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Phos-
Easy has been removed on Space's request. This shouldn't be a problem though, as normal is still under 2*.
Sorry to anyone that modded the Easy, but Space felt pretty strongly about the decision. Thanks for your efforts anyway though.
Lince Cosmico
hi mom
Absolute Zero
[MBomb's Stuff GD]

Overall: Pretty good. I say this platter could use a little more distance to distinguish strong beats, (maybe a hyper more or two). The hitsounds are quite abundant, though, and makes it quite dense (maybe a little overwhelming). I think that you could take some out, especially where the melody doesn't necessarily have to be hit. That's just my opinion, though.
00:02:330 (5,1) - Standstill here feels a little awkward flow-wise. Move (1) to, say, x=510?
00:09:398 (3,1) - Increase distance. It's a stronger beat?
00:17:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would space the two groups a little further apart. There's a break between the cluster of three-note groups, so I personally think that the jump is a little weak.
00:27:460 (5,1) - Move (1) to x=240? I think it flows better to the next note this way instead.
00:37:984 (2) - Flip this slider (Ctrl+G)? It makes the flow from (1) easier and creates a similar pattern to (3).
00:40:183 - I would put a hitcircle here instead of a spinner, because I feel the spinner beginning isn't strong enough. This note is still at full sound, so I think it should have its own hitcircle. Then start the slider on 00:40:497?
MBomb

Absolute Zero wrote:

[MBomb's Stuff GD]

Overall: Pretty good. I say this platter could use a little more distance to distinguish strong beats, (maybe a hyper more or two). The hitsounds are quite abundant, though, and makes it quite dense (maybe a little overwhelming). I think that you could take some out, especially where the melody doesn't necessarily have to be hit. That's just my opinion, though.
00:02:330 (5,1) - Standstill here feels a little awkward flow-wise. Move (1) to, say, x=510? - Moved to x:504 instead.
00:09:398 (3,1) - Increase distance. It's a stronger beat? - Whilst this is a downbeat, the note doesn't feel as strong to me as the main melody.
00:17:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would space the two groups a little further apart. There's a break between the cluster of three-note groups, so I personally think that the jump is a little weak. - Sure, done.
00:27:460 (5,1) - Move (1) to x=240? I think it flows better to the next note this way instead. - Changed this section a bit.
00:37:984 (2) - Flip this slider (Ctrl+G)? It makes the flow from (1) easier and creates a similar pattern to (3). - Nah, I think the dashes fit nicely and this would get rid of them.
00:40:183 - I would put a hitcircle here instead of a spinner, because I feel the spinner beginning isn't strong enough. This note is still at full sound, so I think it should have its own hitcircle. Then start the slider on 00:40:497? - Whilst I know it's not necessary, I'd rather be consistent with the standard difficulties in terms of when the spinner starts.
Thanks for the mod!

Platter
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Undertale OST- 044 - Tem Shop.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 288
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20212,40317
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Tem Shop
TitleUnicode:Tem Shop
Artist:toby fox
ArtistUnicode:toby fox
Creator:-Faded-
Version:MBomb's Platter
Source:Undertale
Tags:Temmie Chang Tuyoki Radiation Money For College Chiptune [_Space_] -_Magic Bomb_-
BeatmapID:866872
BeatmapSetID:397990

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.8
ApproachRate:7.8
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Arphimigon
Space wanted me to mod the mapset but his GD isn't here, either way YOU ARE RECIEVING FREE MOD MWAahahahahahha.... ok

[Normal]
Nothing to say except possibly raising CS to 3.5 or 3 but even that is fine.

[Advanced]
00:06:727 (5,6,7,1) - 00:16:780 (5,6,7,1) - I feel as though these stacks are doing the wrong effect of what should be done. Having these stacks is quite a disorienting stop to the play when the pitches rise, and the sudden snap after the momentum loss to hit the next sliders adds more pressure to it. Not to mention the stacks make the notes go further away, breaking the DS a bit too.
tl;dr I complain about stacks on every map
00:31:858 (5,6,7) - I was bound to say something about it feeling hard because 90 degree angles and right in the corner of the screen. Both of these feel really weird in this map to only happen once.

[Hard]
Ok same thing about the stacks, and the same answer expected whether agree or not, but in this case the snaps are even more hard to hit since you need more movement and that is lost to the stacking, and imo that sucks.
00:26:675 - Only time in the mapset (all three diffs) that a stronger sound has been a slider end, please make it clickable! nvrmnd you do this 3 more times
Someone said on another mod about the NCs, and I have to agree it seems a tad random. There are a lot of 1-2 combos like 00:20:392 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - but then the exact same sounds later 00:25:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - will have differing NCing on them. Please use the same NC system here, either all starting with a 2 combo or none.

