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KINEMA106 - Fly Away

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Akitoshi

abanes16 wrote:

00:29:564 (2) - lagay mo yung end ng slider doon sa white tick para mag match doon sa guitar it's already matched with the guitar and plz have mercy I don't want to put sth 1/2 beats



01:03:064 (1) - tanggalin mo yung clap tapos lagyan mo ng clap 01:04:731 (2) - maliban doon sa reverse Added claps on later parts instead, that section was clap per 1/2 so ya.

01:06:897 (2) - gawin mong ganyan consistency pliz


03:15:397 (2) - clap? meron na :v
thanks

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TitleUnicode:フライアウェイ
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Version:Akitoshi's Easy
Source:艦隊これくしょん~艦これ~
Tags:kantai collection kancolle maikaze tom zany 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ Kinema106 キネマ106 unitedwesin uws 10nya -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- akitoshi c88
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Edit: Sorry Janpai, I re-mapped xd
Shishou
sorry na :cry:
Mira-san
gud shit

mod my map thx
Topic Starter
Asagi
No reply = Fixed
Janpai

Janpai wrote:

M4M :D

General
  1. Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks ~The BG supports the widescreen, and the Letterbox fits the BG itself
  2. Avoid using .PNG format BGs cuz they take too much space ;w; convert it to .JPG ~It'll lower the image quality and it doesnt make too much of a difference on the "space" by converting it
Hard
  1. 00:12:397 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical?
  2. 00:28:064 (5,2) - Adjust (2) a little bit far from (5) overlap is pretty messy ~adjusted but the overlap will stay
  3. 00:42:397 (2,3) - Kinda confusing to play xD~yes but it doesnt mean its bad i guess
Insane is fine and I don't know how to mod extra ;w; sorry i'm noob at modding insanes x_x cool map goodluck :)
DeRandomOtaku

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi ~ shit mod is here

Extra :
  1. OD 9 is high -w- OD 8.5 or & maybe ~the diff is particularly easy for an "Extra" diff so I made it OD9 to make a bit of a challenge, but i'll just keep it for now and ask suggestion as the map progress
  2. 00:18:897 (1,4) - Stack them ~intentional, so it doesnt cover too much by the previous slider
  3. 00:25:231 (4) - move to 110,323
  4. 01:02:064 (2) - bend it a bit more
  5. 01:04:397 (1) - ^
  6. 01:54:064 (2) - move to 165,299
  7. 02:35:564 (3,4) - fix blanket
  8. 02:51:397 - unnecessary timing point?
Hard :
  1. 00:22:897 - unnecessary timing point
  2. 01:41:231 (3,1) - fix blanket
  3. 03:04:731 (2) - move to 222,202
shit mod ends here

Really Great map , star worthy after all Cx

Good luck!~
mezelyus

mezelyus wrote:

from #modreqs

Extra

02:37:731 (1,2,3,4) - make these as four combo ? also move 02:38:397 (1) - this more to the bottom left to emphasis the strong beat , its kinda cramped and breaks flow like this (imo) ~the NC spam there is quite intentional, because its the most unique part of the song/map, but ill consider it. About the other one, not sure what are you implying here but it that slider doesnt have "strong beat" and putting more spacing makes it quite harder to catch up after those 1/4 spam earlier

02:49:731 (1) - this feels like its too close to previous slider considering a new beat starts , 02:49:731 (1,2) - ctrl+g these ? ~It started a new beat but adding more spacing is quite unnecessary because the beat is quite consistent and it doesnt have strong beat to work with

00:54:731 - put an inheriting point to increase volume to %70 here maybe ? since theres a volume increase effect in the background ~added and made the spacing a bit bigger too

01:23:231 (1,2,3) - this looks neater (it doesnt really matter though) , same idea for this 01:57:064 (3,4,5,1) - ~changed but not as sexy as the one you suggested

Hard

00:42:397 (2,3) - this spacing might be confusing , but i think its okay if you want to keep it. other than that Hard difficulty is good :D

All diffs are fun , Take my star :)
abanes16

abanes16 wrote:

[Hard]
00:54:397 (3) - gawin mong 1/2 slider ~but im following le stream part

01:35:064 (1) - reverse slider then remove 01:35:731 (2) - ~good idea but i feel anti is better. Ill consider it if shit fucked up

01:43:897 (4) - C slider pls


[Extra]
00:25:397 (5,4) - stackek

00:10:564 (3) - ctrl=g ~medyo identical yung rhythm nila kea ginawa kong pareho yung movement nung slider na pababa

01:29:064 (3,4) - gawin mo nalang slider ~but its a 1 2 downbeat

01:29:397 (5) - tapos eto gawin mong cirle ~prefer beat on sliders

I'm done ,Don't apply teh mod because it's shit

you can kill me nao Thanks

Good luckek
Thanks for the Mod and stars guys <3

Updated!
Adlol
#modreqs

Sin's Insane:

00:07:731 (4,5) - swap between 4,5 sounds better..

00:10:064 (2,3) - also swap between 2,3 ...


00:22:064 (1,2,3) - the distance is too big .. reduce it a little


00:46:897 (5) - hard to read ... move it to the right a little..


01:00:231 (7) - this one is hard to read as well ... also to the right..


01:19:897 (4,5) - take the 4 to the 2 position and take the 5 a little bit farther than the 3 to the left...


01:29:231 (4) - hard to read ... take an action as you wish..


01:47:564 (3,4) - take the 3 to the top of the 1 slider and make the 4 slider close the 1 slider...


02:47:064 (1) - move right a little bit..


02:52:397 (1) - move down a little as well..


03:23:397 (2,3,4,5,6,7,) - start with 2 in its position , put 3 down a little as it is , put 4 at the same position as 2 , put 5 to the left of 3 a little , put 6 at the same position as 2 , put 7 at the right of 3 a little .

THATS IT.. Hope it was useful..


P.S: Extra diff is flawless :)
10nya
remapped some part, it's ready now.

