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fixed both stacks in my diff lol i suk
btw

Feb wrote:

i see why no one is willing to bubble this loooool
no u
posted

Feb wrote:

[geeeeen]

can u guys pls raise your hitsound volume jeeeeeezzzz - idk i can hear the hitsounds perfectly fine but i'll listen to more opinions

[mäkeli]

man that ar9 dud even spread suggests to use 9.2 and also these huge jumps only in 00:12:344 (1) - this part suggest a higher ar 9.2 - yea right

some hitsounding suggesting if you don't mind - i do

00:45:194 (1) - how about a finish here since theres not much audio feedback to have a good transition into the triplets - no cause there is no crash hit there in the song. I don't give a damn about audio feedback/good transition into the triples players can just git gud
00:16:544 - seems you dont like whistles that much uh how about using a whistle or something on the guitar 1/2's here? since they differ from the other parts - good idea
01:18:344 (8) - i think ur the only person who uses drumwhistle haha , other than that, if you insisted using it here you should use it on 01:18:644 (3,6,3) - these too since they are similar - good idea
00:01:094 (1,2) - are imo normal clap additions, the only time there are the drum claps needed in this part r on 3 and 4 - good idea
00:03:194 (2) - finish - no
01:18:194 (7) - shud be normal addition right - good idea


other things
00:22:394 (2,3) - maybe use a different spacing here? It is to similiar to the beginning where you used the same spacing, but both parts are not the same in th music. might make sense to seperate them in the map too - the spacing is different. The one at the intro has a bigger jump to the blue tick but the concepts are the same at both places
00:22:544 - ^ also why do you silence these sounds? It felt abit awkward cuz i knew from other maps there where triplets so I missed almost all of them since the silence suggests it to be a double here aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa - that red tick is only a guitar sound and everyone knows that guitar sucks. I follow the drums
01:23:744 (4) - ^same thing not silenced uhhhhhhh - more intense ---> different stuff
01:19:319 - purposely undermapping? If yes? YOU MAP VOCAL RIGHT HERE HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA - good idea
01:18:344 (8) - the antijump here is abitclose to the very huge spacing triplet so it plays a bit uncomfortable imo how about putting it somewhere between 6 and 4 like x360 y236? - good idea
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Title:GATE~Sore wa Akatsuki no you ni~ (TV size)
TitleUnicode:GATE~それは暁のように~ (TV size)
Artist:KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS
ArtistUnicode:岸田教団&THE明星ロケッツ
Creator:Deppyforce
Version:MKL's Extra
Source:GATE 自衛隊 彼の地にて、斯く戦えり
Tags:kishida kyoudan and the akeboshi rockets j-rock ゲート jieitai kanochi nite, kaku tatakaeri opening op tehron mkguh kalibe happyrocket88 eeezzzeee flezlin maakkeli
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ay lmao how long has it been
lets see wat i missed

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

  1. 00:09:194 (2,3,4,5) - as i described in MKL's diff , staking loud sounds under others is not a good idea mostly to make this part easier as its 6 straight circles in a row
  2. 00:40:394 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is ok cuz the circles that are stacked are 00:40:544 (3,5) - and they dont support a loud sound or smthng
  3. other than that , this diff contains like zero 1/4 cirlces , i would suggest adding atleast 2 or 3 triples so the spread towards rocket's diff would be nicer i think its okay streams on rocket's are pretty simple due to small spacing
    Cool diff btw

Akitoshi wrote:

  1. 00:09:194 (2,3,4,5) - just some concern as a player, this may be too hard to play as all singletaps on 00:09:194 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - since 200bpm is kinda evil for 6 digits so consider them to make as slider? i stacked it already to make it ez to aim its ok xd
  2. 00:40:394 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
no update
hi deppy
and anyone else reading dis
posted
welcome back lol
posted
m5m eggs dee