[Insane]
Because jumping from CS5 to 7 is ok!? Cant you like make advanced CS5, then Hard CS6, then leave this as CS7? Rn it just seems a little out of place (PS: CS5 for advanced is fine afaik)
00:01:544 (2) - 00:04:057 (2) - 00:06:570 (2) - etc its really weird to leave out hitsounding on these notes when they are the optimal notes for hitsounding as they correlate more with the downbeats of the song, also adding soft whistles to the ones I mentioned (and a bunch of later ones in the same fashion) really makes the map more enjoyable to listen to and easier to understand. If you want me to get a list of things I would've added to just ask, but those ones like the ones mentioned above are important, and they ALSO play on the main instrument. So there is two reasons to not leave it blank.
00:07:513 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 00:17:565 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is the hardest diff so you can make the spacing a little less monotonous, make the first one larger than the second or the second one smaller than the first. Either way it seems to make more sense musically.
00:22:905 (1,2) - On these sliders, the angles which they start and end are different (as in the start of one slider is at a different angle to the end, and same with the other slider) pls help my OCD and fix!

noice
Topic Starter
Phos-

Arphimigon wrote:

Space wanted me to mod the mapset but his GD isn't here, either way YOU ARE RECIEVING FREE MOD MWAahahahahahha.... ok rip Space's Easy 2015-2016

[Normal]
Nothing to say except possibly raising CS to 3.5 or 3 but even that is fine.Would rather not, the notes are pretty close together in this diff and raising the cs would only make it worse.

[Advanced]
00:06:727 (5,6,7,1) - 00:16:780 (5,6,7,1) - I feel as though these stacks are doing the wrong effect of what should be done. Having these stacks is quite a disorienting stop to the play when the pitches rise, and the sudden snap after the momentum loss to hit the next sliders adds more pressure to it. Not to mention the stacks make the notes go further away, breaking the DS a bit too. This is quite a jerky part of the song though, I have the stack done like this to emphasise strong, high pitched note at (1). It should be fine to play, but I'll get some more opinions.
tl;dr I complain about stacks on every map
00:31:858 (5,6,7) - I was bound to say something about it feeling hard because 90 degree angles and right in the corner of the screen. Both of these feel really weird in this map to only happen once. Sure, I think your suggestion plays better,

[Hard]
Ok same thing about the stacks, and the same answer expected whether agree or not, but in this case the snaps are even more hard to hit since you need more movement and that is lost to the stacking, and imo that sucks.
00:26:675 - Only time in the mapset (all three diffs) that a stronger sound has been a slider end, please make it clickable! nvrmnd you do this 3 more times
Someone said on another mod about the NCs, and I have to agree it seems a tad random. There are a lot of 1-2 combos like 00:20:392 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - but then the exact same sounds later 00:25:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - will have differing NCing on them. Please use the same NC system here, either all starting with a 2 combo or none. I went through them a bit.

[Insane]
Because jumping from CS5 to 7 is ok!? Cant you like make advanced CS5, then Hard CS6, then leave this as CS7? Rn it just seems a little out of place (PS: CS5 for advanced is fine afaik) I've seen bigger jumps in other recently ranked mapsets, so it should be fine imo.
00:01:544 (2) - 00:04:057 (2) - 00:06:570 (2) - etc its really weird to leave out hitsounding on these notes when they are the optimal notes for hitsounding as they correlate more with the downbeats of the song, also adding soft whistles to the ones I mentioned (and a bunch of later ones in the same fashion) really makes the map more enjoyable to listen to and easier to understand. If you want me to get a list of things I would've added to just ask, but those ones like the ones mentioned above are important, and they ALSO play on the main instrument. So there is two reasons to not leave it blank. Agreed, done.
00:07:513 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 00:17:565 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is the hardest diff so you can make the spacing a little less monotonous, make the first one larger than the second or the second one smaller than the first. Either way it seems to make more sense musically. lol alright.
00:22:905 (1,2) - On these sliders, the angles which they start and end are different (as in the start of one slider is at a different angle to the end, and same with the other slider) pls help my OCD and fix! uh, fixed I think.

noice
Thanks for modding~
NVAN
Kay, Man. I'm really busy with in real stuff so I'm gonna post here in quick.
PS : Listen, I'm not a good speaker. So you might be gonna get hardened of my explanations here.

