Dzeko & Torres - 2015 in 10 Minutes · forum

Avishay

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-01-24T21:30:20+00:00

AkinOppai wrote:
09:59:975 (1,2,3,1) - Instead of 1,2,3,1 it should be 1,2,3,4 and then NC not 1,2,3 NC ,1 It would fit better with the song! Do this thing to all other 2,3,4,1's make them 1,2,3,4's ! That's intentional and it works pretty well, I don't really see a reason to change it, both can work.

That's it i couldn't find more it's a well made map!
Hope to see it Ranked!

toineenzo

2 posts

Joined September 2014

toineenzo 2016-01-25T14:17:16+00:00

thanks guys for this cool map! i really enjoyed it

, but only one second i failed before the song ended

((((( rip life

Szarlotek

Szarlotek 2016-01-26T17:26:00+00:00

Hello there

HERE COMES MOD

00:26:225 (6,7,8,9,10) - That's a bit weird, you should place these four circles right under the slider, not stack them next to it
01:05:131 (2,3,4) - Consider changing that 1/4 reverse slider into two 1/4 sliders without reverse and so on
01:30:561 (1,2,3,4) - Consider placing these sliders like that http://puu.sh/mKt08/04a104d47d.jpg, it looks better
01:51:303 (3,4,5) - I think it would look better like that way http://puu.sh/mKtau/a7ec2ff3b9.jpg
01:55:053 (3,4,5) - Same as above http://puu.sh/mKtg8/944d10040a.jpg
01:58:803 (3,4,5) - Same thing again http://puu.sh/mKtm1/4167668f14.jpg
02:25:288 (4,5,6) - And again http://puu.sh/mKtxZ/36d95ef17b.jpg
02:27:749 (4,5) - Place that slider on the circle
02:28:686 (7,8) - ^
02:29:741 (1,2,3,4) - That looks odd, consider changing it into something like that http://puu.sh/mKtRG/0d6959969b.jpg
02:38:413 (4,5) - Place that circle a little bit further (1,40x or something like that)
02:39:585 (1,2,3,4) - I think it will look better if you will place it like that http://puu.sh/mKu7b/ddbe290838.jpg
02:41:811 (1,2) - Place the slider on the circle
02:43:335 (5,6,7) - This looks weird, if you will place it like that http://puu.sh/mKugA/7fe4f86d78.jpg it will look better
02:47:788 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/mKuwn/d564924bef.jpg
02:53:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That looks kinda ugly, think about changing it to something like that http://puu.sh/mKuLg/92503a0e3b.jpg http://puu.sh/mKuN2/d42b5ad674.jpg http://puu.sh/mKuPG/3cac8713cb.jpg

I hope I helped, good luck!

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-01-26T19:06:18+00:00

Szarlotek wrote:
Hello there

02:25:288 (4,5,6) - And again http://puu.sh/mKtxZ/36d95ef17b.jpg changed
02:27:749 (4,5) - Place that slider on the circle ok
02:28:686 (7,8) - ^ ok
02:29:741 (1,2,3,4) - That looks odd, consider changing it into something like that http://puu.sh/mKtRG/0d6959969b.jpg no its fine, there are 4 drum hits and here 02:30:210 - is passive sound, thats why i choose slider, also your option is way too hard, if i ever change this moment that would be rather 2 1/4 sliders + note but not 5 notes stream
02:38:413 (4,5) - Place that circle a little bit further (1,40x or something like that) ok,why not
02:39:585 (1,2,3,4) - I think it will look better if you will place it like that http://puu.sh/mKu7b/ddbe290838.jpg changed
02:41:811 (1,2) - Place the slider on the circle i think its fine
02:43:335 (5,6,7) - This looks weird, if you will place it like that http://puu.sh/mKugA/7fe4f86d78.jpg it will look better i dont think so, it flows pretty well imo
02:47:788 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/mKuwn/d564924bef.jpg ok
02:53:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That looks kinda ugly, think about changing it to something like that http://puu.sh/mKuLg/92503a0e3b.jpg http://puu.sh/mKuN2/d42b5ad674.jpg http://puu.sh/mKuPG/3cac8713cb.jpg changed

I hope I helped, good luck!

Yes you helped a lot, thank you Szarlotek!

code: http://puu.sh/mKBC6/105aad4725.osu

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-01-26T19:18:09+00:00

Szarlotek wrote:
Hello there

00:26:225 (6,7,8,9,10) - That's a bit weird, you should place these four circles right under the slider, not stack them next to it May be
01:05:131 (2,3,4) - Consider changing that 1/4 reverse slider into two 1/4 sliders without reverse and so on May be, i'll try to do something like that
01:30:561 (1,2,3,4) - Consider placing these sliders like that http://puu.sh/mKt08/04a104d47d.jpg, it looks better I'll try
01:51:303 (3,4,5) - I think it would look better like that way http://puu.sh/mKtau/a7ec2ff3b9.jpg ✔
01:55:053 (3,4,5) - Same as above http://puu.sh/mKtg8/944d10040a.jpg ✔
01:58:803 (3,4,5) - Same thing again http://puu.sh/mKtm1/4167668f14.jpg ✔

I hope I helped, good luck!

Thx

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2016-01-28T12:30:37+00:00

привет

генерал:
од очень низок -> электронная музыка и постоянный бпм не требуют каких-то послаблений в од, а 8+ будет более состязательным для аккураси игроков и более привлекательным в плане награды за хорошую точность на карте
на желтом кк не видно рипит стрелки, сделай его темнее

Marathon:
00:27:280 (1) - more accurate placement will be on 00:27:163 () - because lyrics starts from here, there is no real emphasize on 00:27:280 (1) , and it much easier in terms of pliability to play 1/2 than 3/4
00:37:710 (2) - extended with no support from music, will be better to end on 00:38:178 () - because there is noticeable beat
from 00:34:428 (2) - till 00:48:491 (9) -
it's better to use soft set on slider ends without stressed beats 00:34:428 (2,3) - and for extended 00:39:350 (5) - just plain normal set on both sides sounds like just spam and doesn't follows music
01:07:241 (2,1) - incising spacing here to better stress strong beat on 01:07:710 () in music can be good
01:12:866 (4) - can be treated as trap slider with this transition on 01:13:335 (1), imo better version will be something like usual 1-repeat slider + 2 circles http://puu.sh/mMHFC/f52c307e62.jpg
01:13:803 (4) - ^ same here, for example: http://puu.sh/mMHHt/03d632d9c2.jpg
01:16:616 (4,1) - this one is good because indication of 2 repeats is pretty clear
01:30:561 (1) - staring from upbeat after big pause is not a good decision even if you follow vocals start is better to use something more friendly to player and follow actual music beats, for example 01:30:444 () or 01:30:210 ()
01:31:499 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow\indication for 1 repeat
01:31:850 (4,1) - there is no support for anti-jump in music here, also it looks like 1/4 usage which also can be confusing for players
01:32:905 (3) - stressing upbeats with whistle sound arguable here, imo they sounds awkward <- for whole part
01:35:366 (5,6) - make this equal to 01:35:366 (5,6) - or 01:33:725 (5,1) - , atm it's a bit too compressed compared to previous with no support from music
for part from 01:32:553 (1)
following vocals in music's upbeats is unrhythmically here because lyrics is quite separated and inconsistent. It will be hard for players to hit notes accurately if they don't listen this song 100 times to get used to inconsistent lyrics rhythm. Take a note that you skip reference\strong beats in music, for example: 01:32:085 () - 01:33:960 () - 01:34:897 () - etc
01:43:100 (6) - shouldn't be extended
01:54:585 (5) - missed clap
02:07:710 (1,2,3,4) -sliders in this pattern are random placed, try to place them with interaction\flow between

02:16:616 (4) - split to slider + circle, 02:17:085 () - beat is way too strong in music to be sliderend, and must be "playable"
02:17:553 () - ^
02:19:194 (2) - ^ and etc
02:17:319 (5,6,7,8,9) - pattern structured bad, sliders don't have any general flow\interaction between, for example back-forth http://puu.sh/mMJbT/4473149665.jpg structure with jumps on hard beats
02:21:538 (9,10,1) - ^ same here
02:29:741 (1) - try stream + 0.5 sv slider here http://puu.sh/mMJo 6/e93db9538b.jpg http://puu.sh/mMJpj/2893de7703.jpg this will reflect music better
03:08:178 (3,4,5) - spaced wrong, don't use visually equal spacing for 1/2 and 1/4 is there is no really strong indication in music (hint: randomly extended to lyrics sliders are not good indication)
03:09:585 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same here
03:37:710 (8) - clap is excessive
03:47:905 (3) - ^
03:48:960 () - add circle here, will be good finish for this part
04:05:366 (2,3) - and 04:07:710 (3,4) - should be on equal spacing, because music and lyrics are on the same emphasis