  1. Just a suggestion, I think u can separate Kiai at 01:09:344 - and 01:09:944 - . Looks cooler :>
  1. 00:00:494 (1,2,3) - Just my opinion but I think http://puu.sh/sqEV8/fb7ecff362.jpg plays out better?
  2. 00:01:994 (2) - Stack slider tail to 00:01:394 (4) - ? Looks better imo
  3. 00:02:744 (1,2) - Overlapping with 00:01:994 (2) - . What about http://puu.sh/sqF0a/d29b33198e.jpg ? This spacing would work cuz 00:02:744 (1) - has a strong crash sound and 00:03:194 (2) - 's head lands on a drum snare.
  4. 00:06:944 (3,4,5,6) - This looks bad in terms of aesthetics imo. I think u can do something like http://puu.sh/sqF90/54c1f8032f.jpg .
  5. 00:07:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again same here, the notes just seem randomly placed. And 00:07:544 (1,2,3) - dun rly flow well in terms of distance expression imo. Something like http://puu.sh/sqFiL/9604a4066f.jpg maybe?
  6. 00:09:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - same :< Heres wat I thought of http://puu.sh/sqFoB/38a28ab9ee.jpg
  7. Generally speaking, your jumps can be played but they do not look aesthetically well and the flow does not feel natural, try to continue with the 3 suggestions I've made to ur jumps. Also, u dun always have to stack the notes lol. 00:10:544 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - , 00:12:794 (2,3,4,5,6) - , yea u get the idea
  8. 00:21:644 (1,2,3,4) - Curve this stream a bit so it will lead to the curved slider naturally. http://puu.sh/sqFzX/431030192c.jpg
  9. 00:21:944 (1,2) - U can then blanket these http://puu.sh/sqFEC/8a6a522c2e.jpg
  10. 00:22:544 (3,4,5) - This part is more calm compared to the introduction, therefore I suggest less cursor movement. Stack the triplets like u did 00:23:894 (4,5,6) - ?
  11. 00:22:994 (7) - I think this note feels more natural on the right. http://puu.sh/sqFH3/91f3aa534a.jpg
  12. 00:24:044 (6) - This slider plays better curved imo. Also it keeps consistent with the shape of 00:23:144 (1) - , which becomes a pattern and easily recognizable. Furthermore, I think it plays better if u move it up a bit more http://puu.sh/sqFLQ/93f9badb1e.jpg
  13. 00:23:744 (3,1) - Avoid overlap?
  14. 00:26:144 (3,4,5,6,7) - The flow here could be improved here imo. Maybe smth like http://puu.sh/sqFPu/564caf426a.jpg ?
  15. 00:27:344 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion with the previous triplet
  16. 00:30:344 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think u could make this pattern stand out more to emphasize the bounces in the music cuz putting a stream there kinda devalues the pattern imo. U could try http://puu.sh/sqFWC/2417b4a86b.jpg .
  17. 00:34:544 (3,4,5) - same stack thing. Since 00:32:144 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - are all stacked lol
  18. 00:35:444 (2,3,4,5) - Why is there a change in pattern here when the music is consistent the whole part here? U've suddenly inserted 4 1/2 notes here while u havent done so in the map in previous patterns. Just keep patterns consistent?
  19. 00:36:044 (6,3) - Overlap :v
  20. 00:38:444 (6,2) - ^
  21. 00:41:894 (4) - Curve this slider as well? To keep consistent with 00:42:344 (6) -
  22. 00:42:194 (5,6) - Why did distance decrease here? Just stack on 00:41:744 (3) - ?
  23. 00:42:944 (8) - Move this up a bit so it doesnt overlap. http://puu.sh/sqGaI/f49ac6b07b.jpg
  24. 00:44:744 (6) - U can move this up a bit to avoid overlapping with 00:45:344 (1,2,3) -
  25. 00:45:644 (4,5) - I think the flow works better here if u Ctrl G them. http://puu.sh/sqGez/e1f5af22f2.jpg . Also move 00:45:944 (1,2) - to the left to avoid overlapping with 00:45:344 (1,2,3) - .
  26. 00:47:594 (2,3,4,5,6) - Yea the jumps wew
  27. 00:49:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think u can space this more since the music is starting to transition here and u have a NC as well. Smth like http://puu.sh/sqGla/d2f0ca02cd.jpg ?
  28. 00:52:244 (2) - I think the rhythm should be denser in Kiai cuz its the chorus of the song. Remove reverse and add a note at 00:52:544 - to keep consistent with bass drum sounds with previous pattern at 00:51:644 (4,5) - .
  29. 00:54:344 (1,2) - I think u can space this further cuz 00:54:044 (4,5,1) - 's flow doesnt rly feel natural imo :v
  30. 00:55:244 (4,5) - These placements seem forced or smth
  31. 00:55:844 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - :<
  32. 00:57:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing is rly inconsistent here cuz u've made jumps in the previous patterns. I recommend changing 00:57:194 (3,4) - 's placement. http://puu.sh/sqGDK/713b943d65.jpg
  33. 00:57:644 (5,6,7,8,9) - continued from ^ http://puu.sh/sqGIl/731db9145e.jpg . 00:58:244 (8,9) - These can be stacked because its a similar pattern to 00:57:194 (3,4) - in the same combo, therefore it's clearly recognizable.
  34. 00:59:144 (4,5) - The vocals stand out more here imo
  35. 01:01:844 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jump aesthetics and flow ;-;
  36. 01:05:444 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  37. 01:07:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  38. 01:14:294 (4) - NC
  39. 01:27:644 (7,1) - They're touching :< Just move the whole pattern 01:27:944 (1,2,3,4) - up a bit
    I rly worry about the quality of this map, especially in the aesthetics and flow bit. Your rhythm choices are fine but you also have way too many jumps that look exactly the same; which devalues all other jumps that u want to emphasize on in a particular part on in the music. Most of the time distance isnt expressed properly in your jumps according to the music. Dun give up!!
  1. 00:02:294 (3,4,5,1) - Overlap looks bad imo ;-; http://puu.sh/sqH8H/ad07e0f9e9.jpg works just fine as well!
  2. 00:11:894 (2) - NC?
  3. 00:55:994 (1,2,1,2) - I dun see why u need to put 1,2 splits here since the percussion doesnt change to follow vocals here. So 00:56:294 (1,1) - remove NC and 00:56:744 (2) - add NC?
  4. 01:07:844 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - Did u get hacked by Bearizm? :<
  1. Why are u mapping as if its cs 4 ;-;
  2. 00:13:394 (7,1) - Flow inconsistent with 00:12:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - movement imo and doesnt play well but idk about cs 6.9 mapping :v
  3. 00:22:694 (5) - Theres no drum snare sound here to emphasize with spacing like 00:22:394 (3) - , I think its too far
  4. 00:25:094 (5) - ^
  5. 00:28:694 (5) - ^
  6. ur mum