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Enon
I'm really happy to see it being alive!
Akitoshi
yee boi
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Title:Fly Away
TitleUnicode:フライアウェイ
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Creator:Asagi
Version:Akitoshi's Easy
Source:艦隊これくしょん~艦これ~
Tags:kantai collection kancolle maikaze tom zany 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ Kinema106 キネマ106 unitedwesin uws 10nya -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- akitoshi c88
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Nitrous
Heya! Great seeing this alive again.
General
  1. Overall the map is well done for me, great job!
  2. Kiai isn't consistent between difficulties. I take that as a nitpick because the fountain effect it triggers. Would be cool if it is consistent.
  3. I prefer the last spinner 03:35:397 (1) - to end here 03:41:231 - though being too long, the audio actually ends there.
that Clan avatar is triggering me. Good luck in ranking!
I'll remod when Normal is done.
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20:26 DeRandom Otaku: ok i can quick check the normal lol
20:27 Asagi: thatll be a big help :D
20:27 Asagi: actually, i suck at making lower diffs
20:27 Asagi: lower than normal
20:27 DeRandom Otaku: lower than normal
20:27 DeRandom Otaku: is just easy
20:27 DeRandom Otaku: lol
20:27 Asagi: i mean hard lmao
20:27 Asagi: lower or equal but whatever xD
20:27 DeRandom Otaku: Oh
20:29 Asagi: idk if my normal is better than the former normal
20:29 Asagi: da GD
20:31 DeRandom Otaku: actually the flow u made is totally different than the flow i make in normal diffs lol
20:32 Asagi: thats... probably my style
20:32 Asagi: its quite similar to my hard diffs
20:32 Asagi: i think
20:32 DeRandom Otaku: yea i could tell that xd
20:32 Asagi: straight and curve bland patterns D:
20:33 DeRandom Otaku: alright so
20:34 DeRandom Otaku: 00:02:564 (2) - 00:05:231 (2) - here you have circles while u made sliders for latter patterns 00:07:897 (2) - 00:10:564 (2) - even tho circles would be better since theres no change in song's intensity or something
20:35 DeRandom Otaku: while u have circle at 00:15:897 (2) - and here slider would match better since vocal is intenser
20:35 DeRandom Otaku: i hope u got my point
20:36 Asagi: TL;DR u want me to change those 1/2 sliders to circle
20:36 DeRandom Otaku: yes
20:37 Asagi: well okay but only this one 00:07:897 (2) -
20:37 Asagi: since the other one fits with 1/2 since its in the middle of the stanza
20:37 DeRandom Otaku: aright thats cool
20:37 Asagi: quite a nice change of rhythm
20:37 DeRandom Otaku: cool enough
20:38 DeRandom Otaku: ok i dont really like being nazi anymore . but 00:16:231 (3,5) - this blanket is realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy off
20:38 Asagi: LOOOL
20:38 Asagi: because i changed some slider there
20:38 Asagi: didnt noticed that immediately loool
20:38 DeRandom Otaku: xd i see
20:38 Asagi: OCD triggering lmao
20:39 DeRandom Otaku: 00:29:231 (3,4) - umm about this
20:40 DeRandom Otaku: how about a rhythm like http://puu.sh/ujlUa/429a36770c.jpg
20:40 DeRandom Otaku: since
20:40 DeRandom Otaku: 00:29:564 - is pretty impactful sound so it would be nicer if its clickable
20:40 DeRandom Otaku: also a slider here would be cool to represent the held sound
20:41 Asagi: cool cool
20:41 Asagi: actually im being paranoid on that part too
20:41 DeRandom Otaku: lol
20:41 Asagi: more of those later on
20:42 Asagi: youll probably point that out
20:42 DeRandom Otaku: oh
20:42 DeRandom Otaku: i will just leave them to u ;3
20:42 Asagi: no no
20:42 Asagi: i need help on those actually
20:42 Asagi: uhhh
20:42 DeRandom Otaku: oh ok lol
20:42 DeRandom Otaku: 01:09:564 (3) - nc because nc at 00:58:897 (1) -
20:43 Asagi: AH YE DAT PART DAT PART
20:43 Asagi: WELP
20:43 Asagi: 01:10:064 (4) - this one
20:43 DeRandom Otaku: lol
20:43 Asagi: disturbing
20:43 Asagi: 01:09:064 (2,3,4,5,1) - more like this part in particular
20:43 DeRandom Otaku: umm
20:44 Asagi: im confused about what rhythm should i use
20:44 Asagi: because its too crowded imo
20:44 DeRandom Otaku: well its not really that big of a problem because song goes aasdadas af intense here
20:45 Asagi: im worrying that it might be too hard for newbies
20:45 Asagi: i cant tell that much
20:45 DeRandom Otaku: its not even a problem actually
20:46 DeRandom Otaku: 01:15:064 (3) - umm why is this flow like this
20:46 DeRandom Otaku: i mean
20:46 DeRandom Otaku: 01:15:064 (3) - ctrl-j it then place it?
20:47 Asagi: actually its quite intentional
20:47 DeRandom Otaku: yea i could tell that
20:47 DeRandom Otaku: 01:28:731 (4,1) - oh my
20:47 DeRandom Otaku: DeNazi Otaku here :^)
20:48 Asagi: hahaha suure suuuure
20:50 DeRandom Otaku: well 01:37:064 (1,2) - even tho the NC emphasizes the song here properly. i think you should still remove it because u havent used this concept anywhere before in the whole diff
20:50 DeRandom Otaku: so it makes it pretty inconsistent
20:51 Asagi: i expect u gonna complain about the pattern lol
20:51 Asagi: i mean slider itself
20:52 DeRandom Otaku: lol nothing wrong with the sliders . only the nc is triggering me xd
20:52 Asagi: i actually used that kind of concept, if u dont mind hmmm
20:52 Asagi: 00:55:064 (1,2) -
20:52 Asagi: not sure if that and that is similar concept to you
20:52 Asagi: 00:54:064 (1) -
20:52 DeRandom Otaku: oh uhmm rip
20:53 DeRandom Otaku: oh my bad lol
20:53 DeRandom Otaku: i didnt think about kiai
20:53 DeRandom Otaku: xd
20:53 Asagi: xddd
20:53 Asagi: 00:54:064 (1) - tbh im not sure about this lol
20:53 DeRandom Otaku: remove it
20:53 DeRandom Otaku: pl9x
20:54 Asagi: i guess the "FLY AWAY" nc is fine?
20:54 Asagi: hope its not too short
20:55 DeRandom Otaku: its fine but too short at same time
20:55 DeRandom Otaku: yea
20:55 Asagi: 01:47:397 (5,1) - what do you think about this
20:56 Asagi: is this acceptable
20:56 DeRandom Otaku: should be fine
20:56 Asagi: its not too much of a blind spot right?
20:57 Asagi: my friend pointed that out but not sure myself
20:57 DeRandom Otaku: i dont this its a bad thing
20:57 DeRandom Otaku: in easies . its bad . but in normal it should be totally fine
20:58 DeRandom Otaku: i never tried anything like that myself either . so dont trust me on that one much xd
20:58 Asagi: oh then thats good
20:58 Asagi: xd
20:58 Asagi: need more opinions
20:58 DeRandom Otaku: yes
20:59 DeRandom Otaku: 01:58:064 (4) - 00:54:064 (1) - ok exactly the same vocal but different rhythms
20:59 DeRandom Otaku: :thinking:
21:00 DeRandom Otaku: 02:51:397 - and here you have nothing zz rip
21:00 DeRandom Otaku: or is it prolly because u r following drums here
21:01 Asagi: thats focus on drum
21:01 Asagi: like other diffs
21:01 Asagi: the earlier one, well i think making it different is not so bad right?
21:01 Asagi: hmmm
21:01 Asagi: :thinking:
21:02 DeRandom Otaku: eh which one
21:03 Asagi: 01:59:064 (1) -
21:03 DeRandom Otaku: owo its upto u
21:04 DeRandom Otaku: 01:09:064 (2) - wait why not change this to 1/2 repeat slider for consistency with other two kiais?
21:04 Asagi: keep for now i guess
21:05 Asagi: hmmmm
21:05 Asagi: maybe ill keep that one as that, so the next one will feel differnt
21:05 Asagi: and i forgot the NC damn
21:05 DeRandom Otaku: Lol
21:06 DeRandom Otaku: 02:23:064 (5,1) - swap ncs because NCc should be on downbeat xd
21:07 DeRandom Otaku: 02:36:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - Cute
21:07 Asagi: :DDD
21:07 DeRandom Otaku: fixed NC? xd
21:08 Asagi: yes ye
21:08 DeRandom Otaku: 03:06:897 (3) - again forgot the nc
21:09 Asagi: yea
21:09 DeRandom Otaku: 03:19:897 (3,4) - exactly same thing as 00:28:397 (1,2,3) -
21:09 DeRandom Otaku: so yea . since u applied that rhythm before . better do it here aswell
21:10 Asagi: yesss sir
21:11 DeRandom Otaku: 03:24:397 (1,2) - instead of this . use this :http://puu.sh/ujnIm/36746e78b6.jpg
21:11 DeRandom Otaku: goes much better with vocals
21:11 DeRandom Otaku: And emphasizes the cymbal at 03:25:564 - in a better way
21:12 DeRandom Otaku: 03:27:064 (1,2) - same
21:13 DeRandom Otaku: uhmm u have the same rhythm in all patterns like this so idk
21:14 Asagi: osu crashed lol
21:14 DeRandom Otaku: lel
21:14 Asagi: lemme check chat log
21:15 DeRandom Otaku: oki
21:15 DeRandom Otaku: heres what i said http://puu.sh/ujnY2/335b76af53.jpg . just in case the log sense of ur osu crashed also lol
21:16 Asagi: it feels awkward for some reason
21:16 Asagi: wait
21:17 Asagi: 03:25:397 (3) - im gonna skip the beat here? seems wrong hmmm
21:17 DeRandom Otaku: oh wait no
21:18 DeRandom Otaku: actually
21:18 DeRandom Otaku: no
21:18 DeRandom Otaku: keep ur rhythm xd
21:18 Asagi: xd
21:18 Asagi: thats why im confused too loool
21:19 DeRandom Otaku: 03:34:397 (1) - ohh boy this is pretty bad
21:19 DeRandom Otaku: remove that repeat and put circle on downbeat instead
21:20 DeRandom Otaku: 03:35:064 - thats a really important beat which needs emphasis. executing it on slider end like that is soso
21:25 DeRandom Otaku: disconnected . rip internet
21:26 DeRandom Otaku: did u get my pms ?
21:27 Asagi: the last one is about 03:34:397 (1) -
21:27 DeRandom Otaku: yes
21:27 DeRandom Otaku: http://puu.sh/ujoD6/7446ba467b.jpg just incase u didnt receive all of them
21:27 Asagi: yea i didnt receive that
21:28 Asagi: so i removed it then change into circle then 1/2 slider
21:28 Asagi: 03:34:397 - then note here
21:28 DeRandom Otaku: umm the point is to make the downbeat clickable xd
21:29 DeRandom Otaku: 03:35:064 - this . make this clickable
21:29 DeRandom Otaku: thats all i want tho
21:29 Asagi: 03:35:064 - i mean this changed into note
21:29 Asagi: ye ye
21:29 Asagi: wrong like
21:29 Asagi: link
21:29 DeRandom Otaku: alright cool
Topic Starter
Asagi
thanks for the irc mod :D
revurii
hello nm ww