04:30:678 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/mMJXg/2bd82dcbb2.jpg - will be on play, space them, use show stacks in editor to avoid such errors
05:33:022 (4,5,6) - ^ same
05:36:772 (3,4,5,6) - ^ and here, and look over your part for this
04:34:428 (3,4,5,6) - pattern structured bad, sliders don't have any general flow\interaction between
04:53:999 (1) - don't start stream from upbeat, that's not friendly to player, I suggest you to start from 04:54:116 (2) - because it's most emphasized beat here
05:11:489 (1) - move spinner to 1\4 from 05:11:460 (6) - , this will be better for converted mods, not necessary tho
05:11:489 (1) - end spinner on 05:13:335 () - with soft sound, because current end in the middle of lyrics of next song makes no sense
from 05:45:210 (1) - look at from 00:34:428 (2) - till 00:48:491 (9) - suggestion

07:24:585 (1,2) - repeat arrow covered with hitburst from 07:24:585 (1) - which is unrankable
07:32:085 (1,2) - ^
07:27:397 (4,6) - unstack this, this technique is very unfriendly to player and shouldn't be used in 3.8SR beatmap
07:31:147 (4,6) - ^ same here 07:34:897 (4,6) -
07:41:460 (1,2,3,4) - imo space them a bit more to make clear separation from 07:42:866 (5,6,1) - patterns <- also applies to 07:43:686 (2,3,4) - and following

no suggestions on Avishay part, nice

gl guys

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-01-28T21:56:52+00:00

од очень низок -> электронная музыка и постоянный бпм не требуют каких-то послаблений в од, а 8+ будет более состязательным для аккураси игроков и более привлекательным в плане награды за хорошую точность на карте ✔
на желтом кк не видно рипит стрелки, сделай его темнее ✔

Marathon:
00:27:280 (1) - more accurate placement will be on 00:27:163 () - because lyrics starts from here, there is no real emphasize on 00:27:280 (1) , and it much easier in terms of pliability to play 1/2 than 3/4 ✔
00:37:710 (2) - extended with no support from music, will be better to end on 00:38:178 () - because there is noticeable beat
from 00:34:428 (2) - till 00:48:491 (9) - [✔
it's better to use soft set on slider ends without stressed beats 00:34:428 (2,3) - and for extended 00:39:350 (5) - just plain normal set on both sides sounds like just spam and doesn't follows music ✔
01:07:241 (2,1) - incising spacing here to better stress strong beat on 01:07:710 () in music can be good
01:12:866 (4) - can be treated as trap slider with this transition on 01:13:335 (1), imo better version will be something like usual 1-repeat slider + 2 circles http://puu.sh/mMHFC/f52c307e62.jpg ✔
01:13:803 (4) - ^ same here, for example: http://puu.sh/mMHHt/03d632d9c2.jpg ✔
01:16:616 (4,1) - this one is good because indication of 2 repeats is pretty clear ✔
01:30:561 (1) - staring from upbeat after big pause is not a good decision even if you follow vocals start is better to use something more friendly to player and follow actual music beats, for example 01:30:444 () or 01:30:210 () ✔
01:31:499 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow\indication for 1 repeat ✔
01:31:850 (4,1) - there is no support for anti-jump in music here, also it looks like 1/4 usage which also can be confusing for players ✔
01:32:905 (3) - stressing upbeats with whistle sound arguable here, imo they sounds awkward <- for whole part ✔
01:35:366 (5,6) - make this equal to 01:35:366 (5,6) - or 01:33:725 (5,1) - , atm it's a bit too compressed compared to previous with no support from music
for part from 01:32:553 (1) ✔
following vocals in music's upbeats is unrhythmically here because lyrics is quite separated and inconsistent. It will be hard for players to hit notes accurately if they don't listen this song 100 times to get used to inconsistent lyrics rhythm. Take a note that you skip reference\strong beats in music, for example: 01:32:085 () - 01:33:960 () - 01:34:897 () - etc May be
01:43:100 (6) - shouldn't be extended ???
01:54:585 (5) - missed clap ✔
02:07:710 (1,2,3,4) -sliders in this pattern are random placed, try to place them with interaction\flow between ✔

Last edited by KappaPraise 2016-01-29T07:02:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-01-29T01:04:35+00:00

Sieg wrote:
привет

генерал:
од очень низок -> электронная музыка и постоянный бпм не требуют каких-то послаблений в од, а 8+ будет более состязательным для аккураси игроков и более привлекательным в плане награды за хорошую точность на карте
на желтом кк не видно рипит стрелки, сделай его темнее

07:24:585 (1,2) - repeat arrow covered with hitburst from 07:24:585 (1) - which is unrankable
07:32:085 (1,2) - ^
07:27:397 (4,6) - unstack this, this technique is very unfriendly to player and shouldn't be used in 3.8SR beatmap
07:31:147 (4,6) - ^ same here 07:34:897 (4,6) -
07:41:460 (1,2,3,4) - imo space them a bit more to make clear separation from 07:42:866 (5,6,1) - patterns <- also applies to 07:43:686 (2,3,4) - and following // I'll fix it if other modders want

gl guys

Спасибо~
Thank you for your mod,

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Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2016-01-29T06:05:28+00:00

@WISPG_G
В части 00:34:428 (2) - попробуй ставить на концы слайдеров софт сет, так будет звучать лучше

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2016-01-29T19:24:09+00:00

Hello

M4M

WISPG_G

SPOILER

00:25:522 (4) - blanket this with 00:25:053 (3) -
00:29:975 (8) - make a stream from the white tick to the white tick (it still has a beat, the slider imo doesnt fit there)
00:42:163 (3) - blanket with this 00:41:460 (1) -
01:07:241 (2) - make the approach circle blanket with this slider 01:07:710 (1) -
01:48:139 (4) - overlap theslider start with this circle 01:47:319 (1) - cause why not

freebird42

SPOILER

02:54:116 (3) - blanket with slider start 02:53:647 (2) -
03:03:725 (9) - ctrl+g maybe? since itll match the next circle then look pretty kek 03:04:428 (1) -
03:14:272 (2,3) - try to maybe make them the same angle thats sorta random
03:30:210 (6) - delete this or make it similar to 03:29:272 (5) - since the beat is the same at that point anyway it only gets faster at 03:31:147 (7) - which is ok
03:37:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://imgur.com/0TmdgvM maybe something like this because of the beat change, you can hear it if you listen in closely it changes at the white tick
03:54:585 (1) - turn the volume up to at least 35+% the beat gets louder
03:58:335 (6) - blanket with this 03:57:866 (5) -
04:11:460 (1) - blanket with this 04:10:991 (4) - slider end

CircleChu

SPOILER

plays fine to me just a lot of straight sliders there is some tune id say some styl3

Dailycare

SPOILER

06:37:944 (1) - why start at the same point imo maybe start at the other end (to the left) but maybe thats just me :/
Apart from that it looks fine

Avishay

SPOILER

08:59:038 (4,5) - move this a bit to the right seems a bit squashed
09:07:944 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this might seem really stupid but id suggest something like increasing the distance between each of the triples, by a small amount but so that its noticible
09:26:460 (3) - ooooooh so good
09:32:553 (1) - blanket with this 09:31:616 (1) -
part from that plays fine

Beautiful map, great tunes loving it, hope i helped

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-01-29T20:29:13+00:00

Cooldue7 wrote:
Hello M4M

WISPG_G00:25:522 (4) - blanket this with 00:25:053 (3) - Nope
00:29:975 (8) - make a stream from the white tick to the white tick (it still has a beat, the slider imo doesnt fit there) Um, i dont hear stream here
00:42:163 (3) - blanket with this 00:41:460 (1) - ✔
01:07:241 (2) - make the approach circle blanket with this slider 01:07:710 (1) - ✔
01:48:139 (4) - overlap theslider start with this circle 01:47:319 (1) - cause why not Because spacing

Beautiful map, great tunes loving it, hope i helped

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-01-29T20:48:02+00:00

Cooldue7 wrote:
Hello M4M

Avishay[spoilerbox]08:59:038 (4,5) - move this a bit to the right seems a bit squashed It's distanced equally from 08:58:803 (3) - so that's fine..
09:07:944 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this might seem really stupid but id suggest something like increasing the distance between each of the triples, by a small amount but so that its noticible It's possible but I don't find it necessary, I like it the way it is
09:26:460 (3) - ooooooh so good
09:32:553 (1) - blanket with this 09:31:616 (1) - I tried before, it looks too forced, current one is just cool imo, I might change it to something else[/color]
part from that plays fine

Beautiful map, great tunes loving it, hope i helped

Thank you for your time anyway

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-01-30T00:56:28+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Marathon:

02:16:616 (4) - split to slider + circle, 02:17:085 () - beat is way too strong in music to be sliderend, and must be "playable" ok
02:17:553 () - ^ ok
02:19:194 (2) - ^ and etc i dont understand what i should do here, if i must make slider shorter and place note somewhere - i'd say no,2 taps here feels uncomfortable, but if its something else, please explain another one time
02:17:319 (5,6,7,8,9) - pattern structured bad, sliders don't have any general flow\interaction between, for example back-forth http://puu.sh/mMJbT/4473149665.jpg structure with jumps on hard beats changed spacing a bit, but i'll keep this structure for now, because i cant see nothing wrong in it, and i'm not gonna make here back-and-forth jumps, because i never liked such patterns in moments where you're supposed to tap fast
02:21:538 (9,10,1) - ^ same here changed
02:29:741 (1) - try stream + 0.5 sv slider here http://puu.sh/mMJo 6/e93db9538b.jpg http://puu.sh/mMJpj/2893de7703.jpg this will reflect music better seems good
03:08:178 (3,4,5) - spaced wrong, don't use visually equal spacing for 1/2 and 1/4 is there is no really strong indication in music (hint: randomly extended to lyrics sliders are not good indication) changed spacing, hope its better now
03:09:585 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same here and here too
03:37:710 (8) - clap is excessive removed
03:47:905 (3) - ^ removed
03:48:960 () - add circle here, will be good finish for this part ok, why not
04:05:366 (2,3) - and 04:07:710 (3,4) - should be on equal spacing, because music and lyrics are on the same emphasis changed

Thank you, Sieg!

Cooldue7 wrote:
02:54:116 (3) - blanket with slider start 02:53:647 (2) - blanketed
03:03:725 (9) - ctrl+g maybe? since itll match the next circle then look pretty kek 03:04:428 (1) - sorry, i cant really tell the reason but i like it how it is now
03:14:272 (2,3) - try to maybe make them the same angle thats sorta random kinda yes, but there are a few moments like this in my part, so guess sometimes its ok to make smth different, i'll keep it in my mind and maybe change later
03:30:210 (6) - delete this or make it similar to 03:29:272 (5) - since the beat is the same at that point anyway it only gets faster at 03:31:147 (7) - which is ok well, you're not the first person to mention it, but i feel like in this moment rhythm in the first half 03:28:335 (4,5) - is similar but then it gets more and more intense, so thats why i choose 1/6 and 1/8, but if there is a third guy who thinks like you, i'll have to change it
03:37:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://imgur.com/0TmdgvM maybe something like this because of the beat change, you can hear it if you listen in closely it changes at the white tick i agree that beat changes, but i already tryed to emphasize it using hitsounds, making here jump streams would be too nazi its not even 4 stars
03:54:585 (1) - turn the volume up to at least 35+% the beat gets louder hmm, in diff where i make my part i actually have here 45%, i guess it's WISPG_G changed volume here
03:58:335 (6) - blanket with this 03:57:866 (5) - blanketed
04:11:460 (1) - blanket with this 04:10:991 (4) - slider end blanketed i guess

Thank you for mod, Cooldue7!

code: http://puu.sh/mOLIM/1f350ed036.osu

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-01-30T08:46:34+00:00

Cooldue7 wrote:
Hello M4M

Dailycare
SPOILER
06:37:944 (1) - why start at the same point imo maybe start at the other end (to the left) but maybe thats just me :/
Apart from that it looks fine // But, um.. yea it's just your style. And I think it's not bad to play.. I'll fix it if other modders recommend to fix it

Beautiful map, great tunes loving it, hope i helped

Thank you for mod~

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-01-30T18:12:30+00:00

m4m ham

[General]
add electro, dance, songs compilation to tags

[Marathon]
00:23:881 (6,2) - make these parallel
00:29:975 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo the ds here shuld be decreasing instead of increasing
00:44:975 (1,2) - imo u shuld remap (2) so it perfect blanket with (1)
00:48:960 (1,2) - imo these jumps (not only this one) is a bit undermapped compared to the upcoming slider squares
01:00:210 (1,2,3,4) - ds
01:16:381 (2,3,4) - shouldnt be stacked imo, u didnt stack similiar rhythm earlier
01:18:256 (2,3,4,5,6) - instead, these should be stackd
01:32:905 (3) - try rotate this so sliderpath wont overlap 01:33:491 (4) would look cleaner and also easier to read aswell
01:37:710 (7,8) - imo merge these note to a slider would fit more and its a nice sendoff cuz music in next part is a little more filled up
02:09:585 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not really big issue but maybe try make this square symmetry for cleanness
02:11:928 (1,2,3,4) - streams like this should b kinked at red tick. lol

02:17:670 (3) - i dont hear any sound here, maybe delete this note
02:38:413 (4) - slider should be kinked at slidertick? o.o
02:56:928 (2,3,4) - make perfect triangle pls
03:07:710 (2,3,4) - imo this part would flow better if keep ds
03:32:085 (1) - place this somewhere liek x265 y177 would be better
03:38:647 (7) - slider should be facing bit more downward to make it flow better with the curvestream before
03:45:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad curve
04:09:585 (1,2) - the slider should be pointing to circle, for flow
04:23:413 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4435410 look at the 1 2 3 circles, make them a constant straight line would b better
04:24:116 (4,1) - strong, shoudnt stack imo

04:29:272 (3) - just stack on (1)'s end would b cleaner
04:40:522 (1,2,3,4) - make slider heads form a perfect curve
04:52:710 (1) - 04:53:647 (4) - split to circles maybe cuz music went stronger there
04:57:983 - the sound here is important imo, should b clickable
05:01:733 - ^ (there are some more, look out for them cuz wont point anymore of these)
05:25:053 (2) - this is strong, why stack ??
05:44:272 (3,4,1) - imo keep ds here would play nicer cuz (1) is strong zz
05:48:491 (3,4) - should this be vertical?
06:07:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - strong red ticks here got ignored :v
06:22:710 (1) - imo sound like ''hey'' thing should b slider

06:31:850 (2) - maybe stack on (1) to make it symmetry with how you stack 06:30:678 (3,1)
06:53:647 (3) - imo this should be curved slider cuz it would flow alot better also make 06:54:116 (4) - easier to read
07:18:960 (1,2,3,4) - undermapped compare to earlier sliders
07:25:991 (5,1) - make parallel
good part

08:36:772 (1,2) - play nicer if space it like 08:35:366 (2,1,2) - imo
08:48:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo straight stream dont fit well here, curve it a bit maybe
08:50:131 (9,10,11) - ds
08:59:038 (4,5) - imo this should be a little jump instead cuz theyre strong
09:16:616 - triples here should be ignored imo, u mapped it earlier and now it feels empty cuz u skip it
09:41:460 (1,1,2) - should keep ds here imo cuz theyre same sounds
09:57:397 (1,2) - this jump could have bit lesser ds
10:17:301 (1) - imo place this around x96 y124 would b nice addition cuz it fits with the circles in the bg, like u did here 10:15:197 (2,3,1)

gl

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-01-30T19:42:58+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m ham

[General]
add electro, dance, songs compilation to tags

[Marathon]
00:23:881 (6,2) - make these parallel ✔
00:29:975 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo the ds here shuld be decreasing instead of increasing Nope, imo =)
00:44:975 (1,2) - imo u shuld remap (2) so it perfect blanket with (1) ✔
00:48:960 (1,2) - imo these jumps (not only this one) is a bit undermapped compared to the upcoming slider squares I do not think so, there nothing rly wrong, thats ok imo
01:00:210 (1,2,3,4) - ds ✔
01:16:381 (2,3,4) - shouldnt be stacked imo, u didnt stack similiar rhythm earlier ✔
01:18:256 (2,3,4,5,6) - instead, these should be stackd Nope
01:32:905 (3) - try rotate this so sliderpath wont overlap 01:33:491 (4) would look cleaner and also easier to read aswell Its ok i think
01:37:710 (7,8) - imo merge these note to a slider would fit more and its a nice sendoff cuz music in next part is a little more filled up May be
02:09:585 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not really big issue but maybe try make this square symmetry for cleanness ✔
02:11:928 (1,2,3,4) - streams like this should b kinked at red tick. lol Um, idk

Thx for mod

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-01-30T19:45:18+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m ham

08:36:772 (1,2) - play nicer if space it like 08:35:366 (2,1,2) - imo Nah.. It's intentional and it's not really part of the pattern.
08:48:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo straight stream dont fit well here, curve it a bit maybe It's slighlty rotated for like 1 degree lol, I don't find more rotation too fitting
08:50:131 (9,10,11) - ds That doesn't really hurt, increased just before the rhythm changed.
08:59:038 (4,5) - imo this should be a little jump instead cuz theyre strong I agree it could work but this pattern is different
09:16:616 - triples here should be ignored imo, u mapped it earlier and now it feels empty cuz u skip it I mapped the triplets before then because there were no vocals, after the vocals started I ignored them
09:41:460 (1,1,2) - should keep ds here imo cuz theyre same sounds I focus pattern rather than spacing here
09:57:397 (1,2) - this jump could have bit lesser ds That's not really a jump >.> I see why you are suggesting it, but it's supposed tobe a mirror of 09:55:522 (1,2,3) -
10:17:301 (1) - imo place this around x96 y124 would b nice addition cuz it fits with the circles in the bg, like u did here 10:15:197 (2,3,1) Oh cool, glad someone found what I did heh

gl

SPOILER

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Dailycare

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Dailycare 2016-01-31T01:42:29+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m ham

