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Ayakura Mei - Puzzle Maker

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moonlightleaf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期四,2016年3月10日 at 08:31:45

Artist: Ayakura Mei
Title: Puzzle Maker
Source: 東方Project
Tags: 東方幻奏響UROBOROS肆~dEATHtINYoVERdRIVE~ Poplica* flandre scarlet U.N.オーエンは彼女なのか? 例大祭 un owen was her touhou DreaM117er IamKwaN りいちゅ@3日目/C-14b
BPM: 136
Filesize: 4251kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Hard (2.9 stars, 243 notes)
  2. KwaN's Normal (1.64 stars, 150 notes)
  3. Lunatic (3.86 stars, 389 notes)
Download: Ayakura Mei - Puzzle Maker
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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綾倉盟- Puzzle Maker

Lunatic - by me

Hard - by DreaM117er

Normal - by IamKwaN

StoryBoard- | BG - from Here!
MokouSmoke
from my queue~

[Lunatic]
  1. The note spacing before the kiai feels a little high for such a calm song, but I guess it works
  2. 00:15:754 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm to emphasize strong beat at 00:16:196 -
  3. 00:26:784 (4,5) - why such a high spacing? the big jump should come at 00:26:563 (3,4) - to properly emphasize (4)
  4. 01:01:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead. follows song better and more interesting than the constant 1/2 rhythm imo http://puu.sh/m1Qzg/88f0f1e4d9.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 01:03:512 (2) - maybe delete. the rhythm is a little hard to read
Sorry for a short mod. Both diffs are well mapped. Good luck!
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~

[Lunatic]
  1. The note spacing before the kiai feels a little high for such a calm song, but I guess it works
  2. 00:15:754 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm to emphasize strong beat at 00:16:196 -
  3. 00:26:784 (4,5) - why such a high spacing? the big jump should come at 00:26:563 (3,4) - to properly emphasize (4)--- keep first
  4. 01:01:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead. follows song better and more interesting than the constant 1/2 rhythm imo http://puu.sh/m1Qzg/88f0f1e4d9.jpg
Sorry for a short mod. Both diffs are well mapped. Good luck!
others fix ,thank you :)
Kencho
[General]
  1. 後面物件我聽起來有點延遲,檢查了下音效發現也不是音效問題,然後我測了一下offset,實際上應該-10ms
    1. Offset: 8,245ms BPM: 136.00

[117's Hard]
  1. 01:09:799 - 加個圓圈比較好

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:08:585 - 這個位置實際有vocal,我建議把前面滑條拉成3/4更合曲

    00:10:019 (1) - 和上面說的一樣,改成3/4更合曲,但是這樣排版要改一改,我建議節奏這樣下

    00:12:887 (5) - 這很明顯有琴音啊,跟一下比較好

    00:15:313 (1) - 改成3/4,這個改的話排版不用大改

    00:17:078 (1) - ^

    01:05:056 (3,4) - 我覺得3直接拉成3/4就好了,加那個圓圈不合曲也不好打

    01:06:490 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:10:019 (1) - ^

    01:29:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弧度大一點,容易打

    01:40:009 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:40:892 (4) - ^

    我覺得可以參考一下117的難度改一下節奏,他節奏下的好
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Kencho wrote:

[General]
  1. 後面物件我聽起來有點延遲,檢查了下音效發現也不是音效問題,然後我測了一下offset,實際上應該-10ms
    1. Offset: 8,245ms BPM: 136.00

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:08:585 - 這個位置實際有vocal,我建議把前面滑條拉成3/4更合曲

    00:10:019 (1) - 和上面說的一樣,改成3/4更合曲,但是這樣排版要改一改,我建議節奏這樣下

    00:12:887 (5) - 這很明顯有琴音啊,跟一下比較好

    00:15:313 (1) - 改成3/4,這個改的話排版不用大改

    00:17:078 (1) - ^

    01:05:056 (3,4) - 我覺得3直接拉成3/4就好了,加那個圓圈不合曲也不好打

    01:06:490 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:10:019 (1) - ^

    01:29:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弧度大一點,容易打

    01:40:009 (1) - 改成3/4

    01:40:892 (4) - ^

    我覺得可以參考一下117的難度改一下節奏,他節奏下的好
---都改3/4滑条了

感谢mod :)
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. 什么?sb这算做完了。。。不加点lyric啊特效什么的不科学啊。。。

Lunatic

  1. hitnormal的音量可以单独调低一点。。。现在这样太响了柑橘有点吵。
  2. 00:10:892 (3) - 这边开始连续用那个finish的音不会太吵么。。。
  3. 00:56:553 (4,5) - 这里我觉得可以大跳。01:25:230 (6,7) - 同理。
  4. 01:18:171 (5) - 放到442,27那边比较好,01:18:171 (5,6) - 的跳还是要稍微大一点的,毕竟1/1的gap。
  5. 01:46:186 (4,5,6,7) - 按钢琴来的话,45,56的跳应该大点,67的跳应该小点这样。
  6. 摆的好像比以前要整齐多了,但好像还可以更整齐一点。。。大多数排版的规则度还没有很好的体现出来。。。嘛,随意啦。

117's Hard

  1. 音效方面同top diff。
  2. 我还期待摸出点什么东西,然而什么都没摸出来。。。
二妹又做二妹,怎么没别的了(

good luck
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. 什么?sb这算做完了。。。不加点lyric啊特效什么的不科学啊。。。---没找到歌词,还在找就是

