SanadaYukimura wrote:

Learn how to reply mod before you request a new one
请先学会如何回Mod先吧，至少把改什么都写出来，最起码得尊重

MEGAtive wrote:

For charting terminologies that's often used, check http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz ... p?t=127628 since it has the most complete terminologies.

I'm going to point "some" (not all) basic on creating a nice-played patterns:

Lists

1. Try to alternate notes on all columns if possible. 00:15:561 (15561|3,16228|3,16895|3) are considered an uncomfortable Jack since you are just using one finger while the other's resting. This kind of thing should be avoided if possible (Except you're following [google:1337]pitch[/google:1337] relevancy that's okay). Fixed
2. 00:17:561 (17561|1) - Move this elsewhere since it's unecessary to Jack 00:17:339 (17339|1,17561|1) . While I'm recommending you to move 00:17:561 (17561|1) one column to the left. So it's more relevant with the pitch. I'm talking about this pitch relevancy things because there's a melodical instruments exists here, like Piano, Guitar, Violin, etc. But here, we're projecting it as if we're playing Piano. If the pitch's lower, put the note more to the left. If the pitch's higher, put the note more to the right. If the pitch is exactly the same, you can put the note on the same column as previous note. But jacking the notes aren't really needed in lower difficulties.
   Fixed
3. For difficulties that aren't supposed to be hard, avoid using 1/3 or denser streams. 00:38:895 (38895|1,39006|2,39117|3,39228|0,39339|1,39450|2,39561|0,39673|1,39784|2,39895|0) - (I'm referring to the Normal Diff. But it's applied to the Easy Diff as well) are hard to pressed for beginners. Using patterns like http://puu.sh/m3w4g/10b6b41eb7.png are more approprite for Easy and Normal Diffs.Fixed
4. Watch your consistencies with your patterns. Just like in 00:41:784 - You left this empty, while 00:42:117 - 00:42:450 - 00:42:784 - and ahead got this section's filled. You need to make the patterns more consistent.Fixed
5. Make the pattern in 25% or 50% playback rate. So you can listen to the instruments you've been following precisely.
6. Test the pattern. If it's comfortable to you, then it's okay.
7. Ask people to test your map. Their opinion are a good foundation for you to create a nice patterns.

That's not covering all of the "how to improving the pattern". But you will get used to it. Just keep mapping.

victorica_db wrote:

首先把你几把的NM音效全部改成soft
还有你的hitsound好蠢 毁曲
EZ
00:01:561 - double
00:02:228 - 写主钢琴
01:18:228 - 条子起始别加note
01:35:561 (95561|0,95895|3) - 删了
01:38:784 - 鼓写上
01:40:895 - 别写锁手面 和上面一样
01:45:450 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4209418
Fixed

NM
删了吧 Deleted
HD
00:01:561 - 这里开始主节奏的钢琴写上 Fixed
00:38:895 - 什么几把 删光重做 建议是做点连点 Fixed
01:07:784 - 这样的改简单吧 HARD别这么难 Fixed
00:51:561 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4209462
你全程写钢琴好了 别写01:33:561 (93561|3) - 这个鼓了 Fixed
还有你吧clap删光 有点难听 性药说这个clap还行
insane
开始的地方和我说的hard的地方一样
00:12:450 - 这里开始的钢琴为啥不写 都是insnae了
00:33:784 - 这里的怎么不安音高写 hmmm 音高写？ Fixed
00:33:784 - ctrl h Fixed
00:56:895 - 钢琴别停 Fixed
01:18:784 - 鼓漏 Fixed
01:23:561 - 这边做成3乱 Fixed
01:26:228 (86228|1,86228|3,86228|0) - 这边为啥要三键 三键很大声？Fixed
01:41:561 - 钢琴有停顿的 你自己检查一下 fixed
01:46:117 - 1/8这里才结束 Fixed
1/8重排版 Check later 。

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, here is my mod, requested form PM-forum. and you chat me in game till i don't know how many times already, lol.