[Marathon]
06:31:850 (2) - maybe stack on (1) to make it symmetry with how you stack 06:30:678 (3,1)
06:53:647 (3) - imo this should be curved slider cuz it would flow alot better also make 06:54:116 (4) - easier to read
07:18:960 (1,2,3,4) - undermapped compare to earlier sliders
07:25:991 (5,1) - make parallel // just fixed blanket
good part

gl

Thanks,

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Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-01-31T11:17:33+00:00

Hello! M4M queue

BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
Reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

Color coding

Importance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment

General

The OD is VERY high for a 3,7* Marathon. It will ruin typical hard/insane player's acc immensely. Consider reducing it to 8 or 7.5
The storyboard isn't really flashy, so I don't know how necessary the epilepsy warning is.

Marathon

WISPG_G:
00:20:835 - You're skipping main beats, which in many cases is a problem. Even though I know this follows the vocals, you should consider adding the main beats in somehow. I'm not addressing other main beat issues for WISPG_G's part, unless I find them important.
00:24:350 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:585 (2) - This part hits the main beat, so NC.
00:29:975 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I see what you want to do, but try to make a single tap hit the main beat instead.
00:37:475 (1) - Remove NC
00:37:710 (2) - Hits main beat, so NC
00:44:975 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:210 (2) - Hits main beat, so NC
00:50:835 (5) - NC
00:52:241 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:585 (5) - NC (If you don't the the 00:50:835 NC, don't take this one either.)
01:14:272 (5) - NC
01:54:116 (3,4,5) - Weird overlap with the previous slider and note

Freebird42:
02:17:085 (5) - Main beat, NC
02:17:319 (1) - Thus, remove NC here
02:20:835 (6) - NC, main beat
02:24:585 (6) - NC, main beat
02:24:819 (1) - Remove NC
02:24:819 (1,2,3) - Pretty hardcore spacing and angles for a 3,7* song
02:28:335 (6) - NC
02:36:538 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:710 (2) - NC
02:41:460 (5) - NC
02:46:147 (1) - Remove NC
02:47:085 (2) - NC
^ I hope you get the idea of what I'm suggesting with the NC's, I'm a bit confused about how you use them. (Sorry if I missed a pattern though!)
03:11:928 (1,2,3) - Slow stack, you previously had a triple on 03:02:788 (6,7,8), so it can get a little confusing for the normal hard/insane player. Try to space them.

CircleChu:
04:45:678 (2,3,4) - Try to make the start of the slider and the two notes make a triangle pattern

04:53:999 (1) - Remove NC, since some people would skip the beat, since you DS'ed it 1,5x when the stream is 1.0x (You can also just DS 1.0x for the note instead)
04:59:272 (4) - Make it the same linear pattern as 04:58:569 (2).
05:45:210 (1,2) - This blanket looks a little weird, consider spacing them a bit further away from each other.
05:45:678 (2,3) - ^^
06:00:210 (8) - NC
06:13:334 (9) - NC

Dailycare:
07:29:272 (1,2,3,4) - Weird stack! Consider spacing.
Not all that much to point out I think.

Avishay:
08:33:960 (5) - Main beat, consider NC
09:18:960 (3) - Main beat, consider NC
09:22:710 (3) - ^^
09:26:460 (3) - ^^
09:30:210 (3) - ^^
Apart from the NC's, nothing to point out.

I hope my mod was of use!

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-01-31T14:10:31+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
Hello! M4M queue

General
The OD is VERY high for a 3,7* Marathon. It will ruin typical hard/insane player's acc immensely. Consider reducing it to 8 or 7.5 Okay
The storyboard isn't really flashy, so I don't know how necessary the epilepsy warning is. Idk, i am still thibk about SB, may be there will be it.

Marathon
WISPG_G:
00:20:835 - You're skipping main beats, which in many cases is a problem. Even though I know this follows the vocals, you should consider adding the main beats in somehow. I'm not addressing other main beat issues for WISPG_G's part, unless I find them important. Um, i dont hear any beats there
00:24:350 (1) - Remove NC May be
00:24:585 (2) - This part hits the main beat, so NC. ^
00:29:975 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I see what you want to do, but try to make a single tap hit the main beat instead. This part looks fine
00:37:475 (1) - Remove NC Nope
00:37:710 (2) - Hits main beat, so NC ^
00:44:975 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:45:210 (2) - Hits main beat, so NC ^
00:50:835 (5) - NC Dont see any reasons to do that
00:52:241 (1) - Remove NC This NC signal, what something happing here
00:54:585 (5) - NC (If you don't the the 00:50:835 NC, don't take this one either.) Yep, i am not
01:14:272 (5) - NC Ok
01:54:116 (3,4,5) - Weird overlap with the previous slider and note There no overlaps

Thx for mod

CircleChu

190 posts

Joined May 2012

CircleChu 2016-01-31T15:47:44+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
04:29:272 (3) - just stack on (1)'s end would b cleaner I did something else.
04:40:522 (1,2,3,4) - make slider heads form a perfect curve Yes.
04:52:710 (1) - 04:53:647 (4) - split to circles maybe cuz music went stronger there Nope.
04:57:983 - the sound here is important imo, should b clickable Don`t think so.
05:01:733 - ^ (there are some more, look out for them cuz wont point anymore of these) ^
05:25:053 (2) - this is strong, why stack ?? Looks fine to me.
05:44:272 (3,4,1) - imo keep ds here would play nicer cuz (1) is strong zz Looks fine to me.
05:48:491 (3,4) - should this be vertical? Why? I`ll try 45% rotate.
06:07:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - strong red ticks here got ignored :v Not really..
06:22:710 (1) - imo sound like ''hey'' thing should b slider Don`t think so.

Spork Lover wrote:
CircleChu
04:45:678 (2,3,4) - Try to make the start of the slider and the two notes make a triangle pattern Okay.
04:53:999 (1) - Remove NC, since some people would skip the beat, since you DS'ed it 1,5x when the stream is 1.0x (You can also just DS 1.0x for the note instead)
04:59:272 (4) - Make it the same linear pattern as 04:58:569 (2). Why..?
05:45:210 (1,2) - This blanket looks a little weird, consider spacing them a bit further away from each other. Looks perfect enough to me.
05:45:678 (2,3) - ^^
06:00:210 (8) - NC Why, if that`s the last note of combo?
06:13:334 (9) - NC ^

Thanks for mod!

heere

http://puu.sh/mQDCI/5da984b7c9.txt

Spagett

54 posts

Joined September 2015

Spagett 2016-01-31T19:20:24+00:00

Before looking at this, I just want to compliment all of the mappers who helped map the song. It was done very well, definitely playable. Great Job! Also, please take this mod gently, as the mapping is fine, but most of my suggestions are opinions.

WISPG_G

SPOILER

-02:00:210 (1,1,1,1) - I would replace these with slow sliders, because spinners award easy points. If you don't want to put sliders, I can understand why, but I just think sliders represent something starting or ending. something like 02:30:210 (1) - , an interesting, slow slider.

Freebird42

SPOILER

02:29:741 (1,2,3,4,1) - The slider isn't stacked with the other notes. Also, I would change the last slider to match the combo color of the other notes I've highlighted

CircleChu

SPOILER

6:14:741 - There are a LOT of note stacks here. That's not a problem, but having them a little spaced would prevent the stop go cursor flow

DailyCare

SPOILER

07:08:413 (3,4,5) - this part is somewhat pushing itself out of the box. I know you can still play it and a lot of maps do that, but it might be easier for the player (considering the skill difficulty) to stick closer to the center than the edge. That is just preference

Avishay

SPOILER

09:18:960 (3,4,5) - this stack just looks... odd. I would recommend changing it. Also, near the end, please put a spinner! Please!

