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Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

ExKagii- wrote:

jadi juga beib :v
aih ini satu lgi :v
Shinzo-

Kyousuke- wrote:

[Baim] wrote:

lel nanggung amat lebih semenit :p
satu detik woy :V

jgn spam ah, dikasi star ato fav kek awkwk
Tuh star =w=
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Shinzo- wrote:

Tuh star =w=
Yay shinzo baek bgt >w<
Thanks wkwk
Rido
7k mau dibikin siapa lek?
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Rido wrote:

7k mau dibikin siapa lek?
seseorang yg blom pasti :^)
Davin Fortune
REMEMBER THIS IS SPAM POST :vvv:

WILL give star if it's good

Little mod(give or not give kudosu is up to you) :
00:07:158 - 00:07:471 - 00:07:783 - i guess this part should be in 2 notes since it's different with the PINK notes sound, apply to all same part except like this 00:05:752 - it doesnt change much

00:12:002 - start from here, better to add long LN to close the long sound and double note beside the LN(this pattern is easier :P )

00:17:783 - wanna make it like this ?


00:20:127 - ^

00:21:533 - little note : keep this or change this with ^, cause i guess dat pattern i ask to change is bit harder , I GUESS :V

Okay maybe just that :V

Maybe some slow part but still i the right bpm, you can make it slow for GREGET SV :v

okay 1 star
Feerum
Requested Mod



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Hello Kyousuke-! Thanks for Requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Interesting song :o
Let's see if i can help you here a bit!

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right // I have take here the BMS as Source
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Do you Plan to add a 7K Difficult? If not Remove the "4K" from the Diff Name

4K Battlespace

00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|3,11767|2) - I think this trill doesn't fit here. Its really hard to hit and feels really uncomfortable. I think a 4-3-2-1 Stair would fit here well more, also it would follow pitch.
00:16:689 (16689|3,17262|2,17418|2) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. And yes they are. They don't have any audible sound to Map. Make them 1/4 to the other Notes. I checked this a lot of time. Also such a sudden 1/6 doesn't fit here in any way o.o
00:20:986 - You could add a Note here to emphasize the 1/4 or maybe even better.00:21:142 (21142|1) - Delete this one. That would emphasize these 1/4 notes 00:21:221 (21221|0,21299|1,21377|2,21455|1) - much more.
00:27:262 (27262|2,27418|2) - Same like previous. These Notes are Wrong Snapped. There is no Audible 1/6 sound. Really. Theres nothing. Why don't you map the more audible 1/4 Sound? This makes the Song just unnecessary harder to play and also uncomfortable.
And by the Way. The part looks Copy/Pasted :PP
00:43:096 (43096|0) - Move to 3 for Pitch?
00:54:346 (54346|1,54346|0) - Maybe make these also to a 1/4 LN? It would fit very well here because it also has the 1/4 sound like all other LN's here.
00:56:846 (56846|0,56846|1,56846|3) - These not. They have no 1/4 sound. Just the Loud crash.
01:04:033 (64033|3) - I think this LN is wrong. Its too long. The "wooob" sound of the LN beginns 01:04:189 - Then you could arrange the 1/6 a little bit better.
01:08:877 (68877|3,69033|3,69189|3,69346|3,69502|3,69658|3) - Just sayn but maybe it would be good to rearrange here these pattern a little bit to avoid something like this.
01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - Why do you map such a quiet and fuzzy sound? >.< It would be much better to map the 1/4 here. Really. It's not audible enough to add here the 1/6
01:28:017 (88017|3) - Would recommend to delete these notes. You follow in this Part the clear melody with your 1/4. And this one doesn't have a the clear melody like 01:27:549 (87549|1,87627|2,87705|1,87861|1,87939|2) - etc.
01:30:674 (90674|2) - Delete. Start to Map the clear melody from here 01:30:752 - for the Long 1/4 part.
01:31:533 (91533|3,91533|0,91611|2,91689|1,91689|0,91767|2) - Why you don't map here the 1/3 Sound like you did 01:28:408 (88408|0,88408|3,88512|2,88512|1,88616|3,88616|0,88721|2,88721|1) - and 01:25:908 (85908|3,85908|2,86012|1,86012|0,86116|2,86116|3,86221|1,86221|0) - . It would fit much better
01:33:252 - Should you didn't notice. here are 1/6 Sounds. Maybe you could map them?
01:34:033 (94033|3) - Delete. It is audible quieter then the other 3-Noted Chords here.
01:37:783 (97783|1) - Shouldn't this LN better end 01:37:939 - ?
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. The sound here is 1/6 like the next one. The isn't even a fuzzy sound you could map 1/8 here.
01:55:361 - Add here a note. Same deep sound like 01:55:674 (115674|1) -
02:03:252 (123252|3,123304|2,123356|1,123564|0,123616|1,123668|2) - These 1/6 are kinda.. mh.. i don't know.. i mean you can keep them but i recommend to delete at least 02:03:174 (123174|1,123486|2) - because theres no cleary 1/4 sound and it would make the 1/6 much comfortable to hit.
02:21:481 (141481|2,141533|3) - CTRL + G these makes it more comfortable. Also fit better to pitch.
02:34:736 - i think you can add here at 1 to follow the music
02:57:861 (177861|1,177900|0,178017|1,178056|0) - You use these stairs now very very often. Why not make these CTRL + G for more varity in the pattern :D
03:22:002 (202002|1) - Delete. No clear sound. Maybe just a echo from the previous chord.
03:24:502 (204502|2) - No clear Piano. Just a Echo or maybe an other fuzzy sound. But here is no piano.
03:39:892 (219892|1) - Should be a Chord for the Drum.
03:48:981 (228981|2,229033|3) - Like previous a CTRL + G would fit here.
04:09:736 - and 04:10:361 - you had the same part previous. I told you to delete the Notes. here we have the reason! here you didn't have the notes :D
04:37:262 (277262|3,277418|1) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. They don't have, like the previous one, clear 1/6 Sounds. Make them 1/4.
04:47:262 (287262|2,287418|2) - Same like above, Wrong Snapped

Aw hell again a Wall of Text. My Mods are too long q_q
Cool song, Cool Map! Keep up you work Kyou!
Good luck furterway :)
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Davin Fortune wrote:

REMEMBER THIS IS SPAM POST :vvv:

WILL give star if it's good

Little mod(give or not give kudosu is up to you) :
00:07:158 - 00:07:471 - 00:07:783 - i guess this part should be in 2 notes since it's different with the PINK notes sound, apply to all same part except like this 00:05:752 - it doesnt change much it's intended for the intro.

00:12:002 - start from here, better to add long LN to close the long sound and double note beside the LN(this pattern is easier :P ) wot. no :p

00:17:783 - wanna make it like this ? no, and you skipped the 1/8 note


00:20:127 - ^ ^

00:21:533 - little note : keep this or change this with ^, cause i guess dat pattern i ask to change is bit harder , I GUESS :V :V

Okay maybe just that :V

Maybe some slow part but still i the right bpm, you can make it slow for GREGET SV :v

okay 1 star
lol thanks for star xd sorry for not giving you kudos :V you know why

Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Kyousuke-! Thanks for Requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Interesting song :o
Let's see if i can help you here a bit!

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right // I have take here the BMS as Source
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Do you Plan to add a 7K Difficult? If not Remove the "4K" from the Diff Name

4K Battlespace

00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|3,11767|2) - I think this trill doesn't fit here. Its really hard to hit and feels really uncomfortable. I think a 4-3-2-1 Stair would fit here well more, also it would follow pitch. actually it's for matching with 00:11:221 (11221|0,11299|1,11377|0,11455|1) - this, but nvm seems hard xd. rearranged btw
00:16:689 (16689|3,17262|2,17418|2) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. And yes they are. They don't have any audible sound to Map. Make them 1/4 to the other Notes. I checked this a lot of time. Also such a sudden 1/6 doesn't fit here in any way o.o ok lmao, i'm trying to follow the space effect sound but yeah....
00:20:986 - You could add a Note here to emphasize the 1/4 or maybe even better.00:21:142 (21142|1) - Delete this one. That would emphasize these 1/4 notes 00:21:221 (21221|0,21299|1,21377|2,21455|1) - much more. hmm no thanks, 00:20:674 - i would add a note on here if you told me to add on the place that you pointed. also i want to follow this effect sound 00:21:142 -
00:27:262 (27262|2,27418|2) - Same like previous. These Notes are Wrong Snapped. There is no Audible 1/6 sound. Really. Theres nothing. Why don't you map the more audible 1/4 Sound? This makes the Song just unnecessary harder to play and also uncomfortable.
And by the Way. The part looks Copy/Pasted :PP lol kay. i can't think another pattern lmao would you suggest it
00:43:096 (43096|0) - Move to 3 for Pitch? hmm no, it's actually same with 00:46:221 - this?
00:54:346 (54346|1,54346|0) - Maybe make these also to a 1/4 LN? It would fit very well here because it also has the 1/4 sound like all other LN's here. nice catch!
00:56:846 (56846|0,56846|1,56846|3) - These not. They have no 1/4 sound. Just the Loud crash. oki
01:04:033 (64033|3) - I think this LN is wrong. Its too long. The "wooob" sound of the LN beginns 01:04:189 - Then you could arrange the 1/6 a little bit better. woops, i'm following the tilt space effect, not the "wooob" lol
01:08:877 (68877|3,69033|3,69189|3,69346|3,69502|3,69658|3) - Just sayn but maybe it would be good to rearrange here these pattern a little bit to avoid something like this. nah help me to fix it xd i dunno how to arrange it in another way
01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - Why do you map such a quiet and fuzzy sound? >.< It would be much better to map the 1/4 here. Really. It's not audible enough to add here the 1/6 but its audible on the piano one, actually i'm following the 1/6 piano instead of the fuzzy sound lol.
01:28:017 (88017|3) - Would recommend to delete these notes. You follow in this Part the clear melody with your 1/4. And this one doesn't have a the clear melody like 01:27:549 (87549|1,87627|2,87705|1,87861|1,87939|2) - etc. yes you're right, deleted
01:30:674 (90674|2) - Delete. Start to Map the clear melody from here 01:30:752 - for the Long 1/4 part. ok
01:31:533 (91533|3,91533|0,91611|2,91689|1,91689|0,91767|2) - Why you don't map here the 1/3 Sound like you did 01:28:408 (88408|0,88408|3,88512|2,88512|1,88616|3,88616|0,88721|2,88721|1) - and 01:25:908 (85908|3,85908|2,86012|1,86012|0,86116|2,86116|3,86221|1,86221|0) - . It would fit much better oh ya thanks for pointing xd
01:33:252 - Should you didn't notice. here are 1/6 Sounds. Maybe you could map them? uh it's barely hearable, and for the rest after the chord n stream
01:34:033 (94033|3) - Delete. It is audible quieter then the other 3-Noted Chords here. hmm but i make it 3 notes for that sound tho, i think its fine
01:37:783 (97783|1) - Shouldn't this LN better end 01:37:939 - ? nice catch
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. The sound here is 1/6 like the next one. The isn't even a fuzzy sound you could map 1/8 here. hmm i not really agree with this, yeah the fuzzy sound is not really audible, but the others piano or the effect sound is heared more fast than the next 1/6. Even in the 100% playback you can hear the difference, so it's not should be 1/6, 1/8 is suitable i think (pya's map does the same tho)
01:55:361 - Add here a note. Same deep sound like 01:55:674 (115674|1) - uh it's not. the one that you pointed to add is really a tiny sound, which is intended to skip it
02:03:252 (123252|3,123304|2,123356|1,123564|0,123616|1,123668|2) - These 1/6 are kinda.. mh.. i don't know.. i mean you can keep them but i recommend to delete at least 02:03:174 (123174|1,123486|2) - because theres no cleary 1/4 sound and it would make the 1/6 much comfortable to hit. ok
02:21:481 (141481|2,141533|3) - CTRL + G these makes it more comfortable. Also fit better to pitch. applied to the 2nd chorus :p
02:34:736 - i think you can add here at 1 to follow the music hmm since i didn't add it on the others, so no. also it's not really suitable imo
02:57:861 (177861|1,177900|0,178017|1,178056|0) - You use these stairs now very very often. Why not make these CTRL + G for more varity in the pattern :D lol gotcha, yes thank you for suggestion xD
03:22:002 (202002|1) - Delete. No clear sound. Maybe just a echo from the previous chord. yup deleted
03:24:502 (204502|2) - No clear Piano. Just a Echo or maybe an other fuzzy sound. But here is no piano. nice catch
03:39:892 (219892|1) - Should be a Chord for the Drum. lol thanks, now i can make another pattern of this lmao
03:48:981 (228981|2,229033|3) - Like previous a CTRL + G would fit here. ok
04:09:736 - and 04:10:361 - you had the same part previous. I told you to delete the Notes. here we have the reason! here you didn't have the notes :D lol yeah seems you're right although that's a bit different with the before
04:37:262 (277262|3,277418|1) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. They don't have, like the previous one, clear 1/6 Sounds. Make them 1/4. ok
04:47:262 (287262|2,287418|2) - Same like above, Wrong Snapped ok

Aw hell again a Wall of Text. My Mods are too long q_q
Cool song, Cool Map! Keep up you work Kyou!
Good luck furterway :)
wow gg mod, thanks feerum!
[ A v a l o n ]
Hi Kyou ~
Here is Mod as requested from My Queue

