Feint ft. Veela - Horizons · forum

Mekki

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-02-05T22:44:24+00:00

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Title:Horizons
TitleUnicode:Horizons
Artist:Feint ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:Feint ft. Veela
Creator:TeeJoe
Version:Mk's Normal
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Tags:techno trance melodic melody jump flow reading stream cockroach
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JumpingFox

48 posts

Joined June 2014

JumpingFox 2016-03-09T12:19:49+00:00

Normal Difficulty

Compose

Your objects are not snapped (03:23:311 , 03:25:055 , 03:27:497 , 03:29:241 , 03:31:683 , 03:34:125 , 03:36:218) also at begging there are a lot of circles missing during the offset you set (Time 00:00:290 - 00:22:615) almost 30 sec without any circles play some circles behind that or long ones the map should be full because of offset you set at begging does not quite match the circles its empty

Kiai

Your Kiai is longer than 1/3 cut it a bit or reduce it its too long

Slider Velocity

Slider Velocity is not 1,00 its on 1,40 during the kiai on 0.8 its on 1,50

SongSetup Difficulty

HP is too low it should be at least on 7 or 8 same goes for AR and OD and CS Your difficulty is way too low

SongSetup Audio

Audio is too loud whan i play map i only hear clicks of circles that can bother player consider too lower audio at least on 30 volume

450ms Reaction Difficulty

Compose

At begging there are a lot of circles missing during the offset you set (Time 00:00:290 - 00:22:615) almost 30 sec without any circles play some circles behind that or long ones the map should be full because of offset you set at begging does not quite match the circles its empty

Kiai

Your Kiai is longer than 1/3 cut it a bit or reduce it its too long

Slider Velocity

Slider Velocity is not 1,50 its on 1,40 during the kiai 0.8 its on 1.50

SongSetup Audio

Audio is too loud whan i play map i only hear clicks of circles that can bother player consider too lower audio at least on 30 volume

Tell me a story Difficulty

Compose

At begging there are a lot of circles missing during the offset you set (Time 00:00:290 - 00:22:615) almost 30 sec without any circles play some circles behind that or long ones the map should be full because of offset you set at begging does not quite match the circles its empty

SongSetup Audio

Audio is too loud whan i play map i only hear clicks of circles that can bother player consider too lower audio at least on 30 volume

Kiai

Your Kiai is longer than 1/3 cut it a bit or reduce it its too long

Slider Velocity

Slider Velocity is not 1,50 its on 1,40 during the kiai 0.8 its on 1.50

Thoughts on map how you mapped is actually ok but as you can see you have still few mistakes when i play map its solid i guess but in my opinion AR is a little bit too high well mapped it follows song and that is pretty much it fix that shoot some kudosu stars and maybe it will be qualify

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-05-19T17:33:34+00:00

Love the music

As for how the map looks:

Hard diff:
I think your stacking value is a bit high it doesn't look great in some places

00:39:740 (3,5) - Stacking issue maybe, I think it doesn't look really clean (not the stacking value though)
01:26:135 (3,1) - As I said with the value being too high, here it looks a bit weird imo
01:55:263 (2,4) - Again here
02:53:345 (1,4) - Here

Insane:
01:10:612 (4,6) - Again reduce the stacking value for stuff like here
02:50:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this feels a little redundant, I'd change the last 4 notes up ^^

Tell Me A Story:

Just wow, love it a lot

New favorite map of mine

Other than that, really really love it ^^ This deserves modding

Also don't take my suggestions for gold, I'm recent (like very recent) to mapping and I'm just stating my humble opinion ^^ Sorry if my suggestions are bad, I don't really think I'm well placed to correct this level of mapping

Anyways, this map is REALLY good and I'll wish you best of luck to get this ranked

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-05-26T03:54:24+00:00

Easy

Did the DS are costant (control shift a, check distance snap...)? On a easy, inconstant DS are unrankeable. fix all this

SV alteration is unrankeable to, fix this so !

Normal

Esses sliders estao muito rapidos para um normal, mas isso nao vem ao caso, o problema real é, por que

isso?
alteracao de SV em normal é apenas "discutivel" mas recomendo fortemente deixar 1.0x para tudo.

Btw corriga as DS , Ai mod esta alertando varios DS quebrados la !

No kudo for this post

edit: se quizer, eu até faco um mega mod no resto da diff, eu so falei o pontos essenciais para ter um mapa rankeado

boa sorte !

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-06-11T17:48:24+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
Love the music As for how the map looks:

Hard diff:
I think your stacking value is a bit high it doesn't look great in some places

00:39:740 (3,5) - Stacking issue maybe, I think it doesn't look really clean (not the stacking value though)
01:26:135 (3,1) - As I said with the value being too high, here it looks a bit weird imo
01:55:263 (2,4) - Again here
02:53:345 (1,4) - Here

Insane:
01:10:612 (4,6) - Again reduce the stacking value for stuff like here
02:50:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this feels a little redundant, I'd change the last 4 notes up ^^

Tell Me A Story:

Just wow, love it a lot New favorite map of mine

Other than that, really really love it ^^ This deserves modding
Also don't take my suggestions for gold, I'm recent (like very recent) to mapping and I'm just stating my humble opinion ^^ Sorry if my suggestions are bad, I don't really think I'm well placed to correct this level of mapping

Anyways, this map is REALLY good and I'll wish you best of luck to get this ranked

Thank you very much for modding

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-06-11T18:36:48+00:00

Ataraxia wrote:
Easy

Did the DS are costant (control shift a, check distance snap...)? On a easy, inconstant DS are unrankeable. fix all this

SV alteration is unrankeable to, fix this so !

Normal

Esses sliders estao muito rapidos para um normal, mas isso nao vem ao caso, o problema real é, por que isso?
alteracao de SV em normal é apenas "discutivel" mas recomendo fortemente deixar 1.0x para tudo.

Btw corriga as DS , Ai mod esta alertando varios DS quebrados la !

No kudo for this post

edit: se quizer, eu até faco um mega mod no resto da diff, eu so falei o pontos essenciais para ter um mapa rankeado

boa sorte !

Eu apreciaria muito um mod completo, só esse pequeno mod ja me ajudou.

to no aguardo

igorsprite

623 posts

Joined September 2015

igorsprite 2016-06-11T18:38:24+00:00

eu ia fazer um mod mas com vc aqui deu vergonha

AsyouSaidsir

71 posts

Joined April 2015

AsyouSaidsir 2016-06-15T18:23:46+00:00

I love this map, it'll be awesome if it got ranked!

This is my first mod, so I am not very experienced, I couldn't find many mistake. But I hope it still helps. c:

GENERAL:
- The tags should include the name of the GD's mapper, add KeyLo to the tags.
- Why is cockroach in the tags? xP

KeyLo's Easy:
- 02:08:694 (1) - Shouldn't the reverse arrow be on 02:10:089 ? It's hard to hear a note at 02:08:694 (1) . I suggest something like this:
SPOILER

or

Normal:
I know this is still a WIP but I like to point out that all the sliders before 00:40:787 (1) end on one tick earlier than they should.

Hard:
- 01:05:903 (5) - Add NC
- 03:31:194 (1) - Remove NC.
- 03:31:717 (1) - Add NC.

Insane:
- 00:57:705 (2) - Change this circle to X: 125 and Y: 200, I think It looks better this way.
- 02:39:740 (1) - Add NC? (Not sure, but I think it fits)
- 02:40:263 (1) - ^

Tell Me A Story:
- 00:21:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern feels a bit messy, I think it'll be better if you changed it to some other shape. (Below are some suggestions, but you can come up with your own)
SPOILER

(The 8th note is on top of the first one)
You get the idea :>

- 01:29:624 (1) ~ 01:51:949 (1) - I think a 22 second break is a bit too long for an advanced difficulty, maybe add some slider art to the piano notes? If you don't want to do that (although I think it's a good idea), you can add a spinner at 01:50:554 (1) to make the break shorter by two seconds.