Good luck~
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- G I D Z - wrote:

m5m eggs dee

[General]
  1. Just a suggestion, I think u can separate Kiai at 01:09:344 - and 01:09:944 - . Looks cooler :> no cuz i suck


[Tehron's Another]
I rly worry about the quality of this mapsame tbh, especially in the aesthetics and flow bit.same tbh Your rhythm choices are fine but you also have way too many jumps that look exactly the samesame tbh; which devalues all other jumps that u want to emphasize on in a particular part on in the music.same tbh Most of the time distance isnt expressed properly in your jumpssame tbh according to the music. Dun give up!!

[Determination for ants 6.9]
  1. Why are u mapping as if its cs 4 ;-; lol how else do i map
  2. 00:13:394 (7,1) - Flow inconsistent with 00:12:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - movement imo and doesnt play well but idk about cs 6.9 mapping :v tbh its fine cuz its a bit constant with 00:18:194 (7,1) -
  3. 00:22:694 (5) - Theres no drum snare sound here to emphasize with spacing like 00:22:394 (3) - , I think its too far fix i guess
  4. 00:25:094 (5) - ^ actually i remember why i do this lol, my intention was to make these jump bigger spaced cuz i skipped 1/4s to make this a 'jump map' so i use high spacing when i ignore rhythm to compensate more intense spacing instead of more intense rhythm but now that i changed first one im not going to change it back to this cuz im lazy LOL
  5. 00:28:694 (5) - ^
  6. ur mum


Good luck~
thanks for mod d d d dd d d d
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- G I D Z - wrote:

  1. 00:00:494 (1,2,3) - Just my opinion but I think http://puu.sh/sqEV8/fb7ecff362.jpg plays out better?
  2. 00:01:994 (2) - Stack slider tail to 00:01:394 (4) - ? Looks better imo
  3. 00:02:744 (1,2) - Overlapping with 00:01:994 (2) - . What about http://puu.sh/sqF0a/d29b33198e.jpg ? This spacing would work cuz 00:02:744 (1) - has a strong crash sound and 00:03:194 (2) - 's head lands on a drum snare.
  4. 00:06:944 (3,4,5,6) - This looks bad in terms of aesthetics imo. I think u can do something like http://puu.sh/sqF90/54c1f8032f.jpg .
  5. 00:07:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again same here, the notes just seem randomly placed. And 00:07:544 (1,2,3) - dun rly flow well in terms of distance expression imo. Something like http://puu.sh/sqFiL/9604a4066f.jpg maybe?
  6. 00:09:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - same :< Heres wat I thought of http://puu.sh/sqFoB/38a28ab9ee.jpg
  7. Generally speaking, your jumps can be played but they do not look aesthetically well and the flow does not feel natural, try to continue with the 3 suggestions I've made to ur jumps. Also, u dun always have to stack the notes lol. 00:10:544 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - , 00:12:794 (2,3,4,5,6) - , yea u get the idea
  8. 00:21:644 (1,2,3,4) - Curve this stream a bit so it will lead to the curved slider naturally. http://puu.sh/sqFzX/431030192c.jpg
  9. 00:21:944 (1,2) - U can then blanket these http://puu.sh/sqFEC/8a6a522c2e.jpg
  10. 00:22:544 (3,4,5) - This part is more calm compared to the introduction, therefore I suggest less cursor movement. Stack the triplets like u did 00:23:894 (4,5,6) - ?
  11. 00:22:994 (7) - I think this note feels more natural on the right. http://puu.sh/sqFH3/91f3aa534a.jpg
  12. 00:24:044 (6) - This slider plays better curved imo. Also it keeps consistent with the shape of 00:23:144 (1) - , which becomes a pattern and easily recognizable. Furthermore, I think it plays better if u move it up a bit more http://puu.sh/sqFLQ/93f9badb1e.jpg
  13. 00:23:744 (3,1) - Avoid overlap?
  14. 00:26:144 (3,4,5,6,7) - The flow here could be improved here imo. Maybe smth like http://puu.sh/sqFPu/564caf426a.jpg ?
  15. 00:27:344 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion with the previous triplet
  16. 00:30:344 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think u could make this pattern stand out more to emphasize the bounces in the music cuz putting a stream there kinda devalues the pattern imo. U could try http://puu.sh/sqFWC/2417b4a86b.jpg .
  17. 00:34:544 (3,4,5) - same stack thing. Since 00:32:144 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - are all stacked lol
  18. 00:35:444 (2,3,4,5) - Why is there a change in pattern here when the music is consistent the whole part here? U've suddenly inserted 4 1/2 notes here while u havent done so in the map in previous patterns. Just keep patterns consistent?
  19. 00:36:044 (6,3) - Overlap :v
  20. 00:38:444 (6,2) - ^
  21. 00:41:894 (4) - Curve this slider as well? To keep consistent with 00:42:344 (6) -
  22. 00:42:194 (5,6) - Why did distance decrease here? Just stack on 00:41:744 (3) - ?
  23. 00:42:944 (8) - Move this up a bit so it doesnt overlap. http://puu.sh/sqGaI/f49ac6b07b.jpg
  24. 00:44:744 (6) - U can move this up a bit to avoid overlapping with 00:45:344 (1,2,3) -
  25. 00:45:644 (4,5) - I think the flow works better here if u Ctrl G them. http://puu.sh/sqGez/e1f5af22f2.jpg . Also move 00:45:944 (1,2) - to the left to avoid overlapping with 00:45:344 (1,2,3) - .
  26. 00:47:594 (2,3,4,5,6) - Yea the jumps wew
  27. 00:49:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think u can space this more since the music is starting to transition here and u have a NC as well. Smth like http://puu.sh/sqGla/d2f0ca02cd.jpg ?
  28. 00:52:244 (2) - I think the rhythm should be denser in Kiai cuz its the chorus of the song. Remove reverse and add a note at 00:52:544 - to keep consistent with bass drum sounds with previous pattern at 00:51:644 (4,5) - .
  29. 00:54:344 (1,2) - I think u can space this further cuz 00:54:044 (4,5,1) - 's flow doesnt rly feel natural imo :v
  30. 00:55:244 (4,5) - These placements seem forced or smth
  31. 00:55:844 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - :<
  32. 00:57:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing is rly inconsistent here cuz u've made jumps in the previous patterns. I recommend changing 00:57:194 (3,4) - 's placement. http://puu.sh/sqGDK/713b943d65.jpg
  33. 00:57:644 (5,6,7,8,9) - continued from ^ http://puu.sh/sqGIl/731db9145e.jpg . 00:58:244 (8,9) - These can be stacked because its a similar pattern to 00:57:194 (3,4) - in the same combo, therefore it's clearly recognizable.
  34. 00:59:144 (4,5) - The vocals stand out more here imo
  35. 01:01:844 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jump aesthetics and flow ;-;
  36. 01:05:444 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  37. 01:07:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  38. 01:14:294 (4) - NC
  39. 01:27:644 (7,1) - They're touching :< Just move the whole pattern 01:27:944 (1,2,3,4) - up a bit
    I rly worry about the quality of this map, especially in the aesthetics and flow bit. Your rhythm choices are fine but you also have way too many jumps that look exactly the same; which devalues all other jumps that u want to emphasize on in a particular part on in the music. Most of the time distance isnt expressed properly in your jumps according to the music. Dun give up!!
Guess it's time to remap this old poopy gd :^) I really appreciate the amount of work you put into this mod though and will keep what you said in mind when remapping.
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gross its a tv size XDD

