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Lily Bread
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月12日 at 17:16:05

Artist: MAN WITH A MISSION
Title: Raise your flag TV size
Source: 機動戦士ガンダム 鉄血のオルフェンズ
Tags: Gundam iron blooded orphans Opening Anime Kencho
BPM: 145
Filesize: 2430kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.31 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Hard (2.54 stars, 171 notes)
  3. Kencho's Insane (3.7 stars, 324 notes)
  4. Normal (1.68 stars, 102 notes)
Download: MAN WITH A MISSION - Raise your flag TV size
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機動戦士ガンダム 鉄血のオルフェンズ OP1.

Insane by Kencho.
other diffs by Lily Bread.
ceLy
:roll: :roll:

占个M4M位置
等我剩的那个diff补上了再给link好了...

Easy
  1. 00:34:441 (2,3) - 感觉把 2 3 往右下挪点会好看点
  2. 啊 没什么了
Normal
  1. 00:53:062 (1,2,3) - 1 的结尾和 2 3 开始围一个正三角形?
Hard
  1. :? 没什么想说的
Kencho's Insane
  1. 感觉蛮难的为什么星数不高.唔.
:D shoot a star
Pata-Mon
超水摸

[General]
  1. 只有Hard关了widescreen support
  2. 偶然发现你前三个难度中的大部分物件都比拍子晚1ms……看上去只差1ms的话AImod是不会报的,不过强迫症表示很不舒服23333
[Easy]
  1. kia的一些地方可以考虑改成折返,这样变化多一点。比如00:54:090 (2,3) - 00:55:745 (4,1) - 00:57:400 (2,3) - 01:10:642 (6,1) 等,在note到滑条之间的声音也比较连续
然后就什么都找不出来了T_T
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
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cHelli wrote:

:roll: :roll:

占个M4M位置
等我剩的那个diff补上了再给link好了...
//嗯嗯,等你diff补全了可以随时来找我

Easy
  1. 00:34:441 (2,3) - 感觉把 2 3 往右下挪点会好看点
    //唔...
  2. 啊 没什么了
Normal
  1. 00:53:062 (1,2,3) - 1 的结尾和 2 3 开始围一个正三角形?
    //可以
Hard
  1. :? 没什么想说的
Kencho's Insane
  1. 感觉蛮难的为什么星数不高.唔.
:D shoot a star

Pata-Mon wrote:

超水摸

[General]
  1. 只有Hard关了widescreen support
    //嗯,都关了
  2. 偶然发现你前三个难度中的大部分物件都比拍子晚1ms……看上去只差1ms的话AImod是不会报的,不过强迫症表示很不舒服23333
    //点了一下重新对齐,应该没问题了
[Easy]
  1. kia的一些地方可以考虑改成折返,这样变化多一点。比如00:54:090 (2,3) - 00:55:745 (4,1) -
    00:57:400 (2,3) - 01:10:642 (6,1) 等,在note到滑条之间的声音也比较连续
    //改了一些,改折返确实会简单很多
然后就什么都找不出来了T_T
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Kencho

cHelli wrote:

  1. 感觉蛮难的为什么星数不高.唔.
我放了一堆3/4,所以星數低但難,但這歌本來的鼓就是290BPM的,真要做可以做到7星啊

另外PSV居然出GVEX了好開心,這套作品的機體也有了
N i M a Z i
你好~

Easy

我其实不太懂E难度,不过感觉完全跟着人唱歌下节奏挺好的。

01:19:544 (1) - 转盘后面是不是再放点什么,感觉好空旷。

=====

Normal

00:25:130 (2,3) - 这两个滑条长度有点不平衡,前一个有点长,而且覆盖到了歌词中下一个字的开头,是不是换一种形式会更舒服一些?00:31:751 (5,6) - 这里也是同理的;但是00:28:440 (5,6) - 就不一样了,可以看出上述三组跟的是同样的音乐形式,但是歌词的构成不同导致00:28:440 (5,6) - 这里就会更顺畅一些。我感觉你这个diff主要是跟歌的,所以还是完全跟比较舒服一些。

=====

Hard

整体上这个diff莫名地靠左下,感觉重心不在中间,不知道我能不能说清,就是感觉note都往左边和下边去了。

00:05:889 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这一段会不会有点太空旷了,比如00:06:716 (1,1) - 这两个note之间这么长的时间,也有人在唱歌,如果是我可能会放点什么。

