Thanks Sonic, long time no see from my first ranked (your beloved zigzags on Hard XD)Sonnyc wrote:
[Hard]
00:17:661 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Consider changing the flow to anti clockwise. Since the same flow keeps going here, it felt a little boring here. I already broke the Al-Azif's rule about these circles, but I may temporarily try this idea.
02:07:869 (1) - Sure for this nc? idk what this NC doing here XD
02:40:403 (2,3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent due to sv change. Make it consistent. Attempted to fix manual (without DS help)
03:07:184 (4,1) - Yes the reverse arrow is visible, but only after (4) ends. Since this is a relatively lower diff, I highly recommend you to make a safer visibility. This time, no better ideas than current.
03:43:583 (2) - 03:46:704 (3) - spacing. Exile- explained me about some numbers under beat divisor count.
03:57:882 (3) - Vague rhythm. Rather starting the slider from 03:57:740 (2) will be more fitting the song.
04:02:422 (3) - Same.
03:57:882 (3,1) - 04:02:422 (3,1) - Hope spacing is consistent after fix, sure. Also hope some consistency for 03:58:875 (1,2) - there are a jumps for "tei tei tei tei" words 04:03:415 (3) too - Its a part of triangle pattern
04:06:253 (5) - The song is a little different with 04:05:118 (1,2,3,4). Using a same slider with a same combo didn't felt nice. Let's say i can do NC here.
Check copy paste sections too for upper two mods. OKAY, ANDREA'S JUTSU SCROLL TECHNIQUE: COPY AND PASTE!!!
05:26:752 (1) - Sure NC? Even there is a sampleset change, NC felt too much. Let's say "yes".
06:42:711 (1) - Consistent spacing plz with previous 1/4 plz. Attempted to fix (when i can already read this numbers, but idk what was that earlier)
06:53:284 (1) - This doesn't have to be a 10 seconds spinner. Strongly consider reducing the length. Dear, you listened this song, you know Hollow Wings version, if not, watch here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/412288 - you also know, that doing other lenght for this spinner conflicts with the song, so idk why you dared to notice it.
08:25:155 (3,4) - Consider making (3) a reverse slider since (4) isn't that strong in beat to demand a click. Good mention, i curved this slider additionally.
Not bad. Actually, it could be even considered as "good" considering this for your first ranked map. Just that I personally had expected much higher quality for such project. Will make something clear, and then push this mapset.
Edit: Forgotten copy paste for usatei, wait when Exile will apply this: http://puu.sh/om3Bh/10fb97bad3.osu
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