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Kumakuma - Hallucination

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Konei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 22. Februar 2016 at 21:46:44

Artist: Kumakuma
Title: Hallucination
Source: 古書店街の橋姫
Tags: irreversible Koshotengai no Hashihime yaoi bl boys love adelta vn visual novel 灰色logic 六歌
BPM: 164
Filesize: 10082kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,5 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (2,96 stars, 218 notes)
  3. Insane (3,59 stars, 257 notes)
  4. Irreversible's Hyper (3,48 stars, 210 notes)
  5. Normal (1,88 stars, 132 notes)
Download: Kumakuma - Hallucination
Download: Kumakuma - Hallucination (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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koshotengai #1
Irreversible
GO
Bara-
Hi

[General]
ENH: • Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes):
01:06:573 {66573} ms
Oh, are you sure about the meta-data?
くまくまっ romanizes is kumakumatsu
I'm not good with Japanese, currently learning it, but っ is tsu, and I don't see it in the romanized artist

Same for the title
ハルシネヰション romanizes as Harushinewishon (Not sure though, I entered this one in Google translate to romanize)
And for Japanese romanizations, you need to romanize it, not translate it. (Gamu once told me)

know that I'm not good with metadata, so consider asking a Japanese QAT
And I also searched, but couldn't even find this song O.o

[Easy]
00:16:085 (4,5) - Not really a fan of this rhythm. Try reversing (4) and add a circle at the downbeat for more emphasis
00:45:354 (3) - 2 circles are better, as they give more emphasis
01:22:304 (4) - Similar issue here, but it feels better here. Consider changing, but it's not neccesary

[Normal]
00:36:939 (2,3,4) - Feels quite hard, try this, as it's less forced

[Hard]
Slidertickrate 1, the 2/3 sliders (who appear quite often) become really weird otherwise
01:29:438 (2) - Remove 1 reverse, and add a circle, for more emphasis on the end

[Insane]
Slidertickrate 1, the 2/3 sliders (who appear quite often) become really weird otherwise
00:07:671 (2,3) - This snapping feels really weird, but I don't know what you followed here, at least add a note at the beat

Diffs itself are good
Call me after 4+ mods and a confirmation for the meta-data (to avoid speedrank drama)
Sonnyc
Enjoy random

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:915 (1) - 00:07:305 (1) - Consider removing NC since the current combo feels pretty short.
  2. 00:22:671 (1,2,3) - I smell a spacing error.
[Insane]
  1. Think once more for your slider tick 2 decision. You are using several 1/3 sliders, and having a tick 2 didn't interacted with such rhythms. Same applies for Hard.
  2. 00:33:159 (2,3) - 00:34:256 (2,1) - These two patterns of 1/3 placement seems pretty close than other patterns.
  3. 01:17:182 (1,2) - I think these 1/4 sliders can have one more reverse for a better playability? Not sure for this though.
Topic Starter
Konei

Baraatje123 wrote:

Hi

[General]
ENH: • Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes):
01:06:573 {66573} ms yeah I know, not sure if removing them is necesarry but I'll see.
Oh, are you sure about the meta-data?
くまくまっ romanizes is kumakumatsu
I'm not good with Japanese, currently learning it, but っ is tsu, and I don't see it in the romanized artist っ is used as a kind of enduring thingy, so his name is just Kumakuma.

Same for the title
ハルシネヰション romanizes as Harushinewishon (Not sure though, I entered this one in Google translate to romanize)
And for Japanese romanizations, you need to romanize it, not translate it. (Gamu once told me) Yeah, I think he meant like not translating the japanese title into English, but Hallucination is the correct romanization as Harushinewishon doesn't really form a proper title. KSHR confirmed the romanization by the way.

know that I'm not good with metadata, so consider asking a Japanese QAT
And I also searched, but couldn't even find this song O.o

[Easy]
00:16:085 (4,5) - Not really a fan of this rhythm. Try reversing (4) and add a circle at the downbeat for more emphasis Sure done.
00:45:354 (3) - 2 circles are better, as they give more emphasis Yeah done.
01:22:304 (4) - Similar issue here, but it feels better here. Consider changing, but it's not neccesary I think this one is fine.