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-07-03T14:52:04+00:00

Thank you AsyouSaidsir for the modding, just didnt take the normal and easy suggestions since i deleted both diffs, but the rest i did minor changes

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-07-03T15:36:20+00:00

If the easy is still GD open i'll gladly map it

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-07-03T19:54:15+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
If the easy is still GD open i'll gladly map it

Sorry dude, just did it!

I think normal is still open though!

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-07-03T19:56:36+00:00

Complete Easy GD

I wasn't sure what to hitsound in the beginning so play around with it if you want to. Please let me know if there's any parts you don't like and I'll change 'em

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - Horizons ft. Veela.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44973
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22647,33810,44973,56135,67298,78461,89624,111949,123112,134275,145438,156601,167763,178926,190089,201252,212415,223577
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.32

[Metadata]
Title:Horizons
TitleUnicode:Horizons
Artist:Feint ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:Feint ft. Veela
Creator:TeeJoe
Version:Plaudible's Easy
Source:
Tags:techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody jump flow reading stream cockroach
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.85
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,89824,110629
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-07-03T22:30:21+00:00

Plaudible wrote:
lazyboy007 wrote:
If the easy is still GD open i'll gladly map it
Sorry dude, just did it! I think normal is still open though!

Oh ok :p well I'll do normal then haha

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-07-09T05:08:50+00:00

Eu vejo que você vai receber outras GD não é?

se for me da uma pokada quando terminar para eu moddar isso tudo

se tiver alguma diff pra min fazer vo fica felizasso de fazer essa musica é boa pra porra

LQss

12 posts

Joined November 2014

LQss 2016-09-04T15:55:31+00:00

^^ HAI HAI ^^
gj so far

not interesting xD but https://osu.ppy.sh/b/348605 same BG :p

Tell me a story

02:07:279 - add a note here
02:11:465 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6016338
03:10:593 (2) - change position of this

Insane

02:11:465 (4,5,6,7,8) -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6016449

KeyLo's Easy

Maybe if u make the cs bigger
01:56:116 - add something here
01:59:954 - ^
02:14:256 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6016622
02:12:861 - SPIN - 02:13:907 -
02:46:349 - 02:46:698 - 02:47:047 - (5) then a CS here 02:47:396 -
03:43:558 (1) - hmmm idk ;-;

gl for getting this ranked !

DigitoriiX

4 posts

Joined July 2013

DigitoriiX 2016-09-06T12:55:58+00:00

Plaudible's Easy

SPOILER

Minor: 01:10:070 (5) - This slider has an awkwardly timed repeat, I would change this to something like:

Minor: 03:00:303 (4) - This slider should not have a whistle effect
Personal: 03:43:558 (1) - This spinner is pretty exhausting, even if it is at the end. I'd shorten it to 3-4 measures.

Normal: Looks good so far.

Hard

SPOILER

Minor: 01:29:605 - No reason to delay the beginning of this break time
Minor: 00:28:733 (2) - 00:34:314 (3) - 00:35:709 (3) - 00:52:454 (2) - 00:56:640 (3) - 01:52:454 (3) - 02:42:686 (3) - These kick sliders have notes too soon after them that makes them feel like one-repeat rather than three-repeat kick sliders. I broke combo on nearly every one of them when sightread playtesting. Here's some patterns that can replace them to feel more readable while staying appropriate for the difficulty level:

Insane

SPOILER

Minor: 02:46:523 (2) - The four sliders in the pattern just before this move in different directions but this one inconsistently overlaps the previous one.
Minor: 02:55:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern doesn't quite match the music. It should be moved to 02:55:244
Minor: 02:55:855 (5) - This circle specifically should be deleted to better match the music.
Personal: 00:26:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Difficult to read since the two traingles overlap but change direction halfway through. Given the difficulty you can probably keep it, but it would be easier to read if (5) and (6) were switched.

Tell Me A Story

SPOILER

Minor: 01:29:605 - No reason to delay the beginning of this break time

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-09-08T01:16:58+00:00

DigitoriiX wrote:

Plaudible's Easy

SPOILER

Minor: 01:10:070 (5) - This slider has an awkwardly timed repeat, I would change this to something like:

done
Minor: 03:00:303 (4) - This slider should not have a whistle effect fixed
Personal: 03:43:558 (1) - This spinner is pretty exhausting, even if it is at the end. I'd shorten it to 3-4 measures. changed

ey baybee heres da updet

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172,328,152396,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,152744,2,0,P|212:200|232:176,2,85,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,153791,2,0,P|304:316|336:292,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,332,154489,2,0,P|396:280|352:232,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,204,155186,2,4,P|388:176|332:192,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,155884,2,4,P|300:136|288:176,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,204,156582,6,0,B|172:196|172:196|140:156,2,127.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,157977,2,0,B|292:132|292:132|321:168,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,92,159372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,159721,2,0,L|304:56,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,112,160419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,188,160768,2,0,P|332:264|344:288,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,161465,2,0,P|348:344|284:328,1,170
256,288,162512,2,0,P|276:272|344:272,2,85,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,163558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,163907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,96,164256,2,0,L|204:32,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,164954,2,0,B|308:92|308:92|312:132|312:132|352:176,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,20,166349,2,0,B|380:60|380:60|384:100|384:100|424:144,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,167744,2,0,B|224:100|160:120|160:120|160:176,1,170
200,224,168791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,248,169140,2,0,P|180:296|240:288,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,170535,6,0,P|132:120|152:80,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,171233,2,0,P|232:104|268:88,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,164,171930,2,0,P|324:164|360:180,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,236,172628,2,0,P|344:268|356:312,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,308,173326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,304,173675,2,0,L|128:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,174372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,172,174721,2,0,P|148:124|180:108,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,156,175419,2,0,P|284:124|288:76,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,28,176116,6,0,L|360:196,1,170
344,264,177163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,312,177512,6,0,P|220:288|184:296,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,280,178209,2,0,P|104:248|88:204,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,178907,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,312,180303,2,0,B|264:292|232:292|232:292|220:272|216:264|216:264|188:288|168:292|124:300|80:256|88:208,1,340
164,208,183093,6,0,P|140:160|92:136,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,184140,2,0,P|212:316|260:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,184837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,192,185186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,124,185535,2,0,L|280:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,186233,2,0,P|124:72|104:48,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,16,186930,2,0,L|144:172,1,170,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,244,187977,2,0,P|180:236|212:200,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,152,188675,6,0,L|340:184,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,189372,2,0,L|428:136,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,160,190070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,236,190419,2,0,B|436:292|436:292|384:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,368,191116,2,0,P|352:332|372:232,2,170,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,192861,2,0,P|424:232|392:188,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,193558,2,0,P|276:232|272:264,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,194256,6,0,L|136:152,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,296,195303,2,0,P|176:300|144:280,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,236,196000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,164,196349,2,0,P|180:108|176:84,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,24,197047,2,0,L|264:176,1,170
328,188,198093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,240,198442,2,0,B|332:312|476:236|396:120|356:116,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,199837,2,4,P|216:112|192:92,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,200535,2,4,P|100:52|68:80,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,201233,6,0,B|136:208|136:208|92:268,2,127.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,132,202628,2,0,P|196:72|64:144,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,204023,6,0,P|132:176|120:208,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,256,204721,2,0,P|56:316|80:360,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,300,205419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,252,205768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,204,206116,2,0,L|376:180,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,264,206814,6,0,P|408:204|296:124,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,106,208209,2,0,P|169:93|153:50,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,11,208907,2,0,L|105:126,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,99,209605,2,0,P|79:160|147:161,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,87,211000,2,0,P|186:109|201:197,1,170
144,244,212047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,296,212396,6,0,P|245:330|281:333,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,255,213093,2,0,P|309:264|341:292,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,295,213791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,219,214140,2,0,B|402:177|402:177|361:122,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,202,214837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
341,277,215186,2,0,B|248:306|248:306|186:292,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,229,216582,2,0,P|398:167|353:126,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,202,217279,2,0,L|236:231,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,236,217977,5,0,0:0:0:0:
125,173,218326,2,0,P|103:121|111:85,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,119,219023,2,0,L|281:89,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,30,219721,2,0,P|334:78|334:117,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,175,220419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,188,220768,2,0,P|322:251|355:238,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,111,222163,2,4,P|185:124|161:162,1,85,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,223,222861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
197,287,223209,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,223558,12,4,227744,0:0:0:0:

