Strategas wrote:

sup, from my queue

[Alone]

I can see you're rather a new mapper so I'll try to talk about more general things than cover up all of your paterns.

offset like ~+15 don't forget to readjust greenlines after! Done

Add hitsounds. Generally you'll want claps on snares 01:07:789 - 01:08:475 (2) - 01:09:160 - 01:09:846 (5) - etc. in this song it repeats at 2nd and 4th white ticks. Use finishes on strong beats of section or something like that like 01:07:446 (8) - slider head. For whistles they can be used on a lot of different beats it very depends what instrument you follow. Done

00:01:618 (1) - in these calm parts try using lower SV. It's much calmer yet you use the same as in kiai. Done

Next, you'll want to stick with constant NCs(new combo). Generally, the easiest way to do it is just new combo on every downbeat( big white tick ) 00:02:989 (3) - 00:04:360 (4) - 00:05:732 - etc Done

Then, try avoiding slider ends on strong beats especially downbeats like 00:05:560 (2) - 00:09:503 (4) - 00:15:160 (1) -

Try to use stronger beats on bigger jumps and not so strong beats with close spacing. 00:07:103 (1) - this is stronger than the rest so you could space it more than the rest. 00:07:446 (2) - this for example is too spaced since it's just a regular beat. <-wow this tip was really helpful owo!

00:22:875 (7,1) - this empty space here is really random rather fill it until you reach 00:23:560 (1) - then you can start your new paterning, but don't just cut off randomly Done

00:27:675 (5) - doesn't really fit, rather use the same thing as 00:27:161 (3,4) - Done

00:40:018 (1,2,3,4) - visually this looks kinda bad even though the idea was good try to make them look more even using DS or you can copy the first two and paste then rotate around a bit Done

01:04:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make streams using stream convertion tool or atleast using ds, don't try to make them manually by just placing the notes randomly. btw 01:05:989 (7,1) - this is a stream jump I'm sure you didn't want lol xDD Done so... jumping streams new way to map(? :B

01:07:446 (8) - you can increase sv here Done
01:09:160 (2) - you don't really want objects close like that also considering the beat is quite strong Done
01:51:503 (1) - should add a green line with lower volume here Done
02:35:218 (8) - well here you kinda did the oposite and reduced the sv instead of increasing lol xDD Done
02:44:646 (6) - this is really a poor choice of rhythm Done
02:56:904 (1) - delete it and map the strong beats here Done
03:06:075 (6,7,8,9,10) - better use 5note bursts starting here 03:05:903 (5) - Done
03:35:303 (9) - uh don't put objects like that on blue ticks make it on the red one instead Done

About aesthetics I can't really teach it it will come with practice but good thing to start with would be using the same DS(distance snap) for sections and visually having objects in the same distance between them. You might want to check monstratas maps to understand it better.

Have fun mapping !

i hate pp wrote:

Hello

Alone
I hope you know since this is below 5 mins you're going to have to at least make 2 more diffs for this I did not know it ;w;, but i'll try to make other difficulties -w-

Okay so first off about overmapping, the map really should start 00:23:918 - here. I think i'll leave it, but i'll take it into consideration to make a lower difficulty

Another thing i'm noticing is the spacing is really inconsistent and funny Fixed, now the jumps looks less randomly

00:40:547 (4) - Put this somewhere else that fits the spacing for these jumps Fixed
01:01:290 (3) - Again about the spacing Fixed
01:11:061 (6) - This doesnt follow the rhythm or the beat Fixed
02:39:004 (5) - This slider velocity is out of place Fixed
02:51:861 (2,3) - Don't stack a hit on this if you didn't before. Try this instead
Fixed
03:35:404 (9) - Either extend it to the red tick or retract it to the white tick. Don't end on a blue one Fixed

Really the only problem your map has is the spacing. Try to keep it consistent especially through jumps.