[Normal]
00:36:939 (2,3,4) - Feels quite hard, try this, as it's less forced Sure, nice.

[Hard]
Slidertickrate 1, the 2/3 sliders (who appear quite often) become really weird otherwise Uhm, they don't appear weird in game or what do you mean?
01:29:438 (2) - Remove 1 reverse, and add a circle, for more emphasis on the end Sure.

[Insane]
Slidertickrate 1, the 2/3 sliders (who appear quite often) become really weird otherwise ^
00:07:671 (2,3) - This snapping feels really weird, but I don't know what you followed here, at least add a note at the beat Uh yeah, changed.

Diffs itself are good
Call me after 4+ mods and a confirmation for the meta-data (to avoid speedrank drama)
Thanks for the mod!

Sonnyc wrote:

Enjoy random

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:915 (1) - 00:07:305 (1) - Consider removing NC since the current combo feels pretty short. Good, done.
  2. 00:22:671 (1,2,3) - I smell a spacing error. Huh, don't really get why? I rearranged it though.
[Insane]
  1. Think once more for your slider tick 2 decision. You are using several 1/3 sliders, and having a tick 2 didn't interacted with such rhythms. Same applies for Hard. Hm, they don't seem weird in game and I actually prefer it due to the SV changes, I will wait for more opinions.
  2. 00:33:159 (2,3) - 00:34:256 (2,1) - These two patterns of 1/3 placement seems pretty close than other patterns. Increased spacing a bit.
  3. 01:17:182 (1,2) - I think these 1/4 sliders can have one more reverse for a better playability? Not sure for this though. I find current one to be good and a whole stream would seem too much.
Thanks for the mod I really appreciate it!
Prismetical
Hello! :3 from your M4M queue

Due to this being a M4M I am going to be extra critic and the mod will be more complex so I can give you a certain quality that you can represent in my mod then. ^^

Easy
00:00:720 (1) - move this on the same place as 00:02:915 (3) - ? not sure, I think you did that on purpose
00:25:963 (4) - don't want to follow the voice?
00:40:232 (1,2,3) - maybe follow this with sliders
00:50:841 - circle
00:59:622 - circle
01:06:573 (1) - move circle, coordinates:

01:27:060 (1) - make a S out of this slider

Normal
00:05:841 (2) - rotate a bit so it looks better according to (3)
00:07:671 (2) - same
00:27:793 (2) - need a clickable object there, replace with a circle followed by a slider
00:32:549 (2) - make that looking better with the slider before, make it edgy aswell so it looks matching to the other
00:36:939 (2,3,4) - doesn't match for me
00:46:451 - circle
00:50:841 - circle
00:56:695 (2,6) - stack with slider ending
00:59:622 - circle
01:03:280 (3) - I would remove and replace it with 3 circles

Hard
00:00:720 (1,3) - either stack or don't even let them touch each other, doesn't look good in my eyes 8-)
00:02:915 (1,3) - ^
00:09:012 (2,3) - stack? idk what to do with this... sounds weird, plays weird
00:10:110 (2,3) - ^
00:12:305 (2,3) - ^
00:17:183 (4) - move it down a bit, make the same as you did with 00:16:451 (2,3) - design-wise, put the one thing deeper as the other
00:25:232 (2,3,4) - looks weird, not easy to read because it is unexpected... meh.
00:28:524 (2,1) - stack properly
00:53:402 (1,2,3) - hate it, make a triangle or something, use the playfield
01:10:963 (1,2,3) - could be synced better
01:29:438 (2) - make two out of them
- missing the blanket style here a bit

Good luck! :3
ErunamoJAZZ
Hi

[Insane]
00:17:183 (1,2) - Feels a bit strange, imo. I want to suggest Ctrl+G in 00:17:183 (1) - , and rote to bottom in 00:17:793 (2) - http://puu.sh/maREG/ddc7045e23.jpg
00:26:573 (2) - move a bit to right?, http://puu.sh/maRUD/1ec46f8ccf.jpg (consistency with other patterns)
00:45:354 (3) - maybe? http://puu.sh/maS26/f3a28988f2.jpg
01:01:817 (3) - Ctrl+G?
01:08:768 (1) - 01:11:694 (4) - I dont understand what are you following here :P

[hard]
00:45:354 (3) - same like insane.. maybe... this is beacus lyrics (..keRubu ..)