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-09-08T01:25:05+00:00

Thank you for the mod

Changes done

Elzy

291 posts

Joined December 2015

Elzy 2016-09-26T07:47:24+00:00

Heres my small mod
These are all my opinions, but some you should fix and should consider ;p

Easy

00:55:419 (2) - Off Screen i would fix this
AIMod - Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. again i would fix this some how
AIMod - This mapset at least 1 Easy/Normal diff - < wut, only thing could be is your easy diff is to high in rating.
01:28:209 (1) - i don't know what's wrong with the hitsounds here but they are very loud and sound muffy
02:35:186 (5) - same here
02:58:907 (3) - sammmmmeee
03:19:837 (8) - boop
03:42:163 (7) - sloop
idk maybe its just the volume you have at 95/100 I DUUUNT KNUU

Hard

00:30:303 - i would recommend adding a note here, does not break the flow of the song and the beatmap. plus there's just a werid pause there when there's no note there =\
AIMod - Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. again i would fix this some how
AIMod - This mapset at least 1 Easy/Normal diff -
this was the only thing i could recommend knowing i could not find many problems or suggestions to give you (maybe cause people beat me to it ;-;)

Insane

01:57:686 - maybe add a note here. keeps the flow going and not to hard at the same time
AIMod - Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. again i would fix this some how
AIMod - This mapset at least 1 Easy/Normal diff -
etc.

but i would figure out that volume hitsounds thing :p!
Good Luck & Happy Mapping!

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2016-09-27T00:45:58+00:00

hi, might as well go hard for 1 kudosu

Tell Me A Story

spacing:

00:26:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:32:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldn't the distance spacing between each pair of notes follow the increase in the music accordingly?? just seems odd especially when the increase in distance spacing is only changing on notes 5-8, and not including 1-4... even tho it should be increasing from 1-8

00:37:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... inconsistent with the jumps stated above since there are no changes in distance spacing between circles at all now ...

*****for these jumps either just go with no change in distance spacing or do the change in spacing similar to this 01:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - because those are poorly placed and thought out imo*****

00:29:082 (6,7,8) - why such a random increase in spacing compared to the former part: 00:24:023 (1,2,3,4) -

00:48:791 (5,1,2) - very random change of spacing compared to the rest of that specific combo section... please reconsider making it consistent

*optional* 00:55:419 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - maybe shorten the distance between these 2 streams... thats a little unreasonable imo

01:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this becomes more playable if u rotate this by something like 90-120 degrees counterclockwise because it completes a triangle made by these circles: 01:05:709 (8,1,2) -

01:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please add newcombos accordingly here please.. what is that lmao

02:00:651 (1) - new combo please

02:05:361 (2) - should be just a circle.. slider end does not attach to any music

02:05:884 (1,2) - making this into a repeating slider is much more playable especially since it is a very apparent slow section of the song

02:08:500 (3) - this circle does not need to exist... aren't you matching the vocals for this part lmao

02:10:244 (2) - since we're approaching the beginning of the next chorus, up the intensity consistently by making this into a slider with the sliderend at the nearest white tick pls

02:12:337 (2,3,4) - make a triangle please, more easy to play and read.

02:54:372 (5,6,1) - this is extremely abrupt increase in spacing for these sliders compared to all other instances in the song... please dont troll me lol ^^

03:24:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 03:29:605 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 03:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 03:40:768 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - tone these jumps down a little bit to match the pacing of the song.. especially since these jumps can also easily fit in the other choruses that have higher intensity... we're nearing the end of the song the map shouldn't be getting more cancerous xd

the ending kiai section should in general be toned down... why is it more intense than the other 2 kiai sections.. music is decreasing in intensity after the 2nd kiai and even after that, any increases in intensity should be very minimal... not 8*mapping friendly... k?

aesthetics

00:25:942 (2,3) - ugly overlap.. please fix

00:33:791 (1,2) - separate these more so they dont overlap... ugly

00:42:686 (3,5) - OVERLAP.... SEPARATE lul

00:48:616 (4,1) - very unplayable overlap... please considering moving the 1 circle away from it please because hiding a new combo like that is dumb imo

00:51:930 (1) - lol slider with a troll direction good stuff please flip vertically please so the arc can point to the next circle for better reading plus it matches with the curvature of the stream: 00:52:454 (3,4,5,6,7) - if u do so please change that

00:57:686 (2,4) - very ugly overlap... u expect 50k rank players to read that with ease?? either overlap the sliderstart circle to hitcircle #2 or dont do it at all

01:03:093 (1,4) - ugly overlap separate these two specifically for appearance purposes please

01:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is the only instance of back and forth jumps in the ENTIRE map... very ugly and hard to transition from the jump section before to this set of jumps.. please reconsider changing it

01:07:279 (1,2) - please place the 2 circle somewhere closer to the center alignment of the slider like x:32 y:92, and not near the sliderstart circle... looks ugly and bad

01:11:814 (1,1) - why do these new combos exist when this circle: 01:11:291 (4) - didnt have it ...

01:13:209 (2,3,4,5,1) - placement of these sliders triggers me but u dont have to change it because whatever lol

01:17:396 (1,1,1,1,1) - what are the purpose of these new combos... theres no music attached to these notes to justify newcombo and high spacing...

01:28:558 (3,4,5) - reconsider not overlapping these jumps please... pretty troll

01:56:465 (2,3) - separate these two more

01:57:512 (1,3) - separate...

01:58:907 (1,2,3) - don't make these overlap... looks very bad

02:16:000 (3) - this overlapping with this stream here: 02:15:303 (5,6,7,8,1) - very bad, please separate

02:17:570 (4) - same overlapping issue as above with this stream: 02:16:698 (6,7,8,9,1) - separate please

02:18:965 (4) - same overlapping as above... with this stream here: 02:19:489 (8,9,10,11,1) -

***maybe these suggestions are unreasonable but they just look so rough and messy imo, i think it makes it look like an unrankable map***

02:29:430 (8,2) - separate these two please

02:37:628 (7,2) - i suggest not to overlap these , even though there are other instances that do this... this specific part should not have an overlap

02:38:326 (3) - you overlap this slider on top of this stream here: 02:39:023 (7,8,9,10,1) - ... really dont overlap like this lol

02:40:942 (2,5) - idk if this is a habit but u should really stop overlapping sliders like this lol i dont like them

02:43:733 (2,4) - separate these 2... thats some ugly overlapping

02:45:303 (2,3) - again, dont overlap this single note with a stream here: 02:44:605 (5,6,7,8,1) -

03:15:303 (7,1) - overlapping again, please separate

03:29:605 (1,2) - separate these two a little bit, to look similar to this 03:30:128 (3,4) -

03:42:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - dude are you skystar or something... nearly fullscreen side to side jumps??? cmon man u dont overmap something like that when the music has proper rises and falls for you to map accurately to especially when the ending of the song is not matching that intensity, as i've pointed out in the spacing section of this mod!!!!

