1. Easy - 4Key (1.26 stars, 249 notes)
2. Normal - 4Key (1.89 stars, 434 notes)

Mapsets

4 Key

Easy Done by me
Normal Done by me

Lno wrote:

BPM: 90 Offset: 58
BPM: 80 Offset: 93391
(+10 offset)
Nice relaxing song and map you have here.
Good luck~

ArcherLove wrote:

hey~

blank All Fixed!

00:10:058 - add
something like 00:21:391 (21391|0) - please add note at the end of the LN (all same pattern too please)
00:41:058 (41058|3) - move to 2
01:34:516 (94516|2) - move to 2
01:36:016 (96016|1) - move to 1

dream All Fixed!

00:00:058 (58|0,58|1) - end of the LN add note (all same pattern too please like 00:02:724 (2724|1) - 00:05:391 (5391|1,5391|2) - etc)
00:14:724 - add at 1
00:31:224 (31224|1) - move to 1
00:42:724 (42724|0) - move to 4 or 3
00:45:058 (45058|2) - move to 2
01:24:724 (84724|0,85058|0,85391|0,85724|0,86058|0,86391|0) - um.. change?

good luck!~

Pizza wrote:

The PizzaComet Modding Queue

yo!
col 1234

Dream

well actually this diff has a lot of problem like missing the piano and drum, and also i'm too lazy for mention all problem/mistakes, so i make you a modded diff instead, well, it has a few pattern suggestion for you, feel free to modify it with your own style! (you don't need to add this diff on your mapset, i'm here just to helping you) >>> http://puu.sh/nnVVP/2b9fb4fccd.osz

~~~~~~

hikikuman wrote:

Mod request from where?
Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
All fixed. It's nice!

Dream

00:13:724 (13724|3) - move to 3
00:17:724 (17724|3,18058|2) - ctrl G
00:27:724 - add note at 1. double piano sound like 00:26:724 (26724|2,26724|3) -
00:28:391 (28391|0) - better move to 2
00:38:391 (38391|2) - ^2
00:51:391 (51391|1) - delete. ghost note
00:51:724 (51724|2) - move to 2
00:51:891 (51891|0) - ^3
01:01:724 (61724|2) - ^4
01:02:058 (62058|0) - delete
01:09:724 - add note at 3
01:09:891 (69891|2) - move to 2

Blank

00:08:058 (8058|2,8391|1,8724|0) - delete
00:08:058 - add ln at 4 until 00:09:558 -
00:08:391 - add note at 1
00:08:558 - ^2
00:08:724 - ^3
00:10:058 (10058|1) - move to 1
00:26:724 (26724|2) - ln until 00:27:724 -
00:29:391 (29391|1) - ^ 00:30:391 -
00:31:391 (31391|1,31391|2) - move to 1 and 4
00:48:058 - add note at 1
00:52:724 - ^
00:52:724 (52724|3) - move to 3
01:05:391 - add note at 1
01:11:391 (71391|0) - delete

Change 'Blank' diff to Easy, and 'Dream' diff to Normal. Because variated name is only for above Insane or Expert. fixed but i wanna use current names.
Good Luck and Have a Nice Day, Sir! :3

lejel wrote:

(from queue - blank only)
Hi~
I'm sorry if it's not that good
But I've tried my best and here's what I found

All fixed but except one.
Column 1|2|3|4

BLANK

00:01:058 - add single
00:03:724 - add single
00:06:391 - add single
00:07:724 - add single
00:08:058 (8058|2) - if you follow the xylophone (?) this isn't needed, it's the bass part
00:07:058 (7058|2,10724|3,12058|1,13391|2,16058|1,17391|2) - I suggest to put a single at every end of them, be careful not to make them jacks Nope
00:59:391 (59391|0) - double
01:05:391 - add double
01:11:058 - I feel it needs a single here at col 2, if accept then move 01:11:391 (71391|1) to col 3
