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Sta feat.b - Argent Symmetry

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Topic Starter
jcjc

LMT1996 wrote:

From our modding queue.

It's quite well polished so far. Not my cup of tea but there's nothing wrong at all ;) .
Master
00:04:778 (1) - should end on 00:05:388 - this tick , then you can put 2 there, otherwise sliderend is on a silent tick. i think its fine like this and idw silence the sliderend lol
00:10:882 - Stream should start here not 00:10:795 (2) - here. ok changed
00:13:498 (1,2,1,2) - all blue ticks should be mapped as well because of the guitar sound. If you want to be gimmicky: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936506 . lol i think its fine plus idw to use gimmicky stuff here
01:12:976 (7) - stream ends here. idk keeping this for consistency i guess

Advanced
00:05:650 (2,3,4) - there technically should be another note here 00:05:562 - but it might be too hard for this diff. ya
00:52:917 (5,6) - isn't this too hard for advanced? owo fine imo
00:54:139 (2) - this should be broken up to 1/2 slider + a circle on red tick because the weird sound abruptly ends on the white tick. keeping this for consistency
00:58:498 (5,6) - same as 00:52:917 (5,6) - fine imo
01:04:080 (5,6) - ^ fine imo
01:09:661 (5,6) - ^ especially when 6 is silent. also keeping this for consistency lol
01:05:302 (2) - same as 00:54:139 (2) - keeping this for consistency
Good luck!

PS: By the way read the rules next time you join a modding queue, you didn't actually follow our rules but then I've already worked on it so it's an exception. It's not a popular thing to do, I know you probably just slipped it but then other people might think you're just spamming the queues hoping for a mod. opps xd
Thanks for modding :)
- Frontier -

From this shit queue

[Easy]
00:36:871 (1) - not perfectly blanket
01:15:243 (3) - imo 256|260 for 01:15:940 (1) blanket it
01:43:847 (1) - wierdo slider
02:06:173 (1) - nc out plz

[Rtyzen's Expert]
00:22:830 (1) - NC out

Sorry if this mod didn't helpful then don't give me a star :(
GL ~
Topic Starter
jcjc

- Frontier - wrote:


From this shit queue

[Easy]
00:36:871 (1) - not perfectly blanket fixed i guess
01:15:243 (3) - imo 256|260 for 01:15:940 (1) blanket it fine imo
01:43:847 (1) - wierdo slider ^
02:06:173 (1) - nc out plz uh following 4 bars per nc so i removed NC at 02:07:568 (2) - instead

Sorry if this mod didn't helpful then don't give me a star :(
GL ~
lol thanks for modding
Shyotamaze
Hi, from my modding queue

General
  1. Kiais only in Rtyzen's diff?
  2. Rtyzen's diff should be called Insane and not Expert since you don't have an Insane and the star rating it way too low to call it Expert
Easy
  1. 01:47:336 (2,4) - A blanket would be cool
  2. 02:01:638 (2,3) - ^
  3. 02:07:568 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this be closer to the center of the spinner? (Rule in RC iirc)
Rtyzen's Expert
  1. 00:07:394 (5) - It looks too curvy and weird imo, try to make the sliderend blanket with 00:06:871 (4) - 's curve
  2. 00:53:092 (2,1) - Fix blanket
  3. 01:34:080 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets/shapes can be improved
  4. 01:49:429 (1,3) - Blanket?
Master
  1. 00:21:522 (1,2,3) - It's a bit too much spaced imo especially in a "calm" part like that, consider reducing the spacing a little bit
  2. 00:32:685 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:34:603 (3,6) - Nazi blanket
Nice map, I can only mod nazi stuff because it's really good
Good luck! ;)
Topic Starter
jcjc

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

General
  1. Kiais only in Rtyzen's diff? yes
  2. Rtyzen's diff should be called Insane and not Expert since you don't have an Insane and the star rating it way too low to call it Expert following maimai difficulty naming where the 2nd highest difficulty tier is called expert
Easy
  1. 01:47:336 (2,4) - A blanket would be cool sure
  2. 02:01:638 (2,3) - ^ not blanketing this
  3. 02:07:568 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this be closer to the center of the spinner? (Rule in RC iirc) shifted things around a little