*CHANGE. THIS. lel*

sry for being a bit rough with this mod but honestly this diff isn't quite ready yet as there are many technical issues to be looked at and modified

lul ill add more when i have time

Daoski

201 posts

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2016-10-05T11:15:20+00:00

lul

Bandison

82 posts

Joined May 2016

Bandison 2016-10-12T17:31:59+00:00

#modreqs

Plaudible's Easy
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!111!!!!!!!11111211 Too small circles. Change CS to 3.

Normal

Better change name to 'Advanced'.

Dang, I want this to be ranked. Seriously.

youtune3

192 posts

Joined May 2015

youtune3 2016-10-12T19:41:05+00:00

[Easy]
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:59:256 - 03:02:744: why unmapped (besides 1 slider)

[Might As Well Be Advanced]
00:24:896 (2,3) - feels like a note could go here
00:30:826 (3,1) - ^
00:31:523 (2) - remove note
00:34:663 (2,3) - add note
00:55:419 (5,6) - feels to hard for a normal
01:10:000 (5,6) - ^
01:55:942 (4) - remove note
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:19:140 (5,6,7) - feels to hard for a normal
02:24:721 (5,6) - ^
02:30:303 (5,6,7) - ^
02:35:361 (4,5,6,7) - ^
02:41:465 (5,6) - ^
02:44:256 (2,3,4) - ^
02:47:047 (5,6) - ^
02:54:547 (3,1,2) - ^
02:57:686 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:21:756 (2,3,4) - ^
03:26:116 (5,6) -03:27:337 (2,3,4) - ^
03:34:489 - 03:42:337: ^

[Hard]
Looks Alright
Other Than 02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here

[Insane]
00:48:965 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps feel to hard for this difficulty
01:04:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata plz
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps plz
02:39:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata why do you keep collabing and making triangles ;-;-;-;
03:14:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:24:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - difficult jumps for someone who might just now be getting to do this difficulty
03:29:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:40:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Tell Me A Story]
(Better Diff Name [Dawn]) jkjk
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:17:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd
02:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:50:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:58:558 (7,8) - feel a little to far apart
03:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd
(not the best at modding high sr difficulties)

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-10-12T22:56:24+00:00

YDoku wrote:
SPOILER
[Easy]
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:59:256 - 03:02:744: why unmapped (besides 1 slider)

[Might As Well Be Advanced]
00:24:896 (2,3) - feels like a note could go here Fixed
00:30:826 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
00:31:523 (2) - remove note Fixed
00:34:663 (2,3) - add note Fixed
00:55:419 (5,6) - feels to hard for a normal Fixed
01:10:000 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:55:942 (4) - remove note Fixed
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:19:140 (5,6,7) - feels to hard for a normal Fixed
02:24:721 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
02:30:303 (5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
02:35:361 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
02:41:465 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
02:44:256 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
02:47:047 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
02:54:547 (3,1,2) - ^ Fixed
02:57:686 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
03:21:756 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:26:116 (5,6) -03:27:337 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:34:489 - 03:42:337: ^ Fixed

[Hard]
Looks Alright
Other Than 02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here

[Insane]
00:48:965 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps feel to hard for this difficulty Makes sense, Fixed xD
01:04:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata plz Fixed
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here I think the map has enough breaks and don't need more since the first one is big enough
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps plz Fixed
02:39:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata why do you keep collabing and making triangles ;-;-;-; Fixed
03:14:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
03:24:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - difficult jumps for someone who might just now be getting to do this difficulty Fixed
03:29:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:40:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Fixed

[Tell Me A Story]
(Better Diff Name [Dawn]) jkjk
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here Same as the insanel
02:17:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd Improved the jumps shape, fixed
02:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ Can't see anything odd here, the jumps are not confusing and i think it fits the difficulty
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
02:50:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ same
02:58:558 (7,8) - feel a little to far apart Fixed
03:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd same
(not the best at modding high sr difficulties)

Thx for the mod

fixes done

Last edited by TeeJoe 2016-10-16T01:29:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Screwdrivers

40 posts

Joined December 2013

Screwdrivers 2016-10-15T01:59:41+00:00

awesome mapset dude

Tell Me A Story:

Sliders like 01:07:279 (1) look pretty bad and out of place (to me), but otherwise this diff seems great

Insane:

00:42:163 (1) - i think it'd play better if this slider ended on the red tick
00:43:384 (5) - maybe space this more to look better
02:12:337 (5,6,7) - a reverse slider would be more fitting

Hard:

00:43:035 (2,3,4) - I think a reverse slider should be here too
00:53:849 (2,3) - aaaaa these look so ugly, maybe ctrl+h (2) and move (3) so that they're not touching
00:59:954 (3) - though im not a big fan of this pattern overall, i think ctrl+j on this slider would make it look better if u keep it
03:42:163 (1,2,3,4) - just wanted to say that I really like this

im actually really glad someone mapped the full version of this song, have some stars <3

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-10-15T13:28:25+00:00

Screwdrivers wrote:
SPOILER
awesome mapset dude

Tell Me A Story:

Sliders like 01:07:279 (1) look pretty bad and out of place (to me), but otherwise this diff seems great For some reason I agree with that XD, I reshaped all of them

Insane:

00:42:163 (1) - i think it'd play better if this slider ended on the red tick Fixed
00:43:384 (5) - maybe space this more to look better I don't think so, since the song gets more calm right before the chorus, so making it more spaced wouldn't fit imo
02:12:337 (5,6,7) - a reverse slider would be more fitting Fixed

Hard:

00:43:035 (2,3,4) - I think a reverse slider should be here too Fixed
00:53:849 (2,3) - aaaaa these look so ugly, maybe ctrl+h (2) and move (3) so that they're not touching Fixed
00:59:954 (3) - though im not a big fan of this pattern overall, i think ctrl+j on this slider would make it look better if u keep it Fixed, remade all the sliders on that part
03:42:163 (1,2,3,4) - just wanted to say that I really like this :D

im actually really glad someone mapped the full version of this song, have some stars <3

Thank you so so much for the mod and for the stars

I really appreciate that and that helps me a lot

MouseEasy

1,391 posts

Joined April 2012

MouseEasy 2016-10-15T16:39:54+00:00

mod mais estético mesmo, a jogabilidade ta massa

Tell Me A Story

00:23:675 (8) - Alinha o começo desse slider com o começo desse outro 00:22:628 (1) -
00:35:535 (2) - Coloca em cima dessa 00:34:401 (4) -
00:34:837 (8,1) - faz blanketzinho
00:35:884 (4,5,6) - Troca esse triple de lugar e tempo, poe ele no lugar dessa nota 00:35:709 (3) - Exemplo1 Exemplo2
01:07:279 (1,2) - levanta um pouco mais essa nota 01:07:803 (2) -, ela ficou em cima do slider. Exemplo
01:58:384 (4) - move pra baixo, deixa assim
01:58:907 (1,2,3) - podia deixar esse slider alinhado com essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - , e fazer essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - com um blanket no sliderzão 01:58:907 (1) - Exemplo
02:00:303 (1,1) - Pode pegar essa nota e slider e jogar um pouco pra baixo, fazendo um ) junto com esse slider 01:59:954 (4) - Exemplo
02:01:175 (2) - Depois talvez um blanket com essa nota (não é necessario)

