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Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought [OsuMania]

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Kyousuke-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 Agustus 2016 at 21:58:32

Artist: Mastermind(xi+nora2r)
Title: Dreadnought
Source: BMS
Tags: World Fragments Diverse System 3rd solo album c89 comiket comic market Yusuke Ishiwata Breakthrough full ver BOFU2015 of Fighters Ultimate Daikeesen LordRaika
BPM: 192
Filesize: 8397kb
Play Time: 05:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K Battlespace - 4Key (4,93 stars, 3992 notes)
  2. LordRaika's 7K Onslaught - 7Key (6,01 stars, 4360 notes)
Download: Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought
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D R E A D N O U G H T _ M A R A T H O N
xi 3rd solo album

Diverse System | World Fragments

Big thanks to ajeemaniz for BG edit, also to LordRaika for his awesome GD!
Ibrahim
lel nanggung amat lebih semenit :p
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

[Baim] wrote:

lel nanggung amat lebih semenit :p
satu detik woy :V

jgn spam ah, dikasi star ato fav kek awkwk
kagiii
jadi juga beib :v
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

ExKagii- wrote:

jadi juga beib :v
aih ini satu lgi :v
Shinzo-

Kyousuke- wrote:

[Baim] wrote:

lel nanggung amat lebih semenit :p
satu detik woy :V

jgn spam ah, dikasi star ato fav kek awkwk
Tuh star =w=
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Shinzo- wrote:

Tuh star =w=
Yay shinzo baek bgt >w<
Thanks wkwk
Rido
7k mau dibikin siapa lek?
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Rido wrote:

7k mau dibikin siapa lek?
seseorang yg blom pasti :^)
Davin Fortune
REMEMBER THIS IS SPAM POST :vvv:

WILL give star if it's good

Little mod(give or not give kudosu is up to you) :
00:07:158 - 00:07:471 - 00:07:783 - i guess this part should be in 2 notes since it's different with the PINK notes sound, apply to all same part except like this 00:05:752 - it doesnt change much

00:12:002 - start from here, better to add long LN to close the long sound and double note beside the LN(this pattern is easier :P )

00:17:783 - wanna make it like this ?


00:20:127 - ^

00:21:533 - little note : keep this or change this with ^, cause i guess dat pattern i ask to change is bit harder , I GUESS :V

Okay maybe just that :V

Maybe some slow part but still i the right bpm, you can make it slow for GREGET SV :v

okay 1 star
Feerum
Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello Kyousuke-! Thanks for Requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Interesting song :o
Let's see if i can help you here a bit!

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right // I have take here the BMS as Source
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Do you Plan to add a 7K Difficult? If not Remove the "4K" from the Diff Name