[deter]
  1. 00:17:444 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i would say this pattern is hard to play, consider something like ctrlg 6 and 7's positions, flows better
  2. 00:18:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  3. 00:20:144 (4,5) - would prefer if these 2 ctrlg
  4. 00:21:944 (1,2,3,4) - thats some bad distancing my dude, also really weird to play
  5. 00:23:144 (1,2,1,2) - super high distance compared to 00:24:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - which is much less spaced despite the fact that they're of similar intensity? just rather counterintuitive imo
  6. 00:27:944 (1,2,3,4) - (repeated) no matter how many times these appear i really dont like it. even though it forms a hexagonal grid the distance still feels very weird to look at and often is wayyy less intense compared to other parts because of the low distance
  7. 00:31:994 (3,4,5,6,7) - the distances here are so low without much reasoning
  8. 00:39:494 (5,6,7) - compared to 00:40:244 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - is of similar intensity, i would suggest you make the former more intense
  9. 00:46:244 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - drums came in and pitch increased drastically, and yet the distance is really low?
  10. 00:51:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - bad flow here, my cursor prefers to instinctively move from 5->7 instead
  11. 00:57:344 (1,2) - compared to 00:57:944 (1,2) - is much more intense imo with the increased pitch and drum, and yet the distance between the slider and hitcircles reflect the opposite

    think i'll stop here. i would say aesthetically your map is really really monstrata-like which i just find boring in general. but you've sacrificed a lot of intensity based sections of the music for the aesthetics which i feel isnt really worth it. maybe refer to maps like masquerade for better understanding of mapping basic songs of basic structure and basic intensity variations


[flezlin]
  1. 00:03:944 (1,5) - would prefer if they didnt touch
  2. 00:13:094 (3,4,5,1) - slightly awkward to play imo
  3. 00:27:494 (4) - rather pointless kick, i thought the previous kick here 00:24:044 (5) - was meant to emphasise the guitar but i guess i'm wrong?
  4. 00:42:494 (7) - 00:43:694 (3) - 00:44:894 (3) - NChere
  5. 00:43:094 (1) - 00:44:294 (1) - remove NC here
  6. 00:52:244 (2) - feels like you should just map a hitcircle here, nothign to justify the kick really
  7. 01:01:844 (2) - ^

    not much to say, its really generic. though i feel like your slider-slider distancing isnt done well at places at least it should play alright: stuff like 00:52:694 (6,7,8) - crazy jumps when compared to 00:53:144 (1,2,3,4) - where the music is basically of similar intensity its rather obvious that the latter is a little lacklustre and that you can make them flow better while having the sliders farther apart from each other. else its alright