[Extra]
00:06:564 (1) - remove nc
00:19:731 (1) - ^
00:30:897 (7,1) - move (1) farther away cuz it's pretty strong
00:32:231 (1) - this doesn't feel so loud imo
00:37:231 (3) - stack its sliderend with 00:36:397 (1) - 's end, it works better imo when you compare the spacing with 00:34:731 (5,1)
00:41:231 (4) - move to around x164 y261 maybe
00:52:397 (3,4,1) - i don't think it's good to sacrifice wrong NC for the pattern's sake :cc
00:52:397 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - has similar rhythm with 00:49:731 (1,2,3,4) - so that should help when changing this one above^ :D
00:53:564 (1) - uGLE imo xd, maybe make it more wavy? (happens later in the map too)
00:58:731 (5) - you can move this around x411 y50 so that 00:58:897 (1) - is emphasized
01:02:397 (3) - larger spacingggg uwu around x95 y 146 maybe, has better circular flow that way too
01:16:397 (1) - move farther (you might have to move the objects after this too lol)
01:20:731 (2) - less spacing pls
01:31:397 (2) - move a bit to the right more
01:52:897 (3) - would help if you emphasize this cuz the sound is louder
02:06:064 (2) - stack the sliderstart on 02:05:231 (5) - cuz spacing on 02:06:397 (3) - is weird
03:13:731 (1) - similar to 01:16:397 (1) -

star4u uwu
Topic Starter
Asagi
No reply = fixed

revurii wrote:

revurii
[Extra]
00:06:564 (1) - remove nc
00:19:731 (1) - ^
00:30:897 (7,1) - move (1) farther away cuz it's pretty strong - the rhythm isnt actually "strong", its just the cymbals makes it so but it still sounds consistent
00:32:231 (1) - this doesn't feel so loud imo - wut
00:37:231 (3) - stack its sliderend with 00:36:397 (1) - 's end, it works better imo when you compare the spacing with 00:34:731 (5,1) - the rhythm of those two got different vibe, the vocals on the first one u mentioned is on a low pitch thats why the spacing is not too high compare the the latter one
00:41:231 (4) - move to around x164 y261 maybe
00:52:397 (3,4,1) - i don't think it's good to sacrifice wrong NC for the pattern's sake :cc - i dont really get what are you saying if i should change NC or pattern but I fixed the NC, no change in pattern
00:52:397 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - has similar rhythm with 00:49:731 (1,2,3,4) - so that should help when changing this one above^ :D - its actually different, and i follow mostly the vocal on the latter
00:53:564 (1) - uGLE imo xd, maybe make it more wavy? (happens later in the map too) - thats just my style, curving it even more gonna make me cringe lol
00:58:731 (5) - you can move this around x411 y50 so that 00:58:897 (1) - is emphasized - its already emphasized? the vocals at least
01:02:397 (3) - larger spacingggg uwu around x95 y 146 maybe, has better circular flow that way too - changed but i with my own idea
01:16:397 (1) - move farther (you might have to move the objects after this too lol) - considering, since its hard to change the pattern that will cause a remapping on that part lol
01:20:731 (2) - less spacing pls
01:31:397 (2) - move a bit to the right more - gonna overlap bad with the next note
01:52:897 (3) - would help if you emphasize this cuz the sound is louder
02:06:064 (2) - stack the sliderstart on 02:05:231 (5) - cuz spacing on 02:06:397 (3) - is weird - i just adjust (3), other than that, no change
03:13:731 (1) - similar to 01:16:397 (1) - - same

