Aleks719 wrote:

Krisom wrote:

h3kiru
02:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I found this hard to read. I mean, spacing it's ok, but I always hit (4,5,6) 1/4 earlier. I guess it's due to (1,2) well, u r the 2nd player who feel the note there, so there we go

Thank you for mod, Krisom !

Soul-less wrote:

[Hard]
- 01:16:936 (7) - A whistle?(I think you have a whistle on all similar kiai section except for this) ok~
- 01:20:686 (7) - A whistle at the start of the slider? ok~
- 01:35:217 (3) - ^ ok~
- 02:50:217 (3) - ^ ok~
- 02:53:498 (2) - A whistle at the mid of this repeating slider? ok~
- 03:50:217 (3) - A whistle at the start of the slider? ok~
- 03:53:498 (2) - A whistle at the mid of this repeating slider? ok~
waw, how i can missed this whistles %)

[Collab]
Roddie
- 00:37:561 (9) - Was kinda expecting a whistle here, no?
IceBeam
- 00:47:170 (7,1) and similar jumps for that section - One of the few jumps that IMO aren't quite fit with the rest of the collabs, even if it's signaled by new combos. Hmm. Icebeam always refused this suggestion~
Aleks719
- 01:04:514 to 01:13:420 - I would prefer maintaining 60% soft hitsounds here, probably just me though. nope
cesc
- 01:38:030 (1) - Consider stacking a whistle with the finish here...hmm.
- 02:50:217 (2,3) - The order for whistle and clap is reversed here.
- 02:56:780 (5) - Clap here instead of whistle(to match previous hitsounds?)
- 02:57:717 (2,3) - Whistles here instead of claps?
- 03:45:512 onwards - Whistles here are kinda irregular. Hmm.
Card N'FoRcE
- 03:31:936 (8,9) and similar pattern beats - I would prefer if it's just a repeating slider....probably just me. CnF always refused this suggestion~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
end it like the other diff... this is like 1/3 of the Hard/Collab nope, just nope

[Hard]
01:32:639 (x) - hmm, try to add a note there :yesyes: fixed here and in one similar place
01:34:280 (x) - Add a Slider that end in 01:34:514, prefewrably positioned like this as it form a Forth and Return(this) like effect and you obtain a good graphical effect with 01:35:217 (3) - Slider (this) while following the voice echo Ehh, looks nice, fixed
03:28:655 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and copypaste 02:28:655 (1,2,3,4) - here adn add a note at 03:30:178 (x) - ... as it become like this Sooooo... Nope. I followed for another instrument here. It's hard to read maybe, but distance makes rhythm much intuitive

[Collab]

00:00:530 (1) - End it at 00:02:287 and
00:02:522 (1) - make it start from 00:02:405 (1) - nope, because whistle sounds better at white tick.

-02:28:637 - 02:45:512 : h3k1ru
02:38:733 (2,3,4) - Spreading them?
02:42:483 (x) - Add a Note
02:42:600 (x) - ^
02:42:951 (x) - ^

Louis Cyphre wrote:

General
- use Kiai in all difficulties Оу, забыл. точно, fix'd
- map easy difficulty untill the end, let newbie players enjoy full version of the song. Nope. just nope.
- add Normal difficulty. Thinking, т.к. по правилам пролезает.
- Use please same volume of hitsounds in all difficulties. Я не буду править части других в коллабе, если они не выбиваются, у кнф'а и так громкость была быше остальных, сделали под всех. так что тут нет.

[Collab]
00:36:155 (1) - move this according to distance spacing. too nazi, nope X)
00:38:030 (1) - ^^
01:00:998 (1) - nah, do you really like such sliders? yes
01:04:748 - may be use soft hitsounds? Sounds better disagree
02:05:686 (5) - why jump? Please fix it. It was made specially
03:35:686 (9,10,11,1) - this pattern is so confused. I suggest to do something like this http://puu.sh/22Gx, or remove this note 03:35:686 (9) - , replace this slider 03:35:803 (10) 1/4 back and add 2 repeats, like this http://puu.sh/22GK
by the way, for example let's take this pattern 03:41:311, you can hear a beat there 03:41:369, why you didn't just use repeat 1/8 sliders instead of that pattern without 1 note, it plays better and sounds too Hum, CnF refuses suggestions about this part, you are not a 1st
03:58:655 (1) - silence only the end of the spinner. fix'd

[Hard]
Fine difficulty, but please - remove finish 03:58:655 (1) - fix'd like in Collab

По моему мнение мапа не совсем так скажем правильная, а точнее её мапсет. То что у тебя Easy идёт меньше других сложностей
, нету нормал, разные киаи моды. Это не очень хорошо, может быть это и ранкабл, но смотрится это со стороны "не аккуратно".
В коллабе киай забыл, а так он везде одинаков, я не фанат изи на 4 минуты. и многие те, кто их задрачивает с модами на ыы ранк.

