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Ryu* feat.Mayumi Morinaga - Din Don Dan [Taiko]

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Surono
>Kantan
* 01:31:887 - ini kenapa kat finish? ganti don ajalah biar sama kek repeating part yg trakhir. kalau kdk lagi 01:35:315 (3,4,5) - ntar bosenin ketemu ini

>Muzukashii
* 00:55:887 - ini finisher doang di diff ini, copot aja.

dah itu aja yg typo, hati-hati cieg. check lagi sendiri kalau bisa =_=
Topic Starter
[R]
double checking everything, and this should be fine now @@
UPDATE
Surono
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Skylish
IRC discussion with R
2017-05-13 12:41 [R]: hi skylish
2017-05-13 12:41 [R]: can you help my map ??
2017-05-13 12:42 Skylish: sure, np the map please
2017-05-13 12:43 [R]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/865236 Ryu* feat.Mayumi Morinaga - Din Don Dan]
2017-05-13 12:43 [R]: it's a bulb one
2017-05-13 12:43 Skylish: lol this map
2017-05-13 12:43 Skylish: I am not taking request in-game though
2017-05-13 12:43 Skylish: I can only give you some brief suggestion
2017-05-13 12:44 Skylish: * reclaim before we start any thing
2017-05-13 12:44 [R]: it's okay
2017-05-13 12:44 Skylish: good, let's check the map a bit
2017-05-13 12:44 Skylish: iirc I had modded it once
2017-05-13 12:44 [R]: sure
2017-05-13 12:44 Skylish: yeah lmao p/4862446
2017-05-13 12:45 [R]: xD
2017-05-13 12:45 Skylish: 00:35:959 (10,11) - in Oni
2017-05-13 12:46 Skylish: how about ctrl+G them?
2017-05-13 12:46 Skylish: 11 has a higher pitch
2017-05-13 12:47 [R]: it was a variation with 00:32:530 -
2017-05-13 12:47 [R]: and i want to reflect it with 00:36:601 -
2017-05-13 12:48 Skylish: okay then
2017-05-13 12:48 Skylish: how about isolating 00:37:458 (2,3) -
2017-05-13 12:48 Skylish: to emphasize the melody here?
2017-05-13 12:48 Skylish: i.e. shifting 00:37:780 - to 00:37:994 -
2017-05-13 12:50 [R]: im follow the electronic, so this should be work
2017-05-13 12:50 Skylish: this = remain unchanged?
2017-05-13 12:51 [R]: yeah xD
2017-05-13 12:51 [R]: eh
2017-05-13 12:51 Skylish: 00:45:172 (7,8,9,10,11) - / 00:52:029 (7,8,9,10,11) - do you consider some variations on them?
2017-05-13 12:51 [R]: i move 00:37:780 - this to 00:37:994 -
2017-05-13 12:51 Skylish: oh okay
2017-05-13 12:52 [R]: wich color the variation will work
2017-05-13 12:52 [R]: can you suggest it ??
2017-05-13 12:52 Skylish: I think d/k can work
2017-05-13 12:53 Skylish: at 00:37:994 -
2017-05-13 12:53 Skylish: personally k is better imo
2017-05-13 12:53 [R]: okay k then
2017-05-13 12:53 Skylish: since it can emphasize the higher pitch of electro at 00:38:101 - , comparing with the one at 00:32:315 -
2017-05-13 12:54 Skylish: 00:45:172 (7,8,9,10,11) - / 00:52:029 (7,8,9,10,11) - do you consider some variations on them? <-- back to this question
2017-05-13 12:54 [R]: wich color the variation will work << xD
2017-05-13 12:54 Skylish: LOL lemme think...
2017-05-13 12:55 Skylish: umm do you think you need to variate the colours?
2017-05-13 12:55 Skylish: If not, it is still fine
2017-05-13 12:55 Skylish: If you want to variate those colours of 5-plets, I can give you suggestion; if you do not want to variate, the current version is still fine
2017-05-13 12:56 [R]: the current it's fine for me since inner has variation in here
2017-05-13 12:56 Skylish: alright
2017-05-13 12:56 Skylish: then no change
2017-05-13 12:56 Skylish: 00:57:172 (1,1,1) -
2017-05-13 12:56 Skylish: do you really need 00:57:172 (1,1) - be STRONG FINISHERS?
2017-05-13 12:56 Skylish: They are too loud
2017-05-13 12:57 Skylish: why do you want to emphasize them then?
2017-05-13 12:57 [R]: 00:57:172 (1,1) - should i remove the finisher ??
2017-05-13 12:58 Skylish: I think you should, since they are too awkward and do not really need special emphases. That's why I was asking you, ' why do you want to put K K at 00:57:172 (1,1) - ?'
2017-05-13 12:58 [R]: okay i remove it
2017-05-13 12:58 [R]: in muzukashii too
2017-05-13 12:59 Skylish: 01:10:030 -
2017-05-13 12:59 Skylish: how about adding a kat in Oni ?
2017-05-13 13:00 [R]: sounds better, added
2017-05-13 13:00 Skylish: it seems you missed it
2017-05-13 13:00 Skylish: okay
2017-05-13 13:00 Skylish: 01:28:673 (8,9,10) -
2017-05-13 13:01 Skylish: ddk works better arh? remember what I mentioned above? dkk works better in VERY obvious high-pitch electro
2017-05-13 13:01 [R]: changed ddk
2017-05-13 13:01 Skylish: I don't think this one belongs to a very high-pitch one
2017-05-13 13:02 Skylish: that's all for Oni imo
