1) - should be same will be nice imo
01:01:575 (4,5,1) - this triple should same distance regardless of impact of the beat
01:16:667 (1,4) - stack?
01:20:325 (1) - pretty hard to read lol. you can change slider's shape like this

[Insane]

00:02:581 (4) - y:179 to make it same y-axis with 00:01:667 (1) -
00:14:471 (1,3) - should be same how 00:14:700 (2,4) - was aligned, or vice-versa.
00:24:075 (2) - and 00:24:761 (4) - should be same distance with their previous slider. It was pretty obvious to see the difference of their distance by looking their followpoints so ye
00:53:343 (2,4) - avoid touching these even though they're slight
00:59:746 (2) - maybe it will better if this distance will equal with 00:59:517 (1,3) - since 00:59:974 - don't really emphasize the strength of the song itself
01:19:410 (3,4) - can see that it's random compared to 01:18:496 (1,2) - , try copypasta the one of their slider then rotate to make it clean-looking or at least they have similar shape.

let me support you even though my mod is bad af ;3

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-06T12:27:20+00:00

Underforest

Mk's Normal

Ã£Æ’Å“Ã£â€šÂ¯Ã£ÂÂ«Ã£â€šÂ¤Ã£Æ’Â³Ã£Æ’â€œÃ£Æ’â€ Ã£Æ’Â¼Ã£â€šÂ·Ã£Æ’Â§Ã£Æ’Â³? What is this? Just fix it cause the title and source is conflicting Baka puush!
I can mod in Portuguese but I'm too lazy to do that (? /me cries
00:03:496 (1,2,3) - DS problem It is not a problem, it's just because of the stack
00:23:389 (3,2) - Overlap
00:36:423 (3) - No beat in 00:36:766 there, so, don't need for a reverse slider. Well, there is a very low beat, i'll keep it for now, if someone else complain, i might change it :3
01:03:633 - Hit circle here I prefer keeping without notes, since it has a instrumental part there, not vocals.
01:07:520 (1) - Not good shape Right, fixed.
01:13:008 (3) - Is touching HP bar It is not https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279547
01:27:642 (1,2) - Remove whistle and leave clap enabled Right :3
01:29:471 (1) - Finish is not good for the song O3O

tY!

Re-editaré este post cuando el easy este terminado

Atenta[/quote]

-AKiTOSHI-

-AKiTOSHi- wrote:
some small suggestions
feel free to ignore them lol

[Mk's Normal]
00:23:389 (3,2) - stack? Nah
00:38:252 (1,1) - these 2/1 slider reverse makes a bit boring in this diff imo (since it has the low bpm the 2/1 sliders are pretty long) Let's say, the song at this part, is boring too.
01:07:520 (1) - newbs are used to follow the simple curved or linear sliders so consider to change the slider like right.this
01:18:496 (1) - ^ ^

Ma update o3o

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: i like chess.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59517
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 89481
DistanceSpacing: 1.25
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Boku ni Invitation (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ボクにインビテーション
Artist:JP
ArtistUnicode:JP
Creator:HappyRocket88
Version:Mk's Normal
Source:しろくまカフェ
Tags:
BeatmapID:872788
BeatmapSetID:400613

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"tomato.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2016-01-09T20:01:38+00:00

[special blend]
00:00:981 (1,2,3,1) -
if you look at these 4 objects, you will see that the distance between 1-2-3 is almost the same as the slider (1) length. basically when you are playing this diff for the first time you will think that since these circles are 1/2, the slider will be 1/2 too. when playing i basically moved my cursor too fast, got 100 there and missed the next slider after that.
i suggest you to use spacing around 1.0-1.2 here to make it easier to understand. this will also fit the song really well because in the beginning of the song there's only vocals and no music, so this part is pretty calm and should not contain jumps.
http://i.imgur.com/cvu1Umo.png
00:04:410 (3,4) -
a small flow problem you might want to fix. see, your curved slider suggests a curve the player should follow, but the circle next to it doesn't follow it. http://i.imgur.com/xmAuvpi.png it's nice to have the circle fit the slider curve.
suggestion: http://i.imgur.com/C0l2HFe.png
00:12:185 (1,2) -
these two sliders are too close for a 1/1, better do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4302697
00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - 00:25:904 (2,3) - 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
these circles are placed at a 0.9x distance making it effectively an anti-jump. you have to move your cursor a bit slower than usual which doesn't flow well and feels a bit bad; better use 1.0x-1.2x spacing here
00:33:679 (3) -
same flow thing as at 00:04:410 (3,4) -
rotate the slider a bit, like this http://i.imgur.com/IG7u0Zw.png
00:30:935 - to 00:45:569 -
i feel like this part with the way vocals and music sound will look a lot better if you made the sliders even slower.
0.6x or 0.5x slider velocity would fit in this part more.
00:45:569 (1) - 00:47:170 (3) -
well, i overall do not really like the way you made some sliders in this diff, but this one is particularly too bad. this sudden turn with an edge just makes no sense, why can't you make it a smooth slider? vocals fit it very well
01:01:918 -
that's up to you, but for example at this point you could add a note (to make a triple). you have a few places in this part of the diff where you could add more triples, just look it through
01:25:356 (6) - this thing touches the health bar, consider moving it down