00:22:440 (2,3) - 这里的两个折返滑条,总感觉和音乐的契合度不太好,里面的吉他(还是什么其他的乐器抱歉我不懂)声音太弱了,完全被人声盖住了,感觉基本上听不出来这两个折返滑条,完全没有00:21:199 (3) - 这么明显,感觉至少把后一个00:22:854 (3) - 换成点别的什么。

00:25:544 (2) - 这个滑条下面隐藏这一组鼓点,感觉把这个长滑条换成一个短的,再加一个上面那种折返滑条好一点?

00:43:130 (1) - 这个NC是不是放在下一个00:43:337 (2) - 这里好一点?

00:48:096 (1) - 这里的NC有点让人摸不着头脑。

00:48:302 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里就是我说的,感觉全挤到左下去了,除非有什么特殊的意义(比如说高达动画里面的梗?或者歌词?我没怎么仔细听歌词),否则还是让人有点不舒服。

00:54:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这一段感觉越往下越“拥挤”,最后那个00:58:027 (1) - 位置就有点不舒服了。感觉这一段要么整体往上靠一些,要么把00:56:371 (1,2,3) - 的角度再调整一下,00:54:716 (1,2,3) - 00:56:371 (1,2,3) - 00:58:027 (1) - 这三句歌应该是处于相同地位的,00:58:027 (1) - 为什么换成了滑条呢?如果是为了让图富有变化性倒是可以,不过跟前两组有些不合。

=====

Kencho's Insane

关于难度,kencho你的那些对应唱歌时长音的滑条都太紧密了,是不是适当增加一下滑条之间距离会舒服一点?感觉换成我做个图,难度没准能高一倍。

00:14:993 (1) - 这个NC,如果要和歌呼应的话,是不是放这00:14:372 (4) - 更合适一些,后面的几组也同理。



我Hard好像说的相对多了些,是因为我第一个看的Hard,然后是I,N,E,所以越来越词穷了,不要在意。
期待rank。(虽然我并不能上榜
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
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Ni-ma wrote:

你好~

Easy

我其实不太懂E难度,不过感觉完全跟着人唱歌下节奏挺好的。

01:19:544 (1) - 转盘后面是不是再放点什么,感觉好空旷。
//不想做

=====

Normal

00:25:130 (2,3) - 这两个滑条长度有点不平衡,前一个有点长,而且覆盖到了歌词中下一个字的开头,是不是换一种形式会更舒服一些?
//这里我完全跟的鼓点

00:31:751 (5,6) - 这里也是同理的;但是00:28:440 (5,6) - 就不一样了,可以看出上述三组跟的是同样的音乐形式,但是歌词的构成不同导致00:28:440 (5,6) - 这里就会更顺畅一些。我感觉你这个diff主要是跟歌的,所以还是完全跟比较舒服一些。

=====

Hard

整体上这个diff莫名地靠左下,感觉重心不在中间,不知道我能不能说清,就是感觉note都往左边和下边去了。
//你可以ctrl+a看看..感觉没什么问题

00:05:889 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这一段会不会有点太空旷了,比如00:06:716 (1,1) - 这两个note之间这么长的时间,也有人在唱歌,如果是我可能会放点什么。
//怎么说呢...没有鼓点,说明这里是类似前奏的地方,物件少点没什么问题

00:22:440 (2,3) - 这里的两个折返滑条,总感觉和音乐的契合度不太好,里面的吉他(还是什么其他的乐器抱歉我不懂)声音太弱了,完全被人声盖住了,感觉基本上听不出来这两个折返滑条,完全没有00:21:199 (3) - 这么明显,感觉至少把后一个00:22:854 (3) - 换成点别的什么。
//怎么说呢...牵扯到乐理什么的说不太清楚..总之这里这样没问题

00:25:544 (2) - 这个滑条下面隐藏这一组鼓点,感觉把这个长滑条换成一个短的,再加一个上面那种折返滑条好一点?
//这个和刚才那个不一样..总之Hard下这里不跟也没问题,I以上为了难度才会跟