2017-05-13 13:02 Skylish: ** reminder again: this is not an IRC mod, just a little discussion, no icon is guaranteed
2017-05-13 13:02 [R]: sure man xD
2017-05-13 13:02 [R]: can you mod the inner too ??
2017-05-13 13:03 Skylish: In muzukashii, 00:07:887 (22) -
2017-05-13 13:03 Skylish: Did you miss a Finish?
2017-05-13 13:03 Skylish: * I wanna continue with the whole set first
2017-05-13 13:03 Skylish: Oni --> Muzu --> Futsuu --> Kantan
2017-05-13 13:04 [R]: maybe no need in there, it's still calm
2017-05-13 13:05 Skylish: a weak cymbal crash can be heard, and it locates at the 5 th bar (NC mode works here)
2017-05-13 13:05 Skylish: at 00:07:887 -
2017-05-13 13:05 Skylish: But as you like, if you don't want to present the cymbal crash, that'd be fine though
2017-05-13 13:06 [R]: okay finisher, the suggestion is reasonable
2017-05-13 13:07 Skylish: 00:56:744 - how about shifting it to 00:56:958 -
2017-05-13 13:07 Skylish: it seems this change suits your mapping style more
2017-05-13 13:07 Skylish: arh forget my words
2017-05-13 13:07 Skylish: ^ neglect this suggestion lol
2017-05-13 13:08 [R]: hehe
2017-05-13 13:09 Skylish: 01:28:887 (8) - / 01:35:744 (8) - why not kats?
2017-05-13 13:09 Skylish: variation purpose?
2017-05-13 13:09 [R]: change kat
2017-05-13 13:11 Skylish: 01:39:172 - shift it to 01:38:958 - , to match the vocal ?
2017-05-13 13:11 [R]: okay
2017-05-13 13:12 Skylish: let's move on to Futsuu
2017-05-13 13:12 Skylish: 00:07:887 - same in Muzu
2017-05-13 13:13 [R]: added dinisher
2017-05-13 13:13 [R]: finisher*
2017-05-13 13:13 Skylish: 00:19:030 - ought to be kat
2017-05-13 13:14 Skylish: 00:18:172 (6,7,8) - k k k is acceptable
2017-05-13 13:14 [R]: maybe i change in 00:18:172 - here don to make same with kantan
2017-05-13 13:14 Skylish: 00:18:172 - d k k now?
2017-05-13 13:15 [R]: d k d should be work
2017-05-13 13:16 Skylish: yes d k d works, it shows a mirror pattern at 00:25:029 (6,7,8) -
2017-05-13 13:16 Skylish: good
2017-05-13 13:16 Skylish: 00:39:172 - how about this one? kat as well?
2017-05-13 13:17 Skylish: 00:42:815 - you can put a k here, to fill the pattern up, considering those at 00:32:315 (5,6,7) - / 00:39:173 (5,6,7) -
2017-05-13 13:17 [R]: okay
2017-05-13 13:18 [R]: okay
2017-05-13 13:18 [R]: at 00:38:744 - should i change kat ??
2017-05-13 13:18 [R]: to make same with 00:31:886 -
2017-05-13 13:19 Skylish: 00:31:887 - d , 00:38:744 - k works better
2017-05-13 13:19 Skylish: according to their pitches
2017-05-13 13:20 [R]: okay then i invert it
2017-05-13 13:21 Skylish: 01:03:601 - how about kat?
2017-05-13 13:21 Skylish: similar case at 00:25:029 (6,7,8) -
2017-05-13 13:22 Skylish: 01:04:458 - you missed a Finish here, same as 00:07:887 -
2017-05-13 13:22 [R]: changed kat
2017-05-13 13:22 Skylish: 01:10:244 - kat as well?
2017-05-13 13:23 [R]: 01:04:458 - added finish
2017-05-13 13:23 [R]: 01:04:458 - changed kat
2017-05-13 13:23 [R]: i mean in 01:10:244 -
2017-05-13 13:23 Skylish: okay
2017-05-13 13:24 Skylish: 01:19:887 (1) -
2017-05-13 13:24 Skylish: finish it
2017-05-13 13:24 Skylish: *add Finish on it
2017-05-13 13:24 [R]: added finish
2017-05-13 13:25 Skylish: 00:07:887 -
2017-05-13 13:25 Skylish: again in Kantan, Finish
2017-05-13 13:25 [R]: yes
2017-05-13 13:26 Skylish: 00:40:459 (1) - remove the Finish? considering 00:33:601 (1) -
2017-05-13 13:27 [R]: okay
2017-05-13 13:28 Skylish: 01:04:458 - Finish should be added, we've been talking about these timings lol
2017-05-13 13:29 [R]: added finish
2017-05-13 13:29 Skylish: 01:10:458 - you can shift it to 01:10:244 - , to match the vocal, the gap should be great enough for Kantan level players to react
2017-05-13 13:30 [R]: it's to put there in 1/2 ?
2017-05-13 13:30 [R]: it's fine*
2017-05-13 13:31 Skylish: yes
2017-05-13 13:32 [R]: then, can i move 00:22:030 - to red tick backward ??
2017-05-13 13:32 Skylish: 01:09:601 - / 01:10:244 - is a 1.5 beat, so it's fine
2017-05-13 13:32 [R]: i just aware about placing 1/2
2017-05-13 13:32 Skylish: oh year
2017-05-13 13:32 Skylish: *yeah
2017-05-13 13:32 Skylish: 00:22:030 (3) - shift to 00:21:815 - is fine
2017-05-13 13:33 [R]: okay thank you, moved all note like this
2017-05-13 13:33 Skylish: :^)
2017-05-13 13:33 Skylish: Then that's all for your mapset
2017-05-13 13:33 Skylish: I am going to have lunch now
2017-05-13 13:33 Skylish: Please ask another BN to check the mapset
2017-05-13 13:33 Skylish: :D
2017-05-13 13:34 Skylish: Do you want me to post this IRC discussion on the thread?
2017-05-13 13:34 [R]: thank you for the attention
2017-05-13 13:34 [R]: sure
2017-05-13 13:34 [R]: get the kudos