4K Battlespace

00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|3,11767|2) - I think this trill doesn't fit here. Its really hard to hit and feels really uncomfortable. I think a 4-3-2-1 Stair would fit here well more, also it would follow pitch.
00:16:689 (16689|3,17262|2,17418|2) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. And yes they are. They don't have any audible sound to Map. Make them 1/4 to the other Notes. I checked this a lot of time. Also such a sudden 1/6 doesn't fit here in any way o.o
00:20:986 - You could add a Note here to emphasize the 1/4 or maybe even better.00:21:142 (21142|1) - Delete this one. That would emphasize these 1/4 notes 00:21:221 (21221|0,21299|1,21377|2,21455|1) - much more.
00:27:262 (27262|2,27418|2) - Same like previous. These Notes are Wrong Snapped. There is no Audible 1/6 sound. Really. Theres nothing. Why don't you map the more audible 1/4 Sound? This makes the Song just unnecessary harder to play and also uncomfortable.
And by the Way. The part looks Copy/Pasted :PP
00:43:096 (43096|0) - Move to 3 for Pitch?
00:54:346 (54346|1,54346|0) - Maybe make these also to a 1/4 LN? It would fit very well here because it also has the 1/4 sound like all other LN's here.
00:56:846 (56846|0,56846|1,56846|3) - These not. They have no 1/4 sound. Just the Loud crash.
01:04:033 (64033|3) - I think this LN is wrong. Its too long. The "wooob" sound of the LN beginns 01:04:189 - Then you could arrange the 1/6 a little bit better.
01:08:877 (68877|3,69033|3,69189|3,69346|3,69502|3,69658|3) - Just sayn but maybe it would be good to rearrange here these pattern a little bit to avoid something like this.
01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - Why do you map such a quiet and fuzzy sound? >.< It would be much better to map the 1/4 here. Really. It's not audible enough to add here the 1/6
01:28:017 (88017|3) - Would recommend to delete these notes. You follow in this Part the clear melody with your 1/4. And this one doesn't have a the clear melody like 01:27:549 (87549|1,87627|2,87705|1,87861|1,87939|2) - etc.
01:30:674 (90674|2) - Delete. Start to Map the clear melody from here 01:30:752 - for the Long 1/4 part.
01:31:533 (91533|3,91533|0,91611|2,91689|1,91689|0,91767|2) - Why you don't map here the 1/3 Sound like you did 01:28:408 (88408|0,88408|3,88512|2,88512|1,88616|3,88616|0,88721|2,88721|1) - and 01:25:908 (85908|3,85908|2,86012|1,86012|0,86116|2,86116|3,86221|1,86221|0) - . It would fit much better
01:33:252 - Should you didn't notice. here are 1/6 Sounds. Maybe you could map them?
01:34:033 (94033|3) - Delete. It is audible quieter then the other 3-Noted Chords here.
01:37:783 (97783|1) - Shouldn't this LN better end 01:37:939 - ?
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. The sound here is 1/6 like the next one. The isn't even a fuzzy sound you could map 1/8 here.
01:55:361 - Add here a note. Same deep sound like 01:55:674 (115674|1) -
02:03:252 (123252|3,123304|2,123356|1,123564|0,123616|1,123668|2) - These 1/6 are kinda.. mh.. i don't know.. i mean you can keep them but i recommend to delete at least 02:03:174 (123174|1,123486|2) - because theres no cleary 1/4 sound and it would make the 1/6 much comfortable to hit.
02:21:481 (141481|2,141533|3) - CTRL + G these makes it more comfortable. Also fit better to pitch.
02:34:736 - i think you can add here at 1 to follow the music
02:57:861 (177861|1,177900|0,178017|1,178056|0) - You use these stairs now very very often. Why not make these CTRL + G for more varity in the pattern :D
03:22:002 (202002|1) - Delete. No clear sound. Maybe just a echo from the previous chord.
03:24:502 (204502|2) - No clear Piano. Just a Echo or maybe an other fuzzy sound. But here is no piano.
03:39:892 (219892|1) - Should be a Chord for the Drum.
03:48:981 (228981|2,229033|3) - Like previous a CTRL + G would fit here.
04:09:736 - and 04:10:361 - you had the same part previous. I told you to delete the Notes. here we have the reason! here you didn't have the notes :D
04:37:262 (277262|3,277418|1) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. They don't have, like the previous one, clear 1/6 Sounds. Make them 1/4.
04:47:262 (287262|2,287418|2) - Same like above, Wrong Snapped

Aw hell again a Wall of Text. My Mods are too long q_q
Cool song, Cool Map! Keep up you work Kyou!
Good luck furterway :)
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Davin Fortune wrote:

REMEMBER THIS IS SPAM POST :vvv:

WILL give star if it's good

Little mod(give or not give kudosu is up to you) :
00:07:158 - 00:07:471 - 00:07:783 - i guess this part should be in 2 notes since it's different with the PINK notes sound, apply to all same part except like this 00:05:752 - it doesnt change much it's intended for the intro.

00:12:002 - start from here, better to add long LN to close the long sound and double note beside the LN(this pattern is easier :P ) wot. no :p

00:17:783 - wanna make it like this ? no, and you skipped the 1/8 note


00:20:127 - ^ ^

00:21:533 - little note : keep this or change this with ^, cause i guess dat pattern i ask to change is bit harder , I GUESS :V :V

Okay maybe just that :V

Maybe some slow part but still i the right bpm, you can make it slow for GREGET SV :v

okay 1 star
lol thanks for star xd sorry for not giving you kudos :V you know why

Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Kyousuke-! Thanks for Requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Interesting song :o
Let's see if i can help you here a bit!

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right // I have take here the BMS as Source
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Do you Plan to add a 7K Difficult? If not Remove the "4K" from the Diff Name