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-01-31T23:52:18+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
02:17:670 (3) - i dont hear any sound here, maybe delete this note yes, good catch
02:38:413 (4) - slider should be kinked at slidertick? o.o i dont think this is a big deal
02:56:928 (2,3,4) - make perfect triangle pls ok
03:07:710 (2,3,4) - imo this part would flow better if keep ds i've been told to not use equal spacing for 1/2 and 1/4, so...
03:32:085 (1) - place this somewhere liek x265 y177 would be better moved 03:31:147 (7) - down instead
03:38:647 (7) - slider should be facing bit more downward to make it flow better with the curvestream before ok
03:45:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad curve fixed
04:09:585 (1,2) - the slider should be pointing to circle, for flow moved 04:10:288 (2) -
04:23:413 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4435410 look at the 1 2 3 circles, make them a constant straight line would b better fixed
04:24:116 (4,1) - strong, shoudnt stack imo i think its ok

gl

Thank you for mod, Deppyforce!

Spork Lover wrote:
Freebird42:
02:17:085 (5) - Main beat, NC ok
02:17:319 (1) - Thus, remove NC here
02:20:835 (6) - NC, main beat ok
02:24:585 (6) - NC, main beat here i think its better to start nc with folowing note,it looks better imo
02:24:819 (1) - Remove NC
02:24:819 (1,2,3) - Pretty hardcore spacing and angles for a 3,7* song yes, but its playable i think
02:28:335 (6) - NC ok
02:36:538 (1) - Remove NC i put this only because of folowpoints, that leads you to the next slider, i actually think its okay
02:37:710 (2) - NC
02:41:460 (5) - NC ok
02:46:147 (1) - Remove NC same reason of putting nc as before
02:47:085 (2) - NC
^ I hope you get the idea of what I'm suggesting with the NC's, I'm a bit confused about how you use them. (Sorry if I missed a pattern though!) no problem, thank you for checking nc's, because some of them are really placed randomly and i dont know why i didnt fixed them myself
03:11:928 (1,2,3) - Slow stack, you previously had a triple on 03:02:788 (6,7,8), so it can get a little confusing for the normal hard/insane player. Try to space them. sorry, but i feel like this should be stacked

Thank you, Spork Lover!

Spagett wrote:
02:29:741 (1,2,3,4,1) - The slider isn't stacked with the other notes. Also, I would change the last slider to match the combo color of the other notes I've highlighted yep, now everything stacked properly but i will kepp nc for this slider

Thank you, Spagett!

code: http://puu.sh/mRaPf/48834147e1.osu

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-01T11:28:40+00:00

to two modders,

fixed all

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 461460
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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TitleUnicode:2015 in 10 Minutes
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ArtistUnicode:Dzeko & Torres
Creator:WISPG_G
Version:dddd
Source:
Tags:freebird42 CircleChu Dailycare Avishay marathon
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9
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Tony

1,510 posts

Joined July 2010

Tony 2016-02-01T20:40:50+00:00

Hello all! WISPG_G asked me to check this and I accepted his request.

After playing this collab and checking it a few times in editor I concluded that it needs just a bit more work in order to get it ranked/approved. Hopefully, with my mod I will correct some flaws of the current state of the map and help you in your way!

I like the idea of mapping this kind of collection of songs mixed together! And also, I think that the mappers involved in the collab have mapping styles that blend in pretty well. Great job : D !

I have some suggestions that, in my opinion, will fix some flow/rhythm issues. Here we go:

WISPG_G
At first I want to point out that the hitsounds at the beginning felt too noisy to me, especially the claps. I highly suggest to reduce their volume by at least 10%. (Im talking about the section 00:18:960 - 00:33:960)
00:18:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - I don't believe that starting the map with streams like these is a good idea. They feel too sudden. I'd make them plain 1/2 stacks. Also there's no indication in the song that there should be streams there.
00:48:725 - I feel that adding a circle here would be a good idea.
00:48:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:52:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lets add some more creativity! Why don't you, instead of using anti-jumps there, create some cute polygons or other nice shapes? As a player I didn't feel like enjoying them that much.. I was waiting for something to happen. Indeed this happened 00:52:241 (1,2,1) - but it still didn't feel enough. You could start by having small squares, and then increase the spacing gradually.
00:56:225 - to be consistent in rhythm, adding a note here you will follow the rhythm in the same way as these 3 -> 00:52:241 (1,2,1) -
01:02:085 - 01:03:491 - The vocals offer so much in this section. I advise you to follow the vocal line instead..
01:55:991 (5) - I think that the flow could be improved here if you would make that slider a curved one. Something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4440302

freebird42
02:17:085 (1) - it would make the triplet formed by slider (2) and circle (3) a bit more readable if you would un-stack this circle with the slider (2)
02:17:553 (3,4) - you really need to increase the spacing between them, or at least move it farther from the slider (2) . Having normal distance snap feels a bit odd in this portion where 2.0x spacing was more used..
02:19:194 (2) - for hitsounding consistency, add clap at the last repeat of the slider
02:35:366 (4) - move this 1 or 2 grids to the left. it is hard to see because it hides behind the previous slider. and also the next slider is a little bit hidden, so it would fix that too.
02:30:210 - 03:18:960 - in this section I recommend reducing the volume by at least 10%. Everything sounds too loud in my opinion.
02:55:288 (5,6) - whistle instead of finishes would fit better, and it would be more consistent with the rest of the section since you didn't use finishes only here.
03:02:319 (3,5) - maybe add claps on both? I really feel that it's a bit too empty without them : D
03:03:725 (9) - add a finish at the end of the slider. it fits so good with the song!
03:10:991 (3,4) - the anti-jump doesn't fit at all... I advise you to place the slider (4) at a normal distance snap from (3)
03:11:928 - 03:16:147 - add claps here like you did here : 03:16:616 (1,2,3) - . There are claps in the song that I think you should follow!
03:26:460 - for the circle stream here, instead of having new combo every 7 notes, I think you should add NC when the rhythm repeats. This means adding NC here: 03:26:460 03:27:397 . And for the slider stream I would go for every second rhythm repeat. This means adding NC here: 03:28:335 03:30:210
03:33:960 - 03:49:374 - the same story with the claps.. it would fit so good if you'd follow the song by adding claps every 2 white ticks!
03:44:272 (1) - it's a pretty much useless NC, remove it
03:53:178 (1) - it's a pretty much useless NC, remove it
03:55:053 (1) - it's a pretty much useless NC, remove it
04:15:913 (1,2,3) - if you listen carefully at 25% speed, the claps should be only on the blue ticks (on each slider end, not start). I advise you to remove existing claps and to add them on the blue ticks (slider ends)
04:23:413 (1,2,3) - do the same like 04:15:913 (1,2,3)

CircleChu
04:40:522 (1,2,3,4) - The claps on red ticks (start of slider 2 and 4) is a bit too much. It sounds too noisy to me. I advise you to remove them!
04:42:983 (7) - the clap sounds really noisy because you have claps on previous and next circles... and it doesn't fit the song either because you don't have it in the song... I really think you should remove the clap from this circle because in the song you don't hear it! For consistency do the same here 04:44:858 (5) -, here 04:46:733 (6) -, here 04:48:608 (6) - and definitely here 04:53:999 (1,3,5) -
05:03:256 (4,5,6) - the 3 claps fit well with the song here! great job : D
05:08:530 (4,5) - for a better flow, I think that moving this at the top end of the slider (3) would increase the flow with the previous slider. look here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4450036
05:22:710 - 05:45:210 in this section I recommend reducing the volume by at least 10%. Everything sounds too loud in my opinion (I suggested this also for other mappers in their parts too).
06:22:241 (1,1) - the flow is really bad here... I think that you could try something like this to improve it! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4450056

DailyCare
I think that a lot of new combos are useless in the first section of your mapped part and they should be consistent rhythm-wise. I mean here for example 06:31:147 - you added NC, but in the similar situation you didn't. For example here 06:34:897. I think that removing new combos from 06:31:147 (1) - 06:32:319 (1) - 06:35:717 (1) - would fix the problem. Also follow the same combo pattern in the next 2 copy/paste areas (till 06:50:717
06:35:835 - I think that you should add break there for the consistency with the whole map! (Take a look here 02:13:569 - )
08:19:077 - same story as previous : D
07:41:460 - 08:11:460 - the normal whistles sound a bit too loud here even if you reduced the volume to 40%. Maybe you could reduce by 10% the volume?
I really liked your style of mapping in terms of pattern choice, rhythm and flow. Great job : D

Avishay
08:29:975 (3) - I think that if you shorten this slider so it ends here 08:30:327 it would follow the vocals which are more obvious than anything else there. Also it would be interesting, in case you follow this suggestion, to add a circle here 08:30:444 too. It seems fun to play in my opinion!
08:32:553 (4,5,6) - There is no triplet in the song here. I think that removing circle 5 and clap from 6 would follow the song better.
08:34:194 (6,1,2) - I think that the sudden small distance snap here doesn't fit the song... change the distance snap 0.5-06 to 1.0. It feels better in my opinion
08:45:210 - 08:48:374 - It is a bit too noisy with that many claps... I think it would be better if you remove the claps from the red ticks! And for the stream that comes next, you could remove the claps from blue ticks!
08:50:835 (1,2,1,2) - spacing them like the previous sliders in the stream. even though it's 1/6 it feels like you should click them at 1/8. Also the second NC is useless... I think you should remove it!
09:30:678 (5) - I think it would be better to add nc here and remove the useless nc from 09:31:616 (1) - 09:32:553 (1) - 09:33:491 (1) -. Same suggestion for 09:38:178 (5) -
09:33:491 - 0.6x speed it is a little bit too sudden. Maybe try 0.75x ? Same here: 09:40:991
09:45:210 - I think you can reduce the volume by 10% here since you used those slightly noisy claps there..
10:16:223 (1,1,1,1) - Remove these unnecessary new combos!