To next Qualify BN: please check Charlotte's Inner Oni in detail since I did not go through it at all in the discussion with R.

GL! :D
gaston_2199
Hi!
M4M, sorry for delay :o
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:56:744 (3) - Move to 00:57:172 - , here 00:56:744 - I don't listen a sound to follow, and is better to the break with the vocal
  2. 00:57:387 - Add kat? Only if you accept the above
  3. 01:04:458 (17) - don? consistency with 00:57:601 (1) -
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:815 (10,11) - Ctrl + g? Follow the vocal and consistency with 00:25:672 (10,11) -
  2. 00:48:387 (16) - Why not kat? to mark difference, plus I feel that the tone is higher
  3. 00:56:744 (22) - Move to 00:56:958 - . The flow is better imo
  4. 01:00:172 (10,22,34,4) - I do not know, but I feel that these notes could easily confuse a player Muzukashii. I suggest remove to follow the vocal only
  5. 01:00:601 (11,12,13,35,36,37) - You could replace them with others to vary like kkd dkk or dkd
  6. 01:15:387 (10,11) - Same as 00:18:815 (10,11) -
[ Oni]
  1. 00:39:922 (15) - Move to 00:40:137 - . Sounds is better
  2. 00:56:744 (33) - Move to 00:56:958 -
  3. 00:59:637 (12) - kat? Follow also the vocal
That's all, sorry for don't mod Charlotte diff. Is really fine for me.
Good luck for ranking~
Surono
did irc previously, many changes from skylish mod too and yeah charlotte diff fine.

reply gaston and cmb4rebub
Topic Starter
[R]