Lunatic

  1. hitnormal的音量可以单独调低一点。。。现在这样太响了柑橘有点吵。 ---格式工厂改成了75%
  2. 00:10:892 (3) - 这边开始连续用那个finish的音不会太吵么。。。
  3. 00:56:553 (4,5) - 这里我觉得可以大跳。01:25:230 (6,7) - 同理。---01:25:230 (6,7) - 67的话,位置局限 只增加了一点点
  4. 01:18:171 (5) - 放到442,27那边比较好,01:18:171 (5,6) - 的跳还是要稍微大一点的,毕竟1/1的gap。
  5. 01:46:186 (4,5,6,7) - 按钢琴来的话,45,56的跳应该大点,67的跳应该小点这样。
  6. 摆的好像比以前要整齐多了,但好像还可以更整齐一点。。。大多数排版的规则度还没有很好的体现出来。。。嘛,随意啦。

117's Hard

  1. 音效方面同top diff。
  2. 我还期待摸出点什么东西,然而什么都没摸出来。。。
二妹又做二妹,怎么没别的了( ---不要在意细节 ;w;;;;

good luck
感谢mod :)
IamKwaN
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Tags:東方幻奏響UROBOROS肆~dEATHtINYoVERdRIVE~ Poplica* flandre scarlet U.N.オーエンは彼女なのか? 例大祭 un owen was her touhou DreaM117er
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440,233,85010,2,0,L|496:228,2,55,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,314,85892,6,0,P|332:324|295:286,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,237,86554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,237,86774,2,0,P|289:184|285:128,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,78,87436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,78,87656,2,0,P|224:74|197:29,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,34,88980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,119,89421,6,0,P|454:75|462:23,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,164,90745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,226,91186,2,0,P|256:282|254:335,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,192,92289,2,0,P|156:189|101:191,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,168,92950,6,0,P|57:115|95:75,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,62,93612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,62,93833,2,0,P|196:63|251:60,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,47,94495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,47,94715,2,0,P|350:46|380:0,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,146,96039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,200,96480,6,0,L|380:311,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,358,97142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,358,97362,2,0,P|430:357|468:373,2,82.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,375,98245,1,4,0:0:0:0:
239,205,99127,2,0,B|166:221|153:182|75:200,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,207,100009,6,0,P|0:253|14:306,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,341,100671,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,341,100892,2,0,P|102:340|157:343,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,334,101554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,334,101774,2,0,P|257:335|287:381,2,110,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,235,103098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,186,103539,5,4,0:0:0:0:
144,89,103980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,142,104421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
249,45,104862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,98,105303,6,0,P|406:129|403:203,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,266,106406,1,4,0:0:0:0:
325,266,106627,2,0,L|330:324,1,55,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107509,12,2,110597,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
updated

感谢,爱你desu
Lyric
[General]
綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧,日本人都是姓前名后的。
[Lunatic]
00:49:936 (4,5,6) - DS偏小了。
01:03:392 - 这里加个Note?如果想保留2连的话,就应该把这两个的距离调得离前面滑条远一些。
01:04:936 (2,3) - 2错开3的滑条头一些?前面从来没有出现这样的节奏,况且又紧接在连打后面,一到这就肯定读错了。

01:06:039 (7,8) - 感觉要加大DS。
01:08:244 (1,3) - 这两个用扭曲程度一样的滑条为好吧,也算是呼应一下。
01:18:833 (1,2,3) - 01:19:715 (5,6,7) - 这两组分开一点?
01:23:244 (4,5) - 这弧度不同……是我强迫症了。
01:43:539 (1) - 这个不如也用3/4Slider+1Note。

GL.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Lyric wrote:

[General]
綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧,日本人都是姓前名后的。---百科的,应该没问题
[Lunatic]
00:49:936 (4,5,6) - DS偏小了。 ---不要紧
01:03:392 - 这里加个Note?如果想保留2连的话,就应该把这两个的距离调得离前面滑条远一些。
01:04:936 (2,3) - 2错开3的滑条头一些?前面从来没有出现这样的节奏,况且又紧接在连打后面,一到这就肯定读错了。

01:06:039 (7,8) - 感觉要加大DS。---不要紧
01:08:244 (1,3) - 这两个用扭曲程度一样的滑条为好吧,也算是呼应一下。
01:18:833 (1,2,3) - 01:19:715 (5,6,7) - 这两组分开一点?---不要紧
01:23:244 (4,5) - 这弧度不同……是我强迫症了。---不要紧
01:43:539 (1) - 这个不如也用3/4Slider+1Note。 换3连√

GL.
感谢mod :)
Kalibe
M4M~
  1. 01:04:715 - Unsnapped Preview Point, is it specially?
KwaN's Normal :
  1. According to BPM and pattern you have in here, i think AR should be 4 | also OD and HP to 3 or 3,5 ?
  2. 00:19:715 (1,1) - For me, unnessesary NC's - reason? There's nothing hard to read those circles, also not changing SV or spacing, so ?
  3. 01:04:715 (1,1) - Missing Finishes on heads?
  4. 01:11:333 - Also there finish should be, cause you add here ( 01:25:450 - same sound ) imo.
  5. 01:31:186 (3) - Maybe do ctrl H this slider, just to have a better transision with (2)
117's Hard :
  1. 00:53:906 (6,1) - I think spacing between these objects could be bigger, cause (1) is downbeat strong sound and it will be neat if you emphasis it. :3
  2. 01:04:715 (1,1) - Finishes on heads sounds good on heads ! ;w;
  3. 01:11:333 - As in Easy, you also add finish 01:25:450 - here so there's should be too.
Lunatic :
  1. 00:41:333 (5) - Mayb move this a little to left? Something like 444|292 ?
  2. 01:04:715 (1,5,1) - As in other diffs, Finishes were appreciated. ;w;
  3. 01:39:127 (7,1) - Switch NC's, because (7) started new 1/4 slider pattern.
Ok, that's all. Good luck !~ :3
Pata-Mon
M4M from my queue