That's all! Good luck guys : D !

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-02-01T21:15:03+00:00

Tony wrote:
Hello all! WISPG_G asked me to check this and I accepted his request.

After playing this collab and checking it a few times in editor I concluded that it needs just a bit more work in order to get it ranked/approved. Hopefully, with my mod I will correct some flaws of the current state of the map and help you in your way!

I like the idea of mapping this kind of collection of songs mixed together! And also, I think that the mappers involved in the collab have mapping styles that blend in pretty well. Great job : D !

I have some suggestions that, in my opinion, will fix some flow/rhythm issues. Here we go:

WISPG_G
At first I want to point out that the hitsounds at the beginning felt too noisy to me, especially the claps. I highly suggest to reduce their volume by at least 10%. (Im talking about the section 00:18:960 - 00:33:960) Ok, i'll try it
00:18:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - I don't believe that starting the map with streams like these is a good idea. They feel too sudden. I'd make them plain 1/2 stacks. Also there's no indication in the song that there should be streams there. May be
00:48:725 - I feel that adding a circle here would be a good idea. May be
00:48:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:52:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lets add some more creativity! Why don't you, instead of using anti-jumps there, create some cute polygons or other nice shapes? As a player I didn't feel like enjoying them that much.. I was waiting for something to happen. Indeed this happened 00:52:241 (1,2,1) - but it still didn't feel enough. You could start by having small squares, and then increase the spacing gradually. Well
00:56:225 - to be consistent in rhythm, adding a note here you will follow the rhythm in the same way as these 3 -> 00:52:241 (1,2,1) - Ok
01:02:085 - 01:03:491 - The vocals offer so much in this section. I advise you to follow the vocal line instead.. May be
01:55:991 (5) - I think that the flow could be improved here if you would make that slider a curved one. Something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4440302 Ok

Thx for mod!

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-02T07:51:07+00:00

Tony wrote:
Hello all! WISPG_G asked me to check this and I accepted his request.

After playing this collab and checking it a few times in editor I concluded that it needs just a bit more work in order to get it ranked/approved. Hopefully, with my mod I will correct some flaws of the current state of the map and help you in your way!

I like the idea of mapping this kind of collection of songs mixed together! And also, I think that the mappers involved in the collab have mapping styles that blend in pretty well. Great job : D !

I have some suggestions that, in my opinion, will fix some flow/rhythm issues. Here we go:

DailyCare
I think that a lot of new combos are useless in the first section of your mapped part and they should be consistent rhythm-wise. I mean here for example 06:31:147 - you added NC, but in the similar situation you didn't. For example here 06:34:897. I think that removing new combos from 06:31:147 (1) - 06:32:319 (1) - 06:35:717 (1) - would fix the problem. Also follow the same combo pattern in the next 2 copy/paste areas (till 06:50:717
06:35:835 - I think that you should add break there for the consistency with the whole map! (Take a look here 02:13:569 - )
08:19:077 - same story as previous : D
07:41:460 - 08:11:460 - the normal whistles sound a bit too loud here even if you reduced the volume to 40%. Maybe you could reduce by 10% the volume?
I really liked your style of mapping in terms of pattern choice, rhythm and flow. Great job : D

That's all! Good luck guys : D !

Fixed all, thank you to like my mapping style~

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Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-02-02T14:59:25+00:00

Tony wrote:
Hello all! WISPG_G asked me to check this and I accepted his request.

After playing this collab and checking it a few times in editor I concluded that it needs just a bit more work in order to get it ranked/approved. Hopefully, with my mod I will correct some flaws of the current state of the map and help you in your way!

I like the idea of mapping this kind of collection of songs mixed together! And also, I think that the mappers involved in the collab have mapping styles that blend in pretty well. Great job : D !

Avishay
08:29:975 (3) - I think that if you shorten this slider so it ends here 08:30:327 it would follow the vocals which are more obvious than anything else there. Also it would be interesting, in case you follow this suggestion, to add a circle here 08:30:444 too. It seems fun to play in my opinion! Yeah actually this is pretty cool and well.
08:32:553 (4,5,6) - There is no triplet in the song here. I think that removing circle 5 and clap from 6 would follow the song better. There is, listen closely.
08:34:194 (6,1,2) - I think that the sudden small distance snap here doesn't fit the song... change the distance snap 0.5-06 to 1.0. It feels better in my opinion I agree, it was tight, changed.
08:45:210 - 08:48:374 - It is a bit too noisy with that many claps... I think it would be better if you remove the claps from the red ticks! And for the stream that comes next, you could remove the claps from blue ticks!
08:50:835 (1,2,1,2) - spacing them like the previous sliders in the stream. even though it's 1/6 it feels like you should click them at 1/8. Also the second NC is useless... I think you should remove it! Hm, I agree it is a bit tight, 128 bpm 1/6 is not that intense so okay, NC fixed too.
09:30:678 (5) - I think it would be better to add nc here and remove the useless nc from 09:31:616 (1) - 09:32:553 (1) - 09:33:491 (1) -. Same suggestion for 09:38:178 (5) - Nah there's better here imo, I like the current NC pattern.
09:33:491 - 0.6x speed it is a little bit too sudden. Maybe try 0.75x ? Same here: 09:40:991 I find it okay.
09:45:210 - I think you can reduce the volume by 10% here since you used those slightly noisy claps there.. Sure. WISPG_G please add that since I posted the mapcode just for the circles and such, oh and remove the timing point at 09:57:397 (1) -
10:16:223 (1,1,1,1) - Remove these unnecessary new combos! They're not unnecessary heh, each one for each time I increased the spacing.

That's all! Good luck guys : D !

That was quite useful, thanks!

Spagett wrote:
Before looking at this, I just want to compliment all of the mappers who helped map the song. It was done very well, definitely playable. Great Job! Also, please take this mod gently, as the mapping is fine, but most of my suggestions are opinions.

Avishay
SPOILER
09:18:960 (3,4,5) - this stack just looks... odd. I would recommend changing it. Also, near the end, please put a spinner! Please! I can't find it odd, I like it. As for the spinner, I can't find anyplace to do that, the music disallows me from doing so, so..

As for the NC guy, I didn't accept any of those, sorry :<

Thank you guys for your time!

SPOILER

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Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-02-02T17:23:48+00:00

Small nazi mod. \w/

[Marathon]
01:14:038 (4,1) - немного спейсинг пониже, 4х примерно. Получается, 01:06:538 (4,1) - вот такой же момент.
02:55:288 (5) - как-то странно он выгнут.
03:14:272 (2) - сделай прямым.
03:14:272 (2,3,4) - а здесь какие-то плохие оверлапы, с согнутыми мне понравились больше.
03:16:616 (1,2) - спейсинг.
04:30:678 (3,4,5) - maybe avoid those overlaps.
05:00:678 (3,4,5) - this flow makes me cry.
06:20:952 (1) - unrankable, it must be 1/1 in hard diff.
06:28:803 (1) - same^.
07:43:100 (6,2) - nah, I don't like this overlap
08:59:272 (1) - ^.