[General]
  1. The offset isn't -26ms, it's 288ms. Just because the starting beat of the song is at -26ms, it doesn't mean it starts from there. You have to know the main beats starts from 00:00:288. Why, dude? Why? D:
  2. This is really useless, To save a few more size on your beatmap. Don't use png. for a background, instead use jpg. (Here, I made you one)
[Normal]

  • I don't see any problem here, nice one :D
[Advanced]
  1. 00:06:727 (5,6,7) - You better avoid making patterns like this, this is mostly gonna hardened players while playing this map with hidden mod mostly, especially for the first time play on the map. And this was almost hard to see when playing this map in norml type skin. Try to make something kinda like this.
  2. 00:16:780 (5,6,7) - Same as above
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:314 (1,2) - (Useless, please ignore this if you think so) Try to rotate them a bit such as -6 degrees so your pattern won't look really "old" LOL
  2. 00:06:727 (3,4,5) - Same approach as 00:06:727 (5,6,7) in Advanced. But I can recommend you to make it like this, since a doublet like that Hard difficulty or harder are mostly like that usually.
[Insane]

  • This is a bit disorientating my eyes @~@ LOL
  1. 00:39:398 (5) - Move the last node to x:396 y:144, so the slider end will look more leaning to the 6

Man, you're god damn right. Rank this! LOL!
Topic Starter
Phos-

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Kay, Man. I'm really busy with in real stuff so I'm gonna post here in quick.
PS : Listen, I'm not a good speaker. So you might be gonna get hardened of my explanations here.

[General]
  1. The offset isn't -26ms, it's 288ms. Just because the starting beat of the song is at -26ms, it doesn't mean it starts from there. You have to know the main beats starts from 00:00:288. Why, dude? Why? D: But the offset is supposed to be at the starting beat, regardless of how strong it is. No change for now.
  2. This is really useless, To save a few more size on your beatmap. Don't use png. for a background, instead use jpg.(Here, I made you one) sure
[Normal]

  • I don't see any problem here, nice one :D
[Advanced]
  1. 00:06:727 (5,6,7) - You better avoid making patterns like this, this is mostly gonna hardened players while playing this map with hidden mod mostly, especially for the first time play on the map. And this was almost hard to see when playing this map in norml type skin. Try to make something kinda like this.
  2. 00:16:780 (5,6,7) - Same as above I guess I'll change these then.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:314 (1,2) - (Useless, please ignore this if you think so) Try to rotate them a bit such as -6 degrees so your pattern won't look really "old" LOL Alright, done~
  2. 00:06:727 (3,4,5) - Same approach as 00:06:727 (5,6,7) in Advanced. But I can recommend you to make it like this, since a doublet like that Hard difficulty or harder are mostly like that usually. I don't think this is a problem in hard because these players typically know how to read stacks and interpret the music.
[Insane]

  • This is a bit disorientating my eyes @~@ LOL
  1. 00:39:398 (5) - Move the last node to x:396 y:144, so the slider end will look more leaning to the 6 ok

Man, you're god damn right. Rank this! LOL!
Thanks for modding!
Qiyana
Hi! M4M!

[General]
When this map gets ranked, CTB people wouldn't like CSs like that so set the CS size to 3 in the following diffs: Normal, Advanced
When this map gets ranked, CTB people wouldn't like CSs like that so set the CS size to 4 in the following diffs: Hard, Insane
Add the BG in the following diffs: MBomb's Platter

[Normal]
00:11:754 (3) - This slider isn't necessary.

[Advanced]


[Hard]


[Insane]


[MBomb's Platter]
Topic Starter
Phos-

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! M4M!

[General]
When this map gets ranked, CTB people wouldn't like CSs like that so set the CS size to 3 in the following diffs: Normal, Advanced Made Normal CS3, but advanced can stay at CS4 since it's supposed to get players used to smallish circlesize in preparation for insane and hard diffs.
When this map gets ranked, CTB people wouldn't like CSs like that so set the CS size to 4 in the following diffs: Hard, Insane No. I want to keep CS5 on hard because it's there to make the CS spread smoother. I will not reduce CS on insane; that is how it's mapped. Not everything has to be CS4.
Add the BG in the following diffs: MBomb's Platter How did I not notice this? Added.

[Normal]
00:11:754 (3) - This slider isn't necessary. Yes it is. It's made to go over the continuous sound at this part in the music. Removing this wouldn't make much sense tbh.
Thanks for the mod.
-GriM-
SPOILER
 osu file format v14

[General]
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488,232,325266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,264,328109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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our collab bullcrap xd
Topic Starter
Phos-
rip mouse wheel
_handholding
@-GriM- Next time try putting your code in a spoiler box

<box><code></code></box>

that way its easier to scroll through the rest of the thread
Mazziv

-Faded- wrote:

rip mouse wheel
Spayyce

-Faded- wrote:

rip mouse wheel
-GriM-
another mod because im bad ya

Insane:
00:21:335 (3) - make slider the gap kinda sounds weird
00:29:816 (4) - ^
00:34:843 (4) - ^
00:13:324 (2) - blanket?
00:17:251 (4,5) - be creative, this stack is poop