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
it's a bit too short... map it until 3:00? some people in this thread said that, so i think it's really necessary. nope ;__;
0:53:030 (4,1) - swap new combos nope
1:12:717 (5) - move it lower a bit? fix'd

[Hard]
1:30:530 (1,5,1) - swap new combos fix'd
1:34:280 (6,1) - ^ fix'd
2:03:576 (2,3,4,5) - maybe it's just me, but i kinda dislike that pattern. disagree
2:47:405 (5,1) - swap new combos, just like before fix'd
3:47:405 (5,1) - ^ fix'd

[Collab]
0:31:936 (7,1) - eh, in patterns like that (i mean, short kickslider directed right to the next circle) i'm always confused if this slider is a white-to-red tick, or white-to-blue one ._." but it's fine the way it is now, i suppose... I think it's okay...
1:23:030 (1,2,3,4) - aren't those whistles a bit overused? No, they aren't
1:42:483 (1) - delete new combo? h3k1ru's part
2:07:326 (1) - ^ h3k1ru's part
2:29:592 (1), etc. - there's no need to use new combos like that, it's just a 1/4 kickslider and a single note, imo this shouldn't be included in a separated combo u.u" h3k1ru's part
3:35:686 (9,10,11,1) - oh man, when i've sightreaded this... it was at least weird. o.o" xD Yes, you are not a first, who wrote about that

nothing really in terms of errors. good job, guys! keep the good work!

1. The jump between the half-mapped [Easy] and [Hard] is quite big, You should map a [Normal] imo
2. This sounds like "Numb" to me :3

1. 00:44:592 (3) - Half of this circle is getting covered by (1)'s reverse arrow, I suggest to keep things clean for [Easy] so try to move it please.
2. Half mapped easy... I read your replies but I'll give it a try: "Would you map this until the end, please?"

1. 00:11:780 (5,1) - I felt that this jump kinda killed the flow, I didn't expect a jump there, it's not intuitive. I suggest to remove the jump or "reduce" it a bit.
2. 02:45:530 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to make this jumps consistent. (tbh they felt a bit "forced")
3. 02:53:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is way longer than all the combos in this map and I don't see why :P try to split it please. (Perhaps New Combo on (5)?) (same for this one: 03:53:030 - )
4. 03:28:655 (1,2,3,4) - (3)&(4) were really hard to hit because you suddenly changed the rhythm you were following for this pattern. I highly suggest to use a New Combo on (3) also it would be great if you use a slider instead, It's way easier to read and play.

• 
  H3kiru

1. 02:04:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see why you increase the spacing between (4) and (5) the rhythm didn't change or anything like that, It doesn't make any sense IMO. I suggest to try something like this. (If you refuse to fix the spacing, at least add a New Combo to remark that spacing increases 0.70x D:)
   Roddie
2. 03:15:530 - Are those "Whistles" in the slider-bodies really necessary, they sound out of place IMO.
   Card n'Force
3. 03:35:686 (9,10,11,1) - This pattern is quite hard to read, the stacked and unstacked objects make this pattern really confusing. Something like this seems ok for me D:

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. The jump between the half-mapped [Easy] and [Hard] is quite big, You should map a [Normal] imo I don't want to go so far foe example : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/16233. Edward Maya too.Oh, yes, this map has half-mapped Normal! Could I make half-Normal too? And why if no?
2. This sounds like "Numb" to me :3 yeah, there are similar rhythms here

[Easy]

1. 00:44:592 (3) - Half of this circle is getting covered by (1)'s reverse arrow, I suggest to keep things clean for [Easy] so try to move it please. Hum... It was made specially, nope
2. Half mapped easy... I read your replies but I'll give it a try: "Would you map this until the end, please?" Give me a reason, if I can find ranked maps with half-mapped Easy without problems? I made full-size Easy before. Imo, 4 mins for Easy is not a good idea.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:780 (5,1) - I felt that this jump kinda killed the flow, I didn't expect a jump there, it's not intuitive. I suggest to remove the jump or "reduce" it a bit. Me and others, who tested diff didn't have problems here, but reduced a bit.
2. 02:45:530 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to make this jumps consistent. (tbh they felt a bit "forced") It was made specially, nope
3. 02:53:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is way longer than all the combos in this map and I don't see why try to split it please. (Perhaps New Combo on (5)?) (same for this one: 03:53:030 - ) ok
4. 03:28:655 (1,2,3,4) - (3)&(4) were really hard to hit because you suddenly changed the rhythm you were following for this pattern. I highly suggest to use a New Combo on (3) also it would be great if you use a slider instead, It's way easier to read and play. changed a bit

[Collab]

1. This suggestions for h3k1ru, Roddie and CnF are repeating. Collaborators refused this earlier, so, I think they'll refuse it again.

