你终于肯上传了？给星+围观触手，需要MOD吗？XD

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围观触手~star

ΘwΘ 手机上网中～～

节奏不错的图啊 领导加油

before further modding try to resnap with grid level 3 ;3

free to ask rechecks, star

Hi~很喜欢这首歌呢~ XD

[Normal]
[Hard]
Normal差不多了,Hard还需要再多多努力,大致提了些建议,改完后再PM我来看吧~ :3
STAR~!

Your BG is similar to Green Day - American Idiot map.
Go find another.

MP3's bitrate must be between 128~192 kbps,re-encode.

[Tags]
"Green Day Rock"

Green Day is already in Title,and Rock is genre,so remove everything,better add album's title.

[Normal]
There're lots of spacing mistakes,I won't point out those which don't cause any troubles with gameplay,but fix those which are listed.
01:58:041 (5,6) - Stack under repeat.
02:15:184 (6) - Too far from previous object.
02:17:469 (1) - ^
02:19:755 (2) - Too close
02:20:612 (5) - Allign better.
02:24:326 (6) - Reduce distance,it's some kind of jump.
02:26:612 (1) - ^
02:28:898 (2) - Increase distance a little.
02:49:469 - Add a note with finish.
03:03:184 (1) - Reduce distance.
03:14:612 - Note with finish.
03:37:469 (1) - Reduce distance.
03:42:041 (1) - ^
03:44:326 (5) - Increase distance.
03:46:612 (1) - ^
03:48:898 (5) - ^
04:04:898 (1) - Too far,reduce.
04:09:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - No,no jumps in the easiest difficulty.

I haven't found anything serious in Hard,so I won't be nazi,just "Fine".

Good luck~

圍觀觸手

哎哟 这个传了啊ww
加油

IceBeam wrote:

Your BG is similar to Green Day - American Idiot map.
Go find another.

MP3's bitrate must be between 128~192 kbps,re-encode.

[Tags]
"Green Day Rock"

Green Day is already in Title,and Rock is genre,so remove everything,better add album's title.

[Normal]
There're lots of spacing mistakes,I won't point out those which don't cause any troubles with gameplay,but fix those which are listed.
01:58:041 (5,6) - Stack under repeat.
02:15:184 (6) - Too far from previous object.
02:17:469 (1) - ^
02:19:755 (2) - Too close
02:20:612 (5) - Allign better.
02:24:326 (6) - Reduce distance,it's some kind of jump.
02:26:612 (1) - ^
02:28:898 (2) - Increase distance a little.
02:49:469 - Add a note with finish.
03:03:184 (1) - Reduce distance.
03:14:612 - Note with finish.
03:37:469 (1) - Reduce distance.
03:42:041 (1) - ^
03:44:326 (5) - Increase distance.
03:46:612 (1) - ^
03:48:898 (5) - ^
04:04:898 (1) - Too far,reduce.
04:09:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - No,no jumps in the easiest difficulty.

I haven't found anything serious in Hard,so I won't be nazi,just "Fine".

Good luck~

fixed.And the length of nomal has been reduced to 03:14.

[hard]
0:35:755 (4,5,6) uneven spacing
0:48:612 (4,5,6,7) down 1 grid
1:46:612 (3,6) down 1 grid
1:51:184 (3) right 1 grid
2:49:469 (12) right 1 grid

[Normal] - break the combo. It can't be 4 bars for a combo in normal orz
no big problems on spacing.

good trial : D

[General]
不要有这么多的来回SLIDE...感觉单调又无聊...可以换成1个个circle或者小短条
直线的Slide实在太多...尽量多使用有曲度的Slide..
[Normal]
01:38:041(2,4,2,4) - delete clap
01:50:041(1) - 这个Spin缩短到01:51:755 然后在01:52:326加一个停到01:54:041的Spin
02:08:326(1) - 类似上面的修改
相同的节奏出现次数最好不要太多,如01:54:612开始连续4次,就感觉很无聊.即使全是2分拍的旋律也可以拍成其他的Slide Circle的组合
Normal的后面节奏太密.
[Hard]
00:36:326(6) - 1grid left
00:58:326(6,7) - 1grid down
02:02:898(7) - add a finish 类似这样的地方有很多可以根据自己的感觉来加,全曲很少用到finish
02:35:755(1,2,3,4) - 排列问题
03:11:184(3-10) - 相比前面这里的whistle就用的不好..感觉很吵.
03:50:326(7) - 为什么间距突然变大了..
03:56:898(6) - ^
04:14:041(1-8) - 既然做的是Hard就不要有这么多连续的大跳...