[insane]
00:04:410 (5,6,7,1) -
the spacing is inconsistent, 00:05:211 (7) - this circle has prev 1.10x and next 1.40x
00:19:731 (6) -
i know you wanted to make a blanket, but as a result you have 0.77x spacing. make it around 1.0x
http://i.imgur.com/81irV43.png
00:20:645 (3,4,5) -
same here, these all objects should not be so close to each other, it creates clutter and doesn't look good
00:24:304 (3,4) -
do not use 0.8x spacing please. it means that the player will have to move his cursor slower than he did it when following the slider. this breaks the flow and feels kinda bad
00:27:734 (2,3) -
same
00:31:849 (3) -
you could move this one a bit closer to the previous circle to make a triangle
http://i.imgur.com/WV8yY6h.png
00:37:109 (2,3) - 00:39:167 (3,4) - 00:40:081 (1,2) - 00:43:511 (4,1) -
your spacing in this part is very inconsistent, it changes from 0.9x to 1.2x randomly
00:53:801 (3) -
this slider shape is just strange? why not use a circular slider?
00:54:258 (4,5) - 00:54:715 (1,2) - 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5) -
again they are placed too close to each other which creates an uncomfortable antijump
i am not going to keep pointing out these mistakes with bad spacing. but there a lot of them in this map later.

[hard]
okay i can't continue sorry.
this map has very very inconsistent spacing which can be easily fixed by using distance snap
00:30:477 (7,1) - also some weird overlaps
but i just can't mod it in this unpolished state with a lot of strange spacing changes
00:45:340 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/YjeevIV.png just look at this, why?
no, sorry, i can't continue, i tried my best

conclusion:
please use distance snap when you don't want to make a jump

Voli

811 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2016-01-09T21:02:41+00:00

grumd wrote:
[special blend]
00:00:981 (1,2,3,1) -
if you look at these 4 objects, you will see that the distance between 1-2-3 is almost the same as the slider (1) length. basically when you are playing this diff for the first time you will think that since these circles are 1/2, the slider will be 1/2 too. when playing i basically moved my cursor too fast, got 100 there and missed the next slider after that.
i suggest you to use spacing around 1.0-1.2 here to make it easier to understand. this will also fit the song really well because in the beginning of the song there's only vocals and no music, so this part is pretty calm and should not contain jumps.
http://i.imgur.com/cvu1Umo.png fixed
00:04:410 (3,4) -
a small flow problem you might want to fix. see, your curved slider suggests a curve the player should follow, but the circle next to it doesn't follow it. http://i.imgur.com/xmAuvpi.png it's nice to have the circle fit the slider curve.
suggestion: http://i.imgur.com/C0l2HFe.png fixed
00:12:185 (1,2) -
these two sliders are too close for a 1/1, better do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4302697
00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - 00:25:904 (2,3) - 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fixed
these circles are placed at a 0.9x distance making it effectively an anti-jump. you have to move your cursor a bit slower than usual which doesn't flow well and feels a bit bad; better use 1.0x-1.2x spacing here the spacing there plays well and matches the intensity of the vocals, also simply changing the spacing here will kill the map's structure, no change
00:33:679 (3) -
same flow thing as at 00:04:410 (3,4) -
rotate the slider a bit, like this http://i.imgur.com/IG7u0Zw.png fixed
00:30:935 - to 00:45:569 -
i feel like this part with the way vocals and music sound will look a lot better if you made the sliders even slower.
0.6x or 0.5x slider velocity would fit in this part more. they're slow enough right now D:
00:45:569 (1) - 00:47:170 (3) -
well, i overall do not really like the way you made some sliders in this diff, but this one is particularly too bad. this sudden turn with an edge just makes no sense, why can't you make it a smooth slider? vocals fit it very well you're right, changed the first one into a smooth shape but the second one fits well in my opinion due to the small pitch shift in the vocals there.
01:01:918 -
that's up to you, but for example at this point you could add a note (to make a triple). you have a few places in this part of the diff where you could add more triples, just look it through I see what you mean, but I'd rather accentuate the vocals on these places by not adding a triple, the drum sounds there aren't that audible. There are other places though where the drum riff thingy is more audible and they have their respective triples, such as 01:07:063 (6,1,2) - .
01:25:356 (6) - this thing touches the health bar, consider moving it down fixed by altering the slider shape making it point a bit more downwards.

thanks for the mod Grumd

PS: use image boxes rather than pasting the links here, I accidentally clicked on one instead of opening it in a new tab and boom there goes my reply gahhh

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256,328,89472,1,4,0:0:0:0:

grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2016-01-10T00:16:35+00:00

PS: use image boxes rather than pasting the links here, I accidentally clicked on one instead of opening it in a new tab and boom there goes my reply gahhh

google chrome usually saves what you were writing in text boxes when you press "back" :p
if you're using a different browser maybe you'll want to move to chrome just because of that

but yeah i'll use boxes now, thanks

Voli

811 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2016-01-10T03:05:59+00:00

grumd wrote:
PS: use image boxes rather than pasting the links here, I accidentally clicked on one instead of opening it in a new tab and boom there goes my reply gahhh
google chrome usually saves what you were writing in text boxes when you press "back" :p
if you're using a different browser maybe you'll want to move to chrome just because of that
but yeah i'll use boxes now, thanks

firefox master race
*flies*

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-01-10T03:33:18+00:00

He re-editado todo mi modding en un solo post. Está en la página 1 para que no se vea tan mal y para evitar silences.