01:16:391 - same as ^
01:21:724 - same as ^
01:26:058 - same as ^
01:18:391 - add double
01:23:724 (83724|3) - should end at 01:24:391 then add single at 01:24:391 and 01:24:724
01:33:391 (93391|3,94891|2) - add singles at the end of LNs
01:37:891 - add LN until either 01:40:891 or 01:40:703 I can't really decide hahah

P.S : sorry it took a long time, I'm pretty busy XD
Anyway thank you for queuing in my page!

Oh yeah, are you from std? Cause some of the notes look like from std XD oh how did you get it in my map? XD

RedBall wrote:

안녕하세요~ RedBall입니다! RRM 모딩큐 에서 왔어요.

한국어 모딩은 처음이네요 ㅋㅋ

그러면 요청하신 NM모드 시작할게요~
+저는 이제 막 모딩을 시작하는 사람이기 때문에, 제 제안이 좋지 않거나 별로 도움이 안될 수도 있습니다. 그럴때는, 마음편히 거절 하셔도 좋구요, 쿠도스도 안주셨으면 합니다!

칼럼
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Easy

전부 수정했습니다! 대단히 감사합니다. ^^
00:06:391 (6391|1) - 삭제해주세요 (00:00:058 하고 00:02:724 하고 00:05:391 하고 00:08:058 의 드럼소리가 똑같은데도 모두 싱글인데 거기만 더블이네요.)
00:07:724 (7724|3) - 칼럼 2로 옯겨주세요 (Easy 난이도 치곤 어려운거 같아요)
00:18:724 - 칼럼 3에 노트 추가해주세요 (소리도 그렇고 다른 분위기로 전환하기 전 마무리하는 느낌? 을 주기위해서 더블 추천드려요)
01:40:891 (100891|0) - 이거를 01:43:891 에서 끝나는 롱노트로 바꿔주세요 (Normal 에서는 01:43:891 에서 끝나는 롱노트가 있는데 여기는 없네요.)

Normal

거절한 것 빼고 전부 수정했습니다! 대단히 감사합니다.^^
00:01:058 - 칼럼 2에 노트 추가해주세요 (00:00:058 하고 00:02:724 하고 00:03:724 하고 00:04:724 하고 00:05:391 하고 00:06:391 즉, 거의 대부분 은 더블인데 2개(00:01:058 하고 00:08:058)만 싱글이네요)
00:08:058 - 칼럼 1에 노트 추가해주세요 (^)
00:20:058 (20058|0) - 삭제해주세요 (조용히 끝나는 느낌으로 싱글로 만들어주세요)
00:34:724 - 칼럼 1에 노트 추가해주세요 (00:31:058 부터 00:32:724 부분 보시면 크게 치는부분 중간에 있는 부드럽게 치는부분을 더블로 넣으셨어요. 거기도 더블로 해주세요)
00:38:391 - 더블을 할까... 했지만 Normal 치곤 어려워 질 거 같네요 더블 추가 안 했습니다.
00:51:058 - 칼럼 2에 노트 추가해주세요 (00:51:558 부터 나오는 피아노 소리때문에 아무것도 안 넣으신거 같은데, 00:45:391 부분도 그렇고 안넣는게 더 어색한 느낌이 들어요)
00:51:391 - 칼럼 3에 노트 추가해주세요 (위의 제안을 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
00:52:724 (52724|0) - 칼럼 3으로 옮겨주세요 (핸드 밸런스도 이유지만 드럼소리를 강조하기 위해서 제안드렸습니다)
00:52:891 (52891|1,53058|0) - Ctrl + G (위의 제안을 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
00:58:391 - 칼럼 3에 노트 추가해주세요 (저한테는 빈 느낌이 들어요 (실제로 소리가 있기도 하고요))
01:07:391 - 칼럼 2에 노트 추가해주세요 (계속 노트 넣으셨던 드럼소리에 안넣으셨네요. 혹은, 피아노소리를 강조하실려고 일부러 안넣으신거면 적용 안하는게 더 나을수도 있어요)
01:07:558 (67558|1,67724|2) - Ctrl + H (위의 제안을 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
01:10:058 (70058|3) - 이거를 01:09:891 로 끌어 내려주세요(칼럼은 똑같이) (01:09:891 에 있는 큰 소리를 강조하면 좋을 거 같애요. 음... 이렇게 하면 Normal 치고는 너무 어렵게 되는 걸까요?)
01:11:058 - 칼럼 1에 노트 추가해주세요 (근데 이거는 해도 좋고 안해도 좋네요. 님의 판단에 맡길게요)
01:15:058 (75058|3,75391|3) - 삭제하시고 01:15:224 - 칼럼 4에 노트 하나 추가해주세요 (이건 제가 01:09:891에 제안한걸 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
01:18:058 (78058|3) - 삭제하시고 01:18:244 - 칼럼 3에 노트 하나 추가해주시고 01:18:391 (78391|2) - 칼럼 2로 옮겨주세요 (제가 01:07:391 에 했던 제안을 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
01:19:058 (79058|1) - 칼럼 3으로 옮겨주시고 01:19:391 (79391|2) - 칼럼 2로 옮겨주세요 (위의 제안을 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
01:19:724 (79724|1) - 삭제하시고 01:20:058 - 칼럼 1에 노트 하나 추가해주시고 01:20:724 (80724|3) 이거를 01:20:558 으로 끌어 내려주세요(같은 칼럼) (이것도 01:09:891에 제안한걸 받아들이셨을 때 적용 시켜 주세요)
01:36:391 - 칼럼 4에 노트 하나 추가해주세요 (큰 소리 강조용이예요)
01:37:891 (97891|0) - 삭제해주세요 (조용히 끝나는 느낌으로 싱글로 만들어주세요)