4K Battlespace

00:11:533 (11533|3,11611|2,11689|3,11767|2) - I think this trill doesn't fit here. Its really hard to hit and feels really uncomfortable. I think a 4-3-2-1 Stair would fit here well more, also it would follow pitch. actually it's for matching with 00:11:221 (11221|0,11299|1,11377|0,11455|1) - this, but nvm seems hard xd. rearranged btw
00:16:689 (16689|3,17262|2,17418|2) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. And yes they are. They don't have any audible sound to Map. Make them 1/4 to the other Notes. I checked this a lot of time. Also such a sudden 1/6 doesn't fit here in any way o.o ok lmao, i'm trying to follow the space effect sound but yeah....
00:20:986 - You could add a Note here to emphasize the 1/4 or maybe even better.00:21:142 (21142|1) - Delete this one. That would emphasize these 1/4 notes 00:21:221 (21221|0,21299|1,21377|2,21455|1) - much more. hmm no thanks, 00:20:674 - i would add a note on here if you told me to add on the place that you pointed. also i want to follow this effect sound 00:21:142 -
00:27:262 (27262|2,27418|2) - Same like previous. These Notes are Wrong Snapped. There is no Audible 1/6 sound. Really. Theres nothing. Why don't you map the more audible 1/4 Sound? This makes the Song just unnecessary harder to play and also uncomfortable.
And by the Way. The part looks Copy/Pasted :PP lol kay. i can't think another pattern lmao would you suggest it
00:43:096 (43096|0) - Move to 3 for Pitch? hmm no, it's actually same with 00:46:221 - this?
00:54:346 (54346|1,54346|0) - Maybe make these also to a 1/4 LN? It would fit very well here because it also has the 1/4 sound like all other LN's here. nice catch!
00:56:846 (56846|0,56846|1,56846|3) - These not. They have no 1/4 sound. Just the Loud crash. oki
01:04:033 (64033|3) - I think this LN is wrong. Its too long. The "wooob" sound of the LN beginns 01:04:189 - Then you could arrange the 1/6 a little bit better. woops, i'm following the tilt space effect, not the "wooob" lol
01:08:877 (68877|3,69033|3,69189|3,69346|3,69502|3,69658|3) - Just sayn but maybe it would be good to rearrange here these pattern a little bit to avoid something like this. nah help me to fix it xd i dunno how to arrange it in another way
01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - Why do you map such a quiet and fuzzy sound? >.< It would be much better to map the 1/4 here. Really. It's not audible enough to add here the 1/6 but its audible on the piano one, actually i'm following the 1/6 piano instead of the fuzzy sound lol.
01:28:017 (88017|3) - Would recommend to delete these notes. You follow in this Part the clear melody with your 1/4. And this one doesn't have a the clear melody like 01:27:549 (87549|1,87627|2,87705|1,87861|1,87939|2) - etc. yes you're right, deleted
01:30:674 (90674|2) - Delete. Start to Map the clear melody from here 01:30:752 - for the Long 1/4 part. ok
01:31:533 (91533|3,91533|0,91611|2,91689|1,91689|0,91767|2) - Why you don't map here the 1/3 Sound like you did 01:28:408 (88408|0,88408|3,88512|2,88512|1,88616|3,88616|0,88721|2,88721|1) - and 01:25:908 (85908|3,85908|2,86012|1,86012|0,86116|2,86116|3,86221|1,86221|0) - . It would fit much better oh ya thanks for pointing xd
01:33:252 - Should you didn't notice. here are 1/6 Sounds. Maybe you could map them? uh it's barely hearable, and for the rest after the chord n stream
01:34:033 (94033|3) - Delete. It is audible quieter then the other 3-Noted Chords here. hmm but i make it 3 notes for that sound tho, i think its fine
01:37:783 (97783|1) - Shouldn't this LN better end 01:37:939 - ? nice catch
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. The sound here is 1/6 like the next one. The isn't even a fuzzy sound you could map 1/8 here. hmm i not really agree with this, yeah the fuzzy sound is not really audible, but the others piano or the effect sound is heared more fast than the next 1/6. Even in the 100% playback you can hear the difference, so it's not should be 1/6, 1/8 is suitable i think (pya's map does the same tho)
01:55:361 - Add here a note. Same deep sound like 01:55:674 (115674|1) - uh it's not. the one that you pointed to add is really a tiny sound, which is intended to skip it
02:03:252 (123252|3,123304|2,123356|1,123564|0,123616|1,123668|2) - These 1/6 are kinda.. mh.. i don't know.. i mean you can keep them but i recommend to delete at least 02:03:174 (123174|1,123486|2) - because theres no cleary 1/4 sound and it would make the 1/6 much comfortable to hit. ok
02:21:481 (141481|2,141533|3) - CTRL + G these makes it more comfortable. Also fit better to pitch. applied to the 2nd chorus :p
02:34:736 - i think you can add here at 1 to follow the music hmm since i didn't add it on the others, so no. also it's not really suitable imo
02:57:861 (177861|1,177900|0,178017|1,178056|0) - You use these stairs now very very often. Why not make these CTRL + G for more varity in the pattern :D lol gotcha, yes thank you for suggestion xD
03:22:002 (202002|1) - Delete. No clear sound. Maybe just a echo from the previous chord. yup deleted
03:24:502 (204502|2) - No clear Piano. Just a Echo or maybe an other fuzzy sound. But here is no piano. nice catch
03:39:892 (219892|1) - Should be a Chord for the Drum. lol thanks, now i can make another pattern of this lmao
03:48:981 (228981|2,229033|3) - Like previous a CTRL + G would fit here. ok
04:09:736 - and 04:10:361 - you had the same part previous. I told you to delete the Notes. here we have the reason! here you didn't have the notes :D lol yeah seems you're right although that's a bit different with the before
04:37:262 (277262|3,277418|1) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. They don't have, like the previous one, clear 1/6 Sounds. Make them 1/4. ok
04:47:262 (287262|2,287418|2) - Same like above, Wrong Snapped ok