Hard:
Personally, I think 00:07:513 (1,2) - could be a bit more creative, but its fine if you keep it
00:30:445 (1,2) - mehhhhh

Advanced:
Nothing really, however I feel like some spots could've been filled in and could still keep the difficulty

Normal: ^

Its good call bn homie
this is all going to be rejected xd
-GriM-
meme
Mazziv
meme
Topic Starter
Phos-

-GriM- wrote:

another mod because im bad ya

Insane:
00:21:335 (3) - make slider the gap kinda sounds weird
00:29:816 (4) - ^
00:34:843 (4) - ^ I'd rather not. These circles are on very powerful parts of the music. Although there's a gap, it's a necessary gap because the melody completely stops. Having a slider on these parts will sound either weird or overmapped.
00:13:324 (2) - blanket? Wasn't aiming for a blanket pattern here, so no change for now.
00:17:251 (4,5) - be creative, this stack is poop Nah. This stack is here to be consistent with the other stack earlier in the song. Also, you'll notice a powerful change in pitch after the stack is done; the jumps afterwards emphasize this.

Hard:
Personally, I think 00:07:513 (1,2) - could be a bit more creative, but its fine if you keep it Agreed! Definitely wasn't fond of the bland 90° sliders.
00:30:445 (1,2) - mehhhhh What's wrong with it? It's a jump, and the sharp angle helps emphasize it.

Advanced:
Nothing really, however I feel like some spots could've been filled in and could still keep the difficulty

Normal: ^

Its good call bn homie
this is all going to be rejected xd
Thanks for the remod~
Mazziv
Literally another pp map, wtf -Faded-?

It's ridiculous how mappers these days abuse 80bpm 20x DS jumps and completely overmapped 1/32 snapped streams just to inflate the difficulty so pro players will play your map on stream so you can be recognized as the next "famoose" mapper.

Wow, absolutely disgusting. I hope this never makes it past qualified.

Please reconsider your entire career as a mapper.
-GriM-
same
meii18
We did IRC yesterday and today

Yesterday
11:08 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865481 toby fox - Tem Shop [Normal]]
11:08 ByBy13: let's see :)
11:08 -Faded-: ^^
11:11 ByBy13: just my own opinion
11:11 ByBy13: maybe hp 3 and ar 4? since the normal diff is the easiest diff of the set
11:12 -Faded-: hm alright, I don't see why not
11:15 ByBy13: about the way that the circles are placed o.o
11:16 ByBy13: i think it's fine
11:16 ByBy13: testplayed the diff and seems fine the circles
11:17 -Faded-: nice ^^
11:17 ByBy13: :)
11:22 ByBy13: 00:18:193 (2,3,4,5)- I think the players can be tricked regarding the spacing here especially the low-skilled players.Why you don't try this kind of [http://puu.sh/mTn8y/112bc4bb4c.jpg placement]?
11:23 -Faded-: sure, I wasn't too sure about that either.
11:28 ByBy13: 00:31:701 (2) - you will slighty see it that it overlaps with the previous slider.I suggest to move it a bit down (i think you have to move the whole pattern a bit down to avoid ds errors and also to don't ruin the blanket)
11:29 -Faded-: alright, done
11:33 ByBy13: about that stack from 00:37:984 (1)- with 00:36:727 (2)- looks fine to my eyes
11:34 ByBy13: testplayed several times and i went to a conclusion that this stack isn't tricky for newbie players
11:35 -Faded-: Yeah, it shouldn't be too hard for them
11:35 ByBy13: yup
11:38 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865534 toby fox - Tem Shop [Advanced]]
11:40 ByBy13: 00:04:214 (5)- just my personal opinion: this slider's end sounds on nothing audible (on that 1/4 tick there's no any sound) so why not you extend the slider to the 1/2 tick (00:04:686-)?
11:41 ByBy13: oh wait is that 8-bit sound
11:41 ByBy13: ;__;
11:41 ByBy13: my apologies
11:41 -Faded-: lol it's fine xd I wasn't too keen on changing it anyway lol
11:42 ByBy13: lol yeah XD
11:46 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865479 toby fox - Tem Shop [Hard]]
11:46 ByBy13: don't you think that this diff is a bit...too way jumpy? o.o
11:47 -Faded-: perhaps, it's a lot harder than most "hards" out there, but since the previous diff is an advanced I think it should be fine
11:47 ByBy13: yes
11:47 ByBy13: nice idea making that advanced diff :)
11:48 -Faded-: yeah ^^
11:48 ByBy13: the spread gap between normal and hard would was too huge
11:49 -Faded-: Yeah, I'm so glad that the first mod I got told me to add the advanced diff
11:49 ByBy13: :)
11:50 ByBy13: woah passed the hard diff :3
11:50 -Faded-: gz :3
11:50 ByBy13: thx :#
11:50 ByBy13: :3
11:50 -Faded-: np :33
11:51 ByBy13: oh yeah in advanced
11:52 ByBy13: 00:04:686 (6)- drum addition as you did at the same point in hard diff
11:52 ByBy13: ^^'
11:53 ByBy13: normal
11:53 -Faded-: sure, done
11:53 ByBy13: 00:04:214 (3)- same drum addition on tail
11:54 ByBy13: 00:14:267 (3)- this too on tail
11:54 -Faded-: done both :3
11:54 ByBy13: :3
11:55 ByBy13: in advanced forgot to mention this: 00:14:738 (6)- drum addition
11:55 ByBy13: also I hope you removed the whistles XD
11:55 -Faded-: yep xD
11:56 ByBy13: okay :D
11:56 ByBy13: don't you think that the hp in hard is the same as in advanced?>
11:56 ByBy13: hp 5 advanced - hp 5 hard
11:57 -Faded-: oh yeah I only just noticed that now xD
11:57 -Faded-: I'll reduce HP on advanced
11:57 ByBy13: x3
11:57 ByBy13: oki
11:57 -Faded-: reduce it to 4
11:59 ByBy13: oki
12:00 ByBy13: can you reduce the cs in insane a bit?
12:00 ByBy13: like to 6
12:00 ByBy13: or 6.5
12:01 ByBy13: it's time to go :(
12:02 -Faded-: okay :( Are you going to continue tomorrow or something?
12:02 ByBy13: yes tomorrow