00:43:130 (1) - 这个NC是不是放在下一个00:43:337 (2) - 这里好一点?
//不是

00:48:096 (1) - 这里的NC有点让人摸不着头脑。
//我Hard统一一个小节一组NC

00:48:302 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里就是我说的,感觉全挤到左下去了,除非有什么特殊的意义(比如说高达动画里面的梗?或者歌词?我没怎么仔细听歌词),否则还是让人有点不舒服。
/*
00:46:647 (2,4,2) - 首先这三个是对称的,是一个梗
00:48:302 (2,3) - 这两个blanket,而且flow是往这里走
00:49:337 (4) - 所以这个只能往左下走了,其它能走的位置已经被上面说的那两个梗占用了,我作图喜欢干净一点,所以不会往刚才就有物件的地方走
00:49:751 (1,2) - 这两个对称,DS

*/

00:54:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这一段感觉越往下越“拥挤”,最后那个00:58:027 (1) - 位置就有点不舒服了。感觉这一段要么整体往上靠一些,要么把00:56:371 (1,2,3) - 的角度再调整一下,00:54:716 (1,2,3) - 00:56:371 (1,2,3) - 00:58:027 (1) - 这三句歌应该是处于相同地位的,00:58:027 (1) - 为什么换成了滑条呢?如果是为了让图富有变化性倒是可以,不过跟前两组有些不合。
//其实原本前面两个也是滑条,为了spread才改成的圈圈。
//至于拥挤..我是不觉得,你可以把AR-3再看看我的图,一点也不拥挤


我Hard好像说的相对多了些,是因为我第一个看的Hard,然后是I,N,E,所以越来越词穷了,不要在意。
期待rank。(虽然我并不能上榜
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Janpai

Hi senpai~ M4M via PM Request


Just nazi suggestions will be point out overall it looks fine, maybe add some finishing touches

General

  1. Check AiMod in easy then check distance snap as well as normal

Easy

  1. 00:11:682 (2) - Curve a little bit?
  2. Some nazi suggestion 00:33:199 (1) - Make this more curve then let 00:34:440 (2) - blanket with it then make 00:34:854 (3) - a straight slider. from the of #1 slider to #3 slider there must be like a obtuse angle formed (sorry can't upload ss XDD)
    [notice]

    Normal

    1. 00:07:751 - Since this is normal maybe add a reverse slider here for the vocals
    2. 00:51:406 (3) - Why 1 1/4 ?

Hard

  1. 00:06:716 (1) - 00:10:027 (1) - I think its okay if you map this part and follow the vocals since this is hard though

Kencho's Insane

  1. Everythings fine for me :)
Goodluck on ranking!
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
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[quote="Jana Marie"]

Hi senpai~ M4M via PM Request


Just nazi suggestions will be point out overall it looks fine, maybe add some finishing touches

General

  1. Check AiMod in easy then check distance snap as well as normal
    //it seems that AImod reports a wrong issue.

Easy

  1. 00:11:682 (2) - Curve a little bit?
    //nope
  2. Some nazi suggestion 00:33:199 (1) - Make this more curve then let 00:34:440 (2) - blanket with it then make 00:34:854 (3) - a straight slider. from the of #1 slider to #3 slider there must be like a obtuse angle formed (sorry can't upload ss XDD)
    //nope. bad flow.

    [notice]

    Normal

    1. 00:07:751 - Since this is normal maybe add a reverse slider here for the vocals
      //i like current pattern.
    2. 00:51:406 (3) - Why 1 1/4 ?
      //oops. fixed

Hard

  1. 00:06:716 (1) - 00:10:027 (1) - I think its okay if you map this part and follow the vocals since this is hard though
    //same as normal diff.


