18:43 Hanss: cause i really want to try and go for ranked
18:44 Hanss: so i need honest opinions
18:44 iJinjin: lol
18:44 iJinjin: okiee
18:44 Hanss: so what you actually think
18:44 iJinjin: 00:50:493 (50493|1,50595|1,50697|1,50799|1,50901|1,51003|1) - might wanna avoid this 6 note jack, i'd say the maximum consecutive notes you should in one column here should be 4
18:45 iJinjin: 00:51:309 (51309|2,51411|2,51513|2,51615|2,51717|2,51819|2,51921|2) - same here
18:45 iJinjin: 00:56:002 (56002|3,56053|3) - ooooh this might hurt 
18:45 iJinjin: 00:56:053 (56053|3) - might wanna try putting this to column 1 or 2 
18:46 iJinjin: 00:26:004 (26004|1,26004|2,26208|0,26412|2) - since these are all same notes, it might be better to remove 00:26:004 (26004|2,26004|1) - one of these notes
18:46 iJinjin: like, all of them represent the drums
18:47 iJinjin: 00:27:024 - i think you can make this a bit more interesting (by adding the notes for the drums here)
18:47 iJinjin: 00:27:433 (27433|1,27637|1,27841|2,28045|1) - might be good to just hammer this part into the same column since the pitch is the same 
18:47 iJinjin: 00:28:453 (28453|2,28555|3,28759|1,28861|3) - here too, if you want it to be a bit challenging, but for me i think it's fine :D
18:48 iJinjin: 00:30:187 (30187|2,30187|1,30187|0,30187|3) - don't really see the reason for this to be 4 notes ;_; 
18:48 iJinjin: 00:30:698 - instead i feel like this part could be the 4 note chord 
18:49 iJinjin: 00:36:446 (36446|3,36480|2,36514|1,36548|0) - this burst starts 00:36:412 - here, you should move it down because of snap issues
18:50 iJinjin: for example, [http://puu.sh/m2dDL/51460abe5a.jpg something like this would work]
18:50 iJinjin: you can try slowing the song playback to 25% and you can see the snap issues 
18:50 iJinjin: try going through most of the burst sections for these snaps
18:51 iJinjin: that's all i have for you ^-^ lmao i ended up giving you a mod
18:51 Hanss: o.o
18:51 Hanss: thanks alot jinjin <3
18:51 iJinjin: lemme savelog this and post it in your forum so you could give me kudosu :3
18:51 Hanss: hopefully one day i can rank this
18:51 iJinjin: no worries, good luck :D

2015-12-21 17:33 Hanss: i still didnt fix that yet
2015-12-21 17:33 Guilhermeziat: and the mapping is a bit inconsistent
2015-12-21 17:34 Hanss: what you mean
2015-12-21 17:34 Guilhermeziat: let me go on editor
2015-12-21 17:34 Hanss: kk
2015-12-21 17:34 Guilhermeziat: 00:10:291 (10291|3,10291|1) -  
2015-12-21 17:34 Guilhermeziat: why is this jump here
2015-12-21 17:35 Guilhermeziat: 00:10:291 (10291|3,10291|1) - you map the jumps here
2015-12-21 17:35 Guilhermeziat: 00:15:188 (15188|1,15188|3) -  but not even a single arrow in between those gallops
2015-12-21 17:35 Hanss: not suppose to be there?
2015-12-21 17:35 Guilhermeziat:  if you have a reason to map it then leave it
2015-12-21 17:36 Guilhermeziat: oh shit
2015-12-21 17:36 Guilhermeziat: wait
2015-12-21 17:36 Guilhermeziat: i copied the first one wrong
2015-12-21 17:36 Guilhermeziat: 00:15:188 (15188|3,15188|1) - ok so you mapped this jump
2015-12-21 17:36 Hanss: yes
2015-12-21 17:37 Guilhermeziat: 00:15:596 - but then there is nothing here
2015-12-21 17:37 Hanss: i did it just so it didnt get repetitive
2015-12-21 17:37 Guilhermeziat: like not even a single for the jump
2015-12-21 17:37 Guilhermeziat: clap*
2015-12-21 17:37 Hanss: i see what you mean
2015-12-21 17:38 Hanss: but the part i dont get
2015-12-21 17:38 Hanss: is that SLIGHT off sync
2015-12-21 17:38 Hanss: so fucking slight
2015-12-21 17:38 Hanss: but my brain didnt like it either
2015-12-21 17:38 Guilhermeziat: it's -15
2015-12-21 17:38 Guilhermeziat: just fix it
2015-12-21 17:39 Hanss: its at 1312
2015-12-21 17:39 Hanss: so 1327?