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everything inside

  • [General Stuffs]
    1. Why the diff name is still using 4K ? please remove it if you didn't plan to add other keys mapset
    2. Metadata, Song setup, Song folder, .osu files, timing & offset, BPM, backgound resolution, was really fine, good job
    3. Not contains any hitsound files yet, please add hitsound files later
    [Pattern]
  • 00:09:189 - i can hear this part is have another loud sound too, consider too add note in 4th column, and move this note 00:09:111 (9111|1) - to first column after that (for comfortability of plays)
  • 00:11:455 (11455|1,11533|3,11611|0) - the music itself is not random, it can be supposed to single stream, or you can re-arrange this part 00:11:611 (11611|0,11689|1,11767|2,11846|1) - to 3 1 2 3 for better balance pattern (actually 00:11:846 - jack in 3rd column was nice to play)
  • 00:19:502 (19502|2) - well, feels weird because this part is contains a long sound, you can change that single note to expressing the long sound itself (please make a different from this one 00:20:752 (20752|2) - )
  • 00:20:752 (20752|2) - Ctrl G, flows seems more balance and better , since you've overused the "left hand" in this 1/4 part
  • 00:26:221 - to 00:28:096 - its feels like de ja vu
  • 00:37:002 (37002|2,37080|3,37314|2,37392|3,37627|2,37705|3,37939|2,38017|3) - welp, you can Ctrl G or re-arrange this part, to make a difference with this burst part 00:38:096 - that actually use same pattern form :/
  • 00:41:689 - add note at first column for hat sound, feels empty here if you leave that, move this 00:41:846 (41846|0) - to 3 after you added it
  • 00:46:846 - & 00:49:346 - you can give this part 3 notes, since really big impact piano sound is on here (make a difference with your other 2 notes)
  • 00:51:885 (51885|1) - this sound was not really clear to map, i suggest you to delete that for avoid abuse pattern
  • 00:59:502 (59502|2,59580|1,59658|0) - Ctrl G for more better flows, avoid three times note on first column 00:59:658 - (since the music itself is no need a pattern like that)
  • 01:00:231 (60231|0) - ghost note, delete it since this part is not contains any sound
  • 01:01:221 (61221|3,61273|2,61325|1,61377|0) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) you can hear that this part is exactly have 5 sound from 01:01:221 - to 01:01:377 -
  • 01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - wrong snapped it should be snapped on 1/4 only, this part is only contains 3 sound, there is not contains 4 sound . . . listen it carefully
  • 01:21:533 (81533|0,81533|1) - this would be better to use LN until here 01:21:846 - rather than map this hat sound 01:21:689 (81689|2) - depend on music itself, that long sound is more audible and clear, so highly recommended to give 1 or 2 LN on that part
  • i still get didn't get why this part 01:20:908 - is have more amount of note (harder) than this part 01:22:627 - actually you can hear that 01:22:627 - to 01:23:721 - is more epic
  • 01:25:205 - and 01:25:439 - is same strong synth sound, why mapped on different amount note ?
  • 01:25:596 (85596|0,85596|3) - & 01:26:533 (86533|3,86533|0) - same as my mod before, you can give this part LN for expressing the long sound here (highly recommended) follow the lead music please, it's more better
    it just a few sample, there is still many case like that
  • 01:29:241 (89241|1,89293|2) - i'm not sure this part is have 1/6 sound, listen it again, it only have 1/4 sound actually
  • 01:51:221 (111221|3,111429|2,111637|0) - WTF this LN, it's exactly wrong snapped you can hear that sound is start on 01:51:325 - end on 01:51:533 - and another sound is start on here again 01:51:689 - wtf la, maybe it's will be more better to not map this abuse sound www
  • 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) - i suggest to not using first column too much like this in this part, make it more balance is more better
  • 02:01:533 (121533|0,121533|1,121611|2,121611|3) - you using chord, but actually the music itself is a low sound, well it's not suitable for using chord in this time
  • 02:34:033 - - this part is louder than 02:33:877 - so i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part
  • 02:34:111 - & 02:34:189 - this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, why not map it ? i highly recommended to map it for consistency
  • 02:44:033 - dude, low sound on this time, reducing a note will be better
  • 02:46:689 (166689|1,166741|2,166793|3) - wrong snapped, it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 02:46:689 - to 02:46:767 - is have 3 sound, and this part 02:46:793 - is nothing
  • 03:28:877 (208877|1,208929|2,208955|0,208981|3) - this snap was very abuse to play, consider to only snap that into 1/6
  • 03:41:533 - this part is louder than 03:41:377 - i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part
  • 04:01:611 - & 04:01:689 - same as my previous mod, this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, i highly recommended to map it for consistency
  • 04:06:377 (246377|0,246533|0,246689|0,246846|0) - not really goo this way, try this http://puu.sh/mFdtO/2cbe799def.jpg it's more better flows and avoid repititive column usage
  • 04:09:033 - well, just reminding . . . like my previous mod, using LN for this long sound is more better
  • 04:14:189 (254189|1,254241|2,254293|3) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 04:14:189 - to 04:14:267 - is have 3 sound, and this part 04:14:293 - is nothing
  • 04:51:064 (291064|2,291142|1) - Ctrl G for more better flows and balance
Well, that's my mod for your map . . . i hope it's useful for you
that's really solid mapset

Good luck Kyou ~
Harbyter
waiting you to check avalon mods before i start to mod and also take in consideration about what he said on the 4K
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Kyou ~
Here is Mod as requested from My Queue

|1|2|3|4|

everything inside

  • [General Stuffs]
    1. Why the diff name is still using 4K ? please remove it if you didn't plan to add other keys mapset hue waiting for the gd'er. (i dunno he really does or not, will waiting further)
    2. Metadata, Song setup, Song folder, .osu files, timing & offset, BPM, backgound resolution, was really fine, good job
    3. Not contains any hitsound files yet, please add hitsound files later ok :^)
    [Pattern]
  • 00:09:189 - i can hear this part is have another loud sound too, consider too add note in 4th column, and move this note 00:09:111 (9111|1) - to first column after that (for comfortability of plays) yes you're right. but in 100% playback it's not too hearable
  • 00:11:455 (11455|1,11533|3,11611|0) - the music itself is not random, it can be supposed to single stream, or you can re-arrange this part 00:11:611 (11611|0,11689|1,11767|2,11846|1) - to 3 1 2 3 for better balance pattern (actually 00:11:846 - jack in 3rd column was nice to play) ah okay, i've no other idea of this lol
  • 00:19:502 (19502|2) - well, feels weird because this part is contains a long sound, you can change that single note to expressing the long sound itself (please make a different from this one 00:20:752 (20752|2) - ) uh i think it's fine. if i add a LN, it will be a jack no matter i put it anywhere. also it's only the LN, so yeah...
  • 00:20:752 (20752|2) - Ctrl G, flows seems more balance and better , since you've overused the "left hand" in this 1/4 part ctrl + g? o.o
  • 00:26:221 - to 00:28:096 - its feels like de ja vu lmao yes i copied it xd
  • 00:37:002 (37002|2,37080|3,37314|2,37392|3,37627|2,37705|3,37939|2,38017|3) - welp, you can Ctrl G or re-arrange this part, to make a difference with this burst part 00:38:096 - that actually use same pattern form :/ for easier burst?
  • 00:41:689 - add note at first column for hat sound, feels empty here if you leave that, move this 00:41:846 (41846|0) - to 3 after you added it it's intentional to skip it, since it's not too audible and for rest maybe
  • 00:46:846 - & 00:49:346 - you can give this part 3 notes, since really big impact piano sound is on here (make a difference with your other 2 notes) yeaa it's same goes with 00:49:346 - this. i only make it 3 notes when there's have a finish / really big main instrument sound
  • 00:51:885 (51885|1) - this sound was not really clear to map, i suggest you to delete that for avoid abuse pattern ow ok
  • 00:59:502 (59502|2,59580|1,59658|0) - Ctrl G for more better flows, avoid three times note on first column 00:59:658 - (since the music itself is no need a pattern like that) ok
  • 01:00:231 (60231|0) - ghost note, delete it since this part is not contains any sound eyy there has for me. since pya's map has too
  • 01:01:221 (61221|3,61273|2,61325|1,61377|0) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) you can hear that this part is exactly have 5 sound from 01:01:221 - to 01:01:377 - yes you're true. but actually there's have 2 sounds, the fuzzy sounds like one (1/8) and the bgm one (1/6). Since the fuzzy sound is more audible, so applied
  • 01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - wrong snapped it should be snapped on 1/4 only, this part is only contains 3 sound, there is not contains 4 sound . . . listen it carefully the one that you explain is the piano sound. and yes, i'm following the fuzzy sound. (so the unusual snappings actually have a two sounds, btw pya's map does too.)
  • 01:21:533 (81533|0,81533|1) - this would be better to use LN until here 01:21:846 - rather than map this hat sound 01:21:689 (81689|2) - depend on music itself, that long sound is more audible and clear, so highly recommended to give 1 or 2 LN on that part oops that's not hat sound actually. don't you hear the different echo sound from the first long sound? and i'm trying to minimize the LN usage by putting the LN only on the long sound that really" clear and hearable on 100% playback, so it don't breaks the stream feels when player playing this. And i think we don't need to cover every long sound with a LN, single note is enough to represent the sound itself.
  • i still get didn't get why this part 01:20:908 - is have more amount of note (harder) than this part 01:22:627 - actually you can hear that 01:22:627 - to 01:23:721 - is more epic yea it's more epic bcs of the instrument. and yes, i put 2 notes for every prominent melody sound. On the place that you pointing, there's no prominent melody (every melody has the same loudness) so i don't make it into 2 notes.
  • 01:25:205 - and 01:25:439 - is same strong synth sound, why mapped on different amount note ? eh even the synth note sound that you pointing is more smaller than the doubles synth. maybe you mean 01:25:127 - this. yes the synth sound is the same, but not for the melody
  • 01:25:596 (85596|0,85596|3) - & 01:26:533 (86533|3,86533|0) - same as my mod before, you can give this part LN for expressing the long sound here (highly recommended) follow the lead music please, it's more better
    it just a few sample, there is still many case like that hue sorry, and bcs of that i'm making all of that into single notes too (i'm already deciding to make it single note). you're right it's better, but not for playability. especially for the stream
  • 01:29:241 (89241|1,89293|2) - i'm not sure this part is have 1/6 sound, listen it again, it only have 1/4 sound actually hue the piano sound is clearly 1/6. 01:29:241 (89241|1) - maybe this piano sound is not too clearly, but 01:29:293 (89293|2) - this piano sound is hearable
  • 01:51:221 (111221|3,111429|2,111637|0) - WTF this LN, it's exactly wrong snapped you can hear that sound is start on 01:51:325 - end on 01:51:533 - and another sound is start on here again 01:51:689 - wtf la, maybe it's will be more better to not map this abuse sound www hey i don't mean that space effect. the bgm sound is right on that place.
  • 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) - i suggest to not using first column too much like this in this part, make it more balance is more better hue that's the only pattern that i can think ;-; maybe you can give some suggestion
  • 02:01:533 (121533|0,121533|1,121611|2,121611|3) - you using chord, but actually the music itself is a low sound, well it's not suitable for using chord in this time oh okay :v
  • 02:34:033 - - this part is louder than 02:33:877 - so i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part keep, on 100% playback the melody is more hearable than the instrument. and that's already good imo
  • 02:34:111 - & 02:34:189 - this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, why not map it ? i highly recommended to map it for consistency sorry that's intended for the rest
  • 02:44:033 - dude, low sound on this time, reducing a note will be better oh yaa, rearranged :^) maybe it's similiar with 02:34:033 - this. that's why its only 2 notes
  • 02:46:689 (166689|1,166741|2,166793|3) - wrong snapped, it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 02:46:689 - to 02:46:767 - is have 3 sound, and this part 02:46:793 - is nothing uh actually you're right (with the fuzzy sound). but following the 1/6 bgm sound is more comfortable for me ._.
  • 03:28:877 (208877|1,208929|2,208955|0,208981|3) - this snap was very abuse to play, consider to only snap that into 1/6 lol it's not for me and the others testplayer :v i can read it well
  • 03:41:533 - this part is louder than 03:41:377 - i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part b-but how about this mod? "02:44:033 - dude, low sound on this time, reducing a note will be better"
  • 04:01:611 - & 04:01:689 - same as my previous mod, this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, i highly recommended to map it for consistency hmm no thanks .w. same as my previous reply
  • 04:06:377 (246377|0,246533|0,246689|0,246846|0) - not really goo this way, try this http://puu.sh/mFdtO/2cbe799def.jpg it's more better flows and avoid repititive column usage
  • 04:09:033 - well, just reminding . . . like my previous mod, using LN for this long sound is more better ;w;
  • 04:14:189 (254189|1,254241|2,254293|3) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 04:14:189 - to 04:14:267 - is have 3 sound, and this part 04:14:293 - is nothing uh actually you're right (with the fuzzy sound). but following the 1/6 bgm sound is more comfortable for me ._.
  • 04:51:064 (291064|2,291142|1) - Ctrl G for more better flows and balance lol ok
Well, that's my mod for your map . . . i hope it's useful for you
that's really solid mapset

Good luck Kyou ~
thanks you helped me to ensure the snappings thingy lol
Ginshu
M69M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329388