Aw hell again a Wall of Text. My Mods are too long q_q
Cool song, Cool Map! Keep up you work Kyou!
Good luck furterway :)
wow gg mod, thanks feerum!
[ A v a l o n ]
Hi Kyou ~
Here is Mod as requested from My Queue

|1|2|3|4|

everything inside

  • [General Stuffs]
    1. Why the diff name is still using 4K ? please remove it if you didn't plan to add other keys mapset
    2. Metadata, Song setup, Song folder, .osu files, timing & offset, BPM, backgound resolution, was really fine, good job
    3. Not contains any hitsound files yet, please add hitsound files later
    [Pattern]
  • 00:09:189 - i can hear this part is have another loud sound too, consider too add note in 4th column, and move this note 00:09:111 (9111|1) - to first column after that (for comfortability of plays)
  • 00:11:455 (11455|1,11533|3,11611|0) - the music itself is not random, it can be supposed to single stream, or you can re-arrange this part 00:11:611 (11611|0,11689|1,11767|2,11846|1) - to 3 1 2 3 for better balance pattern (actually 00:11:846 - jack in 3rd column was nice to play)
  • 00:19:502 (19502|2) - well, feels weird because this part is contains a long sound, you can change that single note to expressing the long sound itself (please make a different from this one 00:20:752 (20752|2) - )
  • 00:20:752 (20752|2) - Ctrl G, flows seems more balance and better , since you've overused the "left hand" in this 1/4 part
  • 00:26:221 - to 00:28:096 - its feels like de ja vu
  • 00:37:002 (37002|2,37080|3,37314|2,37392|3,37627|2,37705|3,37939|2,38017|3) - welp, you can Ctrl G or re-arrange this part, to make a difference with this burst part 00:38:096 - that actually use same pattern form :/
  • 00:41:689 - add note at first column for hat sound, feels empty here if you leave that, move this 00:41:846 (41846|0) - to 3 after you added it
  • 00:46:846 - & 00:49:346 - you can give this part 3 notes, since really big impact piano sound is on here (make a difference with your other 2 notes)
  • 00:51:885 (51885|1) - this sound was not really clear to map, i suggest you to delete that for avoid abuse pattern
  • 00:59:502 (59502|2,59580|1,59658|0) - Ctrl G for more better flows, avoid three times note on first column 00:59:658 - (since the music itself is no need a pattern like that)
  • 01:00:231 (60231|0) - ghost note, delete it since this part is not contains any sound
  • 01:01:221 (61221|3,61273|2,61325|1,61377|0) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) you can hear that this part is exactly have 5 sound from 01:01:221 - to 01:01:377 -
  • 01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - wrong snapped it should be snapped on 1/4 only, this part is only contains 3 sound, there is not contains 4 sound . . . listen it carefully
  • 01:21:533 (81533|0,81533|1) - this would be better to use LN until here 01:21:846 - rather than map this hat sound 01:21:689 (81689|2) - depend on music itself, that long sound is more audible and clear, so highly recommended to give 1 or 2 LN on that part
  • i still get didn't get why this part 01:20:908 - is have more amount of note (harder) than this part 01:22:627 - actually you can hear that 01:22:627 - to 01:23:721 - is more epic
  • 01:25:205 - and 01:25:439 - is same strong synth sound, why mapped on different amount note ?
  • 01:25:596 (85596|0,85596|3) - & 01:26:533 (86533|3,86533|0) - same as my mod before, you can give this part LN for expressing the long sound here (highly recommended) follow the lead music please, it's more better
    it just a few sample, there is still many case like that
  • 01:29:241 (89241|1,89293|2) - i'm not sure this part is have 1/6 sound, listen it again, it only have 1/4 sound actually
  • 01:51:221 (111221|3,111429|2,111637|0) - WTF this LN, it's exactly wrong snapped you can hear that sound is start on 01:51:325 - end on 01:51:533 - and another sound is start on here again 01:51:689 - wtf la, maybe it's will be more better to not map this abuse sound www
  • 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) - i suggest to not using first column too much like this in this part, make it more balance is more better
  • 02:01:533 (121533|0,121533|1,121611|2,121611|3) - you using chord, but actually the music itself is a low sound, well it's not suitable for using chord in this time
  • 02:34:033 - - this part is louder than 02:33:877 - so i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part
  • 02:34:111 - & 02:34:189 - this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, why not map it ? i highly recommended to map it for consistency
  • 02:44:033 - dude, low sound on this time, reducing a note will be better
  • 02:46:689 (166689|1,166741|2,166793|3) - wrong snapped, it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 02:46:689 - to 02:46:767 - is have 3 sound, and this part 02:46:793 - is nothing
  • 03:28:877 (208877|1,208929|2,208955|0,208981|3) - this snap was very abuse to play, consider to only snap that into 1/6
  • 03:41:533 - this part is louder than 03:41:377 - i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part
  • 04:01:611 - & 04:01:689 - same as my previous mod, this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, i highly recommended to map it for consistency
  • 04:06:377 (246377|0,246533|0,246689|0,246846|0) - not really goo this way, try this http://puu.sh/mFdtO/2cbe799def.jpg it's more better flows and avoid repititive column usage
  • 04:09:033 - well, just reminding . . . like my previous mod, using LN for this long sound is more better
  • 04:14:189 (254189|1,254241|2,254293|3) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 04:14:189 - to 04:14:267 - is have 3 sound, and this part 04:14:293 - is nothing
  • 04:51:064 (291064|2,291142|1) - Ctrl G for more better flows and balance
Well, that's my mod for your map . . . i hope it's useful for you
that's really solid mapset