[easy]
00:13:524 (6,1) - nubs will miss clicking over (1) before (6).



mehh, very perfect... high diff will be problematic bc strange rhythms, but i like your style so much owo
Good Luck!!

PD: if you want m4m, pls, focus in doxa's diff -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/375264
Topic Starter
Konei

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi

[Insane]
00:17:183 (1,2) - Feels a bit strange, imo. I want to suggest Ctrl+G in 00:17:183 (1) - , and rote to bottom in 00:17:793 (2) - nice done! http://puu.sh/maREG/ddc7045e23.jpg
00:26:573 (2) - move a bit to right?, http://puu.sh/maRUD/1ec46f8ccf.jpg (consistency with other patterns) Nah I want this to have less movement.
00:45:354 (3) - maybe? http://puu.sh/maS26/f3a28988f2.jpg I don't really hear too much of a sound here.
01:01:817 (3) - Ctrl+G? No, this is intended to represent the vocal.
01:08:768 (1) - 01:11:694 (4) - I dont understand what are you following here :P Uhm, the sync kinda? D:

[hard]
00:45:354 (3) - same like insane.. maybe... this is beacus lyrics (..keRubu ..) There's no bu there o.o

[easy]
00:13:524 (6,1) - nubs will miss clicking over (1) before (6). Good point changed!



mehh, very perfect... high diff will be problematic bc strange rhythms, but i like your style so much owo
Good Luck!!

PD: if you want m4m, pls, focus in doxa's diff -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/375264
Thanks a lot!

@Prismetical: Didn't change the stacks as they are intended to be "poorly" like, not completely stacked. Applied the placement suggestions in Easy and denied the one in Normal due to it's currently good playability, thanks for modding!
Blizs

~~Nyahoi!!~~


M4M :3
my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/351537

General

  1. hitsound soft-hitfinish.wav have 321ms silence after hitsound. I've cut it if you want to use it ;) - soft-hitfinish.rar
  2. 01:06:573 - A green line may be placed on a red line just for change the slider speed (Ranking Criteria General Rules). I see a different volume beetwen the red line and the red line that may unrankable. You can reduce the red line volume to 50% or increase the green line volume to 60%. (And you can remove the green line on Easy, Normal, Hard since it didn't give a different speed)

EasY

  1. unused green lines on 00:17:793 - , 00:46:451 -
  2. 00:54:134 (4,5) - I think the downbeat on 00:54:500 - really deserve a click since it have a big effect too. how about ctrl+g on 00:54:134 (4,5) - ?
  3. cool~

NormaL

  1. unused green line on 00:46:451 -
  2. 00:36:939 (2,3) - I didn't hear anything special on their tail that just makes things more harder and not really recommended for Normal diff. I suggest to use a 1 beat slider on 00:36:939 - . That way looks more clear for Normal diff
  3. 01:08:036 (4,5) - and 01:21:938 (2) - I know it's intentional, but still it feels kinda hard to realize 3/4 slider in Normal diff. And I think it's easier to follow the drum rather than the piano in Normal diff because drum give a consistent pattern that really fit for new players. I suggest to change 01:08:036 (4,5,1) - 's pattern to similar with 01:06:573 (1,2,3) - and change 01:21:938 (2) - to 1/2 instead. I think that way will make it easier to catch.

HarD

  1. 01:12:243 (5) - I don't really sure if put a click here is a good idea. A big effect on 01:12:060 (4) - with that combination of cymbal and snare feels really need at least one beat until the next click. And I think the instrument on 01:12:243 - doesn't really have a big effect. How about use 01:10:963 (1,2) - 's pattern on 01:11:694 (3,4,5) - instead ?
  2. 01:29:438 (2,3) - overlap them ? to prove that they was snapped 1/4.

