Sta feat.b - Argent Symmetry · forum

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Chibi Maruko 2016-03-18T16:22:25+00:00

Hi. From my queue

rytzen

00:21:522 (5) - NC here
00:29:894 (6) - ^
00:31:987 (4,6) - NC since ur jumps always 1,2
01:21:522 (1) - add whistle
01:24:312 (1) - ^

master

00:03:905 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/Wbb0f7H.png kinda weird overlap. pls make it flow
00:06:696 (3) - ^
00:49:690 - add inheriting point 20% because uncomfortable for ppl
00:51:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it stack because flower look not comfortable
00:57:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:02:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:04:778 (1) - Normal slider because no reason why u add overlap here
01:21:522 (1) - Add whistle although u added it
01:24:312 (1) - ^
01:43:324 (2,4) - ctrl + h will be better
02:00:068 (1) - delete this slider coz no rhythm why u add slider stream 1/6
02:07:568 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - pls don't spam nc but ahead u want to fix this

gl when rank
bye

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-03-18T16:34:53+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Hi. From my queue

master
00:03:905 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/Wbb0f7H.png kinda weird overlap. pls make it flow it does flow somewhat, keeping for the structure
00:06:696 (3) - ^ ^
00:49:690 - add inheriting point 20% because uncomfortable for ppl don't really get what you mean there but 20% volume is too low?
00:51:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it stack because flower look not comfortable fine imo
00:57:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:02:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:04:778 (1) - Normal slider because no reason why u add overlap here ok
01:21:522 (1) - Add whistle although u added it sure
01:24:312 (1) - ^ sure
01:43:324 (2,4) - ctrl + h will be better you mean ctrl+g?
02:00:068 (1) - delete this slider coz no rhythm why u add slider stream 1/6 that drum roll in the background
02:07:568 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - pls don't spam nc but ahead u want to fix this kinda emphasizes this part that it isn't 1/4 but 1/6 i guess? sadfsg

gl when rank never cuz scrub map D:
bye

thanks for modding~

CyberX

494 posts

Joined December 2012

CyberX 2016-03-20T13:35:32+00:00

Here we go my Mod
note that everythings here is just my opinions

Rtyzen's Expert

00:04:080 (1) - NC this,so its more easier to notice
00:06:871 (4) - here too
00:09:661 (4) - here too
00:11:405 (1) - NC so its more easier to notice the stream change direction
01:09:312 (1,2,3,4) - i think its a bad idea to change the distance Snap here but the pattern is great so idk
01:11:057 (4) - Nc here
01:11:580 (5) - this is hard to read because the direction of the slider is overlaping with slider before it try another direction
01:13:411 (2) - this too but for this its because of the stream before
01:55:708 (4) - NC this
01:57:103 (4) - NC
02:01:289 (4) - NC
02:02:685 (4) - NC

Master

00:12:626 (1,2,3) - i see no reason to change the distance snap here
00:12:888 empty?
00:46:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is just to close to each other
01:09:400 (6,7,8) - recomend you to make the stream distance consisten as before
01:19:429 (4) - Nc here
01:31:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as before
01:32:685 (1) - idk but maybe its just for me,this is hard to notice because the the slider is at the top and the slider before is overlaping it
02:02:859 (5) - place this little higher x:283 y:272 could work
02:10:126 (1) - delete this,make this clickable is werid just end the spinner here 02:10:097

Thanks for choosing my Mod Q,came again next time
Good Luck

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-03-20T13:52:43+00:00

CyberX wrote:
Here we go my Mod
note that everythings here is just my opinions

Master
00:12:626 (1,2,3) - i see no reason to change the distance snap here looks good to me lol
00:12:888 empty? the music kinda stops there so
00:46:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is just to close to each other it's fine imo
01:09:400 (6,7,8) - recomend you to make the stream distance consisten as before smaller ds for the 'slowing down' effect i guess?
01:19:429 (4) - Nc here
01:31:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as before as above
01:32:685 (1) - idk but maybe its just for me,this is hard to notice because the the slider is at the top and the slider before is overlaping it fine imo
02:02:859 (5) - place this little higher x:283 y:272 could work ^
02:10:126 (1) - delete this,make this clickable is werid just end the spinner here 02:10:097 i don't think its weird haha theres something there definitely

Thanks for choosing my Mod Q,came again next time
Good Luck

well thanks for looking at the map i guess

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-03-21T14:53:55+00:00

hOI!
from da qUEUE!~

sorry for being so damn late, forgot about the queue because of school work

Master

hmmmm imo ar9,2 suits it better

00:01:464 (1) - reconsider it, it seems a little unneeded
00:04:778 (1,2) - maybe connect these two better, now feels a little awkward to play
00:08:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here, you can follow the music more, for instance have a higher spacing on the first four notes and then a decreasing one at the other four, as the music goes from louder to less loud
00:13:151 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo normal stacks or sliders suit the situation better
00:17:336 (1,4) - maybe blanket these
00:34:952 (1,2,3,4,5) - insanely hard to read, maybe increase or completely decrease spacing on 4,5
00:36:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is the spacing here different? seems unneeded imo
00:42:801 (5,6) - more spacing between those things make it easier to read for players
00:50:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - yo this stuff is sexy
01:00:592 (1,2) - fix overlap?
01:21:522 (1,1) - nah the circle after the slider isnt needed, just extend the slider
01:29:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - having such small jumps after having big ones doesnt play well. let people jump!
01:49:080 (1) - be careful with these, osu sometimes is weird and lets you sliderbreak randomly on 1/16 sliders!
02:03:033 (1,2) - nah not so close to each other, seems weird and unlogical with the rest of the stream
02:08:440 (1) - you may start this at the blue tick

yo done! sorry for being so damn late, i hate myself for it tbh

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-03-24T13:54:05+00:00

HighTec wrote:
hOI!
from da qUEUE!~

sorry for being so damn late, forgot about the queue because of school work

Master

hmmmm imo ar9,2 suits it better ok

00:01:464 (1) - reconsider it, it seems a little unneeded keeping this probably
00:04:778 (1,2) - maybe connect these two better, now feels a little awkward to play fine imo
00:08:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here, you can follow the music more, for instance have a higher spacing on the first four notes and then a decreasing one at the other four, as the music goes from louder to less loud considering this
00:13:151 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo normal stacks or sliders suit the situation better i think it looks kewl xd
00:17:336 (1,4) - maybe blanket these nah
00:34:952 (1,2,3,4,5) - insanely hard to read, maybe increase or completely decrease spacing on 4,5 fine imo
00:36:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is the spacing here different? seems unneeded imo yeah made the spacing consistent
00:42:801 (5,6) - more spacing between those things make it easier to read for players fine imo
00:50:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - yo this stuff is sexy lol thanks
01:00:592 (1,2) - fix overlap? ok
01:21:522 (1,1) - nah the circle after the slider isnt needed, just extend the slider there is a small piano sound there i guess?
01:29:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - having such small jumps after having big ones doesnt play well. let people jump! yeah changed
01:49:080 (1) - be careful with these, osu sometimes is weird and lets you sliderbreak randomly on 1/16 sliders! fine imo
02:03:033 (1,2) - nah not so close to each other, seems weird and unlogical with the rest of the stream removed the x1.5 sv, should be fine now
02:08:440 (1) - you may start this at the blue tick if you listen at 25% speed its obviously not at the blue tick

yo done! sorry for being so damn late, i hate myself for it tbh

Thanks for the mod!

Mercusheigan

281 posts

Joined December 2012

Mercusheigan 2016-04-03T14:10:03+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

Mapset

SPOILER

Just a note that this is my first modding in this kind of music genre, so it may be a bit shallow

The star rating gap from Basic and Advanced is kinda big, and people may call you out because of that. I'd recommend a new advanced and renaming the advanced to hard.