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-10-15T17:15:35+00:00

MouseEasy wrote:
SPOILER
mod mais estético mesmo, a jogabilidade ta massa

Tell Me A Story

00:23:675 (8) - Alinha o começo desse slider com o começo desse outro 00:22:628 (1) -
00:35:535 (2) - Coloca em cima dessa 00:34:401 (4) -
00:34:837 (8,1) - faz blanketzinho
00:35:884 (4,5,6) - Troca esse triple de lugar e tempo, poe ele no lugar dessa nota 00:35:709 (3) - Exemplo1 Exemplo2
01:07:279 (1,2) - levanta um pouco mais essa nota 01:07:803 (2) -, ela ficou em cima do slider. Exemplo
01:58:384 (4) - move pra baixo, deixa assim
01:58:907 (1,2,3) - podia deixar esse slider alinhado com essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - , e fazer essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - com um blanket no sliderzão 01:58:907 (1) - Exemplo
02:00:303 (1,1) - Pode pegar essa nota e slider e jogar um pouco pra baixo, fazendo um ) junto com esse slider 01:59:954 (4) - Exemplo
02:01:175 (2) - Depois talvez um blanket com essa nota (não é necessario)

Velho valeu pelo mod :D fez eu reparar em varios bagulho q eu n tinha percebido antes

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2016-10-15T18:55:04+00:00

hello
my mod ^^

Easy

00:21:930 (2) - Not very comfortable position for new players tbh.
00:24:023 (3) - Try moving it little bit to the right and downwards
00:25:419 (5) - Overlaps are very confusing for new players. Try to avoid those.
00:29:605 (5) - Overlap.
00:32:744 (2) - Overlap
00:35:186 (1) - Try moving it little bit downwards it feels very weird.
00:39:372 (2) - Overlap.
00:40:768 (4) - ^
00:40:768 (4) - Why spinner there? Delete spinner and instead put some sliders and circles.
00:58:558 (5) - Overlap.
01:18:442 (1) - This removes constant beat in the song which is made out of circles and sliders. With this long slider it feels weird because there isn't any change in the beat. Fix that.
00:55:419 (2) - Object's end is off screen.
03:24:023 (1) - Overlap.

Normal

00:21:233 (1,2,3,4) - Weird flow. Instead put two sliders.
00:24:023 (1) - Change of direction isn't comfortable in Easy and Normal. Keep the flow same direction the slider is pointing at. At least try to.
00:26:116 (2,1) - There it is again.
00:32:396 (1,2,1) - This spacing is different from previous few sliders. Try using DS.
00:35:535 (1,2) - Too big pause between beats.
In this diff beat isn't constant and there are lots of pauses between the two beats.
00:40:768 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is an example of what I said above.
00:45:651 (2,3,4) - Kinda looks like stream. Change that.
00:47:744 (1,2,3,4) - Another example.
00:58:209 (2,3,4) - Looks like little stream again. Fix.
It's basically like that whole map. Non constant beat than notes sticked together like streams.
01:07:279 (1,2,1,2,3) - Again with bigger pauses.
Try getting a GD for this diff.
03:03:093 (1,2) - Bad flow.
03:04:489 (1) - Bad flow.

Hard

00:22:977 (3) - No, too big spacing. Put on Distance Snap.
I won't even say how bad this diff is tbh but even I was like that long ago

00:45:826 (4) - Overlap.
00:46:000 (5,1) - Uncomfortable flow again.
Basically try watching this and it will help you a lot

Insane

00:24:023 (1) - Uncomfortable flow.
00:25:244 (8) - Try moving it somewhere else making a jump instead.
00:32:919 (4,5,6,7,8) - Diffs with random jumps are hardly getting ranked. Please consider that :3
Everything else seems fin but the jumps. Try and turn on Distance Snap while making them.

Tell me a story

This whole diff seems a bit messy and the jumps are pretty random too. As I said in your Insane please try to keep your jumps and your diffs neater. Thanks and good luck.

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-10-15T20:55:55+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
SPOILER
hello
my mod ^^

Easy
00:21:930 (2) - Not very comfortable position for new players tbh.
00:24:023 (3) - Try moving it little bit to the right and downwards
00:25:419 (5) - Overlaps are very confusing for new players. Try to avoid those.
00:29:605 (5) - Overlap.
00:32:744 (2) - Overlap
00:35:186 (1) - Try moving it little bit downwards it feels very weird.
00:39:372 (2) - Overlap.
00:40:768 (4) - ^
00:40:768 (4) - Why spinner there? Delete spinner and instead put some sliders and circles.
00:58:558 (5) - Overlap.
01:18:442 (1) - This removes constant beat in the song which is made out of circles and sliders. With this long slider it feels weird because there isn't any change in the beat. Fix that.
00:55:419 (2) - Object's end is off screen.
03:24:023 (1) - Overlap.

Normal
00:21:233 (1,2,3,4) - Weird flow. Instead put two sliders.
00:24:023 (1) - Change of direction isn't comfortable in Easy and Normal. Keep the flow same direction the slider is pointing at. At least try to.
00:26:116 (2,1) - There it is again.
00:32:396 (1,2,1) - This spacing is different from previous few sliders. Try using DS.
00:35:535 (1,2) - Too big pause between beats.
In this diff beat isn't constant and there are lots of pauses between the two beats.
00:40:768 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is an example of what I said above.
00:45:651 (2,3,4) - Kinda looks like stream. Change that.
00:47:744 (1,2,3,4) - Another example.
00:58:209 (2,3,4) - Looks like little stream again. Fix.
It's basically like that whole map. Non constant beat than notes sticked together like streams.
01:07:279 (1,2,1,2,3) - Again with bigger pauses.
Try getting a GD for this diff.
03:03:093 (1,2) - Bad flow.
03:04:489 (1) - Bad flow.

Hard
00:22:977 (3) - No, too big spacing. Put on Distance Snap.
I won't even say how bad this diff is tbh but even I was like that long ago
00:45:826 (4) - Overlap.
00:46:000 (5,1) - Uncomfortable flow again.
Basically try watching this and it will help you a lot

Insane
00:24:023 (1) - Uncomfortable flow.
00:25:244 (8) - Try moving it somewhere else making a jump instead.
00:32:919 (4,5,6,7,8) - Diffs with random jumps are hardly getting ranked. Please consider that :3
Everything else seems fin but the jumps. Try and turn on Distance Snap while making them.

Tell me a story
This whole diff seems a bit messy and the jumps are pretty random too. As I said in your Insane please try to keep your jumps and your diffs neater. Thanks and good luck.

Fun fact: I never turn off distance snap while mapping.
A little advice for you, just mod what you know about.
Btw, that normal mod was the only useful part of your 'whole' mod. Thanks for that anyway, it was kinda helpful since I haven't tried to map none so far.

I wont reply anything related to this, so don't even waste your time

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-10-15T22:50:28+00:00

re-made GD

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - Horizons ft. Veela.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44954
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22628,44954,67279,89605,111930,134256,156582,178907,201233,223558
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8200002

[Metadata]
Title:Horizons
TitleUnicode:Horizons
Artist:Feint ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:Feint ft. Veela
Creator:TeeJoe
Version:Plaudible's Easys
Source:
Tags:techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody jump flow reading stream
BeatmapID:1012672
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.85
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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2,123293,129796
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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just change diff name from Easys to Easy, srry xd

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-10-16T14:21:21+00:00

Plaudible's Easy

[Plaudible's Easy]

00:31:698 (2,4) - A blanket can look better than a triangle. If you move (3), you can make a blanket enter 2 & 4.

00:47:744 (1) - You need to curve this slider a bit to do a better blanket

00:49:140 (3) - Same

00:55:070 (3) - Delete the whistle sound during the slider (not at the end), it sounds really bad.

