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The 08 team_Bourdon
可以算是完成了吧...(可是KIAI time和音效我還沒加進去 :P )
等你加了KIAI,也順便幫我加吧 :P

starrrr!! :D

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
The 08 team_Bourdon
wmfchris
I'm not sure, tag Rin? :d
Resize BG to 800x600

[hard]
0:33:705 (2,3) down+left to grid
0:45:511 (2) spacing?
0:46:479 (1,2,3,4) Fix (1,4) and move (2,3) to make an equilateral triangle?
0:48:027 (1,2,3,4) (1,4) up to grid, form an equilateral triangle too? :3
0:48:802 (1,2,3,1) strange pattern, make them in equildistance pattern >_<
1:18:027 (4,5) left 1 grid
2:42:608 (1) right 1 grid

[Normal+]
0:23:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) stacks too much?

other ok

super moe BG >///<

Mijn vader is LiGang GJ
kanpakyin
Mod...request by HKOSP(wmf modding queue)
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General
~add The 08 team_Bourdon to the tag?

[Easy]
00:44:931(1)spacing~
01:20:554(x)The spinner should stop in 01:22:544?
01:31:382(x)remove this spinner,I think this is not necessary
01:48:415(1)spacing
02:15:511(4)down 1 grid?

Normal+ and Hard wmf had already mod it
The 08 team_Bourdon

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal+]
0:23:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) stacks too much? Fixed
Thanks,wmfchris 8-)

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
1) Your BG is very sketchy (half-NSFW), you need to find another BG. Your BG is reminds me of Ass Up! Song
2) Your offset is bittttttt late, set offset to 46

[Easy]
Please map this full, half-mapped is sucks

00:27:124 (4) - Move 2 grid left? So this object alligned with 00:24:802 (1) and the pattern looks neat?
00:27:898 (1) - The finish hitsound are too low, increase it pleaseeeee
00:42:995 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?

01:17:060 (3) - Clap?
01:18:995 (1) - Replace from whistle to finish?
01:39:898 (3) - Whistle?
01:40:286 (4) - Remove clap?
01:42:608 (3) - Remove clap at end?
01:53:834 (3) - Whistle?

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:18:608 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern are boring, change something else
01:17:834 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 01:17:253 (1)
02:23:834 (5) - Extend this to 02:24:802, end at red tick has a wrong rhythm/sound

[Hard]
00:21:336 (4) - Seriously, this is hard to read at gameplay
00:24:820 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
all fixed.
i cant change another BG ,becuz http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm12271282 :o
sisiJiang
hi ~
i'm from Sunny Holic's Modding Queue

图不错,辛苦了.
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壁纸的大小不对。
另外,有个.osb 文件,貌似你不会向SB方向发展,那么这个删掉吧。

下面说的全都是一些建议,要不要采用,得由你自己决定,看适不适合你的风格。

Easy
01:19:013 (1) - 这个“哔” 去掉吧,不协调。如果你想突出01:22:110 那里的那个音,原来的鼓声 100% 音效就可以了
03:08:949 (1) - 左一格。 因为这个变了,记得把后面的也弄整齐 也就是03:09:723 (1,2,3,4) - 全部左一格

normal
01:20:175 (4) - 左一格。

hard
00:26:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里还是对齐好点。5678左一格,或者3456右一格,接着78右2格
00:29:465 (1) - 下一格会不会好点?
00:44:368 (7) - 这里建议加一个note
00:55:013 (1,2) - 这里斜一点。比如这样

02:04:884 (3,4,5) - 右上一格
02:12:626 (6) - 加个note?
02:47:271 (1) - 右一格
02:49:787 (7,9) - 加2个note? 加了会让节奏紧一点。因为后面是高潮部分。


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下面这个改动可能会和你的风格不服,想好了再决定改不改。all my post are suggestions。仅仅是一些建议而已。

对于3个break 前的结尾。
个人觉得结尾还是跟着音乐好点。曲中间的无所谓,但是结尾还是跟音乐好点。这样会好听一些。
所以。

不过这样因为5连和 蓝线,难度会忽然增大。所以可以用slider 代替,像这样


sisiJiang
因为一个回复只能发3个图
所以在这里补充
这是第2,3个break 前的
5连+slider

全部note
顺便说一下,中间那个不是手滑放歪的,因为叠在一起会移位,所以这样放

如果这样改的话,后面4个建议加 finish音,以及new combo。

Fapfrit
Sorry for the delay, I was very busy

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)
- Sightly reduce the audio (very loudly)

Timing:
Good!

Easy:
01:46:304 - add break time
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
------
00:33:723 - delete W, put E
00:34:110 - R, 00:35:658 - R
00:36:820 - delete W
00:37:207 W+E
00:39:916 - delete W
00:40:304 - R, 00:41:852 - R
00:50:755 - delete W, put E
00:51:529 - E+R
00:55:787 - W+E
00:59:271 - R
01:02:755 - R, 01:03:142 - R
01:03:529 - W
01:09:336 - delete W
01:15:142 - R, 01:15:916 - E
01:37:207 - delete W
01:37:594 - R
01:40:304 - delete W
01:40:691 - W+E
01:43:400 - delete W
01:43:787 - R, 01:45:336 - E+R
01:48:433 - E+R
01:51:142 - delete W
01:54:239 - delete W, put E
01:55:013 - R
01:56:949 - R
01:59:271 - W+E
02:00:433 - delete W
02:00:820 - E+R
02:50:368 - W
02:51:142 - R
02:55:013 - R
02:56:562 - R
03:04:304 - R
03:05:465 - delete R
03:05:852 - R
03:08:562 - delete R
03:08:949 - R