Today
08:58 -Faded-: Hey, do you want to continue with the irc mod? :3
08:58 ByBy13: sure :3
08:58 -Faded-: cool :3
09:01 ByBy13: ok about the cs in insane?
09:01 -Faded-: Yeah, I want to keep it at 7. That's the CS it's been mapped for and it's aimed at the audience that likes CS7. There's been a lot of CS7 maps ranked, so I don't think it'll be a problem
09:02 ByBy13: yeah i know x3
09:02 -Faded-: oki x3
09:06 ByBy13: 00:04:214 (3,4)- a little jump wouldn't hurt at all here since on the note (4) the beat is stronger and it needs some emphasize ^^'
09:08 -Faded-: hmm
09:08 -Faded-: yeah I'd agree with that one, but because (1) doesn't have much emphasise I'll make it an anti-jump like this: http://puu.sh/mUsGB/64f2000360.png
09:09 ByBy13: sure
09:09 -Faded-: emphasis* xd
09:09 -Faded-: I'll do it for 00:14:267 (3,4,1) - as well :3
09:09 ByBy13: okay :3
09:10 ByBy13: 00:07:827 (3,1)- here too? seems that on (1)- the beat is somehow stronger u_
09:10 ByBy13: *u_u
09:11 -Faded-: hmm. Originally they were quite far apart, but a modder suggested that I move them closer together
09:11 ByBy13: oh :o
09:12 -Faded-: would changing it back to how it was be better? http://puu.sh/mUsUa/45c5ad3a47.png
09:13 ByBy13: yeah looks much better
09:13 -Faded-: alright~
09:13 ByBy13: I will a bit afk
09:13 ByBy13: time for dinner
09:14 -Faded-: alright. When will you be back?
09:21 ByBy13: back~
09:21 -Faded-: wb ^^
09:22 ByBy13: ^^
09:23 ByBy13: 00:09:712 - ; 00:10:026 - and so on - I'm really unhappy that these stronger beats were left unemphasized :(.Why you don't add circles to emphasize the beats?
09:24 -Faded-: I chose not to map them because they're not part of the high pitched melody. It seems like they come from some other instrument, so I chose not to map them
09:25 ByBy13: okay then uwu
09:27 ByBy13: 00:32:958 (1,2)- Honestly this intentional overlapping looks...a bit dirty to me.why you don't try this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4461471 ? just my though
09:28 -Faded-: Yeah, your pattern is better so I'll do that
09:28 ByBy13: oki :>
09:28 ByBy13: and this must be all!

