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Hiroko Moriguchi - Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru
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Topic Starter
Getting right to it...
Hope this helps a bit. Everything else seems to be good. I really had fun playing it. No matter what Kutora says, the streams were good.
Hoshi
00:24:444 (5) - The slider marked 3 seems to mask where the 5 hitcircle will show up, so I'd advise to maybe move it near the next combo colored 1 slider in order to make the hitcircle more visible.
00:44:950 (6,7,8) - Maybe spread the notes farther apart. Based on the distance snap, the notes are farther spaced than the distance you put them.
01:00:330 (1,2,3) - Maybe add more distance spacing here.
01:34:127 (4,5,6) - Since these hitcircles are separated on the time line by half ticks, you may want to spread out these 3 hitcircles rather than make it a triple.
01:46:659 - 01:47:039 - Add notes here. It doesn't make sense for a pause to be set here as there isn't a long enough duration of no instruments. Just map based on the voice instead here.
00:44:950 (6,7,8) - Maybe spread the notes farther apart. Based on the distance snap, the notes are farther spaced than the distance you put them.
01:00:330 (1,2,3) - Maybe add more distance spacing here.
01:34:127 (4,5,6) - Since these hitcircles are separated on the time line by half ticks, you may want to spread out these 3 hitcircles rather than make it a triple.
01:46:659 - 01:47:039 - Add notes here. It doesn't make sense for a pause to be set here as there isn't a long enough duration of no instruments. Just map based on the voice instead here.
Hope this helps a bit. Everything else seems to be good. I really had fun playing it. No matter what Kutora says, the streams were good.
Topic Starter
hahah thanks <3 i dont think he was really being that much of a dick i was just joking 
i will keep working on it and make it a decent map
i will keep working on it and make it a decent map
Topic Starter
Offset might be slightly off but can't really tell, if anyone can tell how much it is off by and what it should be set to please let me know!
Topic Starter
fixed offset
Short mod
Hoshi
00:09:231 - 00:20:151 Spacing seems bit excessive compared to rest of map
00:26:457 - 00:26:742 Surprising triple, doesn't seem to match the style of earlier parts. Personally i was expecting short slider/note
01:02:913 - 01:03:578 This jump into slider is at awkward angle to play, pattern like this is what i would expect more at extras. Try placing the stream to go into same direction you jump to instead of reverse
01:03:578 - 01:06:236 Same as above.
01:11:932 - 01:11:173 (6) - Stream ends perfectly into sliderend. Moving it slightly so that it shows a bit under slider should make pattern more intuitive to read
01:11:932 - 01:13:261 Same as above.
00:26:457 - 00:26:742 Surprising triple, doesn't seem to match the style of earlier parts. Personally i was expecting short slider/note
01:02:913 - 01:03:578 This jump into slider is at awkward angle to play, pattern like this is what i would expect more at extras. Try placing the stream to go into same direction you jump to instead of reverse
01:03:578 - 01:06:236 Same as above.
01:11:932 - 01:11:173 (6) - Stream ends perfectly into sliderend. Moving it slightly so that it shows a bit under slider should make pattern more intuitive to read
01:11:932 - 01:13:261 Same as above.
Topic Starter
Finished Hoshi difficulty! ready for modding :3
Hello~ from #modreqs
General :
General :
- Preview point is not set , i guess it should be on 01:01:299 - ? dunno
- 00:16:869 (5,1) - blanket?
- 00:19:337 (1) - remove nc
- 00:33:008 (3,4) - blanket
- 00:33:768 - add circle
- 00:44:970 (1,1,1) - remove ncs
- 00:46:109 - add circle
- 00:55:793 (1,3) - blanket could be better
- 01:03:957 (2) - un-bend the slider a bit
- 01:12:692 (9) - nc
- 01:13:261 (15,1) - stack the end of slider with the circle
- 01:16:109 (6,2) - why are these not stacked ?_?
- 01:19:337 (2) - move it a bit away from 01:18:957 (8) -
- 01:19:527 (3,4,5) - unbend the sliders for proper blankets
- 01:29:211 (1) - remove nc
- 01:30:730 (3,6) - blanket?
- 01:45:920 (1) - remove nc
- 01:55:223 (1,2) - blanket could be better
- 01:55:603 (2,3) - ^
- 01:55:983 (3,4) - ^^
- 02:03:768 (1,1) - remove ncs
- 02:06:426 (2,3,4) - fix blankets
- 02:22:185 (1) - un-bend the slider a bit
- 02:26:173 (1) - remove nc
- 02:27:502 - add circle + nc from the circle
- 02:48:008 (1,2) - unbend (1) for proper blanket , bent too much x-x
- 02:52:755 (1,2) - notes arent stacked properly
- 02:58:261 (2) - start nc from this note instead
- 02:59:780 (1,1) - remove ncs
- 03:11:173 (5,1) - notes arent stacked properly
- 03:14:590 (1) - nc not needed here
- 03:14:970 (1) - just finish the spinner at 03:17:628 - ,circle not needed
- 03:25:983 (1) - remove nc
- 03:29:970 (8,1,2) - blanket?