Column : 1|2|3|4

[4K Betelsip]
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - delete, gajelas nada mana ini `L_`
01:11:221 - ~ 01:11:846 - ini apa ? bikin 1/4 kayak sebelumnya, tapi beda pattern 1 4 - 2 3 - 1 4 - 2 3 gitu
01:53:929 (113929|1) - ~ 01:53:929 (113929|1) - 1/6
03:00:674 (180674|1) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - add note
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:07:549 (187549|1) - delete
03:07:705 - add note

sisanya ok,
hbd alex :D
Maxus
Hi sukee :D
Mod req via PM :3

[4K Perang angkasa]
00:59:502 - add one? to make it consistent as 00:59:814 - and 01:00:752 -
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - i think these notes are supposed to be snapped at 1/8..
01:01:338 (61338|1) - i'm not sure about this note, it sounds like no sound here..
01:29:502 (89502|3,89658|2) - Ctrl+G this? this part will lead to the stream afterward, so i think it's not a good idea to have jack as the "start" of stream.
01:32:314 - 01:32:392 - isn't this suppose to be 1/6 snap?
01:51:429 (111429|2,111637|0) - I'm not sure about these LN's snap, i would follow pya's snap instead.
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - for this kind of sound, i think it would be more fit if you make it into 1-2-4-3 pattern, instead of 1-2-3-4.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4486131
03:10:439 (190439|2,190517|1) - this will be a bit picky, but i would Ctrl+G this to follow pitch here..
03:11:924 - I would add here, because this still has quite audible melody that you follow
03:29:736 (209736|2) - is this a ghost note? can't hear anything for this..
04:11:533 (251533|2,251611|0) - i would Ctrl+G this, it's more suitable for sound at 04:11:611 - 04:11:767 -
04:29:658 - i think this would be more fit if it's double instead of triple.
04:29:814 - ^
04:41:142 (281142|1,281221|0,281299|1,281377|0,281455|1) - plis not one hand triple ;w;
04:42:783 - Why triple?
04:51:377 - add one? still has cymbal sound here..
04:56:611 - Why not add here? this has audible 1/4 sound that you follow
04:56:767 - Also here..
04:58:799 (298799|3) - Delete this, the stream that you follow started at 04:58:799 (298799|3) -
05:01:064 - add here? make it consistent as 05:00:752 - ?

Ok, that's it, sorry not many..
Good luck , nice map btw :3
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

LNP- wrote:

M69M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329388

Column : 1|2|3|4

[4K Betelsip]
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - delete, gajelas nada mana ini `L_`
01:11:221 - ~ 01:11:846 - ini apa ? bikin 1/4 kayak sebelumnya, tapi beda pattern 1 4 - 2 3 - 1 4 - 2 3 gitu
01:53:929 (113929|1) - ~ 01:53:929 (113929|1) - 1/6
03:00:674 (180674|1) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - add note
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:07:549 (187549|1) - delete
03:07:705 - add note

sisanya ok,
hbd alex :D
tenkyu, fixed some :3


DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hi sukee :D
Mod req via PM :3

[4K Perang angkasa]
00:59:502 - add one? to make it consistent as 00:59:814 - and 01:00:752 - oh removed the double, thanks for pointing xd
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - i think these notes are supposed to be snapped at 1/8.. hmm i don't think so :/
01:01:338 (61338|1) - i'm not sure about this note, it sounds like no sound here.. b-but its burst...
01:29:502 (89502|3,89658|2) - Ctrl+G this? this part will lead to the stream afterward, so i think it's not a good idea to have jack as the "start" of stream. nice point
01:32:314 - 01:32:392 - isn't this suppose to be 1/6 snap? yes i skipped some 1/6 for smooth streams experience lol
01:51:429 (111429|2,111637|0) - I'm not sure about these LN's snap, i would follow pya's snap instead. hmm i'm sure about this snap, it suits with the bgm sound
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - for this kind of sound, i think it would be more fit if you make it into 1-2-4-3 pattern, instead of 1-2-3-4.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4486131 yeah it's good, but hard to press ;w;
03:10:439 (190439|2,190517|1) - this will be a bit picky, but i would Ctrl+G this to follow pitch here.. eh nice xD
03:11:924 - I would add here, because this still has quite audible melody that you follow yes already applied from the previous mod
03:29:736 (209736|2) - is this a ghost note? can't hear anything for this.. nice catch, deleted
04:11:533 (251533|2,251611|0) - i would Ctrl+G this, it's more suitable for sound at 04:11:611 - 04:11:767 - i would like to keep, for avoiding jack on left side
04:29:658 - i think this would be more fit if it's double instead of triple. hmm keep for the impact
04:29:814 - ^ ^
04:41:142 (281142|1,281221|0,281299|1,281377|0,281455|1) - plis not one hand triple ;w; lol fixed xd
04:42:783 - Why triple? oops i forgot xd
04:51:377 - add one? still has cymbal sound here.. oh ya ok
04:56:611 - Why not add here? this has audible 1/4 sound that you follow ok
04:56:767 - Also here.. ok
04:58:799 (298799|3) - Delete this, the stream that you follow started at 04:58:799 (298799|3) - eh keep bcs its has similiar sound with 04:58:955 - this, so it counted
05:01:064 - add here? make it consistent as 05:00:752 - ? it's double bcs i'm following the fx sound like 05:00:596 - this

Ok, that's it, sorry not many..
Good luck , nice map btw :3
thanks, nice mod dix xD
Valentrixe
yo
nih bad-quality mod gw :"
m4m reply

kapal"an
btw ini diffname kenapa ada 4K nya? mau bikin 7K nya juga kah? kalo gak ya ilangin aja 4K nya >_>
[4K Battlespace]
  1. 00:08:721 - saran aja sih, menurut gw lebih nyaman kalo kek gini : http://puu.sh/n05iE/cf6c5327e1.jpg
  2. 00:10:596 - ^ : http://puu.sh/n05sQ/9ed05e2a57.jpg
  3. 00:11:846 (11846|2,12002|2) - unneccesary jack, 00:12:002 (12002|2,12158|1) - ctrl + H
  4. 00:16:689 (16689|0,16689|1,16846|1,16846|0) - kasian tangan kiri gw, coba ini, lebih balance : http://puu.sh/n05Jz/6aa80a1e55.jpg
  5. 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - kasian tangan kiri gw[2], coba : http://puu.sh/n05ME/6254a4acda.jpg
  6. 00:27:158 - http://puu.sh/n05Qo/26d80645aa.jpg copas, rearrange dong
  7. 00:59:658 (59658|3) - kelebihan(?), apus?
  8. 01:08:642 - add note?
  9. 01:09:267 - ^
  10. 01:12:471 (72471|0,72471|1,72549|2,72549|3,72627|1,72627|0,72783|0,72783|1) - why double?
  11. 02:43:721 - add note for cymbal?
udah dikit aja ;;

sumbang star sekalian '3')/
met imlek lek
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Valentrixe wrote:

yo
nih bad-quality mod gw :"
m4m reply

kapal"an
btw ini diffname kenapa ada 4K nya? mau bikin 7K nya juga kah? kalo gak ya ilangin aja 4K nya >_>
[4K Battlespace]
  1. 00:08:721 - saran aja sih, menurut gw lebih nyaman kalo kek gini : http://puu.sh/n05iE/cf6c5327e1.jpg hmm klo pake pny lu jdi break patternnya, tpi rearrange deh wkwk
  2. 00:10:596 - ^ : http://puu.sh/n05sQ/9ed05e2a57.jpg hmm gud gud lbh seimbang xD
  3. 00:11:846 (11846|2,12002|2) - unneccesary jack, 00:12:002 (12002|2,12158|1) - ctrl + H hmm itu justru sengaja, lbh balance imo (see avalon's mod lmao)
  4. 00:16:689 (16689|0,16689|1,16846|1,16846|0) - kasian tangan kiri gw, coba ini, lebih balance : http://puu.sh/n05Jz/6aa80a1e55.jpg keep, patternnya emg bgitu wkwk (dan masih toleransi la :v)
  5. 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - kasian tangan kiri gw[2], coba : http://puu.sh/n05ME/6254a4acda.jpg tpi pattern yg skrng masih lbh enak :^)
  6. 00:27:158 - http://puu.sh/n05Qo/26d80645aa.jpg copas, rearrange dong lel, kalo lbh enak why not? :^) /tpi masih bole suggest kok wkwk
  7. 00:59:658 (59658|3) - kelebihan(?), apus? same with 01:00:908 - this, see the others
  8. 01:08:642 - add note? hue keep for the stream, emg sengaja gw skip kok
  9. 01:09:267 - ^ ^
  10. 01:12:471 (72471|0,72471|1,72549|2,72549|3,72627|1,72627|0,72783|0,72783|1) - why double? oh yaaa, rearranged~ nice catch
  11. 02:43:721 - add note for cymbal? yha klo gtu gw hrs add yg 02:43:564 - 02:43:642 - 02:43:877 - ini jga... so keep
udah dikit aja ;;

sumbang star sekalian '3')/
met imlek lek
eaa thanks ya xD
dan met imlek jga :D


-btw for someone who can suggesting me a SV, i'm really appreciate it. Bcs actually i've planned to adding a SV at first, but can't find the right people for suggesting to-
Shinzo-
Hi ! :)
Come as Kyousuke-'s Request on Mania Modding Team