The map itself looks good so far!
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Phos-

ByBy13 wrote:

We did IRC yesterday and today

Yesterday
11:08 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865481 toby fox - Tem Shop [Normal]]
11:08 ByBy13: let's see :)
11:08 -Faded-: ^^
11:11 ByBy13: just my own opinion
11:11 ByBy13: maybe hp 3 and ar 4? since the normal diff is the easiest diff of the set
11:12 -Faded-: hm alright, I don't see why not
11:15 ByBy13: about the way that the circles are placed o.o
11:16 ByBy13: i think it's fine
11:16 ByBy13: testplayed the diff and seems fine the circles
11:17 -Faded-: nice ^^
11:17 ByBy13: :)
11:22 ByBy13: 00:18:193 (2,3,4,5)- I think the players can be tricked regarding the spacing here especially the low-skilled players.Why you don't try this kind of [http://puu.sh/mTn8y/112bc4bb4c.jpg placement]?
11:23 -Faded-: sure, I wasn't too sure about that either.
11:28 ByBy13: 00:31:701 (2) - you will slighty see it that it overlaps with the previous slider.I suggest to move it a bit down (i think you have to move the whole pattern a bit down to avoid ds errors and also to don't ruin the blanket)
11:29 -Faded-: alright, done
11:33 ByBy13: about that stack from 00:37:984 (1)- with 00:36:727 (2)- looks fine to my eyes
11:34 ByBy13: testplayed several times and i went to a conclusion that this stack isn't tricky for newbie players
11:35 -Faded-: Yeah, it shouldn't be too hard for them
11:35 ByBy13: yup
11:38 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865534 toby fox - Tem Shop [Advanced]]
11:40 ByBy13: 00:04:214 (5)- just my personal opinion: this slider's end sounds on nothing audible (on that 1/4 tick there's no any sound) so why not you extend the slider to the 1/2 tick (00:04:686-)?
11:41 ByBy13: oh wait is that 8-bit sound
11:41 ByBy13: ;__;
11:41 ByBy13: my apologies
11:41 -Faded-: lol it's fine xd I wasn't too keen on changing it anyway lol
11:42 ByBy13: lol yeah XD
11:46 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/865479 toby fox - Tem Shop [Hard]]
11:46 ByBy13: don't you think that this diff is a bit...too way jumpy? o.o
11:47 -Faded-: perhaps, it's a lot harder than most "hards" out there, but since the previous diff is an advanced I think it should be fine
11:47 ByBy13: yes
11:47 ByBy13: nice idea making that advanced diff :)
11:48 -Faded-: yeah ^^
11:48 ByBy13: the spread gap between normal and hard would was too huge
11:49 -Faded-: Yeah, I'm so glad that the first mod I got told me to add the advanced diff
11:49 ByBy13: :)
11:50 ByBy13: woah passed the hard diff :3
11:50 -Faded-: gz :3
11:50 ByBy13: thx :#
11:50 ByBy13: :3
11:50 -Faded-: np :33
11:51 ByBy13: oh yeah in advanced
11:52 ByBy13: 00:04:686 (6)- drum addition as you did at the same point in hard diff
11:52 ByBy13: ^^'
11:53 ByBy13: normal
11:53 -Faded-: sure, done
11:53 ByBy13: 00:04:214 (3)- same drum addition on tail
11:54 ByBy13: 00:14:267 (3)- this too on tail
11:54 -Faded-: done both :3
11:54 ByBy13: :3
11:55 ByBy13: in advanced forgot to mention this: 00:14:738 (6)- drum addition
11:55 ByBy13: also I hope you removed the whistles XD
11:55 -Faded-: yep xD
11:56 ByBy13: okay :D
11:56 ByBy13: don't you think that the hp in hard is the same as in advanced?>
11:56 ByBy13: hp 5 advanced - hp 5 hard
11:57 -Faded-: oh yeah I only just noticed that now xD
11:57 -Faded-: I'll reduce HP on advanced
11:57 ByBy13: x3
11:57 ByBy13: oki
11:57 -Faded-: reduce it to 4
11:59 ByBy13: oki
12:00 ByBy13: can you reduce the cs in insane a bit?
12:00 ByBy13: like to 6
12:00 ByBy13: or 6.5
12:01 ByBy13: it's time to go :(
12:02 -Faded-: okay :( Are you going to continue tomorrow or something?
12:02 ByBy13: yes tomorrow