01:04:489 (1) - Make a bligger overlap or delete it, this tiny overlap is not useful.

01:12:163 (4) - This slider looks a bit ugly, why not curve it a bit less ?

01:28:209 (3) - Whistle at the begginning

01:28:907 (4) - Same

01:29:605 (1) - Finish

01:28:907 (4,1) - Improve blanket

02:01:698 (3) - A bigger wave can looks better

02:58:209 (4,1) - Improve blanket

03:07:279 (1,2) - Make a bligger overlap or delete it, this tiny overlap is not useful.

03:33:442 (3,4) - Curve more the sliders for a better pattern, these blankets can be improved

03:42:861 (4,1) - Improve blanket

Normal

[Normal]

00:22:628 (1,1) - Overlap

00:37:977 (1,2) - This slider blanket is to improve

00:45:651 (2,1) - Blanket to improve

01:00:477 (4,5) - Why the beginning of (5) isn't in front of (4) ?

01:02:396 (2,1) - Looks a bit weird but okay O.O

01:06:582 (5,3) - Overlap

01:11:465 (1,2) - This pattern looks bad, it can be better if you move (2) just a bit lower

01:53:326 (1,2) - Blanket ?

01:58:907 (1) - The red point of this slider makes the blanket weird

02:01:698 (1) - Move it a bit upper

I know the diff wan't complete, but improve a diff is never a problem :3

Hard

[Hard]

00:25:419 (1,3) - Problem with stack ?

00:36:233 (5,3) - Overlap

00:37:977 (1,2) - Improve blanket

00:39:721 (3,5) - This overlap isn't really cool to see...

00:41:814 (3,1) - Blanket ?

00:49:314 (4,6) - This overlap OK... But not that one 00:49:314 (4,5) -

00:51:582 (5,2) - Overlap

02:32:396 (1,3) - Blanket ?

02:51:233 (3,1,2) - A triangle can looks cool, but a double overlap...

02:55:419 - Add circle

03:37:977 (1,3) - Overlap

---------------------------------------------
That's all for my mod.
I just love this music and I hope to see it ranked !
Good luck for the next !

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-10-17T10:45:32+00:00

Lexis wrote:
SPOILER
[Normal]

00:22:628 (1,1) - Overlap Fixed

00:37:977 (1,2) - This slider blanket is to improve Fixed

00:45:651 (2,1) - Blanket to improve Fixed

01:00:477 (4,5) - Why the beginning of (5) isn't in front of (4) ? Fixed

01:02:396 (2,1) - Looks a bit weird but okay O.O Fixed, this pattern may appear in late kiais, just realized in here it wasnt a good idea tho

01:06:582 (5,3) - Overlap Fixed

01:11:465 (1,2) - This pattern looks bad, it can be better if you move (2) just a bit lower Nah, I made it aligned with the direction of the reverse lil slider, don't think it's that bad

01:53:326 (1,2) - Blanket ? Fixed

01:58:907 (1) - The red point of this slider makes the blanket weird Fixed

02:01:698 (1) - Move it a bit upper Fixed

I know the diff wan't complete, but improve a diff is never a problem :3

[Hard]

00:25:419 (1,3) - Problem with stack ? Fixed

00:36:233 (5,3) - Overlap Fixed

00:37:977 (1,2) - Improve blanket Fixed

00:39:721 (3,5) - This overlap isn't really cool to see... Fixed

00:41:814 (3,1) - Blanket ? Fixed

00:49:314 (4,6) - This overlap OK... But not that one 00:49:314 (4,5) - Fixed

00:51:582 (5,2) - Overlap Fixed

02:32:396 (1,3) - Blanket ? Fixed

02:51:233 (3,1,2) - A triangle can looks cool, but a double overlap... Fixed

02:55:419 - Add circle Fixed, made lil different, works tho

03:37:977 (1,3) - Overlap Fixed

---------------------------------------------
That's all for my mod.
I just love this music and I hope to see it ranked !
Good luck for the next !

Thanks for the mod

I rly appreciated this more aesthetic mod

Last edited by TeeJoe 2016-10-22T14:33:33+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-10-17T23:20:30+00:00

Lexis wrote:
Plaudible's Easy
[Plaudible's Easy]

00:31:698 (2,4) - A blanket can look better than a triangle. If you move (3), you can make a blanket enter 2 & 4. honestly, it may be visible in editor, but in play itself I thnk it's fine, will get more opinions on this though.
00:47:744 (1) - You need to curve this slider a bit to do a better blanket tweaked a bit

00:49:140 (3) - Same this one's fine

00:55:070 (3) - Delete the whistle sound during the slider (not at the end), it sounds really bad. TJ did hitsound, gonna ignore rest of hitsounds since they're up to him.

01:04:489 (1) - Make a bligger overlap or delete it, this tiny overlap is not useful.slightly bigger.

01:12:163 (4) - This slider looks a bit ugly, why not curve it a bit less ? agreed, done

01:28:209 (3) - Whistle at the begginning

01:28:907 (4) - Same

01:29:605 (1) - Finish

01:28:907 (4,1) - Improve blanket done

02:01:698 (3) - A bigger wave can looks better bigger'd

02:58:209 (4,1) - Improve blanket shore

03:07:279 (1,2) - Make a bligger overlap or delete it, this tiny overlap is not useful. kk

03:33:442 (3,4) - Curve more the sliders for a better pattern, these blankets can be improved nah

03:42:861 (4,1) - Improve blanket this ones ok

ty for mod ^^

box ful of meme

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44954
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Artist:Feint ft. Veela
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Creator:TeeJoe
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Net0

1,238 posts

Joined October 2014

Net0 2016-10-25T20:39:00+00:00

#modreqs

[General]

Tags This are your current tags “techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody jump flow reading stream” I’m not sure about using jump/flow/reading/stream . This are not something that relate yourmapset to other similar ones, but rather relates them to all osu! maps. You could probably add however this; upbeat full version
Disable widescreen support in all difficulites if you’re not going to use a storyboard
The difficulty spread seems to be a bit big from normal to hard compared to how it works in the other diffs; easy-normal and insane-extra. I believe it’s fine but for most people this gap will be an issue.

[

Easy]

1. Ctrol+g this 00:21:233 (1) - and then this 00:21:930 (2) - to prevent reading problems in the stack 00:21:233 (1,1) -
2. About the combos; the main vocal is not following according to the mp3 the main downbeat (big white tick) what makes it hard to structure combos but I’ll suggest something based on the lyrics;
  00:21:233 (1,2) –
  00:22:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) –
  00:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –
  00:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –
  00:39:372 (1,2,3) –
  This is organized following this Idea;
  00:22:977 (2) - From her bed, you'll hear her say
  00:28:558 (2) - "There are horizons floating in my brain"
  00:34:489 (2) - From her world, you'll feel her say
  00:39:721 (2) - "Tell me the story, I don't wanna feel my pain"
  All the NCs are on the main instrument while the second object of each combo is starting with the lyrics. Make sure to apply this in the entire difficulty.
  If you don’t like this idea you need to at least make this first part similar to what you have done here
  01:51:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –
  In order to do that I’ll tell you how to fix it:
  Remove NC 00:24:023 (1) - 00:26:814 (1) - 00:37:977 (1) –
  Add NC 00:25:419 (5) - 00:28:209 (6) - 00:36:582 (5) - 00:39:372 (4) -
3. Apply rotation here 01:04:489 (1) – in “-6º” to avoid the overlap
4. Move 01:29:605 (1) – to stack with this 01:28:209 (3) - sliderhead insteand of the sliderend

[

Normal]

Move this 00:25:070 (3) – to x:256 y:96 to both improve structure ( because of the stack done with 00:27:512 (2) -) and flow because of the linear idea.
Rotate this 00:29:605 (1) – in “+24º” to improve the aesthetics
Blanket improvement: 00:42:163 (1,2) – you need to change the middle anchor point to x:306 y:91 and the sliderend to x:314 y:14.
The gap here is enough reason to break the DS rule 00:43:035 (2,1) – but be careful by not doing this in all breaks because some people don’t approve this.
You can avoid this small overlap 01:06:582 (5,2) – if you move 01:07:977 (2) – to x:394 y:336 it won’t affect the distance.
Rotate this 01:53:326 (1) - “-1º” to improve blanket
^01:54:721 (1) – in “+2º” in case you apply this I recommend you apply the one bellow as well to fix DS and flow
I have a suggestion for this as well 01:55:419 (2) -. Move it to x:371 y:116 and rotate it “+15º”
No hitsounds at all 02:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1) –
Is it a bug or you didn’t do it?