Master
  1. 00:21:522 (1,2,3) - It's a bit too much spaced imo especially in a "calm" part like that, consider reducing the spacing a little bit i think the spacing is fine lol its quite easy to hit anw
  2. 00:32:685 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 01:34:603 (3,6) - Nazi blanket fixed
Nice map, I can only mod nazi stuff because it's really good
Good luck! ;)
Thanks for modding!
AmigoDoChroome
hi
simple mod

easy
00:20:126 (1) - x204 y368
00:25:708 (1,2,1,2) - this again???? sickening
00:31:289 (1) - ^^^^
00:33:382 (3,1,2,3) - ^^^^^
00:38:266 (2) - x380 y132
00:39:661 (1) - 00:39:661 (1) - x300 y384
00:39:661 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988710
02:07:568 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988716

"basic"
00:11:057 (2,1,2) - overlap
00:37:219 (2,3,4) - weird
00:40:359 a note here
00:48:033 (1,2,3) - overlap
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988742

advanced

cs 4 please
00:09:661 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988752
00:53:266 (7) - pattern here
01:17:336 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988767
01:20:998 (1) - wtf nc
01:21:522 (1) - ^^^^^^
01:26:405 (1,1) - ^^^
01:36:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard for advanced's
01:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
01:52:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^^
01:53:615 (1,2) - red tick
02:00:592 (1) - nc
02:01:987 (1) - Ç
02:07:219 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard

master
i dont like de diff


Maps very ctrl c ctrl , but this on track. try to inspire in these maps :
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/492163
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/867819
Topic Starter
jcjc

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

hi
simple mod

easy
00:20:126 (1) - x204 y368 i prefer the original
00:25:708 (1,2,1,2) - this again???? sickening why not cuz its symmetry x d
00:31:289 (1) - ^^^^ ^
00:33:382 (3,1,2,3) - ^^^^^ ^
00:38:266 (2) - x380 y132 i prefer the original
00:39:661 (1) - 00:39:661 (1) - x300 y384 ^
00:39:661 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988710 symmetry xd
02:07:568 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988716 i prefer the original too

"basic"
00:11:057 (2,1,2) - overlap uh ya
00:37:219 (2,3,4) - weird hm ill think about it
00:40:359 a note here its fine imo
00:48:033 (1,2,3) - overlap well yes its one of the main patterns in this diff too
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988742 i prefer the original

advanced

cs 4 please
00:09:661 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988752 uh this doesn't follow ds?
00:53:266 (7) - pattern here what about it lol
01:17:336 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988767 i prefer the flow here
01:20:998 (1) - wtf nc NC to signal change in SV
01:21:522 (1) - ^^^^^^ ^
01:26:405 (1,1) - ^^^ ^
01:36:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard for advanced's fine imo
01:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^ ^
01:52:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^^ ^
01:53:615 (1,2) - red tick it's fine what
02:00:592 (1) - nc isn't it already NC'd lol
02:01:987 (1) - Ç ^
02:07:219 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard uh not really imo

master
i dont like de diff xdXdXDXdxdxD


Maps very ctrl c ctrl , but this on track. try to inspire in these maps :
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/492163
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/867819 :)
Thanks for looking at the map but i guess you don't get my mapping style lolll
MokouSmoke
from my queue~

[Advanced]
  1. 00:11:057 (2,3,4) - doesn't follow music since triplet places emphasis on 00:11:231 - just use same rhythm as 00:07:568 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:13:150 (1) - this note is just hiding in a corner :/ no need to follow DS rigorously here since it's advanced diff and gap is 2/1
  3. 00:42:452 (1,2,3) - so triplets tend to indicate the last note in the triplet, which in this case is the weak beat on the red tick. These will play much better if you shift these patterns so that the third object in the triplet starts on a white tick. Maybe try a rhythm like this and apply to all similar patterns: http://puu.sh/owa2H/b9b5e461bd.jpg
  4. 00:42:626 (3,1) - avoid overlaps pls, it's apparent with osu autostack. same thing at 00:43:324 (3,1) -
[Basic]
  1. 00:05:475 (2) - I would makes this a 1/1 slider. if you can't follow all the drum sounds, it's better to not half-ass it and follow 1/1 rhythm instead
  2. 00:14:196 (2) - 00:16:987 (1) - there are inconsistencies in your NC pattern
  3. 00:18:382 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:37:917 (3,4) - better to stack here so it's easier for new players to hit 1/2 rhythm
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:522 (1,2) - can you adjust slider shape so these blanket?
Wow sorry, this wasn't a very good mod. I might take a look again when I'm feeling less tired, but for now good luck~
Rtyzen
LMT1996

LMT1996 wrote:

00:05:475 (2) - Stream starts here. Imo 00:05:562 - is not that strong
00:34:603 (3) - This slider should end 00:34:778 - here because the vocal stops there, not the blue tick. It's not easy to tell that the vocal ends on red when playing, cuz the vocal is like dragging, so I just dragged the slider to the next vocal
00:35:301 (6) - same tbh ^
01:25:359 (3) - so what's this note mapped to? If it's the synth or piano then you also have to map other red ticks because there are piano/synth notes there as well. There aren't drums here. Changed
01:37:742 (4) - what's this note mapped to? If it's the vocal then there isn't a note here, if it's the synth then it should be a 1/4 slider. Changed
01:40:185 (3) - vocal ends on the white tick instead of the blue tick. Same as before
02:00:243 (4) - starts 02:00:068 - here. It also makes sense to start on 02:00:126 - this 1/6 tick but then it might be too obnoxious. So the red tick makes a bit more sense. Changed

Shyotamaze

Shyotamaze wrote:

Rtyzen's Expert
  1. 00:07:394 (5) - It looks too curvy and weird imo, try to make the sliderend blanket with 00:06:871 (4) - 's curve The slider shape is the same as the stream immediately after, which is intended
  2. 00:53:092 (2,1) - Fix blanket Fixed I think
  3. 01:34:080 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets/shapes can be improved Fixed a bit
  4. 01:49:429 (1,3) - Blanket? Fixed

- Frontier -

- Frontier - wrote:

[Rtyzen's Expert]
00:22:830 (1) - NC out It helps to read that slider cuz it's a bit abnormal

Thanks to all the modders!

xd
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jcjc

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~

[Advanced]
  1. 00:11:057 (2,3,4) - doesn't follow music since triplet places emphasis on 00:11:231 - just use same rhythm as 00:07:568 (1,2,3) - fixed
  2. 00:13:150 (1) - this note is just hiding in a corner :/ no need to follow DS rigorously here since it's advanced diff and gap is 2/1 kee[ing this
  3. 00:42:452 (1,2,3) - so triplets tend to indicate the last note in the triplet, which in this case is the weak beat on the red tick. These will play much better if you shift these patterns so that the third object in the triplet starts on a white tick. Maybe try a rhythm like this and apply to all similar patterns: http://puu.sh/owa2H/b9b5e461bd.jpg edit: fixed
  4. 00:42:626 (3,1) - avoid overlaps pls, it's apparent with osu autostack. same thing at 00:43:324 (3,1) - moved things around a little i guess?
[Basic]
  1. 00:05:475 (2) - I would makes this a 1/1 slider. if you can't follow all the drum sounds, it's better to not half-ass it and follow 1/1 rhythm instead ok fixed
  2. 00:14:196 (2) - 00:16:987 (1) - there are inconsistencies in your NC pattern 4 bars per NC
  3. 00:18:382 (1) - remove NC reworked NCs a little
  4. 00:37:917 (3,4) - better to stack here so it's easier for new players to hit 1/2 rhythm fine imo
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:522 (1,2) - can you adjust slider shape so these blanket? would cause ds issues lol

Wow sorry, this wasn't a very good mod. I might take a look again when I'm feeling less tired, but for now good luck~
Thanks for modding!!
DeRandom Otaku
Hi~ From my queue

Master :
  1. 00:22:219 (1) - remove nc
  2. 00:33:382 (1) - ^
  3. 01:10:359 (1,2) - not stacked properly
  4. 01:13:150 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:16:202 (2) - ^^
  6. 02:00:854 (2) - ^^^
  7. 02:02:249 (2) - ^^^^
Rtyzen's Expert :
  1. Increase AR ;w;
  2. Disable wide screen support
  3. 00:12:278 (3) - stack it properly with the end of 00:12:452 (4) -
  4. 00:55:533 - change to

    and add clap at 00:55:708 -
  5. 01:04:778 (1,2,3) - make all of these evenly spaced
  6. 01:41:929 (4) - this should be higher
Also disable wide screen support in Easy , Basic , advanced~

Thats all from me ~ the map is great!!~

Good luck!~
Topic Starter
jcjc

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi~ From my queue

Master :
  1. 00:22:219 (1) - remove nc keeping this
  2. 00:33:382 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 01:10:359 (1,2) - not stacked properly oops 1
  4. 01:13:150 (1,2) - ^ oops 2
  5. 01:16:202 (2) - ^^ oops 3
  6. 02:00:854 (2) - ^^^ oops 4
  7. 02:02:249 (2) - ^^^^oops 5

Also disable wide screen support in Easy , Basic , advanced~ oops 6

Thats all from me ~ the map is great!!~

Good luck!~
thansk for mod
hyouri
from modq
00:46:987 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - holy