[Normal]
  1. 01:02:068 (3,4) - 换成一个折返条怎么样?然后还可以在01:02:950加个note
  2. 01:32:950 (1,2,3,4) - 还是建议用折返滑条跟vocal
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:480 (3,4) - 唔,实际上这俩音的间隔大概是1/8……
  2. 01:03:612 (3,1) - hard里感觉改成滑条更好
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:51:259 (2,4) - 感觉这里把这两个note,叠到之后的滑条上会比较好玩,然后调一下ds。
好玩,射星
Lasse
m4m reply

General

  1. your soft hitfinish is really weird, as it is delayed by a few ms, but only on the left channel, making it feel a bit strange (at least for me).
    I edited it for you and also cut off some wasted silence from the ending of it, making it smaller and removed a slight delay from soft-hitwhistle
  2. also your silended sliderslides are actually "soft-sliderslider" which makes the game ignore them, they have to be named "sliderslide" (wirthout the r at the end) => unused and thus unrankable. and you should use the "official" blank file provided in the ranking criteria, since yours are not even close to 100ms long => also unrankable.
    => here are all four fixed files, just replace them and delete "soft-sliderslider" and "soft-sliderslider3":
    http://puu.sh/mkRnF/f21d95ef54.zip
  3. please add the source of the background http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=53304441 to your description to give credits to the artist, thanks

Lunatic

  1. 00:08:244 (1) - it's your choice how you draw sliders, but you can do the same thing cleaner/simpler with only two or three nodes, making it way easier to be perfectly symmetrical and look nicer: http://i.imgur.com/lNV1Agd.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/tJhPsxt.jpg
  2. 00:14:862 (7) - is there any reason to suddenly double the spacing? Don't think the music supports such a huge increase
  3. 00:17:068 (1,2) - why is the" 1/4 - after slider 3/4" pattern suddenly stacked? you never did it before and after
  4. 01:13:539 (1,2) - ^here you actually do it again, only having it twice and on not remarkably differen sounds feels so random. just space them like all others (or maybe stack more of the, lol)
  5. 00:19:936 (2) - could be stacked with 00:19:936 (2) - , not noticeable during gameplay, but why not?
  6. 00:18:392 (6) - I know it belongs to the pattern, but having the spacing on this that low, when it's actually emphasized in the music seems wrong, you could try ~90% overlapping 00:19:053 (2) - like this http://i.imgur.com/gCzrvQZ.jpg would play really nice imo and fit with the music
  7. 00:25:892 (1,5) - 00:26:333 (2,4) - perfectly stack?
  8. 00:36:369 - why ignore 1/4 after mapping them just before? maybe make 00:36:259 (7) - a kickslider?
  9. 00:49:494 (3,4) - stack leniency 5 might be much nicer for stuff like this
  10. 01:02:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - - http://i.imgur.com/9XiEDCz.png this movement doesn't feel very intuitive to me, with how you transition the sldier into those wide angles. you could for example move 01:03:392 (2,3,4) - more right or do sth with the slider
  11. 01:04:274 (9) - maybe nc to go well with addition of strong piano?
Seems nice overall, but the rhythm is so repetitve :'( considering how many unmapped 1/4 there are and all the skipped stonger red ticks due to 3/4 slider I think it could've been made a bit more interesting...

117

  1. 00:28:539 (2,3,4) - patterns like this are abit stupid to read for hard imo and having stacked 1/4 right after this at 00:30:303 (3,4,5) - makes it even worse ./
  2. 00:49:936 (2,3,1) - yeah, so pattern with way different rhythm but all stacked the same, seems not that great for a hard
  3. 00:51:480 (3,4,1) -
  4. the rhythms and most patterns seem nice, but those weird stacks that I can't grasp the logic behind are not

kwan

  1. 00:32:509 (4) - those would be nicer without curving I think, they are so minimally curved that it just feels weird
  2. 00:49:274 (4) - only having a click here would be better fitting, like this http://i.imgur.com/0VnzWLJ.jpg
  3. 01:31:186 (3) - feels strange as 01:31:847 - is much stronger than the sliderend. maybe try http://i.imgur.com/8uzrRMB.jpg
good luck with this, nice relaxing song
IamKwaN

Lyric wrote:

綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧,日本人都是姓前名后的。
他說的對 RC規定除非有官方Source 否則romanisation都是前姓後名 (盟 = Mei

PS. 等摸多一點才一併改
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Kalibe wrote:

M4M~
  1. 01:04:715 - Unsnapped Preview Point, is it specially?

Lunatic :
  1. 00:41:333 (5) - Mayb move this a little to left? Something like 444|292 ? ---keep for stack with before note
  2. 01:04:715 (1,5,1) - As in other diffs, Finishes were appreciated. ;w;
  3. 01:39:127 (7,1) - Switch NC's, because (7) started new 1/4 slider pattern.
Ok, that's all. Good luck !~ :3

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:51:259 (2,4) - 感觉这里把这两个note,叠到之后的滑条上会比较好玩,然后调一下ds。---懒改
好玩,射星

Lasse wrote:

m4m reply

General

  1. your soft hitfinish is really weird, as it is delayed by a few ms, but only on the left channel, making it feel a bit strange (at least for me).
    I edited it for you and also cut off some wasted silence from the ending of it, making it smaller and removed a slight delay from soft-hitwhistle
  2. also your silended sliderslides are actually "soft-sliderslider" which makes the game ignore them, they have to be named "sliderslide" (wirthout the r at the end) => unused and thus unrankable. and you should use the "official" blank file provided in the ranking criteria, since yours are not even close to 100ms long => also unrankable.
    => here are all four fixed files, just replace them and delete "soft-sliderslider" and "soft-sliderslider3":
    http://puu.sh/mkRnF/f21d95ef54.zip
  3. please add the source of the background http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=53304441 to your description to give credits to the artist, thanks

