Hi, from my Queue ~dkD (Big d)K (Big k)[General]
OD: 6The second kiai end here 05:30:667 - because this part is very great and it's considered part of kiai.
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Inner Oni]
00:10:937 (67) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:02:744 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - , 00:04:591 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - and 00:06:437 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) -
00:12:783 (80) -
^00:13:821 (86) - change to
d because in this part can hear a drum.
00:14:283 (90,91) -
Ctrl G to follow the drums, also this part 00:14:283 (90) - can hear a drum and this 00:14:398 (91) - a rhythm "clap" a site perfect for a
k.
00:14:629 (94,95) - This part sound a drum, so change to
d. Also sounds good.
This is so repeit 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:20:975 (155,156,157) - , 00:21:321 (159,160,161) - , 00:22:014 (166,167,168) - , 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - So I recommend you to do this:
00:20:341 (148) - Change to
k to keep the drums.
00:20:629 (151,152) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 00:20:744 (153) - to have a secuency
k d k 00:20:283 (147) - , 00:20:514 (150) - , 00:20:744 (153) - and to have a nice rhythm.
00:21:206 - Change to k to keep the rhythm 00:21:321 (159,160,161) -
00:22:417 (171,172) -
Ctrl G to keep the next rhythm 00:22:591 (173,174,175,176) -
Can you see you have now a great secuency and a nice rhythm. 00:27:206 (222) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:19:821 (142,143,144) -
00:27:725 (228) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) -
00:28:072 (232) - Change to
k, change to
d here 00:28:014 (231) - and change to
k here 00:28:129 (233) - to keep the drums with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) -
00:29:456 (247,248) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) -
00:29:744 (250,251) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - Also you have a inverty with 00:29:456 (247,248) - because that is
dkd and this is
kdk and it's good!
00:35:109 (305) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) -
00:35:398 (308,309) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 00:35:514 (310) - to keep the consistency with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) -
00:37:071 (327,328) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) -
00:37:244 (329) - Change to
k to keep the drums with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) -
00:42:494 (383) - Change to
k to keep the drums with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 (305) -
00:42:783 (386,387) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 00:42:898 (388) - to keep the consistency with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 -
00:44:225 (402,403) -
Ctrl G to keep the consistency with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 -
00:44:514 (405,406) -
Ctrl G to keep the consistency with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 -
01:20:628 (699) - Change to
d here and here 01:20:859 (701) - to follow the drums.
01:20:974 (702,703,704,705) - Change to
k because if you hear the this part can you hear in that parts are sounds similar to "Clap". Also for emphasize the finish 01:21:436 (706) -
01:32:282 (800) - Change to
k to keep the rhythm with 01:28:974 (764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771,772,773,774,775,776,777,778,779,780,781,782,783,784,785,786,787,788,789,790,791,792,793,794,795,796,797,798) -
01:38:282 (857) - Change to
k and here 01:38:340 (858,859) -
Ctrl G to keep the consistency with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - and 00:42:494 -
01:38:628 (861,862) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 01:38:744 (863) - to keep the consistency with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 -
01:42:032 (898,899) -
Ctrl G to keep the consistency with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - and 00:44:225 -
01:42:436 (903) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - and 00:44:514 -
01:47:571 (959) - Change to
k to keep the drums with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - and 00:42:494 -
01:47:858 (962,963) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 01:47:974 (964) - to keep the drums with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 - and 00:42:783 -
01:49:359 (978,979) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - and 00:44:225 -
01:49:763 (983,984) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - and 00:44:514 -
02:10:359 (1146,1147) -
Ctrl G to keep the secueny
k d k d k 02:09:436 (1138) - , 02:09:667 (1140) - , 02:09:898 (1142) - , 02:10:128 (1144) - and 02:10:359 (1146) - Also to have a great rhyhthm with the previous notes! 02:09:436 (1138,1139,1140,1141,1142,1143,1144,1145) -
02:10:474 - Move this note here 02:10:590 - to keep the rhythm.
02:28:590 (1312,1313,1314,1315,1316,1317,1318,1319,1320,1321,1322) - Change to -->
To have a balance and sense. Also to put a breeak to the next notes.
02:38:974 (1409,1410) - Change to
k to have a nice stream.
02:40:821 (1429) - Change to
k to keep the rhythm.