Today
08:58 -Faded-: Hey, do you want to continue with the irc mod? :3
08:58 ByBy13: sure :3
08:58 -Faded-: cool :3
09:01 ByBy13: ok about the cs in insane?
09:01 -Faded-: Yeah, I want to keep it at 7. That's the CS it's been mapped for and it's aimed at the audience that likes CS7. There's been a lot of CS7 maps ranked, so I don't think it'll be a problem
09:02 ByBy13: yeah i know x3
09:02 -Faded-: oki x3
09:06 ByBy13: 00:04:214 (3,4)- a little jump wouldn't hurt at all here since on the note (4) the beat is stronger and it needs some emphasize ^^'
09:08 -Faded-: hmm
09:08 -Faded-: yeah I'd agree with that one, but because (1) doesn't have much emphasise I'll make it an anti-jump like this: http://puu.sh/mUsGB/64f2000360.png
09:09 ByBy13: sure
09:09 -Faded-: emphasis* xd
09:09 -Faded-: I'll do it for 00:14:267 (3,4,1) - as well :3
09:09 ByBy13: okay :3
09:10 ByBy13: 00:07:827 (3,1)- here too? seems that on (1)- the beat is somehow stronger u_
09:10 ByBy13: *u_u
09:11 -Faded-: hmm. Originally they were quite far apart, but a modder suggested that I move them closer together
09:11 ByBy13: oh :o
09:12 -Faded-: would changing it back to how it was be better? http://puu.sh/mUsUa/45c5ad3a47.png
09:13 ByBy13: yeah looks much better
09:13 -Faded-: alright~
09:13 ByBy13: I will a bit afk
09:13 ByBy13: time for dinner
09:14 -Faded-: alright. When will you be back?
09:21 ByBy13: back~
09:21 -Faded-: wb ^^
09:22 ByBy13: ^^
09:23 ByBy13: 00:09:712 - ; 00:10:026 - and so on - I'm really unhappy that these stronger beats were left unemphasized :(.Why you don't add circles to emphasize the beats?
09:24 -Faded-: I chose not to map them because they're not part of the high pitched melody. It seems like they come from some other instrument, so I chose not to map them
09:25 ByBy13: okay then uwu
09:27 ByBy13: 00:32:958 (1,2)- Honestly this intentional overlapping looks...a bit dirty to me.why you don't try this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4461471 ? just my though
09:28 -Faded-: Yeah, your pattern is better so I'll do that
09:28 ByBy13: oki :>
09:28 ByBy13: and this must be all!

The map itself looks good so far!
Bubbled!
Thank you for the mod and bubble <3
gogogo~ ^^
Spayyce
hype
MBomb
@Faded, just went through quickly myself and fixed a few jumps in my platter.

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Topic Starter
Phos-

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

@Faded, just went through quickly myself and fixed a few jumps in my platter.

code
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Sure, updated~
meii18
Rebubble due to update of MB's CtB difficulty
-GriM-
Spayyce
pls converge on this map modders

EDIT: Didn't post to steal new page (or annoy faded) :^)
ZiRoX
A random CtB mod, before this gets pushed forward by Standard BNs that have no idea about CtB

[Platter]
  1. 00:00:288 (1,2) - Having an antiflow movement like this from the start can easily overthrow players, I'd prefer a simpler version (i.e. not antiflow) to introduce the rhythm. I suggest Ctrl+H'ing 00:00:288 (1) - and moving it to x:336 or so.
  2. 00:02:015 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern is a bit overthrowing, too. You start with an antiflow movement between 00:01:544 (2,3) - , to top it off with a dash to a blue tick. I get that it might be the highest pitched note in the synth triplet, but it just feels weird to me. Also, you didn't use it for other similar patterns like 00:12:068 (3,4,5,1) - , 00:27:146 (3,4,5,1) - and others. I suggest the following positions for a friendly introduction for this rhythm: (3) x:384, (4) x:464, (5) x:384 and (1) x:296.
  3. The previous suggestion will mess up with the spacing between 00:02:487 (1,2) - . So here is one good place to introduce antiflow patterns: put one normal horizontal slider at 00:02:801 - at x:160, facing right. (Yes, it will delete that ugly slider you have at 00:02:801 (2) - )
  4. 00:04:214 (3,1) - I missed a bit more distance. This low distance doesn't fit with the fact that it's a downbeat and you added the drum sampleset for that finish hitsound.
  5. 00:05:314 (2,3,1) - Personally I'd prefer a smaller distance for this part, I would move (3) slightly to the left, but it's up to you.
  6. 00:12:068 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe shortening this one grid space per jump is better, currently feels in the mid of walking/dashing.
  7. 00:14:267 (3,1) - I missed a bit more distance here :< I think you could move 00:15:052 (1) - to x:368 or around that and Ctrl+H 00:15:366 (2,3) - . It also counters the right-side of the screen bias at 00:16:309 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - a bit. It wouldn't hurt if you could also move some of those patterns to the left side.
MBomb

ZiRoX wrote:

A random CtB mod, before this gets pushed forward by Standard BNs that have no idea about CtB

