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The combo colours are dark and boring, not a fan of that.
The 1/4 spacing throughout this map seems to flit between different spacings without any reason, though it's not a problem playing-wise so much, it's not very neat and I can't see there is any obvious logic behind them.
Also, if i bring something up and it repeats itself again later in the song, i may not necessarily bring it up again, but you know it's there, so apply it again if it's appropriate .
00:33:403 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - And beyond. Why do you NC so often here? Sure it might be pattern NCing, but couldn't it make more sense to NC on the start of each ryhthm, like this, 00:34:403 (1) - 00:36:070 (1) - 00:38:737 (1) - deleting the other NCs? just that i'm not a total fan of spamming NC so much.
00:53:403 (1) - Looks too much like a 1/2 slider imo.
00:58:570 (6) - Consider making into 1/4 circles to map the 1/4 drums there fully? and this if you apply 01:09:237 (6) - and so on, cos i know you know about structure and shit.
00:59:487 (6) - Spacing
01:09:487 (2) - Spacing
01:10:153 (6,7) - Spacing
01:14:237 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make the jump from 2-1 even, it's currently 1.1 ds and then 0.9 on the next jump. apply that here too 03:41:903 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
01:19:653 (6,7) - Move over to left, don't make it overlap with the previous slider. Same as 01:23:653 (6) - and so on.
01:22:320 (4,5) - Flow is so broken here, consider respacing and positioning this, it's very gimmicky as it is. It worked fine here, 01:18:070 (4,5,6) - , idk why you are going so over the top on the pattern.
01:25:403 (1,2,3) - This should at least be 0.8 DS, maybe even higher cos it's a strong rhythm, it's currently like the lowest 1/4 spacing of the section.
01:26:653 (2) - Spacing
01:30:237 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Why is the spacing in this pattern suddenly lower than before? The song's only grown in intensity.
01:36:570 (2) - Stick hitsound on it, this is the loudest drum of the whole pattern.
01:39:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This could be done better, maybe something like this, but it's made like that to not rthe next set of patterns too much.uch. 01:52:737 (1) - increase jump spacing here more to keep consistent with previous jumps, this is a stronger sound, ye smaller distance.
01:55:737 (1,2,3,4) - Not really a fan of how this overlaps, consider increasing spacing more.
01:59:237 (4,5) - Why suddenly the 1/4 sliders and not keep the 1/1 slider you had before? These would be fine if there were strong beats on the start of those sliders. Same here, 02:04:570 (4,5) -
02:03:737 (1) - Increase spacing
02:04:070 (1) - Same again.
02:16:737 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - No soft whistles?
02:17:070 (1,2,3,4) - Could be neater by blanketing the previous 4 circles?
02:09:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - No soft whistles?
02:14:070 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The flow here in the stream could be improved, this is the first time you did this or anything close to this the whole map and there's no justification in the song
03:35:987 (4,5,6,7) - Increase spacing, drums are stronger here, but you've decreased spacing stifling the play.
03:45:403 (1,2) - Just make this into a 1/1 slider, the slider 1/2 slider on the red tick starts on nothign and ends on a clap, doesn't play well.
03:57:320 (8,9,10,1) - Increase spacing again
04:02:737 (7,8,9) - Spacing again, etc. not gonna bring these ones up again
04:56:987 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Move this pattern over by like a grid, so that the 4 starts on the as perfectly symmetrical on the y-axis to 04:56:070 (1) - I like this pattern, it's cute
05:08:070 (1) - Blanket
05:23:403 (1) - increase spacing from before
05:33:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increase spacing, cos song here is intense and there's drums too, so it's p. full on.
Good luck yo.
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The combo colours are dark and boring, not a fan of that.
The 1/4 spacing throughout this map seems to flit between different spacings without any reason, though it's not a problem playing-wise so much, it's not very neat and I can't see there is any obvious logic behind them.
Also, if i bring something up and it repeats itself again later in the song, i may not necessarily bring it up again, but you know it's there, so apply it again if it's appropriate .
00:33:403 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - And beyond. Why do you NC so often here? Sure it might be pattern NCing, but couldn't it make more sense to NC on the start of each ryhthm, like this, 00:34:403 (1) - 00:36:070 (1) - 00:38:737 (1) - deleting the other NCs? just that i'm not a total fan of spamming NC so much.
00:53:403 (1) - Looks too much like a 1/2 slider imo.
00:58:570 (6) - Consider making into 1/4 circles to map the 1/4 drums there fully? and this if you apply 01:09:237 (6) - and so on, cos i know you know about structure and shit.
00:59:487 (6) - Spacing
01:09:487 (2) - Spacing
01:10:153 (6,7) - Spacing
01:14:237 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make the jump from 2-1 even, it's currently 1.1 ds and then 0.9 on the next jump. apply that here too 03:41:903 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
01:19:653 (6,7) - Move over to left, don't make it overlap with the previous slider. Same as 01:23:653 (6) - and so on.
01:22:320 (4,5) - Flow is so broken here, consider respacing and positioning this, it's very gimmicky as it is. It worked fine here, 01:18:070 (4,5,6) - , idk why you are going so over the top on the pattern.
01:25:403 (1,2,3) - This should at least be 0.8 DS, maybe even higher cos it's a strong rhythm, it's currently like the lowest 1/4 spacing of the section.
01:26:653 (2) - Spacing
01:30:237 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Why is the spacing in this pattern suddenly lower than before? The song's only grown in intensity.
01:36:570 (2) - Stick hitsound on it, this is the loudest drum of the whole pattern.
01:39:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This could be done better, maybe something like this, but it's made like that to not rthe next set of patterns too much.uch. 01:52:737 (1) - increase jump spacing here more to keep consistent with previous jumps, this is a stronger sound, ye smaller distance.
01:55:737 (1,2,3,4) - Not really a fan of how this overlaps, consider increasing spacing more.
01:59:237 (4,5) - Why suddenly the 1/4 sliders and not keep the 1/1 slider you had before? These would be fine if there were strong beats on the start of those sliders. Same here, 02:04:570 (4,5) -
02:03:737 (1) - Increase spacing
02:04:070 (1) - Same again.
02:16:737 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - No soft whistles?
02:17:070 (1,2,3,4) - Could be neater by blanketing the previous 4 circles?
02:09:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - No soft whistles?
02:14:070 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The flow here in the stream could be improved, this is the first time you did this or anything close to this the whole map and there's no justification in the song
03:35:987 (4,5,6,7) - Increase spacing, drums are stronger here, but you've decreased spacing stifling the play.
03:45:403 (1,2) - Just make this into a 1/1 slider, the slider 1/2 slider on the red tick starts on nothign and ends on a clap, doesn't play well.
03:57:320 (8,9,10,1) - Increase spacing again
04:02:737 (7,8,9) - Spacing again, etc. not gonna bring these ones up again
04:56:987 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Move this pattern over by like a grid, so that the 4 starts on the as perfectly symmetrical on the y-axis to 04:56:070 (1) - I like this pattern, it's cute
05:08:070 (1) - Blanket
05:23:403 (1) - increase spacing from before
05:33:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increase spacing, cos song here is intense and there's drums too, so it's p. full on.
Good luck yo.