Good luck with your map

Thanks

i hate pp wrote:

Hello

Ingayne

00:37:290 (1) - Why so many points? Fixed
00:40:375 (3) - ^ Fixed

00:42:947 - Everything up to this part feels overmapped. Try to use sliders more and find a pattern. Working on x.x
00:43:118 (1) - Doesn't give enough time after the spinner to recover Fixed
01:28:033 (1,2) - Place these closer together Fixed
01:28:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Curve this Fixed
01:29:490 (1) - More recovery time Fixed
01:53:404 (8) - Too many points Fixed
01:59:575 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:07:461 (5) - ^ Fixed
03:30:090 - Why Kiai time here? Fixed lol

Just apply what I said about my last mod.
Map is still a mess in terms of jumps and overmap but its much better than your Alone diff. yeah, i think it is better XD

Good luck

Spagett wrote:

Chatlog [Light Insane]

SPOILER

18:37 Spagett: So, on light insane
18:37 Spagett: 01:45:518 (5,1,2,3) - the flow gets kind of thrown off here. Fixed
18:37 Spagett: You jump back to the slider, and it's slightly disorienting Fixed
18:38 Spagett: 01:04:718 (1) - make this kickslider kick on the blue notes, not just the reds Fixed
18:40 Spagett: 01:27:347 (5,6,1,2,1) - each new combo, rotate them by thirty, under the edit tab, or Control + Shift + R Fixed
18:41 Spagett: 02:03:690 (1) - The velocity change may or may not throw a player off. I would advise changing it. Fixed
18:42 Spagett: You're mapping is great, by the way :3333 xD
18:42 Spagett: Just little things, y'know?
18:43 A d r i a n: XD thanks man, im just mapping fou fun
18:43 Spagett: 02:45:347 (3,4,5) - 02:48:090 (2,3,4) - again with the slider velocity change :3
i think i'll leave this part like this
18:45 Spagett: My last little tidbit is, when you're mapping the song, just put on the hitsound then. It'll avoid having to go back and put on the hitsounds later

1. Check your aimod, lot of unsnapped objects
2. I don't know if my computer is lagging or something but this shows that you don't have combo colors set
3. 00:13:633 (6) - move this the way that this would be equally between 00:13:118 (3,4) -
4. 00:18:604 (4,5) - copypaste sliders?
5. 00:19:290 (6,2) - slight overlap
6. 00:19:975 (3,4) - bad blanket, good blanket
7. 00:22:890 (5,8,2) - slight overlapping
8. 00:29:404 (3,5) - copypaste and same y-coordinate
9. 00:31:290 (7) - make curve less
10. 00:32:661 (5,1) - overlap
11. 00:34:204 (6,1) - you can do better blanket
12. 00:35:404 (4) - pretty strong vocal in the sliderend, I'd make that note Do it like this and you instantly notice the difference
13. 00:42:433 (6) - I would make this last to 00:43:633 and spinner starting at 00:43:804
14. 01:04:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing bro
15. 01:07:461 (8) - definitely NC
16. 01:16:890 (9,2) - overlap
17. 01:20:318 (1,1) - NC on red tick wut? And don't give me explanations about emphaziting drums or something just no
18. 01:23:918 (1) - make curve less for better blanket
19. 01:28:975 why no note?
20. 01:29:490 (1) - make spinner start at red tick
21. 01:35:747 (5,1) - copypaste
22. 01:51:347 (1,3) - better blanket
23. 01:52:718 (6) - NC
24. 01:52:718 (6,7) - I'd make these 1/1 slider
25. 01:59:575 (1) - just never, NEVER do simply curved sliders with more than one foking anchor (Unrankable)
26. 02:07:118 (3) - ^ these are first ones I noticed so if you have more of these fix them immediately, won't point them out anymore
27. 02:08:660 (6,1) - just slightly acceptable (consider to fix) but 02:09:346 (2,4) - bad overlap
28. 02:26:147 (4,6) - overlap
29. 02:33:433 (1) - you never start NC on blue tick, start this on 9
30. 02:35:233 (1) - this surprise of Slider velocity here, good
31. 02:39:690 (7) - NC
32. 02:43:461 (1,3) - bad blanket
33. 02:56:747 note here
34. 02:57:175 (1,2,3,4) - smaller jumps then bigger between these 02:58:033 (4,5) - for emphatizing the strong beat
35. 03:11:233 (3,5) - overlap
36. 03:12:261 (1,3) - slightly bad blanket, make 3 curve bit more
37. 03:17:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing
38. 03:32:490 (7) - NC and make some shape for this, this long slider with only one curve is pretty boring
39. 03:42:775 (2) - no sound at the start of this slider
40. 03:43:718 (1) - make this spinner start at white spike
41. 03:47:918 (1,2,3) - better like this