star4u uwu

danke des sandpie uwu
Gokateigo
Hi from Carpal Tunnel Comrades queue o/
mod (Extra)
  1. 00:21:564 (5) - use a slider here
  2. 01:29:731 (1) - place this below the slidertail of the 5
  3. 01:53:231 (4,5,6) - do a triangle with this (same with the following pattern)
  4. 01:59:731 (3) - Place this to the head of the 14
  5. 02:23:897 (5,6) - Don't stack this
    It's the only things I found, the map is pretty good
GL
Akitoshi
smol irc stuff on normal
16:33 *Asagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1222159 kalon. - Fly Away [Normal]]
16:33 Asagi: tfw im worried af with dis normal
16:33 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5640307
16:33 Akitoshi: at least not only about blankets
16:34 Asagi: good
16:34 Asagi: this will do
16:34 Asagi: gonna ask m4m in any case
16:34 Asagi: pero nakakaputa pa rin normal ko
16:34 Akitoshi: :ok_hand:
16:35 Asagi: napaparanoid ako, para kaseng uhh
16:35 Asagi: mukang mahirap? for a normal
16:35 Akitoshi: it's ok
16:35 Akitoshi: 01:10:064 (2,3) - wat is dis
16:35 Asagi: YES DAT
16:35 Asagi: tangina
16:35 Akitoshi: u used to follow vocals
16:35 Akitoshi: then dat
16:35 Akitoshi: lmao
16:35 Asagi: i remembered ikaw nag mention yan
16:35 Asagi: dati
16:35 Asagi: or suggest?
16:36 Akitoshi: and u decided to keep it :thonk:
16:36 Asagi: i think i followed most of le instru
16:36 Asagi: though
16:36 Asagi: i dont have any idea what to do with that shit
16:36 Asagi: i mean, the drum is a must click
16:36 Akitoshi: try? http://puu.sh/wLFAI/71786f450b.jpg
16:37 Akitoshi: nasa kiai naman so it's safe to put more than usual 1/2 gaps i guess
16:37 Asagi: d ko nga alam kung naparami yung mga ganyan ko e
16:38 Akitoshi: 01:43:897 (3) - also ye
16:38 Asagi: good suggestion
16:38 Asagi: dunno if
16:38 Asagi: i stack ko?
16:38 Akitoshi: kopyahin mo lang yung 01:07:397 (2,3,4) -
16:38 Akitoshi: but 4 is 1/2 slider
16:39 Asagi: yea done
16:39 Asagi: hmmm
16:39 Akitoshi: 02:20:397 (1,2,3,4) - add som complicated stuff pls
16:39 Asagi: ano p ba
16:40 Akitoshi: all 1/1 sliders looks bland on dis kiai
16:40 Asagi: welp, suggest stuff
16:40 Asagi: it looks good enough doe, but yea, kinda agree
16:40 Akitoshi: 02:20:897 - 02:22:231 - try add sth here?
16:41 Asagi: ok then, but imma not stack then i guess
16:41 Akitoshi: also that can help to keep consistency with 02:25:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - idk
16:41 Asagi: more fitting
16:41 Asagi: hmmmm
16:42 Asagi: the first one, not stacked, the the second one stacked?
16:42 Asagi: hmmm
16:42 Asagi: or both of then not stacked?
16:42 Akitoshi: u used to place them stacked tho
16:42 Akitoshi: even on other kiais
16:42 Asagi: hmm
16:42 Asagi: dunno, its kinda different kind of kiai
16:42 Asagi: most unique part of the song
16:42 Akitoshi: 02:51:064 (3) - how about 2 circles for drums?malayo pa naman 02:52:397 (1) - so ye it will b diejobu
16:43 Asagi: hmmm, maybe i should remove stack
16:43 Asagi: if it doesnt make it too hard
16:44 Akitoshi: it's not i guess?
16:44 Asagi: ill remove stack then
16:44 Asagi: on the second similar shit
16:44 Asagi: yung una kase ayoko alisin yung pattern
16:44 Asagi: kinda good
16:45 Akitoshi: hmm
16:45 Asagi: also yea, change into circols
16:46 Akitoshi: 03:34:397 (6,1) - mas bagay ata pag ganito ung rhythm sa huli http://puu.sh/wLFPF/466a9bd5b6.jpg
16:46 Akitoshi: also add hitsounds cuz there has no hs
16:47 Asagi: ah yea, some downbeat i missed
16:48 Asagi: also may isa pa pla akong problema
16:48 Asagi: hmm
16:48 Asagi: 01:47:397 (5,6,1) -
16:48 Asagi: dunno if dis stacking is fine
16:48 Asagi: looks like aint daijoubu
16:48 Akitoshi: ye questionable tbh
16:49 Akitoshi: same as 01:49:064 (2,4) - i guess
16:49 Asagi: ^medyo ez fix, ayusin ko na
16:49 Asagi: main concern is the first one
16:49 Asagi: kinda hard fix
16:50 Akitoshi: http://puu.sh/wLFXd/022e50fba1.jpg this may help
16:50 Akitoshi: but hard to suggest the placements
16:51 Asagi: yea, placement problem ko
16:51 Akitoshi: :thinking: :gun:
16:52 Asagi: ill make a way later
16:52 Asagi: also more?
16:53 Akitoshi: that's all for me i think
16:53 Akitoshi: 03:00:064 (5,2) - nazis coming away
16:54 Asagi: :gun:
16:54 Akitoshi: 3gerd
16:54 Asagi: i think thats intentional
16:54 Asagi: :tonk:
16:54 Asagi: >i think
16:54 Akitoshi: >i think
16:54 Akitoshi: 03:00:397 (1,3) - 3gerd aq
16:55 Asagi: puta
16:55 Asagi: hard fix for some reason
16:55 Asagi: yaan kuh nah
16:55 Akitoshi: lmao
16:56 Asagi: idk why the fuck its like that
16:56 Akitoshi: :gun:
16:56 Asagi: i think thats that right?
16:57 Asagi: 00:22:731 (1,1) - ????
16:57 Akitoshi: das fine
16:57 Akitoshi: 03:19:064 (1,2) - idk flow is kinda forced to like that
16:58 Akitoshi: pababa yung 1 tapos nasa taas ung 2
16:58 Asagi: maybe ill make 1 move upward i guess
16:59 Asagi: fiexd

also some minor fix on my d

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Topic Starter
Asagi
danke, also updated
Minorsonek
NM from my queue

Sin
Plz decide if you prioritize vocal or instrument, i dont get your rhythm choice here
00:05:564 (1) - slider ends on nothing
00:12:064 (5,3) - overlap?
00:21:564 (5,1,2) - easy to misread, dont space 5-1 and 1-2 equally when rhythm is different
00:24:231 (1) - blanket is few pixels off
00:30:231 (4,5,6) - flow?
00:54:231 (3,4) - overlap?
00:58:731 (5,3) - ^
01:09:564 (1) - fix blanket
01:23:397 (3,6) - overlap?
01:24:397 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:40:731 (2,1) - wtf, fix blanket
i dont like this diff


Extra
00:10:897 (1,3) - blanket
00:12:064 (2,3,2,4) - wtf overlaps?
00:19:731 (4,1) - ^
00:20:897 (2) - stack it better with 00:20:231 (6) -
01:57:564 (1) - sliderend's point 1px to the right to make good line
03:03:731 (3,1) - i think blanket is few pixels off
03:06:897 (1,3) - this for sure, fix blanket
03:08:731 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks ugly
03:15:731 (3,4) - 03:14:564 (4) - stack it properly

Good diff

Check your mapset, there is huge gap with intensivity - normal 30 hard 80 insane 120 and small gap to extra 140, make it equal if possible
newton-
:asagi:

as requested

[ akitoshi's easy]
  1. i think tickrate 1 would work better here, dont really hear any constant sounds on red ticks that stand out
  2. (also bc tickrate 2 sounds weird on long sliders like 01:56:397 (1) - and the part on 02:36:397 - )
  3. 02:11:564 (4) - would work as just a simple straight slider, then you could curve 02:12:397 (1) - more for contrast
  4. really clean diff!
[ normal]
  1. sv too high imo, sth like .9 would fit better for normal
  2. 00:30:231 (6,7) - this jump thing would be more suited for sth like an advanced diff, for a generic normal i think it's safer to follow ds
  3. 00:54:064 (5) - p subjective but this would be better as 2 1/2 sliders + 1 circle to build up intensity for the kiai (also because the song gets rlly strong here)
  4. 01:43:897 (3) - doesnt make sense to follow vocals here when youve been following percussion for most of the previous parts, the vocals dont stand out much anyway
  5. 02:20:897 (2,3) - should be stacked like all ur other 1/2s (eg 00:45:397 (3,4) - ) for consistency
  6. 02:22:231 (5,6) - same thing
  7. 02:26:231 (2,3) // 02:27:564 (5,6) - etc
  8. 02:48:397 (3,1) - stack is off, also most players at this stage will read all stacks as 1/2 since that's how it was in the rest of the map, so it might be better to move this somewhere else (tho it plays fine as it is)
  9. 03:00:064 (5,2) - naisu overlap desu
[ hard]
  1. 00:11:731 (3,4) - stack on tail of 00:10:897 (1) - instead for more comfortable flow
  2. 00:12:397 (1,2) - fix sliderbody blanket, kinda noticable
  3. 00:29:231 (3) - would work better as 2 1/2 circles since theres an important sound on the white tick (also for consistency with 00:29:897 (2,3) - )
  4. 00:30:564 (5) - space out from 00:31:064 (1) - , might be misread as a 1/4 gap
  5. 00:37:564 (1,2) - 3gurd
  6. 00:38:731 (5,1) - not a fan of this overlap, either move them closer like 00:35:731 (3,4,1) - or space them out
  7. 01:00:897 (2) // 01:11:564 (2) // some other parts - 2 1/2 circles for same reason as 00:29:231 (3) - and also the fact that making that vocal unclickable feels unnatural
  8. 02:38:397 (1,1) // 02:49:064 (2,1) - overlap to signify 1/1 instead, like you did for stuff like 00:22:731 (1,1) -
good luck!
timemon
mod

