Well I'll try to mod your map tomorrow when I'll have some time, there is soooo much to say, first you must avoid mapping lyrics, it could be used but not as much as you did, the instrumental of the song is what might be mapped
I'll tell you others advices tomorrow as I said, too tired at the moment
EDIT : So here we go ! First of all I'll mod only normal difficulty because there is too much to say about the 2 others diffs, you may remap it completely it might be better I think :/ And the advices I'm giving you are pretty often about the timing, the placement seems OK (and I'm not really experienced about it
yet)
00:10:905(1) - Move it to 00:10:835, and by the way, it should end at 00:11:633, then do a similar in timing slider and put it at 00:12:248(2) and 00:13:666(3)
00:25:033(1) - Remove this note
00:27:541(7) - Circle instead of slider
00:28:351 - Circle here, it may sound better
00:28:901(3) - Extend this slider until 00:29:091
00:29:975(5) - Put the same slider than at 00:29:235(4) (and remove the 2 others)
00:32:797(5) - Circle instead of slider
00:55:868(1) - End this slider slighty earlier (00:56:963 I think)
01:05:784(3) - Circle instead of slider
01:06:174(4) - Same ^
01:10:037(7) - Slider instead of circle, until the beginning of the slider at 01:10:387(1) that you may remove by then
01:14:775(3) - Remove this note
01:15:491(6) - Remove this note
01:15:650(7) - This slider might end at 01:16:030 and not being a reverse.
01:17:070(9) - Same thing than above
01:17:790(1) - Same slider than the 2 new ones that I talked about above
01:18:144 - Place a note there? (circle)
01:27:332(2) - Same slider than the next one, not a reverse.
01:29:413(5) - Move it to 01:29:267 (or replace it by a circle)
01:33:333 - Circle or minislider here I think
01:34:033 - Same than above
01:52:353 - Circle here?
01:52:713 - Circle here?^2
01:53:113 - Circle here?^3
01:53:393 - Circle here?^4
02:04:651 - Circle here, or slider starting from the note before?
02:05:041(1) - Extend it until 02:06:086
02:07:925(4) - Extend it until 02:08:517
02:12:465 - Circle here?
02:24:695(4) - Remove this note
02:25:895(1) - Notes instead of a spinner ?
Hope it helps, and oh, by modding your map, I realised that as the map goes by (and the mapping then), you get better, so gj about it ^-^