tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.

lol

fixed

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:27:425 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - ddkdkk for consistency with 00:21:030 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - and 00:40:213 (93,94,95,96,97,98) - ? yeah
2. 00:41:679 - could have a note to follow the sound. I'd like to keep for 1/2 pattern here
   
3. 00:53:668 (196) - delete. (and 00:53:401 (194) - k, or 00:53:801 (197) - d? ) this part looks busy, needs 1/1s imo. Actually the part isn't really too dense because there's break at before and after. And this is Inner so it doesn't matter, right? lol
4. 01:00:329 (249) - delete, ^ hmm I'll keep this for the fit to the drum
5. 01:11:785 (348) - ^ And some more notes could be deleted. It's your decision. I'll change to other pattern instead for fit better
   
6. 00:55:932 (214,215,216,217) - ddkk would more fit to the drums. you're right
7. 01:08:055 (316,317,318,319) - could follow the drums. eg.) kdkk yes
   
8. 01:20:178 (419,420) - ctrl+g to follow the drums? yep
9. 01:13:384 (362,363) - ^. yeah
10. 01:24:840 (461,462,463,464,465,466) - could follow the drums. eg.) -kkddk ok
    
    
11. 01:46:886 (617,618,619) - consider deleting, This pattern seems too long relatively than other patterns in this part I'd like to keep it because I want to represent the dense of the song and it's almost want to go for chorus part.
12. 01:48:152 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - umm... this pattern doesn't fit to sound well imo. How about following sound pitches? also it seems bit overdone. I don't know, I feel this is really fun at least for the gameplay, also there's no modder that mention this before lol. I'll consider this anyway
13. 02:11:730 (843,845,847) - bit overdone too.
14. 02:39:040 (1044) - d? lower pitch than prev. ok
    
    
15. 02:51:561 (1116,1117,1118,1119,1120) - I'm not sure what sound does it follow. k-k-k- works good enough imo yeah
16. 03:04:349 (1210,1211,1212,1213,1214,1215,1216,1217,1218,1219) - I don't think it fits to the drums well. Downbeats should be kats in the same way as next stream. 03:05:415 (1220,1224,1228,1232) - ? ok you're right
17. 03:13:274 (1294,1295,1296,1297,1298) - kdkdk makes more natural flow imo. ok
18. 03:22:599 (1382) - del? looks too long. Well I'll keep this because generally delete this will break the flow of fun of pattern, also there's already have break at before stream and almost get to break too.
    
    
19. 03:32:057 (1445) - why not d.. ddk x3 works fine. Because there another tone (which is not drum) that are higher than other two. So I put d k k for the fit both side.
20. 03:35:254 (1457,1458,1459,1460) - ^ (d-kkd) The piano tone is higher than first one, so I put d k k to represent it
21. 05:22:424 (54) - delete? this part is so quiet, this pattern looks bit overdone. yes
22. 05:36:212 (138) - k? since high pitch sound, and it makes nicely ending imo. yes

You may call me back when you are done.
good luck (¦3[▓▓]

• 
  Disunified the BPM. Comparing with them. ( 00:05:044 - , 04:27:474 - , 05:36:212 -).
  You should change 00:05:044 – to 225.2 and SV x 0.5.
  
  02:51:295 – move to 02:50:496 - and change to 4/4 . on beat there 02:51:561 – .

1. 02:52:627 – how about accel the 0.85~0.90 ? from 02:59:021 – x1.00 looks far gap before x0.75.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Lite mod, I may mod again…(when I recheck) ?

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1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

[Timing]

• 
  Disunified the BPM. Comparing with them. ( 00:05:044 - , 04:27:474 - , 05:36:212 -).
  You should change 00:05:044 – to 225.2 and SV x 0.5. It does feel really weird if I change this. Because generally the white line is too much at gameplay. I could change it tho if this is unrankable or you're really bother with this
  
  02:51:295 – move to 02:50:496 - and change to 4/4 . on beat there 02:51:561 – . You're right

1. 02:52:627 – how about accel the 0.85~0.90 ? from 02:59:021 – x1.00 looks far gap before x0.75. I've thought this before at the end I don't really want it because it kinda fucked up at gameplay for "mod" player imo.