- 03:37:755 (1,2,1,2) - ncs not needed
- 03:42:312 - the bpm seems to change from here , cant help with it cuz i m not so good at that stuff , get some help about it from a pro timer
Topic Starter
Thank you for the mod! changes have been made 
DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hello~ from #modreqs
General :Hoshi :
- Preview point is not set , i guess it should be on 01:01:299 - ? dunno
Good luck!~
- 00:16:869 (5,1) - blanket?
- 00:19:337 (1) - remove nc
- 00:33:008 (3,4) - blanket
- 00:33:768 - add circle
- 00:44:970 (1,1,1) - remove ncs
- 00:46:109 - add circle
- 00:55:793 (1,3) - blanket could be better
- 01:03:957 (2) - un-bend the slider a bit
- 01:12:692 (9) - nc
- 01:13:261 (15,1) - stack the end of slider with the circle
- 01:16:109 (6,2) - why are these not stacked ?_?
- 01:19:337 (2) - move it a bit away from 01:18:957 (8) -
- 01:19:527 (3,4,5) - unbend the sliders for proper blankets
- 01:29:211 (1) - remove nc
- 01:30:730 (3,6) - blanket?
- 01:45:920 (1) - remove nc
- 01:55:223 (1,2) - blanket could be better
- 01:55:603 (2,3) - ^
- 01:55:983 (3,4) - ^^
- 02:03:768 (1,1) - remove ncs
- 02:06:426 (2,3,4) - fix blankets
- 02:22:185 (1) - un-bend the slider a bit
- 02:26:173 (1) - remove nc
- 02:27:502 - add circle + nc from the circle
- 02:48:008 (1,2) - unbend (1) for proper blanket , bent too much x-x
- 02:52:755 (1,2) - notes arent stacked properly
- 02:58:261 (2) - start nc from this note instead
- 02:59:780 (1,1) - remove ncs
- 03:11:173 (5,1) - notes arent stacked properly
- 03:14:590 (1) - nc not needed here
- 03:14:970 (1) - just finish the spinner at 03:17:628 - ,circle not needed
- 03:25:983 (1) - remove nc
- 03:29:970 (8,1,2) - blanket?
- 03:37:755 (1,2,1,2) - ncs not needed
- 03:42:312 - the bpm seems to change from here , cant help with it cuz i m not so good at that stuff , get some help about it from a pro timer
Hi, random mod~ I'm a new mapper too though :3
[General]
You should read and understand the Beatmap Ranking Criteria if you want to make a rankable map. Other useful thread: t/421206
Your audio file bitrate is 320kbps, according to ranking criteria "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps." So you should lower it. If you don't know how to, here is some link that may help https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Audio_Editing / http://smallbusiness.chron.com/use-auda ... 45938.html (I recommend you to install Audacity)
Now, changing the mp3 on your beatmap: t/210518
The slider slide sound (the sss sound on slider, if you want to remove it this is how). Download blank wav file here, then copy it to your Map folder. Rename the wav file:
with: *-sliderslide
Change * with: Normal, Soft, or Drum.
You can play around with the hitsound, here some custom hitsound: t/15407
The normal hitsound is too loud, you should lower the volume. The soft one is already good though.
About combo, when there is no vocal you should follow the instrument when making new combo, and when there is vocal, follow the vocal. I'm sure you know what I mean. And the combo color, since the background is rather calming, you should use soft color too. (Change the combo color on Song Setup)
[Hoshi]
01:01:869 (3,4,5) ~ 01:03:198 (4,5,6,7,8) and so on - I don't like the hitsound of these, you should revise them. Just read the post that I've linked for some good advice.
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I like this song, wanted to make a beatmap with this song but I already have another project. :3 Good luck with your map, don't give up on mapping!
If you have some question, just ask me.
[General]
You should read and understand the Beatmap Ranking Criteria if you want to make a rankable map. Other useful thread: t/421206
Your audio file bitrate is 320kbps, according to ranking criteria "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps." So you should lower it. If you don't know how to, here is some link that may help https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Audio_Editing / http://smallbusiness.chron.com/use-auda ... 45938.html (I recommend you to install Audacity)
Now, changing the mp3 on your beatmap: t/210518
The slider slide sound (the sss sound on slider, if you want to remove it this is how). Download blank wav file here, then copy it to your Map folder. Rename the wav file:
with: *-sliderslide
Change * with: Normal, Soft, or Drum.
You can play around with the hitsound, here some custom hitsound: t/15407
The normal hitsound is too loud, you should lower the volume. The soft one is already good though.
About combo, when there is no vocal you should follow the instrument when making new combo, and when there is vocal, follow the vocal. I'm sure you know what I mean. And the combo color, since the background is rather calming, you should use soft color too. (Change the combo color on Song Setup)
[Hoshi]
01:01:869 (3,4,5) ~ 01:03:198 (4,5,6,7,8) and so on - I don't like the hitsound of these, you should revise them. Just read the post that I've linked for some good advice.
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I like this song, wanted to make a beatmap with this song but I already have another project. :3 Good luck with your map, don't give up on mapping!
If you have some question, just ask me.
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