[General/metadata]
add Rtyzen in tags cuz he did gd

[Master]
01:49:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - Idk why this hitsound part is triggering
01:32:685 - why no kiai starting here ? :/
01:19:429 (4) - should be ´NC here imo
01:28:498 (1,1,1,1) - If you want spacing like this I think it should be exposed. e.g 01:28:847 (1,1) - spacing between these two should be twice as big as 01:28:498 (1,1) - and 01:29:196 (1,1) - should have twice as big spacing as 01:28:847 (1,1) -
01:49:102 - Not entirely sure why this green tick is off (109102,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0)
01:49:080 (1) - imo this shouldn't be NC or 01:49:429 (1) -
Topic Starter
jcjc

Alveryn wrote:

from modq
00:46:987 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - holy yea

[General/metadata]
add Rtyzen in tags cuz he did gd oshit sorry zen

[Master]
01:49:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - Idk why this hitsound part is triggering whistles following vocals
01:32:685 - why no kiai starting here ? :/ there is a kiai flash xd but no kiai time cuz mentioned above
01:19:429 (4) - should be ´NC here imo nah
01:28:498 (1,1,1,1) - If you want spacing like this I think it should be exposed. e.g 01:28:847 (1,1) - spacing between these two should be twice as big as 01:28:498 (1,1) - and 01:29:196 (1,1) - should have twice as big spacing as 01:28:847 (1,1) - changed to the same spacing
01:49:102 - Not entirely sure why this green tick is off (109102,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0) it's to silence the 1/16 slider repeats a little if not my ears would die
01:49:080 (1) - imo this shouldn't be NC or 01:49:429 (1) - cuz its special Xd
-Spy_old
Mod Q!!

[Easy]

00:22:219 (3) - Can this slider end sooner? I get that you are trying to end it with the beat, but it plays weird and can be misleading for a beginner player

00:35:650 (3) - I dont know why, this slider feels so out of place XD maybe because its a bit too long

00:36:871 (1) - This could blanket 00:36:522 (4) - better

01:10:359 (1) - place this slider a tab bit to the bottom? Its better for a beginner to follow if the sliders are similar height, shape, etc.

01:18:731 (1) - You could make a nice blanket with 01:20:126 (2) -

01:20:126 (2) - Why is Kiai only on this tick, should last entire chorus/upbeat part!

02:01:638 (2) - This could blanket 02:01:638 (2) - better..

02:10:185 - This spinner ends at an awkward time, end at a white tick.

nice diff! nice sliders too

[Basic]

00:04:080 (2) - This slider could be spaced a tad bit farther away from the previous one.

00:05:475 (4) - ^

00:06:871 (2) - ^

00:09:661 (2) - ^ I'm not sure if this is what you are going for in terms of design, its just spacing is really key when it comes to Easy and Normal diffs because it can be confusing at first sight if you are not used to this kind of thing.

00:23:092 (1) - This in general needs to be spaced out more because even I was caught off test playing it XD

00:46:115 (3) - This slider looks really awkward, position it away from the next slider, or stack it.

00:48:469 - This section could be mapped better. (looks weird, plays weird, stacked weird, etc.)

00:53:964 - ^

00:59:632 - ^ I see the pattern you are going for, and it's nice... Just could be spaced better, or mapped better idk but looks very weird.

01:31:289 (4) - Space differently, looks weird

02:10:097 - like last diff, can slider end on white tick?

nice map though, really flows nice.

[Advanced]

[General]

Make AR 6.5 instead of 7.5 too hard to read for advanced

Make it CS 3.5, no need for CS 3.6?

[Beatmap]

00:03:382 (1) - This slider starts too soon after spinner, I think make spinner a bit shorter.

00:42:626 (3) - These following 3 reverse sliders play and sound really weird. Instead of (1,2,reverse slider) make only (1, , reverse slider) take out (2)

00:52:917 (5) - These kick sliders, are too hard for advanced, remap.

00:58:498 (5) - ^

01:12:800 (4) - This slider ends awkwardly, remap.

01:14:545 (3) - NC

01:18:208 (3) - make this slider have 1 less reverse.

01:26:405 (1) - No need for NC here.

01:50:301 - This part (2(Slider) 3, 4) too hard for advanced, remap.

01:54:312 (2) - Space away from 01:53:615 (1) -

02:07:394 - Never put a quad + slider stacked in advanced diff, remap.

Flows amazing, nice map!!