2015-12-21 17:39 Guilhermeziat: no, 1297
2015-12-21 17:39 Hanss: ok
2015-12-21 17:39 Guilhermeziat: 00:10:291 (10291|1,10291|3) -  but yeah this jump makes no sense just take that okk
2015-12-21 17:39 Guilhermeziat: off*
2015-12-21 17:40 Hanss: i did
2015-12-21 17:40 Hanss: i took off 2nd column note
2015-12-21 17:40 Guilhermeziat: 00:24:167 (24167|1,24167|0,24269|3,24269|2,24371|0,24371|1,24474|3,24474|2,24576|3,24576|0,24678|2,24678|1,24780|3,24780|0,24882|2,24882|1,24984|0,24984|3,25086|1,25086|2,25188|0,25188|3,25290|3,25290|2,25392|0,25392|1,25494|2,25494|3,25596|0,25596|1) - this is a bit weird
2015-12-21 17:40 Guilhermeziat: like idk if you want to group the jumptrills by 4s or just keep a single jumptrill
2015-12-21 17:40 Hanss: that is just jump trill transition :c
2015-12-21 17:40 Guilhermeziat: well you gotta do it cohesively
2015-12-21 17:41 Guilhermeziat: 00:25:596 (25596|0,25596|1,25698|2,25800|2,25800|0,25800|3,25800|1) - also there's no problem at all on putting a jump right before the quad here
2015-12-21 17:41 Hanss: a jump?
2015-12-21 17:41 Hanss: o.o
2015-12-21 17:41 Guilhermeziat: yeah because you'd be ending the jumptrill
2015-12-21 17:41 Guilhermeziat: if you put 34 and then a quad
2015-12-21 17:42 Guilhermeziat: it's actually even easier to hit
2015-12-21 17:42 Hanss: so put a wuad there
2015-12-21 17:42 Hanss: instead of
2015-12-21 17:42 Hanss: 12
2015-12-21 17:42 Guilhermeziat: no
2015-12-21 17:42 Guilhermeziat: 00:25:698 (25698|2) -  this can be a 34
2015-12-21 17:42 Guilhermeziat: instead of 3
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: ok
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: done
2015-12-21 17:43 Guilhermeziat: but you have to fix that transition of jumptrills
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: and at 29 second
2015-12-21 17:43 Guilhermeziat: because they make no sense
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: should i just make it one jumptrill
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: 12
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: 34
2015-12-21 17:43 Hanss: 12
2015-12-21 17:43 Guilhermeziat: yeah i guess
2015-12-21 17:43 Guilhermeziat: there isn't really a need to make jumptrill transitions like that
2015-12-21 17:44 Guilhermeziat:  00:29:065 (29065|1,29065|0) -  you can also step this part as jumpjacks
2015-12-21 17:45 Hanss: true
2015-12-21 17:45 Hanss: it guess it would make it less dull
2015-12-21 17:45 Hanss: for no 12 34 jump trill a second time
2015-12-21 17:45 Guilhermeziat: yea
2015-12-21 17:47 Guilhermeziat: 00:32:126 (32126|3,32177|0,32228|3,32279|0,32330|3) -  this could be a jumptrill to keep the layering consistent
2015-12-21 17:48 Guilhermeziat: but if you can keep it as a trill if you want
2015-12-21 17:48 Guilhermeziat: 00:34:065 -  why the fuck did you stop mapping jumpjacks
2015-12-21 17:48 Hanss: caues it would be too hard LOL
2015-12-21 17:50 Guilhermeziat: 000:33:784 (33784|0,33797|1,33810|3,33823|2,33835|0,33848|1,33861|2,33874|3,33886|0,33899|1,33912|2,33925|3) -  ayyyyyyy
2015-12-21 17:50 Hanss: lmfao
2015-12-21 17:51 Hanss: everyone thinks the bursts are pretty shit lol
2015-12-21 17:51 Guilhermeziat: 00:43:776 (43776|0,43776|2,43776|3,43776|1,43861|1,43861|0,43963|3,43963|2,44065|2,44065|0) -  you map jumpjacks here and then you didnt
2015-12-21 17:51 Guilhermeziat: ?_?
2015-12-21 17:51 Guilhermeziat: btw handjacks as in single hand single hand etc would be more fitting for this part
2015-12-21 17:53 Guilhermeziat: 01:09:881 - why did u map 
2015-12-21 17:53 Guilhermeziat: this as 
2015-12-21 17:53 Guilhermeziat: 1/3
2015-12-21 17:55 Guilhermeziat: lol
2015-12-21 17:55 Hanss: is this part even JSable?
2015-12-21 17:55 Guilhermeziat: no
2015-12-21 17:55 Hanss: i thought it would be a good ide a:c
2015-12-21 17:55 Hanss: so just fat chords it is then
2015-12-21 17:55 Guilhermeziat:  no parts of this song are JSables
2015-12-21 17:55 Hanss: makes it more simple on my part i guess
2015-12-21 17:56 Guilhermeziat: JSable*
2015-12-21 17:56 Hanss: this song = chords and bursts lol
2015-12-21 17:56 Guilhermeziat: yes
2015-12-21 17:56 Guilhermeziat: unless you make a dump for it
2015-12-21 17:56 Hanss: kumo no kireme jr
2015-12-21 17:56 Guilhermeziat: yeah p much lol