Lunatic

  1. 00:08:244 (1) - it's your choice how you draw sliders, but you can do the same thing cleaner/simpler with only two or three nodes, making it way easier to be perfectly symmetrical and look nicer: http://i.imgur.com/lNV1Agd.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/tJhPsxt.jpg ---keep , i am lazy ;w;
  2. 00:14:862 (7) - is there any reason to suddenly double the spacing? Don't think the music supports such a huge increase
  3. 00:17:068 (1,2) - why is the" 1/4 - after slider 3/4" pattern suddenly stacked? you never did it before and after
  4. 01:13:539 (1,2) - ^here you actually do it again, only having it twice and on not remarkably differen sounds feels so random. just space them like all others (or maybe stack more of the, lol)
  5. 00:19:936 (2) - could be stacked with 00:19:936 (2) - , not noticeable during gameplay, but why not?
  6. 00:18:392 (6) - I know it belongs to the pattern, but having the spacing on this that low, when it's actually emphasized in the music seems wrong, you could try ~90% overlapping 00:19:053 (2) - like this http://i.imgur.com/gCzrvQZ.jpg would play really nice imo and fit with the music
  7. 00:25:892 (1,5) - 00:26:333 (2,4) - perfectly stack?
  8. 00:36:369 - why ignore 1/4 after mapping them just before? maybe make 00:36:259 (7) - a kickslider?
  9. 00:49:494 (3,4) - stack leniency 5 might be much nicer for stuff like this --keep , i think now is better
  10. 01:02:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - - http://i.imgur.com/9XiEDCz.png this movement doesn't feel very intuitive to me, with how you transition the sldier into those wide angles. you could for example move 01:03:392 (2,3,4) - more right or do sth with the slider
  11. 01:04:274 (9) - maybe nc to go well with addition of strong piano?
Seems nice overall, but the rhythm is so repetitve :'( considering how many unmapped 1/4 there are and all the skipped stonger red ticks due to 3/4 slider I think it could've been made a bit more interesting...

good luck with this, nice relaxing song
no reply = fixed

thank you all :)

IamKwaN wrote:

Lyric wrote:

綾倉盟 应该拼成 Ayakura Mei 吧,日本人都是姓前名后的。
他說的對 RC規定除非有官方Source 否則romanisation都是前姓後名 (盟 = Mei

PS. 等摸多一點才一併改 ---侯
Axey
M4M

Luna

00:09:568 (5,6) - 恩..虽然我也用过这样的梗 前面那个也就算惹 但是这个(4,5)是向上的flow..觉得(6)放在上面比较好..
00:10:450 (2,3) - 感觉前面这样的滑条太多了..推荐(3)和(2)一样用直滑条 平行
00:11:553 (5) - 这个也是flow..放在x:284 y:336 左右的地方比较好
00:12:656 (3) - 试试这个? http://puu.sh/msQaU/dedbd5c1c3.jpg
00:13:318 (5) - 这个也是.. 这个梗用的太多了..用1~2次其实就够了 放左上角 或者(4,5,6)放成一个三角形
00:14:421 (5) - 这样放也不错 http://puu.sh/msQj3/b15b27d926.jpg
00:15:744 (2,3) - 这个(3)和(2)对在同一条直线上比较好? 拖动(3,4)到x:224 y:344
00:17:068 (1) - ~00:20:377 (4) - 节奏太单调了..我试试改了下 http://puu.sh/msQHw/eefde5a0b0.jpg
00:21:259 (4,5) - 推荐用滑条代替
00:25:009 (3) - 我是喜欢放x:432 y:336 不过这边4角跳就要修改下了
00:34:164 (5) - 前面这段 像这个地方都可以加个note 滑条+2note 的节奏太单调惹
00:42:987 - add note
00:44:752 - ^
00:44:421 (4) - 这个应该是突出jump的音 (3)放x:324 y:104?
00:45:965 (3,4) - 这个在时间轴上是不是应该C+G一下 http://puu.sh/msQXQ/25e90744ad.jpg 试试这个?
00:47:730 (3,4) - ..太近了 (4)也是个突出jump的音
00:52:693 - add note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
00:54:458 - ^
00:56:553 (4) - 这个其实用note比较好
00:56:994 (5) - 这个用滑条拉到蓝线?
00:58:318 (3) - ~01:00:744 (7) - http://puu.sh/msReM/9e079250eb.jpg try try
01:02:950 (1) - http://puu.sh/msRie/f655980154.jpg try try
01:07:693 - 可以加个note
01:08:024 (7) - 太近了..稍微跳远点
01:08:244 (1) - 我听到这段第一反应就是这个梗ww http://puu.sh/msRod/131d696cbd.jpg
01:11:222 (5) - add note
01:14:200 (3,4) - 这个也是时间轴上C+G 然后后面蓝线可以加note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 加上soft-whistle会比较好
01:21:811 - 这个音真得加
01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 还是节奏单调问题..觉得这里还是加点条子比较好

Hard

没啥问题..

