1. set the preview time for Samuel's diff, and fix the tags there. Also, add Samuel to all tags. And fix the capitalization; his diff should be "Samuel's Vent" with capital "V".
2. You seem to have missed removing the extra .osb file last time, make sure to do so.
3. For some reason his offset is set to 1775, which is identical to 60. So make the offset on ALL difficulties 00:00:060 (not just Advent). Then resnap notes.
4. You'll probably want to fix the kiai times after that since they'll be 30 ms off (I found a quicker way to do so with AIBat, after you're done adjusting the offsets.)
5. Recalculate the slider lengths on Final Vent because the ends are not snapped.

1. Try and keep a consistent spacing throughout the map; it varied from like .8x to .6x. Make sure distance snap is on when you're mapping easier diffs.
2. Your combos are far too long for an easy or normal diff; they should also be consistent. I went for about every 2 measures (8 beats)
3. 00:01:774 (1,2,3) - These are timed wrongly; it should not be snapped to 1/3rd time but rather just normal 1/4ths like so:
   
4. 00:08:631 (1) - End this on the long white tick.
5. 00:13:774 (6) - NC
6. 00:14:631 (8,9,1) - The spacing between 8 and 9 should be about the same as the spacing between 9 and 1.
7. 00:15:917 (1) - Not NC
8. 00:17:202 (7) - NC
9. 00:18:917 (5) - Move it right one grid so the spacing between all the sliders is equal
10. 00:20:631 (5) - NC
11. 00:24:488 - it really felt like there should have been a note here, but it'd be too soon after the spinner... perhaps remove the spinner and put in patterns.
12. 00:28:345 (8) - Start this 1/2 beat earlier on the red tick. Also NC.
13. 00:33:488 (1) - Not NC (the vocals here are a pickup to the downbeat), so the NC goes at:
14. 00:34:345 (7) - NC here
15. The placement for the next few notes starting from here make little sense. Here's how I would place them:
    
    Note the new combo. Make sure to space properly.
16. 00:40:345 (1) - Delete this and make the next note NC
17. Actually the placements here don't make sense to me either. Try this:
    
18. And next, starting from 00:44:631 (1)
    
19. 00:51:060 (8,9,10) - Do what I did earlier, like:
    
    Again note the NC
20. 00:54:060 (1) - Delete this and make the next note NC. Make sure it's a red NC xD.
21. 01:00:917 (1,2,3,4) - Move these notes all 1/4 back so the match up with white ticks. Also, make some kind of pattern out of them.
    

1. Combos are too long again
2. 00:01:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, fix the timing, it should be on the 1/4 instead of 1/3rd
3. 00:13:344 (4) - NC
4. 00:16:916 (5) - Snapped improperly again; move to the next red tick.
5. 00:17:201 (6) - NC
6. What is this overmapping, and improperly on 1/3rd again? None of any of this song is in 1/3rd, so you shouldn't be mapping like that.
   Try this instead:
   
7. 00:24:059 (10) - NC
8. 00:24:916 (1) - Not NC
9. 00:25:487 (5) - Again with the mistaken 1/3rd. Move to the next red tick.
10. 00:30:916 (2) - Erm, just make this symmetric.
11. 00:34:344 (6) - NC
12. 00:37:059 (1) - Not NC. Mistaken 1/3rd. Move to the next red tick.
13. 00:44:630 (1,2) - Spaced way too far
14. 00:48:059 (5) - NC
15. 00:50:201 (5) - Start this 1/2 beat later on the red tick. Also, NC.
16. 00:51:487 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This feels overmapped, and it's also spaced very badly. Just map the way you've been doing for consistency.
17. 00:55:773 (8) - Move 1/2 beat earlier

1. I'm not going to point out where all the NC's should go this time; just try to keep them consistent as I have been showing for the last two diffs.
2. 00:11:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space these out evenly.
3. 00:22:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Stream feels random and out of place
4. 00:24:917 (2,4,6) - Make these copies of 1,3,5; right now the angle between them is weird.