Last edited by Underforest 2016-01-10T03:40:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

HappyRocket88 2016-01-10T03:38:36+00:00

ye!!! Muchas gracias Alejo. o.o7

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-01-10T18:38:47+00:00

Hermoso slider~

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-01-14T20:37:38+00:00

Mod in-game

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

HappyRocket88 2016-01-15T00:28:36+00:00

Trent83 wrote:
Mod in-game

Here I provided the log since the mapper was lazy to post it

2016-01-14 14:43 Trent83: Happy una pregunta podrias echarle un ojo a un mapa mio solo por encima porfa :3
2016-01-14 14:43 Trent83: ?
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: es que
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: su lo miro por encima
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: seguro encuentro muchas cosas
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: entnces es mejor
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: hacer un mod completo papi
2016-01-14 14:43 Trent83: Solo por encima xDD
2016-01-14 14:44 Trent83: Moddeariasme?
2016-01-14 14:44 Trent83: xDD
2016-01-14 14:45 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 14:45 HappyRocket88: actualemente ando
2016-01-14 14:45 HappyRocket88: trabajando en el mio
2016-01-14 14:46 HappyRocket88: si quieres hacemos m4m
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: Ok
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: Claro
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: pasame el mapa
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/875275 Kawaragi Shiho - Shun [Easy]]
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/874323 JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV Size) [Easy]]
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: el mio tiene
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: 6 dificultades creo
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: pero es un tv size
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: xD
2016-01-14 14:55 Trent83: Mah
2016-01-14 14:55 Trent83: es un tv size
2016-01-14 14:55 Trent83: lo hare
2016-01-14 14:55 El fondo *-*
2016-01-14 14:57 HappyRocket88: yeee
2016-01-14 14:57 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: Estoy modeandole a una de las personas mas dificiles que existen ._.
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: y no eres tu xD
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: estoy que muero
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: ya que se cree el beatmapper del año y ni un calificado tiene
2016-01-14 14:59 HappyRocket88: :o
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: TODO ME LO CONTRADICE (lo peor es que hizo un overmapped o varios...)
2016-01-14 15:01 Trent83: cierto que ya voy a tu mapa xDD
2016-01-14 15:01 Trent83: Lo peor es que no sabe que es overmapping y me contradice estoy arto ._.
2016-01-14 15:03 Trent83: Tu tvsize
2016-01-14 15:03 Trent83: Amo la cancion!
2016-01-14 15:03 Trent83: de que es o que
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: Es de 
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: un anime
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: Shirokuma cafe
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: para ser ma´s preciso <3
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: Lo vere
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: mas tarde xD
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: Aqui
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: voy para el easy
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: No se como decirtelo
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: PERO ME ENCANTO EL EASY!
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: en el easy no veo ningun problema
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: todo esta muy bien ordenado y bien hecho
2016-01-14 15:12 Trent83: Estoy en el normal :3
2016-01-14 15:12 Trent83: 00:07:383 (2) -  que te parece si aqui ponemos un hitcircle
2016-01-14 15:12 Trent83: ?
2016-01-14 15:14 Trent83: Solo pondria eso en el normal
2016-01-14 15:14 Trent83: I gual me encanto
2016-01-14 15:15 HappyRocket88: ohhh
2016-01-14 15:15 HappyRocket88: si quieres
2016-01-14 15:16 Trent83: 01:05:462 (4,1,2,3,4,5) -  Esto es mi cosa preferida en un mapa :3
2016-01-14 15:16 HappyRocket88: puedes postear el mod
2016-01-14 15:16 Trent83: jaja no tranquilo
2016-01-14 15:19 Trent83: maldito que mappeas muy bien
2016-01-14 15:19 Trent83: solo el cirdcl
2016-01-14 15:19 Trent83: no puedo encontrarle nada xD
2016-01-14 15:20 Trent83: circle del normal xDD
2016-01-14 15:23 Trent83: El hard e insane estan bien a lo que veo
2016-01-14 15:26 Trent83: 01:25:813 (1,2,3,4) -  (voli) no crees que estos bebes estan un pelito lejos?
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: no pero igual
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: me gustaría darte
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: kudosu
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: <3
2016-01-14 15:35 Trent83: Cuando lei "me gustaria darte" me asuste xDD
2016-01-14 15:35 HappyRocket88: :o
2016-01-14 15:35 HappyRocket88: ¿Qué pensaste que te iba a decir?
2016-01-14 15:35 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 15:36 Trent83: pense que dirias otra cosa xDDD
2016-01-14 15:38 Trent83: listo ahi te publique xD

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-15T18:24:25+00:00

♥

Auxent

Auxent 2016-01-15T19:35:04+00:00

m4m.

General:
I highly recommend to use a hitsounds on a sliderticks in a easier diffs. It would sound a lot of better.

Easy:
- 00:05:325 (1,2) - This could be blanketed better.
- 00:24:532 (2,3) - ^ (the end of the slider is quite off)
- 00:34:593 (1) - Make the beginning anchor & ending anchor symmetrical (y:260)
- 01:16:667 (2) - Move this slider to x:400 y:220 for better flow + better blanket
Otherwise looks great (:

Normal:
- 00:54:715 (1,2) - Inconsistent combos.
- 01:20:325 (1) - ^
- 01:27:642 (1,2,3) - ^
Otherwise seems totally fine. I like it \ ^^ /

Advanced:
- 00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't like the overlap here. What about turning it around 90* and rebuild this pattern 00:29:106 (1,2,3,4) - ?
- 00:32:764 (1,3,4,1) - This isn't snapped with a slider 00:32:764 (1) - correctly + it's really hard visible during the gameplay.
- 00:39:852 (4,2) - not snapped properly
- 00:40:081 (1,3,4,1) - ^
- 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5,1) - What about replacing this pattern with spinner. It plays kinda awkward especially at the last note.
- 01:01:804 (4,5,1) - how about snapping them together?

Hard:
- 00:07:154 (1,2) - What about using the same pattern instead of different? (I would choose a pattern no.2)
- 00:13:328 (2,2) - is this on purpose? if not, fix the stack.
- 00:27:734 (2,1) - ^
- 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why so sudden change of DS?
- 01:03:862 (1) - What about a cleaner pattern like this?

