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* is mostly general statements and I use this to denote important mods to check through over again for myself
00:24:186 (24186|5,24186|2) - Personally think you can find a way to accent this instrument as the hat after this piano chord is the same note count
00:36:590 - Put a note (for hammer) on 5 to be consistent with the hammers here
00:38:032 (38032|0) - Suggesting to move to the right by 1 since this piano sequence here isn't actually a trill so i'm suggesting something to avoid that
* 00:45:532 (45532|1) - Taking note that this section (from this timeframe forwards) is a repeat of the previous section (from this timeframe backwards), this section is slightly more intense with the introduction with more instrumentals (drums in particular), so I'm suggesting to beef up the note density/layering here by throwing extra notes on more prominent drums
00:45:917 (45917|2) - Just an example, I felt that this was rather underemphasized due to the heavy kick and clap in the music here
00:57:840 - Rather understandable if you can't fit this idea in but:
Felt that it'd be great if you can somehow map in piano graces on (for example): 00:59:378 (59378|5,59955|3,60724|3) - 01:03:128 (63128|4) - and so on
01:05:436 (65436|5) - Think it's better if you shift this down by 1/4, this is to emphasize the sound there and prevent chart from being way too smooth when there are accents in the music
01:10:788 (70788|4) - Felt that it plays better on column 7, but then again this section is slightly mindblockable since you can't sweep 4567 for 01:11:109 (71109|4,71205|5,71237|3,71301|6) - so idk what you plan to do
01:24:859 (84859|5) - Consider making this a 3 note chord for a piano chord here
* 01:27:840 (87840|6,87840|3,87904|5,87936|2,87968|4,88032|3,88032|0,88096|1,88128|4,88160|2) - Tons of ghost notes here, might want to rethink patterning here
* 01:30:532 (90532|2) - The 1/6 stream starts from here actually, i guess you can repattern this
* 01:32:455 (92455|6,94570|6) - Personally quite dislike this section due to linearity of layering and pretty much the lack of layering towards the drum here, I would suggest something like:
It's a rough pattern but shows the idea of how you can do a double 1/6 stream layer here instead of a 1-off piano layer
01:37:263 (97263|5,97263|4,97327|1,97327|2,97391|4,97391|5,97455|6,97455|0,97455|3) - Think that you can differentiate the different instrument used here by making it:
* 01:41:974 (101974|2,102070|3) - Not sure if you wanna map this 1/8 in
01:45:340 (105340|6,105404|5,105468|4,105532|3) - Quite sure this is 1/8
01:46:878 (106878|4,106878|1,106974|5,106974|2,107070|3,107070|6,107070|0,107167|4,107167|1,107167|5,107263|3,107263|6,107263|2,107359|1,107359|5,107455|2,107455|3,107455|4,107455|0) - Chord here seem to emphasize on the wrong instrument? Especially with 01:47:455 (107455|2,107455|3,107455|0,107455|4) - ,a 4 note chord here doesn't feel right as it's comparitively softer
01:50:051 (110051|3) - You missed a chord here
01:50:243 (110243|5) - Don't see a reason for a chord
01:52:455 (112455|4) - Either remove this or map the 1/4 before it that is blank, they are both hats and I'm not sure why you missed that one out and mapped this in
01:54:763 (114763|2,114763|4) - Emphasize the last chord somehow since it's stronger with the drum
* 01:54:090 (114090|2,114090|5,114186|4,114186|1,114282|3,114282|0,114378|4,114378|1,114474|5,114474|2,114570|3,114570|6,114667|1,114667|5) - Adding onto that, you can probably make this denser as it's comparatively more intense than the previous piano section
01:54:955 (114955|6,115147|4) - Sounds like a chord, if it is actually a chord then make the thing a chord i guess
01:56:301 (116301|4,116301|2) - Might want to make this a 3 note chord since there's a kick here and it's quite notice-able
* 02:01:298 (121298|0,121298|6,121394|2,121587|4,121587|5,121587|0,121587|6) - Personally think these sounds can be more emphasized through hammering and what not
02:08:221 (128221|2,128221|5) - Suggesting a 3 note chord to differentiate itself from other chords here
* 02:08:798 (128798|6) - Piano is 1/8 here actually, would be best if you can do that but 1/6 would be arguably ok if you can't think of anything
02:17:548 (137548|4) - Think you can emphasize this a bit more
02:20:112 (140112|4,140112|5,140176|1,140176|2,140241|5,140241|6) - Quite sure these are 1/12 early, shift them 1/12 later (redundance for clarification)
* 02:21:106 (141106|6) - Piano is 1/8 again, if you wanna restructure