整体的节奏还是可以的,基本的问题就是排列了,建议多看看其他Mapper的图,特别是那些slide拉得很好看的.

my star

Hi! Found this on pending, and sice it's a great song, I decided to mod it:

[Normal]

18:612 (1) - Spacing from 8?
22:612 (5) - Add a whistle at the end of that slider (at the time I said)
23:755 (1) - I'd like to hear a whistle on the 3rd and 6th repetition. You can select them individually on the timeline.

Remember to follow a patter with the hitsounds, and not just use them randomly.


25:469 (2) - Same as before, whistle on 3rd and 6th repetition.
32:326 (5) - Spacing? Maybe, try flipping vertically all the things from 5 to 8.
40:898 (5) - Whistle at the end of the slider.
41:469 (1) - Whistle on 3rd and 6th repetition.
43:755 (2) - Whistle on 3rd and 7th repetition.
47:755 (1) - Whistle at the end of the slider.

....
You know, re-check all the map adding more hitsounds, following more or less that pattern I've been telling you.


[Hard]

Same as in Normal, recheck all the hitsounds. The distances are quiet good, but you could try using more complex patterns than just vertical/horizontal combos.


If you want, I can make a guest difficult. Just ask me via pm n.n

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi! Found this on pending, and sice it's a great song, I decided to mod it:

[Normal]

18:612 (1) - Spacing from 8?
22:612 (5) - Add a whistle at the end of that slider (at the time I said)
23:755 (1) - I'd like to hear a whistle on the 3rd and 6th repetition. You can select them individually on the timeline.

Remember to follow a patter with the hitsounds, and not just use them randomly.


25:469 (2) - Same as before, whistle on 3rd and 6th repetition.
32:326 (5) - Spacing? Maybe, try flipping vertically all the things from 5 to 8.
40:898 (5) - Whistle at the end of the slider.
41:469 (1) - Whistle on 3rd and 6th repetition.
43:755 (2) - Whistle on 3rd and 7th repetition.
47:755 (1) - Whistle at the end of the slider.

....
You know, re-check all the map adding more hitsounds, following more or less that pattern I've been telling you.


[Hard]

Same as in Normal, recheck all the hitsounds. The distances are quiet good, but you could try using more complex patterns than just vertical/horizontal combos.


If you want, I can make a guest difficult. Just ask me via pm n.n

thanks.

Hihi~I'm back~

[Hard]
01:13:469 (1,2,3,4) - 这里太空了
03:07:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 要跳大家一起跳~
03:11:184 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
04:12:898 (3) - 往右8格?
04:13:469 (4) - 往左8格?
04:15:184 (5,6,7,8) -


没什么大问题啦~图的摆放还需要创新~不过已经很不错啦~
加油哦~ :3

hi~来迟了 最近很多考试的说

[normal]
看到楼上很多人的意见和我差不多我就不重复了。
02:03:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这样的摆放会被认为对于beginner过于困难。
02:26:041 (4) - 左移一格。 这些部分有些重叠 不过应该还行
02:47:755 (3) - 左移一格
03:00:898 (1) - 右一格 可能连带后面的也要动

[hard]
适当将一些来repeat 2次以上的slider换成note 于slider组合比较好。

一些对称排列细节 自己查看吧 例如那2串长连尾部没有弧度的

star

你好~

我真的很喜歡的歌...

[ General ]

你為什麼速度都是一樣的？

顯然你必須做Easy




[ Normal ]

這種複雜性在我看來，一些種無聊 ...順便說一下，在某個時候以某種方式將是完美的閃光淡化這個令人沮喪的圖片

Slider Tick Rate 需要2

Kiai Mod ~ 從這裡開始 02:40:326到底有

01:45:469 01:45:755〜在此期間，我將令Kiai mod

[ Hard ]

從這裡開始 03:51:184同一個地方完成

Velosity 更好地增加，至少在1.60


不要節奏，並將於嘛〜星

ZLOdeuka wrote:

你好~

我真的很喜歡的歌...