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moonlightleaf
果然是这种做好就准备飞的类型么

[General]

01:24:509 感觉这边转盘淡出结束好些 ,参考下啃球的结尾

[Easy]

fine

[Normal]

00:18:302 (3) - 位置不太好看,不如ctrl+h那个样子

00:26:785 - 00:36:716 这段全塞满了 打着巨累

[Hard]

01:18:199 (2,5) - 我觉得前面红线也加个note 构成2连

[Kencho's Insane]

00:26:579 (1,2) - 移下去和前面那个1对齐(不然好难受233

00:39:407 (6) - 相比之下 我更愿意竖直这种,横着不好打

排版我很中意 比如这里00:35:476 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) -

摸不出啥 orz
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
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moonlightleaf wrote:

果然是这种做好就准备飞的类型么

[General]

01:24:509 感觉这边转盘淡出结束好些 ,参考下啃球的结尾
//每个diff map的部分要保持一致,这样感觉低难度就会连着两个转盘,又不能只做高难度的不做低难度的,很不喜欢,所以就没做后面的

[Easy]

fine

[Normal]

00:18:302 (3) - 位置不太好看,不如ctrl+h那个样子
//改啦

00:26:785 - 00:36:716 这段全塞满了 打着巨累
//确实过了点,我看着简化一点吧
//嗯..然后normal变成1.56星了,估计又会有人来说E和N差的太小吧hhh 不管了

[Hard]

01:18:199 (2,5) - 我觉得前面红线也加个note 构成2连
//hard里二连感觉有点坑人..还是只跟vocal吧
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Strategas
yo, m4m from my queue

[Insane]
00:21:200 (6) - I recommend you ctrl + g this, because atm it is way too close to 7 considering you jumped from 5 to the same beat and it just plays much better since they are played as singletaps anyway.
00:26:579 (1) - this might be lackign emphasis is pretty strong imo
00:29:889 (1) - ^ and all the ones after
00:29:476 (7) - ctrl + g
00:34:027 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:38:682 (3) - rather have something clickable on the red tick - it will remove polarity issue and will feel better since you'll click the strong beat. so I suggest to convert to 2 circles.
00:49:338 (6) - ctrl g
01:06:303 (1,2,3) - this patern might be a little annoying for players I suggest either continue using 00:58:027 (1,2,3) - or just turn it into one slider from those two circles https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/D9MFe0D.png

pretty nice diff bro

[Hard]
00:15:820 (2,3,1,2,3) - not sure if intended but all of these blankets are off
00:20:785 (2) - ds?
00:24:923 (1) - ^
00:26:578 (1,2) - blanket. um I'll stop looking for those make sure to rechech them after
00:32:992 (4) - the slider end on very strong beat
00:55:544 (4) - ds
01:02:992 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ds
'01:22:854 - why don't you map this xd

[Normal]

well it's the same thing as in hard but I find it strange that you didn't map either the beginning or the end like in the insane
everything else seems fine

[Easy]

00:27:820 (2) - this kind of doesn't really land on anything than on the vocal lol when there's two drums inbetween

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
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Strategas wrote:

yo, m4m from my queue

[Hard]
00:15:820 (2,3,1,2,3) - not sure if intended but all of these blankets are off
//i'm not making blanket in all my diffs.

00:20:785 (2) - ds?
//why ds?

00:24:923 (1) - ^
//^

00:26:578 (1,2) - blanket. um I'll stop looking for those make sure to rechech them after


00:32:992 (4) - the slider end on very strong beat
//repeat slider makes this diff easier.

00:55:544 (4) - ds
01:02:992 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ds
//why. it's a hard diff. 1.4, 1.3 and 1.5 has no difference.

'01:22:854 - why don't you map this xd
//i don't want to map

[Normal]

well it's the same thing as in hard but I find it strange that you didn't map either the beginning or the end like in the insane
everything else seems fine

[Easy]

00:27:820 (2) - this kind of doesn't really land on anything than on the vocal lol when there's two drums inbetween
//i can't map other music due to it's an easy diff.

Good luck!
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Kencho
Ni-ma

Ni-ma wrote:

Kencho's Insane

关于难度,kencho你的那些对应唱歌时长音的滑条都太紧密了,是不是适当增加一下滑条之间距离会舒服一点?感觉换成我做个图,难度没准能高一倍。 本來還想再用小一點的DS的,因為那些3/4的滑條只隔了1/4,間距太大很難打的,相對1/4的短滑條可以加點間距,不過太大的話也很容易出100

00:14:993 (1) - 这个NC,如果要和歌呼应的话,是不是放这00:14:372 (4) - 更合适一些,后面的几组也同理。 我是跟大白線NC的,看後面的kiai也是這樣NC的,情況合理不用改

moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Kencho's Insane]