[high speed x-tra]
  1. the whole concept of highspeed xtras with pointless kicks and weird long sliders kinda tick me off so lol idk good luck
  2. 00:04:619 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - similar intensity as 00:03:569 (3,4,5,6,7) - and yet completely different spacing nice
  3. 00:25:994 - missing beat
  4. 00:26:219 - theres nothing on this beat why is it a kick
  5. 01:11:144 (1,2) - any reason to have 1 extended despite it not being the case for 01:13:544 (3,4) - ??

    i can't mod this because i can't even really play this diff. everything is so forced, like the high SV and spaced streams, which makes no sense to me at all. everything basically in this map doesnt have the aesthetics up to standard and more often than not its a very cluttery sight: 01:23:144 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:744 (1,2,3,1,2) - with patterns and overlaps that make not much sense to me. the distance management is also rather wonky at certain places when im playing the map but i can't specifically point them out to you.

    its up to you if you want to keep this diff at all but ranking it while not being someone who's prominent in the mapping scene might be hard. feels like even monstrata can map hi-speed extras better than this


scary, gl
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Emilia wrote:

gross its a tv size XDD

[deter]
  1. 00:17:444 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i would say this pattern is hard to play, consider something like ctrlg 6 and 7's positions, flows better the point is to make it hard to play so no change X d
  2. 00:18:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  3. 00:20:144 (4,5) - would prefer if these 2 ctrlg doesnt affect much anyways imo
  4. 00:21:944 (1,2,3,4) - thats some bad distancing my dude, also really weird to play not really, i play it just fine ;;
  5. 00:23:144 (1,2,1,2) - super high distance compared to 00:24:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - which is much less spaced despite the fact that they're of similar intensity? just rather counterintuitive imo yea my bad, fix
  6. 00:27:944 (1,2,3,4) - (repeated) no matter how many times these appear i really dont like it. even though it forms a hexagonal grid the distance still feels very weird to look at and often is wayyy less intense compared to other parts because of the low distance i just emphasize upbeats
  7. 00:31:994 (3,4,5,6,7) - the distances here are so low without much reasoning tried tom ake it bigger
  8. 00:39:494 (5,6,7) - compared to 00:40:244 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - is of similar intensity, i would suggest you make the former more intense ok
  9. 00:46:244 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - drums came in and pitch increased drastically, and yet the distance is really low? uh made first jump bigger
  10. 00:51:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - bad flow here, my cursor prefers to instinctively move from 5->7 instead no thats fine
  11. 00:57:344 (1,2) - compared to 00:57:944 (1,2) - is much more intense imo with the increased pitch and drum, and yet the distance between the slider and hitcircles reflect the opposite fix i guses

    think i'll stop here. i would say aesthetically your map is really really monstrata-like which i just find boring in general. but you've sacrificed a lot of intensity based sections of the music for the aesthetics which i feel isnt really worth it. maybe refer to maps like masquerade for better understanding of mapping basic songs of basic structure and basic intensity variations ;; i wasmapping this in 2015 so lol X d


[high speed x-tra]
  1. the whole concept of highspeed xtras with pointless kicks and weird long sliders kinda tick me off so lol idk good luck thx
  2. 00:04:619 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - similar intensity as 00:03:569 (3,4,5,6,7) - and yet completely different spacing nice ye its nice
  3. 00:25:994 - missing beat following vocals so it sfine
  4. 00:26:219 - theres nothing on this beat why is it a kick um maybe try listen with slower playback you might hear something?
  5. 01:11:144 (1,2) - any reason to have 1 extended despite it not being the case for 01:13:544 (3,4) - ?? theres only hihat on that blue tick and is only part that vocal ends on 1/4 if listen carefully

    i can't mod this because i can't even really play this diff. everything is so forced, like the high SV and spaced streams, which makes no sense to me at all. everything basically in this map doesnt have the aesthetics up to standard and more often than not its a very cluttery sight: 01:23:144 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:744 (1,2,3,1,2) - with patterns and overlaps that make not much sense to me. the distance management is also rather wonky at certain places when im playing the map but i can't specifically point them out to you.

    its up to you if you want to keep this diff at all but ranking it while not being someone who's prominent in the mapping scene might be hard. feels like even monstrata can map hi-speed extras better than this yea i know i suck i dont have any names or anything and most of people would disagree with my gimmicks cuz im not hw but still


scary, gl
lol thank s and sry for 1 month late reply i completely forgot about this lma o
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