done IRC mod
15:25 Shinzo-: lek
15:26 Kyousuke-: wat
15:27 Shinzo-: sibuk ga
15:28 Kyousuke-: wait
15:28 Kyousuke-: lgi nge cek hs anomaly
15:28 Kyousuke-: emg napa? o.o
15:28 Shinzo-: ohhh
15:28 Shinzo-: kalo mau ya IRC buat dreadnought ._.
15:33 Kyousuke-: bntr lgi ya
15:33 Kyousuke-: udah deh wkwk
15:34 Shinzo-: lel
15:36 Kyousuke-: yok>
15:36 Kyousuke-: *?
15:36 Shinzo-: ayok
15:36 Shinzo-: duluan aja
15:36 Shinzo-: *ehh
15:37 Kyousuke-: lel
15:38 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/871129 Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought]
15:38 Shinzo-: anjay last pending...
15:38 Shinzo-: gaada mod ya ?xD
15:38 Kyousuke-: rip server os
15:38 Kyousuke-: *osu
15:38 Kyousuke-: ga bsa buka thread hue
15:38 Shinzo-: iya
15:39 Shinzo-: bad pippi
15:39 Shinzo-: ane dah bisa o.o
15:39 Kyousuke-: ye
15:40 Shinzo-: 00:02:158 (2158|0,2314|2,2471|0,2627|2,2783|0,2939|2,3096|1,3252|3,3408|1,3564|3,3721|1,3877|2,3955|3,4033|1,4111|0,4189|3,4267|2) - Ctrl H ?
15:40 Kyousuke-: sbenerny ni map mo rencana bikin SV
15:40 Kyousuke-: dan raika gd nya lama beud
15:40 Shinzo-: ehhh se-enggakny yg 00:02:158 (2158|0,2314|2,2471|0,2627|2,2783|0,2939|2) - biar nyambung gitu ama 00:01:846 (1846|3,2002|1) -
15:41 Shinzo-: ehh raika ? 7K ?
15:41 Kyousuke-: yha patternnya jdi break :v
15:41 Shinzo-: iya sih awkakawk
15:41 Kyousuke-: itu gw ud ngikut pitch (?)
15:42 Kyousuke-: 00:07:002 (7002|1,7158|0) - sama kyk ini wkwk
15:43 Shinzo-: 00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|0,11767|1) - jadiin LN ? awkawkawkaw
15:43 Kyousuke-: no short ln, kalo bisa di map ini gw minimalisir ln nya wkwk
15:43 Shinzo-: ooke
15:44 Kyousuke-: abis banyak stream nya sih :v
15:44 Shinzo-: 00:17:627 (17627|0,17705|2,17861|0) - ctrl H trus move ke kiri 1 kali ? >,>
15:45 Kyousuke-: wat
15:45 Kyousuke-: ss? :v
15:46 Kyousuke-: salah ngetik itu kykny lel, jdi aneh
15:46 Kyousuke-: knp banyak modder yg pointing tu pattern awkwk
15:47 Shinzo-: eh iya salah
15:47 Shinzo-: http://puu.sh/neDAq/69c73bd0e3.jpg
15:47 Shinzo-: itu biar nyambung aja pattern ny (yg w crop)
15:48 Kyousuke-: pattern yg kyk gtu ud bnyk lel
15:49 Kyousuke-: 00:25:283 (25283|0,25283|2,25361|1,25439|2,25517|1,25596|0,25596|3) - liek dis
15:49 Kyousuke-: 00:26:221 (26221|0,26221|3,26299|1,26377|2,26455|1,26533|0,26533|3,26611|2,26689|1,26689|0,26767|2,26846|3,26846|0,26846|1) - and dis
15:49 Shinzo-: ohhh
15:50 Shinzo-: ya ngga sih, lucu aja 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - ini sndiri :V
15:51 Kyousuke-: abisnya pitch nya mirip? >.>
15:54 Shinzo-: 00:26:299 (26299|1) - delete ?
15:55 Kyousuke-: ey why
15:55 Kyousuke-: 00:26:611 (26611|2) - sama kyk ini?
15:56 Shinzo-: 00:26:299 (26299|1) - emang ada suarany ? o.o
15:56 Shinzo-: eh ada kecil
15:56 Kyousuke-: kyk suara bgm gtu sih bukan instrument
15:56 Shinzo-: 00:31:221 (31221|0,31221|3,31299|2,31377|3,31377|0,31455|1) - coba lu denger lagi ? itu kek bukan 1/4
15:57 Kyousuke-: ey klo effect sound yg space itu 1/4 kan?
15:57 Kyousuke-: di map ini agak ribet jga snap nya lel
15:58 Shinzo-: ye gatau
15:58 Shinzo-: 00:43:096 (43096|0) - move ke 3 ? itch ny gitu de kekny
15:58 Shinzo-: persis ke 00:44:033 (44033|2) - soalny
15:59 Kyousuke-: ok
15:59 Shinzo-: 00:44:971 (44971|2,45596|1,46221|0) - 2 1 3 ?
16:01 Kyousuke-: fixed, tpi 312 wkwk
16:01 Shinzo-: okeoke
16:01 Shinzo-: 01:00:205 (60205|0) - kek gaada suara....
16:02 Shinzo-: but pasti lu punya alasan untuk itu
16:02 Kyousuke-: iye effect sound yg keselip
16:02 Shinzo-: 01:10:674 (70674|3,70830|3,70986|3,71142|3) - mungkin move 1/4 ke bawah, soalny suarany gasama (01:10:596 (70596|0,70596|1,70674|3,70674|2,70752|1,70752|0,70830|3,70830|2,70908|1,70908|0,70986|3,70986|2,71064|1,71064|0,71142|3,71142|2) -)
16:02 Kyousuke-: di bms jga ad sih
16:03 Kyousuke-: ay gw lbh suka spam 12 34
16:03 Kyousuke-: :v
16:03 Shinzo-: eh y udh
16:04 Kyousuke-: wait apa bedanya ya :v
16:07 Shinzo-: 01:37:783 (97783|3) - kek salah snap
16:08 Kyousuke-: klo denger 100% baru ketahuan
16:08 Kyousuke-: tpi klo 25% suaranya ga kedengeran beda, dan ga ketahuan snap nya >.>
16:08 Kyousuke-: lel
16:08 Shinzo-: ye begitu
16:08 Shinzo-: 01:54:502 (114502|3,114502|2) - 01:55:127 (115127|1,115127|0,115439|0,115439|1) - 1 note aja ?
16:09 Kyousuke-: sengaja
16:09 Kyousuke-: biar ada impact sama melodny nya
16:10 Shinzo-: iy deh
16:11 Shinzo-: 02:24:346 (144346|3,144346|0) - move ke 23 ? sama pitch kek 02:24:189 (144189|2,144189|1) -
16:12 Shinzo-: 02:24:502 (144502|1,144580|2) - trus ini dihapus ? buat charge aja buat impact yg di 02:24:658 - biar kerasa
16:12 Shinzo-: afk bentar mandi
16:12 Kyousuke-: iya jga sih
16:12 Kyousuke-: lel oke
16:16 Kyousuke-: yha, tpi 02:24:502 (144502|1,144580|2) - klo ini diapus nga deh kykny
16:19 Shinzo-: ohhh oke gpp
16:19 Kyousuke-: lel cefet beud mandinya
16:20 Kyousuke-: main bentar ye
16:20 Shinzo-: 7 menit yha
16:20 Shinzo-: awkawkawk okeoke
16:20 *Kyousuke- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/790529 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos]
16:23 Kyousuke-: ay ga jdi dhe pegel
16:23 Kyousuke-: perlu banyak stamina map nya :^)
16:23 Shinzo-: awkawkawkwak
16:23 Kyousuke-: lel lu malah ikut maen rohi :v
16:23 Shinzo-: iye lu udh np sih
16:23 Shinzo-: 3 menitan juga
16:23 Shinzo-: belum semenit ane dah lelah
16:24 Kyousuke-: lel sama
16:25 Shinzo-: 02:27:783 (147783|1) - delete ?
16:25 Shinzo-: gaadil aja sama 02:27:939 (147939|2,147939|3,148017|0,148017|1) -
16:27 Kyousuke-: t-tpi bagaimana dgn 02:27:314 (147314|1,147314|3,147314|2) - ini
16:27 Kyousuke-: iya sih yg itu pengecualian, masa iya triple 1/4 :v
16:27 Shinzo-: wkwkwkw
16:28 Shinzo-: 02:27:783 - soalny ini gaada suara yg kek pst pst gitu
16:28 Kyousuke-: yg laen jga kyk gtu >.>
16:28 Shinzo-: tapi buat pattern sih bagu ugha ==
16:28 Shinzo-: y'udh de gpp
16:28 Shinzo-: 02:28:304 (148304|3) - Ctrl H ?
16:28 Shinzo-: buat pitch
16:28 Kyousuke-: eh bner jga deh, ga ada pst pst nya
16:29 Kyousuke-: deleted :v
16:29 Shinzo-: lel
16:29 Shinzo-: ok
16:29 Kyousuke-: yg pitch ok
16:30 Shinzo-: 02:43:799 (163799|2) - delete ?
16:30 Shinzo-: ehhh gajadi
16:30 Shinzo-: jelek
16:30 Kyousuke-: 02:47:783 - lha gw yg ini double doang >.> emg hrsnya delete akwkw
16:31 Kyousuke-: lel ada echo nya itu
16:31 Shinzo-: ohiya
16:31 Shinzo-: iya makany gajadi
16:32 Shinzo-: 02:44:580 - http://puu.sh/neFcy/860e5957ca.jpg ? buat pitch aja
16:34 Kyousuke-: bole
16:34 Shinzo-: okeee
16:34 Shinzo-: 02:46:533 - http://puu.sh/neFf3/47d2e6de1d.png ? buat pitch juga soalny stream 1/4 ny juga di kanan semua xD (02:46:142 (166142|2,166221|3,166377|2,166455|3,166741|2,166793|3,167002|3,167080|2) - )
16:36 Kyousuke-: nice
16:36 Kyousuke-: 02:21:221 (141221|1,141221|0,141221|2,141377|0,141429|1,141481|2) - sama kyk ini akwkw
16:37 Shinzo-: ehh xD awkawkawk
16:37 Shinzo-: 02:50:517 (170517|0) - delete aja ? xD terserah sih, soalny 02:51:767 - ada + kick ny tapi 1 note doang hehee
16:38 Shinzo-: 02:56:221 - 02:59:267 - lel laguny tiba" epic gitu awkawkwakawk
16:38 Kyousuke-: bner jga
16:38 Kyousuke-: tau tuh :v
16:40 Shinzo-: xD
16:40 Shinzo-: 03:00:986 (180986|0) - gaada synt ny sih xD tpi mungkin lu ngikut suara yg lain..
16:40 Kyousuke-: melody
16:40 Shinzo-: ok
16:40 Shinzo-: 03:15:439 - dibikin 2 note ?
16:42 Kyousuke-: kykny gausah deh
16:42 Kyousuke-: kick nya ga bgitu kedengeran sih, gara effectnya wkwk
16:42 Shinzo-: iye sih
16:42 Shinzo-: okok
16:42 Shinzo-: 03:31:846 (211846|3,211846|2) - move ke 12 ? kek tadi
16:43 Kyousuke-: ok
16:44 Shinzo-: 03:17:861 (197861|1) - move ke 03:18:017 - ? soalny 03:18:017 - ada kick + melody sementara 03:17:861 - ga begitu kedengerantapi gpp juga sih kalo lu mo ngindarin jack
16:44 Shinzo-: *ama pattern yg seterusny*
16:46 Kyousuke-: why not add dua" nya :v
16:47 Shinzo-: up t you babeh :* it's your map
16:47 Shinzo-: *yo
16:47 Shinzo-: *to
16:47 Shinzo-: awkawkawkawkwa
16:47 Kyousuke-: lel
16:47 Kyousuke-: rip akwkwkw
16:47 Shinzo-: 03:35:283 (215283|3) - sama kek tadi yg pst pst itu xD
16:48 Shinzo-: kek ny 03:41:533 - lebih worth buat 3 note dripada 03:41:377 - soalny .... idk xD awkakawkawk
16:48 Shinzo-: 03:46:767 (226767|3) - delete ? soalny gaada kick ny OwO
16:49 Kyousuke-: lel yg 2 note itu emg sengaja
16:50 Kyousuke-: karena dulu ad modder yg ngomong gitu lel
16:50 Kyousuke-: yg delete ga ad kick ok
16:50 Kyousuke-: nice catch :v
16:50 Shinzo-: oohhuuee
16:50 Shinzo-: ok
16:51 Shinzo-: 03:49:971 - padahal enak ya yg part begini kalo ada SV
16:51 Shinzo-: tapi ya itu gatau minta ke siapa >,>
16:51 Kyousuke-: makanya
16:51 Kyousuke-: :v
16:52 Shinzo-: :v
16:52 Shinzo-: 04:19:892 - udh ada kick ny disini sih
16:53 Shinzo-: soalny klo ga salah juga sebelum ny lu kasih 2 note di situ xD
16:53 Shinzo-: 02:52:392 - eh ngga ternyata
16:53 Shinzo-: yaudah up to you xD
16:53 Kyousuke-: lel
16:53 Kyousuke-: wait
16:54 Shinzo-: k
16:54 Kyousuke-: saya nyerah cari patternnya
16:54 Kyousuke-: keep aj dhe
16:55 Shinzo-: wkwkwkwk
16:55 Shinzo-: okekoe
16:55 Shinzo-: 04:29:267 (269267|2) - delete ajah ? :D supaya buat bedain ama suara 04:29:424 (269424|2,269502|1,269580|0) - kan 04:29:267 (269267|2) - ga terlalu jelas tuh
16:57 Kyousuke-: okela
16:57 Shinzo-: 04:30:674 - 04:30:830 - 04:30:986 - ada suara ny, (ye mungkin lu sengaja ga layer, ane gatau)
16:57 Shinzo-: 04:40:049 - missing ?
16:57 Kyousuke-: emg ga sengaja layer itu, ga terlalu audible
16:58 Shinzo-: ohhh okeoke
16:58 Kyousuke-: itu ga missing? patternnya emg gtu
16:58 Shinzo-: hmmm okla
16:58 Kyousuke-: dan ga terlalu audible :v
16:58 Shinzo-: ye iya
16:58 Shinzo-: 04:56:455 - di add aja ?
17:00 Kyousuke-: jdi aneh
17:00 Kyousuke-: 04:56:533 (296533|2,296611|3,296689|1,296767|2) - gw cuma ngikut efek ini sih wkwk
17:00 Shinzo-: haha ok gpp
17:01 Shinzo-: 05:01:064 - mirip kek 05:00:752 -
17:01 Shinzo-: lagian 00:30:752 (30752|2,31064|1) - jumlah note ny sama
17:02 Kyousuke-: beda di effect soundnya
17:02 Shinzo-: gitu yah
17:02 Shinzo-: iya sih
17:03 Kyousuke-: yg di ending effectnya lbh gahar lel :v
17:03 Kyousuke-: jdi double deh >.>
17:03 Shinzo-: xD
17:03 Shinzo-: iyaa
17:03 Shinzo-: ok itu aja ._.
17:03 Kyousuke-: thanks~

Good Luck ! :D
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Shinzo- wrote:

Hi ! :)
Come as Kyousuke-'s Request on Mania Modding Team

done IRC mod
15:25 Shinzo-: lek
15:26 Kyousuke-: wat
15:27 Shinzo-: sibuk ga
15:28 Kyousuke-: wait
15:28 Kyousuke-: lgi nge cek hs anomaly
15:28 Kyousuke-: emg napa? o.o
15:28 Shinzo-: ohhh
15:28 Shinzo-: kalo mau ya IRC buat dreadnought ._.
15:33 Kyousuke-: bntr lgi ya
15:33 Kyousuke-: udah deh wkwk
15:34 Shinzo-: lel
15:36 Kyousuke-: yok>
15:36 Kyousuke-: *?
15:36 Shinzo-: ayok
15:36 Shinzo-: duluan aja
15:36 Shinzo-: *ehh
15:37 Kyousuke-: lel
15:38 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/871129 Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought]
15:38 Shinzo-: anjay last pending...
15:38 Shinzo-: gaada mod ya ?xD
15:38 Kyousuke-: rip server os
15:38 Kyousuke-: *osu
15:38 Kyousuke-: ga bsa buka thread hue
15:38 Shinzo-: iya
15:39 Shinzo-: bad pippi
15:39 Shinzo-: ane dah bisa o.o
15:39 Kyousuke-: ye
15:40 Shinzo-: 00:02:158 (2158|0,2314|2,2471|0,2627|2,2783|0,2939|2,3096|1,3252|3,3408|1,3564|3,3721|1,3877|2,3955|3,4033|1,4111|0,4189|3,4267|2) - Ctrl H ?
15:40 Kyousuke-: sbenerny ni map mo rencana bikin SV
15:40 Kyousuke-: dan raika gd nya lama beud
15:40 Shinzo-: ehhh se-enggakny yg 00:02:158 (2158|0,2314|2,2471|0,2627|2,2783|0,2939|2) - biar nyambung gitu ama 00:01:846 (1846|3,2002|1) -
15:41 Shinzo-: ehh raika ? 7K ?
15:41 Kyousuke-: yha patternnya jdi break :v
15:41 Shinzo-: iya sih awkakawk
15:41 Kyousuke-: itu gw ud ngikut pitch (?)
15:42 Kyousuke-: 00:07:002 (7002|1,7158|0) - sama kyk ini wkwk
15:43 Shinzo-: 00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|0,11767|1) - jadiin LN ? awkawkawkaw
15:43 Kyousuke-: no short ln, kalo bisa di map ini gw minimalisir ln nya wkwk
15:43 Shinzo-: ooke
15:44 Kyousuke-: abis banyak stream nya sih :v
15:44 Shinzo-: 00:17:627 (17627|0,17705|2,17861|0) - ctrl H trus move ke kiri 1 kali ? >,>
15:45 Kyousuke-: wat
15:45 Kyousuke-: ss? :v
15:46 Kyousuke-: salah ngetik itu kykny lel, jdi aneh
15:46 Kyousuke-: knp banyak modder yg pointing tu pattern awkwk
15:47 Shinzo-: eh iya salah
15:47 Shinzo-: http://puu.sh/neDAq/69c73bd0e3.jpg
15:47 Shinzo-: itu biar nyambung aja pattern ny (yg w crop)
15:48 Kyousuke-: pattern yg kyk gtu ud bnyk lel
15:49 Kyousuke-: 00:25:283 (25283|0,25283|2,25361|1,25439|2,25517|1,25596|0,25596|3) - liek dis
15:49 Kyousuke-: 00:26:221 (26221|0,26221|3,26299|1,26377|2,26455|1,26533|0,26533|3,26611|2,26689|1,26689|0,26767|2,26846|3,26846|0,26846|1) - and dis
15:49 Shinzo-: ohhh
15:50 Shinzo-: ya ngga sih, lucu aja 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - ini sndiri :V
15:51 Kyousuke-: abisnya pitch nya mirip? >.>
15:54 Shinzo-: 00:26:299 (26299|1) - delete ?
15:55 Kyousuke-: ey why
15:55 Kyousuke-: 00:26:611 (26611|2) - sama kyk ini?
15:56 Shinzo-: 00:26:299 (26299|1) - emang ada suarany ? o.o
15:56 Shinzo-: eh ada kecil
15:56 Kyousuke-: kyk suara bgm gtu sih bukan instrument
15:56 Shinzo-: 00:31:221 (31221|0,31221|3,31299|2,31377|3,31377|0,31455|1) - coba lu denger lagi ? itu kek bukan 1/4
15:57 Kyousuke-: ey klo effect sound yg space itu 1/4 kan?
15:57 Kyousuke-: di map ini agak ribet jga snap nya lel
15:58 Shinzo-: ye gatau
15:58 Shinzo-: 00:43:096 (43096|0) - move ke 3 ? itch ny gitu de kekny
15:58 Shinzo-: persis ke 00:44:033 (44033|2) - soalny
15:59 Kyousuke-: ok
15:59 Shinzo-: 00:44:971 (44971|2,45596|1,46221|0) - 2 1 3 ?
16:01 Kyousuke-: fixed, tpi 312 wkwk
16:01 Shinzo-: okeoke
16:01 Shinzo-: 01:00:205 (60205|0) - kek gaada suara....
16:02 Shinzo-: but pasti lu punya alasan untuk itu
16:02 Kyousuke-: iye effect sound yg keselip
16:02 Shinzo-: 01:10:674 (70674|3,70830|3,70986|3,71142|3) - mungkin move 1/4 ke bawah, soalny suarany gasama (01:10:596 (70596|0,70596|1,70674|3,70674|2,70752|1,70752|0,70830|3,70830|2,70908|1,70908|0,70986|3,70986|2,71064|1,71064|0,71142|3,71142|2) -)
16:02 Kyousuke-: di bms jga ad sih
16:03 Kyousuke-: ay gw lbh suka spam 12 34
16:03 Kyousuke-: :v
16:03 Shinzo-: eh y udh
16:04 Kyousuke-: wait apa bedanya ya :v
16:07 Shinzo-: 01:37:783 (97783|3) - kek salah snap
16:08 Kyousuke-: klo denger 100% baru ketahuan
16:08 Kyousuke-: tpi klo 25% suaranya ga kedengeran beda, dan ga ketahuan snap nya >.>
16:08 Kyousuke-: lel
16:08 Shinzo-: ye begitu
16:08 Shinzo-: 01:54:502 (114502|3,114502|2) - 01:55:127 (115127|1,115127|0,115439|0,115439|1) - 1 note aja ?
16:09 Kyousuke-: sengaja
16:09 Kyousuke-: biar ada impact sama melodny nya
16:10 Shinzo-: iy deh
16:11 Shinzo-: 02:24:346 (144346|3,144346|0) - move ke 23 ? sama pitch kek 02:24:189 (144189|2,144189|1) -
16:12 Shinzo-: 02:24:502 (144502|1,144580|2) - trus ini dihapus ? buat charge aja buat impact yg di 02:24:658 - biar kerasa
16:12 Shinzo-: afk bentar mandi
16:12 Kyousuke-: iya jga sih
16:12 Kyousuke-: lel oke
16:16 Kyousuke-: yha, tpi 02:24:502 (144502|1,144580|2) - klo ini diapus nga deh kykny
16:19 Shinzo-: ohhh oke gpp
16:19 Kyousuke-: lel cefet beud mandinya
16:20 Kyousuke-: main bentar ye
16:20 Shinzo-: 7 menit yha
16:20 Shinzo-: awkawkawk okeoke
16:20 *Kyousuke- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/790529 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos]
16:23 Kyousuke-: ay ga jdi dhe pegel
16:23 Kyousuke-: perlu banyak stamina map nya :^)
16:23 Shinzo-: awkawkawkwak
16:23 Kyousuke-: lel lu malah ikut maen rohi :v
16:23 Shinzo-: iye lu udh np sih
16:23 Shinzo-: 3 menitan juga
16:23 Shinzo-: belum semenit ane dah lelah
16:24 Kyousuke-: lel sama
16:25 Shinzo-: 02:27:783 (147783|1) - delete ?
16:25 Shinzo-: gaadil aja sama 02:27:939 (147939|2,147939|3,148017|0,148017|1) -
16:27 Kyousuke-: t-tpi bagaimana dgn 02:27:314 (147314|1,147314|3,147314|2) - ini
16:27 Kyousuke-: iya sih yg itu pengecualian, masa iya triple 1/4 :v
16:27 Shinzo-: wkwkwkw
16:28 Shinzo-: 02:27:783 - soalny ini gaada suara yg kek pst pst gitu
16:28 Kyousuke-: yg laen jga kyk gtu >.>
16:28 Shinzo-: tapi buat pattern sih bagu ugha ==
16:28 Shinzo-: y'udh de gpp
16:28 Shinzo-: 02:28:304 (148304|3) - Ctrl H ?
16:28 Shinzo-: buat pitch
16:28 Kyousuke-: eh bner jga deh, ga ada pst pst nya
16:29 Kyousuke-: deleted :v
16:29 Shinzo-: lel
16:29 Shinzo-: ok
16:29 Kyousuke-: yg pitch ok
16:30 Shinzo-: 02:43:799 (163799|2) - delete ?
16:30 Shinzo-: ehhh gajadi
16:30 Shinzo-: jelek
16:30 Kyousuke-: 02:47:783 - lha gw yg ini double doang >.> emg hrsnya delete akwkw
16:31 Kyousuke-: lel ada echo nya itu
16:31 Shinzo-: ohiya
16:31 Shinzo-: iya makany gajadi
16:32 Shinzo-: 02:44:580 - http://puu.sh/neFcy/860e5957ca.jpg ? buat pitch aja
16:34 Kyousuke-: bole
16:34 Shinzo-: okeee
16:34 Shinzo-: 02:46:533 - http://puu.sh/neFf3/47d2e6de1d.png ? buat pitch juga soalny stream 1/4 ny juga di kanan semua xD (02:46:142 (166142|2,166221|3,166377|2,166455|3,166741|2,166793|3,167002|3,167080|2) - )
16:36 Kyousuke-: nice
16:36 Kyousuke-: 02:21:221 (141221|1,141221|0,141221|2,141377|0,141429|1,141481|2) - sama kyk ini akwkw
16:37 Shinzo-: ehh xD awkawkawk
16:37 Shinzo-: 02:50:517 (170517|0) - delete aja ? xD terserah sih, soalny 02:51:767 - ada + kick ny tapi 1 note doang hehee
16:38 Shinzo-: 02:56:221 - 02:59:267 - lel laguny tiba" epic gitu awkawkwakawk
16:38 Kyousuke-: bner jga
16:38 Kyousuke-: tau tuh :v
16:40 Shinzo-: xD
16:40 Shinzo-: 03:00:986 (180986|0) - gaada synt ny sih xD tpi mungkin lu ngikut suara yg lain..
16:40 Kyousuke-: melody
16:40 Shinzo-: ok
16:40 Shinzo-: 03:15:439 - dibikin 2 note ?
16:42 Kyousuke-: kykny gausah deh
16:42 Kyousuke-: kick nya ga bgitu kedengeran sih, gara effectnya wkwk
16:42 Shinzo-: iye sih
16:42 Shinzo-: okok
16:42 Shinzo-: 03:31:846 (211846|3,211846|2) - move ke 12 ? kek tadi
16:43 Kyousuke-: ok
16:44 Shinzo-: 03:17:861 (197861|1) - move ke 03:18:017 - ? soalny 03:18:017 - ada kick + melody sementara 03:17:861 - ga begitu kedengerantapi gpp juga sih kalo lu mo ngindarin jack
16:44 Shinzo-: *ama pattern yg seterusny*
16:46 Kyousuke-: why not add dua" nya :v
16:47 Shinzo-: up t you babeh :* it's your map
16:47 Shinzo-: *yo
16:47 Shinzo-: *to
16:47 Shinzo-: awkawkawkawkwa
16:47 Kyousuke-: lel
16:47 Kyousuke-: rip akwkwkw
16:47 Shinzo-: 03:35:283 (215283|3) - sama kek tadi yg pst pst itu xD
16:48 Shinzo-: kek ny 03:41:533 - lebih worth buat 3 note dripada 03:41:377 - soalny .... idk xD awkakawkawk
16:48 Shinzo-: 03:46:767 (226767|3) - delete ? soalny gaada kick ny OwO
16:49 Kyousuke-: lel yg 2 note itu emg sengaja
16:50 Kyousuke-: karena dulu ad modder yg ngomong gitu lel
16:50 Kyousuke-: yg delete ga ad kick ok
16:50 Kyousuke-: nice catch :v
16:50 Shinzo-: oohhuuee
16:50 Shinzo-: ok
16:51 Shinzo-: 03:49:971 - padahal enak ya yg part begini kalo ada SV
16:51 Shinzo-: tapi ya itu gatau minta ke siapa >,>
16:51 Kyousuke-: makanya
16:51 Kyousuke-: :v
16:52 Shinzo-: :v
16:52 Shinzo-: 04:19:892 - udh ada kick ny disini sih
16:53 Shinzo-: soalny klo ga salah juga sebelum ny lu kasih 2 note di situ xD
16:53 Shinzo-: 02:52:392 - eh ngga ternyata
16:53 Shinzo-: yaudah up to you xD
16:53 Kyousuke-: lel
16:53 Kyousuke-: wait
16:54 Shinzo-: k
16:54 Kyousuke-: saya nyerah cari patternnya
16:54 Kyousuke-: keep aj dhe
16:55 Shinzo-: wkwkwkwk
16:55 Shinzo-: okekoe
16:55 Shinzo-: 04:29:267 (269267|2) - delete ajah ? :D supaya buat bedain ama suara 04:29:424 (269424|2,269502|1,269580|0) - kan 04:29:267 (269267|2) - ga terlalu jelas tuh
16:57 Kyousuke-: okela
16:57 Shinzo-: 04:30:674 - 04:30:830 - 04:30:986 - ada suara ny, (ye mungkin lu sengaja ga layer, ane gatau)
16:57 Shinzo-: 04:40:049 - missing ?
16:57 Kyousuke-: emg ga sengaja layer itu, ga terlalu audible
16:58 Shinzo-: ohhh okeoke
16:58 Kyousuke-: itu ga missing? patternnya emg gtu
16:58 Shinzo-: hmmm okla
16:58 Kyousuke-: dan ga terlalu audible :v
16:58 Shinzo-: ye iya
16:58 Shinzo-: 04:56:455 - di add aja ?
17:00 Kyousuke-: jdi aneh
17:00 Kyousuke-: 04:56:533 (296533|2,296611|3,296689|1,296767|2) - gw cuma ngikut efek ini sih wkwk
17:00 Shinzo-: haha ok gpp
17:01 Shinzo-: 05:01:064 - mirip kek 05:00:752 -
17:01 Shinzo-: lagian 00:30:752 (30752|2,31064|1) - jumlah note ny sama
17:02 Kyousuke-: beda di effect soundnya
17:02 Shinzo-: gitu yah
17:02 Shinzo-: iya sih
17:03 Kyousuke-: yg di ending effectnya lbh gahar lel :v
17:03 Kyousuke-: jdi double deh >.>
17:03 Shinzo-: xD
17:03 Shinzo-: iyaa
17:03 Shinzo-: ok itu aja ._.
17:03 Kyousuke-: thanks~