[

Hard]

Always be careful with 1/2stacks like this 00:28:733 (2,3) – because they need to be consistently mapped. This one was mapped right at the start of the second phrase “There are horizons” so taking in account a good structure the second spot to stack is this 00:39:721 (2,3,4,5) – but you have mapped differently. You have two alternatives here: either you remove the stack or you make both stacked.
I believe you can avoid this overlap here 01:06:930 (4,2) -.
^01:09:896 (4,2) -
^01:19:837 (1,2) -
The distance here got really strange 01:26:814 (1,2,3,4) - . I mean this is a hard diff and you have more freedom in spacing but you’re going from 3 objects 01:26:814 (1,2,3) – each of them 1,3x to a 2,6x 01:27:337 (4) -. This is the sort of jump you expect on Insane diffs not on hards. If you want to increase DS I’m not against, but do it steadly. Go from 1,3x-1,5x 1,7x1,9x I’d suggest but honestly I don’t see why giving so much spacing here 01:27:337 (4) -
Same issue 02:14:954 (3,4,5,1) -

Se eu tivesse mais tempo daria mod nas ultimas diffs mas eu to meio corrido. Qualquer dúvida caso você não entenda o mod por estar em inglês me avisa que agente conversa IRC. Mapa legal, bom ver que vc está indo na direção de mapear full versions. Boa sorte

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-10-26T11:04:20+00:00

Net0 wrote:
SPOILER
#modreqs
[General]
Tags This are your current tags “techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody jump flow reading stream” I’m not sure about using jump/flow/reading/stream . This are not something that relate yourmapset to other similar ones, but rather relates them to all osu! maps. You could probably add however this; upbeat full version
Disable widescreen support in all difficulites if you’re not going to use a storyboard
The difficulty spread seems to be a bit big from normal to hard compared to how it works in the other diffs; easy-normal and insane-extra. I believe it’s fine but for most people this gap will be an issue.

[Normal]
Move this 00:25:070 (3) – to x:256 y:96 to both improve structure ( because of the stack done with 00:27:512 (2) -) and flow because of the linear idea. That's true, fixed
Rotate this 00:29:605 (1) – in “+24º” to improve the aesthetics Fixed
Blanket improvement: 00:42:163 (1,2) – you need to change the middle anchor point to x:306 y:91 and the sliderend to x:314 y:14. Fixed it my way, actually I didn't see this as a big deal, but even though I improved the big slider shape
The gap here is enough reason to break the DS rule 00:43:035 (2,1) – but be careful by not doing this in all breaks because some people don’t approve this. Not quite sure how I supposed to leave this. Increased the distance of the slider anyway, Fixed
You can avoid this small overlap 01:06:582 (5,2) – if you move 01:07:977 (2) – to x:394 y:336 it won’t affect the distance. Fixed
Rotate this 01:53:326 (1) - “-1º” to improve blanket Fixed
^01:54:721 (1) – in “+2º” in case you apply this I recommend you apply the one bellow as well to fix DS and flow Fixed
I have a suggestion for this as well 01:55:419 (2) -. Move it to x:371 y:116 and rotate it “+15º” Fixed my way
No hitsounds at all 02:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1) –
Is it a bug or you didn’t do it? I just have'nt finished hitsounding it yet, but the diff itself was ready for modding so I put it 100% done, I'll hitsound it all soon, easy as well

[Hard]
Always be careful with 1/2stacks like this 00:28:733 (2,3) – because they need to be consistently mapped. This one was mapped right at the start of the second phrase “There are horizons” so taking in account a good structure the second spot to stack is this 00:39:721 (2,3,4,5) – but you have mapped differently. You have two alternatives here: either you remove the stack or you make both stacked. Fixed
I believe you can avoid this overlap here 01:06:930 (4,2) -. Fixed
^01:09:896 (4,2) - fix
^01:19:837 (1,2) - o/
The distance here got really strange 01:26:814 (1,2,3,4) - . I mean this is a hard diff and you have more freedom in spacing but you’re going from 3 objects 01:26:814 (1,2,3) – each of them 1,3x to a 2,6x 01:27:337 (4) -. This is the sort of jump you expect on Insane diffs not on hards. If you want to increase DS I’m not against, but do it steadly. Go from 1,3x-1,5x 1,7x1,9x I’d suggest but honestly I don’t see why giving so much spacing here 01:27:337 (4) - Fixed
Same issue 02:14:954 (3,4,5,1) - Done , fixed
Se eu tivesse mais tempo daria mod nas ultimas diffs mas eu to meio corrido. Qualquer dúvida caso você não entenda o mod por estar em inglês me avisa que agente conversa IRC. Mapa legal, bom ver que vc está indo na direção de mapear full versions. Boa sorte

Vlw pelo mod

ajudou bastante, e já fazia tempo que eu não tava recebendo nenhum XD, espero conseguir rankear em breve isso aqui, o/

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-10-31T00:51:32+00:00

Net0 wrote:
[Easy]
Ctrol+g this 00:21:233 (1) - and then this 00:21:930 (2) - to prevent reading problems in the stack 00:21:233 (1,1) - shore, y not
About the combos; the main vocal is not following according to the mp3 the main downbeat (big white tick) what makes it hard to structure combos but I’ll suggest something based on the lyrics;
00:21:233 (1,2) –
00:22:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) –
00:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –
00:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –
00:39:372 (1,2,3) –
This is organized following this Idea;
00:22:977 (2) - From her bed, you'll hear her say
00:28:558 (2) - "There are horizons floating in my brain"
00:34:489 (2) - From her world, you'll feel her say
00:39:721 (2) - "Tell me the story, I don't wanna feel my pain"
All the NCs are on the main instrument while the second object of each combo is starting with the lyrics. Make sure to apply this in the entire difficulty.
If you don’t like this idea you need to at least make this first part similar to what you have done here
01:51:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –
In order to do that I’ll tell you how to fix it:
Remove NC 00:24:023 (1) - 00:26:814 (1) - 00:37:977 (1) –
Add NC 00:25:419 (5) - 00:28:209 (6) - 00:36:582 (5) - 00:39:372 (4) -
did the second option, easier to manage and follow if it's just consistent throughout the map, i prefer it :u thanks for the detailed explanation!

Apply rotation here 01:04:489 (1) – in “-6º” to avoid the overlap well, i was going for it on purpose but in hindsight it's pretty ugly, rotated
Move 01:29:605 (1) – to stack with this 01:28:209 (3) - sliderhead insteand of the sliderend kk

ty for mod <3

here u go

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44954
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22628,44954,67279,89605,111930,134256,156582,178907,201233,223558
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:Horizons
TitleUnicode:Horizons
Artist:Feint ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:Feint ft. Veela
Creator:TeeJoe
Version:Plaudible's Easy
Source:
Tags:techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody electronic build off of the record off of my head
BeatmapID:1012672
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[Difficulty]
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-Tooru-

4 posts

Joined June 2015

-Tooru- 2016-10-31T15:52:41+00:00

I don't really know what I'm doing, but here's a couple minor things. Good luck TeeJoe

SPOILER

Insane:
00:25:768 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This seems like too much circle density for an intro of this intensity level, on an insane map. Maybe a slider instead of the first (2,3) would be better?