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
00:53:498 (1,4) - would look nicer if not overlaping in my opinon fix'd
02:09:201 (2,3,1) - nazi: stack these? fix'd

Collab:
03:31:936 (8,9) - not a big fan of the note/fast slider combinations used on this part (I thought it played nicer with just the 1 slider for it) but that is just my opinion ~waiting CnF

The mapset looks rankable enough in general, the main thing that I dislike at the moment is the half mapped Easy. Seeing as there are only 3 difficulties in total it seems a shame that they aren't fully mapped. I know that many other ranked maps have gotten away with it but it is becoming much more disliked these days and mapsets are abusing it way too much making beginners miss out. I recommend you think about fully mapping it more~ Meeeeh... Okay. I'll make full Easy. Specially for you, done <3 xD

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy
00:08:967 (1,2,3,4) - This feels too slow to me and doesn't line up with the beat as far as I can hear it. The whole intro feels undermapped and since there is no remarkable beat mapped I lose the rhythm. I really suggest that you map more of the song here. Place more notes on white ticks. Here's an example beat I quite liked. Checked, nope
00:47:405 (2,3) - Move down maybe 3 grid 4 units? I might be wrong about the number, but I feel thatthe sliders aren't aligned right nope
02:26:662 - This inherited isn't necessary nope, it was made specially
02:43:186 (4) - Why straighten it at the end? Because I wanted to make it
03:19:983 (4) - Not sure about this : / But I'm sure!
So, this diff without changes

Hard
00:07:326 (4,1,2) - I don't believe this is lined up. Also it has a different spacing than 00:08:733 (3,4) - which is also not lined up.fixed
00:57:717 (3,4) - This doesn't play right at all. Change this please. nope, it was made specially irc, fixed
02:35:217 (4,5,6,7) - This sounds like all half notes to me. nope
03:30:061 - Add note? nope
03:30:530 (1,2) - Perhaps not place them so parallel and make the transition more slanted. It might play better. fixed

Collab
00:00:530 (1) - Maybe remove the whistle. I'm unsure though. Do you think the volumes should be the same for each tone at the end of the spinners.? Removed whistle
00:35:686 (4,1) - I hate when maps do this. : / Checked, nope
00:36:740 (5) - Delete? I'll remove my gripe about the pattern above if you do. :p Roddie's part
00:44:592 - Resnap this inherited (nazi) nope, it doesn't matter
00:47:170 (7,1) - I guess its supposed to be hard, but this jump throws me off. It doesn't even sound like a jump. Checked, nope
00:48:459 (6,7,8) - Ugh can you do something else with this? Checked, nope
00:59:592 (7,8,9,10,11) - This is ugly IMO. 7 should be a new combo. IceBeam's part
01:11:780 (6) - Wigglies are unrankable. O,rly? xD without changes
02:07:092 (5,1,2) - I suggest this be completely snapped to 1.2 (only within the notes mentioned though) Checked, nope
02:26:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are way too abrupt and unexpected. Checked, nope
03:17:405 (1) - Slider is lumpy. Fix? Checked, nope
03:24:905 (1) - ^ Checked, nope
03:34:748 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you are going to have increased spacing segments like this use whole numbers for snaps. Checked, nope

1. 02:23:498 (1) - touchs the HP groove, move it down a little?
2. 03:19:983 (4) - Suggest to turn finish hitsound down a bit.
3. 03:22:795 (2) - ^

1. 03:17:405 (4) - Suggest to turn volume down because its the most soft rhythm of this song from 03:15:530 to 03:30:295. Try volume 35%.
2. 03:19:280 (3) - ^
3. 03:21:155 (4) - ^
4. 03:24:905 (3) - ^

1. I dont wanna be picky. So all fine to me.

gdeath wrote:

:3
[Easy]:

1. 02:23:498 (1) - touchs the HP groove, move it down a little? fix'd
2. 03:19:983 (4) - Suggest to turn finish hitsound down a bit. Hum,okay. 45% -> 35%
3. 03:22:795 (2) - ^ Hum,okay. 45% -> 35%

[Hard]:

1. 03:17:405 (4) - Suggest to turn volume down because its the most soft rhythm of this song from 03:15:530 to 03:30:295. Try volume 35%. Hum,okay. 45% -> 35%
2. 03:19:280 (3) - ^ ^
3. 03:21:155 (4) - ^ ^
4. 03:24:905 (3) - ^ ^

[Collab]:

1. I dont wanna be picky. So all fine to me.^__^

_Gezo_ wrote:

Weeeee <3

Good job Aleks, Roddie, Ice, cesc, h3k1ru, CNF and... *Break* ? Who's this ?

Aleks719 wrote:

;~; I forgot to add *break* to the tags, his part is epic ><
Thanks, guys