00:01:464 (1) - So this is a bit weird, because the noise starts earlier but you start in the middle of the noise, instead of when it starts ramping up at 00:01:1638. IMO you have to consider if you are going to map the whole noise or if you're only going to map the ramping up of the noise

Master

SPOILER

00:13:498 (1,2) - I'd reverse select this one, or even 00:13:151 (1,2) - and 00:13:847 (1,2) - (this second one looks better and plays better, IMO)

00:18:731 (1) - not really convinced by this NC, feels like it's the same "section"

00:19:254 (3,4,5,6) - this doesn't plays badly but could be more intuitive. That being said, I'd suggest to put 4 next to 00:20:126 (1) -

00:25:359 (5) - I feel like the sound lasts for more 1/4th of a beat, and IMO the slider should end on the blue tick

00:27:103 (1) - 2nd point move to 135, 220, 3rd point to 190, 184 http://puu.sh/o4wOr/5e310efe8f.jpg

00:42:801 (5,5,5) - I don't like these. First I don't hear the reverse beat on the song, that being said, that's artificial difficulty and kinda breaks the flow. This section would be played a lot better with 2 kicksliders instead of one of this short reverses and a kickslider

00:45:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - How about if you slightly increase the hitsound volume by each slider? Like, make so that the inherit at 00:45:423 is set at 60%, and increase slowly by 5%. Like this: http://puu.sh/o4xlR/7f827c812b.png (Also increased the volume at each NC on the stream). That helps the buildup. Maybe even increase SV by each slider by like 0,1 or 0,15.

01:28:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ same suggestion as before

02:10:126 (1) - I'd set the last of the hit sound volume to 5%, keeping the first at 50%

Also, I feel like this diff could use the same points of Kiai time as in Rytzen's diff

Rytzen's Expert

SPOILER

00:45:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider the same suggested for the Master difficulty

01:13:411 (2) - Feels poorly placed for me

01:29:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Consider the same suggested for the Master difficulty

02:08:310 (1) - for the sake of consistency, consider ending the spinner at 02:10:126

Pretty good difficulty overall

Advanced

SPOILER

Change OD to 6
00:45:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - You probably know what I'm talking about at this point lol

01:29:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^

02:08:310 (1) - for the sake of consistency, consider ending the spinner at 02:10:126

Feels as good as it can get for me, honestly. Also as I said, consider the kiai time as in Rytzen's difficulty for ALL your mapset

Basic

SPOILER

00:14:196 (1) - Remove NC

02:08:310 (1) - for the sake of consistency, consider ending the spinner at 02:10:126

Also, the kiai time speech

As I said, won't mod the easy difficulty.

Pretty good map overall dude, good luck!

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-08T15:27:44+00:00

Mercusheigan wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

Mapset

SPOILER
Just a note that this is my first modding in this kind of music genre, so it may be a bit shallow

The star rating gap from Basic and Advanced is kinda big, and people may call you out because of that. I'd recommend a new advanced and renaming the advanced to hard.

00:01:464 (1) - So this is a bit weird, because the noise starts earlier but you start in the middle of the noise, instead of when it starts ramping up at 00:01:1638. IMO you have to consider if you are going to map the whole noise or if you're only going to map the ramping up of the noise leaving it as it is for now

Master

SPOILER
00:13:498 (1,2) - I'd reverse select this one, or even 00:13:151 (1,2) - and 00:13:847 (1,2) - (this second one looks better and plays better, IMO) keeping this as i feel it's fine

00:18:731 (1) - not really convinced by this NC, feels like it's the same "section" trying to be consistent with 4 bars per NC i guess

00:19:254 (3,4,5,6) - this doesn't plays badly but could be more intuitive. That being said, I'd suggest to put 4 next to 00:20:126 (1) - unstacked 00:19:603 (4) - so it plays a bit better

00:25:359 (5) - I feel like the sound lasts for more 1/4th of a beat, and IMO the slider should end on the blue tick nice

00:27:103 (1) - 2nd point move to 135, 220, 3rd point to 190, 184 http://puu.sh/o4wOr/5e310efe8f.jpg ok

00:42:801 (5,5,5) - I don't like these. First I don't hear the reverse beat on the song, that being said, that's artificial difficulty and kinda breaks the flow. This section would be played a lot better with 2 kicksliders instead of one of this short reverses and a kickslider um there's the triple snare there so a reverse slider works there plus the flow is ok imo

00:45:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - How about if you slightly increase the hitsound volume by each slider? Like, make so that the inherit at 00:45:423 is set at 60%, and increase slowly by 5%. Like this: http://puu.sh/o4xlR/7f827c812b.png (Also increased the volume at each NC on the stream). That helps the buildup. Maybe even increase SV by each slider by like 0,1 or 0,15. done

01:28:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ same suggestion as before ^

02:10:126 (1) - I'd set the last of the hit sound volume to 5%, keeping the first at 50% used 30% as 5% is too low for me

Also, I feel like this diff could use the same points of Kiai time as in Rytzen's diff nah

Advanced

SPOILER
Change OD to 6 6.5 works here
00:45:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - You probably know what I'm talking about at this point lol ok

01:29:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ ^

02:08:310 (1) - for the sake of consistency, consider ending the spinner at 02:10:126 ok

Feels as good as it can get for me, honestly. Also as I said, consider the kiai time as in Rytzen's difficulty for ALL your mapset why

Basic

SPOILER
00:14:196 (1) - Remove NC swapped NC with 00:14:545 (1) -

02:08:310 (1) - for the sake of consistency, consider ending the spinner at 02:10:126 changed

Also, the kiai time speech

As I said, won't mod the easy difficulty.

Pretty good map overall dude, good luck!

thx 4 mod! ur mod was helpful xd

Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2016-04-09T12:45:18+00:00

Spiral527

Spiral527 wrote:
From my queue

different kiai than the rest of the set (is this even a problem since it's GD?)

00:38:266 (1) - stack tail on 00:37:917 (4)
01:28:847 (2) - even spacing before and after
01:42:452 (1) - stack head on tail of 01:41:405 (2)

Fixed all

Moa

Moa wrote:
From my modding Queue

[expert]
many 3/4 sliders are too distant..
00:03:382 (1,2) - too distant in opening Eh the sound is the same as the rest
00:14:196 (1,2,3) - not this rhythm it's don't have stream sound Fixed
01:14:545 (2) - i think this slider is need slow sv like 01:21:522 (1) - this There's not really a change in the music unlike the next one, just a pause

good map GL~

teko8

teko8 wrote:
From my NM modding queue. Mod of two highest diffs.

Rtyzen's Expert:
Difficulty Rating: Rated as an Insane and is still pretty far off Expert cut-off (5.25 ★), would rename to Rtyzen's Insane, or make it harder (though making it harder would kind of ruin the diff spread).
00:31:812 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I would consider dividing these up into 1,2 jumps like at 00:14:545 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - . Done
00:57:103 (8) - NC for consistency with 00:51:522 (1,2) - . Done
01:02:685 (8) - ^Done
01:04:429 (1) - Ctrl+g this, more natural to go from 01:04:254 (2) - up imo. 1 to 2 to 1 is downwards so imo this is better flow
01:08:266 (8) - NC for consistency ...Done
01:57:801 (1) - Make the curvature match 01:58:062 (2) - since they match at 01:56:405 (1,2) - . Not sure what this means

Rtyzen's Expert:
00:36:696 (6) - Move to where 00:35:824 (1) - is. I think this is better

Though I can't play it that well, I like the style that you're using for this song. Good luck~