1. Please put in like 2 seconds of audio lead in, else everyone automatically misses the first notes.
2. OD -1?
3. 00:21:382 (3) - Delete this note?
4. 00:51:489 (6) - a 3/4ths long slider feels out of place, consider just making it 1/2.
5. 01:05:203 - Don't use red timing sections to make slow sliders; instead, use a green timing point with slider velocity of 0.5x.

hillaryzx wrote:

I already done the removal, you can check by downloading it... Also what kiai times is the best in the song?

Hi. Here's your mod. <3

GENERAL

1. Your first Kiai should start at 00:30:917. Second Kiai at 00:44:631.
   
   
2. Remove the two green lines on the end of the song. Kiai is not made for fountains.

Sword Vent

1. 00:12:488 - 1 grid down.
   
   
2. 00:14:202 - (2,3,4,5,6) 1 grid up.
   
   
3. 00:55:988 - New combo.

ADVENT

1. Approach Rate +1
   
   
2. 00:12:917 - Spacing is not consistent. Move (3) at x:376 y:300.
   
   
3. 00:34:345 - Move this closer to the previous note.

The rest is a bit fine. Good luck getting it ranked. <3

• 
  The artist should be "Matsumoto Rika".
  
  Remove "Kamen Rider", "rica matsumoto" and "ryuki" from tags because they are already added in the source.
  
  Some KIAIs are not snapped and inconsistent.
  
  Set preview time on [Samuel's Vent] as well as others.

• 
  Green lines are not snapped. Please resnap all.
  SV1.40 is too high as easiest diff.

1. 00:01:774 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is too confusing for newbie. Try the one below.
   
2. 00:03:488 (1) - It's hard to read this note because it's hidden by previous notes.
3. 00:34:345 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
4. 00:48:488 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 00:54:917 (2,3,4,1) - ^
6. 01:04:345 (1) - This spinner is too short as easiest diff. How about changing it to slider or something else?

• 
  HP-1.
  Green lines are not snapped. Please resnap all.

1. 00:25:131 (3,4,5) - Too near from (2). Move them further.
2. 00:30:917 (2) - Add finish.
3. 00:37:131 (4,5,6,7) - Oh...spacing is broken. You should change the pattern of formation.
4. 00:38:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's not good idea that stacking 6 circles unless it's stream.
5. 00:40:560 (8) - Doesn't follow the music. Move it to 00:40:345.
6. 00:46:131 (3) - Too near from (2).

• 
  HP-1.
  Green lines are not snapped. Please resnap all.
  In KIAI, you overused finish sound. Please add it to only suitable places.

1. 00:13:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's not good to stack 5 circles unless it's stream.
2. 00:19:774 (1,2,3,4) - In consistent spacing. Try to move (1,2) to right by 1 grid.
3. 00:22:774 (1) - Move right by 1 grid.
4. 00:22:988 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Clap sounds don't fit the music well. Use clap at (4,8), and remove clap from rest.
5. 00:26:631 (6) - Add a repeat. It will make better flow imo.
6. 00:30:917 (2) - Add finish.
7. 00:31:131 (3) - Remove finish.
8. 00:31:345 (4) - ^
9. 00:54:917 (6) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 00:55:131 (1).
10. 01:04:559 (4,5) - Move left by 1 grid.

• 
  The pattern of formation is very simple and not following the music so much.

1. 00:15:917 (3,4,5) - I think quick triple doesn't fit here. Remove (4)?
2. 00:44:632 (1) - Add finish.
3. 00:50:417 (5) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 00:50:632 (1).
4. 01:05:203 (1) - This slider is too long. It's a good idea to make unique shape slider though, this is not fun to play because of length. I recommend you to replace it with spinner.

• [General]

1. Kiai is inconsistent. Please make them all the same for all diffs.
2. Preview point is also inconsistent. Please make them all the same for all diffs.
3. Audio track lead-in is also inconsistent. Please make them all the same for all diffs.
   