Insane:
- 00:30:477 (6,2) - Sorry but this one looks pretty ugly. Mind if you stack it?

I checked the last diff too and it seems fine to me.
good luck.

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-15T20:41:09+00:00

fixed all ^^ rocket will fix for me, so i don't need to send the code, since combos it's an easy thing ~~or i'm really lazy to send the code wtf~~

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-01-17T04:37:33+00:00

[General]

00:46:712 -00:47:627 - - Timing seems off here. Like it slows down slightly.

[Voli's Special Blend]

00:12:185 (1,2) - I didn't really like these repeat sliders. The rhythm was too simple, and it didn't put any emphasis onto the vocals because of the slider-ends. I would remove the repeat and add a circle. You can make the curved slider blanket the circle too.
00:19:045 (7,8) - and 00:20:417 (2,3) - The spacing isn't really congruent with the regular spacing you use for unstressed notes like 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - etc... It looks kinda nazi, but keeping the spacing really gives a sense of structure to your map.
00:22:246 (2,3) - This was just awkward to play. I think you're going for a flowbreak here for emphasis but I think maintaining flow here is better since you use another flowbreak 2 beats later. Too many flowbreaks in a short time isn't good .
You could try a blanket and maintaining that in-ward flow
00:59:974 (3,1) - Just personally, starting a kiai with a flowbreak feels bad imo. Can you make this slider curve the other way? (rightward) so theres some visual flow to it?
01:03:633 - You can map this ;c.
01:10:264 (5,6) - Really not getting the jump here. 6 isn't especially important in the song so mapping this jump + flowbreak is really unnecesary.
01:13:008 (1) - Circles please. This is kiai xP.
01:17:124 (4) - Really cool keyboard sounds in the bg you can focus on if you make this two circles instead of a slider.
01:21:468 (5,6) - This is too much emphasis the jump is nearly cross screen and its a really flow-breaking jump. It's exaggerated for the sound its following.

[Insane]

00:05:211 (7) - This 1/4 is barely audible. It's too early in the song to introduce 1/4 rhythm imo... and spacing just makkes it way too noticeable for something that is barely audible.
00:08:869 (7) - Same here. I would avoid introducing 1/4 rhythm until the song picks up because yea these 1/4's are barely audible, yet you give them fairly large spacing.
00:09:898 (3,1) - Spacing is awkward here because Right before this pattern you use a lot of 1/2 jumps that look visually very similar to this pattern.
00:08:069 (5,6) - and 00:08:984 (1,2) - . I would just remove the repeat and add another slider instead so 00:10:356 - is clickable. There's a sound on the red tick too which could match a slider-end.
00:15:386 (5,6) - Nothing suggests this jump in the music .
00:19:959 (1,2,3) - This flow is really linear which makes it difficult to snap to and properly emphasize. Angle changes are nicer.
Idea
00:23:389 (6,1) - Okay, the jump here is good but then you use even bigger spacing on 00:24:075 (2,3) - so it makes this seem weird in terms of emphasis. Like why the spacing increase all of a sudden. The spacing concept here doesn't seem right.
00:25:447 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing so big here but then so small for 00:27:734 (2,3) -
00:30:935 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing here os so small compared to 00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,1) -
00:49:685 (2) - This is pretty cool! nice to see someone who can make loop sliders correctly xD. Just one thing, I would recomment making the head-part of the slider curved as well, instead of straight as it is right now.
00:53:343 (2,4) - Overlaps don't look good when you're using really big cross-screen patterns like this. It gives the map a kind of claustrophobic feel since you go from really large spaces to overlaps xP
01:07:520 (1,3) - Mind not overlapping? Also fix the blanket between 2 and 3. You could rotate slider 3 like ~ 20 degrees to avoid the overlap cuz it looks cluttered.
01:14:837 (1,3) - Same thing about the overlapping since you don't overlap 01:15:295 (2,4) - so the symmetry looks off too xP.
01:18:038 (8,9,1) - This movement is really weird. Can you position 9 elsewhere so the flow makes more sense? The spacing i think, ehh its bettter if you spaced apart but if you want an anti-jump here its fine. But either fix the spacing to be more predictable to the rest of the jump pattern, or fix the flow. (Or both ).
01:23:069 (3,4) - Space these out just a bit more, theyre too close together compared to your other circle patterns. Even something like this 01:25:356 (6,7) - is better.

[Hard]

00:05:096 (6) - This is barely audible as a note. You can map it i guess, but its more fitting if you make this a slider-end. Basically, 00:04:410 (5) - Make this two 1/2 sliders instead. That way both white ticks are clickable.
00:27:048 (4,1) - This jump doesn't make sense cuz you are following the vocals in creating emphasis, but there is no vocal emphasis onto 1.
00:30:477 (7) - Can you not use a slider this overbent? xP it looks bad because the slider-head and slider-tail are overlapping.
00:36:423 (1,4) - Would look cool if you could make these symmetrical, like flat. instead of slanted.
00:44:654 (3,1) - Slider-border overlap just makes this pattern look unpolished.
00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird that you decrease spacing leading up to the kiai. Music is building up and theres some synth sounds that pop up after
00:57:459 - . Increasing the spacing makes more sense with the music.
01:01:575 (5,6,7,1) - I don't think this jump + flowbreak triplet is appropriate on hard. The jump is okay, but the triplet being bent away from the flow makes this pattern really difficult to land on a Hard. Make it flow better or reduce spacing.
01:02:947 (3,1) - Just saying, but these kinds of blankets don't really look good xPP. I would just reduce Slider 1 to a 1/2 slider that way you can make 01:04:319 - a circle instead.