도움이 되셨길 바랍니다!

그나저나 맵도 좋고 노래도 좋네요 ㅎㅎ (심신이 정화되는 느낌 ㄷㄷ) 저도 그렇게 생각합니다!
제가 이런노래 엄청 좋아해서 신나게 모딩했네요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ (그래서 별 드립니다. 응?) 엇! 생각지도 못했어요 ㅋㅋ 정말 감사합니다. ^^

NM요청 감사합니다~ 수고하세요!

LuckyLemon wrote:

Hi my NM as requested

All comments are suggestions, take them if you want, at the end of the day its YOUR map.

1|2|3|4

Normal

00:45:391 (45391|0) - why a LN? doesn't feel appropriate. unless you end it 00:46:724 - and add another LN there and 00:47:391 - Ok
00:50:724 - same as above here ^
01:07:391 - double here ^
01:18:058 - double ^
01:20:724 - double ^
01:40:891 (100891|0) - shorten to 01:41:266 - don't let it drone on as the end of the song cut off this note, keep it short. Same as the other difficulty. If you don't do this; however, at least make the LN on each diff finish at the same time to keep consistency. Ok but I changed the LN to dubble. It's same to Easy.

Easy

00:07:058 (7058|1) - shouldn't be a long note as its following the bass so extend 00:06:391 (6391|0) - instead Oh, It would like Normal diff xD
00:10:724 (10724|3,12058|1,13391|2,16058|1,17391|2) - put a note on the end of each of them to show the hard sounds. I know its an easy diff but still need to put it. Nope, I decided to keep these patterns.
00:22:391 (22391|0) - change to LN until 00:24:058 - make LN OK
00:25:058 (25058|3) - make LN to 00:26:058 - make LN OK
00:26:058 (26058|1) - make a LN until 00:26:724 - make LN OK
00:27:724 (27724|3) - make LN Nope
00:28:224 (28224|3) - move to 2 OK
00:30:391 (30391|0) - make LN OK
00:31:391 (31391|0) - move to 2 or 3 make LN OK
00:42:724 (42724|0) - make double as it is similar to 00:48:058 (48058|0,48058|2) - make LN OK
01:40:891 (100891|0) - make LN shorter same as normal diff make LN OK but i decided to delete the LN and put there double notes so it keeps consistency with Normal

Changes increase the star rating from 1.15 to 1.16

Good luck with your map. If you have any questions about the mod or in general pm me.

Rivals_7 wrote:

Mod Request

Teriyaki Tomato - Kohaku no Yume[OsuMania]

You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it

[General]
Background: No problem
Metadata: No problem. On my view at least.
Mapset: Fine
Difficulty Spread:Cool
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Fine
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: Not Added Yet? Remember to add Hitsound to your map if you really want this to get ranked
Timing: Nice
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4|

Easy

00:01:058 (1058|1) - move to 4. seeing this note - 00:01:058 (1058|1,1724|1) - stacked in a same column is just ugly :c ok

00:04:391 (4391|2,4724|0,5058|3,5391|2) - rearrange to 2|3|4|2 respectively. More relevant to pitch oh, I didn't catch it. Thanks

00:08:391 (8391|0,8558|1,8724|2) - should be facing left. something like 3|2|1 respectively is more accurate to as the pitch going down ok

00:28:224 (28224|1) - move to 3. hand balancing purpose. ok

00:31:058 - add one more note here to follow the drum melody ok