Chibii Maruko

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Hi. From my queue

rytzen
00:21:522 (5) - NC hereDone
00:29:894 (6) - ^ Done
00:31:987 (4,6) - NC since ur jumps always 1,2 Done
01:21:522 (1) - add whistle I'll leave hitsounds alone
01:24:312 (1) - ^ I'll leave hitsounds alone

gl when rank
bye

CyberX

CyberX wrote:
Here we go my Mod
note that everythings here is just my opinions

00:04:080 (1) - NC this,so its more easier to notice I dont think it's necessary to NC these sorry
00:06:871 (4) - here too
00:09:661 (4) - here too
00:11:405 (1) - NC so its more easier to notice the stream change direction It'll look weird imo orz
01:09:312 (1,2,3,4) - i think its a bad idea to change the distance Snap here but the pattern is great so idk
01:11:057 (4) - Nc here
01:11:580 (5) - this is hard to read because the direction of the slider is overlaping with slider before it try another direction I think it's ok cuz it's offset abit
01:13:411 (2) - this too but for this its because of the stream before Fixed
01:55:708 (4) - NC this
01:57:103 (4) - NC
02:01:289 (4) - NC
02:02:685 (4) - NC
Thanks for choosing my Mod Q,came again next time
Good Luck

Mercusheigan

Mercusheigan wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

Rytzen's Expert

00:45:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider the same suggested for the Master difficulty I'll leave the hitsounds alone

01:13:411 (2) - Feels poorly placed for me Fixed in previous mod

01:29:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Consider the same suggested for the Master difficulty

02:08:310 (1) - for the sake of consistency, consider ending the spinner at 02:10:126 Done

Pretty good difficulty overall

Pretty good map overall dude, good luck!

Holy shit this is so late im so sorry thanks so much to all the modders

map

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57,165,112219,6,0,P|46:95|69:40,1,119.999996337891,10|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
279,6,112568,2,0,P|345:31|381:78,1,119.999996337891,10|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
333,306,112917,2,0,P|277:350|218:358,1,119.999996337891,10|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
197,151,113266,1,10,0:1:0:0:
333,306,113440,1,2,0:1:0:0:
99,258,113615,6,0,L|86:70,1,179.999994506836,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,61,113964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,114138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,258,114312,6,0,L|426:70,1,179.999994506836,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,61,114661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,114836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,126,114923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,115010,6,0,L|256:256,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,330,115272,2,0,L|355:230,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,285,115533,1,10,0:1:0:0:
355,330,115708,2,0,B|312:277|312:277|254:306|181:285,1,200,10|4,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
125,149,116231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,342,116405,6,0,P|90:280|99:238,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,149,116667,2,0,P|78:192|37:206,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,122,116929,1,10,0:1:0:0:
104,343,117103,2,0,B|75:280|105:202|105:202|61:123,1,200,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
213,213,117626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,156,117801,6,0,P|330:96|276:106,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,234,118062,2,0,P|356:224|399:178,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,118,118324,1,10,0:1:0:0:
221,135,118498,2,0,L|433:116,1,200,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,97,118935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
447,132,119022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,168,119109,1,2,0:0:0:0:
441,203,119196,5,8,0:1:0:0:
363,181,119545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,224,119894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,301,120243,2,0,L|232:292,5,33.3333333333333,0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,251,120592,6,0,L|183:127,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,60,120853,2,0,L|87:159,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,248,121115,1,10,0:1:0:0:
181,151,121289,2,0,B|148:120|136:89|136:89|66:119|16:99,1,200,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,74,121812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,240,121987,6,0,B|325:246|325:246|377:230,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,165,122248,2,0,B|449:209|449:209|437:262,1,100,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,326,122510,1,10,0:1:0:0:
374,146,122685,2,0,B|348:246|348:246|405:330,1,200,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
437,328,123121,2,0,L|477:331,2,25,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,311,123382,6,0,P|174:302|125:311,1,100,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,347,123644,2,0,P|104:292|106:247,1,100,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,170,123905,1,10,0:1:0:0:
226,119,124080,5,10,0:1:0:0:
247,132,124167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,141,124254,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,147,124341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,149,124428,1,10,0:1:0:0:
344,147,124516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,141,124603,2,0,P|411:123|426:103,1,50,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,18,124778,6,0,L|475:80,1,50,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,180,124952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,33,125126,6,0,L|449:95,1,50,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,195,125300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
414,48,125475,6,0,L|423:110,1,50,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,210,125650,1,8,0:1:0:0:
410,216,125737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,227,125824,1,8,0:1:0:0:
368,242,125911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,260,125998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,281,126086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,305,126173,5,10,0:1:0:0:
291,301,126260,1,10,0:1:0:0:
254,298,126347,1,10,0:1:0:0:
216,295,126434,1,10,0:1:0:0:
179,292,126521,1,10,0:1:0:0:
59,213,126696,5,10,0:1:0:0:
96,209,126783,1,10,0:1:0:0:
134,206,126870,1,10,0:1:0:0:
171,203,126957,1,10,0:1:0:0:
208,200,127044,1,10,0:1:0:0:
329,121,127219,5,10,0:1:0:0:
292,117,127306,1,10,0:1:0:0:
254,114,127393,1,10,0:1:0:0:
217,111,127480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,108,127568,2,0,L|128:104,12,33.3333333333333,10|2|0|0|0|0|10|2|0|0|0|0|10,0:1|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:1|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,192,128310,12,0,130126,0:0:0:0:

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-04-10T10:22:47+00:00

Hello.

Easy

01:11:754 (2) - It would be better, if you keep clap only, just compare to this 01:10:359 (1) - , music changes but hitsounds don't.
01:13:150 (1) - same here, better to put whistle here, because you put it 01:10:359 (1) - here.
01:15:940 (1) - and 01:18:731 (1) - ^^^.
01:20:126 (2) - whistle, because of this 01:11:754 (2) - .
01:32:685 (1) - just my opinion, but this should be emphasized by adding a finish, because of quite strong beat. And here 01:43:847 (1) - . And others like those two.
It would be better if you add a spinner in the end of the diff.
I could write some nazi flow suggestions, but who wants this.

Basic

00:48:033 (1,2,3) - not really good idea to make this pattern with the overlaps, this may be unreadable for newbies and may cause some sliderbreaks.
I suggest make this pattern without an overlap, but make with from here 01:32:685 - , because chorus part starts from there and this will be logical if chorus part will be harder than overall diff.
01:49:429 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - a lot of 1/2s, I suggest make this rhythm a bit easier, replace 01:50:475 (3) - this slider with a circle.

Advanced

00:45:243 - two green lines at one tick, but ranking criteria says: "No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. "
00:01:464 (1,1) - recover time between a spinner and an object in Hard should be 1/1 as a minimum.
00:25:359 (5,1) - music changes but sliders are the same, make them different.

I think Expert should be named Insane, because you don't have Insane, but If you had it, you could name it Expert imo.
Insane and Extra are too good for me.
good luck~

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-10T10:52:42+00:00

Namki wrote:
Hello.

Easy
01:11:754 (2) - It would be better, if you keep clap only, just compare to this 01:10:359 (1) - , music changes but hitsounds don't. i put a whistle on the sliderslide instead
01:13:150 (1) - same here, better to put whistle here, because you put it 01:10:359 (1) - here. ^
01:15:940 (1) - and 01:18:731 (1) - ^^^. ^
01:20:126 (2) - whistle, because of this 01:11:754 (2) - . fixed
01:32:685 (1) - just my opinion, but this should be emphasized by adding a finish, because of quite strong beat. And here 01:43:847 (1) - . And others like those two. fine imo
It would be better if you add a spinner in the end of the diff. ok ig uess
I could write some nazi flow suggestions, but who wants this.