[Advanced]

00:27:276 (1,3) - Could improve this blanket xD.
00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't recommend this pattern though, because the slider-body of 3 is covering a lot of Slider 1's tail which makes this really hard to interpret for beginners.
00:34:365 (3,4) - I would stack triplets on an Advanced instead of space them. Stacks are much easier to play than spaced stuff, especially when you're using 1.40x spacing here..
00:51:971 (2) - This slider doesn't really begin on anything. I would just make the wave slider you had earlier even larger to account for inaudible beats you're currently mapping...
01:01:804 (4,5,1) - Please don't space them like this... This is an Advanced. Stack them. Use spaced triplets on Hard or something. You're following distance snap too rigidly. Not everything needs to be spaced exactly the same, especially not triplets .
01:16:667 (1,3) - This is really hard to read because 3 is almost completely covered by slider 1.
01:19:868 (4) - Just make this 1/2 the 3/4 slider won't really be appreciated by people playing this level of difficulty, and you're skipping a clearly audible red tick. Not worth it imo.

[Mk's Normal]

00:36:423 (3) - There's nothing actually being captured on the bluetick... I would just use a 3/2 slider.
01:22:612 (2,3) - Ugly blanket.

Nice difficulty.

[Rockezek's Easy]

00:07:154 (2) - This bump really isn't necessary The slider is too short for this to actually be appreciated, it just makes the sliderball shake for a second.
01:05:691 (3,4,5,6) - Too many circles in a row on an Easy I wouldn't go over 3. It makes the clicking rhythm too dense.

Could use some work on spacing/emphasis consistency on higher diffs. Overall not bad. Get some more mods though! Good luck

Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2016-01-17T16:29:53+00:00

I'll wait until you apply stuff from monstrata :>

You can msg me ingame when you did so \.w./

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-01-17T19:22:45+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
[Mk's Normal]
00:36:423 (3) - There's nothing actually being captured on the bluetick... I would just use a 3/2 slider. o3o
01:22:612 (2,3) - Ugly blanket. now it's beautiful <3
Nice difficulty. Thank you, MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMonstrata M M M :3

I LIKE PASTAAAAA

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Intone

66 posts

Joined August 2014

Intone 2016-01-17T23:43:39+00:00

Hello senpai hnnnnnngh *finished modding*

Rockezek's Easy

01:26:727 (1,2,3) snuggle a little better?

01:29:840 (1) remove nc. Its the last note so I don't think you need it.

Mk's Normal

00:01:936 (1,2,3) snnuggle a bit?

00:07:296 (1) remove NC i think this feels weird here
00:08:047 (3) flip to curve other way, it snuggles with 2 better and leads better into (4)
00:12:070 (4,5) snuggle the 5 into the 4 here?

Like the earlier one, pretty much just opposite way
01:01:317 (1,2) snuggle 2 into 1?
01:09:277 (3) flip to curve other ways? a little awk the way it leads into the 4

Advanced

00:02:009 (2,3) snuggles?

00:12:338 (6) hmm I don't really like the placement here, maybe move downwards?
00:30:360 (4) hmm not sure about this one. Looks nicer (see img) but might be awk to play? XD

00:52:954 (2,3) overlap 2+3 onto the 1 slider and NC the (2), remove NC on (1)? Placement here feels awkward when compared with the beat, as 2->3->1 are all different distance snaps
01:03:343 (1) nneeds to be a little higher! Too close to the 3, its touching :X

Hard

00:05:709 (1,2) snuggles?

00:30:592 (1) nitpicking a little here but its just a littttttle too close to the 7
01:07:872 (6,7,1) i would just stack it on top of the (1). The little curve kind of interferes with (2)
01:09:314 (4,5,6) if you chose to stack^ then stack this too for consistency
01:21:752 (6,7,1) ^
01:26:688 (3,5,6) hiiiiii i'm nitpicking again but these are a little too close D:

Insane

00:09:098 (2) try to overlap it onto the end of (5)?
00:21:952 (2) overlap onto (4) for prettiness?

End of (5) too.
00:38:581 (4,2) overlap ennnd of 2 onto 4 circle?
01:22:040 (9) i thinnk something like this will work better and look nicer rather than the overlap on (2)

01:30:500 (1) remove nc. Last nonte so I dont think you need it

Voli's Special Blend

00:38:820 (1) curve other way will work better to lead into (2) i think
01:18:245 (6) might want to reshape this slider since it makes space for the (4) but not the (7) so it looks a little awk

^_^
OOPS I WAS MODDINNG YOUR MAP WHEN ASKING FOR A MODREQ ON MY MAP AND ACCIDENTALLY LINKED YOUR MAP :X

Last edited by Intone 2016-01-18T00:13:39+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-01-17T23:43:44+00:00

happy pls reply to mods

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

HappyRocket88 2016-01-18T00:39:26+00:00

pkhg wrote:
happy pls reply to mods

Underforest

Underforest wrote:
¡Hola! Moderación que no es de IRC.
Estoy de vuelta, ahora moderando la versión TV Size.

