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Hi!

General
- Yes, goku was right. BPM is 72, not 144. So I suggest you to change it. Better be safe
- Noticed many 1/2's on the Lowest diff. So I think you'll need an Easy diff??? Maybe???
- Check your map folder, is this map supposed to have 3 osb files?

Lunna's Normal
- 00:56:216 (1) - I think this spinner is too short. If you want to, you can change it into something like this http://puu.sh/mBenM/c8b3ebea7b.jpg
- 01:09:133 (4) - I don't understand what this notes follow, there's neither vocal, drums or piano in this part. Try this instead http://puu.sh/mBeqV/2009f8f5f1.jpg
- 01:20:800 (1) - Hmmmm, I concern about this slider's readability since its path is barely visible. I you could make a "hole" inside this "curly" slider that would be great http://puu.sh/mBeJC/1897213806.jpg

Gudbai
Oooo, U stick with DS all the time
- 00:08:925 (4,1) - 00:13:091 (2,3) - These two are the only time you stack a circle in a slider head. While I'm actually pretty okay with that, stacking them as such doesn't really represent the song. As you can hear, they both have really strong piano sound which will be better complemented with a movement
- 00:47:466 (1,2) - To be honest, I dislike this overlap ._.
- 01:18:091 - Maybe add a circle here? I don't really know why you left this part empty http://puu.sh/mBfib/2ab8c5adcc.jpg
- 01:19:758 - same ^ http://puu.sh/mBfkb/79378f75f0.jpg

Apart from those nitpick stuff, I like this map!!!
Good luck Ranking :D
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Hey

Nice map

Normal

00:50:800 (1) - Dont't do this, this is a normal difficulty and the slider shouldn't be so weird in shape, try a different shape
00:58:925 (2,3) - Unstack this and make it flow down or diagonally
01:05:591 (3,4) - ^
01:20:800 (1) - Inexperienced players won't be able to read this

I mean other than that its a great map. Cool SB.

Good luck with rank
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i hate pp wrote:

Hey

Nice map

Normal

00:50:800 (1) - Dont't do this, this is a normal difficulty and the slider shouldn't be so weird in shape, try a different shape
00:58:925 (2,3) - Unstack this and make it flow down or diagonally
01:05:591 (3,4) - ^
01:20:800 (1) - Inexperienced players won't be able to read this

I mean other than that its a great map. Cool SB.

Good luck with rank
Ouch this is the second time yiu modded this... I shouldnt havê kudo'ed you sorrh...
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Yaoi! >w<
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Regraz wrote:

Yaoi! >w<
Xd, this anime is perfect... I wish I could rank it but I wont be able to log in osu for some time:/

Srsly this was the only anime that dragged me down and did me cry like my life was nonsense after the last episode
If you felt the same, dont Try the manga, it was even worst
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nice, another rokutousei no yoru :3
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maybe revive this (?)
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IamKwaN told me too if source should be NO.6 not No.6 :3
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KittyAdventure wrote:

IamKwaN told me too if source should be NO.6 not No.6 :3
Thank you! It's true, it's in capitals everywhere...
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01:20:800 (1,3) - K
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Promise
00:34:133 (1) - i feel this should be in a different shape, it doesn't look right to me just going straight up and down, and maybe lower the slider velocity because idk if newbies will be able to follow so well
00:52:883 (2) - this should be placed a little higher above the other note to look better in my opinion, makes it easier to read
01:23:300 (2) -
01:23:716 (3) - ^ i feel these two should be less spaced, even maybe just a little, from the note that follows, and maybe place all three a little higher up, but not too much, x256 y320 seems right

overall its pretty good, but one last thing that might be of consideration is to make the circles size a little bit bigger, 3.5 seems good to me.
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<333
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I will try to search modders
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Mjenk5150 wrote:

Promise
00:34:133 (1) - i feel this should be in a different shape, it doesn't look right to me just going straight up and down, and maybe lower the slider velocity because idk if newbies will be able to follow so well Hmm I like the current one, I think it express the emptyness of the piano.
00:52:883 (2) - this should be placed a little higher above the other note to look better in my opinion, makes it easier to read I guess it's probably fine, the low BPM doesn't make it a problem to me.
01:23:300 (2) -
01:23:716 (3) - ^ i feel these two should be less spaced, even maybe just a little, from the note that follows, and maybe place all three a little higher up, but not too much, x256 y320 seems right I can't make anything about those since I'm follow the DS through the entire map

overall its pretty good, but one last thing that might be of consideration is to make the circles size a little bit bigger, 3.5 seems good to me. But it is CS 4 already :3
Thank you!

Updated with "NO.6" Source instead of "No.6"
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(U・ω・)⊃~☆
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Modem wrote:

(U・ω・)⊃~☆
Thank you <3
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[Lunna's Normal]
00:22:050 Add a note here.
00:42:883 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/sZxd0/f8a36c4368.png
00:50:800 (1) - 01:20:800 (1) - Slider with such shape ought not to appear in lower difficulties like Normal.
00:53:091 (2) - Please follow vocal here.
00:56:216 (1) - quite off-place. Use normal notes instead.
01:12:050 (2,3) - You need to keep consistent with former rhythms.

[Promise]
00:55:800 (1) - Same as Normal.
01:18:091 Add a note here
01:18:925 ^
01:19:758 ^
01:23:300 (2,3,1) - Try this pattern: https://puu.sh/sZxpV/8397144bd7.png
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Regraz wrote:

[Lunna's Normal]
00:22:050 Add a note here.
00:42:883 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/sZxd0/f8a36c4368.png
00:50:800 (1) - 01:20:800 (1) - Slider with such shape ought not to appear in lower difficulties like Normal.
00:53:091 (2) - Please follow vocal here.
00:56:216 (1) - quite off-place. Use normal notes instead.
01:12:050 (2,3) - You need to keep consistent with former rhythms.

[Promise]
00:55:800 (1) - Same as Normal. I don't see a problem here, they are different, in the normal it was indeed out of place but the spinner here is following the drums, so I don't need to make it too heavy for an advanced like this
01:18:091 Add a note here
01:18:925 ^ i'll keep a break here
01:19:758 ^
01:23:300 (2,3,1) - Try this pattern: https://puu.sh/sZxpV/8397144bd7.png
Thank you! not commented = fixed in one way or another
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Recheck, no kds.
[Lunna's Normal]
00:50:800 (1) - Still overlaps with itself pretty much. A more clear sliderpath is needed.
01:12:466 (4,5) - Shape still seems a bit weird. Why not use normal shapes?

[Promise]
01:23:300 (2,3,1) - Try this pattern: https://puu.sh/sZxpV/8397144bd7.png

Call me back when you've fixed those above. :D
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Regraz wrote:

Recheck, no kds.
[Lunna's Normal]
01:12:466 (4,5) - Shape still seems a bit weird. Why not use normal shapes? thats my old style, its cute for me and i want to keep this.
@Lumael if you want fix go ahead
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