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MkGuh wrote:

Crossled wrote:

00:48:445 (1,2) - Not sure if those should be sliders, I think they sound better as single hits.
Honestly think this has a really good chance of getting ranked ^-^
Which diff?
The insane diff! =)
Underforest
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SHUT UP AND ENJOY THE NIGHTCORE
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Yeah (? Will mod later. Shoot a star
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Underforest wrote:

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SHUT UP AND ENJOY THE NIGHTCORE
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Yeah (? Will mod later. Shoot a star
omg! ty, that helps a lot ♥
Lumael
11:37 MkGuh: ♥3♥
11:37 MkGuh: migo
11:37 MkGuh: pq vc tá moddando tanto meus mapas antigos
11:37 MkGuh: e jogando
11:37 MkGuh: KÇLJSAKDLSAD
11:37 Lumael: oie
11:37 MkGuh: paran com isso
11:37 MkGuh: esse insane
11:37 MkGuh: é um cu
11:37 Lumael: eu so to olhando
11:37 Lumael: vou modar
11:37 Lumael: entao
11:37 Lumael: 00:03:341 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1) -
11:37 Lumael: isso aqui
11:37 Lumael: ta ruim
11:37 Lumael: MENTIRA
11:37 Lumael: <3
11:37 MkGuh: n, tá ruim o insane
11:37 MkGuh: pare
11:37 MkGuh: EU SEI
11:38 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
11:38 MkGuh: vc n tem noção
11:38 MkGuh: de qnts remaps
11:38 MkGuh: eu tive q fazer
11:38 MkGuh: pra chegar nisso
11:38 MkGuh: SKÇAJDSAJKLD
11:38 MkGuh: tipo
11:38 MkGuh: em maio tava um cu
11:38 MkGuh: ai eu remapeiei duas vezes em maio
11:38 MkGuh: ficou um cu
11:38 MkGuh: ai em junho
11:38 Lumael: KKKK
11:38 *Lumael is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/695310 Scott Simons - Livin a Double Life [Baraatje123's Normal]]
11:38 MkGuh: eu remapeiei
11:38 Lumael: tamelhor q isso
11:38 MkGuh: e dei nisso
11:38 MkGuh: mas ficou
11:38 MkGuh: tudo full ds
11:38 MkGuh: COITADO
11:38 MkGuh: SAKÇJDSAD
11:39 Lumael: cara o baraatje adora colcoar sound no slidertick
11:39 Lumael: pqp
11:39 MkGuh: eu preciso de mods
11:39 MkGuh: pro meu mapa
11:39 Lumael: fica muito tosco
11:39 MkGuh: runaway
11:39 MkGuh: me ajuda?
11:39 *MkGuh runs
11:39 MkGuh: eu to pedindo
11:39 MkGuh: pra todo mundo
11:39 MkGuh: to parecendo aquelas puta
11:39 MkGuh: desesperada
11:39 MkGuh: o hoen
11:39 MkGuh: consegue mto mais fácil q eu
11:39 MkGuh: nem sei como
11:39 MkGuh: af
11:39 MkGuh: falando nele...
11:39 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
11:39 Lumael: eu to devendo m4m faz 3 semanas
11:39 Lumael: mas eu vou moddar seu mapa
11:39 Lumael: agora
11:40 Lumael: byby incarnate
11:40 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
11:40 MkGuh: ain gente
11:40 MkGuh: vc
11:40 MkGuh: tá dando mta prioridade pra mim
11:40 MkGuh: acho q os cara do m4m
11:40 MkGuh: nem lembra mais do seu mod
11:40 MkGuh: SKÇAJDKÇSAJD
11:40 Lumael: espero o.o
11:40 Lumael: eu nem li o mod do cara mesmo
11:40 Lumael: eu só ignorei
11:41 Lumael: finalmente vou rankear clarity
11:41 Lumael: a mako é responsavel
11:41 MkGuh: ela tá moddando?
11:41 Lumael: coisa q eu n so
11:41 Lumael: nao
11:41 Lumael: ela so modda final de semana
11:41 MkGuh: eu acho q vou pedir mod pra ela tb
11:41 Lumael: mas o hoen pediu pra ela
11:41 Lumael: e ela moddou
11:41 Lumael: na hora q falou q ia
11:42 Lumael: eu fiz m4m com ela
11:42 MkGuh: qnd ela acabar o seu
11:42 MkGuh: vc vai moddar meu mapa runaway? ;D
11:43 *Lumael is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/872828 Groove Coverage - Runaway (Nightcore Mix) [MkGuh & Lumael's Escape]]
11:43 Lumael: 02:02:347 -
11:43 Lumael: tentei um estilo
11:43 Lumael: aloka
11:43 Lumael: aqui
11:43 Lumael: cheio de overlap
11:44 Lumael: MIGO
11:44 *Lumael is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/861443 Groove Coverage - Runaway (Nightcore Mix) [Easy]]
11:44 Lumael: 00:11:999 (1) -
11:44 Lumael: ASSIM
11:44 Lumael: VOCE
11:44 Lumael: ME MATA
11:44 Lumael: E NAO É PQ EU TE PEGO
11:48 Lumael: puta
11:48 Lumael: se vc
11:48 Lumael: continuar
11:48 Lumael: me ignoprando
11:48 Lumael: nao vou modar
11:48 Lumael: nada
11:48 Lumael: </3
11:48 MkGuh: OI
11:48 MkGuh: OIIIIIII
11:48 MkGuh: CALMA
11:48 MkGuh: EU TE AMO
11:48 MkGuh: ME COME
11:48 MkGuh: EU TO
11:48 MkGuh: AIN