General
Inconsistency in video offset: Mapset: 185 / Voli's Special Blend: 189 done!
Inconsistency in BG sizes: Required: 1366x768 / Unrankable: i.jpg, people.jpg esto no es realmente necesario. Si la bg se encuentra entre las rezoluciones de 16:9 o 4:3 juega perfecto. \:D/
Inconsistency in title: Romanised: Boku ni Invitation (TV Size) / Unicode: ボクにインビテーション TV size is missing in Unicode title yeah! :c fixed!
Elimina el .osb, no sirve para nada ese way se desapareció
Easy and Mk's Normal - 00:01:667 - delete green line, is useless deleted them
Sugiero poner un normal-sliderslide.wav / soft-sliderslide.wav que esté en silencio. Es decir, para que la deslizada no suene tan mal. no creo que suene tan mal. este encaja bien con el sonido del fondo imo
Si bien el set ya tiene todas las dificultades, entonces mueve esto como mapa pendiente dun!
Easy
El HP debe ser 2. totalmente de acuerdo
00:07:154 (2) - Está mal la forma de en medio yeah :/
~~00:27:276 (1) - Este deslizador es extraño~~ Ya no, es hermoso \:D/
00:32:764 (3) - No topa con la barra de vida, pero casi lo hace, muévelo un poco ay dioj mio, casi se me pasa xd
00:52:886 - Imo este descanso no debería terminar aquí, haz que termine por default es realmente necvesario? o.o
01:14:837 (1) - No es buena idea esta "M" why not? xd
Buen mapeo, pero el DS de este map está muy distanciado. yeah 1.30 killed me xd
Hard
00:14:243 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - No se si poner saltos es una buena idea. why not? :c
00:29:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lo mismo yo considero que esas partes deben tener jumps ya que la canción es demasiado intensa ahí imo
00:30:477 (7) - Este deslizador debería terminar en el tick rojo sure!
00:40:081 (1) - Mueve esto a x:32 y:196, ya que esto está muy pegado con este deslizador: 00:39:167 (3) done!
00:57:231 (4,5,6) - Elimina esto y que ahí empieze la ruleta para un buen flujo rítmico arreglado nene!
00:57:917 (1) - La ruleta debe terminar en el tick blanco why? hay alguna regla que no permite terminar spinners en ticks rojos? ;w;
01:13:923 - 01:29:471 - ¿? ?¿
Insane
00:15:853 (6,7) - Pienso que las vocales no dan ritmo cierto. arreglado papi.
00:19:969 (1) - Se superpone a si mismo te daría la razón si fuese una dificultad menor, no es mayor problema sobre dificultades mayores amigu
00:24:085 (2) - Mueve esto a x:230 y:82, esto para lograr un buen flujo rítmico. ohhh! genial! cambiado y denunciado!
00:32:774 (1) - Casi topa con la barra de vida, muévelo un poco hacia abajo. definitivamente la mayoría son rebeldes. xd arreglado!
00:49:695 (2) - (esto x3 veces), ¡Feliz navidaaaad! (léase con voz de Santa :'v) Creo que este deslizador no se ve bien para los jugadores tienes alguna idea mejor? /w\
00:53:811 (3) - Lo mismo que 00:32:774 (1) fixed!
00:57:241 (3,4,5,6) - Recomiendo eliminar esto y que en ese tiempo, empieze la ruleta. Eso mejoraría el ritmo, imo. totalmente de acuerdo
01:02:500 (2) - Quita el silbido, no suena bien XDD se me paso, qué random! XD
01:10:274 (4) - Muy largo, recomiendo 2 deslizadores en vez de esto. creo que es por el sv. no le veo el problema si fluye bien. :c
01:26:737 (3,4) - Nada, solo me gustan estos deslizadores, especialmente por que son una familia y unos hermanos gemelos separados al nacer mameh
01:28:109 (2,3) - Estos 2 círculos están muy lejos de este salto: 01:28:795 (4,5,6) yeah. :/
01:29:024 (5) - Mueve esto a x:157 y:220 para que el salto se vea bien. sure!
01:29:481 (1) - Agrega un sonido final. mi mamá dijo que sonaba bien con el finish \:D/

Feedback
No eres malo/a haciendo Expertos (Insane), solo que necesitas mejorar un poco para futuros mapas. De todas formas, debo admitir que está muy bien hecho.
Buena suerte con tu café (mapa). Gracias pro el feedback papi

Akitoshi

Akitoshi wrote:
some small suggestions
feel free to ignore them lol no, you deserve the same attention as any person! D: believe more on your skills!

[Hard]
00:22:246 (3,5) - nazi yeh :/
00:41:682 (6,7,1) - it will be nice if they have same DS on this triple. totally agree! o.o7
jump spacing 00:53:801 (3,4) - between 00:54:487 (5,1) - should be same will be nice imo le jump is kawaii nao >u<
01:01:575 (4,5,1) - this triple should same distance regardless of impact of the beat Bum Bum yeah fixed bum bum!
01:16:667 (1,4) - stack? mom?
01:20:325 (1) - pretty hard to read lol. you can change slider's shape like this
wao! looks really fancy! changed! \:D/

[Insane]
00:02:581 (4) - y:179 to make it same y-axis with 00:01:667 (1) - yeah XD
00:14:471 (1,3) - should be same how 00:14:700 (2,4) - was aligned, or vice-versa. i want you
00:24:075 (2) - and 00:24:761 (4) - should be same distance with their previous slider. It was pretty obvious to see the difference of their distance by looking their followpoints so ye totally agree
00:53:343 (2,4) - avoid touching these even though they're slight nice eye! o
00:59:746 (2) - maybe it will better if this distance will equal with 00:59:517 (1,3) - since 00:59:974 - don't really emphasize the strength of the song itself yeah the previous one looks really clutter
01:19:410 (3,4) - can see that it's random compared to 01:18:496 (1,2) - , try copypasta the one of their slider then rotate to make it clean-looking or at least they have similar shape. wat a mess i did here. xd changed!
let me support you even though my mod is bad af ;3 thank you so much for the star! >w</