Good luck Kyou ~
Harbyter
waiting you to check avalon mods before i start to mod and also take in consideration about what he said on the 4K
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Kyou ~
Here is Mod as requested from My Queue

|1|2|3|4|

everything inside

  • [General Stuffs]
    1. Why the diff name is still using 4K ? please remove it if you didn't plan to add other keys mapset hue waiting for the gd'er. (i dunno he really does or not, will waiting further)
    2. Metadata, Song setup, Song folder, .osu files, timing & offset, BPM, backgound resolution, was really fine, good job
    3. Not contains any hitsound files yet, please add hitsound files later ok :^)
    [Pattern]
  • 00:09:189 - i can hear this part is have another loud sound too, consider too add note in 4th column, and move this note 00:09:111 (9111|1) - to first column after that (for comfortability of plays) yes you're right. but in 100% playback it's not too hearable
  • 00:11:455 (11455|1,11533|3,11611|0) - the music itself is not random, it can be supposed to single stream, or you can re-arrange this part 00:11:611 (11611|0,11689|1,11767|2,11846|1) - to 3 1 2 3 for better balance pattern (actually 00:11:846 - jack in 3rd column was nice to play) ah okay, i've no other idea of this lol
  • 00:19:502 (19502|2) - well, feels weird because this part is contains a long sound, you can change that single note to expressing the long sound itself (please make a different from this one 00:20:752 (20752|2) - ) uh i think it's fine. if i add a LN, it will be a jack no matter i put it anywhere. also it's only the LN, so yeah...
  • 00:20:752 (20752|2) - Ctrl G, flows seems more balance and better , since you've overused the "left hand" in this 1/4 part ctrl + g? o.o
  • 00:26:221 - to 00:28:096 - its feels like de ja vu lmao yes i copied it xd
  • 00:37:002 (37002|2,37080|3,37314|2,37392|3,37627|2,37705|3,37939|2,38017|3) - welp, you can Ctrl G or re-arrange this part, to make a difference with this burst part 00:38:096 - that actually use same pattern form :/ for easier burst?
  • 00:41:689 - add note at first column for hat sound, feels empty here if you leave that, move this 00:41:846 (41846|0) - to 3 after you added it it's intentional to skip it, since it's not too audible and for rest maybe
  • 00:46:846 - & 00:49:346 - you can give this part 3 notes, since really big impact piano sound is on here (make a difference with your other 2 notes) yeaa it's same goes with 00:49:346 - this. i only make it 3 notes when there's have a finish / really big main instrument sound
  • 00:51:885 (51885|1) - this sound was not really clear to map, i suggest you to delete that for avoid abuse pattern ow ok
  • 00:59:502 (59502|2,59580|1,59658|0) - Ctrl G for more better flows, avoid three times note on first column 00:59:658 - (since the music itself is no need a pattern like that) ok
  • 01:00:231 (60231|0) - ghost note, delete it since this part is not contains any sound eyy there has for me. since pya's map has too
  • 01:01:221 (61221|3,61273|2,61325|1,61377|0) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) you can hear that this part is exactly have 5 sound from 01:01:221 - to 01:01:377 - yes you're true. but actually there's have 2 sounds, the fuzzy sounds like one (1/8) and the bgm one (1/6). Since the fuzzy sound is more audible, so applied
  • 01:12:679 (72679|3,72731|2) - wrong snapped it should be snapped on 1/4 only, this part is only contains 3 sound, there is not contains 4 sound . . . listen it carefully the one that you explain is the piano sound. and yes, i'm following the fuzzy sound. (so the unusual snappings actually have a two sounds, btw pya's map does too.)
  • 01:21:533 (81533|0,81533|1) - this would be better to use LN until here 01:21:846 - rather than map this hat sound 01:21:689 (81689|2) - depend on music itself, that long sound is more audible and clear, so highly recommended to give 1 or 2 LN on that part oops that's not hat sound actually. don't you hear the different echo sound from the first long sound? and i'm trying to minimize the LN usage by putting the LN only on the long sound that really" clear and hearable on 100% playback, so it don't breaks the stream feels when player playing this. And i think we don't need to cover every long sound with a LN, single note is enough to represent the sound itself.