[Extra]
00:06:397 (4,5,6,7) - this feels so dense in rhythm when the music is at almost its lowest in intensity I suggest changing these to 2 1/2 sliders as there are vocal on both white ticks
00:12:064 (2,3,1) - (2, 3) are clickable but the vocal is only active at white tick while (1) slider the vocal is active on both ticks, should be the other way around basically 2-3 as one slider and 1 as 2 circles
00:20:897 (2) - stack

00:55:731 (3,4) - the (4) slider doesn't seem to emphasize the vocal so then it's for instruments but its tail is a snare which is stronger than its head, I suggest just mapping both as circles (00:58:397 (3,4,5) - well you did here)
01:06:397 (3,4) - same suggestion applies throughout the map

01:15:064 (1) - the slider is silent but there are sounds at 01:15:231 - and 01:15:314 -
I suggest this http://i.imgur.com/WBdRFmm.png
01:23:564 (3) - why not use the typical wave slider form? I think this one isn't curvy enough
01:24:897 (3) - should be 2 circles because it's stronger than 01:25:231 (4) - I believe
01:26:564 (4,5,6) - rotate this 90 degree counter clockwise and reposition a bit for better angle

01:49:397 (4) - not much sound on this fella why not remove it to make it 1/1 gap to emphasize 01:49:564 (1) -

02:52:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:55:064 (1,2,3,4) - why are these different? It's the same thing to me should stick to either one for consistency imo

[Sin's Insane]

00:07:064 (1) - should be 2 circles or 1 circle and 1/2 slider (remove 00:07:397 (2) - in this case)
00:07:897 (4,5) - should be 1/2 slider as you seem to be following the vocal
00:14:064 (2,3,4,5) - in terms of note density this is too dense for such a low intensity part of the song I suggest change these to 2 1/2 sliders

00:22:064 (1,2,3) - spacing too big
00:47:064 (1) - change to 2 circles and make a jump?
00:52:064 (5,6) - why are you stacking these when they're both quite strong in sound?

02:06:397 (3,4,5) - why is the spacing so big?
02:52:397 (1) - stack

[Hard]
01:35:064 (1) - stack
02:37:064 (1) - I don't see the need to NC here
02:48:397 (1,2) - I think this spacing is a bit too big for hard lol

Really good diff I see nothing wrong with it

Good luck! and also what is wrong with bancho today I can't do anything.
Topic Starter
Asagi
No reply = Fixed

Minorsonek

Minorsonek wrote:

NM from my queue

00:10:897 (1,3) - blanket
00:12:064 (2,3,2,4) - wtf overlaps? ~ whats up with overlaps? its not relatively a problem, try to explain whats up next time
00:19:731 (4,1) - ^ ~ ^
00:20:897 (2) - stack it better with 00:20:231 (6) -
01:57:564 (1) - sliderend's point 1px to the right to make good line
03:03:731 (3,1) - i think blanket is few pixels off
03:06:897 (1,3) - this for sure, fix blanket
03:08:731 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks ugly ~ i dont know what kind of remark is that, tbh the pattern plays good, it doesnt look THAT ugly, and it doest follow the vocals and rhythm with those repetitive jumps
03:15:731 (3,4) - 03:14:564 (4) - stack it properly

Good diff

Check your mapset, there is huge gap with intensivity - normal 30 hard 80 insane 120 and small gap to extra 140, make it equal if possible ~tbh i dont know what are those number and what are you implying here, if you are talking about the spread, i already asked people about it and its not a problem
newton-

newton- wrote:

:asagi: :asagrill:

as requested

[ normal]
  1. sv too high imo, sth like .9 would fit better for normal ~ changing the SV right now would be bad and would cause a total remap of the diff ,unless its REALLY necessary, but who knows
  2. 00:30:231 (6,7) - this jump thing would be more suited for sth like an advanced diff, for a generic normal i think it's safer to follow ds ~ i think i forgot to use distance snap here for some reason, fixed
  3. 00:54:064 (5) - p subjective but this would be better as 2 1/2 sliders + 1 circle to build up intensity for the kiai (also because the song gets rlly strong here) ~ though that might be true but, it doesnt apply on this diff that much (thats what i think), since it doesnt need to follow all those complicated rhythm. Also the current one right now pretty much fits the bill, repeat slider follows the vocals well, also the slider body itself serves as a drum roll (though it didnt follow all the drum roll part lmao)
  4. 01:43:897 (3) - doesnt make sense to follow vocals here when youve been following percussion for most of the previous parts, the vocals dont stand out much anyway ~ my bad, fixed
  5. 02:20:897 (2,3) - should be stacked like all ur other 1/2s (eg 00:45:397 (3,4) - ) for consistency ~ yes, consistency is a must but this one is an exception, since this is the MOST unique part of the song, I tried something different like unstacking them to make it unique
  6. 02:22:231 (5,6) - same thing ~ same thing too
  7. 02:26:231 (2,3) // 02:27:564 (5,6) - etc ~ blah blah
  8. 02:48:397 (3,1) - stack is off, also most players at this stage will read all stacks as 1/2 since that's how it was in the rest of the map, so it might be better to move this somewhere else (tho it plays fine as it is) ~ yea it plays fine, also unstacking them will ruin the pattern itself, also itll be complicated to put those sliders and stuff if I unstack them
  9. 03:00:064 (5,2) - naisu overlap desu ~ dunno if thats intentional or not, but ill just keep it lmao
[ hard]
  1. 00:11:731 (3,4) - stack on tail of 00:10:897 (1) - instead for more comfortable flow ~ it'll make things feel crowded, also changing it to one you suggest doesnt make a difference
  2. 00:12:397 (1,2) - fix sliderbody blanket, kinda noticable ~ the slight curve? thats intentional
  3. 00:29:231 (3) - would work better as 2 1/2 circles since theres an important sound on the white tick (also for consistency with 00:29:897 (2,3) - ) ~ you left me confused when you said 2 1/2 circles, i thought you mentioning about to put 2 sliders, but it was to make that slider into 2 circle looool, fixed anyway
  4. 00:30:564 (5) - space out from 00:31:064 (1) - , might be misread as a 1/4 gap ~ its perfectly readable, dont worry
  5. 00:37:564 (1,2) - 3gurd ~ REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
  6. 00:38:731 (5,1) - not a fan of this overlap, either move them closer like 00:35:731 (3,4,1) - or space them out ~ im a fan of that overlap, actually, im not. Anyway, that overlap is not really THAT bad, unless some really insist to change, I might reconsider, its kinda hard to fix though if im gonna change so thats why
  7. 01:00:897 (2) // 01:11:564 (2) // some other parts - 2 1/2 circles for same reason as 00:29:231 (3) - and also the fact that making that vocal unclickable feels unnatural ~ nice catch, itll ruin my pattern but TANGINA BAHALA NAfixed, also the similar parts, fixed too
  8. 02:38:397 (1,1) // 02:49:064 (2,1) - overlap to signify 1/1 instead, like you did for stuff like 00:22:731 (1,1) -~ those stacks are fine tbh,
    its perfectly readable and mostlikely follows the rhythm better than unstacked
good luck!
timemon

timemon wrote:

mod

[Extra]
00:06:397 (4,5,6,7) - this feels so dense in rhythm when the music is at almost its lowest in intensity I suggest changing these to 2 1/2 sliders as there are vocal on both white ticks ~ i was following the guitar mostly here, same as the first previous one which has the same pattern, for consistency too
00:12:064 (2,3,1) - (2, 3) are clickable but the vocal is only active at white tick while (1) slider the vocal is active on both ticks, should be the other way around basically 2-3 as one slider and 1 as 2 circles ~ nice catch, fixed, also made something entirely new while following this suggestion
00:20:897 (2) - stack