Best of luck~

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-02-03T07:11:04+00:00

hello everyone, don't mind my noob mod

[General]

Since your diff name is 'Marathon', it may not appear in tou tags (just ask some pros for I'm not sure about this)

[WISPG_G]

00:19:428 (3,1,2) - they have the same distance in spacing but no in timestamp, which will cause a mislead in reading, so keep 00:19:428 (3,1) - far
00:24:585 (1,2,3) - focus more on distance rather than distance snap, so to keep space like 1.25 before, you'd better: 00:25:053 (2) - 270|42, 00:25:522 (3) - 336|124 or something around
00:29:741 (7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about 00:31:381 (1,2) - 280|212, 00:32:319 (1,2) - 300|228 00:33:256 (1,2) - 328|248, iin which way the expansion of distance could be realized more clearly, which is cool imo
00:36:069 (7,8,9) - same distance
you can set NC on 00:35:600 - 00:39:350 - 00:43:100 - 00:46:850 - ,
besides 00:37:475 (1,2) - 00:44:975 (1,2) - double NC maybe cool (since white tick is also strong)
00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 00:58:335 (1,2,3,4) - why only they are the same :3 you can do what you did for the other two sets, just rotate
01:03:022 (5,6,7,8,1) - could be smoother
01:07:710 - NC?
01:14:272 (1,2,3) - no sense for this flow imo, at least not good for 01:15:210 (3) - cutz it has a different melody from the two before, btw NC maybe good
01:17:085 (1) - since it's NC, I think you'd better keep it farther rather than closer like what you did now. As for the shape, maybe you can try this
01:35:600 (6,3) - avoid things like this, I mean neither overlap nor no overlap. btw you can blanket 01:36:303 (1,3) -
01:43:100 (6,7) - ^
01:40:991 (8,1) - I don't think they have much connection according to the melody, so better to keep them far imo
01:42:163 (3,6) - sliders like these are not beautiful as me, maybe you can cuver them more like this (I ignore the circles for I just mean to the shape of sliders )
02:11:811 (4,1,2) - turn when NC better cutz it's a NC LOL I mean turn at 02:12:045 (2) - is not a good choice and makes no sense

[freebird42]

02:17:319 (2,3) - stack not good imo and it's not common when there is a 1/4 slider before, which makes reading so hard cutz they are so dense
maybe you can take more advantage of space for this part rather than so dense, just spread them out is better when playing imo
03:11:928 (1,2,3) - no stack really, though it don't make sense imo
03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I can't understand why you set NC and turn at these points ;_; maybe things like 03:27:397 (2) - and 03:27:866 (6) - are stronger :/
03:34:663 (3,1) - still sort of close, even you space like 03:39:350 (8,1) - when there is a 1/2
03:44:272 - NC not needed, as which you didn't do that for others
04:00:210 - NC here better cutz there is a stronger beat background

[CircleChu]

04:26:460 (1,4) - maybe curve them more better, like this and this
seems fluent, though I'm not so keen on such simple flows which is kinda dull imo, maybe you can set some small jumps on NCs which will make it more varied

[Dailycare]

06:42:397 (3,4,5) - keep a fixed DS to make (5) more readable? you know it's not a regular rhythm for it
07:29:272 (1,2,3) - not easy to read rhythm (expecially in a such long map), maybe farther better
07:44:389 (4,5) - not good for them to use the same flow imo, maybe ctrl+G for (5) will be better
07:46:264 (4,5) - ^

[Avishay]

08:49:897 - how about NC?

That's all, this map is fluent which I appreciate a lot
Good luck!

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-03T07:41:11+00:00

Misure wrote:
hello everyone, don't mind my noob mod
[Dailycare]
06:42:397 (3,4,5) - keep a fixed DS to make (5) more readable? you know it's not a regular rhythm for it // I think the rhythm is right.. if other modders point it out, I'll adjust notes' distance
07:29:272 (1,2,3) - not easy to read rhythm (expecially in a such long map), maybe farther better //I just changed that double to 1/4 slider, and increase the distance between (1), (2)
07:44:389 (4,5) - not good for them to use the same flow imo, maybe ctrl+G for (5) will be better
07:46:264 (4,5) - ^ // fixed more
That's all, this map is fluent which I appreciate a lot
Good luck!

Thank you to mod~ xD

Namki wrote:
Small nazi mod. \w/

[Marathon]

07:43:100 (6,2) - nah, I don't like this overlap // lol but still overlapped ;w;

Best of luck~

Thanks!

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Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-02-03T16:40:18+00:00

Tony wrote:
freebird42
02:17:085 (1) - it would make the triplet formed by slider (2) and circle (3) a bit more readable if you would un-stack this circle with the slider (2) moved 3 instead
02:17:553 (3,4) - you really need to increase the spacing between them, or at least move it farther from the slider (2) . Having normal distance snap feels a bit odd in this portion where 2.0x spacing was more used.. changed
02:19:194 (2) - for hitsounding consistency, add clap at the last repeat of the slider ok
02:35:366 (4) - move this 1 or 2 grids to the left. it is hard to see because it hides behind the previous slider. and also the next slider is a little bit hidden, so it would fix that too. ok
02:30:210 - 03:18:960 - in this section I recommend reducing the volume by at least 10%. Everything sounds too loud in my opinion. reduced
02:55:288 (5,6) - whistle instead of finishes would fit better, and it would be more consistent with the rest of the section since you didn't use finishes only here. ok
03:02:319 (3,5) - maybe add claps on both? I really feel that it's a bit too empty without them : D yes, you have good ear
03:03:725 (9) - add a finish at the end of the slider. it fits so good with the song! ok
03:10:991 (3,4) - the anti-jump doesn't fit at all... I advise you to place the slider (4) at a normal distance snap from (3) ok
03:11:928 - 03:16:147 - add claps here like you did here : 03:16:616 (1,2,3) - . There are claps in the song that I think you should follow! added
03:26:460 - for the circle stream here, instead of having new combo every 7 notes, I think you should add NC when the rhythm repeats. This means adding NC here: 03:26:460 03:27:397 . And for the slider stream I would go for every second rhythm repeat. This means adding NC here: 03:28:335 03:30:210 i guess its my mistake that i curved stream without paying attention to the rhythm, but i decided to keep nc on the curve moments like this 03:27:163 (7,1) - and this 03:27:866 (6,1) - . for now i hope this isnt something serious, but i'll try to avoid that mistake again in the future but i agree with nc's on sliders
03:33:960 - 03:49:374 - the same story with the claps.. it would fit so good if you'd follow the song by adding claps every 2 white ticks! ok
03:44:272 (1) - it's a pretty much useless NC, remove it ok
03:53:178 (1) - it's a pretty much useless NC, remove it ok
03:55:053 (1) - it's a pretty much useless NC, remove it ok
04:15:913 (1,2,3) - if you listen carefully at 25% speed, the claps should be only on the blue ticks (on each slider end, not start). I advise you to remove existing claps and to add them on the blue ticks (slider ends) yes, thank you
04:23:413 (1,2,3) - do the same like 04:15:913 (1,2,3)

Wow, this was a great mod, thank you very much, Tony!

Namki wrote:
02:55:288 (5) - как-то странно он выгнут. пофиксил, надеюсь теперь лучше
03:14:272 (2) - сделай прямым. тут не понял чет, слайдер и так прямой
03:14:272 (2,3,4) - а здесь какие-то плохие оверлапы, с согнутыми мне понравились больше. я все же пока оставлю так, хотя про него уже сказали 2 раза, так что я подумаю над этим
03:16:616 (1,2) - спейсинг. пофиксил

Best of luck~

Спасибо за мод, Namki!

Misure wrote:
freebird42
02:17:319 (2,3) - stack not good imo and it's not common when there is a 1/4 slider before, which makes reading so hard cutz they are so dense changed it already, now there is no stack
maybe you can take more advantage of space for this part rather than so dense, just spread them out is better when playing imo LOL, actually yes, i already increased spacing in this part 02:17:319 (2,3,4,5,6) - and might do this in others
03:11:928 (1,2,3) - no stack really, though it don't make sense imo okey, since it have been mentioned for the second time and i changed this moment 03:10:522 (3,4) - now i can change patterns here
03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I can't understand why you set NC and turn at these points ;_; maybe things like 03:27:397 (2) - and 03:27:866 (6) - are stronger :/ well, guess i have no choice but to change stream
03:34:663 (3,1) - still sort of close, even you space like 03:39:350 (8,1) - when there is a 1/2 changed
03:44:272 - NC not needed, as which you didn't do that for others removed
04:00:210 - NC here better cutz there is a stronger beat background okey

Thank you for mod, Misure!

code: http://puu.sh/mUr4n/592ead3749.osu

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-02-04T10:01:43+00:00

[WISPG_G]

00:26:225 (5,6,7,8,9) - That's really awkward to play because the first note of the stream is on the sliderend and this stream doesn't really exist.. This could be fixed by removing 00:26:577 (6) - so you'll end up having just a triplet, I also suggest making 00:26:928 (9) - a 1/2 slider, avoid the awkward gap.
00:37:710 (1) - Just end it on the white tick, the current one is too long, or just try any other rhythm, current one is hella weird.
00:41:460 (1) - That wave is kinda ugly, do this in the center grid: http://puu.sh/mVmHm/87a78a56c0.jpg Then if you want to, you can rotate it using Ctrl+shift+R.
00:43:100 (1,2) - This looks like a 1/2, the song doesn't really ask for such huge spacing compared to the previous patterns.
00:45:210 (1) - Like before, too long, make another rhythm.
00:48:960 (1) - This note sounds really similar to 00:48:491 (5) -, so some back and forth pattern here will work really well.
01:02:905 (4) - Even though it appears in the song, I suggest removing it to create a nicer pattern, it plays better this way.
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really find that increased spacing necessary, it makes the stream a bit more annoying than just 4 pressable notes.
01:30:561 (1,3) - Just follow the vocals properly, current sliders are awkward to play.
01:35:249 (4) - ^
01:43:569 (1) - ^
01:46:616 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Okay so this pattern repeats a few times, I have a few suggestions to improve it:
1. Use equal spacings in the triplets, it looks so awkward when the triplets change spacings for no reason.
2. Symmetry would work well with those, because the first half ends with the triplet and the second half starts with one, for example: http://puu.sh/mVn2G/f0f312f1e0.jpg or something like this.
3. You could increase the spacings in each triplet, start from stacked and slowly increase it, just a suggestion.

