Wiinter wrote:

Opop
01:56:888 (4) - sorry, a bit nazi >.> but consider placing this slider like this http://puu.sh/RQx
03:50:018 (6) - same nazi thing.. D: i'd place it like this http://puu.sh/RQJ
(change)
Nini
Approach Rate is a little fast imo.. Reduce it by one tick?(hmm....a little fast?ok,i will think about it.)
03:10:629 (1) - remove finish?(change)

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

由於完成度很高了, 我只有試玩, sliderscorepoint和followpoint很可愛!

[Opop]
- 略難(很苦惱呢.....要追加難度嗎？)

[Nini]
<00:18:301> (6,7) don't stack（change）
<01:10:171> (5,6) +spacing(^)
<02:34:446> (2,3,4) normal-normal 三連打加上背景的樂器 有點吵不太搭(我降低了音量，並且把3，4換成了S，應該會好點吧？)


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loveFantasy wrote:

[Opop]
<00:31:469> (6) 放在<00:31:240>?(change)
<00:45:209> (8) 多repeat一次, <00:46:354>放note(放了NOTE，但是没有RE，总觉得多一次RE后感觉怪怪的)
<00:58:720> (4,1) 建議不重疊（我相信玩家的实力XD.....好吧，其实是我懒....）
<01:28:491> (5) 修改一下形狀(像4),目前略醜（改了好几次，但是越改越丑，看看这个样可以吗？）
<01:40:400> (6,1) 建議不重疊（^）
<02:15:896> (4) 少repeat一次並在<02:16:821>擺note比較直覺些(^)
<03:57:575> 1.刪掉 或 2.跟5合成一個長slider 或 3.調整(5,6)的位置讓spacing一樣(我采用3调整了一下)
- 另外後面覺得擺這樣比較好看?（因为<03:57:575>改动过，所以我把这个顺序也改了....嘛，差不多？）

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Opop]
00:43:377 (4,5) - spacing.

00:43:377(4) - make a slider on a return of less than.move here 00:43:606
01:18:873 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:27:575 (4,5) - make them symmetrical
01:40:629 (1) - move here 01:40:858
ALL FIX

loveFantasy wrote:

在Playmode下1分58秒左右Storyboard中央會突然出現一條 1 pixel 的黑線, 半秒左右後不見
我在解析度1024x768下玩 (800x600和1024x600不會) [Vivi] 難度兩次都有 (其他難度沒注意), check一下

EDIT: 其他難度也有

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
似乎bg和视听bg不一样 试试重新传一次? 还不行的话找BAT试试?(这个...因为最开始的时候把BG弄错成辉夜的了，后来修正FULL一遍后发现试听BG还是没变...)
bpm:131? 前2个难度和后两个难度的bpm不一样 D: 这细微区别我听不太准O.O （0。0不一样？需要怎么调整？）

-Opop-（修正）
01:18:639 (2) - 卧槽有跳 还是把这个note去掉吧
04:01:922 (1) - 从后面白线上开始吧

-Nini-（修正...这是Hard难度，0.5X为了照顾新人嘛...（其实是我不知道要怎么弄了，试了好几次都觉得不舒服~_~））
0.5x有点蛋疼 本来1x就很慢了 ~_~
00:07:532 - 没用绿线 现在已经用不到提前放绿线了:O
00:24:364 (4) - spacing
00:41:769 (4) - 有些刺耳 把 whistle放到后面的(5)上?
01:48:067 没用绿线
04:00:089 ^
04:01:922 (1) - 结束在后面的黄线上似乎比较好? (1/8 beat)

Royal Flare wrote:

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
似乎bg和视听bg不一样 试试重新传一次? 还不行的话找BAT试试?(这个...因为最开始的时候把BG弄错成辉夜的了，后来修正FULL一遍后发现试听BG还是没变...)
bpm:131? 前2个难度和后两个难度的bpm不一样 D: 这细微区别我听不太准O.O （0。0不一样？需要怎么调整？）

-Opop-（修正）
01:18:639 (2) - 卧槽有跳 还是把这个note去掉吧
04:01:922 (1) - 从后面白线上开始吧

-Nini-（修正...这是Hard难度，0.5X为了照顾新人嘛...（其实是我不知道要怎么弄了，试了好几次都觉得不舒服~_~））
0.5x有点蛋疼 本来1x就很慢了 ~_~
00:07:532 - 没用绿线 现在已经用不到提前放绿线了:O
00:24:364 (4) - spacing
00:41:769 (4) - 有些刺耳 把 whistle放到后面的(5)上?
01:48:067 没用绿线
04:00:089 ^
04:01:922 (1) - 结束在后面的黄线上似乎比较好? (1/8 beat)

Kitsuneko wrote:

Hi Royal Flare
You had broken our queue's rule a little.
but I do modding. Hereafter, please read the queue's rule.