Osuology wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:090 (1) - Could you maybe like make this the same spacing as previous note pls?
00:45:518 (1) - Pls just make symmetrical.
01:10:547 (4) - Why not map beats in between 3 and 4?
01:15:690 (1) - Just properly stack pls.
01:24:261 (1,2) - Space the 2 further pls.
02:09:861 (7,8) - Why the heck you change how the rhythm is all of a sudden?
02:29:061 (6,7) - WHY SO CLOSE WTH
02:30:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I understand it's hard to map but this probably shouldn't be this way. maybe use more sliders?
02:35:233 (1) - Kiai time isn't snapped, fix it.
03:46:204 (1,2,3,4) - What is this mapped to?

[Normal]
whoa SV is way too high pls nerf
00:11:575 (1,2,3,4) - Why anti jumps all of a sudden? No need for these.
00:15:347 (8,9) - Jump? Why?
00:19:118 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why NC? You can't just squander NC's everywhere for sake of reading, that's not how it works. Without these, it's unreadable by most normal players, and thus isn't a pattern you should be putting in a normal.
00:26:661 (4,5,6,7) - Why random DS? It's barely even changing but it is. Keep it the same for this diff.
00:34:547 (6,1) - JEEZ THAT JUMP IS 2.1x DS. ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!? ON A NORMAL!??!?!?
00:45:518 (1) - Again, make this symmetrical pls, and the blanket properly blanketed.
00:50:318 (5) - Is it really that hard to stack something under a slider.
00:51:347 (8,9) - Jump again?????
01:00:604 (1,1,1,1,1) - With this again, the NC.
01:27:690 (1,1,1) - ^
01:35:233 (1,2,3,4) - That confused me as to what it actually is 'sposed to be. I don't understand the rhythm because of stack.
01:37:633 (8) - This not only overlaps with slider, but also with 5. Ugly to me.
02:28:375 (1,1,1,1,1) - you should already know hopefully
02:46:204 (6) - almost 2.0x DS jump in normal.
02:48:604 (4) - virtually unreadable by normal players.

[Light Insane]
00:50:318 (5,6) - Blanket pls?
Overlaps happen way too much and too many stacks are wrong to tell you, so look out for them.
01:18:432 (1,2) - Why jump?
01:24:947 (5,6) - ^ just in general make sure your jumps make sense.
02:03:347 (5) - 4x DS jump is a bit much dude
02:09:518 (2,3) - WTH jump

[Insane]
same as hard.

Lumin wrote:

NM from queue~
Okay I'm too lazy right now to mod any other diffs but there are few things I wan't to point out for you
1)Check aimods in all diffs
2)And all things I pointed out in this diff pretty much applies to other diffs too

[Alone]