00:39:058 (39058|1,39724|2) - 3|2 respectively. according to your previous pattern with the similar tone here ( - 00:35:724 (35724|3,36391|0) - ) they're not in the same column. so why are you make this on the same col? ( - 00:38:391 (38391|1,39058|1) - ) ok

00:52:058 (52058|1) - does it should be at 4? maybe...?

00:57:391 (57391|2) - what is the purpose of this? why the other 3 LNs doesnt have this despite the sound are exactly similar? if this wasn't intended, then you should delete. ok

01:13:391 (73391|2,74224|0,74391|2,74558|0,74724|2) - uhhh nope, not fit on easy diff. might be too hard for those who still newbie at this game. Rearrange this pattern somehow. ok I changed the triple instead of 3/4 LN

01:28:058 (88058|3,88724|3) - different piano pitch, but why on the same column? ok
also the other similar two pattern above it.

Normal

00:14:058 (14058|1,14391|2,14724|1) - would be better if this were at 3|2|4 respectively if you pay attention to the piano pitch. ok

00:18:724 - try this..

...pretty much make more sense to the pitch ok

00:31:558 - you are missing one piano sound here. add note. ok

00:32:891 - 00:35:558 - why are you ignoring this obvious piano sound while - 00:38:224 (38224|0) - and - 00:40:891 (40891|0) - have it? inconsistent pattern. ok

00:58:391 - you could add one more note here because there's a synth, but idk. added

01:36:766 (96766|2) - better on 4. suggestion only. nice suggestion

good luck

Thanks for modding!

Lenfried- wrote:

ok this took forever but i least i got on it

Normal:
00:06:391 (6391|2,6391|1) - one of these notes should go to 1 for PR ok
00:08:058 (8058|2,8058|0) - why double? No piano Because of Consistency
00:09:891 (9891|3,10058|2) - ctrl h Nope, It is better I think
00:41:058 (41058|1) - maybe to 3 ^
00:43:058 - i highly disagree on how you layered this part, look at this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4994519 So weird.. Mine is ScreenShot #1
00:48:058 - do the same for like the screenshot, may have different note positions but the pacing must stay the same unless PR ^ ScreenShot #2
00:57:224 - add 2 for piano then 00:57:391 (57391|1) - to 1 and 00:57:724 (57724|0) - to 2 ok
00:59:391 - add ok
00:59:724 - maybe add 1 because its strong ok
01:40:891 (100891|0,100891|1) - would be nice as LNs Nope, Because there is an issue on this. In the end, I decided to this.

Crymeno wrote:

My queue

In both of the diffs, I suggest you to extend the LNs. Since the note you're following doesn't stop where the note in your map ends. Like this: http://prnt.sc/cyg637 (printed from Normal diff)

Normal diff

00:04:724 (4724|2) - I don't know if you've noticed it or not, but there's an extra note here. (from the bass) ok
01:40:891 (100891|0) - LN instead of a single note. (I've just noticed you said no to another guy that told you the same thing. I didn't understand what is the "issue".Well, I have thought the last 2 notes at the end of song were cool for me at that time, feeling clear rather used LN. finally I just decided to put there as LN, following piano sound

Nothing to say about Easy diff.
Since those are under 2* maps, It would be really hard to get ghost notes or anything that I could say it's "wrong", or at least not cool.