老公

01:41:774 (5) - http://puu.sh/msRMC/4871ece326.jpg 试试这样放?
DreaM117er

Kencho wrote:

[117's Hard]
  1. 01:09:799 - 加個圓圈比較好 >好

我覺得可以參考一下117的難度改一下節奏,他節奏下的好 >被鋒喵誇獎了\OwO/

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

117's Hard

  1. 音效方面同top diff。
  2. 我还期待摸出点什么东西,然而什么都没摸出来。。。 >OwO
二妹又做二妹,怎么没别的了(

good luck

Kalibe wrote:

M4M~

117's Hard :
  1. 00:53:906 (6,1) - I think spacing between these objects could be bigger, cause (1) is downbeat strong sound and it will be neat if you emphasis it. :3 >OK :)
  2. 01:04:715 (1,1) - Finishes on heads sounds good on heads ! ;w;
  3. 01:11:333 - As in Easy, you also add finish 01:25:450 - here so there's should be too.
Ok, that's all. Good luck !~ :3

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M from my queue
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:480 (3,4) - 唔,实际上这俩音的间隔大概是1/8…… >我並不是跟琴音OwO,是鼓。你說了我才注意到有1/8 233333
  2. 01:03:612 (3,1) - hard里感觉改成滑条更好 >一樣是1/8的話理由同上,不過這裡是一定要改的,太坑了
好玩,射星

Lasse wrote:

m4m reply

117

  1. 00:28:539 (2,3,4) - patterns like this are abit stupid to read for hard imo and having stacked 1/4 right after this at 00:30:303 (3,4,5) - makes it even worse ./ >k, fix here, thanks
  2. 00:49:936 (2,3,1) - yeah, so pattern with way different rhythm but all stacked the same, seems not that great for a hard
  3. 00:51:480 (3,4,1) - >I think this is fine lol really
  4. the rhythms and most patterns seem nice, but those weird stacks that I can't grasp the logic behind are not >sure, fix rhythm for no 3/4 stacking

good luck with this, nice relaxing song
No reply = Fix
Thanks all, sorry I'm late for fixing mods :)


垃圾麻破 | 小m
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Axey wrote:

M4M

Luna

00:09:568 (5,6) - 恩..虽然我也用过这样的梗 前面那个也就算惹 但是这个(4,5)是向上的flow..觉得(6)放在上面比较好..
00:10:450 (2,3) - 感觉前面这样的滑条太多了..推荐(3)和(2)一样用直滑条 平行
00:11:553 (5) - 这个也是flow..放在x:284 y:336 左右的地方比较好
00:12:656 (3) - 试试这个? http://puu.sh/msQaU/dedbd5c1c3.jpg
00:13:318 (5) - 这个也是.. 这个梗用的太多了..用1~2次其实就够了 放左上角 或者(4,5,6)放成一个三角形
00:14:421 (5) - 这样放也不错 http://puu.sh/msQj3/b15b27d926.jpg
00:15:744 (2,3) - 这个(3)和(2)对在同一条直线上比较好? 拖动(3,4)到x:224 y:344
00:17:068 (1) - ~00:20:377 (4) - 节奏太单调了..我试试改了下 http://puu.sh/msQHw/eefde5a0b0.jpg
00:21:259 (4,5) - 推荐用滑条代替
00:25:009 (3) - 我是喜欢放x:432 y:336 不过这边4角跳就要修改下了 --这边不修了
00:34:164 (5) - 前面这段 像这个地方都可以加个note 滑条+2note 的节奏太单调惹
00:42:987 - add note
00:44:752 - ^
00:44:421 (4) - 这个应该是突出jump的音 (3)放x:324 y:104?
00:45:965 (3,4) - 这个在时间轴上是不是应该C+G一下 http://puu.sh/msQXQ/25e90744ad.jpg 试试这个?
00:47:730 (3,4) - ..太近了 (4)也是个突出jump的音
00:52:693 - add note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
00:54:458 - ^
00:56:553 (4) - 这个其实用note比较好
00:56:994 (5) - 这个用滑条拉到蓝线?
00:58:318 (3) - ~01:00:744 (7) - http://puu.sh/msReM/9e079250eb.jpg try try
01:02:950 (1) - http://puu.sh/msRie/f655980154.jpg try try
01:07:693 - 可以加个note
01:08:024 (7) - 太近了..稍微跳远点
01:08:244 (1) - 我听到这段第一反应就是这个梗ww http://puu.sh/msRod/131d696cbd.jpg
01:11:222 (5) - add note
01:14:200 (3,4) - 这个也是时间轴上C+G 然后后面蓝线可以加note 或者滑条拉到蓝线
01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 加上soft-whistle会比较好
01:21:811 - 这个音真得加
01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 还是节奏单调问题..觉得这里还是加点条子比较好
no reply = fix

好多3连,我打不了了;w;;; 小M的好多2连,我打不了了;w;;;
[Kamiya]
先占位 ,凌晨摸orz 晚上突然有事了

这里是四萌!FOR M4M!

[117's Hard]

01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 这部分的note属于bgm不属于人声 稍微有些格格不入,建议改成人声部分。(有种强行加上去的感觉

01:45:303 (1,2) - 滑条间距可以稍微拉开一些(2部分滑条大概x:200y296

[Lunatic]

00:11:774 (1,3) - blanket更美观

00:13:980 (1,2,3,4) - 连打起手重音会比较好入手,但对于这种情况来看我建议00:13:539 (6,1) - 改成slider后面连打改成反复滑条。仅此建议。如图:
↑可以将6滑条改成note或者7滑条改成note 这样入手连打会轻松一些。。吧。

00:14:862 (6) - 移动至x:288y:176或者是
01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然这个地方作图上稍微有些局限,希望还是改成滑条方式。(个人意见

版面稍显混乱。00:33:392 (2,4,5,6) - 01:07:142 (3,5,6,7) - 像这些靠得很近的地方可以稍微摆开些

以上!!!!!!