11:49 Lumael: 00:11:999 (1) - isso ta mt tosco mas nao é um problema
11:49 Lumael: mas se vc me ama
11:49 Lumael: vc mudaria
11:49 Lumael: mentira n precisa kk
11:50 Lumael: 00:20:098 (1) - slider com reverse no red tick nao pega bem aqui
11:50 Lumael: porque o vocal no red tick é muito fraco
11:50 MkGuh: ain
11:50 MkGuh: pera
11:50 MkGuh: vou ver
11:51 MkGuh: MUNIQUE
11:51 Lumael: http://puu.sh/mo3l9/9c21299515.jpg
11:51 Lumael: assim fica melhor
11:51 MkGuh: SE VC ME AMA
11:51 MkGuh: SAI FORA
11:51 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
11:51 MkGuh: EU FIZ ISSO PENSANDO EM VC
11:51 MkGuh: N VOU MUDAR NAO
11:51 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
11:51 Lumael: 00:26:847 (3) - same
11:51 Lumael: mas aqui coloca 1/1 co mreverse
11:51 Lumael: e um circulo
11:52 Lumael: 00:33:259 (2,4) - missing clap
11:52 Lumael: deixa
11:52 Lumael: é intencional
11:53 Lumael: 00:49:120 (2,4) - talvez nao seja um problema muito grande mas é muito estranho deixar o downbeat unclickable
11:53 Lumael: vc colocou o slider terminando no tick alto
11:53 Lumael: sei la, nao deu a força que o beat precisa
11:54 Lumael: 01:30:289 (3) - mesma coisa do slider no red tick
11:54 Lumael: 01:32:989 (2) - memsa coisa e aqui é o pior de todos
11:54 Lumael: coloca 1/1 slider com reverse + circle
11:54 MkGuh: mano
11:54 MkGuh: vsf
11:54 MkGuh: aquela sugestao
11:54 MkGuh: do red tick
11:54 MkGuh: na porra
11:54 MkGuh: dps do spin
11:54 MkGuh: fodeu todas as outras patterns
11:54 MkGuh: agr n consgio ajeitar
11:54 MkGuh: e vc ai
11:54 MkGuh: fica me enxendo com mais coisa
11:55 MkGuh: ao inves de fazer mdo no forum
11:55 MkGuh: pra ficar mais facil
11:55 MkGuh: seu feio </³
11:55 Lumael: mas no forum tem que ser formal
11:55 Lumael: pq eu n gosto de post feio
11:55 Lumael: sou perfeccionista
11:55 Lumael: lembra?
11:55 MkGuh: eu sei q vc n me ama
11:55 MkGuh: e só quer me foder
11:55 MkGuh: por isso
11:55 MkGuh: </333333333
11:55 Lumael: só quero te foder
11:55 Lumael: sei
11:56 Lumael: se te consola
11:56 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
11:56 Lumael: o resto ta bom
11:56 MkGuh: EU VO FAZE ISOS MEMSO
11:56 MkGuh: http://puu.sh/mo3AF/d57520beac.jpg
11:56 MkGuh: E NGM VAI ME IMPEDIR
11:57 MkGuh: PQ SOU VIDA LOKA
11:59 MkGuh: eu vou manter
11:59 MkGuh: o ultimo problema
11:59 MkGuh: q vc citou
11:59 MkGuh: do slider no redtick
11:59 MkGuh: :3
12:00 Lumael: admirável
12:00 Lumael: vai com fé
12:00 Lumael: aplausos
12:00 Lumael: ninguém liga querida
12:09 Lumael: to parecendo a byby né
12:09 Lumael: fiz oeasy
12:09 Lumael: e to com preguiça
12:09 Lumael: de ir pro resto
12:09 MkGuh: N PRECIS
12:09 MkGuh: só da savelog
12:09 MkGuh: e posta esse log inteiro lá mesmo
12:10 MkGuh: e eu te dou kudosu
12:10 MkGuh: o log vai ser grande
12:10 MkGuh: finge q a gente
12:10 MkGuh: moddou tudo
12:10 MkGuh: ajdkçsajdsa
12:10 Lumael: cara eu caguei se o log é grande ou n
12:10 Lumael: se eu pedisse pra mudar uma coisa so
12:10 Lumael: eu queria meu kudo
12:10 Lumael: do mesmo jeito
12:10 Lumael: <3
12:10 MkGuh: mas se for pequeno vai parecer q a gente n fez nada
12:10 MkGuh: q
12:10 MkGuh: tá
12:10 MkGuh: posta lá, delicioso
12:12 *Lumael is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/861444 Groove Coverage - Runaway (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
12:12 Lumael: 01:02:618 (5) -
12:12 Lumael: migo
12:12 Lumael: isso nao dá
12:12 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKK
12:12 MkGuh: OQ
12:12 MkGuh: SALDSAD
12:12 Lumael: qat adora
12:13 Lumael: 01:18:141 (3) -
12:13 Lumael: tbm
12:13 MkGuh: ah sim
12:13 MkGuh: eu imaginei
12:13 MkGuh: q n ia dar certo
12:13 MkGuh: me ajuda
12:13 MkGuh: com melhores sugestoes entao puta
12:13 MkGuh: pq eu n sei
12:13 Lumael: 2 sliders 1/²
12:13 Lumael: 01:57:285 (2) - socorro jesus credeuspai
12:13 Lumael: que slider feio
12:14 MkGuh: KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
12:15 Lumael: me salva
12:15 Lumael: olha adiferença
12:15 Lumael: do easy/normal
12:15 Lumael: pro light hard
12:16 MkGuh: qual o problema?
12:16 Lumael: o ligher hard é perfeito só isso
12:16 MkGuh: como assim?
12:16 MkGuh: n entendi nada
12:16 MkGuh: KÇSAJDKÇSAJDSAD
12:20 MkGuh: ./savelog
12:20 MkGuh: gogogogo
Topic Starter
MkGuh
KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK BUNDA ADOREI <3
Deppyforce
xd