02:50:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Since this pattern is fully stacked, I would suggest adding a NC to 02:51:233 (5) - to make it easier to read.

02:56:465 (2) - This circle looks visually out-of-place where it's currently sitting. Why not have it a bit more to the left, to align with the shape of the slider?

TeeJoe

41 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

TeeJoe 2016-11-02T11:33:04+00:00

-Tooru- wrote:
SPOILER
I don't really know what I'm doing, but here's a couple minor things. Good luck TeeJoe

Insane:
00:25:768 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This seems like too much circle density for an intro of this intensity level, on an insane map. Maybe a slider instead of the first (2,3) would be better?
Agreed, I don't know why i did something like that for an insane, but after all I know nothing about diffs 5* - XD, thanks

02:50:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Since this pattern is fully stacked, I would suggest adding a NC to 02:51:233 (5) - to make it easier to read.
That's true, flows better

02:56:465 (2) - This circle looks visually out-of-place where it's currently sitting. Why not have it a bit more to the left, to align with the shape of the slider? Tried and worked, thanks fixed

Thank you for the mod man, for a first mod you really pointed very interesting and useful stuff

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2016-11-02T18:24:09+00:00

irc mod

18:31 Miryle: asdfasdfsadf i suck.
18:32 Miryle: can't play anything higher than insane so I'll just tell you what I thought of it
18:32 Miryle: unless you don't need me to
18:32 TeeJoe:

18:32 TeeJoe: no problem
18:32 TeeJoe: you played pretty good
18:32 TeeJoe: o.o
18:32 TeeJoe: 97.98%
18:32 Miryle: well i shitmissed
18:32 Miryle: xD
18:33 Miryle: like that triple in the beginning
18:33 Miryle: first noticeable thing that annoyed me was the hitsound volume
18:33 Miryle: I get what you're trying to do but
18:33 Miryle: It's TOO soft imo
18:33 Miryle: 10% isn't good feedback ._.
18:34 Miryle: try 20-25 instead
18:34 Miryle: and increase by 10% as you already are
18:34 TeeJoe: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
18:34 TeeJoe: o.o
18:34 TeeJoe: keep talking
18:34 TeeJoe:

18:34 Miryle: also
18:34 Miryle: 1. Offset: 303ms BPM: 172.00
18:34 Miryle: wait what
18:34 Miryle: 00:21:233 -
18:34 Miryle: there are two green points here with two different volume settings
18:34 Miryle: xD
18:34 TeeJoe: deleted
18:34 TeeJoe:

18:35 TeeJoe: btw
18:35 Miryle: Hm?~
18:35 TeeJoe: after you point all of those things you could just save this log and post in the thread
18:35 TeeJoe: so i can give you kudosu
18:35 TeeJoe: if you have more things to point out
18:35 Miryle: well that actually
18:35 Miryle: would be nice
18:35 Miryle: Okay then I'll mod this diff fully since you offered
18:36 Miryle: and if you don't mind
18:36 Miryle: I may be a bit nazi
18:36 Miryle: just a little bit
18:36 TeeJoe: fixed those things
18:36 Miryle: 00:26:989 (2,3) - this tho
18:36 TeeJoe: volume 10~20 fixed to 20~25
18:36 Miryle: okay~
18:36 Miryle: the placement of that 2 and 3 look really weird lol
18:37 Miryle: 00:30:826 (6,3) - could stack these if you wanted to
18:37 Miryle: 00:32:570 (2) - add this too to the mix if you feel like it
18:37 Miryle: 00:33:442 (7) - and this xD
18:38 Miryle: just a massive stack of notes cuz atm all notes in that area are just around somewhere and it triggers me. You don't have to stack them tho
18:39 Miryle: 00:42:686 (3,4) - ugly overlap q.q
18:40 Miryle: 00:47:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part isn't mapped to the vocals yet for most of the parts afterwards you have a certain pattern for the vocals, it ruins consistency
18:41 Miryle: 01:14:256 (1,2) - blanket fix q.q
18:42 Miryle: 01:22:628 (1,2,3) - why not do the same thing you did at 01:25:419 (1,2,3) -
18:42 Miryle: 01:25:419 (1,2,3) - plays better imo
18:43 Miryle: 01:51:930 (1) - this slider end isn't snapped to 1/4 which I assume it should be
18:43 Miryle: also check aimod for the rest of the duplicate timing points x.x
18:43 Miryle: seems there are 4 of them
18:44 Miryle: 01:53:500 (2,4) - idk about this overlap
18:45 Miryle: played a little awkwardly
18:45 Miryle: 01:59:954 (4,5,1) - also these can be spaced more, feels too cramped
18:45 Miryle: idek if I still have you, you're so silent ;-;
18:46 Miryle: 02:39:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - y u no map to vocals like before ;-;
18:47 Miryle: 02:46:000 (5,1,2) - possible to read but a pain to do so, maybe move 02:46:523 (2) - down more
18:47 Miryle: 02:51:930 (1,1) - imperfect stacku~
18:47 TeeJoe: i'm reading just yo uto know
18:47 TeeJoe: i'm fixing hte stuff while reading
18:47 TeeJoe: XD
18:48 Miryle: Oh okay xD
18:48 Miryle: tell me what you don't agree with tho ;-;
18:48 TeeJoe: just keep going if you havent finished the mod
18:48 TeeJoe: sure
18:48 Miryle: okay
18:48 TeeJoe: so far so good tho
18:51 Miryle: holyshit
18:52 Miryle: just went mia
18:52 Miryle: back sorry about that
18:52 Miryle: 02:54:372 (6,2) - overlap dying
18:52 Miryle: 02:55:593 (8,10,11,1) - same
18:53 Miryle: 03:11:989 (2,4) - basically an overlap triggered (nazi)
18:53 Miryle: 03:15:128 (2,1) - overlap dying
18:54 Miryle: 03:27:163 (2,1) - no stack?
18:55 TeeJoe: vtw
18:55 TeeJoe: 02:39:372 (1) -
18:56 TeeJoe: this part
18:56 TeeJoe: i decided to not map vocal with sliders becaus ethe map would be really repetitive
18:56 TeeJoe: i only make exceptions to normal and hard diffs
18:56 Miryle: but song is repetitive
18:56 Miryle: .___.
18:56 TeeJoe: yeah it is but
18:56 Miryle: it's fine if you want but it actually feels nicer playing to the vocals when it comes up
18:56 TeeJoe: repetitive mapping is boring af
18:58 Miryle: I think
18:58 Miryle: that's it
19:00 TeeJoe:

lemme finish fixing all those stuff
19:15 TeeJoe: omg this mod is really making me fix many stuff :O
19:15 TeeJoe: that's really good
19:15 Miryle: xD
19:22 TeeJoe: done
19:22 TeeJoe:

19:22 Miryle: Yay~
19:22 TeeJoe: thanks for that mod man
19:22 TeeJoe: girl
19:22 TeeJoe: idk your nick o.o
19:22 Miryle: I'm a guy lel
19:22 Miryle: Just call me Mir
19:22 TeeJoe: oh

thx man
19:23 TeeJoe: can you post this log on the thread?
19:23 TeeJoe: so i can give you kudosu
19:23 Miryle: Yesh~

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