1. Check your aimod, lot of unsnapped objects yeah i havent used DS :/ but i already fixed the other difficulties
2. I don't know if my computer is lagging or something but this shows that you don't have combo colors set
   no, but now are configured
3. 00:13:633 (6) - move this the way that this would be equally between 00:13:118 (3,4) -
4. 00:18:604 (4,5) - copypaste sliders?
5. 00:19:290 (6,2) - slight overlap
6. 00:19:975 (3,4) - bad blanket, good blanket
7. 00:22:890 (5,8,2) - slight overlapping
8. 00:29:404 (3,5) - copypaste and same y-coordinate fixed
9. 00:31:290 (7) - make curve less fixed
10. 00:32:661 (5,1) - overlap
11. 00:34:204 (6,1) - you can do better blanket
12. 00:35:404 (4) - pretty strong vocal in the sliderend, I'd make that note Do it like this and you instantly notice the difference changed
13. 00:42:433 (6) - I would make this last to 00:43:633 and spinner starting at 00:43:804 fixed
14. 01:04:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing bro
15. 01:07:461 (8) - definitely NC fixed
16. 01:16:890 (9,2) - overlap fixed
17. 01:20:318 (1,1) - NC on red tick wut? And don't give me explanations about emphaziting drums or something just no xD Fixed
18. 01:23:918 (1) - make curve less for better blanket fixed
19. 01:28:975 why no note?
20. 01:29:490 (1) - make spinner start at red tick Fixed
21. 01:35:747 (5,1) - copypaste
22. 01:51:347 (1,3) - better blanket fixed
23. 01:52:718 (6) - NC fixed
24. 01:52:718 (6,7) - I'd make these 1/1 slider
25. 01:59:575 (1) - just never, NEVER do simply curved sliders with more than one foking anchor (Unrankable) fixed
26. 02:07:118 (3) - ^ these are first ones I noticed so if you have more of these fix them immediately, won't point them out anymore fixed
27. 02:08:660 (6,1) - just slightly acceptable (consider to fix) but 02:09:346 (2,4) - bad overlap
28. 02:26:147 (4,6) - overlap
29. 02:33:433 (1) - you never start NC on blue tick, start this on 9 fixed
30. 02:35:233 (1) - this surprise of Slider velocity here, good xD
31. 02:39:690 (7) - NC fixed
32. 02:43:461 (1,3) - bad blanket
33. 02:56:747 note here
34. 02:57:175 (1,2,3,4) - smaller jumps then bigger between these 02:58:033 (4,5) - for emphatizing the strong beat
35. 03:11:233 (3,5) - overlap
36. 03:12:261 (1,3) - slightly bad blanket, make 3 curve bit more Fixed
37. 03:17:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing
38. 03:32:490 (7) - NC and make some shape for this, this long slider with only one curve is pretty boring
39. 03:42:775 (2) - no sound at the start of this slider added
40. 03:43:718 (1) - make this spinner start at white spikefixed
41. 03:47:918 (1,2,3) - better like this

changed

Good luck! Thanks for the tips o/ working on the spacing xD

Yahuri wrote:

From my queue~

General
Change combo colors. I suggest: variations of blue and green Changed
Add in some custom hitsounds? i'll see what I can do :<
or i hope someone can help me with this =w=

Alone
00:03:004 (1,2) - blanket
00:03:861 (1) - personally i think this note and this note 00:04:718 (2) are too close together yeah bad spacing ;w;
00:06:090 (2,3,4) - make DS larger
00:13:118 (3,4,6) - really close together
00:19:290 (6,2) - ^
00:22:890 (5,8) - ^
00:27:861 (2,3) - blanket
00:31:290 (7,8) - ^
00:32:661 (5,1) - too close
00:33:175 (1,2,4) - ^
00:33:861 (4,6) - ^
00:34:033 (6,1) - blanket
00:35:918 (1,2) - ^
00:36:947 (6,1,2) - blanket at least one of these?
00:37:804 (2,5) - too close
00:38:833 (2,3) - blanket?
00:38:833 (2,5) - too close
00:42:433 (6) - i just dont think this kind of slider is suitable for this spot because its awk looking and theres nothing for it to blanket. I would change it into a backwards C shape.
02:10:204 (6) - ^
00:43:118 (1) - end this at 00:45:518?
02:10:890 (1) - end this at 02:13:290?
00:56:490 - the hitsounding is way too loud compared to the previous section. it jumps from 10-80% (8 times as loud) so yeah I would boot up the hitsounding in the previous section (especially because it is barely audible) and also tone down this section. Recommended: minimum 20% then maximum 70% (70% for kiai only) If you change hitsounds, the volume might need to change again sooo yeah. The hitclaps right now are just really loud.
01:47:575 (1,2) - blanket
02:36:775 (2,3,4,6) - ^
02:37:975 (1,3) - ^
02:39:004 (5,7) - ^
02:39:004 (5,8) - too close
02:40:033 (1) - NC here?
02:43:461 (1,3) - blanket
02:44:833 (1,3) - too close
02:46:204 (1,2) - blanket
03:04:718 (5,6) - blanket