Easy


00:42:792 - maybe map this note theres like a clap there

00:45:407 (4) - place it like x370 y350 flows better imo

01:00:256 (2,3) - blanket

01:04:980 (4) - blanket lol

01:13:754 (2,1) - blanket dude

01:49:355 - 01:49:524 - 01:49:692 - affects nothing in this diff lol remove them

02:21:920 (2,1) - blanket

Normal


00:22:123 (5) - start at 00:21:954 to make it follows vocals zzxzx

01:03:630 (2) - imo this should be split to 1 circle and 1x 1/1 slider

01:18:141 (3) - split to smth like 1/1 slider and 2 circles fits better imo

Gero's Hard


00:20:098 (1) - ctrl+g better flow

01:44:462 (1,2,3) - imo this pattern could be too hard to read for a hard diff maybe change

hi
Leniwy Marcel
HI \:D/


IT'S ONLY MY OPINION


So if you not agree with my way of thinking tell me about it in-game PM and I'll try to understand yours way and help ya brah ;)


MkGuh & Lumael's Escape
00:39:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- maybe try to make a 2 symmetrical triangle jumps it's funny to play, also 1st note can be after this slider 00:38:827(4) and the last one before this 00:40:346(1) .
^---- I mean something like that.

01:35:520 (4)- Don't know what think about this circle on slider xD.

01:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1)- Maybe try to change spacing of the second part of the stream ? If u grab a stream to x:400 y:20, it should go nice to this slider 01:59:479(2) .
It's really nice mapped and I really enjoyed this map good luck in getting ranked :D
Silky
my english is not good 。゚・(>_<)・゚。

Genaral
  1. Inconsistency in combo colors


Easy
  1. 00:11:999 (1) - why do you used 4/1...? this long slider is not making sense imo, can you make rhythm like 00:14:699 (1,2) - ?
  2. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish? I heard cymbal sound here
  3. 01:32:989 (2) - reverse point is not following anything, you should change to other rhythm.
    I think change to 1/1 slider*2 is better.
  4. 01:55:260 (1) - add finish (also change sampleset)


Normal
  1. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish
  2. 00:29:884 (2) - umm... can you change to 1/1 rhythm? this slider is skipping vocal, idk why you skipped vocal sound lol
  3. 01:03:630 (2) - ^ I'd say almost same thing
  4. 01:13:416 (2) - change to 1/2 slider*2 or something like that pls, it's not suitable for normal at all, bad readability imo.


Light Hard
  1. why light lol I think AR7 is better cuz Normal diff is AR5
  2. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish
  3. 00:33:428 (4) - circle+1/2 slider? you skipped vocal sound only here at this part, it make unnaturally for me
  4. 01:09:198 (3) - stack on 01:09:030 (2) - ? here is 2-2-2-2 sound imo
  5. 01:59:310 (1) - add finish instead of whistle on slider's head?
  6. 02:13:314 (3) - same as 01:09:198 (3) -


Insane
  1. 00:33:428 (2) - same as light hard, change to like this?
  2. 00:39:839 (4) - add NC
  3. 00:44:142 (1) - you can add object in 00:44:226 - ,00:44:395 - I think move spinner's head 00:44:479 - is better
  4. 00:49:120 (3) - stack
  5. 00:51:144 (1,2,1,2) - can you make straight line?
    312,131,51144,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    300,144,51482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,158,51819,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    214,237,51988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    74,110,52157,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,133,52325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    140,315,52494,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:02:618 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow
  7. 01:13:923 (2) - stack
  8. 01:15:441 (1,2) - Ctrl+G both for better flow
  9. 01:17:803 (4) - add NC?
  10. 01:19:153 (1,2) - like that?
    300,18,79153,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    242,109,79322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  11. stack 01:30:289 (1,2) - and unstack 01:30:627 (3,4) - ? easy to tap and fit with sound imo
  12. 02:11:796 (2) - 131/219?
  13. 02:23:101 (2,3,4) - It's just nazi suggestion, can you change rhythm like 01:59:479 (2,3,4,5) - ?


GL!
Lumael
I'm sorry but I will keep my collab parts as they're, thank you anyway :3
Topic Starter
MkGuh
Fixed somethings from previous mod, thanks guys ♥

Updated!
Sjelen
Your offset: 1185, there is only one red line (yeah you can delete second)

Insane
00:36:618 (2,3,4) - blanket
00:37:632 (1) - why not stack with 00:36:620 (2) -
01:08:170 (6,7,8) - maybe some jumps here
Zectro
heyo

[General]
No combo colors yet in most diffs?

[Easy]
  1. Take a look at your blankets, so many of them are imperfect and really catch the eye while playing
  2. Other than that all the rythms and patterns seem okay


[Normal]
  1. 00:37:646 (1) - Point this better at 00:38:321 (2) - , point 00:38:996 (4) - better at 00:38:658 (3,5) - etc
  2. @ 00:44:395 - this works better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4321114
  3. 01:22:190 (1,2,3,4) - Current pattern doesn't work that well imo, try a slider from 01:22:865 - to 01:23:203 - , since you barely have slider to 2 2/4 notes on other places, and it doesn't fit that well there in general anyway
  4. 01:52:561 (1,2) - Sliders look ugly imo.


[Light Hard]

  • No problems found! Great diff.


[Gero's Hard]

  • Also an amazing diff. No problems found!