Basic
00:48:033 (1,2,3) - not really good idea to make this pattern with the overlaps, this may be unreadable for newbies and may cause some sliderbreaks.
I suggest make this pattern without an overlap, but make with from here 01:32:685 - , because chorus part starts from there and this will be logical if chorus part will be harder than overall diff. fine imo cuz it looks cool xd plus ds
01:49:429 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - a lot of 1/2s, I suggest make this rhythm a bit easier, replace 01:50:475 (3) - this slider with a circle. i think its ok tho :O

Advanced
00:45:243 - two green lines at one tick, but ranking criteria says: "No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. " opps fixed
00:01:464 (1,1) - recover time between a spinner and an object in Hard should be 1/1 as a minimum. shortened spinner at front
00:25:359 (5,1) - music changes but sliders are the same, make them different.fine imo

I think Expert should be named Insane, because you don't have Insane, but If you had it, you could name it Expert imo.
Insane and Extra are too good for me.
good luck~

Thanks!

LMT

535 posts

Joined October 2015

LMT 2016-04-15T16:07:48+00:00

From our modding queue.

It's quite well polished so far. Not my cup of tea but there's nothing wrong at all

.

Master

00:04:778 (1) - should end on 00:05:388 - this tick , then you can put 2 there, otherwise sliderend is on a silent tick.
00:10:882 - Stream should start here not 00:10:795 (2) - here.
00:13:498 (1,2,1,2) - all blue ticks should be mapped as well because of the guitar sound. If you want to be gimmicky: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936506 .
01:12:976 (7) - stream ends here.

Expert

00:05:475 (2) - Stream starts here.
00:34:603 (3) - This slider should end 00:34:778 - here because the vocal stops there, not the blue tick.
00:35:301 (6) - same
01:25:359 (3) - so what's this note mapped to? If it's the synth or piano then you also have to map other red ticks because there are piano/synth notes there as well. There aren't drums here.
01:37:742 (4) - what's this note mapped to? If it's the vocal then there isn't a note here, if it's the synth then it should be a 1/4 slider.
01:40:185 (3) - vocal ends on the white tick instead of the blue tick.
02:00:243 (4) - starts 02:00:068 - here. It also makes sense to start on 02:00:126 - this 1/6 tick but then it might be too obnoxious. So the red tick makes a bit more sense.

Advanced

00:05:650 (2,3,4) - there technically should be another note here 00:05:562 - but it might be too hard for this diff.
00:52:917 (5,6) - isn't this too hard for advanced? owo
00:54:139 (2) - this should be broken up to 1/2 slider + a circle on red tick because the weird sound abruptly ends on the white tick.
00:58:498 (5,6) - same as 00:52:917 (5,6) -
01:04:080 (5,6) - ^
01:09:661 (5,6) - ^ especially when 6 is silent.
01:05:302 (2) - same as 00:54:139 (2) -

Good luck!

PS: By the way read the rules next time you join a modding queue, you didn't actually follow our rules but then I've already worked on it so it's an exception. It's not a popular thing to do, I know you probably just slipped it but then other people might think you're just spamming the queues hoping for a mod.

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-16T04:16:28+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:
From our modding queue.

It's quite well polished so far. Not my cup of tea but there's nothing wrong at all .
Master
00:04:778 (1) - should end on 00:05:388 - this tick , then you can put 2 there, otherwise sliderend is on a silent tick. i think its fine like this and idw silence the sliderend lol
00:10:882 - Stream should start here not 00:10:795 (2) - here. ok changed
00:13:498 (1,2,1,2) - all blue ticks should be mapped as well because of the guitar sound. If you want to be gimmicky: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936506 . lol i think its fine plus idw to use gimmicky stuff here
01:12:976 (7) - stream ends here. idk keeping this for consistency i guess

Advanced
00:05:650 (2,3,4) - there technically should be another note here 00:05:562 - but it might be too hard for this diff. ya
00:52:917 (5,6) - isn't this too hard for advanced? owo fine imo
00:54:139 (2) - this should be broken up to 1/2 slider + a circle on red tick because the weird sound abruptly ends on the white tick. keeping this for consistency
00:58:498 (5,6) - same as 00:52:917 (5,6) - fine imo
01:04:080 (5,6) - ^ fine imo
01:09:661 (5,6) - ^ especially when 6 is silent. also keeping this for consistency lol
01:05:302 (2) - same as 00:54:139 (2) - keeping this for consistency
Good luck!

PS: By the way read the rules next time you join a modding queue, you didn't actually follow our rules but then I've already worked on it so it's an exception. It's not a popular thing to do, I know you probably just slipped it but then other people might think you're just spamming the queues hoping for a mod. opps xd

Thanks for modding

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2016-04-16T08:30:55+00:00

From this shit queue

[Easy]
00:36:871 (1) - not perfectly blanket

pic

01:15:243 (3) - imo 256|260 for 01:15:940 (1) blanket it
01:43:847 (1) - wierdo slider
02:06:173 (1) - nc out plz

[Rtyzen's Expert]
00:22:830 (1) - NC out

Sorry if this mod didn't helpful then don't give me a star

GL ~

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-16T11:54:49+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:

From this shit queue

[Easy]
00:36:871 (1) - not perfectly blanket fixed i guess
pic
01:15:243 (3) - imo 256|260 for 01:15:940 (1) blanket it fine imo
01:43:847 (1) - wierdo slider ^
02:06:173 (1) - nc out plz uh following 4 bars per nc so i removed NC at 02:07:568 (2) - instead

Sorry if this mod didn't helpful then don't give me a star
GL ~

lol thanks for modding

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-04-17T02:18:06+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

General

Kiais only in Rtyzen's diff?
Rtyzen's diff should be called Insane and not Expert since you don't have an Insane and the star rating it way too low to call it Expert

Easy

01:47:336 (2,4) - A blanket would be cool
02:01:638 (2,3) - ^
02:07:568 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this be closer to the center of the spinner? (Rule in RC iirc)

Rtyzen's Expert

00:07:394 (5) - It looks too curvy and weird imo, try to make the sliderend blanket with 00:06:871 (4) - 's curve
00:53:092 (2,1) - Fix blanket
01:34:080 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets/shapes can be improved
01:49:429 (1,3) - Blanket?

Master

00:21:522 (1,2,3) - It's a bit too much spaced imo especially in a "calm" part like that, consider reducing the spacing a little bit
00:32:685 (1,2,3) - ^
01:34:603 (3,6) - Nazi blanket

Nice map, I can only mod nazi stuff because it's really good
Good luck!

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-17T02:56:12+00:00

Shyotamaze wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

General
Kiais only in Rtyzen's diff? yes
Rtyzen's diff should be called Insane and not Expert since you don't have an Insane and the star rating it way too low to call it Expert following maimai difficulty naming where the 2nd highest difficulty tier is called expert
Easy
01:47:336 (2,4) - A blanket would be cool sure
02:01:638 (2,3) - ^ not blanketing this
02:07:568 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this be closer to the center of the spinner? (Rule in RC iirc) shifted things around a little

Master
00:21:522 (1,2,3) - It's a bit too much spaced imo especially in a "calm" part like that, consider reducing the spacing a little bit i think the spacing is fine lol its quite easy to hit anw
00:32:685 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:34:603 (3,6) - Nazi blanket fixed
Nice map, I can only mod nazi stuff because it's really good
Good luck!

Thanks for modding!