   [Sword Vent]
4. 00:03:488 (1) - Put "finish".
5. 00:12:488 (3) - Remove "finish".
6. 00:15:488 (4) - Replace "clap" with "finish".
7. 00:15:917 (5) - Remove "clap".
8. 00:16:345 (6) - Replace "finish" with "whistle".
9. 00:17:202 (1) - Put a "finish" on start and "clap" on end.
10. 00:18:060 (2) - Put a "clap" on end.
11. 00:18:917 (3) - Remove "clap" on start and put at the end.
12. 00:19:774 (4) - Put a "clap" on end.
13. 00:20:631 (1) - Remove "whistle".
14. 00:21:060 (2) - Replace "whistle" with "clap".
15. 00:21:488 (3) - Remove "whistle".
16. 00:21:917 (4) - Make it look better like this: (as shown on the pic below)
    
17. 00:32:417 (4) - Move this to "00:32:202".
18. 00:35:845 (4) - Move this to "00:35:631".
19. 00:51:059 (2,3) - Is this a jump? Please fix spacing because it is not necessary to put a jump on a normal diff.
    
    [Advent]
20. 00:16:559 (4,5) - Replace "finish" with "clap".
21. 00:18:488 (1) - This spinner is kinda irrelevant; It feels weird to put a spinner here. Replace it with some notes.
22. 00:26:845 (2) - Remove "whistle".
23. 00:27:274 (4) - Remove "finish".
24. 00:30:917 (2) - This slider looks ugly ._.
    
    [Final Vent]
25. 00:03:060 (4,6,5,7) - Remove "finish"
26. 00:18:274 (1) - This spinner is kinda irrelevant; It feels weird to put a spinner here. Replace it with some notes.
    
    [Samuel's Vent]
27. 00:30:489 (10) - Put "clap".
28. 00:44:203 (10) - ^
29. 01:05:203 (1) - Replace this with a spinner.

hillaryzx wrote:

argh.... I click give kudosu without thinking.... (spacing out)...
give star, samuel?

1. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks because of the video.
2. Preview time is not consistent in all diff, unrankable, please fix it.
3. Recommend to make SliderTickRate 2 in all diffs.
4. The star rate of lowest diff is over 3, it may cause ur mapset unrankable.
5. Set audio lead-in to 1 (1000ms) in Advent and Final Vent.

1. HP-1, OD-1. I suppose it should be a normal diff, so suggest to reduce them
2. 00:16:559 (4,5) - stack them?
3. 00:17:202 (1,2,3,4) - the approach circles 're nearly invisible here due to the video, suggest to change a combo color.
4. 00:27:060 (3) - remove clap?
5. 00:45:702 (2) - stack it with the end of (1)?
6. 00:48:274 - i suppose u miss a note here~
7. 00:51:488 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for a normal diff, highly recommend to change some of them to slider
8. 01:01:774 (4) - stack?
9. 01:02:631 (7) - ^

1. 00:11:845 (2,3,4,5) - invisible approach circles
2. 00:28:131 (2) - remove whistle?

1. HP-2, OD-2, highly recommend to do so. The bpm is not fast enough for such a high HP, and the OD make it worse. I always suggest not to make HP+AR+OD > 24.
2. 00:03:274 (6) - remove it? i suppose it's better to leave a blank here~
3. 00:15:702 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - invisible approach circles

- [Samuel's Vent] : Combo1 : 255,255,255

208,232,3917,6,0,B|152:272|88:216,1,105
112,152,4560,2,0,B|112:72,3,70

48,168,46131,2,2,B|52:312|52:312|140:328|140:328|180:288|180:288|

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- Try to get 500 audio-lead in for the rest of the diff, [samuel's vent] audio lead-in 2500
- mp3 name's in .flv lol - Is this unrankable?