[Platter]
  1. 00:00:288 (1,2) - Having an antiflow movement like this from the start can easily overthrow players, I'd prefer a simpler version (i.e. not antiflow) to introduce the rhythm. I suggest Ctrl+H'ing 00:00:288 (1) - and moving it to x:336 or so. - Agreed, but I want to keep the dash, so x:256.
  2. 00:02:015 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern is a bit overthrowing, too. You start with an antiflow movement between 00:01:544 (2,3) - , to top it off with a dash to a blue tick. I get that it might be the highest pitched note in the synth triplet, but it just feels weird to me. Also, you didn't use it for other similar patterns like 00:12:068 (3,4,5,1) - , 00:27:146 (3,4,5,1) - and others. I suggest the following positions for a friendly introduction for this rhythm: (3) x:384, (4) x:464, (5) x:384 and (1) x:296. - Pattern was done similar, but not the exact same.
  3. The previous suggestion will mess up with the spacing between 00:02:487 (1,2) - . So here is one good place to introduce antiflow patterns: put one normal horizontal slider at 00:02:801 - at x:160, facing right. (Yes, it will delete that ugly slider you have at 00:02:801 (2) - ) - Done (And that slider was meant to be horizonal, idk what happened).
  4. 00:04:214 (3,1) - I missed a bit more distance. This low distance doesn't fit with the fact that it's a downbeat and you added the drum sampleset for that finish hitsound. - This is a very weak downbeat. I increased it slightly, but I don't think there should be much more distance.
  5. 00:05:314 (2,3,1) - Personally I'd prefer a smaller distance for this part, I would move (3) slightly to the left, but it's up to you. - I would too. Fixed.
  6. 00:12:068 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe shortening this one grid space per jump is better, currently feels in the mid of walking/dashing. - Done.
  7. 00:14:267 (3,1) - I missed a bit more distance here :< I think you could move 00:15:052 (1) - to x:368 or around that and Ctrl+H 00:15:366 (2,3) - . It also counters the right-side of the screen bias at 00:16:309 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - a bit. It wouldn't hurt if you could also move some of those patterns to the left side. - Again, this downbeat feels quite weak to me, I'll move around some of those other patterns though.
Thanks for the mod!

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48,192,10026,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,192,11282,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,11597,2,0,L|144:192,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,12068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,12225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,12382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,12539,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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456,192,13795,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,14110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,14267,2,0,P|64:152|112:88,1,150,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,15052,5,0,3:0:0:0:
392,192,15366,2,0,P|456:176|472:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,190,17722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,192,18193,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,190,18350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,149,18507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,20078,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,20392,2,0,L|208:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,20864,2,0,L|168:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,21335,5,2,0:0:0:0:
496,192,21649,2,0,L|408:192,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,22591,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,192,23377,2,0,L|312:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,192,24162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,192,24790,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,25104,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,192,26361,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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304,192,32644,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Phos-
Updated~
Pereira006
hey, got messange you, sorry later

[Normal]

Hitsounds

    1. 00:24:790 (4) - Missing add whistle
Gameplay

    1. 00:22:905 (1) - I don't know you wanna if this slider became blanket with 00:24:162 (2), the slider, on red point, you need move 2 grid right, to blanket with 00:24:162 (2)
    2. 00:24:319 (3) - sorry if you hate nazi lol, the end point need grid 1 up. to better blanket with 00:25:419 (1) of end
    [Hard]

advanced:

    1. 00:38:455 (2,3) - this diff, you never make jump, so this part is inconsistency spacing
    [Insane]

Gameplay:

    1. 00:38:926 (3) - missing NC
    []
    That all, I don't know byby13 will rebubble or not, you can call me on ingame if you wanna I put qualify or rebubble
    any question or you don't understand my english, ask me
    Good luck
Topic Starter
Phos-

Pereira006 wrote:

hey, got messange you, sorry later

[Normal]

Hitsounds

    1. 00:24:790 (4) - Missing add whistle Indeed, added a whistle.
Gameplay

    1. 00:22:905 (1) - I don't know you wanna if this slider became blanket with 00:24:162 (2), the slider, on red point, you need move 2 grid right, to blanket with 00:24:162 (2) Alright, done.
    2. 00:24:319 (3) - sorry if you hate nazi lol, the end point need grid 1 up. to better blanket with 00:25:419 (1) of end Not too sure about the end-point, seems to make the blanket worse imo. However, I improved it by moving the mid point 1 grid up instead.
    [Hard]

advanced:

    1. 00:38:455 (2,3) - this diff, you never make jump, so this part is inconsistency spacing Alright then, I reduced the spacing.
    [Insane]

Gameplay:

    1. 00:38:926 (3) - missing NC Added one~
    []
    That all, I don't know byby13 will rebubble or not, you can call me on ingame if you wanna I put qualify or rebubble
    any question or you don't understand my english, ask me
    Good luck
Thanks for having a look, I'll call you back ^^
meii18
Rebubble due to request of the mapper
Pereira006
Yersteday, we fix hitsound all diff's expect insane.

everthing look good and let's try!

Qualify
Winek
This map is shit, why did it rank. >:(

gratz
787B
rip hardcore players on Insane
Congrats!
Spayyce
congrats ^^
Agorate
gratz ;D
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