00:03:868 (2,2) - Single notes on blue tick is a no-no. I would recommend using repeats here instead. Also the others as well but tbh Idk how I would describe it as.
It's just how the song is and I used repeats at other parts of it00:30:546 (4) - Feels like a random hitsound to me because it doesn't match up with the sound in the music
Removed00:30:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I recommend spacing this out, it's very cluttered and the 1/2s don't play as freely since everything is so close and the flow doesn't quite compensate with how little area you're given to play this out
Gonna keep this for now00:34:403 (1,2,3,4) - All the sudden 1/1 sliders doesn't really provide much for the music - Another rhythm you can use to progress the song instead of slowing it down
http://puu.sh/n5VKq/1f59168a81.jpg Same for this00:37:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream doesn't quite compensate as well, the song is getting more dynamic but it's the same throughout the whole entire stream and then that last 4 notes looks strange - Stuff like this to progress with the music
http://puu.sh/n5VTN/0af62a3878.jpg Changed stream00:42:975 (1,2) - Try moving these around
http://puu.sh/n5YjQ/3a9ef90dc7.jpg - This feels and plays relatively better
Changed pattern00:52:403 (3) - This slider shape makes this part look very bad imo. Too much unnecessary slider movements
Fixed01:08:260 (6,7) - Doesn't quite flow well. Look at where the tail on (6) is pointed and look at the follow point to (7) It's better to have a single motion instead of just to play the 1/2 fast to then hit the next note that is at an awkward location - But that's just me
Changed pattern for flow01:49:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Quite excessive on the NC. Not really necessary
NC every 4 notes01:53:260 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I like this one better
Some unclean sliders that I didn't want to mention because its all nit picking from me after that
00:00:118 (1,2) - Are overlaps like these beneficial? Look at how clean other possibilities are
http://puu.sh/n5WDU/169a7ac592.jpg Fixed00:15:118 (3,2) - This as well - It's
insane difficulty. You have plenty of space to add things on here, especially because this song is only 140bpm - Then again it's probably just me
Fixed00:20:475 (3) - We trying to make a
normal difficulty? You can definitely add a little more space here
Fixed00:28:189 (4,5,6) - Maybe move so it flows into it better
http://puu.sh/n5WQr/4f37874013.jpg I made it like counter curve here02:03:332 (5,1,3) - You can definitely blanket this. Fits very well
Already blanketed it. Improved it a bit01:18:546 (4) - That anchor slider doesn't really do anything. Rather just make it a curve slider
I prefer having varied sliders01:20:689 (1,2) - Same as ^ here
01:46:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Claps here doesn't sound good since these single notes resemble it but don't have actually hitsounds implemented 01:42:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Best to just to start the claps after this 01:49:832 (1) -
Fixed01:54:118 (3) - No clap on head. Different from the rest. I recommend to add it on
Added clap01:57:118 (2) - Flow breaks off here. Other possibility you can try
http://puu.sh/n5Xnp/f5607523f1.jpg Fixed02:03:332 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Very hidden. I mean it's hard to play and to tell which note is coming next. I would advise to definitely move things around here. [/color]
02:20:689 (1,2,3) - Making this more linear would look nice http://puu.sh/n5Xvr/4e38561f12.jpg No change00:00:118 (1) - You can map the way it sounds instead of using 3/4 sliders but tbh it's fine either way
00:30:975 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - What? This whole rhythm is reversed. It's best to start out with 1/1s then build up to single notes instead of making it the way it is now
Fixed rhythm on buildup00:57:975 (3) - Same with the other diffs, why the sudden anchor? This follows the same concept yet it doesn't have a red anchor 00:56:260 (3) -
Same reason as in Hard01:10:403 (1) - Placed at a strange area to start NC. Try
http://puu.sh/n5XSD/1fde9e0280.jpg and you can keep the 3 notes linear
I intentionally broke flow here02:12:118 (1,2) - Holy... what is this flow
I don't really know. Space is quite limited here :/02:21:975 (6,1) - Flow like this
http://puu.sh/n5Y6y/19ca3be2e4.jpg Done