:) 然而我又骗了一波kudosu
GD LK and GJ!
-shikaco-
[117's Hard]
00:41:774 (1) - 换3/4滑条或者折返是不是好点
01:03:171 (1) - 有点违和
01:08:906 (2) - 改到01:09:017 (2) - 和前面一致吧
01:45:965 (2) - 中间漏音了吧 可拆可不拆 建议拆

[Lunatic]
00:11:774 (1) - 这个形状滑条已经连着出现好几次了,而且这是new combo,换一个会好一点
00:29:862 (2,3,4) - 统一ds会好看一些
00:51:480 (3) - 这个最好把红点放在滑条最中间
01:03:171 (2,3) - 中间白线音漏了,挺突兀的
01:46:847 (7) - 这个重叠没什么必要吧,干脆放远一点会好一点
01:45:303 (1,2) - 值得商榷一下.有点诡异,可能放一个跟之前一样的三连会好一点
01:33:392 (2,3,4) - 建议摆一个更对称一点的跳,考虑一下等腰的形状

讲真 好神
kunka
From my Q~

General

  1. AiMod: An error of metadata is some displayed.(tag and audio preview) Please revise it.
Lunatic

  1. 00:20:928 - The sound of the guitar still exists here. I recommend addition of circle when I consider a flow from 00:19:053 (2,3,4) - and 00:19:936 (2,3,4) - .
  2. 00:25:119 - Rhythm is monotonous now. Because here is a sound, would you add a circle?
  3. 00:28:649 - ^
  4. 00:35:708 - ^
  5. 01:03:171 (2) - The sound is more kinda stronger than 01:02:509 (5,6,1) - in before. However, Space becomes small. It's not logical. Would you do 1.5x or more?
  6. 01:15:414 (2,4) - This is overmaps. Rather these 2 circles think it to be 01:15:855 - and 01:16:075 - . Please confirm it in playback rate25%. 01:29:531 (2,4) - same.
  7. 01:24:789 (4,5,6,7) - Because the rhythm doesn't change, I feel this double hit unnaturally. I think that they should take rhythm obediently. try this, plz http://puu.sh/mUogj.jpg
  8. 01:28:649 - Would you add a circle?
  9. 01:32:068 (4) - The 01:32:289 - has a strong sound. In this case I think that the reverse slider is inappropriate. I recommend a normal slider. http://puu.sh/mUoHa.jpg
  10. 01:42:767 - Would you add a circle?
  11. 01:45:634 - I think that have rhythm same as 01:43:539 (1,2,3) - and 01:44:421 (5,6,7) - . I recommend to add a circle.
117's Hard

  1. AR doesn't have other diff and good balance. In addition, I think AR8 to be high because BPM is slow. I recommend AR7.
  2. 00:17:068 (5) - I feel that I do blanket forcibly. Therefore a flow from 00:16:627 (4) - isn't kinda good. Would you make a pair of the 00:17:950 (1) - ? http://puu.sh/mUqFr.jpg
  3. 01:32:399 (2) - I think that it is not necessary to pick up 01:32:399 - . Because the 01:32:289 (1) - is a strong sound, do you not switch from there to 1/1slider?
  4. 01:44:200 - The flow of the music does not decline. Therefore, I recommend the addition of the circle.
  5. 01:45:083 - ^
  6. 01:45:965 (2) - I feel this rhythm unnaturally. I think that a slider does not fit rhythm. Would you switch to the circle? It can make rhythm same as 01:43:539 (1) - and 01:44:421 (2) - by doing so it. http://puu.sh/mUssp.jpg
KwaN's Normal

  1. fine. However, I'm anxious about this blue tick 01:03:171 (5,6) - I want to avoid the use of the blue tick for player as much as possible. I can't think of good suggestion.sorry..
GL ;)
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

[Kamiya] wrote:

先占位 ,凌晨摸orz 晚上突然有事了

这里是四萌!FOR M4M!

[117's Hard]

01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 这部分的note属于bgm不属于人声 稍微有些格格不入,建议改成人声部分。(有种强行加上去的感觉

01:45:303 (1,2) - 滑条间距可以稍微拉开一些(2部分滑条大概x:200y296

[Lunatic]

00:11:774 (1,3) - blanket更美观

00:13:980 (1,2,3,4) - 连打起手重音会比较好入手,但对于这种情况来看我建议00:13:539 (6,1) - 改成slider后面连打改成反复滑条。仅此建议。如图:
↑可以将6滑条改成note或者7滑条改成note 这样入手连打会轻松一些。。吧。

00:14:862 (6) - 移动至x:288y:176或者是
01:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然这个地方作图上稍微有些局限,希望还是改成滑条方式。(个人意见

版面稍显混乱。00:33:392 (2,4,5,6) - 01:07:142 (3,5,6,7) - 像这些靠得很近的地方可以稍微摆开些---ok

以上!!!!!!

:) 然而我又骗了一波kudosu
GD LK and GJ!
no reply = no change

感谢mod :)

-shikaco- wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:11:774 (1) - 这个形状滑条已经连着出现好几次了,而且这是new combo,换一个会好一点 ---换了个直的
00:29:862 (2,3,4) - 统一ds会好看一些 ---ok
00:51:480 (3) - 这个最好把红点放在滑条最中间 ---不了,现在的好看些
01:03:171 (2,3) - 中间白线音漏了,挺突兀的 ---不跟
01:46:847 (7) - 这个重叠没什么必要吧,干脆放远一点会好一点 ---ok
01:45:303 (1,2) - 值得商榷一下.有点诡异,可能放一个跟之前一样的三连会好一点 ---不跟
01:33:392 (2,3,4) - 建议摆一个更对称一点的跳,考虑一下等腰的形状 ---懒

讲真 好神
感谢mod :)

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From my Q~

General

  1. AiMod: An error of metadata is some displayed.(tag and audio preview) Please revise it. ---fix in kwan's Normal
Lunatic