00:55:731 (3,4) - the (4) slider doesn't seem to emphasize the vocal so then it's for instruments but its tail is a snare which is stronger than its head, I suggest just mapping both as circles (00:58:397 (3,4,5) - well you did here) ~ I totally get your idea but, ill try to reconsider this atm, since doing some change here might change the style of those part, at worse, remap on that part. Though, the drum sound doesnt sound so bad on the tail of the slider
01:06:397 (3,4) - same suggestion applies throughout the map ~ same as above, gonna reconsider it first

01:15:064 (1) - the slider is silent but there are sounds at 01:15:231 - and 01:15:314 -
I suggest this http://i.imgur.com/WBdRFmm.png ~ cool stuff, fixed
01:23:564 (3) - why not use the typical wave slider form? I think this one isn't curvy enough ~ if i make curvy enough, it might ruin the pattern more because it'll get shorter, also relocating 01:23:231 (1,2) - this might go wrong
01:24:897 (3) - should be 2 circles because it's stronger than 01:25:231 (4) - I believe ~ actually no, itll ruin the guitar instrument im following
01:26:564 (4,5,6) - rotate this 90 degree counter clockwise and reposition a bit for better angle ~ its actually identical with 01:26:064 (2) -

01:49:397 (4) - not much sound on this fella why not remove it to make it 1/1 gap to emphasize 01:49:564 (1) - ~ i mostly followed the vocals in this "calm" part

02:52:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:55:064 (1,2,3,4) - why are these different? It's the same thing to me should stick to either one for consistency imo ~ the first part have a long stream before entering kiai, so 1/1 slider might fit better there, though you said earlier, I should change the 1/2 slider for the beat there but ill reconsider that. Also yes, consistency is good, but making something different on the last might be a better idea at least, so it doesnt feel repetitive

[Hard]
01:35:064 (1) - stack
02:37:064 (1) - I don't see the need to NC here ~ its actually speeding up, also the sound is getting louder for some reason
02:48:397 (1,2) - I think this spacing is a bit too big for hard lol ~ its perfectly catchable, dont worry

Really good diff I see nothing wrong with it ~ danke

Good luck! and also what is wrong with bancho today I can't do anything.

Thanks for the mod guys!
Updated
Nitrous
Alright I'm back after 5 months...
Normal
  1. 01:43:731 (2) - clap on tail
  2. 03:00:064 (5,2) - seemingly unpleasant overlap
Hard
  1. 00:12:397 (1) - why suddenly use a repeat? Feels inconsistent with your usual get go with this rhythm 00:07:064 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:23:064 (1,2) - mind blanketing this a bit better?
  3. 01:11:897 (3,4) - I don't know why this is spaced more than 01:12:231 (4,1) - . I prefer doing the other way around since (1) should get more emphasis
Overall, my opinion hasn't changed much. The map is well made. I like it.
Akitoshi

newton- wrote:

:asagi:

as requested

[ akitoshi's easy]
  1. i think tickrate 1 would work better here, dont really hear any constant sounds on red ticks that stand out i'll set this to 1 if his normal's tr is changed
  2. (also bc tickrate 2 sounds weird on long sliders like 01:56:397 (1) - and the part on 02:36:397 - )
  3. 02:11:564 (4) - would work as just a simple straight slider, then you could curve 02:12:397 (1) - more for contrast made the curve more noticeable, not straighten up tho lu
  4. really clean diff!
thanks!

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Stack
General

bg is .png, should be .jpg for reduced filesize

song is good
Extra

00:37:231 (3,1) - Would try to use spacing emphasis for this one as you also spaced the exact same sound further away at 00:36:064 (5,1) -

00:40:231 (1) - ^, All other were sapced further so I feel like it should apply to this one too

00:44:397 (1,2,3,4) - Choose between drums or vocals to map here cause now 00:44:397 (1,2) - is mapped to drums while 00:44:897 (3,4) - is following vocals

00:46:564 (4,5) - (5) is imo way heavier than (4) so a larger gap here than between 00:46:397 (3,4) - would be more appropriate

00:51:731 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels too close together for a part that also contained jumps like 00:43:731 (3,4,5) - ,it still feels quite intense

01:06:397 (3,4) - This rhythm would be way better ctrl+g to give the vocal a slider and to ahve the heavy drum not land on the tail of 01:06:564 (4) -

01:26:064 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - larger sapcing here would be cool for more contrast with the section starting at 01:27:064 (1) -
Also you had jumps that were pretty large in the same section at 01:19:064 (1,2,3,4,5) - so these feel really tame

01:38:897 (1,2) - just a triple after a 1/2 would be less unexpected then what is currently used, especially since there were no 3/4 rhythms in the song previously

01:40:731 (2,4) - stack fix here, maybe it's just on my end but check it anyway

01:45:731 (1,2) - Why not make use of the very week guitar on (2) to add in a 1/1 here

01:49:064 (3,4) - same here, feels like a 1/1 would fit better

02:19:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would look 10x better if this was actually a star, its off now

02:32:731 (2,3) - It's the guitar section here, the most intense part of the song and there a random stack with 1.3x ds, feels anticlimactic

03:03:731 (3,4) - this is the exact same rhythm as previously where I also felt like the rhythm should be ctrl+g'ed
The sound on tail just feels like it should be cliackable

yo, where is the 5.5* part, I can't find it
The only problem that I have with this map is that it feels really boring and slow sometimes and everything non-kiai/guitarsolo feels too easy for 5.5

There is a chance I'll mod the other diffs later not sure though
This is what I was looking for when I opened the queue

Gl with the map :)
Topic Starter
Asagi
No reply / Blue text = Fixed

-Nitrous

-Nitrous wrote:

Alright I'm back after 5 months...
Normal
  1. 01:43:731 (2) - clap on tail
  2. 03:00:064 (5,2) - seemingly unpleasant overlap
Hard
  1. 00:12:397 (1) - why suddenly use a repeat? Feels inconsistent with your usual get go with this rhythm 00:07:064 (1,2,3) - ~ that part of the vocal is kinda different so making it a repeat is fine since its a calm part, also it doesnt need too much of a clicking specially for hard diff
  2. 00:23:064 (1,2) - mind blanketing this a bit better?
  3. 01:11:897 (3,4) - I don't know why this is spaced more than 01:12:231 (4,1) - . I prefer doing the other way around since (1) should get more emphasis
Overall, my opinion hasn't changed much. The map is well made. I like it.
gottagof4ast

gottagof4ast wrote:

General

bg is .png, should be .jpg for reduced filesize ~ will do but not now

song is good
Extra

00:37:231 (3,1) - Would try to use spacing emphasis for this one as you also spaced the exact same sound further away at 00:36:064 (5,1) -

00:40:231 (1) - ^, All other were sapced further so I feel like it should apply to this one too

00:44:397 (1,2,3,4) - Choose between drums or vocals to map here cause now 00:44:397 (1,2) - is mapped to drums while 00:44:897 (3,4) - is following vocals

00:46:564 (4,5) - (5) is imo way heavier than (4) so a larger gap here than between 00:46:397 (3,4) - would be more appropriate