InsanE

  1. 01:01:451 (2,3) - I've seen EruJAZZ' mod earlier and I think you can more consider about this. I understand the high spacing is for the vocal, but still it feels too high. How about you ctrl+g on 01:01:085 (1) - and 01:01:573 (3) - ? http://puu.sh/mbhaq/a3c763882b.jpg . with that way, we can avoid the crazy jump and keep the vocal effect on it.

nothing much I can say here ;w;. it mapped very well
that's all from me and nice song anyway. I like how it changed from waltz to common beat <3
Good Luck
Irreversible
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kumakumatsu Harushinewishon.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1600
PreviewTime: 46334
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Hallucination
TitleUnicode:ハルシネヰション
Artist:Kumakuma
ArtistUnicode:くまくまっ
Creator:Konei
Version:Irreversible's Hyper
Source:古書店街の橋姫
Tags:Koshotengai no Hashihime yaoi bl boys love adelta vn visual novel 灰色logic 六歌
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:395854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:8
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Could I suggest you to add a stream 01:12:975 (2,3,1) - ? I'm sure like this you could get more star rating than I do.
Topic Starter
Konei
@Blizs Pretty much did everything thanks for the helpful mod!

@Irrrrr added your difficulty
Gero
Irre asked me for mod so here I am.

Irreversible's Hyper

At the first place I really want to know for which reason you're using 3.4 as Circle Size? don't you think that's kinda inconsistent with the others diffs? and with the other settings? however I'd like to suggest increase it to 4 or 3.9 to fix it since it's quite weird as is it right now, if you ask me.

  1. 00:30:354 (1,1) - This kind of pattern is not bad at all, but the problem is that the combo is is quite weird at here, I really understand that you used them on the speed changes but at this part is technically unnecessary since it looks like spam and doesn't follows anything so I would like to suggest delete the combo from00:31:451 (1) - here.
  2. 00:42:793 (1,1,1,1) - This spam of new combos makes no sense.
  3. 00:33:646 (4,1,2) - It flows very nice and the antijump is also great at here but 00:35:354 (1,2) - this kind of spacing surprised me a lot since the first time I tested it was quite awkward to play so will be nice if you try to keep a consistent with the other spacing that you used before.
  4. 00:44:988 (1) - CTRL+G maybe? feels better like this, you should try it.
  5. 01:08:768 (1,1,1,1,2) - Irre, just why? increase the spacing or change the whole pattern, don't you think this is so hard to read? I highly suggest you to replace it by another stuff, the pattern of combos that you used here doesn't helps at all.
  6. 01:19:743 (5,1,1,1) - Same as above.
  7. 01:30:079 (1) - Whistle?
Very nice difficulty, well done.
Irreversible

Gero wrote:

Irre asked me for mod so here I am.

Irreversible's Hyper

At the first place I really want to know for which reason you're using 3.4 as Circle Size? don't you think that's kinda inconsistent with the others diffs? and with the other settings? however I'd like to suggest increase it to 4 or 3.9 to fix it since it's quite weird as is it right now, if you ask me. Funny thing abotu this CS is , that this map looks difficult but is really easy and nice to play. I wanna keep it.

  1. 00:30:354 (1,1) - This kind of pattern is not bad at all, but the problem is that the combo is is quite weird at here, I really understand that you used them on the speed changes but at this part is technically unnecessary since it looks like spam and doesn't follows anything so I would like to suggest delete the combo from00:31:451 (1) - here. done
  2. 00:42:793 (1,1,1,1) - This spam of new combos makes no sense. done
  3. 00:33:646 (4,1,2) - It flows very nice and the antijump is also great at here but 00:35:354 (1,2) - this kind of spacing surprised me a lot since the first time I tested it was quite awkward to play so will be nice if you try to keep a consistent with the other spacing that you used before. done
  4. 00:44:988 (1) - CTRL+G maybe? feels better like this, you should try it. i tried it but i don't quite like it
  5. 01:08:768 (1,1,1,1,2) - Irre, just why? increase the spacing or change the whole pattern, don't you think this is so hard to read? I highly suggest you to replace it by another stuff, the pattern of combos that you used here doesn't helps at all. done
  6. 01:19:743 (5,1,1,1) - Same as above. nah this is good so
  7. 01:30:079 (1) - Whistle? done
Very nice difficulty, well done.
thx!!!