I tried Expert, cant follow or play but some notes:

[Rtyzen's Expert]

00:07:917 - NO, but srsly? You cant rank this with that pattern that is like a 6-6.5 star map pattern. Too fast anyways.

00:08:440 (3) - no. You cant have a stream in a circle pattern end and start another stream without any brief pause.

Rest of map is nice!
Topic Starter
jcjc

-Spy wrote:

Mod Q!!

[Easy]

00:22:219 (3) - Can this slider end sooner? I get that you are trying to end it with the beat, but it plays weird and can be misleading for a beginner player fixed i guess

00:35:650 (3) - I dont know why, this slider feels so out of place XD maybe because its a bit too long changed together with the above

00:36:871 (1) - This could blanket 00:36:522 (4) - better idk i tried

01:10:359 (1) - place this slider a tab bit to the bottom? Its better for a beginner to follow if the sliders are similar height, shape, etc. uh ok

01:18:731 (1) - You could make a nice blanket with 01:20:126 (2) - tried a little but it won't blanket that much from ds

01:20:126 (2) - Why is Kiai only on this tick, should last entire chorus/upbeat part! :(

02:01:638 (2) - This could blanket 02:01:638 (2) - better.. nah

02:10:185 - This spinner ends at an awkward time, end at a white tick. ends at the click sound

nice diff! nice sliders too

[Basic]

00:04:080 (2) - This slider could be spaced a tad bit farther away from the previous one.

00:05:475 (4) - ^

00:06:871 (2) - ^

00:09:661 (2) - ^ I'm not sure if this is what you are going for in terms of design, its just spacing is really key when it comes to Easy and Normal diffs because it can be confusing at first sight if you are not used to this kind of thing.

00:23:092 (1) - This in general needs to be spaced out more because even I was caught off test playing it XD

00:46:115 (3) - This slider looks really awkward, position it away from the next slider, or stack it.

00:48:469 - This section could be mapped better. (looks weird, plays weird, stacked weird, etc.)

00:53:964 - ^

00:59:632 - ^ I see the pattern you are going for, and it's nice... Just could be spaced better, or mapped better idk but looks very weird.

01:31:289 (4) - Space differently, looks weird

02:10:097 - like last diff, can slider end on white tick?

nice map though, really flows nice. replaced my basic with estellia-'s basic lol sorry for taking your time to mod this diff

[Advanced]

[General]

Make AR 6.5 instead of 7.5 too hard to read for advanced ok imo

Make it CS 3.5, no need for CS 3.6? yeah changed

[Beatmap]

00:03:382 (1) - This slider starts too soon after spinner, I think make spinner a bit shorter. fixed

00:42:626 (3) - These following 3 reverse sliders play and sound really weird. Instead of (1,2,reverse slider) make only (1, , reverse slider) take out (2) changed

00:52:917 (5) - These kick sliders, are too hard for advanced, remap. fine imo

00:58:498 (5) - ^ ^

01:12:800 (4) - This slider ends awkwardly, remap. ^

01:14:545 (3) - NC ok

01:18:208 (3) - make this slider have 1 less reverse. fine imo

01:26:405 (1) - No need for NC here. NC because SV change

01:50:301 - This part (2(Slider) 3, 4) too hard for advanced, remap. remapped this part

01:54:312 (2) - Space away from 01:53:615 (1) - following DS here

02:07:394 - Never put a quad + slider stacked in advanced diff, remap. changed

Flows amazing, nice map!!
thanks for modding!
Prismetical
Heyo! c:

Easy
00:20:126 (1) - dislike that part, try this?:

00:36:871 (1,2) - would prefer this:

02:01:638 (2,3) - blanket

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
jcjc

Prismetical wrote:

Heyo! c:

Easy
00:20:126 (1) - dislike that part, try this?:
prefer my own
00:36:871 (1,2) - would prefer this:
ok ig uess
02:01:638 (2,3) - blanket nah

Good luck! :)
thanks lol
Chujitsu
Lets see O w O
easy
00:13:150 (2) - move this circle a little up, in whole map I see so many objects which going down to timeline too much. Maybe it's juat my option, but its hard to click for beginers, I guess.
01:20:126 (2) - try to divide it on 2 circles, as you did it before. This is gonna let player hit 2 hard beats

Basic
00:01:987 (1) - try to start spiner here and end on 00:03:033
00:03:382 (1,2) - it's looks more lovely if you move it like this

try to not let your objects go down to timeline so much
what I mean is this:00:15:940 (3), 00:35:475 (3),