1|2|3|4
[Normal]
00:05:117 (5117|1) - move to 3 for balance.
00:50:561 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4214899 is better imo.
00:52:561 (52561|0,53228|1) - swap the col, 1 to 2, 2 to 1 for balance and avoid 1/1 beat jack.
01:03:228 (63228|1,63561|2) - swap the col, ^
01:15:228 (75228|2) - move to 2? hand balance.
01:20:895 (80895|2) - move to 2 for balance.
01:38:228 (98228|2) - move to 2, ^

[Hard]
Note: The gap between Normal and Hard is too big, i think you need to make this diff easier or make Normal diff little harder.

00:20:228 (20228|1) - move to 1? different sound with 00:18:895 (18895|1) - .
00:42:673 (42673|3) - to col 3, then 00:42:784 (42784|2) - to col 4, for better flow.
00:56:784 (56784|3) - move to 2, easier for play.
01:02:784 (62784|3) - move to 2, easier for play and better flow imo.
01:10:228 (70228|3) - move to col 1? hand balance.
01:45:395 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4214977 is better imo.

[Insane]
00:28:673 (28673|2) - move to 2? hand balance.
01:45:228 - start here, idk how many times i look, this part is weird, may be try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4215016 .

Good luck!

Takane6 wrote:

hello o/
ene here >w</

[General]
aaaaaaaa
the kiai and preview point should be started at 01:25:561 - aaaaaaaa Lol okay, I don't check this before XD


1 2 3 4

MEGA's Insane

00:26:228 - delete 1 note? bcause there is no additional piano sound that same as 00:26:895 -
00:27:895 - the same ^ Both Applied
01:13:006 (73006|1,73117|3,73339|0,73450|3) - its oke to make it each of this two note and jacks... since this part should be hard... anc consistency with this similar sound too 01:07:784 (67784|3,67784|2,67895|0,67895|3,68117|1,68117|0) - Okay, applied
--
if u make three note here for 1 piano and 2 note for kick ( 01:20:561 (80561|1,80561|2,80561|0,80895|1,80895|3,80895|2) - )... then add note at here too >>> 01:20:228 - Woops, missed that. Fixed.
--
01:18:228 (78228|3,78561|0) - this LN.. why not make it same as >>> 00:56:895 (56895|0,57228|1) - ??? it has a exact same sound Hmm, changed the earlier LNs.
--
01:29:673 - there still a piano here.. same as 01:28:006 - Lol missed that one. Fixed.
01:30:673 - delete 1 note ?... there is no same sound 01:30:450 (90450|2,90450|3,90561|1,90561|2,90784|2,90784|3) - Got the wet snare and the Piano. Double is reasonable. *pun
01:31:784 - delete ? for consistency with 01:26:450 -
01:32:450 - delete ? for consistency with 01:27:117 - Both are added.
--

thats all maybe?
gud map btw >w<
ene out o/

Takane6 wrote:

hello o/
ene here >w</

[General]
aaaaaaaa
the kiai and preview point should be started at 01:25:561 - aaaaaaaa


1 2 3 4

MEGA's Insane

00:26:228 - delete 1 note? bcause there is no additional piano sound that same as 00:26:895 -
00:27:895 - the same ^
01:13:006 (73006|1,73117|3,73339|0,73450|3) - its oke to make it each of this two note and jacks... since this part should be hard... anc consistency with this similar sound too 01:07:784 (67784|3,67784|2,67895|0,67895|3,68117|1,68117|0) -
--
if u make three note here for 1 piano and 2 note for kick ( 01:20:561 (80561|1,80561|2,80561|0,80895|1,80895|3,80895|2) - )... then add note at here too >>> 01:20:228 -
--
01:18:228 (78228|3,78561|0) - this LN.. why not make it same as >>> 00:56:895 (56895|0,57228|1) - ??? it has a exact same sound
--
01:29:673 - there still a piano here.. same as 01:28:006 -
01:30:673 - delete 1 note ?... there is no same sound 01:30:450 (90450|2,90450|3,90561|1,90561|2,90784|2,90784|3) -
01:31:784 - delete ? for consistency with 01:26:450 -
01:32:450 - delete ? for consistency with 01:27:117 -
--