[Final Vent]
- there are several duplicated timelines 030
00:03:917 (1,2) - slider placement adjustment

208,232,3917,6,0,B|152:272|88:216,1,105
112,152,4560,2,0,B|112:72,3,70

00:16:988 (3) - finish at ending instead of beginning? Finish at both sides works as well
00:20:631 (8) - remove whistle on slider
00:45:060 (1,2) - stack properly, change the orientation of (1) so that it parallel with (1,2,3,..)
00:48:167 (2,3) - spacing

the spacing's a bit unstable... try to make spacing proportional to time between two notes, that makes players to read notes easier.

[Advent]
00:18:488 (4) - place about (424,80) for maintaining spacing
00:23:631 (7) - whistle?
00:46:131 (3) - slider shape adjustment

48,168,46131,2,2,B|52:312|52:312|140:328|140:328|180:288|180:288|

just try to avoid whistle over the whole slider because it really sounds noisy and don't fit here, and try to use less linear slider which overlaps too much and does not look good.

ahhhhhh those were the days orz but try to make stuffs that's more beautiful and easier to be read by players ;w; - I'm not from that time..

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi~ Here is my mod.

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
- Some of the diff doesn't have this tag "rica" Please fix it. ( IN Samuel's Vent )
- Why is Advent Slider Velocity is 1.60 ? but Final Vent is 1.40 . =w='' ( It should be Final Vent is 1.60 ) Fix~

[Sword Vent]
I think you should use grid level 3 . @w@"
HP Drain Rate - 1
00:21:488(x) = add note
00:21:917(3) = I think you should do it like this. http://puu.sh/gD8E 00:24:060(5) + finish
00:25:131(5) = slider end in 00:25:560
00:26:417(1) = I think the note 2&3 doesn't fit the sound. How about put a slider here? http://puu.sh/gD9r
00:42:702(5) = slider end in 00:43:345
01:00:917(1,2,3,4) = Remove clap.

[Advent]
Circle Size - 1
Approach Rate - 1
I suggest you to remake all the sliders. ;_; ( The sliders looks so ugly. )

[Final Vent]
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:10:560(x) = add note
00:10:988(x) = ^
00:13:560(x) = ^
00:15:917(x) = ^
00:30:488(x) = ^ http://puu.sh/gDfs
01:03:274(x) = ^ http://puu.sh/gDfV put it anywhere you like. http://puu.sh/gDgd
This diff should be more hard! ><"

[Samuel's Vent]
Approach Rate + 1
This diff is good .

Okay, That's all ~
This map need more hardworking.
anywhere, Good Luck! Sorry, but I must correct your grammar ( Anywhere = place , Anyway is what you want to right? ) XD

1. Quality of the mp3 is horrible. If you can find a better one be sure to re-check offset and apply it to all diffs.
   
2. Hitsound volume is set to 100% for all parts in all maps (except samuel's). This is very noise, try to reduce it to ~70-80% for KIAI and ~60% for everything else in the timing panel (you can select multiple timing sections at once so this is just a matter of seconds to apply)
   
3. General object placement in all diffs could be improved a lot. If you have problems mapping "good looking" patterns try to turn off grid snap and place the notes properly. If you want to make a straight line just hold [Ctrl] and you can snap the notes every 45°. This will also fix the inconsistent spacing (especially in the easier diffs)

304,64,18917,2,0,B|192:64,1,100,0|8
236,142,19774,2,0,B|120:142,1,100,0|8
55,142,20631,5,0
55,222,21060,1,8

• - 00:17:202 (1) - move to 260/300
  - 00:17:631 (2) - stack with 00:16:559 (4) (after (4) is placed like in the screen above)

p3n wrote:

[General]

1. Quality of the mp3 is horrible. If you can find a better one be sure to re-check offset and apply it to all diffs.
   
2. Hitsound volume is set to 100% for all parts in all maps (except samuel's). This is very noise, try to reduce it to ~70-80% for KIAI and ~60% for everything else in the timing panel (you can select multiple timing sections at once so this is just a matter of seconds to apply)
   