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
M4M, sorry for delay :o
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:56:744 (3) - Move to 00:57:172 - , here 00:56:744 - I don't listen a sound to follow, and is better to the break with the vocal
  2. 00:57:387 - Add kat? Only if you accept the above listen carefully, following background sound more fit here
  3. 01:04:458 (17) - don? consistency with 00:57:601 (1) - 00:57:601 - change kat instead
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:815 (10,11) - Ctrl + g? Follow the vocal and consistency with 00:25:672 (10,11) - ok
  2. 00:48:387 (16) - Why not kat? to mark difference, plus I feel that the tone is higher ok
  3. 00:56:744 (22) - Move to 00:56:958 - . The flow is better imo refer to futsuu
  4. 01:00:172 (10,22,34,4) - I do not know, but I feel that these notes could easily confuse a player Muzukashii. I suggest remove to follow the vocal only
  5. 01:00:601 (11,12,13,35,36,37) - You could replace them with others to vary like kkd dkk or dkd i keep for now
  6. 01:15:387 (10,11) - Same as 00:18:815 (10,11) - ok
[ Oni]
  1. 00:39:922 (15) - Move to 00:40:137 - . Sounds is better ok
  2. 00:56:744 (33) - Move to 00:56:958 - refer to futsuu
  3. 00:59:637 (12) - kat? Follow also the vocal kd dk more easy to hit as singletap
That's all, sorry for don't mod Charlotte diff. Is really fine for me.
Good luck for ranking~
thank you gaston
Surono
re , hi ther ee

consistency looks good now. ty2gastonCastano.
Volta
soon
Surono
ngemodeng kek puasa 69jam adja hadehh mantab
Volta

Surono wrote:

ngemodeng kek puasa 69jam adja hadehh mantab
puasa ngemod abis ini :V


[General]
  1. Tambahin "DDR" ke tag? biasanya orang males ngetik DanceDanceRevolution kalo nge search
[Kantan]
  1. 00:10:458 - kalo menurutku mendingan dipindah ke 00:12:172 - karena disini pace lagunya lebih jelas peningkatannya karena drumnya
  2. 00:14:315 - pindah ke 00:13:887 - ritme nya lebih simpel dan cocok ngikutin peningkatan pacenya.
  3. 00:14:744 - kalo buat kantan sih menurutku spinnernya diganti 1 note aja biar ada break 4/1 sebelum kiai daripada ngespam note di spinner. warnanya bebas. d kyknya oke.

  4. 00:21:815 - pindah ke white tick aja gimana (00:22:030) - , terus
    >> 00:21:601 -tambah k disini, ritmenya lebih sederhana daripada red tick, dan secara note density bisa membuat kiainya terasa lebih intens dibanding 00:35:315 -
  5. 00:28:672 - sama dengan ^, lebih baik pindah ke 00:28:887 - terus bisa ganti jd k buat variasi karena drumnya beda
    >> 00:27:601 - pindah ke 00:28:458 - buat 4/1 break menjelang akhir kiai

  6. 00:43:887 ~ di sesi ini kayaknya densitynya bisa dikurangin dikit karena relatif lebih kalem. pertimbangkan buat delete: 00:44:744 - , 00:51:601 -, 00:56:315 -
  7. 01:03:601 (1,2) - swap aja biar 01:04:458 - konsisten k sama 00:57:601 -
  8. 01:11:315 - ganti spinner dengan note, seperti awal td

  9. 01:18:387 - sama kyk mod kiai pertama
  10. 01:24:173 (2,3,4) - sama seperti 00:28:458 - , bikin rest, disusul triplet. soalnya bagian akhir kiai sequencenya panjang, kasian newbie kalo gak dikasih rest.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:08:958 - unsnapped object

  2. 00:10:458 - pindah ke 00:10:244 - buat konsisten ngikutin melodinya? di muzu aja gak ada note disini.
  3. 00:12:387 - biar transisi dari kantan ke muzu lebih smooth disini rasanya bisa ditambah d. buat nandain peningkatan pace juga
  4. 00:14:101 - sama ^
  5. 00:23:101 - kalo buat futsuu rasanya note ini gak terlalu penting dan bisa dihapus, seperti alasan diatas. di 00:16:244 - juga gak dimap kan vocalnya
  6. 00:29:958 - sama ^

  7. 00:50:530 - untuk sesi yg kalem rasanya 4-plet agak terlalu berlebihan. coba delete aja.
  8. 00:55:030 - hapus supaya konsisten sama 00:48:172 - , suara melodinya jg kedengerannya mulai di 00:55:244 -