  1. 00:20:928 - The sound of the guitar still exists here. I recommend addition of circle when I consider a flow from 00:19:053 (2,3,4) - and 00:19:936 (2,3,4) - .
  2. 00:25:119 - Rhythm is monotonous now. Because here is a sound, would you add a circle?
  3. 00:28:649 - ^
  4. 00:35:708 - ^ ---here no
  5. 01:03:171 (2) - The sound is more kinda stronger than 01:02:509 (5,6,1) - in before. However, Space becomes small. It's not logical. Would you do 1.5x or more?
  6. 01:15:414 (2,4) - This is overmaps. Rather these 2 circles think it to be 01:15:855 - and 01:16:075 - . Please confirm it in playback rate25%. 01:29:531 (2,4) - same.
  7. 01:24:789 (4,5,6,7) - Because the rhythm doesn't change, I feel this double hit unnaturally. I think that they should take rhythm obediently. try this, plz http://puu.sh/mUogj.jpg
  8. 01:28:649 - Would you add a circle?
  9. 01:32:068 (4) - The 01:32:289 - has a strong sound. In this case I think that the reverse slider is inappropriate. I recommend a normal slider. http://puu.sh/mUoHa.jpg
  10. 01:42:767 - Would you add a circle?
  11. 01:45:634 - I think that have rhythm same as 01:43:539 (1,2,3) - and 01:44:421 (5,6,7) - . I recommend to add a circle.
GL ;)
no reply =fix

thank you :)

@ kwan , 帮你diff加了tag和调了相同预览点 :)
Satellite
Hello

[General]
  1. looks fine!
[KwaN's Normal]
  1. HP Drain -1 please
  2. 01:32:730 - volume 5% is rankable pattern?
[117's Hard]
  1. Why Hard diff AR8 ? Lunatic diff AR8 so AR7 better.
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:15:303 (1,2) - move x : 0 y : 154 ?
  2. 00:17:730 (4,1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to "Ctrl+G" please.
  3. 01:03:833 (4,1) - I think that it is the Nc pattern that it is hard to read a little. so Changed this Nc pattern ?
  4. 01:18:171 (5) - Add Nc here.
  5. 01:46:406 (6,7,8) - This spacing is really awkward. why different use distance snap ?
That's all. Call me Back ~
IamKwaN
HP-1. However, having sliderend being 5% is rankable, so I would like to keep it. Thank you for mod! o_O

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense.
@二妹 幫我HP-1, thanks~
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Satellite wrote:

Hello

[General]
  1. looks fine!

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:15:303 (1,2) - move x : 0 y : 154 ? --good idea ,fix
  2. 00:17:730 (4,1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to "Ctrl+G" please.--nice ,fix
  3. 01:03:833 (4,1) - I think that it is the Nc pattern that it is hard to read a little. so Changed this Nc pattern ?
    ---hm...you are right , fix
  4. 01:18:171 (5) - Add Nc here. ---i think no ,because NC here then 6 would be the 2 , is a little strange , so keep like 01:25:450 (8) -
  5. 01:46:406 (6,7,8) - This spacing is really awkward. why different use distance snap ? ---fix
That's all. Call me Back ~ ---thank you~ love you

IamKwaN wrote:

HP-1. However, having sliderend being 5% is rankable, so I would like to keep it. Thank you for mod! o_O

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense.
@二妹 幫我HP-1, thanks~ ---好,fix了,爆爆,
thank you Satellite :)
DreaM117er

[Kamiya] wrote:

先占位 ,凌晨摸orz 晚上突然有事了

这里是四萌!FOR M4M!

[117's Hard]

01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 这部分的note属于bgm不属于人声 稍微有些格格不入,建议改成人声部分。(有种强行加上去的感觉

01:45:303 (1,2) - 滑条间距可以稍微拉开一些(2部分滑条大概x:200y296 >全部微調

:) 然而我又骗了一波kudosu
GD LK and GJ!

-shikaco- wrote:

[117's Hard]
00:41:774 (1) - 换3/4滑条或者折返是不是好点
01:03:171 (1) - 有点违和
01:08:906 (2) - 改到01:09:017 (2) - 和前面一致吧 >沒動,我覺得沒必要耶
01:45:965 (2) - 中间漏音了吧 可拆可不拆 建议拆 >注意我是跟什麼聲音

讲真 好神

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From my Q~

117's Hard

  1. AR doesn't have other diff and good balance. In addition, I think AR8 to be high because BPM is slow. I recommend AR7. >Fix
  2. 00:17:068 (5) - I feel that I do blanket forcibly. Therefore a flow from 00:16:627 (4) - isn't kinda good. Would you make a pair of the 00:17:950 (1) - ? http://puu.sh/mUqFr.jpg
  3. 01:32:399 (2) - I think that it is not necessary to pick up 01:32:399 - . Because the 01:32:289 (1) - is a strong sound, do you not switch from there to 1/1slider? >sure, fix now
  4. 01:44:200 - The flow of the music does not decline. Therefore, I recommend the addition of the circle.
  5. 01:45:083 - ^
  6. 01:45:965 (2) - I feel this rhythm unnaturally. I think that a slider does not fit rhythm. Would you switch to the circle? It can make rhythm same as 01:43:539 (1) - and 01:44:421 (2) - by doing so it. http://puu.sh/mUssp.jpg >OK, take your advice, nice!!