3. General object placement in all diffs could be improved a lot. If you have problems mapping "good looking" patterns try to turn off grid snap and place the notes properly. If you want to make a straight line just hold [Ctrl] and you can snap the notes every 45°. This will also fix the inconsistent spacing (especially in the easier diffs)

[Sword Vent]
00:18:060 (2,3) - add claps to the ending points?
00:18:917 (3,4) - fix the overlap here, the spacing is inconsistent, make it look like this (and fix the following notes accordingly): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243811

304,64,18917,2,0,B|192:64,1,100,0|8
236,142,19774,2,0,B|120:142,1,100,0|8
55,142,20631,5,0
55,222,21060,1,8

00:21:488 (X) - weird to leave out this note



[Advent]
Why is the SV in your "normal" map higher than in your "hard"? This is really weird. If this is what you intended then it is fine with me but from an aiming standpoint this map is on par if not harder than [Final Vent]. You could increase circle size to the biggest (like "easy") but this is more a workaround than a fix. If you lower the SV be sure to resnap and check EVERY slider afterwards.

00:12:917 (3,1,2) - notes are not in line with previous, disable "Grid-Snap" and hold down "Ctrl" whenn placing those notes, this will snap them exactly in line every 45°
00:15:059 (3,4,5) - try this pattern (much easier to read, especially for a "normal" diff): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243816
to fix following notes maybe try something like this (or anything that is easy to read and consistent in spacing):

• - 00:17:202 (1) - move to 260/300
  - 00:17:631 (2) - stack with 00:16:559 (4) (after (4) is placed like in the screen above)

00:52:774 (3) - remove the last repeat to match the vocals http://puu.sh/h1BW



[Final Vent]
00:20:631 (8) - I don't do the excessive "NC here NC there" mods but this (8) should be a NC here, and start the NC on (2) here 00:22:774 (1,2)
00:22:774 (1,2) - jumping into the stream seems weird and not intended. Maybe fix it to consistent spacing by slightly altering the previous pattern (so you don't overlap the note before the stream)
00:43:774 (1) - this spinner is nonesense, start the KIAI properly by mapping the note at 00:44:631 with a circle or slider start, sou don't need the spinner here
00:53:417 (1) - wrong placed clap? should be on the following note



[Samuel's Vent]
AR 8 or even AR 7 work so much better with your SV and the BPM of this song. AR 9 is just stupid...

Some overmaps are a cool addition here imo. As you set up the triplet pattern early in the song it flows really well. Some overmaps are really unnecessary and kill this flow though, I'll point those out and you can decide if you want a fluent, playable map or a map that doesn't make much sense and is therefore harder to FC:

00:09:167 (4) - plays much better if you delete this note (slightly overmapped, if wanted to follow the complete drumroll the stream wouldn't start here either way)
00:16:131 (5,7) - if you want to follow the vocals here, delete (5) and (7), fits much better, try it for yourself
00:23:524 (3) - overmapped, delete
00:57:274 (1,2) - don't stack (1), it is extremely hard to read (confusing) with the black combo colour and the stream starting on a red tick




Still some work to do but doesn't look bad. Keep it up, get some more mods and I'll recheck it and see if I can star it then.

nekonomitsu wrote:

Awesome map bro~ -w-b
Star for you.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 58,58,58
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 128,0,128

1. I think this song tick rate1 better
2. there is a kiai time in Samuel's Vent different with other diffs : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:05:202, ends on 01:05:310

1. 01:05:310 (1) - end for 01:09:702 - I think better

1. this Diff Hard Diff? stream long I suggest that I reduce it
2. 00:16:988 (3) - remove finish beginning
3. 00:29:202 (6) - really ugly slider how about this?
4. 00:44:631 (8,1) - swaps newcombo

1. fine
   

1. fine too