00:06:871 (2) - move it down a little, objects in same position as hp bar might confuse player
do same to 00:11:057 (4), 00:51:522 (2), 00:59:894 (2,3,4), 01:43:847 (1), 01:48:557 (4)
Change this moment to what you see in pic and this gonna sounds nice

Adviced
00:01:464 (1) - try to change spiner start as I said in Basic
00:12:452 (2,1) - this jump is 2big as for me, try to make it 2\3 of how you made
00:24:836 (3) - placed to high
00:30:068 (5) - is low placed
00:32:685 (5) - hard to play this moment cuz he like out of beat, try to change to 2 circles
00:33:731 (4) - is low placed
00:35:999 (3) - placed to high
00:44:196 (4) - move it a little out of corner, it's low D:
00:53:615 (1) - just a little move up
01:07:568 (1,2,3,4) - move this parth down, it's on hp bar
01:22:917 (2) - up
01:31:115 (2) - down
01:34:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool parth * _ *
01:37:394 (3,4) - move it down
01:41:057 (5), 01:46:115 (1,2,3) - move it up, it's really low placed
02:01:987 (1) - down, it's touching hp bar

As for me, this difficult have many tricky moments which is not comfortable to read ( I mean circles on the end of sliders). Also in some moments sliders have strange forms
Expert
00:03:905 (3,4),00:06:696 (3,4), - tricky moment
00:07:394 (5) - slider looks like a shrimp, avoid this
00:07:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - cool moment *_*
00:10:359 (1) - try to change slider's look > . <
00:51:871 (2) - move this slider somewhere, it's hard to read stream under
00:53:266 (1) - it's fast but might break combo cuz of slider's form
01:11:057 (4,5,1) - 2 much objects in one place as for me
01:34:080 (1,2) - hard to click, because circles always was close to slider before
move up:00:14:719 (2) - 00:34:603 (3,4) - 00:44:022 (1) - 00:44:545 (5) - 01:24:312 (1) - 01:28:150 (4) -
move down:01:06:522 (2) - 01:16:464 (3) - 01:44:196 (2) - 01:45:243 (1) - 01:52:568 (2) -


Master
00:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - awesome!
00:53:266 (1) - 2fast slider

01:13:847 (4) - try to

move up:00:06:871 (4) - 00:24:836 (3) - 00:30:068 (2) - 00:50:824 (1) - 01:05:126 (2) - 01:08:353 (2,3,4,5) - 01:20:998 (2) - 01:28:498 (1) - 01:40:533 (4) - 01:41:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:43:673 (4) - 01:56:231 (7,1) - 01:58:499 (4,5,6,7,8) - 02:06:696 (1,2,3) -
move down:00:09:661 (4) - 00:26:754 (5) - 00:58:237 (6,7,8) - 01:01:464 (4) - 01:16:638 (4) - 01:23:440 (4) - 01:32:336 (1) - 01:33:033 (2) - 01:44:719 (4) - 01:49:778 (2) - 01:54:661 (2,1) - 01:57:103 (4) - 02:01:290 (4) - 02:05:824 (1) -

I like this song and I like the way you map it! On high difficulties you catched every beat! well done! Good luck (⌒‿⌒)
emilia

Chujitsu wrote:

Basic
00:01:987 (1) - try to start spiner here and end on 00:03:033 thats too close iirc
00:03:382 (1,2) - it's looks more lovely if you move it like this keeping mine, preference

try to not let your objects go down to timeline so much this should still be in grid, no change
what I mean is this:00:15:940 (3), 00:35:475 (3),

00:06:871 (2) - move it down a little, objects in same position as hp bar might confuse player will consider changing it if newbie players complain after testplay, for now no change
do same to 00:11:057 (4), 00:51:522 (2), 00:59:894 (2,3,4), 01:43:847 (1), 01:48:557 (4)
Change this moment to what you see in pic and this gonna sounds nice dont understand this(?)
no change

some personal changes

diff
osu file format v14

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477,254,91289,2,0,P|414:298|339:139,1,300,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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290,188,100533,2,0,P|283:227|282:253,1,50,2|10,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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380,112,103498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
jcjc

Chujitsu wrote:

Lets see O w O
easy
00:13:150 (2) - move this circle a little up, in whole map I see so many objects which going down to timeline too much. Maybe it's juat my option, but its hard to click for beginers, I guess. moved up a bit
01:20:126 (2) - try to divide it on 2 circles, as you did it before. This is gonna let player hit 2 hard beats nah i prefer one slider