00:26:579 (1,2) - 移下去和前面那个1对齐(不然好难受233 可以,其實我是用1.5DS放的

00:39:407 (6) - 相比之下 我更愿意竖直这种,横着不好打

排版我很中意 比如这里00:35:476 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - /w\

Strategas

Strategas wrote:

[Insane]
00:21:200 (6) - I recommend you ctrl + g this, because atm it is way too close to 7 considering you jumped from 5 to the same beat and it just plays much better since they are played as singletaps anyway. ok
00:26:579 (1) - this might be lackign emphasis is pretty strong imo yea, that are strong, but stack can also emphasis it, i think no need to use a big spacing on here.
00:29:889 (1) - ^ and all the ones after
00:29:476 (7) - ctrl + g ok
00:34:027 (4,5) - fix blanket fixed
00:38:682 (3) - rather have something clickable on the red tick - it will remove polarity issue and will feel better since you'll click the strong beat. so I suggest to convert to 2 circles. no problem, you are right
00:49:338 (6) - ctrl g ok
01:06:303 (1,2,3) - this patern might be a little annoying for players I suggest either continue using 00:58:027 (1,2,3) - or just turn it into one slider from those two circles https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/D9MFe0D.png here i use big spacing can emphasis it, use sliders again may too boring. Players first time play will fell annoying, but play more time can know that.

pretty nice diff bro thanks
Thanks your modding(星數降了0.01

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Source:機動戦士ガンダム 鉄血のオルフェンズ
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ceLy
:roll: diff补齐啦~

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/395781

:roll: ez用英文写下...GDer不是国人...随便摸摸就好
Mollon
Easy
00:13:337 (1,2) - 要不要调整下1的尾巴或者2的位置到一个方向上,看起来更顺一点点
00:43:130 (1) - 听出来这里是跟vocal,不过多二分之一拍还是有点怪。。因为放和后面的2中心对称结果不一样长
od2吧?

Normal
00:30:096 (1) - 搭在误差条上啦
01:17:889 (3) - 稍微调整下3的位置和4对称感觉好看一点?

Hard
蛮好的

肯求
感觉类似这种01:12:096 (1,2,3,4,5,1) 的梗和图里大量四分之一的节奏感觉比较密集 ar稍微调高一点点好像更好读一点,8.2就好了,毕竟现在也有145bpm了
别的都挺好的~
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Lily Bread
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Mollon wrote:

Easy
00:13:337 (1,2) - 要不要调整下1的尾巴或者2的位置到一个方向上,看起来更顺一点点
//感觉没什么问题,因为调整了也没办法跟3做成一条直线

00:43:130 (1) - 听出来这里是跟vocal,不过多二分之一拍还是有点怪。。因为放和后面的2中心对称结果不一样长
//唔...

od2吧?
//不用,否则E和N gap太小

Normal
00:30:096 (1) - 搭在误差条上啦
//这个..test界面没有问题那就当作没问题啦。误差条应该不属于要考虑的范围

01:17:889 (3) - 稍微调整下3的位置和4对称感觉好看一点?
//不错

Hard
蛮好的
//^^
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Kibbleru
kenchan
could use higher ar at least 8.5 due to complicated blue tick rhythms tbh
ehh i couldn't really find anything problematic

hard
00:54:716 (1,2,3) - these rhythms are kinda hard to tap for a hard diff, sliders would be better for this case
00:56:371 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:716 (4) - nc?

normal
00:11:682 (2,3,1) - pattern kinda messy but then again i don't really have a suggestion for u either unfortunately :(
00:39:820 - i recommend u not skip this downbeat
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Lily Bread
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kuaib wrote:

kenchan
could use higher ar at least 8.5 due to complicated blue tick rhythms tbh
ehh i couldn't really find anything problematic

hard
00:54:716 (1,2,3) - these rhythms are kinda hard to tap for a hard diff, sliders would be better for this case
//it's ok imo, if not do this, the spread is bad.

