hi c: i don't have too much time to mod extensively but i'll come back later if i get the chanceThank you hikiko for the extensive modding, i now you took your time, so i really appreciate it!
00:15:162 (53,54,55) - these three notes aren't consistent with what you did in the previous 10 seconds or so. i understand the need for variety (it's definitely a struggle) but if you're going to change the pattern, change it at 00:16:700 (58,59,60) because that's where the music leads into a change
I agree completely, keeping consistency, switching to kdk and swapping finishers
00:26:316 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - i'm assuming this is following vocals, but if so this should be d d k d k d. also this is slightly nitpicky, but this part feels a bit empty after you started using 1/4th triplets earlier. maybe d ddk d kkd or something? play around a bit with this
It is following vocals, switched to ddkdkd, it feels a bit empty, adding ddk from 105
00:29:200 (110,111,112,113,114) - this pattern feels a bit forced. if anything this can be changed to 1/2s and a pattern can be added at 00:28:239 (107,108,109) because that's where the vocals are actually denser in rhythm (try ddddkkkkd or something unless that's overboard)
Yeah it's not going with vocals nor drums, i delete 111 and from 107 is kddkk
00:33:431 (132) - change to d, vocals go down
00:33:816 (133,134,135) - this pattern breaks off weirdly in the middle of the singer's long note. try a five-note-long 1/4ths pattern?
You're right, five note long patter added
00:38:239 (154) - move this note to 00:38:431 to emphasize the syncopation
00:39:008 (157,160) - these two should be changed to d to follow the melody better
00:44:970 (197,198,199) - change 197 to d, remove 198 to reflect the pause in melody, and change 199 to d
I agree with 197,199, and changing 198 to k, because i want density on this kiai :3
00:44:970 (197,198,199) - the four bars or so starting here are exactly the same, try adding patterns in the third and fourth bars
I did quite a few changes, incorporating more patterns
00:50:547 (226,227) - switch 226 to d and 227 to k. the vocals go up in pitch
00:51:893 (230) - switch to d, vocals are going down in pitch
Agree, makes sense because its emphasizing the lyrics
00:52:277 (231,232,233,234,235) - i'd suggest k d ddk here to follow the melody
Agree, feels better!
00:53:239 (236,237,238,239,240,241) - d k k d d k for the same reason
00:56:893 to 01:01:323 - i didn't really agree with this part - it didn't seem to follow the flow of the melody that well so i tried remapping it lol. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4255784 the two bookmarks are at the start and end of the time interval. you don't have to follow this at all >.< just a suggestion
Remapped most of the kiai section!
01:09:777 (331,332,333,334) - make this d d k d