00:51:731 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels too close together for a part that also contained jumps like 00:43:731 (3,4,5) - ,it still feels quite intense ~ fixed and made some remapping on that part

01:06:397 (3,4) - This rhythm would be way better ctrl+g to give the vocal a slider and to ahve the heavy drum not land on the tail of 01:06:564 (4) - ~ people pointing out this one lately also the similar parts, I just changed it to something else like circles instead of ctrl+g-ing

01:26:064 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - larger sapcing here would be cool for more contrast with the section starting at 01:27:064 (1) -
Also you had jumps that were pretty large in the same section at 01:19:064 (1,2,3,4,5) - so these feel really tame

01:38:897 (1,2) - just a triple after a 1/2 would be less unexpected then what is currently used, especially since there were no 3/4 rhythms in the song previously ~ her vocal is kinda different here compare to other parts, also making at least 1 3/4 will not make people tilt, probably

01:40:731 (2,4) - stack fix here, maybe it's just on my end but check it anyway

01:45:731 (1,2) - Why not make use of the very week guitar on (2) to add in a 1/1 here ~ i followed most of the vocals there

01:49:064 (3,4) - same here, feels like a 1/1 would fit better ~ this one will do

02:19:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would look 10x better if this was actually a star, its off now ~ i think i missed to fix this one back then since i was focusing on the blanket

02:32:731 (2,3) - It's the guitar section here, the most intense part of the song and there a random stack with 1.3x ds, feels anticlimactic ~
yes, the section is quite intense but not the whole part. If you listen carefully, that part you pointed out is a "rest" then this part 02:33:731 (1) - is gonna be intense, then a bit of a rest here again 02:34:897 (1) - . After that, intense part will go in again after the NC


03:03:731 (3,4) - this is the exact same rhythm as previously where I also felt like the rhythm should be ctrl+g'ed
The sound on tail just feels like it should be cliackable

yo, where is the 5.5* part, I can't find it
The only problem that I have with this map is that it feels really boring and slow sometimes and everything non-kiai/guitarsolo feels too easy for 5.5 ~ since its kinda old map of mine, my mapping style is a bit outdated, also its not my intention to make it super hard, i just mapped and ended up 5.5* for some reason *shrugs*

There is a chance I'll mod the other diffs later not sure though
This is what I was looking for when I opened the queue

Gl with the map :)

Made some little remapping on Extra and improved it for a bit
Also thanks for the mod guys :)

Updated
UnitedWeSin
timemon

timemon wrote:

[Sin's Insane]

00:07:064 (1) - should be 2 circles or 1 circle and 1/2 slider (remove 00:07:397 (2) - in this case)
00:07:897 (4,5) - should be 1/2 slider as you seem to be following the vocal
I think for these the same argument could be made that I'm following the guitar, it's a matter of interpretation imo. I think it's more comfortable to have a slider on the downbeat here, it seems to play alright.

00:14:064 (2,3,4,5) - in terms of note density this is too dense for such a low intensity part of the song I suggest change these to 2 1/2 sliders
It's probably a valid point but I feel these fit fine here as they are stacked and easy to hit and seem to add to a build up.

00:22:064 (1,2,3) - spacing too big
I guess I don't really agree there it's just a transitional section. I don't see why you couldn't take advantage of the entire play field.

00:47:064 (1) - change to 2 circles and make a jump?
It's interesting but there is already a jump before it. The current pattern can work I think, not that it's amazing or anything, maybe I could find something better but I don't think 2 circles is the answer there.

00:52:064 (5,6) - why are you stacking these when they're both quite strong in sound?
It's a valid point but idk no singles were stacked in the phrase up until there, so it just fits in a pattern and makes the phrase feel unique in a way. Maybe it's not amazing but it fits in the pattern fine.

02:06:397 (3,4,5) - why is the spacing so big?
It seems pretty average spacing for the section, idk it follows the drums there.
02:52:397 (1) - stack
It was intentional.

Minorsonek

Minorsonek wrote:

Plz decide if you prioritize vocal or instrument, i dont get your rhythm choice here
You'll have to provide examples there I think it's a pretty subjective argument.

00:05:564 (1) - slider ends on nothing
00:12:064 (5,3) - overlap?
00:21:564 (5,1,2) - easy to misread, dont space 5-1 and 1-2 equally when rhythm is different
00:24:231 (1) - blanket is few pixels off
00:30:231 (4,5,6) - flow?
00:54:231 (3,4) - overlap?
00:58:731 (5,3) - ^
01:09:564 (1) - fix blanket
01:23:397 (3,6) - overlap?
01:24:397 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:40:731 (2,1) - wtf, fix blanket
fixed some of those blanket stuffz
The overlap suggestions are silly imo.

i dont like this diff
Me neither lol.
mezelyus

mezelyus wrote:

Sin's Insane

01:57:397 (6) - move to x=316 y=247 for better flow ?
definitely

02:14:731 (2,3) - i feel like these are more spaced than they should be , this spacing is more appropriate for the last kiai since its the last bit of the song and more intense
Not really sure there the spacing is pretty average I'd say in the section. The pattern probably isn't great I'll give it that but to change the spacing is to change the pattern there and it seems to play alright.

In Shishou's mod I don't really want to do a 3/4 slider there and the other suggestion I'm not sure that I understand. Also I fixed some blankets from Derandom's mod. I changed some other stuff that was bad too, which is mostly everything. :D

Thank you very much for modding! :) :)
http://puu.sh/wYnCp/87374f7817.zip
Kuya Frex
Tried to test play this in CTB Mode, Smooth Flow, take my star :D

