Lady Gaga - Dance In The Dark

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Gonzvlo
[General]
  1. Tags: "2009" seems way too generic, plus it's not directly related to the map/song. You should remove it.


[Brightness]
  1. 00:51:507 (5,6,7) - I don't encourage using this kind of patterns for the easiest diffs, I'd suggest to either use a repeating slider or a simple slider.
  2. 01:31:673 (1) - This spinner is bugged, it's missing a NC. This is an unrankable issue, make sure to fix it.
  3. 02:10:102 - I don't find this break really necessary, the last break was 10 seconds ago. I strongly suggest to map this little break, remember to use Breaks properly.
  4. 02:16:301 (6) - The last repeat felt rather unintuitive, rookies will expect only 1 repeat. I'd suggest to remove the last repeat, that will also leave a little space before the next spinner.
  5. 02:21:755 (1) - This object is way too far from the centre, remember that post-spinner notes are quite hard for rookies. This is really important, try to tweak the pattern a bit.
  6. 03:30:185 (6,7,1) - Same as before.
  7. 03:40:598 (4) - As I said before, using only 1 repeat would be way more intuitive for rookies. Also, it fits the vocals better, try it.


[Contrast]
  1. 80% of the patterns tweaked/re-arranged.


[Darkness]
  1. 01:49:524 (7) - This jumps felt a bid odd, I think you should simply stack this circle.
  2. 02:51:259 (1) - This circle felt quite unexpected, there isn't any noticeable rhythm here. I strongly suggest to remove it, also, if you leave that little blank the chorus won't feel too overmapped.
  3. 03:30:557 (3,1,2) - This part looks quite messy, thus hard to read. Also, (2)'s 2nd arrow is barely noticeable, this might be a good reason to pop a bubble. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern, try with little streams or a single repeating slider.
  4. 04:04:152 (11) - After such a spacing change you better use a NC here, also the combo is way too long so you better do it.
Topic Starter
Bass

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Your SB code is in both the .osb and the Darkness .osu; please either keep it in only the .osu or .osb files; otherwise osu! will draw it twice and thus lag twice as much unnecessarily. fixed

[Brightness]

Your sliders could be lined up a bit better on all difficulties; I'll just point out a few examples here and leave it to you if you have time. For example, 00:46:053 (5,6,7) - By looking at http://puu.sh/5R7y (specifically the approach circle), it's pretty clear that they're not perfectly rounded. Similarly, 01:16:797 (1) isn't symmetrical. If you move the points like http://puu.sh/5R7S, it'll be symmetrical. In general, they could just be tweaked a bit if you have time. fixed

In my opinion, for an Easy at 121 BPM, two beats should be the minimum recovery time after a spinner, and there's a lot of 1-beat ones, so I'd have a look at that.

[Contrast]

00:50:516 (5) - I feel like a pattern like http://puu.sh/5R8t would ease into the off-beats a lot better.
01:09:359 (5) - Kinda covered by 3; how about changing it like http://puu.sh/5R8N? Wouldn't be covered.
01:22:499 (1) - I'd recommend not stacking this to make timing a bit easier to read.
04:04:400 (1,2,3) - Same as before; hard to read because it's stacked, especially since all the previous ones were 1/1 and this is suddenly 1/2.

[Darkness]

Too easy for 13m. I'd say that's the biggest issue here. not really... a lot of easy to pass on the hardest level maps have got score more than 10 mln

02:20:268 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Can you make these separated a bit more? It's hard to see that they're 4 notes each, not 5, since most of your patterns are 3 or 5 notes. fixed
Thanks for mod.


Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]
  1. Tags: "2009" seems way too generic, plus it's not directly related to the map/song. You should remove it. fixed


[Brightness]
  1. 00:51:507 (5,6,7) - I don't encourage using this kind of patterns for the easiest diffs, I'd suggest to either use a repeating slider or a simple slider. fixed
  2. 01:31:673 (1) - This spinner is bugged, it's missing a NC. This is an unrankable issue, make sure to fix it. fixed
  3. 02:10:102 - I don't find this break really necessary, the last break was 10 seconds ago. I strongly suggest to map this little break, remember to use Breaks properly. fixed
  4. 02:16:301 (6) - The last repeat felt rather unintuitive, rookies will expect only 1 repeat. I'd suggest to remove the last repeat, that will also leave a little space before the next spinner. fixed
  5. 02:21:755 (1) - This object is way too far from the centre, remember that post-spinner notes are quite hard for rookies. This is really important, try to tweak the pattern a bit. fixed
  6. 03:30:185 (6,7,1) - Same as before. umm there isn't any spinner before, anyway fixed
  7. 03:40:598 (4) - As I said before, using only 1 repeat would be way more intuitive for rookies. Also, it fits the vocals better, try it. fixed


[Contrast]
  1. 80% of the patterns tweaked/re-arranged.


[Darkness]
  1. 01:49:524 (7) - This jumps felt a bid odd, I think you should simply stack this circle. fixed
  2. 02:51:259 (1) - This circle felt quite unexpected, there isn't any noticeable rhythm here. I strongly suggest to remove it, also, if you leave that little blank the chorus won't feel too overmapped. fixed
  3. 03:30:557 (3,1,2) - This part looks quite messy, thus hard to read. Also, (2)'s 2nd arrow is barely noticeable, this might be a good reason to pop a bubble. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern, try with little streams or a single repeating slider. fixed
  4. 04:04:152 (11) - After such a spacing change you better use a NC here, also the combo is way too long so you better do it. fixed
Thank you Gonzvlo for mod and retweaking sliders.
Kytoxid
Alright, this is good. Sorry for taking so long to get back to this, stuff has been popping up offline so I've just kept osu! open for music while being busy with other stuff. :P

Bubbled.
Sakura
[Timing]
Offset - 10 ms

Original:


With -10 ms


Sorry but offset needs fixing, popping :<

The diffs themselves look fine btw, dont forget to resnap all notes shift all SB elements by -10 ms and timing sections too.
Zekira
Offset: 32160 (-9 from current)

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Your message is too short.
...seriously, my message is meaningful enough to be long >:(
Sakura
Ok timing looks good now

Rebubbled~
RandomJibberish
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General
Set the offset to 16292 - it makes the menu look much nicer.

Darkness
00:47:531 (9,1) - This antijump isn't confusing so much as annoying
lots of the spacing changes don't make much sense but it's all playable and I've seen worse so

Contrast
Credit this to Gonz in the diff name? You wouldn't know it was a guest diff unless you read the description. Also, the difficulty name doesn't fit with the others anyway.
03:23:730 (4) - I am disappoint with this slider

Brightness
Very high drain for an easy - it's higher than Normal's. Lower it a bit? I'd probably drop the OD and AR a tick too.
Topic Starter
Bass

RandomJibberish wrote:

.

General
Set the offset to 16292 - it makes the menu look much nicer. ok

Darkness
00:47:531 (9,1) - This antijump isn't confusing so much as annoying fixed
lots of the spacing changes don't make much sense but it's all playable and I've seen worse so

Contrast
Credit this to Gonz in the diff name? You wouldn't know it was a guest diff unless you read the description. Also, the difficulty name doesn't fit with the others anyway. fixed
03:23:730 (4) - I am disappoint with this slider well I know that Gonzvlo should know better, but I've remade this slider and it's symetrical and looks okay really... http://puu.sh/6gXH - how it looks now

Brightness
Very high drain for an easy - it's higher than Normal's. Lower it a bit? I'd probably drop the OD and AR a tick too. fixed
RandomJibberish
Slider was fixed properly by me, preview point and offset mix-up sorted, all looking good now

Rebubbleded

EDIT: Bass fixed an accidental silly jump that I thought was intentionally silly. Boom again.
OzzyOzrock
Gonztrast
abalee
should have a little fix.
Darkness:
00:48:523 (8) - new combo?
02:36:870 (7,1) - ,02:39:845 (8,9) - uh not sure way you leave such long combo again, for the symmetric?

Gonz' Contrast
I don't like the soft-whistle used here, original soft-finish is fine for me but it just a suggsetion.

Edit: fine for go.
Musty
gratz
Louis Cyphre
abalee
<-:
Kawayi Rika
Bass-chan~

Congratulations~ ;)
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