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Topic Starter
Konei
Updated
Bara-
Fixed the Slidertickrate, as it will give some troubles, due to mixture of 1/3 and 1/2 rhythms, which will cause confusion (and for the taiko-autoconverts players)

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Edit: 8000th post woohoo
Topic Starter
Konei
Thanks!
Mafumafu
It has been bubbled ;w;
Topic Starter
Konei

Regraz wrote:

It has been bubbled ;w;
Galtia asdffasasf
Bara-

Regraz wrote:

It has been bubbled ;w;
meii18
Hello! As Irreversible's request c:

[General]
  1. The BG quality seems to be kinda low as I can see.Try to improve the quality of the BG because there are clearly pixels as you can see.Moreover,the resolution doesn't look really good.1364x767.I suggest to resize it to 1366x768 for a better resolution plus hopefully to improve the quality of the BG
[Hard]
  1. 01:26:877(4,1)- Here the piano calls for triplets if I'm not wrong so having triplets here,you will follow the piano more better in my opinion and don't worry it won't be overmapped
Here is the IRC with Irre regarding his difficulty
IRC Hyper difficulty
13:03 Irreversible: mind showing me?
13:03 ByBy13: sure
13:05 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/866020 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Irreversible's Hyper]]
13:05 ByBy13: 00:22:671 (2)- NC? since the vocals are reseting
13:05 ByBy13: here
13:05 ByBy13: 00:24:866 (4)- here too ? :/
13:06 Irreversible: okay
13:07 ByBy13: 00:31:451 (2)- ^
13:07 Irreversible: ah
13:07 Irreversible: here it would feel spammy
13:07 Irreversible: and both sounds are like Mhhh uhh
13:08 ByBy13: 00:46:451 (2)- I would like to set a NC here and adding light blue to make the reading of the slider more easier in my opinion
13:08 ByBy13: and ah ok xD
13:09 Irreversible: done
13:09 ByBy13: okay :)
13:10 ByBy13: 00:51:207 (1,1)- This blanket needs some improvement don't you think?
13:10 Irreversible: not anymore
13:10 ByBy13: oh o.o
13:10 Irreversible: (fixed)
13:10 Irreversible: xd
13:11 ByBy13: okay xD
13:11 ByBy13: 00:57:427 (2,1)- maybe a little jump here? the vocal is yelling here which means that here's something strong which needs some empashis in my opinion
13:12 Irreversible: yeah but i emphasized it by speed up
13:12 Irreversible: not by jump :3
13:12 ByBy13: ahh :3
13:15 ByBy13: 00:58:524 (1)- seems pleasant to play but i think this kind of slider isn't acceptable in my opinion.I suggest to change with an appropiate slider :/
13:16 Irreversible: ok
13:23 ByBy13: 01:09:042 (1,1)- here you don't needs to do NC spam I mean to overuse them.Without adding NC on these two notes,they're are still readable
13:23 Irreversible: ok
13:24 ByBy13: 01:20:658 (1,1,1)- Here too plus I think you can increase the spacing here because the piano is intensifying here and it needs emphasize don't you think?
13:32 Irreversible: no
13:32 Irreversible: don't agree here
13:33 ByBy13: ok ;;
13:33 Irreversible: nc for readability is needed, and the spacing increases already :3
13:33 ByBy13: ah :3
13:34 ByBy13: and yeah I know that the NC is needed for readability
13:35 ByBy13: but I said maybe don't spam nc here in case if you changed the pattern
13:35 ByBy13: xD
13:35 Irreversible: oh
13:35 Irreversible: xd
13:43 ByBy13: 01:27:975 (2)- you don't need to have a NC here because there's no any sv change and the slider is readable enough without NC here too
13:43 Irreversible: i rearranged this pattern
13:43 Irreversible: because i saw you failed 2 times on it
13:43 Irreversible: xD
13:44 Irreversible: deleted nc anyway
13:44 ByBy13: xDDD
13:44 ByBy13: oki
13:44 ByBy13: :D
13:44 ByBy13: I think this is all for now c:
13:44 Irreversible: ok good <3
13:44 ByBy13: oh wait
13:45 ByBy13: 00:07:671 (1)- maybe remove the NC? without nc,the note is still readable
13:45 ByBy13: I forgot about it xd
13:45 Irreversible: nooo
13:45 Irreversible: xDD
13:45 Irreversible: that one is cool
13:45 Irreversible: ^-^
13:45 ByBy13: oh okay xDD
13:48 Irreversible: thank you ^.^
13:48 ByBy13: np ^^