  • i still get didn't get why this part 01:20:908 - is have more amount of note (harder) than this part 01:22:627 - actually you can hear that 01:22:627 - to 01:23:721 - is more epic yea it's more epic bcs of the instrument. and yes, i put 2 notes for every prominent melody sound. On the place that you pointing, there's no prominent melody (every melody has the same loudness) so i don't make it into 2 notes.
  • 01:25:205 - and 01:25:439 - is same strong synth sound, why mapped on different amount note ? eh even the synth note sound that you pointing is more smaller than the doubles synth. maybe you mean 01:25:127 - this. yes the synth sound is the same, but not for the melody
  • 01:25:596 (85596|0,85596|3) - & 01:26:533 (86533|3,86533|0) - same as my mod before, you can give this part LN for expressing the long sound here (highly recommended) follow the lead music please, it's more better
    it just a few sample, there is still many case like that hue sorry, and bcs of that i'm making all of that into single notes too (i'm already deciding to make it single note). you're right it's better, but not for playability. especially for the stream
  • 01:29:241 (89241|1,89293|2) - i'm not sure this part is have 1/6 sound, listen it again, it only have 1/4 sound actually hue the piano sound is clearly 1/6. 01:29:241 (89241|1) - maybe this piano sound is not too clearly, but 01:29:293 (89293|2) - this piano sound is hearable
  • 01:51:221 (111221|3,111429|2,111637|0) - WTF this LN, it's exactly wrong snapped you can hear that sound is start on 01:51:325 - end on 01:51:533 - and another sound is start on here again 01:51:689 - wtf la, maybe it's will be more better to not map this abuse sound www hey i don't mean that space effect. the bgm sound is right on that place.
  • 01:55:127 (115127|0,115283|0,115439|0,115596|0) - i suggest to not using first column too much like this in this part, make it more balance is more better hue that's the only pattern that i can think ;-; maybe you can give some suggestion
  • 02:01:533 (121533|0,121533|1,121611|2,121611|3) - you using chord, but actually the music itself is a low sound, well it's not suitable for using chord in this time oh okay :v
  • 02:34:033 - - this part is louder than 02:33:877 - so i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part keep, on 100% playback the melody is more hearable than the instrument. and that's already good imo
  • 02:34:111 - & 02:34:189 - this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, why not map it ? i highly recommended to map it for consistency sorry that's intended for the rest
  • 02:44:033 - dude, low sound on this time, reducing a note will be better oh yaa, rearranged :^) maybe it's similiar with 02:34:033 - this. that's why its only 2 notes
  • 02:46:689 (166689|1,166741|2,166793|3) - wrong snapped, it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 02:46:689 - to 02:46:767 - is have 3 sound, and this part 02:46:793 - is nothing uh actually you're right (with the fuzzy sound). but following the 1/6 bgm sound is more comfortable for me ._.
  • 03:28:877 (208877|1,208929|2,208955|0,208981|3) - this snap was very abuse to play, consider to only snap that into 1/6 lol it's not for me and the others testplayer :v i can read it well
  • 03:41:533 - this part is louder than 03:41:377 - i suggest to swap the amount of note on that part b-but how about this mod? "02:44:033 - dude, low sound on this time, reducing a note will be better"
  • 04:01:611 - & 04:01:689 - same as my previous mod, this part is still have piano sound like your previous part, i highly recommended to map it for consistency hmm no thanks .w. same as my previous reply
  • 04:06:377 (246377|0,246533|0,246689|0,246846|0) - not really goo this way, try this http://puu.sh/mFdtO/2cbe799def.jpg it's more better flows and avoid repititive column usage
  • 04:09:033 - well, just reminding . . . like my previous mod, using LN for this long sound is more better ;w;
  • 04:14:189 (254189|1,254241|2,254293|3) - wrong snapped it should be snapped at 1/8 (or 1/4 for alternative) . . . you can hear that 04:14:189 - to 04:14:267 - is have 3 sound, and this part 04:14:293 - is nothing uh actually you're right (with the fuzzy sound). but following the 1/6 bgm sound is more comfortable for me ._.
  • 04:51:064 (291064|2,291142|1) - Ctrl G for more better flows and balance lol ok
Well, that's my mod for your map . . . i hope it's useful for you
that's really solid mapset

Good luck Kyou ~
thanks you helped me to ensure the snappings thingy lol
Ginshu
M69M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329388