[MkGuh & Lumael's Escape]
  1. There's a lot of nc spam in this diff, but I guess you chose to do so for a reason, so whatever
  2. 01:50:199 (1,2,3) - You are following a certain sound here and decided to use this spacing, okay, but shouldn't you do that again then at 01:52:561 (1,2,3,4) - or something for consistency? it seems random atm, since the sound that it follows repeats in various places and you only used it in one.
  3. 01:56:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are weird and confusing, the easiest way to fix this is by NCing 01:57:285 (5) -
  4. I would recommend making the spacing between 01:59:310 (1) - and 01:59:479 (2,3,4,5) - bigger for clarity.
  5. 02:06:734 (1,2,3,4) - Perfect square please.


Funny to see a nightcore song here again, gl!
HappyRocket88

MkGuh wrote:

Fixed somethings from previous mod, thanks guys ♥
Fixed something? What's something? ;w; Please reply to the modders properly as well as they took the time to write and mod your map.
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Deppyforce wrote:

xd

Easy


00:42:792 - maybe map this note theres like a clap there Right.

00:45:407 (4) - place it like x370 y350 flows better imo Sure.

01:00:256 (2,3) - blanket meh

01:04:980 (4) - blanket lol ^

01:13:754 (2,1) - blanket dude ^^^^^^^^^

01:49:355 - 01:49:524 - 01:49:692 - affects nothing in this diff lol remove them oki

02:21:920 (2,1) - blanket

Normal


00:22:123 (5) - start at 00:21:954 to make it follows vocals zzxzx Nu

01:03:630 (2) - imo this should be split to 1 circle and 1x 1/1 slider I want to emphasize claps.

01:18:141 (3) - split to smth like 1/1 slider and 2 circles fits better imo ok

hi

Etrece wrote:

HI \:D/


IT'S ONLY MY OPINION


So if you not agree with my way of thinking tell me about it in-game PM and I'll try to understand yours way and help ya brah ;)


MkGuh & Lumael's Escape
00:39:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- maybe try to make a 2 symmetrical triangle jumps it's funny to play, also 1st note can be after this slider 00:38:827(4) and the last one before this 00:40:346(1) . Nah...
^---- I mean something like that.

01:35:520 (4)- Don't know what think about this circle on slider xD.

01:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1)- Maybe try to change spacing of the second part of the stream ? If u grab a stream to x:400 y:20, it should go nice to this slider 01:59:479(2) . nu o3o
It's really nice mapped and I really enjoyed this map good luck in getting ranked :D

fuyuyu- wrote:

my english is not good 。゚・(>_<)・゚。

Genaral
  1. Inconsistency in combo colors yey xd


Easy
  1. 00:11:999 (1) - why do you used 4/1...? this long slider is not making sense imo, can you make rhythm like 00:14:699 (1,2) - ? sure
  2. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish? I heard cymbal sound here o3o
  3. 01:32:989 (2) - reverse point is not following anything, you should change to other rhythm.
    I think change to 1/1 slider*2 is better. oki
  4. 01:55:260 (1) - add finish (also change sampleset) a


Normal
  1. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish
  2. 00:29:884 (2) - umm... can you change to 1/1 rhythm? this slider is skipping vocal, idk why you skipped vocal sound lol
  3. 01:03:630 (2) - ^ I'd say almost same thing
  4. 01:13:416 (2) - change to 1/2 slider*2 or something like that pls, it's not suitable for normal at all, bad readability imo.


Light Hard
  1. why light lol I think AR7 is better cuz Normal diff is AR5 a
  2. 00:22:798 (1) - add finish a
  3. 00:33:428 (4) - circle+1/2 slider? you skipped vocal sound only here at this part, it make unnaturally for me nu
  4. 01:09:198 (3) - stack on 01:09:030 (2) - ? here is 2-2-2-2 sound imo !
  5. 01:59:310 (1) - add finish instead of whistle on slider's head? a
  6. 02:13:314 (3) - same as 01:09:198 (3) a -


Insane
  1. 00:33:428 (2) - same as light hard, change to like this?
  2. 00:39:839 (4) - add NC aaaaaaa
  3. 00:44:142 (1) - you can add object in 00:44:226 - ,00:44:395 - I think move spinner's head 00:44:479 - is better oki
  4. 00:49:120 (3) - stack
  5. 00:51:144 (1,2,1,2) - can you make straight line?
    312,131,51144,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    300,144,51482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    288,158,51819,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    214,237,51988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    74,110,52157,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,133,52325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    140,315,52494,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:02:618 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow oki
  7. 01:13:923 (2) - stack
  8. 01:15:441 (1,2) - Ctrl+G both for better flow
  9. 01:17:803 (4) - add NC?
  10. 01:19:153 (1,2) - like that?
    300,18,79153,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    242,109,79322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  11. stack 01:30:289 (1,2) - and unstack 01:30:627 (3,4) - ? easy to tap and fit with sound imo nuuu
  12. 02:11:796 (2) - 131/219?
  13. 02:23:101 (2,3,4) - It's just nazi suggestion, can you change rhythm like 01:59:479 (2,3,4,5) -
    yeah