[ General ]

你為什麼速度都是一樣的？

顯然你必須做Easy




[ Normal ]

這種複雜性在我看來，一些種無聊 ...順便說一下，在某個時候以某種方式將是完美的閃光淡化這個令人沮喪的圖片

Slider Tick Rate 需要2

Kiai Mod ~ 從這裡開始 02:40:326到底有

01:45:469 01:45:755〜在此期間，我將令Kiai mod

[ Hard ]

從這裡開始 03:51:184同一個地方完成

Velosity 更好地增加，至少在1.60


不要節奏，並將於嘛〜星

It's really hard to read chinese made by web translator....
But anyway,thanks.

好吧，我是来骗KD的XD
刚学MOD，肯定很渣...也不敢提什么...
都是个人建议，可以无视
[Normal]
01:47:469-KIAI开始
01:49:755-KIAI结束
02:40:041-02:49:469个人建议把这个KIAI取消
02:49:326-KIAI开始直到曲子结束
03:05:326，03:07:612，03:09:898，03:12:184逐渐提高音量怎么样？感觉能加强效果..
（嘛，最大感觉就是排列单调点..）
[Hard]
01:14:041(2,3)-没对齐..故意的？
01:16:326(6,7)-^
01:19:469(4,5)-向右一格
01:19:184,01:21:469-这两个3连点的间距不一样啊...以哪个为标准？
01:40:041(7)-感觉有点太靠边了..换个方向？
01:44:612(7)-^
01:45:326-KIAI开始
01:54:469-KIAI结束
02:40:184-KIAI开始
02:49:612-KIAI结束
02:58:469-03:14:755-逐渐提高音量怎么样？
最后KIAI那段加强音量..哨子声太多感觉有点刺耳...4
HARD很NICE就是有点卧槽（开玩笑的）

I can't read chinese, so my apologies if some issues are repeated.

Timing seems fine, but I'm not an expert on it.

Normal

00:25:469 (2) - Add the whistle on the second repeat like with the slider before it.
02:28:898 (2) - Place farther from 1, or make it a new combo.

Hard

01:13:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing.

Great song choice and I like the simple mapping style. Starred.

thank you.all done.
And Normal has been changed a little.

Hello there o/

[General]

Your mp3 is not rankable (320kbps :/)
So, here a new one for you !

http://www.mediafire.com/?kggae28kfwylurt

The new offset for this mp3 is : 393

Also, you forgot to add a preview in your diffs

The kiai time is not the same in every diff, fix that too

[Hard]

01:15:755 (5) - New combo (there is a higher spacing, that's why you should add a combo here)
01:20:327 (6) - New combo ?

[Normal]

01:45:535 - Kiai time should start here
02:12:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard to read for a Normal
02:15:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:20:898 (3,1) - Jumps on a normal is not a good idea for me :/
02:56:392 (1) - Spacing error or another jump ?
02:56:678 - The clap here sounds weird, delete it
02:56:964 (2) - Add a clap here

~Starz'd

Fight69 wrote:

Hello there o/

[General]

Your mp3 is not rankable (320kbps :/)
So, here a new one for you !

http://www.mediafire.com/?kggae28kfwylurt

The new offset for this mp3 is : 393

Also, you forgot to add a preview in your diffs

The kiai time is not the same in every diff, fix that too

[Hard]

01:15:755 (5) - New combo (there is a higher spacing, that's why you should add a combo here)
01:20:327 (6) - New combo ?

[Normal]

01:45:535 - Kiai time should start here
02:12:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard to read for a Normal
02:15:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:20:898 (3,1) - Jumps on a normal is not a good idea for me :/
02:56:392 (1) - Spacing error or another jump ?
02:56:678 - The clap here sounds weird, delete it
02:56:964 (2) - Add a clap here

~Starz'd

thank you.
But i have made mp3 to 170kbps.It cant be 320kbps now......

[normal]
02:14:898 (5,1) - im not sure about this jump, being on a normal difficulty and all...
02:20:898 (3,1) - ^

[hard]

fine, although im not too sure about the jumps at the end...

star

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[normal]
02:14:898 (5,1) - im not sure about this jump, being on a normal difficulty and all...
02:20:898 (3,1) - ^

[hard]

fine, although im not too sure about the jumps at the end...

star

thanks.

Map totaly fits the song. very nice!

[Normal]
KIAI period should be consistent with all diffs.

[Hard]
04:15:184 (1) - I would new combo due to suddenly spacing changed.