Good luck! thanks! working on it~~~

1. Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10MB without video
2. This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards. //Not sure if you still need this but its in the AiMod
3. No preview points
4. Conflictings tags - The tags on the diffs should be the same on all diffs

1. The tags conflicht with the tags on the Insane
2. 00:28:033 (5,6) - You want to keep a constant Distance Spacing on an Easy diff
3. 00:59:918 (6,1) - ^
4. 01:08:833 (1,2,3) - ^ Maybe Im wrong informed but Im pretty sure you shouldnt change the DS in an Easy (I just assume for the rest you know what I mean and ignore the rest of the DS because I guess you made it on purpose)
5. Aswell as the Slider Velocity you did at several points 01:07:461 (1) - 02:21:175 (1) - 02:35:233 (1) - 03:30:090 (1) -
6. 02:49:633 (3) - Sliderend isnt snapped
7. 01:51:347 (4,5) - the overlap doesnt look good
8. 01:56:147 (4) - Too short
9. 02:10:204 (3) - Slider goes too far of the editor and will reach into the hiterror bar
10. In case you wont change to a constant SV - Why did you slow down on the Kiai? Doesnt make sense
11. 02:51:004 (4) - Overlapping too
    
    Its a solid diff but the patterns arent really appealing. Try to use some nice blankets here and there and general some nice looking patterns instead of the same looking linear "flow". Its a bit boring to watch/play. And yea DS and SV should be constant on Easy and Normal diffs AFAIK

1. 00:08:147 (5) - I guess I can skip the DS again since its on purpose
2. 00:16:718 (1,2,3) - Bad looking overlap
3. 00:15:347 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - general flow suffers a bit on this part
4. 00:21:175 (4,5,6) - I see what you tried here but the music isnt suggesting anything like that so its unnecessary for a pattern like this and you can avoid the overlap with a better DS
5. 00:18:090 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The new rythm starts at the Slider(5) so NC there and you get out off sync because of the repeater as you see at the end after (6) you will have this break in your map. Can be avoid by using 8 1/1 sliders or some variotions like 3 sliders 4 singles 3 sliders doesnt matter just make sure you keep the rythm
6. 00:29:061 (1) - No need for a spinner you can map this
7. Timing section at 00:45:690 not needed
8. 00:53:918 (1) - I would remove this - Correct timimg would be from 00:55:118 to 00:56:490 But I prefer starting at 00:56:490 (1) - with the way you did
9. 01:04:375 (3) - You can repeat this one to the beat
10. 01:12:261 (5,6) - swap 5 and 6 delete the single and extend the repeater | Like you did here 01:17:747 (8) -
11. 01:29:747 (1) - Too short - Better off removing it
12. 01:39:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped for this diff
13. 01:49:290 (5,6,7,8,9) - Overmapped in general
14. 01:56:147 (3) - ^
15. 02:01:633 (2,3) - weird flow
16. 02:10:204 (7) - You can extend this one till 02:11:575 and add Sof Sampleset on the sliderend
17. 02:21:175 (1) - Remove - Same as with the last spinner
18. 02:25:633 (4) - Slider end isnt snapped
19. 02:35:233 (1) - SV change doesnt fit | Same as in Easy I dont think you should use SV changes in the Normal diff
20. 02:35:233 (1,2,3) - and following.. - You get out off sync a lot here with sliders ending on a strong beat and such. You have to pay more attention to the strong beats in the song and map those instead of the small ones
21. 02:41:404 (12) - you should hear that this is offbeat - shorten it
22. 02:52:375 (5) - Overlap
23. 02:54:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a good pattern
24. 03:07:118 (4,5,6,7) - if you listen to the strong beats here its not what you mapped its the "stream" where you mapped nothing | !Doesnt mean you should map a stream - Just make it a repeatslider !
25. 03:32:833 (1) - remove and make (3) a slider
26. 03:38:661 (1) - remove make (5) a slider
27. Remove the last 2 timing sections you added they're useless
28. 03:48:947 (1) - Not a fan of this one either
    
    Wish there were more patterns in it like in the easy this one has too many linear chains of singles. You get offbeat at some points better pay more attention to that. If it helps you keep an eye on the timeline usually the long white lines are the strong beats. Ofc its depending on the song etc but its a good indicator.