AmigoDoChroome

228 posts

Joined September 2014

AmigoDoChroome 2016-04-22T17:56:51+00:00

hi
simple mod

easy
00:20:126 (1) - x204 y368
00:25:708 (1,2,1,2) - this again???? sickening
00:31:289 (1) - ^^^^
00:33:382 (3,1,2,3) - ^^^^^
00:38:266 (2) - x380 y132
00:39:661 (1) - 00:39:661 (1) - x300 y384
00:39:661 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988710
02:07:568 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988716

"basic"
00:11:057 (2,1,2) - overlap
00:37:219 (2,3,4) - weird
00:40:359 a note here
00:48:033 (1,2,3) - overlap
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988742

advanced
cs 4 please
00:09:661 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988752
00:53:266 (7) - pattern here
01:17:336 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988767
01:20:998 (1) - wtf nc
01:21:522 (1) - ^^^^^^
01:26:405 (1,1) - ^^^
01:36:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard for advanced's
01:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
01:52:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^^
01:53:615 (1,2) - red tick
02:00:592 (1) - nc
02:01:987 (1) - Ç
02:07:219 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard

master
i dont like de diff

Maps very ctrl c ctrl , but this on track. try to inspire in these maps :
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/492163
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/867819

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-23T00:19:20+00:00

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
hi
simple mod

easy
00:20:126 (1) - x204 y368 i prefer the original
00:25:708 (1,2,1,2) - this again???? sickening why not cuz its symmetry x d
00:31:289 (1) - ^^^^ ^
00:33:382 (3,1,2,3) - ^^^^^ ^
00:38:266 (2) - x380 y132 i prefer the original
00:39:661 (1) - 00:39:661 (1) - x300 y384 ^
00:39:661 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988710 symmetry xd
02:07:568 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988716 i prefer the original too

"basic"
00:11:057 (2,1,2) - overlap uh ya
00:37:219 (2,3,4) - weird hm ill think about it
00:40:359 a note here its fine imo
00:48:033 (1,2,3) - overlap well yes its one of the main patterns in this diff too
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988742 i prefer the original

advanced
cs 4 please
00:09:661 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988752 uh this doesn't follow ds?
00:53:266 (7) - pattern here what about it lol
01:17:336 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988767 i prefer the flow here
01:20:998 (1) - wtf nc NC to signal change in SV
01:21:522 (1) - ^^^^^^ ^
01:26:405 (1,1) - ^^^ ^
01:36:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard for advanced's fine imo
01:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^ ^
01:52:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^^ ^
01:53:615 (1,2) - red tick it's fine what
02:00:592 (1) - nc isn't it already NC'd lol
02:01:987 (1) - Ç ^
02:07:219 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard uh not really imo

master
i dont like de diff xdXdXDXdxdxD

Maps very ctrl c ctrl , but this on track. try to inspire in these maps :
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/492163
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/867819

Thanks for looking at the map but i guess you don't get my mapping style lolll

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-04-26T08:24:24+00:00

from my queue~

[Advanced]

00:11:057 (2,3,4) - doesn't follow music since triplet places emphasis on 00:11:231 - just use same rhythm as 00:07:568 (1,2,3) -
00:13:150 (1) - this note is just hiding in a corner :/ no need to follow DS rigorously here since it's advanced diff and gap is 2/1
00:42:452 (1,2,3) - so triplets tend to indicate the last note in the triplet, which in this case is the weak beat on the red tick. These will play much better if you shift these patterns so that the third object in the triplet starts on a white tick. Maybe try a rhythm like this and apply to all similar patterns: http://puu.sh/owa2H/b9b5e461bd.jpg
00:42:626 (3,1) - avoid overlaps pls, it's apparent with osu autostack. same thing at 00:43:324 (3,1) -

[Basic]

00:05:475 (2) - I would makes this a 1/1 slider. if you can't follow all the drum sounds, it's better to not half-ass it and follow 1/1 rhythm instead
00:14:196 (2) - 00:16:987 (1) - there are inconsistencies in your NC pattern
00:18:382 (1) - remove NC
00:37:917 (3,4) - better to stack here so it's easier for new players to hit 1/2 rhythm

[Easy]

01:21:522 (1,2) - can you adjust slider shape so these blanket?

Wow sorry, this wasn't a very good mod. I might take a look again when I'm feeling less tired, but for now good luck~

Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2016-04-28T10:48:49+00:00

LMT1996

LMT1996 wrote:
00:05:475 (2) - Stream starts here. Imo 00:05:562 - is not that strong
00:34:603 (3) - This slider should end 00:34:778 - here because the vocal stops there, not the blue tick. It's not easy to tell that the vocal ends on red when playing, cuz the vocal is like dragging, so I just dragged the slider to the next vocal
00:35:301 (6) - same tbh ^
01:25:359 (3) - so what's this note mapped to? If it's the synth or piano then you also have to map other red ticks because there are piano/synth notes there as well. There aren't drums here. Changed
01:37:742 (4) - what's this note mapped to? If it's the vocal then there isn't a note here, if it's the synth then it should be a 1/4 slider. Changed
01:40:185 (3) - vocal ends on the white tick instead of the blue tick. Same as before
02:00:243 (4) - starts 02:00:068 - here. It also makes sense to start on 02:00:126 - this 1/6 tick but then it might be too obnoxious. So the red tick makes a bit more sense. Changed

Shyotamaze

Shyotamaze wrote:
Rtyzen's Expert
00:07:394 (5) - It looks too curvy and weird imo, try to make the sliderend blanket with 00:06:871 (4) - 's curve The slider shape is the same as the stream immediately after, which is intended
00:53:092 (2,1) - Fix blanket Fixed I think
01:34:080 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets/shapes can be improved Fixed a bit
01:49:429 (1,3) - Blanket? Fixed

- Frontier -

- Frontier - wrote:
[Rtyzen's Expert]
00:22:830 (1) - NC out It helps to read that slider cuz it's a bit abnormal

Thanks to all the modders!

xd

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jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-04-30T15:23:30+00:00

MokouSmoke wrote:
from my queue~

[Advanced]
00:11:057 (2,3,4) - doesn't follow music since triplet places emphasis on 00:11:231 - just use same rhythm as 00:07:568 (1,2,3) - fixed
00:13:150 (1) - this note is just hiding in a corner :/ no need to follow DS rigorously here since it's advanced diff and gap is 2/1 kee[ing this
00:42:452 (1,2,3) - so triplets tend to indicate the last note in the triplet, which in this case is the weak beat on the red tick. These will play much better if you shift these patterns so that the third object in the triplet starts on a white tick. Maybe try a rhythm like this and apply to all similar patterns: http://puu.sh/owa2H/b9b5e461bd.jpg edit: fixed
00:42:626 (3,1) - avoid overlaps pls, it's apparent with osu autostack. same thing at 00:43:324 (3,1) - moved things around a little i guess?
[Basic]
00:05:475 (2) - I would makes this a 1/1 slider. if you can't follow all the drum sounds, it's better to not half-ass it and follow 1/1 rhythm instead ok fixed
00:14:196 (2) - 00:16:987 (1) - there are inconsistencies in your NC pattern 4 bars per NC
00:18:382 (1) - remove NC reworked NCs a little
00:37:917 (3,4) - better to stack here so it's easier for new players to hit 1/2 rhythm fine imo
[Easy]
01:21:522 (1,2) - can you adjust slider shape so these blanket? would cause ds issues lol

Wow sorry, this wasn't a very good mod. I might take a look again when I'm feeling less tired, but for now good luck~

Thanks for modding!!