That's must be all! My apologies for my poor mod :(.Easy,Normal and Insane difficulties are fine to me.The mapset itself looks great to my eyes!
Call me back for recheck!
Topic Starter
Konei
did both, thank you!
meii18
Recheck
10:35 ByBy13: hi :3
10:39 Konei: hey :)
10:39 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/862127 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Easy]]
10:39 ByBy13: the bg still have low quality :(
10:40 Konei: you think so?
10:40 Konei: i dont find it that bad actually
10:40 Konei: i think its the art style actually
10:44 ByBy13: i think yeah
10:49 Konei: the game doesnt really have a lot of art yet, sorry D:
10:49 ByBy13: don't worry :)
10:49 ByBy13: well it cna be fine
10:49 ByBy13: *can
10:49 Konei: haha alright
10:49 ByBy13: now I have to look more deeper in easy difficulty
10:50 ByBy13: ;(
10:50 Konei: sure
10:50 Konei: xD
10:50 ByBy13: even if the star rating is 1.5 xD
10:50 ByBy13: the star rating doesn't matter
10:50 ByBy13: it matters what contains the difficulty
10:52 Konei: yeah i think so
10:53 Konei: its still nnhhh
10:53 Konei: which is fine xD
10:53 ByBy13: yeah xD
11:03 ByBy13: should be fine
11:03 ByBy13: plays fine for a newbie player
11:03 Konei: alright :3
11:08 ByBy13: wait a min
11:08 ByBy13: AR 4 ?
11:08 ByBy13: why not AR 3?
11:09 Konei: oj
11:09 ByBy13: HP perhaps 2
11:09 ByBy13: this difficulty is for newbies
11:09 ByBy13: and also the easiest difficulty of the set
11:10 Konei: reduced OD as well
11:10 ByBy13: okay
11:12 ByBy13: 00:17:915 (3,1)- Considering unstacking it since on (1) is a strong cymbal and it needs some emphasis
11:13 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/863026 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Normal]]
11:27 Konei: deleted the note for sake of better understanding
11:33 ByBy13: ok
11:39 ByBy13: 00:33:280 (3,1)- maybe unstacking them? the vocals is intensifying here a little bit
11:39 ByBy13: on (1)
11:44 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/862303 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Hard]]
11:45 ByBy13: 01:13:158 - I would like to add a note here since there are still instruments which can be followed.Also the rhythm would be good with a circle in addition in my opinion
11:48 Konei: i like the stack D: because of the flow with the similar vocals
11:48 ByBy13: oh
11:48 ByBy13: :o
11:48 Konei: added a note tho
11:48 ByBy13: ok
11:51 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/866020 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Irreversible's Hyper]]
11:51 ByBy13: can you fix for irre?
11:53 Konei: uhm tell me what and ill see xD
11:53 ByBy13: oki
11:54 ByBy13: 01:07:121 (1) I would prefer to see this slider ending on 01:07:487 - (1/2 tick) because there is a strong beat plus as it is snapped right now,I have the impression that it looks like it's snapped wrongly
12:01 Konei: huh
12:02 ByBy13: I suggest to snap the slider to the 1/2 tick (red tick) I mean to 01:07:487 - where's is a strong beat xD
12:02 Konei: its meant to be enduring
12:02 ByBy13: oh ;o
12:02 Konei: yeah i know xD but irre doesnt want that