Column : 1|2|3|4

[4K Betelsip]
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - delete, gajelas nada mana ini `L_`
01:11:221 - ~ 01:11:846 - ini apa ? bikin 1/4 kayak sebelumnya, tapi beda pattern 1 4 - 2 3 - 1 4 - 2 3 gitu
01:53:929 (113929|1) - ~ 01:53:929 (113929|1) - 1/6
03:00:674 (180674|1) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - add note
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:07:549 (187549|1) - delete
03:07:705 - add note

sisanya ok,
hbd alex :D
Maxus
Hi sukee :D
Mod req via PM :3

[4K Perang angkasa]
00:59:502 - add one? to make it consistent as 00:59:814 - and 01:00:752 -
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - i think these notes are supposed to be snapped at 1/8..
01:01:338 (61338|1) - i'm not sure about this note, it sounds like no sound here..
01:29:502 (89502|3,89658|2) - Ctrl+G this? this part will lead to the stream afterward, so i think it's not a good idea to have jack as the "start" of stream.
01:32:314 - 01:32:392 - isn't this suppose to be 1/6 snap?
01:51:429 (111429|2,111637|0) - I'm not sure about these LN's snap, i would follow pya's snap instead.
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - for this kind of sound, i think it would be more fit if you make it into 1-2-4-3 pattern, instead of 1-2-3-4.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4486131
03:10:439 (190439|2,190517|1) - this will be a bit picky, but i would Ctrl+G this to follow pitch here..
03:11:924 - I would add here, because this still has quite audible melody that you follow
03:29:736 (209736|2) - is this a ghost note? can't hear anything for this..
04:11:533 (251533|2,251611|0) - i would Ctrl+G this, it's more suitable for sound at 04:11:611 - 04:11:767 -
04:29:658 - i think this would be more fit if it's double instead of triple.
04:29:814 - ^
04:41:142 (281142|1,281221|0,281299|1,281377|0,281455|1) - plis not one hand triple ;w;
04:42:783 - Why triple?
04:51:377 - add one? still has cymbal sound here..
04:56:611 - Why not add here? this has audible 1/4 sound that you follow
04:56:767 - Also here..
04:58:799 (298799|3) - Delete this, the stream that you follow started at 04:58:799 (298799|3) -
05:01:064 - add here? make it consistent as 05:00:752 - ?

Ok, that's it, sorry not many..
Good luck , nice map btw :3
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

LNP- wrote:

M69M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329388

Column : 1|2|3|4

[4K Betelsip]
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - delete, gajelas nada mana ini `L_`
01:11:221 - ~ 01:11:846 - ini apa ? bikin 1/4 kayak sebelumnya, tapi beda pattern 1 4 - 2 3 - 1 4 - 2 3 gitu
01:53:929 (113929|1) - ~ 01:53:929 (113929|1) - 1/6
03:00:674 (180674|1) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:00:986 (180986|2) - add note
03:00:986 (180986|2) - delete
03:07:549 (187549|1) - delete
03:07:705 - add note

sisanya ok,
hbd alex :D
tenkyu, fixed some :3


DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hi sukee :D
Mod req via PM :3

[4K Perang angkasa]
00:59:502 - add one? to make it consistent as 00:59:814 - and 01:00:752 - oh removed the double, thanks for pointing xd
01:00:179 (60179|2,60231|0) - i think these notes are supposed to be snapped at 1/8.. hmm i don't think so :/
01:01:338 (61338|1) - i'm not sure about this note, it sounds like no sound here.. b-but its burst...
01:29:502 (89502|3,89658|2) - Ctrl+G this? this part will lead to the stream afterward, so i think it's not a good idea to have jack as the "start" of stream. nice point
01:32:314 - 01:32:392 - isn't this suppose to be 1/6 snap? yes i skipped some 1/6 for smooth streams experience lol
01:51:429 (111429|2,111637|0) - I'm not sure about these LN's snap, i would follow pya's snap instead. hmm i'm sure about this snap, it suits with the bgm sound
01:53:721 (113721|0,113760|1,113799|2,113838|3,113877|0,113916|1,113955|2,113994|3) - for this kind of sound, i think it would be more fit if you make it into 1-2-4-3 pattern, instead of 1-2-3-4.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4486131 yeah it's good, but hard to press ;w;
03:10:439 (190439|2,190517|1) - this will be a bit picky, but i would Ctrl+G this to follow pitch here.. eh nice xD
03:11:924 - I would add here, because this still has quite audible melody that you follow yes already applied from the previous mod
03:29:736 (209736|2) - is this a ghost note? can't hear anything for this.. nice catch, deleted
04:11:533 (251533|2,251611|0) - i would Ctrl+G this, it's more suitable for sound at 04:11:611 - 04:11:767 - i would like to keep, for avoiding jack on left side
04:29:658 - i think this would be more fit if it's double instead of triple. hmm keep for the impact
04:29:814 - ^ ^
04:41:142 (281142|1,281221|0,281299|1,281377|0,281455|1) - plis not one hand triple ;w; lol fixed xd
04:42:783 - Why triple? oops i forgot xd
04:51:377 - add one? still has cymbal sound here.. oh ya ok
04:56:611 - Why not add here? this has audible 1/4 sound that you follow ok
04:56:767 - Also here.. ok
04:58:799 (298799|3) - Delete this, the stream that you follow started at 04:58:799 (298799|3) - eh keep bcs its has similiar sound with 04:58:955 - this, so it counted
05:01:064 - add here? make it consistent as 05:00:752 - ? it's double bcs i'm following the fx sound like 05:00:596 - this