Few suggestion and no kuds.

/me shoots star.

Normal;

The spacing is a little erratic here...
00:18:041 (8,1,2,3) - Something about this spacing isn't right.
00:23:184 (1,2) - Spacing.
00:36:326 (8,1) - ^
01:47:469 - This kiai should be at 01:47:755.
02:20:898 (3,1) - Spacing.
02:26:612 (1,1) - ^
02:32:326 (3) - Clap.
02:49:326 - This kiai should be at 02:49:469.
02:56:041 (6,1) - Spacing.
Consider mapping to the end?

Hard;

Same slider speed as Normal :/
Tick rate = 2
01:32:898 (3,4) - This kind of makes no sense. Get rid of that jump?
01:35:184 (7,8) - ^
01:39:755 (6,7) - ^
01:44:327 (6,7) - ^ etc.
01:45:326 - This kiai should be at 01:45:469.
02:40:041 - This kiai should be at 02:40:326.
03:09:469 (7,1) - Spacing.
03:50:898 - This kiai should be at 03:51:184.
04:16:326 - Suggestion; Just have a hitcircle here instead of the spinner?

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal;

The spacing is a little erratic here...
00:18:041 (8,1,2,3) - Something about this spacing isn't right.
00:23:184 (1,2) - Spacing.
00:36:326 (8,1) - ^
01:47:469 - This kiai should be at 01:47:755.
02:20:898 (3,1) - Spacing.
02:26:612 (1,1) - ^
02:32:326 (3) - Clap.
02:49:326 - This kiai should be at 02:49:469.
02:56:041 (6,1) - Spacing.all fixed.
Consider mapping to the end? i think it's too long for a normal diff

Hard;

Same slider speed as Normal :/slider speed must be faster than a easier diff? i think it's ok in my hard diff.
Tick rate = 2
01:32:898 (3,4) - This kind of makes no sense. Get rid of that jump?
01:35:184 (7,8) - ^
01:39:755 (6,7) - ^
01:44:327 (6,7) - ^ etc.
01:45:326 - This kiai should be at 01:45:469.
02:40:041 - This kiai should be at 02:40:326.
03:09:469 (7,1) - Spacing.
03:50:898 - This kiai should be at 03:51:184.all fixed.
04:16:326 - Suggestion; Just have a hitcircle here instead of the spinner?i dont want to make my beatmap without a spinner.

thank you for your mod.

hi~

้here my suggestions~

[General]
keep the same pattern of kiai timing in all difficulties
don't forget to delete .OSB file( storyboard file- you don't need it) and then full-submitting
[normal] and [hard] share the same slider velocity (1.4) Owo? not a good idea at all...
not only go for setup in its difficuly scale you need adjusting for proper slider velocity (considering its AR,OD and playing feel )
do place finish hitsound on a really heavy beat ... I saw that you over-used hitsound ---some of them fill with three of hitsounds (clap, whistle and finish) at the same time... yes it's bad D:


[normal]
Drain rate -1 (the same score) It's rare to see drain rate > AR and OD
seem fine?~
but please mapped through its end ... for more fair to play... ( you map only two diffs and then shorten one.. huh~ )
you still need a work~

[hard]
could you turned long-repeated slider like this -> 00:11:755 , 00:16:326 : 00:23:184 : 00:25:469 : 00:41:469 : 00:43:755 etc. into something it will make your harder diff more interesting to play
03:04:612(6) - 03:05:184 -(9) - remove finish hitsound ,add whistle to keep continue your pattern of hitsound (at this rate you broke your own rhythm D:)
03:13:469(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - spam the finish hitsound D: wth
let me repeat twice do add finish hitsound hitsound on really heavily beat
03:58:898 - add note here (follow to feeling... i don't feel like to stop here)
04:11:755~till its end - only part of this map impressed me ( you came up with idea right? ) it's not mean that i like you make all of thing into jumping notes like this
but almost of them was restrictly follow distance snap ....to tell the truth it a pretty bit boring -3-
04:16:326 - as long as you mute this you can expand it a bit longer

Yes, most issue of this map is fine~
But it's not mean this one is really interesting
I saw a tons of good map in pending/WIP beatmap which packs with good mapset,cool trick, epic slider. hitsound SB or HD video etc.
If you want you map get more attentions, you still need a work.
This song is nice... I love it...

good luck with this...

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