12:02 ByBy13: ahaha xD
12:02 ByBy13: okay
12:02 Konei: its like a 3/4 slider xD
12:02 ByBy13: got it xD
12:03 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/861398 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Insane]]
12:03 ByBy13: about 00:48:646 - and 00:57:427 -
12:03 ByBy13: I don't think that they're fitting the song really well
12:04 Konei: dont you hear the soft piano? :O
12:04 ByBy13: uhm no ;w;
12:05 ByBy13: I hear like the vocals and the instruments are extending
12:06 Konei: i hear a piano D:
12:06 Konei: ;__;
12:06 ByBy13: D:
12:07 ByBy13: I hear a bit the piano
12:08 Konei: i think it fits :c
12:09 ByBy13: oki
12:12 Konei: :3
12:12 Konei: upd8eeed
12:13 ByBy13: oki :3
12:17 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/861398 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Insane]]
12:17 ByBy13: 01:20:292 (3,1,2,3)- I don't think this rhythm fits really well the piano
12:18 Konei: huh?
12:18 Konei: but it plays on the piano
12:18 ByBy13: I would go for to snap (3) back to 1/1 tick (white tick) and then making a 5x stream plus a 1/4 slider
12:18 ByBy13: =w=
12:18 ByBy13: just my though
12:21 Konei: okay
12:21 Konei: changed :3
12:21 ByBy13: oki :3
12:21 ByBy13: update
12:23 Konei: donne
12:23 ByBy13: okay
12:23 ByBy13: :D
12:23 Konei: :D
12:31 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/861398 Kumakuma - Hallucination [Insane]]
12:32 ByBy13: 01:05:476 (1,2,3,4)- Just my opinion: you can do a jumpy part here since the piano is intensifying here
12:32 ByBy13: and it becomes more stronger in my point of view
12:32 Konei: nah i want low spacing to introduce the 1/4 part D:
12:32 ByBy13: okay xD
12:33 ByBy13: let me do final rechecks
12:34 ByBy13: tags conflicts with Irre's hyper D:
12:41 Konei: alright
12:41 Konei: wtf did he doxD
12:41 ByBy13: xDD
12:41 ByBy13: update pls
12:42 Konei: doneee
12:43 ByBy13: oki
12:45 ByBy13: insane have the same ar like irre's hyper
12:45 ByBy13: =w=
12:46 Konei: oh
12:47 ByBy13: change it to at least 8.5
12:47 ByBy13: in insae
12:47 ByBy13: *insane
12:48 Konei: inreased to 8,5
12:48 ByBy13: oki
12:48 ByBy13: update
12:48 ByBy13: :3
12:48 ByBy13: this was the last issue hoefully
12:48 ByBy13: *hopefully
12:49 Konei: donee xDD
12:49 ByBy13: oki xDD
12:51 ByBy13: all diffs have videos
12:51 ByBy13: =w=)b
12:51 ByBy13: are you ready :)?
12:51 Konei: :DDD
12:51 Konei: sure :D
12:51 ByBy13: okay :DD
12:52 ByBy13: \w/

Made some changes such as changing settings at easy,adding a note in hard etc. Should be fine now!
Qualified!
Topic Starter
Konei
Thanks!!
Battle
pimp
grats :D
Topic Starter
Konei

Battle wrote:

maybe because all of them actually have natural hair colours lol
HabiHolic
Congratz Konei!!!!! Your best mapper!!♥
Mafumafu
time for me to make some yaoi-related maps
;w;
well
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Konei wrote:

Regraz wrote:

It has been bubbled ;w;
Galtia asdffasasf
The forgotten Galtia :P
Topic Starter
Konei
thanks!
Mint
omg congrats!
Kyouren
I like this song >///<
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