I might check the other parts later, too lazy atm and I still got other stuff to do.

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-02-08T15:28:48+00:00

Hi

general
• Difficulties have storyboard but [EpilepsyWarning] is not set (Check for quickly flashing SB elements)
Marathon}

• Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap2.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav
soft-slidertick10.wav

• Files unused:
sb\bar.jpg

• Duplicate timing points at:
02:30:210

mara
00:26:225 (5) - I do not recommend to finish the slider on the big white tick make it 1/1 finish on a red tick

00:27:280 (1) - Really blue tick? move it to red to focus on vocals

00:28:803 (5,7) - This overlap...please fix and this weird flow

00:41:225 (6,4) - Little overlap

01:18:960 (1) - Spinner must end 01:23:178

01:39:585 (6) - NC

01:44:272 - Here the vocals are why you missed it

02:48:960 (1) -

So why not do something like this instead:

02:50:366 (2) - it should be 1/2

02:54:116 (3,5) - Stack please

03:34:897 - Circle

04:42:397 (4,6,7,8) - Little overlap

too lazy gl

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-02-08T16:18:48+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
02:48:960 (1) -
So why not do something like this instead:
your option is quite good, but i wanted to make here slow rhythm and map only weak sound which is on white ticks

02:50:366 (2) - it should be 1/2 no cganges for same reason, sry

02:54:116 (3,5) - Stack please stacked

03:34:897 - Circle i'm mapping different rhythm, and i think circle here will break it, so i dont know, no changes for now

Thank you, wajinshu!

code: http://puu.sh/n0rxT/431bfbf5d2.osu

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-02-08T18:56:55+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Hi
general
• Difficulties have storyboard but [EpilepsyWarning] is not set (Check for quickly flashing SB elements)
Marathon} There just nicknames)

• Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap2.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav
soft-slidertick10.wav All of them used

• Files unused:
sb\bar.jpg Ok

• Duplicate timing points at:
02:30:210 Thx
mara
00:26:225 (5) - I do not recommend to finish the slider on the big white tick make it 1/1 finish on a red tick May be

00:27:280 (1) - Really blue tick? move it to red to focus on vocals Vocal stars between red and blue tick, i just start from blue to not confusing players with differrent BSD

00:28:803 (5,7) - This overlap...please fix and this weird flow There no overlaps

00:41:225 (6,4) - Little overlap ^

01:18:960 (1) - Spinner must end 01:23:178 Nope

01:39:585 (6) - NC Ok

01:44:272 - Here the vocals are why you missed it Thats fine
too lazy gl

Thx for mod

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-02-18T08:26:51+00:00

sry late mod xdd
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General

Fine

Storyborad

06:30:210 - about 'CircleChu' offscreen movement looks better x : 800 around

Marathon

00:29:506 (1) - remove slide and circle add here
SPOILER
00:37:475 (1) - remove NC ;can't find NC reason
00:39:819 (2) - this slide end here 00:40:170 -
SPOILER
00:40:991 (5,6,1) - not same DS a little bit werid 00:35:131 (4,5,1) - same to here
00:44:975 (1) - ^
01:00:210 (1,2,3,4) - DS too much there is 5.5DS
01:02:436 (2,3,4) - about flow ;i think jump stream point here 01:02:905 (4,5) - 01:02:553 (3,4) - not here so i suggest this pattern and flow
SPOILER
01:17:085 (1) - slide curve too much
01:30:561 (1,2) - try this rhythm and pattern 01:30:678 - i think need rhythm catch
SPOILER
01:42:749 (4,5) - 01:41:928 (1,2,3) - different circles and 01:42:866 (5) - shortslide little weird
01:45:678 (1) - remove NC
01:45:913 (2,3) - stack
02:11:928 (5) - NC point here ,not here 02:12:045 (1) - and 02:11:460 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this stream a little hard
03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same i suggest to make more easliy
02:29:741 (1) - remove NC
02:30:210 (1) - this slide you can be better
SPOILER
02:37:710 (2,3) - DS too far 02:34:897 (3,4,5) - like here
02:53:178 (1,2) - anti jump 02:53:647 (2,3,4) - over DS
03:02:670 - add circle
03:30:210 (1,2) - use same trill rhythm
04:54:116 (2) - NC point here ;and try like this
SPOILER
06:16:850 (6,1) - avoid overlap
06:34:897 (3,4,5) - use same DS nor 06:35:717 (5) - NC here 06:34:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - here rhythm a liitle hard
06:43:217 (5,1,3) - x73 y289

good luck~!

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-02-18T14:19:53+00:00

Taeyang wrote:

03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same i suggest to make more easliy checked 2014 in 10 minutes and it contains some hard streams, so i think mine stream is obviously not easy but considering low bpm it should be doable for players
02:29:741 (1) - remove NC ok
02:30:210 (1) - this slide you can be better reworked
SPOILER
02:37:710 (2,3) - DS too far 02:34:897 (3,4,5) - like here sorry, i cant see any spacing issue here
02:53:178 (1,2) - anti jump 02:53:647 (2,3,4) - over DS 02:53:178 (1,2) - made jump here, but here 02:53:647 (2,3) - i think spacing is okay
03:02:670 - add circle i'm mapping voice here, so circle on this time is unnecessary,sorry
03:30:210 (1,2) - use same trill rhythm i still think here sound goes more intense, so thats why i dont really want to use 1/4 sliders here

Thank you for mod, Taeyang!

code: http://puu.sh/nctnc/0355a592a2.osu

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-02-19T11:26:42+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
sry late mod xdd
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General
Fine
Ok

Storyborad
06:30:210 - about 'CircleChu' offscreen movement looks better x : 800 around
Yes

[notice][list]Marathon
00:29:506 (1) - remove slide and circle add here Its fine
SPOILER
00:37:475 (1) - remove NC ;can't find NC reason Ok
00:39:819 (2) - this slide end here 00:40:170 - Idk
SPOILER

00:40:991 (5,6,1) - not same DS a little bit werid 00:35:131 (4,5,1) - same to here Ok
00:44:975 (1) - ^ Ok
01:00:210 (1,2,3,4) - DS too much there is 5.5DS Its fine
01:02:436 (2,3,4) - about flow ;i think jump stream point here 01:02:905 (4,5) - 01:02:553 (3,4) - not here so i suggest this pattern and flow Changed flow, but jump not
SPOILER
01:17:085 (1) - slide curve too much May be
01:30:561 (1,2) - try this rhythm and pattern 01:30:678 - i think need rhythm catch Ok
SPOILER
01:42:749 (4,5) - 01:41:928 (1,2,3) - different circles and 01:42:866 (5) - shortslide little weird May be
01:45:678 (1) - remove NC Nope
01:45:913 (2,3) - stack Thx
02:11:928 (5) - NC point here ,not here 02:12:045 (1) - and 02:11:460 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this stream a little hard
03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same i suggest to make more easliy Fixed

Thx for mod)

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-20T07:27:14+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
sry late mod xdd
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

06:34:897 (3,4,5) - use same DS nor 06:35:717 (5) - NC here 06:34:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - here rhythm a liitle hard // 처음엔 그냥 놔뒀었는데, 그냥 고치는게 나을 것 같네요.. 리듬은 안고쳤어요 ㅋㅋㅋ
06:43:217 (5,1,3) - x73 y289

good luck~!

어.. 한국어로 하셔도 됬는데ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 모딩 감사합니다

SPOILER

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313,367,492865,2,0,L|297:268,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,255,493217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,245,493335,6,0,L|410:250,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,493803,2,0,L|363:112,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,135,494272,2,0,L|249:25,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,137,494741,2,0,L|103:21,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,495210,6,0,L|163:340,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,182,495678,2,0,L|287:266,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,115,496147,2,0,L|349:136,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,42,496615,2,0,L|322:-7,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,80,497085,5,8,0:1:0:0:
320,40,497319,1,0,3:0:0:0:
480,40,497553,5,8,0:1:0:0:
312,80,497788,1,0,3:0:0:0:
472,168,498022,6,0,L|464:102,1,50,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,40,498256,1,8,3:0:0:0:
336,232,498491,1,8,0:1:0:0:
365,234,498608,1,0,3:0:0:0:
394,236,498725,1,0,3:0:0:0:
423,238,498842,1,0,3:0:0:0:
453,240,498960,5,0,3:0:0:0:
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