Good Luck ! :D
thanks~ helpful mod :)
Lude
Interlude's Modding Queue
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Battlespace
00:30:908 - 00:31:221 - Add notes? Hard bass going in
01:24:658 - Add a note?
02:28:096 - 02:29:150 - I'm not sure if this was intentional, but the ends of the longnotes seems unsnapped and unnecessarily long. I think it would be better to snap it to 1/8 yellow tick
02:48:096 - 03:35:596 - 03:55:596 - 04:15:596 - ^Same

Sorry for late modding ;-;
Feel free to reject it.
Good luck!
LordRaika
Hi, w ada hadiah untukmu XD

http://puu.sh/nyRSt.mp3 (gara2 laguny itu2 trus, jadi stuck di kepala >_< akhirnya jadi deh pitch nya)
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

LordRaika wrote:

Hi, w ada hadiah untukmu XD

http://puu.sh/nyRSt.mp3 (gara2 laguny itu2 trus, jadi stuck di kepala >_< akhirnya jadi deh pitch nya)
wow kool @@ how2use fl studio lol

btw itu nanti buat keysound / hitsound nya kan? wkwk
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's Modding Queue
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Battlespace
00:30:908 - 00:31:221 - Add notes? Hard bass going in 3 notes is only for cymbal / finish sound
01:24:658 - Add a note? ^ it was the same like the others note lol >.>
02:28:096 - 02:29:150 - I'm not sure if this was intentional, but the ends of the longnotes seems unsnapped and unnecessarily long. I think it would be better to snap it to 1/8 yellow tick please hear carefully, it was accurately 1/6 (look pya's map)
02:48:096 - 03:35:596 - 03:55:596 - 04:15:596 - ^Same ^

Sorry for late modding ;-;
Feel free to reject it.
Good luck!
thanks, i still appreciate that xD

/oops dopost


ok time to search mod again,
LordRaika's 7K Onslaught is prioritized~!
lenpai
Ill mod both diffs because oui oui baguette

Will mod tomorrow

EDIT: eh reply to evening post 1st
Evening
Quite a long post, this format is so that replying is easier if you'd like

LordRaika's 7K Onslaught


00:09:033 (9033|3,9346|3) - Pretty sure there are 1/4s in between these 2, quite faint but I reckon it's a recurring rhythm that is intended by the artist, up to you if you want to add that in.

| Refer: 00:06:533 (6533|4,6611|2,6689|4,6767|2) - Previous 1/4 rhythm

00:10:596 (10596|0,10596|6,10596|3,10908|0,10908|3,10908|6) - Not really a fan of these 1/1 hammers, they feel way too light in terms of difficulty and intensity, making it rather underwhelming, suggesting to go for a bigger chord if possible OR add in the 1/2s that you've omitted

00:11:221 (11221|0,11221|1,11221|2,11299|3,11377|5,11377|4,11377|6) - Personally don't really feel like this pattern gives a much of an impact to the player physically considering it can be approximated to a 1234567 sweep, I suggest to make some 1/2 hammers here and there

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Note count is probably a bit too overkill in this case but kinda illustrates what I mean by not making it a 1234567 sweep

00:11:611 (11611|3,11689|4,11767|5,11846|6,11846|1,11846|2,11846|0) - Doesn't really feel like a really strong build up here, I think you can trill the last few notes and end the pattern with a larger chord

| Note: Try to not have a 656{57} pattern if you intend to use the trill suggestion

00:15:283 (15283|4,15283|6,15439|6,15439|4) - Probably unintended missing 1/4

00:16:455 - Might be intended in this case, but I'm pointing it out just in case (missing 1/4 note)

00:16:689 (16689|4,16689|2,16767|5,16846|3,16846|6,16846|0) - Build up is rather underwhelming, going to illustrate with an image

| Image:

Notice the note density build up here, try to keep playability constant while increasing note density, this will help in expressing the higher intensity of the song without making it horribly awkward to play

00:19:814 (19814|5,20283|1) - Missing a ton of 1/4s in between here I believe that it would feel better if you did a 1/4 to 1/8 transition here instead of throwing a 1/8 while exiting a 1/2

00:21:846 - Wanted to mention this really really underwhelming in difficulty considering they are all one handed and they are just... really easy, I would suggest to make them 2 handed instead. Think it's fine since the music kinda builds up.

00:25:283 (25283|1,25439|1) - Missing 1/4, probably not intended

00:26:455 - Missing 1/4, probably intended?

00:29:346 (29346|3,30596|2) - Feels like you're totally overlooking the build up 1/4 snare here, much more could be done in terms of patterning and build up, as of now, the build up from the 1/8 and 1/4 at the end is rigid and doesn't really fit the track in my opinion

00:32:471 - Pretty sure you've seen Pyakura's dreadnought, the build up there was pretty much what I was looking for, in this case, the pattern here is a bit bland physically, it doesn't really show the following to me:

• Pattern Difficulty build up
• Density build up
• SV build up


Taking either 1 or 2 of these factors and enhancing them will make it more relevant towards the music

00:41:846 (41846|2) - Go for the SV acceleration before this chord, gives it more impact and I feel that it's a nice transition towards the slowjam

00:48:564 (48564|0,48564|2,48721|2,48721|0,48721|1) - ugh quite mindblockable for me, but it's mostly me since most players will probably play this fine

01:01:338 (61338|3,61846|1) - Missing a ton of 1/4s here, it's a transition from the 1/8s to 1/4s then to 1/2s, have a strong feeling that it's necessary to be mapped

01:02:158 (62158|0,62471|1) - Similarly, missing a bunch of 1/4s, though it's a recurring rhythm in this case instead of a transition

01:06:221 (66221|3,66846|5) - Build up towards the chord here is rather insignificant, considering adding some notes in to increase density

01:08:721 - Felt like an indecisive section where I don't really know what sounds you plan to go with here, I find that layering 1/4s and the 1/2 chords here like this wouldn't be a problem

| Note: The 21{23} at the end was rather weird to play so I suggest to remove that too

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01:15:517 (75517|2) - 01:16:767 (76767|2) - 01:18:017 (78017|1) - Don't think these are really needed if you plan to only map the synths here, could be nice for a roll transition towards the LNs but... yea up to you

01:18:486 (78486|2,78564|4,78642|1,78721|5,78799|2,78877|4,78955|1,79033|5) - Don't think the pitch synths are purely 35263526? Consider shifting these 2 notes to the center, creates a rather nice complex pattern 01:18:564 (78564|4,78799|2) -

01:33:512 (93512|6,93512|5,93616|0,93616|1) - Feel like it could feel better if these are hammered on column 12, 1/3 is not that fast in this case

01:38:096 (98096|3,98721|5) - Think it should be 64 instead of 46 pitch-wise

01:42:314 (102314|3,102392|5,102549|1,102783|5,102939|3) - Quite vague of a snapping and sound, might want to omit these in mapping, don't think it really makes much of a difference, if you really want to map it, consider using 01:41:846 (101846|5,101846|3,101846|1) - LN ends of those notes to map to it somehow

01:43:877 (103877|3,103955|4,104033|5,104111|3,104189|4,104267|5) - There are some sound distortions here, might want to map that in through SVs or just making this a broken stair

01:47:471 (107471|6,107783|0,108096|6,108721|4) - Pretty sure the violin pitch goes like 1234 instead of 4143

01:53:096 (113096|4,113174|0,113252|6) - 1/6 or 1/8 idk, but it's just weird to map with 1/4

02:09:033 - Heavily dislike this pattern in this section, it's horribly awkward to execute (especially the 2312132), consider making this increase in density instead of... this pattern. If you intend to follow the suggestion I would suggest to change up the whole pattern starting from 02:06:377 - as the transition from singles to this is rather spiky

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Kinda forgot about the note count thing but yea.. something like this would be great

02:28:096 (148096|6,148096|0,148304|6,148304|1,148512|2,148512|6,148721|6,148721|3,148929|4,148929|6,149137|6,149137|5) - ugh the pitch doesn't go in one way, change the last 3 note here if possible

02:33:056 (153056|3,153096|4,153174|3) - Consider removing the center note anchor here, quite awkward to trill 454

03:03:096 (183096|4,183408|5) - This synth is 1/4, might want to rethink this pattern here

03:03:564 (183564|0,183721|1,183877|2,184033|3,184189|4) - The pitch is more like 15432 instead of 12345

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03:04:111 - Not sure what is this note for, felt like it's too vague to be included

03:08:096 (188096|2,188408|3) - Similarly, this synth is 1/4

03:08:721 (188721|6,188721|4,188877|6,188877|4) - Think it's more of {57}{46} instead of a {57} hammer pitch-wise

03:10:596 (190596|2) - The music cuts off this synth, might want to show that by not mapping this in

03:11:221 (191221|3,191299|2,191377|1) - I believe it's 1/6

03:13:877 (193877|6,193955|5,194033|4) - Well, pitch-wise I think it's better if you did this

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03:16:533 (196533|0,196611|2,196689|4,196767|6) - Might be a bit underwhelming to go with 1/4 instead of 1/8 or 1/6 w/e this snap is here

03:23:096 (203096|6,203408|4) - These are piano chords, better if they are not singles

03:28:877 (208877|0,208877|4,208955|1,208955|5,209033|6,209033|2) - Try a 1/4 and 1/6 poly considering the synths

03:36:221 (216221|6,216221|3,216221|4,216429|5,216429|2,216429|4,216637|6,216637|5,216637|1) - Pitch pls

03:46:455 (226455|2,226533|1,226689|1,226846|1,226924|2) - Not sure about omitting the 1/4s, think it's possible if you 3232323 this part, up to you on how you want to put in the 1/4s

03:46:455 (226455|2,226533|1,226689|1,226846|1,226924|2) - Pitch relevancy here pls

04:22:158 (262158|4,262158|1,262158|5,262158|2) - Consider making these 1/1 long LNs here, feel that it better illustrates the music here as the music changes mood at 04:22:471 (262471|3) - so a larger change in the chart would better fit that

04:32:783 (272783|1,272783|0,272861|2,272861|3) - Kind of a weird 1/4, might want to just not map this, the 1/4 here is rather vague and it feels like a weird anomaly in this section when i played it

04:36:533 (276533|1,276533|5,276689|5,276689|1,276846|3,276846|2,276846|4) - Recommend to put 1/4s

04:39:346 (279346|4,281846|4) - Think you can do something about this 1/4 snare build up in this section

04:45:283 (285283|1,285439|1) - Pretty sure you can include 1/4s here by 2323-ing this

05:01:533 (301533|2,301533|6,301611|5,301611|1,301689|0,301689|4,301767|3) - Dislike the fact that the chart ended off quite light, consider doing some trills here and there to make it more intensive rather than a double stair, which in fact is just really flowy instead of giving high impact when playing

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00:09:033 (9033|3,9346|3) - Pretty sure there are 1/4s in between these 2, quite faint but I reckon it's a recurring rhythm that is intended by the artist, up to you if you want to add that in.

| Refer: 00:06:533 (6533|4,6611|2,6689|4,6767|2) - Previous 1/4 rhythm
i make the stair pattern there ... till i forgot that its actually has a strong 1/2 and some 1/4, haha...
sure,... added 1/4 like previous one, to fit this consistency and the pattern looks fit as well.



00:10:596 (10596|0,10596|6,10596|3,10908|0,10908|3,10908|6) - Not really a fan of these 1/1 hammers, they feel way too light in terms of difficulty and intensity, making it rather underwhelming, suggesting to go for a bigger chord if possible OR add in the 1/2s that you've omitted
im jst aiming for the same sound to be hit on the same thing... >w< but sure, added more chord and 1/2 like in this section...

00:11:221 (11221|0,11221|1,11221|2,11299|3,11377|5,11377|4,11377|6) - Personally don't really feel like this pattern gives a much of an impact to the player physically considering it can be approximated to a 1234567 sweep, I suggest to make some 1/2 hammers here and there

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Note count is probably a bit too overkill in this case but kinda illustrates what I mean by not making it a 1234567 sweep
yep yep, i get your point, this right 567 then left chord 123 for the cymbal feels too light...
i added it for both hand and possible for a little sweep now.


00:11:611 (11611|3,11689|4,11767|5,11846|6,11846|1,11846|2,11846|0) - Doesn't really feel like a really strong build up here, I think you can trill the last few notes and end the pattern with a larger chord

| Note: Try to not have a 656{57} pattern if you intend to use the trill suggestion
i rearrange the pattern around here, and try to make it has more note, but not really much... so let it be light here , will slowly make it harder as the song goes later on.

00:15:283 (15283|4,15283|6,15439|6,15439|4) - Probably unintended missing 1/4
yeah, suppose to be mirror from 00:14:033 -
but, sure, add the 1/4 there >w<

00:16:455 - Might be intended in this case, but I'm pointing it out just in case (missing 1/4 note)
added

00:16:689 (16689|4,16689|2,16767|5,16846|3,16846|6,16846|0) - Build up is rather underwhelming, going to illustrate with an image

| Image:

Notice the note density build up here, try to keep playability constant while increasing note density, this will help in expressing the higher intensity of the song without making it horribly awkward to play
k k, add more note on it :)

00:19:814 (19814|5,20283|1) - Missing a ton of 1/4s in between here I believe that it would feel better if you did a 1/4 to 1/8 transition here instead of throwing a 1/8 while exiting a 1/2
k, add some note and 1/4.

00:21:846 - Wanted to mention this really really underwhelming in difficulty considering they are all one handed and they are just... really easy, I would suggest to make them 2 handed instead. Think it's fine since the music kinda builds up.
oh ok, i also make this to have chord stream for better feelings.