03:10:705 (1700) - Change to
K to keep the previous rhythm with 03:06:667 (1665,1666,1667,1668,1669,1670,1671,1672,1673,1674,1675,1676,1677,1678,1679,1680,1681,1682,1683,1684,1685,1686,1687,1688,1689,1690,1691,1692,1693,1694,1695,1696,1697,1698,1699) -
04:07:590 (2188) - Change to
K for the high sound.
04:11:513 (2211) - Change to
k and
Ctrl G here 04:11:571 (2212,2213) - to keep the consistency with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - , 00:42:494 - and 01:38:282 - Also to have a secuency
k d k d 04:11:051 (2206) - , 04:11:282 (2209) - , 04:11:513 (2211) - , 04:11:744 (2214) -
04:11:859 (2215,2216) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 04:11:974 (2217) - to keep the consistency with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 - , 00:42:783 - and 01:38:628 -
04:15:263 (2252,2253) -
Ctrl G to keep the consistency with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - and 00:44:225 -
04:15:667 (2257) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - and 00:44:514 -
04:20:802 (2313) - Change to
k to keep the drums with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - , 00:42:494 - and 01:38:282 -
04:21:090 (2316,2317) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 04:21:205 (2318) - to keep the drums with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 - , 00:42:783 - and 01:38:628 -
04:38:167 (2467) - Change to
d and change to
k here 04:38:513 (2470) - to have a rhythm much better.
04:53:282 (2597,2598,2599) - change to
k, sounds good! Or if you like can you change to
K here 04:53:744 (2601) - and change to
k this 04:53:282 (2597,2598,2599,2600) - for emphasize the
K finish if you change this.
If you have this 05:08:051 (2740,2741,2742,2743) - You need to put a finish
D here 05:08:513 (2744) - For emphasize the finish. Or can you change this to
k 05:08:051 (2740,2741,2742,2743) - for emphasize the finish
K 05:08:513 (2744) -
05:36:321 (3027,3028) -
Ctrl G to keep the consistency with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - , 00:44:225 - and 04:15:263 -
05:36:667 (3031) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - , 00:44:514 - and 04:15:667 -
05:42:032 (3094) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - , 00:42:494 - , 01:38:282 - and 04:20:802 -
05:42:321 (3097,3098) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 05:42:436 (3099) - to keep the drums with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 - , 00:42:783 - , 01:38:628 - and 04:11:859 -
05:43:821 (3115) - Change to
d here and here 05:43:936 (3117) - to keep the drums with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - , 00:44:225 - and 04:15:263 -
05:44:224 (3120) - Change to
d to keep the drums with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - , 00:44:514 - and 04:15:667 -
05:49:416 (3179) - Change to
k to keep the drums with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - , 00:42:494 - , 01:38:282 - and 04:20:802 -
05:49:705 (3182,3183) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 05:49:821 (3184) - to keep the drums with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - , 00:44:225 - , 04:15:263 - and 04:15:263 -
05:51:378 (3202,3203) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums and the rhythm with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - , 00:44:225 - , 04:15:263 - and 05:36:321 -
05:51:551 (3204) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - , 00:44:514 - , 04:15:667 - and 05:36:667 -
05:56:802 (3268) - Change to
k to keep the consistency with 00:20:283 (147,148,149) - , 00:35:109 - , 00:42:494 - , 01:38:282 - , 04:20:802 - and 05:42:032 -
05:57:090 (3271,3272) -
Ctrl G and change to
k here 05:57:205 (3273) - to keep the consistency with 00:20:629 (151,152,153) - , 00:35:398 - , 00:42:783 - , 01:38:628 - and 04:21:090 -
05:57:321 (3274) - Change to
d and change to
k here 05:57:494 (3276) - to keep the consistency with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - , 00:44:514 - , 04:15:667 - ,05:36:667 - and 05:51:551 -
05:58:532 (3289,3290) -
Ctrl G to keep the drums with 00:22:360 (170,171,172) - , 00:37:071 - , 00:44:225 - , 04:15:263 - , 04:15:263 - and 05:49:705 -
05:58:821 (3292) - Change to
k to keep the drums with 00:22:706 (174,175,176) - , 00:37:244 - , 00:44:514 - , 04:15:667 - , 05:36:667 - and 05:51:551 -
Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~