Insane

00:22:895 - better make this 3 note for emphasis this heavy beat sound (same as 00:28:228 - )
00:30:895 - add 1 note? bcause there is an additional piano sound that same as 00:30:228 -
00:31:228 - delete 1 note? bcause there is no additional piano sound that same as 00:30:228 -
00:35:895 - delete 1 note? bcause there is no additional piano sound that same as 00:30:228 -
00:56:784 (56784|1,56895|1) - this two doesnt hve the same sound... move 00:56:895 (56895|1) - to col 4
00:56:895 (56895|3) - add note for piano here
01:13:561 - add note at 3... its still fine to make that part jack and since there is a finish sound there
--
01:18:784 - add note here for consistency with 01:19:228 - 01:19:895 -
01:18:228 (78228|3,78561|2) - this LN.. why not make it same as >>> 00:56:895 (56895|0,57228|3) - ??? it has a exact same sound
^ if u accept this... then add one more note at 01:18:895 -
--
01:25:561 - the sound is loud and hve a finish sound too... add note here will be fine
01:26:228 - add note here... for consistency with 01:26:561 (86561|2,86561|0,86561|3) - 01:26:895 (86895|0,86895|2,86895|1) -
--
01:26:895 (86895|2) - move to 4
01:27:006 (87006|3) - move to 3
01:27:228 (87228|1) - move to 4
01:27:339 (87339|3) - move to 2
^ for prevent this jacks 01:26:784 (86784|2,86895|2,87117|1,87228|1) -
--
01:29:561 (89561|1,89673|0) - switch collumns for prevent 01:29:450 (89450|1,89561|1) - jack
01:31:561 (91561|2,91673|1) - switch collumns for prevent 01:31:450 (91450|2,91561|2) - jack
01:32:228 (92228|2,92339|0) - switch collumns for prevent 01:32:117 (92117|2,92228|2) - jack
01:35:561 (95561|1) - move to 4 for prevent tri-jacks
--

thats all maybe?
gud map btw >w<
ene out o/

FINDT wrote:

Hi Apple!
Here's mod from me

A few mods from me

0 - 1 - 2 - 3
Normal
00:22:895 - 00:33:561 - A bit unconsistent pattern here, well, those are still same section, use same pattern instead. new player be like "Hmm nice enjoy maps" *suddenly pattern change a bit fast* "What the firetruck, didn't expect that" lol xD Please be consistent on here

Hard
00:04:228 (4228|0) - Add note here
00:10:006 (10006|2,10450|2) - Move to 1
00:11:117 (11117|3,11561|3,12006|3,12228|3) - Well maybe you can use other side for balanced pattern

Insane
00:20:673 (20673|1) - Missplaced?
00:25:228 (25228|1,25339|0,25450|1,25561|0,25673|1,25784|0) - Well a bit too much on the right side, maybe you can use balanced pattern instead
00:58:117 (58117|2,58228|3,58339|2,58450|3,58561|2,58673|3,58784|2,58895|3,59006|2) - ^

Well, your main problem is unbalanced pattern, i see the coloumn 3 is too much used than coloum 0
Anyway great maps! I'm Cytus & Deemo player too btw
Just that

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY

Mod by Request by -[Apple]-


4K

[1|2|3|4]

Mod Inside

[General]

AiMod

1. please fix this on MEGA's Insane and the other diff for the unsnapped kiai

Timing

1. please delete this unnecesary timing on MEGA's Insane

Difficulty

1. consider nerf the Hard diff since it's too near to Insane and too far from Normal diff

Metadata/Song Setup

1. add Rayark to the Tags also you dont need 2 Chapter on the Tags, delete one of it

[MEGA's Insane]