* 02:27:773 (147773|2,147837|1,147837|0,147837|6,147837|5) - Would be *really* great if you can grace this piano to the right (there are more snaps here btw, approximation is allowed here since it's not that audible of a snap)
* 02:34:760 (154760|6,154760|5,154856|4,154856|3,154952|0,154952|1,155048|2,155048|3,155144|6,155144|5,155241|3,155241|4,155337|0,155337|1,155433|2,155433|3,155529|5,155529|4,155529|6) - There are variety of instruments here, I'm quite sure a non-linear/non-repeating pattern would be better
02:37:644 (157644|0,157709|2,157773|4) - This should be 1/8
02:40:000 (160000|1,160048|2,160096|3) - Think this is 1/6 and 02:40:289 (160289|2) - this is probably a ghost note
* 02:41:394 (161394|5,161491|3,161491|2) - Doesn't really make sense when you map this drum instrument then totally ignore it after 02:41:875 (161875|4,161875|5) - , not sure what you're planning here basically
02:43:221 (163221|0,163221|6,163221|2) - Pretty sure this can be heavier than a 3 note chord
02:44:712 (164712|6) - Shift this to the above 1/12
02:44:888 (164888|2) - Shift this to the below 1/16
02:45:209 (165209|1) - Shift this to the above 1/16
02:51:539 (171539|5) - Shift this to the below 1/12
02:51:747 (171747|4) - Shift this to the below 1/16
02:52:837 (172837|3) - Shift this to the below 1/16
02:53:093 (173093|3) - Shift this to the below 1/12
02:53:446 (173446|1) - Shift this to the above 1/16
02:53:734 (173734|4) - Shift this to the below 1/16
02:54:151 (174151|3) - Shift this to the above 1/16
02:54:343 (174343|2) - Shift this to the below 1/16
02:56:683 (176683|2,176779|4) - Think you can CTRL+H this for the hammer effect
02:57:356 (177356|4,177741|2,178125|4) - Similarly
02:58:318 (178318|2,178414|4,178510|6) - Think you can shift all of this to the left by 1 since these piano notes are on different pitch within this section
---------------------------------------------03:12:644 (192644|5,192644|2) - Piano starts 1/4 earlier here, you might want to take note of that
03:21:491 (201491|6,201683|5) - Not sure if you want to but you can probably squeeze in this 1/6 piano here
03:22:548 (202548|2,202741|1,202933|0,203125|2) - There is also a piano sequence that goes up in pitch here, you can probably do a stair-to-the-right pattern here for the left hand
03:29:369 (209369|4,209369|5,209369|3) - The chord here starts on the next measure line actually (on the red line)
03:29:691 (209691|4) - think you missed a piano thing here
03:29:991 (209991|0,210041|1,210091|2) - Suggesting a 1/12, the grace sounds faster than a 1/8
03:35:264 (215264|5,215332|6,215400|4) - Shift this to the left by 1 column, quite sure the 2nd note is of the same pitch as 03:35:060 (215060|5) -
03:37:022 (217022|5) - Think this is a 1/8 grace
03:37:566 - Snaps should be as follows (highlighted notes are the only ones shifted, the 2nd note there is on 1/12:
* 03:38:944 - Suggesting something like this since the last 2 beats there is a skip/grace beat so it's better to kind of separate both of them instead of doing them as a chord
03:46:487 - Taking note of the accents in the piano here, you can potentially break the stream to do a chord pattern here just to map to them:
** 03:55:269 (235269|2,235301|1,235333|0,235397|1) - The anchor here on column 2 is rather hard to execute, 03:56:102 (236102|6) - the anchor on 6 here is also hard to execute, quite a big change but i suggest:
03:56:935 (236935|0,237064|1,237192|2) - Not too sure why are they 1/6 lagging behind those drum hits
04:05:141 (245141|0,245205|1,245269|2) - This is 1/8, not sure if you plan to change it however
* 04:13:987 (253987|3,253987|0,254083|1,254083|5,254179|2,254275|3,254371|4,254468|5,254564|2,254564|0,254564|6) - Personally think that you can do a more grand/intense/strong build up here:
Not too sure if you're a fan of big chord hammers but this is one of many ways you can do it:
04:33:506 (273506|3) - Think this can be a 2 note chord considering how you layered this part
04:35:237 (275237|5) - and this can be 3
04:42:737 (282737|1) - Suggesting to move up by 1/4 because 1) it's a ghosty 2) for drum thing
04:55:044 (295044|4,295044|1) - Think you can shift these upwards, same reason as above coincidentally
* 04:56:294 (296294|1,296294|2,296487|5,296487|4,296583|2,296679|1,296775|4,296775|5,296871|3,296968|2,297064|1,297064|0) - Think you can structure this like:
** 05:06:679 (306679|1,306679|2,306679|0,306968|0,306968|2,306968|1,307064|2,307064|0,307064|1,307352|1,307352|2,307352|0,307641|0,307641|2,307641|1,307737|1,307737|0,307737|2) - eeeh i can only hear notes on:
** 05:13:025 - the pattern here is... just really hard to execute well, i think this will work better:
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