Last edited by jcjc 2016-05-09T09:46:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DeRandom Otaku

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Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-05-06T16:19:42+00:00

Hi~ From my queue

Master :

00:22:219 (1) - remove nc
00:33:382 (1) - ^
01:10:359 (1,2) - not stacked properly
01:13:150 (1,2) - ^
01:16:202 (2) - ^^
02:00:854 (2) - ^^^
02:02:249 (2) - ^^^^

Rtyzen's Expert :

Increase AR ;w;
Disable wide screen support
00:12:278 (3) - stack it properly with the end of 00:12:452 (4) -
00:55:533 - change to

and add clap at 00:55:708 -
01:04:778 (1,2,3) - make all of these evenly spaced
01:41:929 (4) - this should be higher

Also disable wide screen support in Easy , Basic , advanced~

Thats all from me ~ the map is great!!~

Good luck!~

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-05-06T16:47:49+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hi~ From my queue

Master :
00:22:219 (1) - remove nc keeping this
00:33:382 (1) - ^ ^
01:10:359 (1,2) - not stacked properly oops 1
01:13:150 (1,2) - ^ oops 2
01:16:202 (2) - ^^ oops 3
02:00:854 (2) - ^^^ oops 4
02:02:249 (2) - ^^^^oops 5

Also disable wide screen support in Easy , Basic , advanced~ oops 6

Thats all from me ~ the map is great!!~

Good luck!~

thansk for mod

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-05-06T21:54:12+00:00

from modq

00:46:987 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - holy

[General/metadata]
add Rtyzen in tags cuz he did gd

[Master]
01:49:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - Idk why this hitsound part is triggering
01:32:685 - why no kiai starting here ? :/
01:19:429 (4) - should be ´NC here imo
01:28:498 (1,1,1,1) - If you want spacing like this I think it should be exposed. e.g 01:28:847 (1,1) - spacing between these two should be twice as big as 01:28:498 (1,1) - and 01:29:196 (1,1) - should have twice as big spacing as 01:28:847 (1,1) -
01:49:102 - Not entirely sure why this green tick is off (109102,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0)
01:49:080 (1) - imo this shouldn't be NC or 01:49:429 (1) -

jcjc

144 posts

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Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-05-07T00:20:59+00:00

Alveryn wrote:
from modq
00:46:987 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - holy yea

[General/metadata]
add Rtyzen in tags cuz he did gd oshit sorry zen

[Master]
01:49:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - Idk why this hitsound part is triggering whistles following vocals
01:32:685 - why no kiai starting here ? :/ there is a kiai flash xd but no kiai time cuz mentioned above
01:19:429 (4) - should be ´NC here imo nah
01:28:498 (1,1,1,1) - If you want spacing like this I think it should be exposed. e.g 01:28:847 (1,1) - spacing between these two should be twice as big as 01:28:498 (1,1) - and 01:29:196 (1,1) - should have twice as big spacing as 01:28:847 (1,1) - changed to the same spacing
01:49:102 - Not entirely sure why this green tick is off (109102,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0) it's to silence the 1/16 slider repeats a little if not my ears would die
01:49:080 (1) - imo this shouldn't be NC or 01:49:429 (1) - cuz its special Xd

-Spy_old

-Spy_old 2016-05-07T07:36:39+00:00

Mod Q!!

[Easy]

00:22:219 (3) - Can this slider end sooner? I get that you are trying to end it with the beat, but it plays weird and can be misleading for a beginner player

00:35:650 (3) - I dont know why, this slider feels so out of place XD maybe because its a bit too long

00:36:871 (1) - This could blanket 00:36:522 (4) - better

01:10:359 (1) - place this slider a tab bit to the bottom? Its better for a beginner to follow if the sliders are similar height, shape, etc.

01:18:731 (1) - You could make a nice blanket with 01:20:126 (2) -

01:20:126 (2) - Why is Kiai only on this tick, should last entire chorus/upbeat part!

02:01:638 (2) - This could blanket 02:01:638 (2) - better..

02:10:185 - This spinner ends at an awkward time, end at a white tick.

nice diff! nice sliders too

[Basic]

00:04:080 (2) - This slider could be spaced a tad bit farther away from the previous one.

00:05:475 (4) - ^

00:06:871 (2) - ^

00:09:661 (2) - ^ I'm not sure if this is what you are going for in terms of design, its just spacing is really key when it comes to Easy and Normal diffs because it can be confusing at first sight if you are not used to this kind of thing.

00:23:092 (1) - This in general needs to be spaced out more because even I was caught off test playing it XD

00:46:115 (3) - This slider looks really awkward, position it away from the next slider, or stack it.

00:48:469 - This section could be mapped better. (looks weird, plays weird, stacked weird, etc.)

00:53:964 - ^

00:59:632 - ^ I see the pattern you are going for, and it's nice... Just could be spaced better, or mapped better idk but looks very weird.

01:31:289 (4) - Space differently, looks weird

02:10:097 - like last diff, can slider end on white tick?

nice map though, really flows nice.

[Advanced]

[General]

Make AR 6.5 instead of 7.5 too hard to read for advanced

Make it CS 3.5, no need for CS 3.6?

[Beatmap]

00:03:382 (1) - This slider starts too soon after spinner, I think make spinner a bit shorter.

00:42:626 (3) - These following 3 reverse sliders play and sound really weird. Instead of (1,2,reverse slider) make only (1, , reverse slider) take out (2)

00:52:917 (5) - These kick sliders, are too hard for advanced, remap.

00:58:498 (5) - ^

01:12:800 (4) - This slider ends awkwardly, remap.

01:14:545 (3) - NC

01:18:208 (3) - make this slider have 1 less reverse.

01:26:405 (1) - No need for NC here.

01:50:301 - This part (2(Slider) 3, 4) too hard for advanced, remap.

01:54:312 (2) - Space away from 01:53:615 (1) -

02:07:394 - Never put a quad + slider stacked in advanced diff, remap.

Flows amazing, nice map!!

I tried Expert, cant follow or play but some notes:

[Rtyzen's Expert]

00:07:917 - NO, but srsly? You cant rank this with that pattern that is like a 6-6.5 star map pattern. Too fast anyways.

00:08:440 (3) - no. You cant have a stream in a circle pattern end and start another stream without any brief pause.

Rest of map is nice!

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-05-07T09:10:16+00:00

-Spy wrote:
Mod Q!!

[Easy]

00:22:219 (3) - Can this slider end sooner? I get that you are trying to end it with the beat, but it plays weird and can be misleading for a beginner player fixed i guess

00:35:650 (3) - I dont know why, this slider feels so out of place XD maybe because its a bit too long changed together with the above

00:36:871 (1) - This could blanket 00:36:522 (4) - better idk i tried

01:10:359 (1) - place this slider a tab bit to the bottom? Its better for a beginner to follow if the sliders are similar height, shape, etc. uh ok

01:18:731 (1) - You could make a nice blanket with 01:20:126 (2) - tried a little but it won't blanket that much from ds

01:20:126 (2) - Why is Kiai only on this tick, should last entire chorus/upbeat part! :(

02:01:638 (2) - This could blanket 02:01:638 (2) - better.. nah

02:10:185 - This spinner ends at an awkward time, end at a white tick. ends at the click sound

nice diff! nice sliders too

[Basic]

00:04:080 (2) - This slider could be spaced a tad bit farther away from the previous one.

00:05:475 (4) - ^

00:06:871 (2) - ^

00:09:661 (2) - ^ I'm not sure if this is what you are going for in terms of design, its just spacing is really key when it comes to Easy and Normal diffs because it can be confusing at first sight if you are not used to this kind of thing.

00:23:092 (1) - This in general needs to be spaced out more because even I was caught off test playing it XD

00:46:115 (3) - This slider looks really awkward, position it away from the next slider, or stack it.

00:48:469 - This section could be mapped better. (looks weird, plays weird, stacked weird, etc.)

00:53:964 - ^

00:59:632 - ^ I see the pattern you are going for, and it's nice... Just could be spaced better, or mapped better idk but looks very weird.