01:58:486 (x) - seeing line of space at the center. but I cant give advice, have no knowledge of SB. sorry...

Nana's diff and Vivi's diff have unsnap break time. [url=http://gyazo.com/5655170a8ff481b7b3e125f82f3fb6bc.png]It is this green zone.[/url
Please move end of break time like this.

I didn't found problem for playing

nice skin, SB and map
good luck~

☆彡 star

S i R i R u wrote:

i'm not goo about Modding

so i'll try to write my opinio >x<

Opop



nini

I don't know how to check this. i'm noob about pattern style xd


vivi

00:18:296 (5) - new combo here ? and delete new combo here 00:18:410 (1)
00:36:731 (1) - i think add note here for follow the music is better

01:35:242 (5,1) - same opinion with 00:18:296 (5)
01:42:570 (4,1) - ^

01:59:059 (6) - delete note. i feel this note is not matching
02:40:509 (4) - ^
03:05:128 (2,3) - spacing ?



Nana

00:02:838 (8) - use Single note for this place is better for me.
00:05:357 (3) - try to extend the slider to 00:05:815 (00:05:357 ~ 00:05:815)
and delete 00:06:044 (4) . i think this note is not matching with music

00:10:166 (7) - same opinion with 00:02:838 (8)

00:15:433 - add note ? and use single note for 00:15:662 (1) > 00:15:891

01:35:357 (7) - stop at white line
01:36:044 - add note

03:40:853 (1,2,3) - i think use only 1 is good

akrolsmir wrote:

Opop:not all change,because I want to keep some my own ideas
Slider tick rate of 1?
00:48:410 (2) - When I was a beginner, playing easy maps, I found this kind of quick stacking beneath a slider to be confusing, maybe space it out instead of stacking?
01:13:372 (4,5) - Unfortunately, these aren't identical. Though you copied and pasted it, the original slider had it's endpoint not on the end circle, so that meant when you reversed the copy, the start point shifted and made the copy not identical to the original. Change it from:

SPOILER

to:

and copy again, which should make (4,5) more even.
01:22:074- Add a note here?
01:27:570 (4) - Kind of misshapen, (5) looks better.
01:36:731- Again, add a note?
01:42:227 (4,5) - See 01:13:372 (4,5)
01:59:173 (1,2) - Make these two identical
02:09:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move these 1/2 beat back, to land on white ticks? If so, get 02:13:143 (1) - to start 1/2 beat later as well, ending at the same place.I think that if do this,it well be another rhythm which I don't like
02:47:265 (4) - Move the two middle nodes 2 grids right to have it be parallel to (3)
02:51:845- Add a note?enn...I don't think that add a note at here is a good idea.It well break the balance which make by Audio Volume
02:59:173- ^^
03:22:532 (8,9) - Neither of these are perfect, but make one identical to the other
03:36:273 (1,2) - ^. You could also make them symmetric.
03:47:723 (2) - see 00:48:410 (2)

Nini:change
Slider tick rate of 1?
The sliders that are supposed to be simple arcs tend not to be symmetrical, even on the ones that look like they are supposed to be. Check out this guide to see how to fix this.

00:38:563 (6) - Shift up middle nodes for symmetry?
01:07:189 (4) - Slider velocity change here felt awkward
02:06:960 (2,4) - Make one a copy of the other
02:13:372 (8) - Make this a copy of (5)?
03:29:860 (3) - ^

deepsea wrote:

[Opop]

03:47:036 (1,2) - Stack under slider end isn't that good in an Easy imo but its not first chorus of music so it's still fine if you don't change it.enn....I think that it 's a little hard for beginner,but I 'm sure they can pass it XDD

[Nini] / [Vivi] / [Nana]

This three diffs are fine themselves but isn't a good spread. It's just like [0.9Hard] [Hard] [1.1Hard]. I suggest make [Nini] easier and keep [Vivi] and [Nana] as it is since they have different styles and this song doesn't need an insane map imo.OK,I well make NINI easier...but I think it's already enough easy

Beautiful song and good work for a newer, starred.