GL!
KittyAdventure
Where is storyboard? ;w;

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MkGuh

KittyAdventure wrote:

Where is storyboard? ;w;

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I'd like to know too XDDDDDDDDDDDD
Lumael
Took another look at the last mod and yet no changes to my parts :3
Rizen
Hello o/

General
  1. add Lumael to tags
Easy
  1. 00:18:073 (2) - improve blanket please >.>
  2. 00:26:847 (3) - NC?
  3. 00:32:247 (1) - move to x:315 y:317 and rotate 20degrees across selection centre CW? that way the slider head will be horizontally aligned with the previous slider tail
  4. a quick word on NC, at the beginning of the song, you NC'd once per 2 measures. But later on at 00:57:893 (1) - onwards, the NC patterning get very inconsistent...
  5. 01:12:742 (1) - annoying misblanket ;w;
  6. 01:28:264 (4) - ^
  7. 01:49:861 (1) - personally, I think this looks hideous ;_; maybe something like this?
  8. 02:02:685 (2,1,2) - holy mother of blankets ;A;
  9. nothing really "wrong" with it
Normal
  1. 00:29:547 (1,2) - maybe a 1/1 slider then 2 circles instead? It's very underwhelming compared to the rhythms before and after this section which emphasize the vocals well
  2. 00:58:906 (2) - blanket this plz ;;
  3. 01:01:268 (2,3,4) - maybe this? image
  4. 01:53:742 (3) - I would of went with a circle then the long slider, because of heavy drum
  5. 01:57:285 (2) - consider this rhythm? image
  6. 02:06:059 (1) - 1/1 repeat slider? It will follow the whatever that instrument name is better
  7. 02:08:084 (2,5) - These sliders, maybe a 1/1 slider then two circles will be better
  8. My main concern with this diff is that it is very unpolished; misblankets everywhere and overall lack of attention. Such as 01:14:091 (1,2) - which looks like you were trying to vertically align,
Light Hard
  1. 00:20:773 (3) - imo, this slider looks out of place because of the horizontal part of it... maybe something like this? It will follow the pattern a symmetrical pattern as seen at 00:14:699 (1,2,3) - image
  2. 00:27:185 (2) - undermapped the vocals :( try this? image
  3. 01:18:141 (3) - blanket!!!
  4. 01:27:590 (1) - move this slider a little bit more to the right? It should improve flow image
  5. 01:59:310 (1) - I'm sure you can think of a better shape than this curve :<

I don't feel comfortable modding the other two diffs because of reasons... but I did have a quick look through it and it looks ok
riffy
Greetings, as requested.

[General]
  1. The intro sounds like it's glitching at 00:11:999 - 00:14:699. Try to find a better mp3 or see if it is intended to be like this by the original remixer.
  2. Try to resize and optimize your BG according to modern 16:9 display format? Get 1366x768 version here.
  3. That'd be awesome to have more tags like Techno and probably more things that comes to your mind and are related to the song. A bit of googling might help, too!
    Note: and is it's already been mentioned, Lumael should be in the tags, too.


[Easy]
  1. 00:27:860 (4,6) - not really happy with the way these stacks work, as they slightly reduce the amount of time to read the circle hidden under the previous one.
    Note: 00:31:909 (4,2) - same happens here.
  2. 00:44:395 (3,4) - this should be one slider, the vocals are going really strong with the "hide" thing, so a 3/1 slider will fit just right.
  3. 00:57:893 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - in this part your combouing gets irregular and from regular every-second-measure you shift to something that feels random to me. Also, there are quite a few downbeats you left unclickable. It is no big deal at this part, but I'd still try to emphasize them. For example, 01:07:005 (3,1) - here a simple Ctrl+G and a couple of spacing fixes could make it feel better.
  4. 01:24:890 (1) - rythmically and in terms of vocals this shouldn't have a new combo.
  5. 01:24:890 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - why does it feel copy-pasted? I'd recommend to get something different here, as the song isn't long and repeating the same patterns in different part of it doesn't feel right to me.