  9. 01:19:672 - sama seperti 00:23:101
  10. 01:26:530 - ^
  11. 01:33:387 - ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. ini diffnya terlalu continuous ngemapnya. lg banyak kasus dq gara-gara ini, lebih baik tambahin 2/1 break di dua atau tiga tempat
  2. 00:33:172 - ini bisa dihapus, cocok pas melodinya gak maen
  3. 01:00:601 (11,12) - sama seperti atas, bisa diapus seiring sama break di vocal. secara spread sama oni gak masalah.
  4. 01:04:030 (21,22) - sama seperti ^
  5. 01:07:458 (31,32) - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:08:208 - eh kenapa ini jd k? di muzukashii masih tetep d.
  2. 00:11:637 - sama ^
  3. 00:08:744 - ini perbedaan bass nya menurutku sih bisa diabaikan. di 00:10:458 - juga diabaikan. hapus?
  4. 00:13:887 - sebaliknya disini bisa ditambah d biar selaras sama pace nya

  5. 00:17:208 - tambah note? bikin perbedaan sama Muzukashii dan konsisten dengan 00:20:637 -
  6. 00:24:065 - sama ^
  7. 01:13:780 - tambah sesuatu
  8. 01:20:637 - ^

  9. 00:46:458 - change to k, pitchnya lebih tinggi dari 00:46:244 - dan konsisten sama lower diffs

[Charlotte's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:244 - change to d? i think you might like more complex pattern
  2. 00:11:101 - same as ^

  3. 00:56:744 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288) - try kdddkdk? it would fits better with the clap at (286) and (288)
  4. 00:57:601 - add finisher to give more emphasis to start of the session?
  5. 01:04:458 - same as ^
  6. 01:26:744 - same as ^
panggil lagi kalo udah :3
Charlotte

Volta wrote:

Surono wrote:

ngemodeng kek puasa 69jam adja hadehh mantab
puasa ngemod abis ini :V


[General]
  1. Tambahin "DDR" ke tag? biasanya orang males ngetik DanceDanceRevolution kalo nge search
[Charlotte's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:244 - change to d? i think you might like more complex pattern fixed.
  2. 00:11:101 - same as ^ ^

  3. 00:56:744 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288) - try kdddkdk? it would fits better with the clap at (286) and (288) Good~
  4. 00:57:601 - add finisher to give more emphasis to start of the session? added
  5. 01:04:458 - same as ^ ^
  6. 01:26:744 - same as ^ ^
panggil lagi kalo udah :3
Thank you mod

Charlotte's Inner Oni
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Topic Starter
[R]

Volta wrote:

Surono wrote:

ngemodeng kek puasa 69jam adja hadehh mantab
puasa ngemod abis ini :V


[General]
  1. Tambahin "DDR" ke tag? biasanya orang males ngetik DanceDanceRevolution kalo nge search ok
[Kantan]
  1. 00:10:458 - kalo menurutku mendingan dipindah ke 00:12:172 - karena disini pace lagunya lebih jelas peningkatannya karena drumnya
  2. 00:14:315 - pindah ke 00:13:887 - ritme nya lebih simpel dan cocok ngikutin peningkatan pacenya.
  3. 00:14:744 - kalo buat kantan sih menurutku spinnernya diganti 1 note aja biar ada break 4/1 sebelum kiai daripada ngespam note di spinner. warnanya bebas. d kyknya oke.

  4. 00:21:815 - pindah ke white tick aja gimana (00:22:030) - , terus
    >> 00:21:601 -tambah k disini, ritmenya lebih sederhana daripada red tick, dan secara note density bisa membuat kiainya terasa lebih intens dibanding 00:35:315 -
  5. 00:28:672 - sama dengan ^, lebih baik pindah ke 00:28:887 - terus bisa ganti jd k buat variasi karena drumnya beda
    >> 00:27:601 - pindah ke 00:28:458 - buat 4/1 break menjelang akhir kiai

  6. 00:43:887 ~ di sesi ini kayaknya densitynya bisa dikurangin dikit karena relatif lebih kalem. pertimbangkan buat delete: 00:44:744 - , 00:51:601 -, 00:56:315 -
  7. 01:03:601 (1,2) - swap aja biar 01:04:458 - konsisten k sama 00:57:601 -
  8. 01:11:315 - ganti spinner dengan note, seperti awal td