01:31:289 (4) - Space differently, looks weird

02:10:097 - like last diff, can slider end on white tick?

nice map though, really flows nice. replaced my basic with estellia-'s basic lol sorry for taking your time to mod this diff

[Advanced]

[General]

Make AR 6.5 instead of 7.5 too hard to read for advanced ok imo

Make it CS 3.5, no need for CS 3.6? yeah changed

[Beatmap]

00:03:382 (1) - This slider starts too soon after spinner, I think make spinner a bit shorter. fixed

00:42:626 (3) - These following 3 reverse sliders play and sound really weird. Instead of (1,2,reverse slider) make only (1, , reverse slider) take out (2) changed

00:52:917 (5) - These kick sliders, are too hard for advanced, remap. fine imo

00:58:498 (5) - ^ ^

01:12:800 (4) - This slider ends awkwardly, remap. ^

01:14:545 (3) - NC ok

01:18:208 (3) - make this slider have 1 less reverse. fine imo

01:26:405 (1) - No need for NC here. NC because SV change

01:50:301 - This part (2(Slider) 3, 4) too hard for advanced, remap. remapped this part

01:54:312 (2) - Space away from 01:53:615 (1) - following DS here

02:07:394 - Never put a quad + slider stacked in advanced diff, remap. changed

Flows amazing, nice map!!

thanks for modding!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2016-05-13T14:14:01+00:00

Heyo! c:

Easy

00:20:126 (1) - dislike that part, try this?:

00:36:871 (1,2) - would prefer this:

02:01:638 (2,3) - blanket

Good luck!

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-05-13T16:12:03+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heyo! c:

Easy
00:20:126 (1) - dislike that part, try this?:
prefer my own
00:36:871 (1,2) - would prefer this:
ok ig uess
02:01:638 (2,3) - blanket nah

Good luck!

thanks lol

Chujitsu

34 posts

Joined April 2014

Chujitsu 2016-05-14T18:08:39+00:00

Lets see O w O

easy

00:13:150 (2) - move this circle a little up, in whole map I see so many objects which going down to timeline too much. Maybe it's juat my option, but its hard to click for beginers, I guess.
01:20:126 (2) - try to divide it on 2 circles, as you did it before. This is gonna let player hit 2 hard beats

Basic

00:01:987 (1) - try to start spiner here and end on 00:03:033
00:03:382 (1,2) - it's looks more lovely if you move it like this

try to not let your objects go down to timeline so much
what I mean is this:00:15:940 (3), 00:35:475 (3),

00:06:871 (2) - move it down a little, objects in same position as hp bar might confuse player
do same to 00:11:057 (4), 00:51:522 (2), 00:59:894 (2,3,4), 01:43:847 (1), 01:48:557 (4)
Change this moment to what you see in pic and this gonna sounds nice

Adviced

00:01:464 (1) - try to change spiner start as I said in Basic
00:12:452 (2,1) - this jump is 2big as for me, try to make it 2\3 of how you made
00:24:836 (3) - placed to high
00:30:068 (5) - is low placed
00:32:685 (5) - hard to play this moment cuz he like out of beat, try to change to 2 circles
00:33:731 (4) - is low placed
00:35:999 (3) - placed to high
00:44:196 (4) - move it a little out of corner, it's low D:
00:53:615 (1) - just a little move up
01:07:568 (1,2,3,4) - move this parth down, it's on hp bar
01:22:917 (2) - up
01:31:115 (2) - down
01:34:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool parth * _ *
01:37:394 (3,4) - move it down
01:41:057 (5), 01:46:115 (1,2,3) - move it up, it's really low placed
02:01:987 (1) - down, it's touching hp bar

As for me, this difficult have many tricky moments which is not comfortable to read ( I mean circles on the end of sliders). Also in some moments sliders have strange forms

Expert

00:03:905 (3,4),00:06:696 (3,4), - tricky moment
00:07:394 (5) - slider looks like a shrimp, avoid this
00:07:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - cool moment *_*
00:10:359 (1) - try to change slider's look > . <
00:51:871 (2) - move this slider somewhere, it's hard to read stream under
00:53:266 (1) - it's fast but might break combo cuz of slider's form
01:11:057 (4,5,1) - 2 much objects in one place as for me
01:34:080 (1,2) - hard to click, because circles always was close to slider before
move up:00:14:719 (2) - 00:34:603 (3,4) - 00:44:022 (1) - 00:44:545 (5) - 01:24:312 (1) - 01:28:150 (4) -
move down:01:06:522 (2) - 01:16:464 (3) - 01:44:196 (2) - 01:45:243 (1) - 01:52:568 (2) -

Master

00:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - awesome!
00:53:266 (1) - 2fast slider

01:13:847 (4) - try to

move up:00:06:871 (4) - 00:24:836 (3) - 00:30:068 (2) - 00:50:824 (1) - 01:05:126 (2) - 01:08:353 (2,3,4,5) - 01:20:998 (2) - 01:28:498 (1) - 01:40:533 (4) - 01:41:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:43:673 (4) - 01:56:231 (7,1) - 01:58:499 (4,5,6,7,8) - 02:06:696 (1,2,3) -
move down:00:09:661 (4) - 00:26:754 (5) - 00:58:237 (6,7,8) - 01:01:464 (4) - 01:16:638 (4) - 01:23:440 (4) - 01:32:336 (1) - 01:33:033 (2) - 01:44:719 (4) - 01:49:778 (2) - 01:54:661 (2,1) - 01:57:103 (4) - 02:01:290 (4) - 02:05:824 (1) -

I like this song and I like the way you map it! On high difficulties you catched every beat! well done! Good luck (⌒‿⌒)

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-14T19:49:20+00:00

Chujitsu wrote:
Basic
00:01:987 (1) - try to start spiner here and end on 00:03:033 thats too close iirc
00:03:382 (1,2) - it's looks more lovely if you move it like this keeping mine, preference

try to not let your objects go down to timeline so much this should still be in grid, no change
what I mean is this:00:15:940 (3), 00:35:475 (3),

00:06:871 (2) - move it down a little, objects in same position as hp bar might confuse player will consider changing it if newbie players complain after testplay, for now no change
do same to 00:11:057 (4), 00:51:522 (2), 00:59:894 (2,3,4), 01:43:847 (1), 01:48:557 (4)
Change this moment to what you see in pic and this gonna sounds nice dont understand this(?)

no change

some personal changes

diff

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jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2016-05-15T02:24:39+00:00

Chujitsu wrote:
Lets see O w O
easy
00:13:150 (2) - move this circle a little up, in whole map I see so many objects which going down to timeline too much. Maybe it's juat my option, but its hard to click for beginers, I guess. moved up a bit
01:20:126 (2) - try to divide it on 2 circles, as you did it before. This is gonna let player hit 2 hard beats nah i prefer one slider

Adviced
00:01:464 (1) - try to change spiner start as I said in Basic too short maybe
00:12:452 (2,1) - this jump is 2big as for me, try to make it 2\3 of how you made following DS
00:24:836 (3) - placed to high fine imo
00:30:068 (5) - is low placed ^
00:32:685 (5) - hard to play this moment cuz he like out of beat, try to change to 2 circles should be ok for players to hit since its a reverse slider, just hold for 1 measure like the previous sliders and you won't break
00:33:731 (4) - is low placed fine imo
00:35:999 (3) - placed to high ^
00:44:196 (4) - move it a little out of corner, it's low D: fine imo xd
00:53:615 (1) - just a little move up ^
01:07:568 (1,2,3,4) - move this parth down, it's on hp bar um ok
01:22:917 (2) - up fine imo
01:31:115 (2) - down ^
01:34:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool parth * _ * lol thanks
01:37:394 (3,4) - move it down uh ok
01:41:057 (5), 01:46:115 (1,2,3) - move it up, it's really low placed uh ok
02:01:987 (1) - down, it's touching hp bar ok

Master
00:42:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - awesome! :O
00:53:266 (1) - 2fast slider fine imo
nah i think mine is ok
01:13:847 (4) - try to
^
move up:00:06:871 (4) - 00:24:836 (3) - 00:30:068 (2) - 00:50:824 (1) - 01:05:126 (2) - 01:08:353 (2,3,4,5) - 01:20:998 (2) - 01:28:498 (1) - 01:40:533 (4) - 01:41:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:43:673 (4) - 01:56:231 (7,1) - 01:58:499 (4,5,6,7,8) - 02:06:696 (1,2,3) -
move down:00:09:661 (4) - 00:26:754 (5) - 00:58:237 (6,7,8) - 01:01:464 (4) - 01:16:638 (4) - 01:23:440 (4) - 01:32:336 (1) - 01:33:033 (2) - 01:44:719 (4) - 01:49:778 (2) - 01:54:661 (2,1) - 01:57:103 (4) - 02:01:290 (4) - 02:05:824 (1) - um changed some i guess

I like this song and I like the way you map it! On high difficulties you catched every beat! well done! Good luck (⌒‿⌒)

Naxess

Nomination Assessment Team

390 posts

Joined March 2016

Naxess 2016-06-12T18:37:13+00:00

NM From Queue

[

Normal]

SPOILER

00:14:196 - I think a circle would fit well here, since a new sound begins.
Could stack it with the next slider like this, for example:

00:29:894 - This part could be mapped like this, but it might be too much, so It's up to you.
I just feel like this combo 00:28:498 - and this one 00:31:289 - are very plain when they're right next to each other, rhythm-wise, because of the monotonous 1/1 clicking.