00:25:283 (25283|1,25439|1) - Missing 1/4, probably not intended
00:26:455 - Missing 1/4, probably intended?
added

00:29:346 (29346|3,30596|2) - Feels like you're totally overlooking the build up 1/4 snare here, much more could be done in terms of patterning and build up, as of now, the build up from the 1/8 and 1/4 at the end is rigid and doesn't really fit the track in my opinion
sure, thx to all of the mod till here, i make the opening to have more note overall.... i also do so at the end of the song.



00:32:471 - Pretty sure you've seen Pyakura's dreadnought, the build up there was pretty much what I was looking for, in this case, the pattern here is a bit bland physically, it doesn't really show the following to me:

• Pattern Difficulty build up
• Density build up
• SV build up


Taking either 1 or 2 of these factors and enhancing them will make it more relevant towards the music
actually... no XD till i finished this out...
i just know that dreadnought has short and ranked version haha... but i do saw it after i finish my diff....
yes, i got your point, i remade all of it, and hope u feel the builds up now, as the density, i didnt increase the note amount...
just the pattern difficulty build up.


00:41:846 (41846|2) - Go for the SV acceleration before this chord, gives it more impact and I feel that it's a nice transition towards the slowjam
added the speed up SV :)

00:48:564 (48564|0,48564|2,48721|2,48721|0,48721|1) - ugh quite mindblockable for me, but it's mostly me since most players will probably play this fine
agree, this pattern is usually hard, but here its only 1times and its slow and easy BUT THEN... i think i can make it better... so i reduce the kick from 2 note to 1 note since this part is very calm.

01:01:338 (61338|3,61846|1) - Missing a ton of 1/4s here, it's a transition from the 1/8s to 1/4s then to 1/2s, have a strong feeling that it's necessary to be mapped
i try to add the 1/4 ,but not fully from 1/8 since its quite surprising(while the right still busy thinking of the holding note)

01:02:158 (62158|0,62471|1) - Similarly, missing a bunch of 1/4s, though it's a recurring rhythm in this case instead of a transition
only add 1 from 1/4 after releasing the LN, ehm actually this section has loooots of 1/4 but yea... intentionally skip it as its not really unnecessary, missing the LN while playing this section is just really bad XD , hehe so as usual i prefer it easy tfor some section.

01:06:221 (66221|3,66846|5) - Build up towards the chord here is rather insignificant, considering adding some notes in to increase density
sure things, added on 1/2

01:08:721 - Felt like an indecisive section where I don't really know what sounds you plan to go with here, I find that layering 1/4s and the 1/2 chords here like this wouldn't be a problem

| Note: The 21{23} at the end was rather weird to play so I suggest to remove that too

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01:08:096 - ah... its actually from this point... i only follow the strong kick/beat sound, 1/2 for 3chord.... then... 01:10:596 - this is the intense version of it, exactly like what you suggest...
i will just make the kick that i follow to have 1/4
i also change pattern as for the end is not 21{23} weird to play >w<


01:15:517 (75517|2) - 01:16:767 (76767|2) - 01:18:017 (78017|1) - Don't think these are really needed if you plan to only map the synths here, could be nice for a roll transition towards the LNs but... yea up to you
01:15:361 - at first, i was thinking that.... IF THIS 1/4 have an appropriate sound to add note, this burst will feels really nice for the synth towards LN,
but i leave it blank... then follow up with next only 2 01:15:439 - synth note from here....
missing 1 note from the 1/4 feels a bit weird from the burst.... its just require some reading skill to pause a little bit then continue the 1/4 burst...

but hey, remove the 1/4 completely could also be some good to follow up the point that i explain above.... thanks ^^b
i remove them....
and actually make it another 1/2 LN seems ok for me, let me knw if its actually feels a bit weird to be play


01:18:486 (78486|2,78564|4,78642|1,78721|5,78799|2,78877|4,78955|1,79033|5) - Don't think the pitch synths are purely 35263526? Consider shifting these 2 notes to the center, creates a rather nice complex pattern 01:18:564 (78564|4,78799|2) -
yes yes, i spread the note to some bursty burst thingy, and looks pretty fun now. >w<

01:33:512 (93512|6,93512|5,93616|0,93616|1) - Feel like it could feel better if these are hammered on column 12, 1/3 is not that fast in this case
Sure ^^b

01:38:096 (98096|3,98721|5) - Think it should be 64 instead of 46 pitch-wise
k k

01:42:314 (102314|3,102392|5,102549|1,102783|5,102939|3) - Quite vague of a snapping and sound, might want to omit these in mapping, don't think it really makes much of a difference, if you really want to map it, consider using 01:41:846 (101846|5,101846|3,101846|1) - LN ends of those notes to map to it somehow
i remove some very less noticeable sound, to be exact the one here 01:42:314 -
that one is the only one that doesnt feels right here...
and so i remade this section here, looks nice as well for the end of the LN wall to release into normal note section.


01:43:877 (103877|3,103955|4,104033|5,104111|3,104189|4,104267|5) - There are some sound distortions here, might want to map that in through SVs or just making this a broken stair
mapping the broken stair is quite hard here since i prefer this stair as main pattern, adding the SV is also a better choice and makes it good as well.

01:47:471 (107471|6,107783|0,108096|6,108721|4) - Pretty sure the violin pitch goes like 1234 instead of 4143
k k

01:53:096 (113096|4,113174|0,113252|6) - 1/6 or 1/8 idk, but it's just weird to map with 1/4
yep,1/6... i also add some SV there...

02:09:033 - Heavily dislike this pattern in this section, it's horribly awkward to execute (especially the 2312132), consider making this increase in density instead of... this pattern. If you intend to follow the suggestion I would suggest to change up the whole pattern starting from 02:06:377 - as the transition from singles to this is rather spiky

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Kinda forgot about the note count thing but yea.. something like this would be great
i actually give this 2312132 quite lots of concern, since i can barely pass it with some horrible acc,im sure stronger people will have no trouble at all...
but seems like... this is just dont feels good after all XD
dw, i change this section...
i can feel the actual pattern difficulty increase here as this new pattern, let me know what do u think of it...


02:28:096 (148096|6,148096|0,148304|6,148304|1,148512|2,148512|6,148721|6,148721|3,148929|4,148929|6,149137|6,149137|5) - ugh the pitch doesn't go in one way, change the last 3 note here if possible
haha, this is the correct pitch pattern anyway 02:48:096 (168096|2,168304|3,168512|4,168721|5,168929|3,169137|1,169346|3) - , as somehow the current pattern looooks so good so i ignore the pitch...
but wait... let me make it a good pattern with correct pitch....

02:33:056 (153056|3,153096|4,153174|3) - Consider removing the center note anchor here, quite awkward to trill 454
agree... tq for pointing this out.

03:03:096 (183096|4,183408|5) - This synth is 1/4, might want to rethink this pattern here

03:08:096 (188096|2,188408|3) - Similarly, this synth is 1/4
yeah, it is... like i did here 03:13:096 (193096|3,193096|6,193174|0,193252|6,193252|3,193330|0) - , therefore i will make all of them the same.

03:03:564 (183564|0,183721|1,183877|2,184033|3,184189|4) - The pitch is more like 15432 instead of 12345

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03:04:111 - Not sure what is this note for, felt like it's too vague to be included
yep, pitch fix and remove for a better and focused sound

03:08:721 (188721|6,188721|4,188877|6,188877|4) - Think it's more of {57}{46} instead of a {57} hammer pitch-wise
right... wait... its 4 6 then 5 7, looks good now.

03:10:596 (190596|2) - The music cuts off this synth, might want to show that by not mapping this in
thx, fixed...
just like i did before on here 03:00:596 -


03:11:221 (191221|3,191299|2,191377|1) - I believe it's 1/6
thanks XD

03:13:877 (193877|6,193955|5,194033|4) - Well, pitch-wise I think it's better if you did this

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Right... but i would like to keep it >_<, since the pattern looks a bit ugly XD haha

03:16:533 (196533|0,196611|2,196689|4,196767|6) - Might be a bit underwhelming to go with 1/4 instead of 1/8 or 1/6 w/e this snap is here
i pay a very close check here, its 1/6... now i remade the pattern and it looks awesome here, thx again for the snap... >_<

03:23:096 (203096|6,203408|4) - These are piano chords, better if they are not singles

03:28:877 (208877|0,208877|4,208955|1,208955|5,209033|6,209033|2) - Try a 1/4 and 1/6 poly considering the synths
right, looks very detail now.

03:36:221 (216221|6,216221|3,216221|4,216429|5,216429|2,216429|4,216637|6,216637|5,216637|1) - Pitch pls
o-ok >_<

03:46:455 (226455|2,226533|1,226689|1,226846|1,226924|2) - Not sure about omitting the 1/4s, think it's possible if you 3232323 this part, up to you on how you want to put in the 1/4s
k k, add the 1/4, its gotta be trilling.... hope u like it... XD

04:22:158 (262158|4,262158|1,262158|5,262158|2) - Consider making these 1/1 long LNs here, feel that it better illustrates the music here as the music changes mood at 04:22:471 (262471|3) - so a larger change in the chart would better fit that
agree.. i was about thinking how to emphasize the sudden lose of the sound and change.... was thinking bout this but worry if its gotta be weird, but... to think of it again.. ITS PERFECT >w<b , this 4fat LN to be release is not weird at all.. it fits

04:32:783 (272783|1,272783|0,272861|2,272861|3) - Kind of a weird 1/4, might want to just not map this, the 1/4 here is rather vague and it feels like a weird anomaly in this section when i played it
oh why.... w....
k remove XD


04:36:533 (276533|1,276533|5,276689|5,276689|1,276846|3,276846|2,276846|4) - Recommend to put 1/4s

04:39:346 (279346|4,281846|4) - Think you can do something about this 1/4 snare build up in this section

04:45:283 (285283|1,285439|1) - Pretty sure you can include 1/4s here by 2323-ing this

05:01:533 (301533|2,301533|6,301611|5,301611|1,301689|0,301689|4,301767|3) - Dislike the fact that the chart ended off quite light, consider doing some trills here and there to make it more intensive rather than a double stair, which in fact is just really flowy instead of giving high impact when playing
yep, i remade and make the density a bit higher...
and sure, gotta make it more trilling... XD
Tq Veni-chaaaaaan~ >w</
really like how u mod it by adding detail on my mapping style.


and oh.. big change... i mod my own map and fully add SV now.
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-
UPDATED!
lenpai
oui oui

cant testplay during weekdays :c

4k
Due to the lack of tricky LNs, this could be HP OD 9
Needs SV
01:22:314 (82314|1,82366|2,82418|3,82471|0,82471|1,82471|2) - could be a [4][3][2][134] to counter the triple usage here 01:21:846 (81846|0,81846|1,81846|3) - That being said, 01:22:002 (82002|2,82080|1) - ctrl h this. Provides cool jacks too
01:55:283 (115283|0) - move to 2 because 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) -
02:15:127 (135127|3) - move to 3 to make that 232 trill since 02:15:283 (135283|3,135361|0,135439|3) -
02:25:439 (145439|3) - idk lol move to 3
02:54:554 (174554|1,174658|2) - maybe ctrl h
03:42:627 (222627|3) - coopoopy pastaaaaaa move to 3
04:10:127 (250127|1,250205|2,250283|3,250283|0,250439|1,250491|2,250543|3,250596|1,250596|2,250596|0) - i think i said somethig about this previously
04:22:054 (262054|1,262158|2) - this too

7k
00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
02:58:721 - could use some SVs
03:35:596 - another quad thing
03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
03:49:971 - another quad thing
03:55:596 - ^
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?

amazing charts! Wishing the best of luck to this set!

*throws stars
Rikuka
rank pls :3
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Lenfried- wrote:

oui oui

cant testplay during weekdays :c

4k
Due to the lack of tricky LNs, this could be HP OD 9 hmm i would like to keep it now...
Needs SV added
01:22:314 (82314|1,82366|2,82418|3,82471|0,82471|1,82471|2) - could be a [4][3][2][134] to counter the triple usage here 01:21:846 (81846|0,81846|1,81846|3) - That being said, 01:22:002 (82002|2,82080|1) - ctrl h this. Provides cool jacks too hmm you right about that triple, re-arranged
01:55:283 (115283|0) - move to 2 because 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) - ok
02:15:127 (135127|3) - move to 3 to make that 232 trill since 02:15:283 (135283|3,135361|0,135439|3) - ok
02:25:439 (145439|3) - idk lol move to 3 lol ok, re-arranged a bit
02:54:554 (174554|1,174658|2) - maybe ctrl h ok more balance
03:42:627 (222627|3) - coopoopy pastaaaaaa move to 3 lol ok
04:10:127 (250127|1,250205|2,250283|3,250283|0,250439|1,250491|2,250543|3,250596|1,250596|2,250596|0) - i think i said somethig about this previously done
04:22:054 (262054|1,262158|2) - this too ok

7k
00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
02:58:721 - could use some SVs
03:35:596 - another quad thing
03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
03:49:971 - another quad thing
03:55:596 - ^
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?

amazing charts! Wishing the best of luck to this set!

