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{sb\burst.png} (1100x1100)
[Hard]
00:17:661 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Consider changing the flow to anti clockwise. Since the same flow keeps going here, it felt a little boring here.
02:07:869 (1) - Sure for this nc?
02:40:403 (2,3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent due to sv change. Make it consistent.
03:07:184 (4,1) - Yes the reverse arrow is visible, but only after (4) ends. Since this is a relatively lower diff, I highly recommend you to make a safer visibility.
03:43:583 (2) - 03:46:704 (3) - spacing.
03:57:882 (3) - Vague rhythm. Rather starting the slider from 03:57:740 (2) will be more fitting the song.
04:02:422 (3) - Same.
03:57:882 (3,1) - 04:02:422 (3,1) - Hope spacing is consistent. Also hope some consistency for 03:58:875 (1,2) - 04:03:415 (3) too.
04:06:253 (5) - The song is a little different with 04:05:118 (1,2,3,4). Using a same slider with a same combo didn't felt nice.
Check copy paste sections too for upper two mods.
05:26:752 (1) - Sure NC? Even there is a sampleset change, NC felt too much.
06:42:711 (1) - Consistent spacing plz with previous 1/4 plz.
06:53:284 (1) - This doesn't have to be a 10 seconds spinner. Strongly consider reducing the length.
08:25:155 (3,4) - Consider making (3) a reverse slider since (4) isn't that strong in beat to demand a click.
[The World]
04:48:183 - 07:58:903 - Let's make the volume for red & greenline consistent.
00:40:532 (1,2,3,4) - Avoiding overlaps to indicate this as a slider properly would be recommended.
00:43:909 - Consider adding a note. Besides, the spacing of 00:43:674 (1,1,2) felt a little suspicious imo in logic.
00:44:616 (1) - Using a different shape to indicate the sv change better is recommended.
01:16:030 (1,1) - Consider using a consistent spacing with 01:15:402 (1,1).
01:44:726 (4,1,2) - Weird spacing. Put more space between (1,2) to indicate 1/1 rhythm.
02:19:869 (1,2) - First of all, set nc at (2) to indicate the sv change. I personally don't like how the sv changes here, since both slider length are the same, since as it is done with an overlap, but well at least change the nc plz.
02:25:019 - Whistle for audibility plz.
02:40:759 (2) - Removing this rhythm and restructuring your pattern will fit the music better.
05:31:136 (1,2,3) - The rhythm transition here felt pretty sudden considering the previous jump usage. Using a slider for the initial transition for intuitive reading is highly recommended.
05:49:598 ~ 06:04:368 - Use more claps. The music has got claps every two beat. You'll want to express that.
06:53:284 (1) - This doesn't have to be a 10 seconds spinner. Strongly consider reducing the length.
Not bad. Actually, it could be even considered as "good" considering this for your first ranked map. Just that I personally had expected much higher quality for such project. Will make something clear, and then push this mapset.
{sb\burst.png} (1100x1100)
[Hard]
00:17:661 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Consider changing the flow to anti clockwise. Since the same flow keeps going here, it felt a little boring here.
02:07:869 (1) - Sure for this nc?
02:40:403 (2,3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent due to sv change. Make it consistent.
03:07:184 (4,1) - Yes the reverse arrow is visible, but only after (4) ends. Since this is a relatively lower diff, I highly recommend you to make a safer visibility.
03:43:583 (2) - 03:46:704 (3) - spacing.
03:57:882 (3) - Vague rhythm. Rather starting the slider from 03:57:740 (2) will be more fitting the song.
04:02:422 (3) - Same.
03:57:882 (3,1) - 04:02:422 (3,1) - Hope spacing is consistent. Also hope some consistency for 03:58:875 (1,2) - 04:03:415 (3) too.
04:06:253 (5) - The song is a little different with 04:05:118 (1,2,3,4). Using a same slider with a same combo didn't felt nice.
Check copy paste sections too for upper two mods.
05:26:752 (1) - Sure NC? Even there is a sampleset change, NC felt too much.
06:42:711 (1) - Consistent spacing plz with previous 1/4 plz.
06:53:284 (1) - This doesn't have to be a 10 seconds spinner. Strongly consider reducing the length.
08:25:155 (3,4) - Consider making (3) a reverse slider since (4) isn't that strong in beat to demand a click.
[The World]
04:48:183 - 07:58:903 - Let's make the volume for red & greenline consistent.
00:40:532 (1,2,3,4) - Avoiding overlaps to indicate this as a slider properly would be recommended.
00:43:909 - Consider adding a note. Besides, the spacing of 00:43:674 (1,1,2) felt a little suspicious imo in logic.
00:44:616 (1) - Using a different shape to indicate the sv change better is recommended.
01:16:030 (1,1) - Consider using a consistent spacing with 01:15:402 (1,1).
01:44:726 (4,1,2) - Weird spacing. Put more space between (1,2) to indicate 1/1 rhythm.
02:19:869 (1,2) - First of all, set nc at (2) to indicate the sv change. I personally don't like how the sv changes here, since both slider length are the same, since as it is done with an overlap, but well at least change the nc plz.
02:25:019 - Whistle for audibility plz.
02:40:759 (2) - Removing this rhythm and restructuring your pattern will fit the music better.
05:31:136 (1,2,3) - The rhythm transition here felt pretty sudden considering the previous jump usage. Using a slider for the initial transition for intuitive reading is highly recommended.
05:49:598 ~ 06:04:368 - Use more claps. The music has got claps every two beat. You'll want to express that.
06:53:284 (1) - This doesn't have to be a 10 seconds spinner. Strongly consider reducing the length.
Not bad. Actually, it could be even considered as "good" considering this for your first ranked map. Just that I personally had expected much higher quality for such project. Will make something clear, and then push this mapset.