00:46:638 (1) - NC?
01:08:964 (3) - Could do the same for this one.
I know you're NCing every other downbeat, but these two are 8 measures apart and are the transitions to chorus respective vers.

00:51:347 - Might want to add a note here for consistency with 00:48:557 - and 00:54:138 - .
^ 00:56:929 -

00:55:533 - You could start slider (5) here, but still end it on the same place on the timeline, for consistency and preparation for 01:01:115 (4) -
00:59:719 - Also for consistency with 00:54:138 - , make this a circle and move back the slider to end on the white tick.
The consistency will allow your rhythm to become more defined.

01:05:301 - Could do something similar here, but I think it's fine as it is, as it's not the same hypermeasure (set of four measures).
You can see here on this other timing line that this measure begins inbetween the two bookmarks, which both indicate when two hypermeasures begin and end. 01:04:778 - for reference

01:31:028 - The problem with long repeats like these is that you don't know whether the slider will repeat once more at this point, which makes you hesitant to click on 01:31:289 (2) - . The more they repeat, the more hesitant the player will become, especially in normal difficulties like this.
In order to fix this, I'd recommend adding a note inbetween like this, for example:

Will both reduce the amount of repeats and give the player a point of reference to the rhythm, allowing them to hit this downbeat easier 01:31:289 - .

01:44:371 - Make circle, reduce length, for consistency with parallel measure 01:33:208 -
02:08:353 (1) - Not going to end it on the timing point like in Advanced? Right now it ends slightly early.

[

Advanced]

SPOILER

00:25:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl + H, moved down slightly, copied to 00:14:592 -

They're copy pasted parts, quite easily noticed as well, but if you think it's fine I then that's up to you.
There some others as well, but I'm sure you're already aware.

00:18:731 - Downbeats are usually NC:ed
00:19:254 - Remove NC
^ 00:29:894 - Add NC
^ 00:30:417 - Remove NC

01:24:312 (3) - Add NC
01:26:405 (1) - Remove NC

01:34:080 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though.
01:35:475 (5) - Add NC

01:39:661 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though. (Oh wait I already said that)
01:41:057 (5) - Add NC

01:45:243 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here.
01:46:115 (1) - Remove NC
01:46:638 (4) - Add NC

01:50:824 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here. (woops I did it again)
01:51:696 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:219 (4) - Add NC

01:48:033 - Don't you think something like this will fit better?

02:03:033 - I'm sure this sound can be integrated with a slider like this, for example:
(Sliderball will zig-zag quickly causing a slowdown effect)

Overall a really clean map, great blankets and patterns, although I still don't like the copy-pasting.

[

General]

SPOILER

Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, it's only used by storyboards.

Other than that it looks good.
Background resolution and sound files are fine.

Good luck! ^^

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-06-15T11:02:33+00:00

Naxess wrote:
[ Normal]
SPOILER

00:14:196 - I think a circle would fit well here, since a new sound begins.
Could stack it with the next slider like this, for example:

00:29:894 - This part could be mapped like this, but it might be too much, so It's up to you.
I just feel like this combo 00:28:498 - and this one 00:31:289 - are very plain when they're right next to each other, rhythm-wise, because of the monotonous 1/1 clicking.

00:46:638 (1) - NC?
01:08:964 (3) - Could do the same for this one.
I know you're NCing every other downbeat, but these two are 8 measures apart and are the transitions to chorus respective vers.

00:51:347 - Might want to add a note here for consistency with 00:48:557 - and 00:54:138 - .
^ 00:56:929 -

00:55:533 - You could start slider (5) here, but still end it on the same place on the timeline, for consistency and preparation for 01:01:115 (4) -
00:59:719 - Also for consistency with 00:54:138 - , make this a circle and move back the slider to end on the white tick.
The consistency will allow your rhythm to become more defined.

01:05:301 - Could do something similar here, but I think it's fine as it is, as it's not the same hypermeasure (set of four measures).
You can see here on this other timing line that this measure begins inbetween the two bookmarks, which both indicate when two hypermeasures begin and end. 01:04:778 - for reference

01:31:028 - The problem with long repeats like these is that you don't know whether the slider will repeat once more at this point, which makes you hesitant to click on 01:31:289 (2) - . The more they repeat, the more hesitant the player will become, especially in normal difficulties like this.
In order to fix this, I'd recommend adding a note inbetween like this, for example:

Will both reduce the amount of repeats and give the player a point of reference to the rhythm, allowing them to hit this downbeat easier 01:31:289 - .

01:44:371 - Make circle, reduce length, for consistency with parallel measure 01:33:208 -
02:08:353 (1) - Not going to end it on the timing point like in Advanced? Right now it ends slightly early.

remapped the whole boring front part cuz its trash, so i guess its way better now
but everything you mentioned about "consistency" i'm denying because i'm trying to map an interesting normal with interesting beats to follow every "hypermeasure", since most normals are super boring. also if you've noticed i'm trying to map to vocal as well kek

inconsistencies shouldnt be something you should fault a map for, at least imo

sry jcjc can u recheck hs pls ;w;w;w;;

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jcjc 2016-06-18T07:06:32+00:00

Naxess wrote:
NM From Queue

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00:25:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl + H, moved down slightly, copied to 00:14:592 -
yeah i moved it down to fit DS
They're copy pasted parts, quite easily noticed as well, but if you think it's fine I then that's up to you.
There some others as well, but I'm sure you're already aware. xd

00:18:731 - Downbeats are usually NC:ed basically fixed all the nc suggestions
00:19:254 - Remove NC
^ 00:29:894 - Add NC
^ 00:30:417 - Remove NC

01:24:312 (3) - Add NC
01:26:405 (1) - Remove NC

01:34:080 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though.
01:35:475 (5) - Add NC

01:39:661 - Would be great if this was clickable, although I guess a repeat works as well. Makes for some NC inconsistency though. (Oh wait I already said that)
01:41:057 (5) - Add NC

01:45:243 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here.
01:46:115 (1) - Remove NC
01:46:638 (4) - Add NC

01:50:824 (5) - Add NC, you can hear in the music that a new measure starts here. (woops I did it again)
01:51:696 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:219 (4) - Add NC

01:48:033 - Don't you think something like this will fit better? don't wanna change the rhythm haha

02:03:033 - I'm sure this sound can be integrated with a slider like this, for example:
(Sliderball will zig-zag quickly causing a slowdown effect)

Overall a really clean map, great blankets and patterns, although I still don't like the copy-pasting. /notice]

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Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, it's only used by storyboards. d

Other than that it looks good.
Background resolution and sound files are fine.

Good luck! ^^

thanks for modding

Arusamour

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Arusamour 2016-10-21T18:42:51+00:00

i really love this map.

dont give up!

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