Ok, that's it, sorry not many..
Good luck , nice map btw :3
thanks, nice mod dix xD
Valentrixe
yo
nih bad-quality mod gw :"
m4m reply

kapal"an
btw ini diffname kenapa ada 4K nya? mau bikin 7K nya juga kah? kalo gak ya ilangin aja 4K nya >_>
[4K Battlespace]
  1. 00:08:721 - saran aja sih, menurut gw lebih nyaman kalo kek gini : http://puu.sh/n05iE/cf6c5327e1.jpg
  2. 00:10:596 - ^ : http://puu.sh/n05sQ/9ed05e2a57.jpg
  3. 00:11:846 (11846|2,12002|2) - unneccesary jack, 00:12:002 (12002|2,12158|1) - ctrl + H
  4. 00:16:689 (16689|0,16689|1,16846|1,16846|0) - kasian tangan kiri gw, coba ini, lebih balance : http://puu.sh/n05Jz/6aa80a1e55.jpg
  5. 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - kasian tangan kiri gw[2], coba : http://puu.sh/n05ME/6254a4acda.jpg
  6. 00:27:158 - http://puu.sh/n05Qo/26d80645aa.jpg copas, rearrange dong
  7. 00:59:658 (59658|3) - kelebihan(?), apus?
  8. 01:08:642 - add note?
  9. 01:09:267 - ^
  10. 01:12:471 (72471|0,72471|1,72549|2,72549|3,72627|1,72627|0,72783|0,72783|1) - why double?
  11. 02:43:721 - add note for cymbal?
udah dikit aja ;;

sumbang star sekalian '3')/
met imlek lek
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Valentrixe wrote:

yo
nih bad-quality mod gw :"
m4m reply

kapal"an
btw ini diffname kenapa ada 4K nya? mau bikin 7K nya juga kah? kalo gak ya ilangin aja 4K nya >_>
[4K Battlespace]
  1. 00:08:721 - saran aja sih, menurut gw lebih nyaman kalo kek gini : http://puu.sh/n05iE/cf6c5327e1.jpg hmm klo pake pny lu jdi break patternnya, tpi rearrange deh wkwk
  2. 00:10:596 - ^ : http://puu.sh/n05sQ/9ed05e2a57.jpg hmm gud gud lbh seimbang xD
  3. 00:11:846 (11846|2,12002|2) - unneccesary jack, 00:12:002 (12002|2,12158|1) - ctrl + H hmm itu justru sengaja, lbh balance imo (see avalon's mod lmao)
  4. 00:16:689 (16689|0,16689|1,16846|1,16846|0) - kasian tangan kiri gw, coba ini, lebih balance : http://puu.sh/n05Jz/6aa80a1e55.jpg keep, patternnya emg bgitu wkwk (dan masih toleransi la :v)
  5. 00:17:471 (17471|0,17549|1,17627|0,17705|1) - kasian tangan kiri gw[2], coba : http://puu.sh/n05ME/6254a4acda.jpg tpi pattern yg skrng masih lbh enak :^)
  6. 00:27:158 - http://puu.sh/n05Qo/26d80645aa.jpg copas, rearrange dong lel, kalo lbh enak why not? :^) /tpi masih bole suggest kok wkwk
  7. 00:59:658 (59658|3) - kelebihan(?), apus? same with 01:00:908 - this, see the others
  8. 01:08:642 - add note? hue keep for the stream, emg sengaja gw skip kok
  9. 01:09:267 - ^ ^
  10. 01:12:471 (72471|0,72471|1,72549|2,72549|3,72627|1,72627|0,72783|0,72783|1) - why double? oh yaaa, rearranged~ nice catch
  11. 02:43:721 - add note for cymbal? yha klo gtu gw hrs add yg 02:43:564 - 02:43:642 - 02:43:877 - ini jga... so keep
udah dikit aja ;;

sumbang star sekalian '3')/
met imlek lek
eaa thanks ya xD
dan met imlek jga :D


-btw for someone who can suggesting me a SV, i'm really appreciate it. Bcs actually i've planned to adding a SV at first, but can't find the right people for suggesting to-
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