1. Why is the beginning not mapped? The mapset should start with the same beat and end on the same. Maybe there are exceptions for GDs idk
2. 00:24:947 (1,2,3,4) - What is this mapped on? Feels awkward and doesnt sound good
3. 00:30:433 (1,3) - Slow SV doesnt flow well here
4. Remove timing section at 00:39:690
5. 00:43:118 (1) - If you want to use it use it starting at 00:43:804 until 00:45:518 and remove all those timing sections in the break BUT In my opinion you are better off removing both spinners 00:43:118 (1,1) - and map this part. It seems lazy like this
6. 01:30:775 (2,3,4,5,6) - Offbeat - Slider (4) and the way you hitsounded it makes it even more audible that its off
7. 01:51:690 (1) - This would be a good pint to add a slower SV - Since the music drops off after the stream
8. 01:58:890 (4,5) - missing some beats between those
9. 01:59:575 (6) - NC
10. 02:02:490 (2,3) - missed a beat
11. 02:05:061 (1,1) - Remove the repating on the slider and start the spinner att 02:05:575 and end it at 02:07:290
12. 02:10:204 (5) - closed circle slider like this isnt appealing at all and confusing to read at some points so you're better off with opening it a bit
13. 02:35:233 (1) - Remove the Timing section before this note
14. 02:39:004 (5) - Here again for example. You started mapping it and prob realized afterwards that something is off. You can even see it in the way you set the combo. Slider (5) is ending on a strong beat shorten it back to the red tick make it a soft sampleset on the end and Either put (6) on the strong beat on the white tick or remove it and add 2 note you dont want to have that slider (6) starting on a red tick. | Add NC after (5)
15. 02:57:347 (2) - Overmapped
16. 03:17:918 (1) - Remove and map the beat please
    The end part after the break doesnt look appealing at all. It looks all kind of rushed and the sliders arent in any good shape nor did you use any visible patterns on the singles

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Anexo el SB + la Easy terminada (Cualquier cambio o adicion que quieras hacer en el SB me avisas por pm), agrega te amo a los tags y agrega la epilepsy warning en todas las diff's.

http://puu.sh/o2mIu/b799604b35.rar

Personelll0 wrote:

Mod for Alone from modreq's


Overall points - The start of the map isnt neccessarily overmapped, but is certainly overspaced. Theres not too much difference in spacing between the beginning and the majority of the first chorus despite the 2 contrasting heavily in intensity. It would also allow you an avenue to add some variety to the map despite the song being relatively simple. yeah! i didn't feel that it was overmapper since it is an extra diff, but you're right it was over spaced. Fixed

00:04:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - its pretty common to avoid angle bent sliders and use curved sliders for calmer sections of music and i feel that would work quite well for the 2 sliders in this section and a couple others in the intro of the song. By changing these but keeping the bent sliders you have in the chorus this would be another way of differentiating the beginning from the more intense sections.
03:48:604 (2) - same here at the end, but the end reflects the calm nature of the section much better due to curved sliders i changed those into normal sliders (curved) it feels better. Fixed

00:16:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - you break circular and linear flow on 4 here when its not a very strong sound, by moving for to fit this flow and keeping 5 where it is youd get much better flow and emphasis. I could suggest moving 4 to form a rhombus/diamond with the 1,2 and 3, if you wanted to maintain the somewhat uncomfortable linear flow while fixing the circular flow

01:05:747 (5) - i think this would work much better as a slider since theres a breath drawn (or some other sound) through the gap in the timeline that would be filled well by a slider

02:07:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this entire section, while rhythmically dense in the music is still much less intense than the chorus and spacing should mirror that Remapped. Fixed

The section between 01:51:347 and 02:13:290 is good because its much calmer and reflects the music, but could do with the rhythms within it being expressed a little more consistently
For example: 01:54:261 (1) - and 01:59:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - are the same sound and rhythm and are mapped completely differently i know what are you saying it sounded weird. Fixed