00:56:371 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:716 (4) - nc?
//nope.


normal
00:11:682 (2,3,1) - pattern kinda messy but then again i don't really have a suggestion for u either unfortunately :(
//0 0

00:39:820 - i recommend u not skip this downbeat
//ok

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EncoreW
[general]

这种bpm住难度只有3.5出头真是没想到。。换我肯定做个4.5的。。

这种偏rockj的歌怎么默认soft音效啊

[Kencho's Insane]

00:04:647 (4) - 风格你这地方好偷懒啊,居然连着放12个滑条,12个滑条连着也就算了还都是横平竖直的糊过去的,横平竖直的糊过去的也就算了音量也不一点点的加上去

00:08:372 - 这地方应该更像是nm或者soft的finish把,另外怎么70%的音量了声音还是那么小

00:12:924 (2,3,4,5) - 这4个果断drum音效啊

我猜这gd花了你不到两个小时。。

[Hard]

对称刘我还能说什么呢。。鼓点最好用drum,soft没法体现出来这种感觉的

[Normal]

我觉得这更像是ez。。不管排列还是什么的

另外音量什么的还是有些地方需要调整的,这时候插点绿线也没什么不好的,整个难度就两根绿线感觉有点说不过去。。

横平竖直太多拉
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Lily Bread

T-Mac wrote:

[general]

这种bpm住难度只有3.5出头真是没想到。。换我肯定做个4.5的。。
//才145BPM呀..要么就做成290BPM的..

这种偏rockj的歌怎么默认soft音效啊
//习惯了...

[Hard]

对称刘我还能说什么呢。。鼓点最好用drum,soft没法体现出来这种感觉的
//这个..其实应该不算对称流吧..?
//音效我是copy kencho的,他有用drum音效

[Normal]

我觉得这更像是ez。。不管排列还是什么的
//唔...之前被说节奏塞太满所以简化过了

另外音量什么的还是有些地方需要调整的,这时候插点绿线也没什么不好的,整个难度就两根绿线感觉有点说不过去。。
//嗯..是可以改改音量

横平竖直太多拉
//这个..我的低难度都是这风格,横平竖直用鼠标比较容易玩
//thanks for mod!
YaegakiErika_old
买一送一

[Hard]
完全听不到音效。。

00:36:509 (1,2) - 这样的放近一点会更好打
00:43:130 (1,2) - ^
01:18:716 (4) - NC?

[Normal]
怎么这么多折返?
00:36:716 (1) - 比如这种,我记得normal里好像都是拆开来的吧?。。不过很久没玩normal了,不太懂。。
00:19:958 (1,1) - 这中间空这么多干嘛

一样完全听不到音效。。

还有啊,你怎么会想起来做这曲子?这风格应该不是你的菜吧。。
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Lily Bread
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YaegakiErika wrote:

买一送一

[Hard]
完全听不到音效。。
//嗯,我提高一下

00:36:509 (1,2) - 这样的放近一点会更好打
00:43:130 (1,2) - ^
//咦,可是这里DS了呀

01:18:716 (4) - NC?
//不用

[Normal]
怎么这么多折返?
00:36:716 (1) - 比如这种,我记得normal里好像都是拆开来的吧?。。不过很久没玩normal了,不太懂。。
//还是算了,N没必要太难

00:19:958 (1,1) - 这中间空这么多干嘛
//因为是normal,转盘后不能马上接物件

一样完全听不到音效。。
//嗯,改了

还有啊,你怎么会想起来做这曲子?这风格应该不是你的菜吧。。
//因为一下子不知道要做什么..喜欢的曲子大多已经有人开坑了
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Adol Christin
简直棒极了这首歌!刚听还以为是首超高bpm的曲目- -
no kd。时间关系只打了I, 原谅我Lily T.T

Kencho's Insane

  1. 00:16:234 (6) 00:14:579 (6) - - 因为是I,所以可以试试两根短滑条,大概会好玩些
  2. 01:12:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - 怎么说呢,怎么听怎么感觉这段音乐应该属于前面一部分,用跳大概自然些
[/code]

看看就好。祝早日rank
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Lily Bread

Adol Christin wrote:

简直棒极了这首歌!刚听还以为是首超高bpm的曲目- -
no kd。时间关系只打了I, 原谅我Lily T.T

Kencho's Insane

  1. 00:16:234 (6) 00:14:579 (6) - - 因为是I,所以可以试试两根短滑条,大概会好玩些
  2. 01:12:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - 怎么说呢,怎么听怎么感觉这段音乐应该属于前面一部分,用跳大概自然些
[/code]

看看就好。祝早日rank
其实这歌是290bpm的…
谢谢~
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