Doormat
late m4m with aki lol

[General]
  1. why is it slider tickrate 2? it doesn't really fit since slider ticks are landing on nothing for a majority of the map throughout all difficulties, especially the lower ones. recommend you lower it to tickrate 1
  2. sounds more appropriate for the spinner at the end of the song to stop on 03:40:397 - instead, since this is when the guitar really begins to fade out
[Akitoshi]
  1. 00:28:397 (1,2) - 03:19:064 (1,2) - awkward polarity, maybe try this rhythm instead? i feel it better reflects guitar
  2. 02:34:897 - fix the break time here
[Normal]
  1. 01:37:064 (1) - NC isn't necessary
  2. 01:45:731 (2) - NC here; remove NC at 01:45:064 (1) -
  3. nice
[Hard]
  1. HP is kind of high; try HP 5-5.5?
  2. 00:06:064 (2) - really awkward place to put a 1/2 repeat slider, since it doesn't match vocals or guitar riffs. maybe try rhythm like this?
  3. 00:10:231 (2) - here too, 1/2 repeat doesn't sound right
  4. 01:00:731 (2,3) - awkward rhythming, might be better to Ctrl + G these two so that slider is first. music is placing emphasis on 01:01:063 - so it should be clickable rather than slider end imo. also applies to 02:04:731 (2,3) - and 02:58:064 (2,3) -
  5. 01:50:231 (3,4) - again, Ctrl + G would be more appropriate here since vocal phrasing at 01:50:564 (4) - would be better match for repeat slider
  6. 02:21:064 (4) - i think it would be nicer to make this two circles stacked on top of each other, like what you did with 02:20:731 (2,3) -
  7. 02:22:397 (4,5) - here too
  8. 02:23:397 (2) - try 1/2 slider + circle instead of repeat slider
  9. 02:37:731 (1,2) - i get that there's a stream in the guitars but it feels so out of place compared to 02:36:397 (1,2,1,2) - . any chance you can nerf the 1/4 repeat sliders?
[Sin]
  1. OD is a bit low and HP is a bit high; try OD 7.5-8 and HP 6?
  2. 00:20:397 (1,2) - Ctrl + G rhythm; current pattern doesn't fit vocals all that nicely when everything else before it was
  3. 01:03:064 (1,2,3) - spacing is kind of low here; this is arguably the loudest part of first kiai so more spacing would be nice. kind of funny how the loudest part of the song has the lowest spacing
  4. 01:13:231 (4,5) - spacing here is kind of really high compared to spacing of 01:13:064 (3,4) - . either buff 3->4 or nerf 4->5
  5. 01:16:897 (2,3,4,5) - if you're going to do a trapezoid pattern here can you space it better? the trapezoid is noticeably off
  6. 01:20:731 (2,3) - Ctrl + G rhythm to better match guitar
  7. 01:47:731 (4,5,6,7,1) - it'd be nice to see a correct triangle between (4)'s slider end, (5), and (6,7,1)
  8. 01:56:731 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this jump pattern plays a little awkwardly; any chance you can make movement feel more smooth? for starters i don't recommend stacking 01:56:397 (1,3) - together
  9. 02:14:564 (1,2,3) - 03:07:897 (1,2,3) - why increasing spacing for these two but equal spacing at 01:10:564 (1,2,3) - ? consistency would be nice
  10. 02:41:064 (3,4,5,6,1) - fix the star; it's off
  11. 02:49:064 (2,3,4) - i don't hear no triple in the music here; sounds overmapped
[Extra]
  1. 00:26:231 (2,3,4,5,1) - spacing is kind of compact here; any chance you can spread out this pattern a bit more?
  2. 00:49:064 (3,4,5) - i feel 4->5 should have more spacing than 3->4
  3. 00:52:064 (1,3) - swap NCs
  4. 01:03:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i don't mind 1-2 jumps, but they need to make sense with the music. this doesn't even match anything that's going on in the song. it feels like it's 1-2 jumps for the sake of having 1-2 jumps. definitely recommend remapping this pattern. also applies to 01:13:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:07:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:17:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 03:00:397 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 03:11:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
  5. 01:15:731 (4) - NC to give visual cue that this is 1/3? same with 03:13:064 (4) -
  6. 01:37:231 (1,2,3) - i think this would be more effective if it was equal spacing, since intensity is the same on all notes
  7. 02:14:564 (1,2,3) - decreasing spacing here but 01:10:564 (1,2,3) - is all equal spacing, and then 03:07:897 (1,2,3) - is increasing spacing??? consistency would be nice
  8. 02:49:064 (2,3,4) - triple at the end sounds overmapped
lower diffs are nice, but the insane and extra could use a bit more work. get a few mods and call me back in a few weeks. depending on how you address the issues we'll see how things go.
Akitoshi
@Doormat fixed all, thanks!

upd
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Jemzuu
nm cus i love kalon

[Extra]
00:49:064 (3,4) - maybe ctrl g here to follow 00:45:564 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:08:731 (2,3,4,5) - idk but in this part i would change something like this to keep flow
02:20:064 (8,1) - swap NC

[Sin]
00:05:231 (4) - ctrl g?
00:06:064 (2,3,4) - maybe make this look like 00:03:731 (3,4,5) - or smth. would be better if a triangle
00:34:231 (3,4) - ctrl g here for better flow i gues
01:16:897 (2,3,4,5) - i would change something like this to follow 01:19:064 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:25:731 (1,4) - fix overlap
03:20:231 (1) - ctrl g?

[Hard]
00:33:231 (4,5,6,1) - blanc
02:14:564 (1) - unnesscary NC

easy and normal looks p neat yeeeet
gudluck powhz~
Topic Starter
Asagi
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Doormat

Doormat wrote:

late m4m with aki lol

[General]
  1. why is it slider tickrate 2? it doesn't really fit since slider ticks are landing on nothing for a majority of the map throughout all difficulties, especially the lower ones. recommend you lower it to tickrate 1
  2. sounds more appropriate for the spinner at the end of the song to stop on 03:40:397 - instead, since this is when the guitar really begins to fade out
[Normal]
  1. 01:37:064 (1) - NC isn't necessary ~ tbh its necessary for the drums, even if i remove it before or after the former / later part, nothing fits the bill
  2. 01:45:731 (2) - NC here; remove NC at 01:45:064 (1) -
  3. nice
[Hard]
  1. HP is kind of high; try HP 5-5.5?
  2. 00:06:064 (2) - really awkward place to put a 1/2 repeat slider, since it doesn't match vocals or guitar riffs. maybe try rhythm like this?
  3. 00:10:231 (2) - here too, 1/2 repeat doesn't sound right
  4. 01:00:731 (2,3) - awkward rhythming, might be better to Ctrl + G these two so that slider is first. music is placing emphasis on 01:01:063 - so it should be clickable rather than slider end imo. also applies to 02:04:731 (2,3) - and 02:58:064 (2,3) -
  5. 01:50:231 (3,4) - again, Ctrl + G would be more appropriate here since vocal phrasing at 01:50:564 (4) - would be better match for repeat slider
  6. 02:21:064 (4) - i think it would be nicer to make this two circles stacked on top of each other, like what you did with 02:20:731 (2,3) -
  7. 02:22:397 (4,5) - here too ~ I dont get it, I mean what to stack or something
  8. 02:23:397 (2) - try 1/2 slider + circle instead of repeat slider ~ Itll get harder having 4 consecutive circles, or maybe I just dont get the idea
  9. 02:37:731 (1,2) - i get that there's a stream in the guitars but it feels so out of place compared to 02:36:397 (1,2,1,2) - . any chance you can nerf the 1/4 repeat sliders? ~ I got the idea, I just removed the 1/4 and made it 1/2 instead, also made some remapping on the next parts
[Extra]
  1. 00:26:231 (2,3,4,5,1) - spacing is kind of compact here; any chance you can spread out this pattern a bit more?
  2. 00:49:064 (3,4,5) - i feel 4->5 should have more spacing than 3->4
  3. 00:52:064 (1,3) - swap NCs
  4. 01:03:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i don't mind 1-2 jumps, but they need to make sense with the music. this doesn't even match anything that's going on in the song. it feels like it's 1-2 jumps for the sake of having 1-2 jumps. definitely recommend remapping this pattern. also applies to 01:13:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:07:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:17:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 03:00:397 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 03:11:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
  5. 01:15:731 (4) - NC to give visual cue that this is 1/3? same with 03:13:064 (4) -
  6. 01:37:231 (1,2,3) - i think this would be more effective if it was equal spacing, since intensity is the same on all notes
  7. 02:14:564 (1,2,3) - decreasing spacing here but 01:10:564 (1,2,3) - is all equal spacing, and then 03:07:897 (1,2,3) - is increasing spacing??? consistency would be nice
  8. 02:49:064 (2,3,4) - triple at the end sounds overmapped
- I checked the stuff you pointed out on Extra and yea, I realized it needs a lot of work too. Since its a very old mine of map, its style is kinda outed to my current mapping style so I might remap some part
lower diffs are nice, but the insane and extra could use a bit more work. get a few mods and call me back in a few weeks. depending on how you address the issues we'll see how things go.
AJamez

AJamez wrote:

nm cus i love kalon

[Extra]
00:49:064 (3,4) - maybe ctrl g here to follow 00:45:564 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:08:731 (2,3,4,5) - idk but in this part i would change something like this to keep flow
02:20:064 (8,1) - swap NC

[Hard]
00:33:231 (4,5,6,1) - blanc ~ i remapped this part
02:14:564 (1) - unnesscary NC ~ its for the slider speed up and loud drum beat

easy and normal looks p neat yeeeet
gudluck powhz~

Thanks for the mod guys
[ Darling ]
why wont this get ranked?
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