grumd

grumd wrote:
[insane]
00:04:410 (5,6,7,1) -
the spacing is inconsistent, 00:05:211 (7) - this circle has prev 1.10x and next 1.40x yeah what a mess! ;w;
00:19:731 (6) -
i know you wanted to make a blanket, but as a result you have 0.77x spacing. make it around 1.0x
http://i.imgur.com/81irV43.png oh, indeed, really nice suggestion!
00:20:645 (3,4,5) -
same here, these all objects should not be so close to each other, it creates clutter and doesn't look good ugh, tried to make this pattern cleaner ;w;
00:24:304 (3,4) -
do not use 0.8x spacing please. it means that the player will have to move his cursor slower than he did it when following the slider. this breaks the flow and feels kinda bad done!
00:27:734 (2,3) -
same yeah /u\
00:31:849 (3) -
you could move this one a bit closer to the previous circle to make a triangle totally agree! XD
http://i.imgur.com/WV8yY6h.png
00:37:109 (2,3) - 00:39:167 (3,4) - 00:40:081 (1,2) - 00:43:511 (4,1) -
your spacing in this part is very inconsistent, it changes from 0.9x to 1.2x randomly uy! nice cacth!
00:53:801 (3) -
this slider shape is just strange? why not use a circular slider?
00:54:258 (4,5) - 00:54:715 (1,2) - 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5) -
again they are placed too close to each other which creates an uncomfortable antijump
i am not going to keep pointing out these mistakes with bad spacing. but there a lot of them in this map later.
tried to re-arrange the patterning here. hope it look better to your eyes. ;w;

[hard]
okay i can't continue sorry.
this map has very very inconsistent spacing which can be easily fixed by using distance snap
00:30:477 (7,1) - also some weird overlaps
but i just can't mod it in this unpolished state with a lot of strange spacing changes
00:45:340 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/YjeevIV.png just look at this, why?
no, sorry, i can't continue, i tried my best

conclusion:
please use distance snap when you don't want to make a jump best advice i've ever received thank you so much! >w</

Auxent

Auxent wrote:
m4m.

General:
I highly recommend to use a hitsounds on a sliderticks in a easier diffs. It would sound a lot of better. yeah, indeed it sound way better, thanks! >w</

Easy:
- 00:05:325 (1,2) - This could be blanketed better. actually it was way off before, XD hope it looks nicer to your eyes!
- 00:24:532 (2,3) - ^ (the end of the slider is quite off) well I tried to use 1/1 sliders everywhere so i hope it's not a big problem. ;w;
- 00:34:593 (1) - Make the beginning anchor & ending anchor symmetrical (y:260) nazi but yeah XD
- 01:16:667 (2) - Move this slider to x:400 y:220 for better flow + better blanket YUS! awesome >w</
Otherwise looks great (: <3

Advanced:
- 00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't like the overlap here. What about turning it around 90* and rebuild this pattern 00:29:106 (1,2,3,4) - ? yeah, re-arranged as suggested! XD
- 00:32:764 (1,3,4,1) - This isn't snapped with a slider 00:32:764 (1) - correctly + it's really hard visible during the gameplay. yeah, indeed 3/4 sliders sounded way off here. XD
- 00:39:852 (4,2) - not snapped properly yeah fixed!
- 00:40:081 (1,3,4,1) - ^
- 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5,1) - What about replacing this pattern with spinner. It plays kinda awkward especially at the last note. Used now a 6/1 sliders which follows the vocals. >u<
- 01:01:804 (4,5,1) - how about snapping them together? yeah, nice suggestion!

Hard:
- 00:07:154 (1,2) - What about using the same pattern instead of different? (I would choose a pattern no.2) this one is intentional. ;w; there's a slight sound in the red tick so that's why i ended doing that
- 00:13:328 (2,2) - is this on purpose? if not, fix the stack. yeah, they're stacked now.
- 00:27:734 (2,1) - ^
- 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why so sudden change of DS? this is the best part ayyy ;w;
- 01:03:862 (1) - What about a cleaner pattern like this totally agree! o.o7?

Insane:
- 00:30:477 (6,2) - Sorry but this one looks pretty ugly. Mind if you stack it? yeah XD

I checked the last diff too and it seems fine to me.
good luck. TY so much!

Monstrata

Monstrata wrote:
[General]

00:46:712 -00:47:627 - - Timing seems off here. Like it slows down slightly.
[Insane]
00:05:211 (7) - This 1/4 is barely audible. It's too early in the song to introduce 1/4 rhythm imo... and spacing just makkes it way too noticeable for something that is barely audible. tried to keep consistency with the upcoming patterns here, despite it's not that audible it makes sense if it made them consistent, ;w; does it look that bad?
00:08:869 (7) - Same here. I would avoid introducing 1/4 rhythm until the song picks up because yea these 1/4's are barely audible, yet you give them fairly large spacing. read above
00:09:898 (3,1) - Spacing is awkward here because Right before this pattern you use a lot of 1/2 jumps that look visually very similar to this pattern. dun!
00:08:069 (5,6) - and 00:08:984 (1,2) - . I would just remove the repeat and add another slider instead so 00:10:356 - is clickable. There's a sound on the red tick too which could match a slider-end.
00:15:386 (5,6) - Nothing suggests this jump in the music . yeah, re-arranged this pattern. XD
00:19:959 (1,2,3) - This flow is really linear which makes it difficult to snap to and properly emphasize. Angle changes are nicer. YUSS! really nice suggestion!