[Oni]

1. 00:41:279 (97) – change to d and 00:41:679 – add k? Appeared the little over 00:36:616 -, so I suggest this matches better and 00:41:679 – it follows the chime and 00:41:013 - ~ 00:41:812 – expression the vocal being low sounds better . I'd like to keep it for the 1/2 pattern here on purpose.
   
   00:45:675 – change to d? , not same snare time as 00:44:876 (111,112) -. sure
2. 00:49:938 - ^ , same as above. I'd like keep as kkk for the better flow at here
   
3. 01:07:122 (308,309,310) – about 1/2 coloring, how adjust the kd? (maybe kkd? )
   dk sounds , enhanced the low-tone bass sounds , like from next part (01:09:254 -~~). I guess it still earlier to follow. I don't know it sound more weird when I put this LOL, any other suggestion?
   
   Either? (or both?) *-1 both are fine for me, fixed
   From 01:59:475 –to 02:01:740 -, 1/2 -1 plot > 1/4 plot > 1/2-1 > 1/4 > 1/2-1 sounds busy to me. I guess variation sounds better. Like these.
   
   • A. 02:00:874 – move to 02:00:607 -? 02:00:407 – Enhance the vocal slar at 02:00:674 -.
     B. 02:01:407 – move to 02:01:673 -? Similer , 02:01:473 – enhance the slar at 02:01:740 -.
4. 02:09:599 - remove and 02:09:332 – change to d? Making a break consistent on kiai with… like them 01:49:217 (1,2) - , 02:06:269 (1,2) -. I make those break because of big note...since here isn't have any big note so I'll keep it
   
5. 02:35:176 – remove? same as 02:26:650 -? yes
   
6. 02:53:559 – remove? backsounds seem to stop and making a little rest. umm no? I've listen that there's drum tick at here
7. 02:56:756 -^
8. 03:03:483 - ^ for adjust the sounds pressure if you apply the ^ and ^^. it's weird tho if just dk notes
   
   
9. 03:08:012 – add d? comparing with 1st kiai, I guess there’re lack of 1/4 sounds with plays. sure! this is good for me
10. 03:09:744 - ^? sound weird lol but I'll put at other places
    
11. 03:21:201 – add k? for following the vocal. wow good!
    
12. 03:36:587 – finisher? same as 03:33:389 -. yeah
    
13. 03:37:119 – change to k? sounds up with cymbals. yep
    
14. 04:51:385 – add d? same reason *-1 ok

Good Luck (¦3[___]

1. Use 225.2BPM for the first timing point as it's the correct BPM, and use a 6/4 signature.
2. Consider adjusting the volume a bit:
   80-85% for the sections where you use 70%.
   85-90% for the kiai, since hitsounds are barely hearable there.
3. 00:29:423 (47,48,49,50,51,52) - These notes feel a bit weird as there's no vocal present here like in other patterns, you should remove them.
4. 05:36:212 (134) - Probably change for a big note so it creates a nice ending feeling?

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi mint, just a few comments for your map:

1. Use 225.2BPM for the first timing point as it's the correct BPM, and use a 6/4 signature. fixed, thanks a lot finally solved
2. Consider adjusting the volume a bit:
   80-85% for the sections where you use 70%.
   85-90% for the kiai, since hitsounds are barely hearable there. I'm not sure about both of these because I've using osu default skin to play so I feel these are fine.
3. 00:29:423 (47,48,49,50,51,52) - These notes feel a bit weird as there's no vocal present here like in other patterns, you should remove them. ahh, I put these because you can see that all of part contain these type of pattern, so it will be weird if this part didn't have this pattern, right?
4. 05:36:212 (134) - Probably change for a big note so it creates a nice ending feeling? yep

Nice map.

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