00:27:898 - why 2 note ? it just inconsistent with 00:22:454 - Lol fixed. Misplaced notes.
00:38:898 (38898|3) - move to 2 and 00:40:676 (40676|0) - move to 3 for pitch Moved both
01:01:454 (61454|2,61565|1,61565|0,61676|3,61676|2,61787|1) - consider Ctrl H for pitch Applied
01:07:342 - should be 3 note for the piano/kick/sound that simmilar to 01:07:565 (67565|3,67565|2) - Added
01:30:231 (90231|2,90231|3,90454|0,90454|1) - consider making them just 1 note since there's just a piano I'm actually focusing on the wet snare as well. So I delete the 01:30:342 - 01:30:565 - parts

Good Luck

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY

Mod by Request by -[Apple]-


4K

[1|2|3|4]

Mod Inside

[General]

AiMod

1. please fix this on MEGA's Insane and the other diff for the unsnapped kiai

Timing

1. please delete this unnecesary timing on MEGA's Insane

Difficulty

1. consider nerf the Hard diff since it's too near to Insane and too far from Normal diff

Metadata/Song Setup

1. add Rayark to the Tags also you dont need 2 Chapter on the Tags, delete one of it

All fixed

[Insane]

00:12:454 (12454|3) - move to 1, no same pitch that can be in a same collumn with 00:12:454 (12454|3,12676|3) - Fixed
00:14:454 (14454|3) - move to 1 00:16:454 (16454|3) - move to 1 please, those jack is really unnecesary also 00:21:120 (21120|3,21342|3,21787|3,22009|3) - Fixed
00:30:342 - why 2 note ? it's inconsistent please delete one of itFixed
00:38:676 - this part is just harder than MEGA's InsaneActually you're right.But overall,MEGA's insane harder than this.
00:56:898 (56898|3,57009|2) - move 1 collumn to left 00:56:898 (56898|3,57009|3) - this jack is really unnesecaryFixed
01:06:342 (66342|0) - move to 01:06:231 - the piano is 01:06:231 - here not 01:06:342 - take a look on MEGA's diff and what you do on 01:16:898 - Fixed
01:18:009 - add note please, you can't suddenly stop following the kick Fixed
01:25:342 - i dont' want to mod this part till end, it just full of unnecesary jack also 01:35:787 (95787|3,95898|3) - has a kick and please make it diffrent with 01:35:454 (95454|1,95565|2,95676|2) - Fixed

Good Luck

1. Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. (Ranking Rules)
2. Same as preview point & Tags
3. Mods below according to your current timing
4. From Normal to Hard - random pattern (But it's still acceptable) in result lost of hand-balance
5. I'll mod one of your diff in details, overall the others (except MEGA's diff) have similar problems, you might wanna check that

1. 00:40:120 (40120|1,40120|2) - nudge to left once (make a broken stair) ~ 00:40:454 (40454|1) - Move to 2 if you prefer
2. 00:51:342 (51342|0) - Does this LN has it mean?
3. 01:01:676 (61676|0) - Move to 3
4. 01:02:231 (62231|2) - Move to 1
5. 01:02:565 (62565|2,62676|1) - Ctrl + H
6. 01:05:342 (65342|2) - Move to 0
7. 01:17:676 (77676|3) - Move to 0
8. 01:22:676 (82676|3,83009|1) - nudge to left once
9. 01:30:009 (90009|3) - Move to 2
10. 01:30:231 (90231|1) - move to 3
11. 01:30:342 (90342|3) - Move to 0
12. 01:40:676 (100676|3) - This note end at 01:41:009 ~ to be consisted with others section
13. 01:45:009 (105009|2) - Move to 3 ~ 01:45:676 (105676|3) - Move to 0 ~ (Prevents create mini-jacks)

1. Lively diff to play but still ...
2. 00:22:676 to 00:25:342 - Need hand balance here
3. 00:28:009 to 00:30:676 - ^

Obilariated wrote:

Happy New Year ^^ ~ from PIERCE's Modding Team (sorry for the delay)