00:23:389 (6,1) - Okay, the jump here is good but then you use even bigger spacing on 00:24:075 (2,3) - so it makes this seem weird in terms of emphasis. Like why the spacing increase all of a sudden. The spacing concept here doesn't seem right. yeah tried to use DS here. >u<
00:25:447 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing so big here but then so small for 00:27:734 (2,3) - inb4 vocals, despite it's the same segment. ;w;
00:30:935 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing here os so small compared to 00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,1) - this one was rather intentional. :> does it flow that bad?
00:49:685 (2) - This is pretty cool! nice to see someone who can make loop sliders correctly xD. Just one thing, I would recomment making the head-part of the slider curved as well, instead of straight as it is right now. will considerate >u<
00:53:343 (2,4) - Overlaps don't look good when you're using really big cross-screen patterns like this. It gives the map a kind of claustrophobic feel since you go from really large spaces to overlaps xP what a thought! o.o changed!
01:07:520 (1,3) - Mind not overlapping? Also fix the blanket between 2 and 3. You could rotate slider 3 like ~ 20 degrees to avoid the overlap cuz it looks cluttered. des-overlapped! XD
01:14:837 (1,3) - Same thing about the overlapping since you don't overlap 01:15:295 (2,4) - so the symmetry looks off too xP. dun
01:18:038 (8,9,1) - This movement is really weird. Can you position 9 elsewhere so the flow makes more sense? The spacing i think, ehh its bettter if you spaced apart but if you want an anti-jump here its fine. But either fix the spacing to be more predictable to the rest of the jump pattern, or fix the flow. (Or both ).
01:23:069 (3,4) - Space these out just a bit more, theyre too close together compared to your other circle patterns. Even something like this 01:25:356 (6,7) - is better.
[Hard]

00:05:096 (6) - This is barely audible as a note. You can map it i guess, but its more fitting if you make this a slider-end. Basically, 00:04:410 (5) - Make this two 1/2 sliders instead. That way both white ticks are clickable. totally agree, removed
00:27:048 (4,1) - This jump doesn't make sense cuz you are following the vocals in creating emphasis, but there is no vocal emphasis onto 1. indeed, i wasn't paying attention to highlight vocals, i just kept consistent the way the DS increases among every new measure though, so i hope it's not a big problem here.
00:30:477 (7) - Can you not use a slider this overbent? xP it looks bad because the slider-head and slider-tail are overlapping. ayy but it doesn't flow that bad XD
00:36:423 (1,4) - Would look cool if you could make these symmetrical, like flat. instead of slanted. Here I wanted to create a slight slider following the vocals though
00:44:654 (3,1) - Slider-border overlap just makes this pattern look unpolished. But it's following DS ;w;
00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird that you decrease spacing leading up to the kiai. Music is building up and theres some synth sounds that pop up after
00:57:459 - . Increasing the spacing makes more sense with the music. I'll think about it later, the concern here is that following the vocals the "oooooo" goes in a way that reduces his intensity while it passed over the segment, so decreasing the DS should make more sense following that statement though
01:01:575 (5,6,7,1) - I don't think this jump + flowbreak triplet is appropriate on hard. The jump is okay, but the triplet being bent away from the flow makes this pattern really difficult to land on a Hard. Make it flow better or reduce spacing. dun! flow is slightly better now!
01:02:947 (3,1) - Just saying, but these kinds of blankets don't really look good xPP. I would just reduce Slider 1 to a 1/2 slider that way you can make 01:04:319 - a circle instead. yeah, hope it flows better now >u<
[Advanced]

00:27:276 (1,3) - Could improve this blanket xD. nazi but yeah. :>
00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't recommend this pattern though, because the slider-body of 3 is covering a lot of Slider 1's tail which makes this really hard to interpret for beginners. Ay, but this isn't a diff for beginners. ;w;
00:34:365 (3,4) - I would stack triplets on an Advanced instead of space them. Stacks are much easier to play than spaced stuff, especially when you're using 1.40x spacing here.. yep! o.o7
00:51:971 (2) - This slider doesn't really begin on anything. I would just make the wave slider you had earlier even larger to account for inaudible beats you're currently mapping... yeah. :/ tried to add two notes following the vocals later on >u<
01:01:804 (4,5,1) - Please don't space them like this... This is an Advanced. Stack them. Use spaced triplets on Hard or something. You're following distance snap too rigidly. Not everything needs to be spaced exactly the same, especially not triplets . yeah, fixed those super bad spaced triplets. xD
01:16:667 (1,3) - This is really hard to read because 3 is almost completely covered by slider 1. Ay, but the AR allows players to see it properly after clicking (1) imo. ;w;
01:19:868 (4) - Just make this 1/2 the 3/4 slider won't really be appreciated by people playing this level of difficulty, and you're skipping a clearly audible red tick. Not worth it imo. yeah, totally agree
[Rockezek's Easy]
00:07:154 (2) - This bump really isn't necessary The slider is too short for this to actually be appreciated, it just makes the sliderball shake for a second. I tried to make it different because it follows the changes of the vocals over the red ticks. /u\
01:05:691 (3,4,5,6) - Too many circles in a row on an Easy I wouldn't go over 3. It makes the clicking rhythm too dense. holy mother! You're right! XD
Could use some work on spacing/emphasis consistency on higher diffs. Overall not bad. Get some more mods though! Good luck

Intone

Easy
Didn't try to "blanket" them because it would mess up the flow a bit. /u\ and tried to follow the NC every two measures, hence, that last note MUST have NC. XD
Hard
Tried to don't stack object in this difficulty because it might be similar to the Advanced so the idea was to create something different. /w\ Rest suggestions were applied. thanks! >w</
Insane
The screen you just posted looks so amazing! so I tried to do that with the pattern! indeed, it flows very good nao. >u< as well as Hard, didn't try to overlap since I tried to avoid them all over this difficulty. XD

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