Honeyworks - Sayonara Ryou-Kataomoi feat.Serizawa Haruki(CV. · forum

First time modding here for a random map, picked it up because I like that song though!
Shitty English and Crop Alert!

Insane
(just a reminder: place some hitsounds!)
01:23:907 (1,2,3,4) - for example here; just imitate the drums w/ hitsounds

00:22:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - part is weird, maybe try a different distance snap?
01:01:036 (4,4) - i prefer sliders in these parts to make it more flowy.

Example

01:51:976 (3,4,5) - didnt seem symmetrical, had to pay attention to not miss that, maybe use polygon circles?
01:53:610 (1,2,3,4) - I like this part, but its difficult to adapt to this sudden pauses.
02:04:748 (2,3,1,2) - combo 2,3 were different then combo 1,2, when nothing happens in the song, sure it's for the transition
into the slow slider you built in, but its still very difficult to adapt to.
02:17:224 (5) - your chorus was flowy the whole time, except that part, because u built in a pause; maybe add this circle?
02:29:698 (1,2,3) - that part scared me, i thought i had a small break, because u imtated the drums first, and then suddenly
followed the rythm of the piano in the background, and then switched back to the drum rythm.
02:44:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - jump, slow stack, slow stack, slow stack, jump whith the same rythm? maybe imitate the jump
patterns from 02:43:659 (5,6,7) and 02:46:481 (1,2,3).
03:21:604 (2,5) - maybe add these notes to increase fluency in chorus?

Example

03:34:896 (6) - place that note differently, nobody expects that distance.

Example

03:35:490 (1) - instead of making sudden pauses, just use 2 notes.
> 03:35:045 (7) - if you don't, then at least don't make that slider so edgy

Example

03:40:540 (2,3,4,5) - cant describe that, look at images.

Example

live example: https://my.mixtape.moe/jfvxiv.mp4

03:53:609 (3,4,5) - sliders instead of circles for more flow yo!

end; i did it lol

This map was fun to play and mod though! 8) Even if you don't appreciate my mod, please leave a reply!

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