Let's us begin

0 | 1 | 2 | 3

[General]

1. Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. (Ranking Rules)
2. Same as preview point & Tags
3. Mods below according to your current timing
4. From Normal to Hard - random pattern (But it's still acceptable) in result lost of hand-balance
5. I'll mod one of your diff in details, overall the others (except MEGA's diff) have similar problems, you might wanna check that

[Normal]

1. 00:40:120 (40120|1,40120|2) - nudge to left once (make a broken stair) ~ 00:40:454 (40454|1) - Move to 2 if you prefer
2. 00:51:342 (51342|0) - Does this LN has it mean?
3. 01:01:676 (61676|0) - Move to 3
4. 01:02:231 (62231|2) - Move to 1
5. 01:02:565 (62565|2,62676|1) - Ctrl + H
6. 01:05:342 (65342|2) - Move to 0
7. 01:17:676 (77676|3) - Move to 0
8. 01:22:676 (82676|3,83009|1) - nudge to left once
9. 01:30:009 (90009|3) - Move to 2
10. 01:30:231 (90231|1) - move to 3
11. 01:30:342 (90342|3) - Move to 0
12. 01:40:676 (100676|3) - This note end at 01:41:009 ~ to be consisted with others section
13. 01:45:009 (105009|2) - Move to 3 ~ 01:45:676 (105676|3) - Move to 0 ~ (Prevents create mini-jacks)

MOD END

Thanks for requested

-BANGKE- wrote:

sorry for delay, m4m with my map ;w;

Ice - Entrance

General

1. unchecked widescreen support in, insane, mega's insane, and normal Lol Fixed

BG, MP3, Hitsound

1. the BG it should be 1366x768 not 1365x768 Chat me if you need BG with this resolution. I can give you one.

Diff Spread

1. you have 2 Insane diff, will be better you change name for MEGA's Insane to > MEGA's Extra Rename to "MEGA's Extrance" (portmanteau of Extra and Entrance)

AiMod

1. please check it, you have an trouble in there

|1|2|3|4|

MEGA's Insane

00:16:676 (16676|0) - mending pindahin ke 2 nin, pitch Applied
00:33:342 (33342|1,33342|2,33342|0) - missing hitsound Whoops, added
00:40:454 (40454|2,40565|2,40676|2) - boz :^, 00:40:565 (40565|2) - pindahin ke 1 Rearranged biar lebih enak maininny dan tetep pitch relevant
01:38:676 (98676|2,98787|3) - ctrl + j Applied
01:45:731 (105731|1,105787|0) - ctrl + j, biar enak di tangan Applied
nice map nin Thanks

good luck

-BANGKE- wrote:

sorry for delay, m4m with my map ;w;

Ice - Entrance

General

1. unchecked widescreen support in, insane, mega's insane, and normal

BG, MP3, Hitsound

1. the BG it should be 1366x768 not 1365x768

Diff Spread

1. you have 2 Insane diff, will be better you change name for MEGA's Insane to > MEGA's Extra