    Overall, I am not really happy with your comboing, everrything else is alright.


[Normal]
  1. This could benefiit from Circle Size 3,5. Give it a try and see if you like the way spread balance improves.
  2. 00:12:674 (2) - if you want this to follow vocals properly, make it end at 00:13:012 - where the vocals end. 00:13:180 - the beat here will need a separate circle.
    Note: 00:15:374 (2) - 00:19:423 (2) - same happens here. There is a clear stop in the white tick, you can't ignore it.
  3. 01:03:630 (2) - the music doesn't change from it's regular 1/1 rhythm. Therrefore, 2/1 slider here feels unnatural and forced. Consider splitting it into something smaller/shorter?
  4. 01:08:186 (5) - it's better to use either a single circle on the white tick or replace the slider with two circles. So, every beat is emphasized according to its strength.
  5. 01:24:215 (3) - this is extended for no musical reason, there is a clear and way too loud beat that just can't be mapped with a slidertick at 01:24:553 - so, please, end the slider here.
    Note: 01:57:285 (2) - same.
  6. 02:12:471 (6) - replace this one with two circles? There is a really loud and obvious downbeat at 02:12:808 - that has to be made a clickable circle.

    Apart from a few rhythmical complaints I am not happy with, I'd like to bring up the fact that your comboing here is also irregular andseems to be controversing itself.


[Light Hard]
  1. The difficulty is in heavy need of Slider tick Rate 2. Sliders like 00:38:321 (3,4) - will not work unless you try to stress the background beat. Also, STR2 will correlate with the rhythm choice you represent here.
  2. 01:18:141 (3,1) - swap the NC here, according to the music and your pattern it has to be swapped here.
  3. 01:21:515 (2) - the slider doesn't really sync with the vocals and feels forced here. Please end it 1/2 earlier as the vocals suggest you. 01:22:022 - this has to be a separate circle.
    Note: same applies to the rest of 3/2 sliders in this part.
  4. 01:55:260 (1,2) - the shape doesn't suggest players that there are two repeats and the jump between these sliders makes it even more confusing. Let's try something like this?

    I liked the difficulty. Apart from a few 3/2 sliders it was really nice!


[Gero's Hard]
  1. The jumps in the intro feel really overdone. The song isn't asking for anything agressive at this part, so I'd highly advice you to tone down the spacing here.
  2. 00:47:432 (1) - the slider has an unnatural slowdown here and feels glitchy, pleasy simplify the shape of it.
  3. 01:44:462 (1,2,3) - this and 01:49:861 (1,2,3) - this are almost identical in terms of vocals, therefore, I assume that it'd be better to have thme mapped in a similar way.

    Neat.


[MkGuh & Lumael's Escape]
  1. 00:30:897 (1,2,1,2) - personally, I believe that in the hardest diff you don't have to emphasise jumps with new combos. Players of the target skill range are capable of reading it, anyway.
  2. 01:30:627 (3,4) - the sudden stack here feels flow-breaking and doesn't correspond with the intense nature of vocals.
  3. 01:51:717 (2,3) - without any musical reason this jump is misleading players and looks a lot like 1/1 pattern. Reduce the DS or re-arrange this pattern?
  4. 01:56:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the DS of this patterns feels random. Make it gradually increasing or decreasing or keep the DS consistent. This way it'd be more reasonable and understandable to the player.

    I insist on reducing the number of NCS as they feel overused and boost HP to the point when HP Drain hardly works as it is intended to. Apart from that it was fine.


Overall, the set might need a few more mods as comboing and somerhythmical issues are present.

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Best of luck!
Lumael

Bakari wrote:

[MkGuh & Lumael's Escape]
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[*]00:30:897 (1,2,1,2) - personally, I believe that in the hardest diff you don't have to emphasise jumps with new combos. Players of the target skill range are capable of reading it, anyway. I know it's not necessary but it just looks ugly without the NC, and I'm pretty sure this is not a major issue.
#LetsUseMoreComboColorsToMakeMapsPrettierToBreakThatStupidFollowCircleLineThatLooksUgly!

Thank you Bakari!
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