  9. 01:18:387 - sama kyk mod kiai pertama
  10. 01:24:173 (2,3,4) - sama seperti 00:28:458 - , bikin rest, disusul triplet. soalnya bagian akhir kiai sequencenya panjang, kasian newbie kalo gak dikasih rest.
all applied

[Futsuu]
  1. 01:08:958 - unsnapped object

  2. 00:10:458 - pindah ke 00:10:244 - buat konsisten ngikutin melodinya? di muzu aja gak ada note disini. gw ganti kat juga biar nyamain dengan diff lain
  3. 00:12:387 - biar transisi dari kantan ke muzu lebih smooth disini rasanya bisa ditambah d. buat nandain peningkatan pace juga
  4. 00:14:101 - sama ^
  5. 00:23:101 - kalo buat futsuu rasanya note ini gak terlalu penting dan bisa dihapus, seperti alasan diatas. di 00:16:244 - juga gak dimap kan vocalnya
  6. 00:29:958 - sama ^

  7. 00:50:530 - untuk sesi yg kalem rasanya 4-plet agak terlalu berlebihan. coba delete aja.
  8. 00:55:030 - hapus supaya konsisten sama 00:48:172 - , suara melodinya jg kedengerannya mulai di 00:55:244 -

  9. 01:19:672 - sama seperti 00:23:101
  10. 01:26:530 - ^
  11. 01:33:387 - ^
all applied
[Muzukashii]
  1. ini diffnya terlalu continuous ngemapnya. lg banyak kasus dq gara-gara ini, lebih baik tambahin 2/1 break di dua atau tiga tempat
  2. 00:33:172 - ini bisa dihapus, cocok pas melodinya gak maen
  3. 01:00:601 (11,12) - sama seperti atas, bisa diapus seiring sama break di vocal. secara spread sama oni gak masalah.
  4. 01:04:030 (21,22) - sama seperti ^
  5. 01:07:458 (31,32) - ^
all applied and added some break

[Oni]
  1. 00:08:208 - eh kenapa ini jd k? di muzukashii masih tetep d. ngikutin flow di 00:07:244 (25,26,27,28) - menurut gw ini spot yang pas buat ngasih increasing
  2. 00:11:637 - sama ^ refer to ^
  3. 00:08:744 - ini perbedaan bass nya menurutku sih bisa diabaikan. di 00:10:458 - juga diabaikan. hapus? refer to ^
  4. 00:13:887 - sebaliknya disini bisa ditambah d biar selaras sama pace nyaok

  5. 00:17:208 - tambah note? bikin perbedaan sama Muzukashii dan konsisten dengan 00:20:637 -
  6. 00:24:065 - sama ^
  7. 01:13:780 - tambah sesuatu
  8. 01:20:637 - ^ niat buat variasi disini, but consitency sems work
  9. 00:46:458 - change to k, pitchnya lebih tinggi dari 00:46:244 - dan konsisten sama lower diffs ok
all applied
gw tambahin beberapa note di 01:10:672 (5,6,7) - buat nyamain increasing di awal


panggil lagi kalo udah :3
Thank you Volta
Volta
additional mod to oni (no kd)

[Oni]
00:40:137 - pindah ke 00:39:708 - ? biar konsisten 1/2 k-d-d dengan 00:33:172 (12,13,14) -
00:48:065 - tripletnya jd terasa terlalu maksa, mungkin karena di Muzu jadi kosong. lebih baik dihapus sama 00:48:387 - ini jg
00:54:922 - dan 00:55:244 - sama seperti atas, bisa dihapus
00:49:351 - dan 00:49:672 - tambah d ritmenya jd lebih enak imo
Topic Starter
[R]

Volta wrote:

additional mod to oni (no kd)

[Oni]
00:40:137 - pindah ke 00:39:708 - ? biar konsisten 1/2 k-d-d dengan 00:33:172 (12,13,14) - ok
00:48:065 - tripletnya jd terasa terlalu maksa, mungkin karena di Muzu jadi kosong. lebih baik dihapus ok sama 00:48:387 - ini jg delete 00:48:815 - instead, klo disitu kosong rasanya malah weird
00:54:922 - dan 00:55:244 - sama seperti atas, bisa dihapus ^
00:49:351 - dan 00:49:672 - tambah d ritmenya jd lebih enak imo only add 00:49:672 - dk nya udah banyak di part ini
Volta
Looks good, congratz for losing ur virginity~
Surono
tidak terduga kwkwkwkw

YAY~~~~~~~
Akemi_Homura
gratz~ :3
Surono
wadohh udah lewat, sukuran sukuran yuk.
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