Adviced
00:01:464 (1) - try to change spiner start as I said in Basic too short maybe
00:12:452 (2,1) - this jump is 2big as for me, try to make it 2\3 of how you made following DS
00:24:836 (3) - placed to high fine imo
00:30:068 (5) - is low placed ^
00:32:685 (5) - hard to play this moment cuz he like out of beat, try to change to 2 circles should be ok for players to hit since its a reverse slider, just hold for 1 measure like the previous sliders and you won't break
00:33:731 (4) - is low placed fine imo
00:35:999 (3) - placed to high ^
00:44:196 (4) - move it a little out of corner, it's low D: fine imo xd
00:53:615 (1) - just a little move up ^
01:07:568 (1,2,3,4) - move this parth down, it's on hp bar um ok
01:22:917 (2) - up fine imo
01:31:115 (2) - down ^
01:34:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool parth * _ * lol thanks
01:37:394 (3,4) - move it down uh ok
01:41:057 (5), 01:46:115 (1,2,3) - move it up, it's really low placed uh ok
02:01:987 (1) - down, it's touching hp bar ok

Master
00:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - awesome! :O
00:53:266 (1) - 2fast slider fine imo
nah i think mine is ok
01:13:847 (4) - try to
^
move up:00:06:871 (4) - 00:24:836 (3) - 00:30:068 (2) - 00:50:824 (1) - 01:05:126 (2) - 01:08:353 (2,3,4,5) - 01:20:998 (2) - 01:28:498 (1) - 01:40:533 (4) - 01:41:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:43:673 (4) - 01:56:231 (7,1) - 01:58:499 (4,5,6,7,8) - 02:06:696 (1,2,3) -
move down:00:09:661 (4) - 00:26:754 (5) - 00:58:237 (6,7,8) - 01:01:464 (4) - 01:16:638 (4) - 01:23:440 (4) - 01:32:336 (1) - 01:33:033 (2) - 01:44:719 (4) - 01:49:778 (2) - 01:54:661 (2,1) - 01:57:103 (4) - 02:01:290 (4) - 02:05:824 (1) - um changed some i guess


I like this song and I like the way you map it! On high difficulties you catched every beat! well done! Good luck (⌒‿⌒)
Naxess
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  • 00:14:196 - I think a circle would fit well here, since a new sound begins.
    Could stack it with the next slider like this, for example:


    00:29:894 - This part could be mapped like this, but it might be too much, so It's up to you.
    I just feel like this combo 00:28:498 - and this one 00:31:289 - are very plain when they're right next to each other, rhythm-wise, because of the monotonous 1/1 clicking.


    00:46:638 (1) - NC?
    01:08:964 (3) - Could do the same for this one.
    I know you're NCing every other downbeat, but these two are 8 measures apart and are the transitions to chorus respective vers.

    00:51:347 - Might want to add a note here for consistency with 00:48:557 - and 00:54:138 - .
    ^ 00:56:929 -

    00:55:533 - You could start slider (5) here, but still end it on the same place on the timeline, for consistency and preparation for 01:01:115 (4) -
    00:59:719 - Also for consistency with 00:54:138 - , make this a circle and move back the slider to end on the white tick.
    The consistency will allow your rhythm to become more defined.

    01:05:301 - Could do something similar here, but I think it's fine as it is, as it's not the same hypermeasure (set of four measures).
    You can see here on this other timing line that this measure begins inbetween the two bookmarks, which both indicate when two hypermeasures begin and end. 01:04:778 - for reference


    01:31:028 - The problem with long repeats like these is that you don't know whether the slider will repeat once more at this point, which makes you hesitant to click on 01:31:289 (2) - . The more they repeat, the more hesitant the player will become, especially in normal difficulties like this.
    In order to fix this, I'd recommend adding a note inbetween like this, for example:

    Will both reduce the amount of repeats and give the player a point of reference to the rhythm, allowing them to hit this downbeat easier 01:31:289 - .

    01:44:371 - Make circle, reduce length, for consistency with parallel measure 01:33:208 -
    02:08:353 (1) - Not going to end it on the timing point like in Advanced? Right now it ends slightly early.

[ Advanced]
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00:25:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl + H, moved down slightly, copied to 00:14:592 -

They're copy pasted parts, quite easily noticed as well, but if you think it's fine I then that's up to you.
There some others as well, but I'm sure you're already aware.

00:18:731 - Downbeats are usually NC:ed
00:19:254 - Remove NC
^ 00:29:894 - Add NC
^ 00:30:417 - Remove NC

01:24:312 (3) - Add NC
01:26:405 (1) - Remove NC

01:34:080 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though.
01:35:475 (5) - Add NC

01:39:661 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though. (Oh wait I already said that)
01:41:057 (5) - Add NC

01:45:243 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here.
01:46:115 (1) - Remove NC
01:46:638 (4) - Add NC

01:50:824 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here. (woops I did it again)
01:51:696 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:219 (4) - Add NC

01:48:033 - Don't you think something like this will fit better?


