-00:03:123 (6) - Should be turned into a 1/1 slider and the one directly after should be removed, with a note at the old sliderend. This is timeline wise, you can do whatever with the pattern. This would better match the vocals, because there isn't a strong beat on the downbeats where you had the white ticks before.
The kick drum is on the white ticks. I've stacked these to deemphasise the beat since it's soft, but it's there. If more people talk about it I will remove-00:04:675 (6) - ^
^-00:06:228 (6) - ^
^-00:07:974 (1) - I wouldn't use a repeating slider here because it loses out on emphasis, but instead turn it all into circles.
I don't want too long a circle spam section and I like the circles preceding it for now. Again if more people complain...-00:09:333 (6) - 1/1 Slider to match vocals like before
^-00:11:079 (1,2,1,2) - I would extend all of these onto their respective blue ticks, because they are vocal sliders and there are no strong beats besides the piano.
Okie-00:14:167 (1) - Either make the slider slower, or give it a better shape because right now its pretty bad.
Replaced with something worseI tried...-00:17:154 (5) - Increase spacing of this note from last slider for better emphasis and consistency like 00:16:154 (1,2,3) -
Made it consistent with (1,2,3)00:32:153 (1) - From this point onwards until 00:42:653 (9) - your choice of rhythm is questionable and doesn't play well for the triples. The triples are made without reason and you should try to keep them to a specific sound in the song, or where there are actually triples. You can also justify triples if you want to increase difficulty and simply place them at constant intervals every measure. I won't mod the triples but you should fix them. I agree with the bad rhythm and why you might blame the triplets. But I see the problem now, it's that I'm trying to use both the instrumental and the vocals. I will change this to fit the instruments, since the section starting at 42 seconds fit the vocals and I want to contrast the two sections. NOTE TO SELF: REMAP THE RHYTHM HERE!
-00:32:487 (4) - Fix blanket
Always sad when people tell me to fix correct blankets... But it'll be gone anyway soon enough when I remap-00:37:487 (1) - No real reason to break flow for this slider, there isn't that much emphasis in the song. Rotate.
Will keep in mind when remapping-00:48:820 (5,6) - I would change into two 1/2 sliders because it sounds better and matches up with the vocals more.
Changed the next combo's 1,2 to a 1/2 slider but left 5,6 alone.00:50:820 (1) - For this section you need to introduce triples because there are clearly strong sounds to put triples on Demmit you caught me on my laziness NOTE TO SELF: REMAP!!
-00:56:153 (1) - I would map to the 2nd white tick every measure as well, because there are piano notes there.
Okie-01:01:987 (4) - Having a long slider here takes away from the intensity, it would be better to simple use circles, or at least a 1/2 slider.
I don't really feel the need for intensity here, it's just the prechorus. The jumps should make it intense enough imo, plus don't you feel like the intensity comes in bursts for this section (vocals)?-01:03:320 (4) - ^
^-01:07:987 (1) - Slider looks pretty bad, it blankets and overlaps properly but you can still make it look nice with red and white anchors.
You're right. Red points would make give this slider more intensity. NOTE TO SELF: BE CREATIVE
-01:57:486 (1) - This section needs triples as well, they clearly fit the intensity and rhythm but are not in the mapping. Ditto as above. NOTE TO SELF: REMAP AND REMEMBER TO CHECK RHYTHM WITH 00:50:820 (1) -
-02:01:487 (1) - I would reduce this slider by one 1/4 tick and add a note where the slider end used to be.
Yeah me too, wait what are you talking about it was always that way-02:02:820 (1) - I would map to the 2nd white tick every measure as well, because there are piano notes there.
Okie-02:11:653 (6,7) - There is a beat between these and should be turned into a triple.
Okie-02:12:487 (1,2,3) - Spacing doesn't match what you did before like in 01:05:820 (1,2,3) -
Okie-02:21:487 (1) - Slider is pretty ugly because it overlaps the next slider. :/
Fixed?-02:22:987 (1,2,3) - This bit ignores some light beats but can be made better with a rhythm like
this.
Uhh...??!?-02:25:320 (1) - Should be moved down the timeline and a circle should take the spot of the previous slider head
Replaced with 2 circles instead-02:27:820 - Clearly a strong beat here
Yeah clearly! I don't even know why you're suggesting removing it since it's already there-02:32:153 (1) - Long ugly slider.
Someone doesn't like circles? I decreased the arc radius-02:47:153 (5,6,7,8,9) - Inequal DS...
y u no liek subtlety-02:49:487 (1) - Would stack under 02:49:153 (6) - to keep consistent with earlier parts.
Hmm... Wouldn't that cause the section to have too little movement? If you clarify/give more details I might think about it.-02:53:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Consider adding kicksliders or repeating sliders because really the difficulty of the rest of the song doesn't warrant a stream this long...
Really, compared to long circle spam (~2 bars) sections here 00:18:153 - 00:35:653 - 00:39:487 - and also frequent use of 1 bar circle spam sections here 00:47:320 - 00:50:403 - 00:52:153 - 00:53:487 - 01:03:903 - often frequently mixed with triples and jumps, the player should have at this point demonstrated more than excellent singletapping skills. This relatively slow and easy stream is not that hard imo. Personally, I find the singletapping sections harder to acc than this stream!-02:58:820 (1) - The bit right after the stream would play better like
this.
Hm, will consider. atm I really like the difficult triples here and swapping it out for that pattern would mean either diabolic circle-slider spacings or a drop in difficulty/intensity... Unless you have another idea about keeping that intensity high of course.-03:05:320 (1) - Would reduce by one tick so its a regular 1/2 slider. Even though there is no beat, the guitar changes pitches and it felt weird to play.
Added a red point to visualise the guitar slide.-03:27:320 (2,3,4,5) - Bad pattern because it puts emphasis through distance on the 03:27:820 (5) - which reduces emphasis for the long slider that follows
Okie-03:28:653 (2,3,4,5) - ^
Okie03:33:487 (1) - Stack under previous note to match your tendencies.
Okie-03:41:320 (1) - This just doesn't play well even if the flow is intended to throw emphasis into the mix.
Hm I changed it a lil by adding a red point. Should give the playwise feel of a small DS decrease to ease the change in direction? If it's not enough I probably should remap this small section.03:46:820 (1) - ^
?-04:01:320 (1,2,3,4) - blanket these better xddd
Lol sounds like I epic failed-04:04:153 (1) - rotate 67 degrees for flow
Yup I totally rotated that.-04:05:570 (1) - ^ but 157 degrees
^ but I rotated it 111 degrees instead, imo I think excessive smooth flow doesn't fit this section.