*throws stars
tq very much len~
/oh fvk thx for dat 5 stars lol


Rikuka wrote:

rank pls :3
doain ya >w<
Shinzo-
duno why
lebih suka diff raika yg dulu
Rikuka

Kyousuke- wrote:

doain ya >w<
storia when ? *runs
LordRaika

Lenfried- wrote:

7k
00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
thx but i prefer single note and leave it blank as its only have not much space to next impact note with SV.

01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
basically... i jst add more note on the kick, yes sure...


01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
nopeeee... trust me, you just need to play like "normal stair pattern" and u will get 300

02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
hmm, everything is 3 note chord with pattern, using 4 could hardly gives a good pattern out of it,
and this 3 note is also good and consistent, so no change to all.


02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
i can feel the trill is not that fun...therefore i remove 1 of the 1/4 there >w<


02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
haha, thx... i know there is 1/6 there but its just doesnt make a good transition to my next LN part...

02:58:721 - could use some SVs
sure~


03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
no :( , simple hammer/trill is easier than chord control with anchor point, its really harder >_<



04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?
nooo, the 2nd last one LN will have the length of 50ms, NOOO
thats why with this around 100ms length, you just simply hit it as normal stair pattern to get 300.
Thanks for the mod >w<b


Shinzo- wrote:

duno why
lebih suka diff raika yg dulu
yaaah, klo ad pattern yg krg enak, ks tau aja >w<, bakal w cari pattern lain....






Update >>> http://puu.sh/nImxN.zip <<<
self mod, remodel some pattern into more amazing XD
add more SV(should recopy timing for 4k)
and wtf, SR got increased again... /me runssss
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

LordRaika wrote:

Lenfried- wrote:

7k
00:41:455 (41455|1) - idk could be an LN and have a slowdown
thx but i prefer single note and leave it blank as its only have not much space to next impact note with SV.

01:14:346 - when the kick bass thing aren't charted as LNs, i guess you can represent them as single notes that could be added in places like these/ this is under the assumption that the double LNs are both synth and bass
01:16:221 - 01:16:533 - 01:18:721 - etc
basically... i jst add more note on the kick, yes sure...


01:54:293 (114293|5) - idk if youre willing to cut the ln end at the bar line
nopeeee... trust me, you just need to play like "normal stair pattern" and u will get 300

02:22:471 - could use quads/ if the later part uses quads for something like this, then don't apply this
02:28:096 - yeah, another quad thing
02:48:096 - ^
hmm, everything is 3 note chord with pattern, using 4 could hardly gives a good pattern out of it,
and this 3 note is also good and consistent, so no change to all.


02:23:955 (143955|1,144111|1) - while they're audible in slower speeds they just feel weird to look at at normal speed
i can feel the trill is not that fun...therefore i remove 1 of the 1/4 there >w<


02:54:346 (174346|1,174346|5) - kinda bland
04:21:846 (261846|3) - pls stream ;w;
haha, thx... i know there is 1/6 there but its just doesnt make a good transition to my next LN part...

02:58:721 - could use some SVs
sure~


03:46:689 (226689|0,226689|4,226689|5,226689|1) - could move right once
no :( , simple hammer/trill is easier than chord control with anchor point, its really harder >_<



04:21:481 (261481|1,261533|0) - cut at white line?
nooo, the 2nd last one LN will have the length of 50ms, NOOO
thats why with this around 100ms length, you just simply hit it as normal stair pattern to get 300.
Thanks for the mod >w<b


Shinzo- wrote:

duno why
lebih suka diff raika yg dulu
yaaah, klo ad pattern yg krg enak, ks tau aja >w<, bakal w cari pattern lain....






Update >>> http://puu.sh/nImxN.zip <<<
self mod, remodel some pattern into more amazing XD
add more SV(should recopy timing for 4k)
and wtf, SR got increased again... /me runssss
okkie updated (lmao hype 6 stars)

and about the thing you told me, i haven't fix it yet. Bcs i dunno what should be fixed lol
Ripball
From my queue

Finally a song with 5* stars, well 4.9... I got 94.97% at first try (maybe I'll get more if I'll warm up)
Anyway...
|0|1|2|3|
4k BattleSpace
00:38:721 - Wow, I didn't expect this. I like it.
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - I don't know what say about this, if remove them and move to 01:00:205 (60205|2) or only remove them because I don't hear the flow in that part with 1/12 snap.
04:04:502 (244502|0) - move to 1?

Questions:
Why don't use LN's at 02:22:471 to 02:23:642 like 02:28:096 to 02:29:267
03:29:971 to 03:31:142 same ^
03:49:971 to 03:51:142 ^
That's all.
Feel free to reject it if you won't use this suggestions or if my mod was too short.
Good luck :D

P.S I'd give you a star for awesome chart but my modding isn't good yet. :(
P.S 2 Sorry for late mod, if some are alrealdy fixed. Ignore them.
xanibabe
columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

lordraika's 7k onslaught
00:32:471 - same as 02:04:658 - but 1/1 first instead of 1/2 right away?
00:35:908 - was it intentional to sort of break the pattern here? (like 24642...)
00:50:596 - maybe add a short LN, sounds like chord like 00:49:346 -
01:08:096 - should this be like 01:07:471 - ? (note on columns 1267)
01:09:346 - hard to change pattern, but maybe this could also have pitch mapping
01:40:596 - i dont understand what this is mapped to
02:12:158 - could also be like 00:39:658 -
03:35:596 - maybe better pitch mapping for this measure, since 03:36:221 - goes down in pitch but jumps up in columns
05:02:471 - maybe move to 05:03:096 - to give a full measure's length for the LN, since the end is not really mapped to a solid beat

:) very cool map, even if i can't really play it at my skill level
LordRaika

xanibabe wrote:

columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

lordraika's 7k onslaught
00:32:471 - same as 02:04:658 - but 1/1 first instead of 1/2 right away?
00:35:908 - was it intentional to sort of break the pattern here? (like 24642...)
sry, no... its for pattern sake...
changing it also doesnt show much differences, therefore i will go for the pattern.


00:50:596 - maybe add a short LN, sounds like chord like 00:49:346 -
suree

01:08:096 - should this be like 01:07:471 - ? (note on columns 1267)
right, i will follow my usual cymbal pattern for 1267

01:09:346 - hard to change pattern, but maybe this could also have pitch mapping
yeah, no... this pattern feels really nice to be play

01:40:596 - i dont understand what this is mapped to
01:40:596 (100596|1,100752|1) - this two have the same absolute pitch.. therefore its a minijack.
and the sound it follows is the choir sound, like from 01:35:596 -

another reason why its only 1 note, not 3 note for a total jack...
is yes....bcs the sound is very low, 3note is just not right....



02:12:158 - could also be like 00:39:658 -
no, XD for variation... thx anyway

03:35:596 - maybe better pitch mapping for this measure, since 03:36:221 - goes down in pitch but jumps up in columns
aaa no no no... this is actually already a perfect pitch, especially till here 03:36:429 -
from there its jst for a trill pattern...

now if you wonder the pitch, from 03:35:596 -
it is : F6 , F#6 , G#6 , D#7 , and last 3 is trill, C#7, C7 , C#7



05:02:471 - maybe move to 05:03:096 - to give a full measure's length for the LN, since the end is not really mapped to a solid beat
its jst for the short bass drop, while the other one is for the fading out wind sound.
but sure.... i will jst simply make them same to prevent confusion.

:) very cool map, even if i can't really play it at my skill level
Thanks ^^b
but still nice....


>> Updated + SV updated <<
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

DkAngelS wrote:

From my queue

Finally a song with 5* stars, well 4.9... I got 94.97% at first try (maybe I'll get more if I'll warm up)
Anyway...
|0|1|2|3|
4k BattleSpace
00:38:721 - Wow, I didn't expect this. I like it. thanks~ ><)/
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - I don't know what say about this, if remove them and move to 01:00:205 (60205|2) or only remove them because I don't hear the flow in that part with 1/12 snap. i'm following the effect sound, check pya's map and bms chart. It's existed with 1/6 snap
04:04:502 (244502|0) - move to 1? to match the pattern with 04:02:002 (242002|3) - this

Questions:
Why don't use LN's at 02:22:471 to 02:23:642 like 02:28:096 to 02:29:267
03:29:971 to 03:31:142 same ^
03:49:971 to 03:51:142 ^
the most reason is for pattern variation, and also to make a differences between 02:21:846 - 03:29:346 - 03:49:346 - this, and 02:26:846 - 02:46:846 - 03:34:346 - 03:54:346 - 04:14:346 - this. As you can see, the LN one is more climax than the triplets (anti-climax) one.
That's all.
Feel free to reject it if you won't use this suggestions or if my mod was too short.
Good luck :D

P.S I'd give you a star for awesome chart but my modding isn't good yet. :(
P.S 2 Sorry for late mod, if some are alrealdy fixed. Ignore them.
yep thanks angles~ still appreciated tho


okkie,

ALL UPDATED!
Kaito-kun
Sorry, but I can't help with LordRaika's diff. It's honestly too akward for me, may be because of the difficulty, as I'm not used to playing nor modding maps this difficult, but it certainly felt akward while both playing it and looking at it on the editor. Only things I can actually point out is that:
01:39:346 - Should have at least one extra note, there's a sound there other than the one you currently map
00:12:822 (12822|3,12861|2,12900|1,12939|0) - Idk where you got this from, but no matter how much I look at it, I can't find the reason that stream is there
00:22:822 (22822|5,22861|4,22900|3,22939|2) - Same here (if it's what I think it is, it should be a LN instead, as it is a single sound, not multiple as you mapped it)

Other than that is just opinion, but at the very least I'll share it in case it actually helps:

My biggest problem with the map is the start of it, there are lots of notes that are there, but I can barely associate them with any sound, they almost feel like ghost notes that are there just to dense the start up. I know they have their reason for being there, but it just felt like that while playing it. Another thing I found uncomfortable was the first set of SVs, they felt really akward and sorta off the music, so maybe give those a check. I also consider that HP rate is too high and OD rate is too low, but I won't really tell you to change it as that's nothing I can really consider a problem with the map.

This is all I can say about the 7K diff, me looking for more problems would probably result in either a shitty mod or a decrease in the map's quality, and I would like to avoid both of them.

(No Kudosu as it wasn't actually a mod)
LordRaika
All bold is my reply.. to make it easier to distinguish the differences while replying each of your concern.

Kaito-kun wrote:

Sorry, but I can't help with LordRaika's diff. It's honestly too akward for me, may be because of the difficulty, as I'm not used to playing nor modding maps this difficult, but it certainly felt akward while both playing it and looking at it on the editor. Only things I can actually point out is that:
01:39:346 - Should have at least one extra note, there's a sound there other than the one you currently map
yes... its a bell sound... suppose to be extra note? i already put 3 note there... :|
this technique is called shielding pattern, while i keep my LN section, while this shield 'REPRESENT' the bell, furthermore its 3note.

so.. i wont add any other note.


00:12:822 (12822|3,12861|2,12900|1,12939|0) - Idk where you got this from, but no matter how much I look at it, I can't find the reason that stream is there
00:22:822 (22822|5,22861|4,22900|3,22939|2) - Same here
this is usually 1/8 kick but to make this consistent... like what i do here 04:32:783 -
Sure, i will remove it.




Other than that is just opinion, but at the very least I'll share it in case it actually helps:

My biggest problem with the map is the start of it, there are lots of notes that are there, but I can barely associate them with any sound, they almost feel like ghost notes that are there just to dense the start up. I know they have their reason for being there, but it just felt like that while playing it.

WoW dude, Hold it... the start of the map consist of absolute 1/2 and necessary 1/4 drum roll and snare...
JUST WHY and WHERE is this ghost note is? unless the one above, i already remove it....




Another thing I found uncomfortable was the first set of SVs, they felt really akward and sorta off the music, so maybe give those a check.
this....... HURTS me... oh my god... seriously dude.... *facepalm*
i cant believe it...!!!

first, how? this SV is well-calculated... its suppose to be sightreading, its a gimmick, its a stutter that has the SAME SCROLL modifier speed in total.
second, ALL OF my SV here is "LOOOW" in multiplier of the effect... its -L-O-W- , supposed to not even bother your performance at all,
some people cant even tell if there is SV because it doesnt bother player while playing, while it does give an effect "IF" you pay a closer attention to it.

unless... 00:41:455 - only this one is not sightreading, is much more likely into reflex react.

off with the music? :(
idk what to say anymore.




I also consider that HP rate is too high and OD rate is too low, but I won't really tell you to change it as that's nothing I can really consider a problem with the map.
HP and OD is perfectly intentional.
i even want to put HP 9 and OD 8 later on 'if' demanded.

first, HP at this Star rating is really NORMAL, you dont expect it to be a real easy PP map right?
and, OD ... this beatmap consist of tons short LN and inverse LN,
as a mapper and player, i know my pattern very well, to be able to "perfectly" release all those LN, its require a strict timing out of it.
therefore a "bit" lower OD is set in this concern.


really planning to go on 9HP, to prevent people saying its gonna be easy PP map...
OD 8 if really really everyone can do the LN very well in terms of acc.




This is all I can say about the 7K diff, me looking for more problems would probably result in either a shitty mod or a decrease in the map's quality, and I would like to avoid both of them.

(No Kudosu as it wasn't actually a mod)

thanks for the mod :)
BUT i really suggest... like... you have a high Performance, u should be at least play this map.
there you can just give me your honest opinion on what pattern is too hard or other things. that could be more likely... helping.
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-
okkie updated again~
we ready for the next mods
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