AiMod

1. please check it, you have an trouble in there

lol i forgot to update my tag
|1|2|3|4|

Insane

00:05:565 (5565|3) - move to 1, different pitch with 00:05:342 (5342|3) -
00:12:009 - how about, add 1 more note, it's loud sound Okay!
00:12:454 (12454|0) - move to 4, different pitch Okay!
00:22:676 (22676|3) - aw, dont layered 2 hitsound in 1 note please. it's issue Okay,I'll pay attention on next map.
00:28:009 (28009|1,28009|3) - ^ same with this Ok
00:40:231 (40231|0,40342|0,40454|0,40565|2,40676|2,40787|2,40898|2) - try this http://puu.sh/mwu49/202d564721.png OK
00:52:009 (52009|2,52120|3) - ctrl + j this, and 00:52:231 (52231|2,52342|1) - this too, ctrl + j OK
01:27:565 (87565|0,87676|1,87676|3,87676|2,87787|2,87898|3) - try this http://puu.sh/mwubC/a164483285.jpg okay
01:29:454 (89454|1,89565|2) - ctrl + j this, and 01:29:676 (89676|1) - move to 3 hmm,Okay
01:30:342 (90342|1,90342|0,90342|3) - why 3? this sound is same with 01:30:231 (90231|2,90231|1) - , you just need 2 note in here 01:30:342 (90342|0,90342|3,90342|1) - Okay
01:40:009 (100009|0,100120|0,100231|0) - :^ 01:40:120 (100120|0) - move it to 2 Okay
01:40:676 (100676|2,100676|1,100676|0,100676|3) - why 4? 01:40:676 (100676|3) - delete this, you just need 3 note //Actually i think it's loud,But okay.
01:45:065 (105065|1,105120|2,105176|0,105231|2,105287|1) - try this http://puu.sh/mwuqI/58e2f20cab.jpg
01:46:676 - add note

Okay

Hard

00:09:787 (9787|0,10009|0,10231|0) - hmm, 00:09:787 (9787|0) - move to 2, 00:10:231 (10231|0) - move to 3
(00:16:676 (16676|2,16898|1,17120|2) - - why 1 note? if in the section is 2 note's 00:06:009 (6009|1,6009|3,6231|0,6231|2,6454|2,6454|1) -
00:12:009 (12009|1,12009|3) - missing hitsound
00:12:676 (12676|2) - 00:13:342 (13342|0,14009|3) - etc, it's fine if you add 1 note again
00:51:565 (51565|0,51565|1,51676|1,51676|0) - it's bad, since this diff is Hard, better you change it like this 00:51:342 (51342|0,51342|1,51454|2,51454|3) -
00:56:676 (56676|0,56676|3) - it's should be end in here 00:57:009 -
00:57:342 - and add 2 note in here
01:06:176 (66176|0,66509|0) - please compare this note with MEGA's diff it should be here 01:06:231 - and 01:06:454 -
01:12:676 (72676|1,72676|0,72787|2,72787|3,72898|1,72898|0,73009|2,73009|3,73120|1,73120|0,73231|2,73231|3,73342|1,73342|0) - this part is more difficult than mega's diff
01:18:009 (78009|2,78009|1,78009|3,78009|0) - why 4?

All fixed.

Normal

00:01:565 - 00:01:787 - missing note
00:01:342 (1342|2,1342|0) - missing hitsound
00:51:787 (51787|1,51898|2) - delete this, it's too difficult for newbie player's //but i don't think so...Some one says here doesn't make player excited...
01:18:342 (78342|3) - delete this, this is an synth 01:18:342 (78342|1) - not kick or snare /okay..
01:25:676 (85676|2,85676|0) - why 2? 01:25:676 (85676|2) - move it there 01:25:342 -
01:30:231 (90231|2,90342|0,90565|0) - delete this, i suggest, you just need to follow kick sound

All fixed

good luck

ArcherLove wrote:

wow I don't know you post on my MQ, I don't do 4K much but I will mark this anw

mod

col = 1~4

MEGA's
naikin HP sama OD dong~ Lol OK. HPOD8,5

00:33:009 (33009|2,33120|1) - ctrl H -> 00:33:231 (33231|0) - mvoe to 2 -> (better hand position) Applied

ok

gl~

MrCrussader wrote:

Big sorry for a quite long time delay because of my real life tasks.

Based on your NM Request Here.

I'm focusing in:

1. Note Consistencies
2. Situational Changings
3. Note Balancing

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |

[Normal]

01:10:676 - Add note here (refer to 01:05:342)
01:30:342 to 01:30:676 - Not using 1/3 notes here ? That's will make pattern easier.
01:46:676 - Add 2 for finishing.nice, added.

[Hard]

00:05:120 (5120|2) - Move to 1 (refer to 00:09:787 that have stacked).
01:10:676 - Add 0 maybe (same case as normal).

[Insane]

01:46:676 - Add 1 for finishing.