02:55:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is the final "fill" of the most intense part of the song and isnt really mapped to reflect this, increasing spacing and perhaps using some linear flow with no circular component could really highlight this section. You can also put a triple or 1/4 slider instead of just a note on 6 to try and and some real meat to this section Remapped. Fixed


Overall the map is pretty fun but you need to work on emphasis, both on a map wide and object based level.
My suggestions would be using non-linear but comfortable flow in the beginning, so spacing will be low and then more linear and circular flow with higher spacing for the chorus, emphasising the more important sounds through high spacing between the previous note and the more powerful note.
You can also achieve this by lowering spacing on some of the weaker sounds.
Also, take advantage of this songs really powerful buildups and drops and make them feel more intense than just 1 long spaced stream by increasing spacing in the notes associated with it and mapping them in a somewhat easily recognizable pattern (you did this for a star in the second Kiai i think)

Sorry i cant mod the other difficulties, i could try mod the insane but the rest are certainly out of my ability and understanding
Good luck if you're going for rank, i look forward to playing the finished product, this song has needed a full length map for a while now!

LimePixel wrote:

Hi, request from my modding queue. Hope it helps
Something from the start, the skin blends in with the Storyboard. Especially the slider bodies. Make them some other bright colors instead of gray.


For the Normal, in general I think you should space things out, for example 00:09:518 (2,1). Hard reading for a Normal diff is out of place and confusing for players. Fixed

00:29:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Here, you're mapping most words from the singing portion of the song, but previously you just had long sliders over these sounds. Pick one, I suggest the long sliders (00:23:575 (1,2,1) ) i put sliders. Fixed

01:12:261 (5) - Consider making it repeat once less. There are only 4 strong sounds here but you emphasize the 5th the same way as the other 4, which is very out of place. Same with 01:17:747 (8) and other instances Fixed. now those sliders only repeat 4 times, i think it sounds better

01:35:233 (1,2,3) - If you must put objects to emphasize these 3 sounds, add a 1/4th slider that repeats. These bursts of 3 objects for a Normal is ok but hard to hit especially when it comes out of nowhere. Fixed. i added a slider instead

For the Hard, in general try fixing the hitsounds. Somewhere they're overused, somewhere they're needed more.

00:14:661 (4,5,6) - You can't just throw this randomly after so many slow single sliders. Especially in the calm section of the song, at the start. Fixed.

02:58:890 (3) - Move lower, between 02:59:233 (4,5) - Fixed.

There will be a few of these following spinners that I think are unnecessary, and should be replaced with hit objects:
00:37:804 (1) - 01:54:261 (1) - 02:05:404 (1) . Fixed, but i think that the 2nd spinner is ok, so ill left it.

Other diffs look fine to me, just the things I pointed out above should be taken into consideration for these diffs as well.
If this mod isn't helpful, please ignore it

Einja wrote:

Yo this is from my queue

[General]
What a difficulty spike between normal and hard LOL
You also need to check AiMod (ctrl + shift + a) a lot, a preview point isn't set, and the tags conflict in the insane diff. There are also a TON of unsnapped objects and kiai times. You also need to fix DS issues on normal as well.


[alone]
00:06:347 (3) - You're overmapping stuff placing 1/4 beats in the beginning. There aren't any, and even if they were, they are barely audible, so there's no need to emphasize them at all.

00:19:290 (6,7,1) - ^

00:29:918 (5,6) - stack properly please

00:36:947 (6,2) - ^

00:43:804 (1) - spinner should end on the pervious white tick because that's where lyrics begin.

00:57:518 (6,3,4) - overlap 3 and 4 with slider 6's end

01:05:747 (5) - putting a circle there and ending a stream doesn't feel right. NC it and replace it with a 3/4 slider

01:17:061 (1,2) - why the 1/1 beats, the music barely changes.

01:31:975 (6,2) - blanket

01:33:518 (1,2) - stack slider 1 head perfectly with 2 please

01:46:718 (4) - the slider end needs to be clickable, since a strong drum is there. Replace slider with 2 circles. There are also a TON of other situations like this in your map, please take a look at them.

02:20:661 (1) - spinner should be extended by 3 1/2 white ticks to fit with 02:24:261 (1) -

that's all i have to say
good luck!