GL ;)

Satellite wrote:

Hello

[General]
  1. looks fine!
[117's Hard]
  1. Why Hard diff AR8 ? Lunatic diff AR8 so AR7 better.
>Fix

That's all. Call me Back ~
Thanks all. No reply = fix

117
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92,132,101774,6,0,P|88:68|80:4,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,243,102656,2,0,P|170:203|176:164,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,60,103097,2,0,L|265:100|260:140,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,282,103539,6,0,P|335:330|443:322,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,217,104200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,217,104421,2,0,P|424:169|316:177,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,249,105083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,249,105303,6,0,P|386:169|397:84,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,18,105965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,204,106406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,204,106627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,204,106847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107509,12,2,110597,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
ok update ,

thank you 117 :)
Satellite
recheck and looks fine ~

[Metadata]

http://www.toranoana.jp/info/dojin/toho_uroboros4/

good luck!
smallboat
Okay, mapper and I looks fine in this mapset. Let it go Qualified
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

smallboat wrote:

Okay, mapper and I looks fine in this mapset. Let it go Qualified
爱你
Sonnyc
[117's Hard]
  1. 01:06:921 (2,3) - The pattern itself is pretty fine, but since this the only 1/1 stack after a 1/2 jump during the kiai section, this pattern lacked in consistency.
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:08:244 - 00:57:656 - 01:11:774 - 01:18:833 - 01:25:230 (7) - 01:25:892 - 01:36:480 - Missing Finish
  2. 00:10:892 - 00:34:715 - 00:43:539 - Redundant Finish
  3. 00:16:627 (4,1,2,3) - Personally this spacing felt less intuitive. Placing (1) closer to the previous slider, and giving more space between (2) would indicate the 3/4 rhythm interval better.
  4. 00:56:994 (6,1) - While (1) is bigger in sound, (6) having a stronger emphasis in pattern felt weird imo.
  5. 01:05:818 - 01:06:480 - Seeming your kiai section, this finish spam doesn't seems intended. If it's intended, using it consistently for the counterpart is recommended for a better organization.
Hitsound in Lunatic needs improvement imo.
Satellite
congrats moonlightleaf <3

ayakura mei ♡
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sonnyc wrote:

[117's Hard]
  1. 01:06:921 (2,3) - The pattern itself is pretty fine, but since this the only 1/1 stack after a 1/2 jump during the kiai section, this pattern lacked in consistency. ---i don't think this should to fix , since it just a jump ,
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:08:244 - 00:57:656 - 01:11:774 - 01:18:833 - 01:25:230 (7) - 01:25:892 - 01:36:480 - Missing Finish ---no need i think , since lost of them like that also 00:59:421 etc that you no said , in fact , i have my own hitsound add way
  2. 00:10:892 - 00:34:715 - 00:43:539 - Redundant Finish --- like them 00:10:892 (3) has the big sound , Finish is no redundant
  3. 00:16:627 (4,1,2,3) - Personally this spacing felt less intuitive. Placing (1) closer to the previous slider, and giving more space between (2) would indicate the 3/4 rhythm interval better. --- as you said "better" , no unrankable
  4. 00:56:994 (6,1) - While (1) is bigger in sound, (6) having a stronger emphasis in pattern felt weird imo. --just iuo , (6) has big sound , so i do that
  5. 01:05:818 - 01:06:480 - Seeming your kiai section, this finish spam doesn't seems intended. If it's intended, using it consistently for the counterpart is recommended for a better organization.
Hitsound in Lunatic needs improvement imo.
if you can't understand my hitsound , i have no word to say anymore :?
Sonnyc
Thanks for the reply. You'll already know that DQ is different from an unrank.
Still if you, as a mapper, do not agree the risen points, then it's fine.
Natsu
00:08:244 (1) - cymbal is really obviously in the music, also Kwan diff is missing it. Also if you compare this sound with 01:03:171 (2) - 00:21:700 (5) - (you added finish here) are basically the same.

I agree with sonnyc with the missing hitsounds, since you added finish on similar cymbals, then I can't believe you avoid these on purpose.


Some additional mod:

General:

  1. I don't think this need an epilepsy warning tbh.
Lunatic

  1. 00:17:289 add a circle or make 00:17:068 (1) - a 1/2 slider the polarity change is super weird to play and is the only time that happens in the whole diff, so isn't consistent or comfortable to play at all
  2. 01:03:502 - missing finish here, I guess you can't argue about this one, since you added one at the same sound in the music at 01:03:171 - also as additional suggestion, wouldn't be better to follow the melody in this way:

    or
  3. 01:14:422 (4,5,6) - not that important, but shouldn't be 0,70 spacing as the other ones?
  4. 01:46:627 (7) - add finish here as well sound is similar as the previous object
  5. 00:45:303 - 00:47:068 (1) - 00:54:127 (1) - 00:59:421 (1) - 01:01:186 (1) - 01:02:068 (4) - 01:03:502 - 01:11:774 (1) - 01:24:127 (1) - 01:36:480 (1) - 01:46:627 (7) - ^
  6. 00:15:303 (1) - clap on slider body isn't on purpose right?
  7. 00:16:186 (3) - ^
  8. 01:39:127 (1,2,3,4) - you should consisder to use lower volume at the slider tails, right now sounds really spammy and not fitting with was is going on in the music
Hard

  1. 01:46:406 (3,4) - add finish on both objects
  2. 00:10:009 (1,2,3) - I really dislike this patterns, I believe this don't belong to a hard diff level, the polarity change in those patterns is really hard to play and be accurate, use sliders or unstack all this kind of patterns
  3. 00:17:068 (5,1) - according to your pattern and music, the NC should be in 5 not in your actual 1, so swap NC here
  4. then add NC here 00:18:833 (2) - and 00:20:597 (6) -
  5. 00:51:921 (1,2) - swap NC, same reason as 00:17:068 (5,1)
  6. 00:55:671 (4) - missing NC I suppose
Hitsounds in sonnyc and my mod may apply to kwan too

Edit: added some suggestion for hard diff
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