02:03:033 - I'm sure this sound can be integrated with a slider like this, for example:
(Sliderball will zig-zag quickly causing a slowdown effect)


Overall a really clean map, great blankets and patterns, although I still don't like the copy-pasting.

[ General]
SPOILER

  • Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, it's only used by storyboards.

    Other than that it looks good.
    Background resolution and sound files are fine.

Good luck! ^^
emilia

Naxess wrote:

[ Normal]
SPOILER

  • 00:14:196 - I think a circle would fit well here, since a new sound begins.
    Could stack it with the next slider like this, for example:


    00:29:894 - This part could be mapped like this, but it might be too much, so It's up to you.
    I just feel like this combo 00:28:498 - and this one 00:31:289 - are very plain when they're right next to each other, rhythm-wise, because of the monotonous 1/1 clicking.


    00:46:638 (1) - NC?
    01:08:964 (3) - Could do the same for this one.
    I know you're NCing every other downbeat, but these two are 8 measures apart and are the transitions to chorus respective vers.

    00:51:347 - Might want to add a note here for consistency with 00:48:557 - and 00:54:138 - .
    ^ 00:56:929 -

    00:55:533 - You could start slider (5) here, but still end it on the same place on the timeline, for consistency and preparation for 01:01:115 (4) -
    00:59:719 - Also for consistency with 00:54:138 - , make this a circle and move back the slider to end on the white tick.
    The consistency will allow your rhythm to become more defined.

    01:05:301 - Could do something similar here, but I think it's fine as it is, as it's not the same hypermeasure (set of four measures).
    You can see here on this other timing line that this measure begins inbetween the two bookmarks, which both indicate when two hypermeasures begin and end. 01:04:778 - for reference


    01:31:028 - The problem with long repeats like these is that you don't know whether the slider will repeat once more at this point, which makes you hesitant to click on 01:31:289 (2) - . The more they repeat, the more hesitant the player will become, especially in normal difficulties like this.
    In order to fix this, I'd recommend adding a note inbetween like this, for example:

    Will both reduce the amount of repeats and give the player a point of reference to the rhythm, allowing them to hit this downbeat easier 01:31:289 - .

    01:44:371 - Make circle, reduce length, for consistency with parallel measure 01:33:208 -
    02:08:353 (1) - Not going to end it on the timing point like in Advanced? Right now it ends slightly early.
remapped the whole boring front part cuz its trash, so i guess its way better now
but everything you mentioned about "consistency" i'm denying because i'm trying to map an interesting normal with interesting beats to follow every "hypermeasure", since most normals are super boring. also if you've noticed i'm trying to map to vocal as well kek

inconsistencies shouldnt be something you should fault a map for, at least imo


sry jcjc can u recheck hs pls ;w;w;w;;

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Topic Starter
jcjc

Naxess wrote:

NM From Queue

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00:25:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl + H, moved down slightly, copied to 00:14:592 -
yeah i moved it down to fit DS
They're copy pasted parts, quite easily noticed as well, but if you think it's fine I then that's up to you.
There some others as well, but I'm sure you're already aware. xd

00:18:731 - Downbeats are usually NC:ed basically fixed all the nc suggestions
00:19:254 - Remove NC
^ 00:29:894 - Add NC
^ 00:30:417 - Remove NC

01:24:312 (3) - Add NC
01:26:405 (1) - Remove NC

01:34:080 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though.
01:35:475 (5) - Add NC

01:39:661 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though. (Oh wait I already said that)
01:41:057 (5) - Add NC

01:45:243 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here.
01:46:115 (1) - Remove NC
01:46:638 (4) - Add NC

01:50:824 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here. (woops I did it again)
01:51:696 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:219 (4) - Add NC

01:48:033 - Don't you think something like this will fit better? don't wanna change the rhythm haha


02:03:033 - I'm sure this sound can be integrated with a slider like this, for example:
(Sliderball will zig-zag quickly causing a slowdown effect)


Overall a really clean map, great blankets and patterns, although I still don't like the copy-pasting. /notice]

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  • Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, it's only used by storyboards. d

    Other than that it looks good.
    Background resolution and sound files are fine.

Good luck! ^^
thanks for modding
Arusamour
i really love this map.


dont give up!
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