Normal+ :
- Add hitsound at the beginning
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00:30:239 (5) - align precisely under the slider #4 (without gridsnap)
00:53:852 - add a circle
00:53:852 (spinner) - start on 00:54:239
01:16:497 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap)
01:19:787 (3,4) - spaicing
01:57:336 - add a circle
01:57:336 (spinner) - start on 01:57:723
02:23:271 (3) - down by one on the grid
03:09:529 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap)

Hard:
- Overall and HP Drain +1
- If you want sound mod, write on queue or pm
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00:21:142 (2,3) - spaicing
00:33:916 (3) - better, move this circle under #1
00:34:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - spaicing: make it the same
00:37:013 - add a circle
02:16:110 (4,1) - spaicing
02:19:787 - add a circle
02:51:142 (4) - left by one on the grid
03:14:949 - add a circle
03:15:045 - add a circle

Cool map 8) Star
The 08 team_Bourdon

Tiny stone wrote:

normal
01:20:175 (4) - 左一格。 Fixed

Famfrit wrote:

Normal+ :
- Add hitsound at the beginning
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00:30:239 (5) - align precisely under the slider #4 (without gridsnap) Fixed
00:53:852 - add a circle Fixed
00:53:852 (spinner) - start on 00:54:239 Fixed
01:16:497 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap) Fixed
01:19:787 (3,4) - spaicing Hmm, i think i no at here start spaicing :)
01:57:336 - add a circle Fixed
01:57:336 (spinner) - start on 01:57:723 Fixed
02:23:271 (3) - down by one on the grid Fixed
03:09:529 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap) Fixed
Thank you, Tiny stone and Famfrit :)

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
to Tiny stone : :) all fixed ,包括3个图上的所有 太感激了 就给2个kds吧 ;)
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
to Famfrit : i fixed all, thanks very much :)
Kami
:) star
蛋姐姐moemoe~
CSY the corrupt
8-)
IceBeam
BG isn't 4:3

You better resize it.

Disable letterboxes during breaks.

[Normal +]
00:14:949 - Clap.
02:21:336 (5) - Ah,it playr really bad,please make it 1x BPM.
02:39:529 (3) - Mirror from (1)?
03:10:884 (2) - Well,same suggestion,remove 0.5x from here.

[Hard]
Well,that's more like an Insane.
Hm..maybe be you should increase AR.
00:24:045 (3) - It's completely stacked,it's not allowed..change to a better way.

I don't like spacing in Easy,but otherwise it seems fine.
Good luck anyway,star~
The 08 team_Bourdon

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal +]
00:14:949 - Clap. Fixed
02:21:336 (5) - Ah,it playr really bad,please make it 1x BPM. Fixed
02:39:529 (3) - Mirror from (1)? Fixed
03:10:884 (2) - Well,same suggestion,remove 0.5x from here. Hm..no. :)
Thanks, IceBeam 8-)

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
im very lazy now >_<
ignorethis
靠 触姐你不看我签名档吗
CarlJohnson
:)
Hakurei Reimu
没蛋姐lol
FutakiKanata
可以吗?
Aria
╮(╯_╰)╭
kanojo snow
:) star star
macttt
:roll: 这样。。。嘛?
Windows_Vista_old
:D :D :D
cirno821
._.来加星了
Ice coffee
star 8-)
miku
star~ :)
Nozomi Kiriya
Star~

=w=
Windows XP_old
8-)
Muscipular
star~
hopeyayv
a970825
star= =
ignorethis
BG太那啥了改一个

Easy的话Note对齐,部分clap感觉比较随意,可以去掉

Normal的话hitsound问题也是

Insane中jump比较随意,虽然玩起来可以读但是感觉很违和,基本可以全部删掉

没了 :D
kiddly
[General]
offset+8 I think.

[Easy]
00:36:433 - add a note?
00:50:755 (4,1) - add a note at 00:51:142 ,or unstack them.

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for a normal(normal+?) diff.
You used a "normal" mapset, but there is some patterns that are too hard for a normal diff. so I think you can make the mapset harder and rename it to "hard."

[Insane]
nothing found, but I suggest you to add more streams in this map,streams really fit this song.
Kalotaku
star :D
The 08 team_Bourdon

kiddly wrote:

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for a normal(normal+?) diff.
You used a "normal" mapset, but there is some patterns that are too hard for a normal diff. so I think you can make the mapset harder and rename it to "hard." Hmmm...i will re-do the normal, so i think that is not like the HARD :)
Thank you, kiddly :)

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
small eight :oops:
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)




Insane

好像MOD得差不多了没什么大问题

00:21:150 (2,3) - 注意stack leniec对位置的影响
00:44:376 (7,1) - 这地方也是


Normal+

00:34:312 (1,2,3) - 我感觉停顿后红线开始的slider打起来特别难受,虽然和歌词能对上。还有这三个间隔不一样就不要都叠起来(1PC我果断断了)
00:36:441 (3,1) - spacing
00:37:408 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这玩意全在红线上打起来太难受了,而且还有CLAP
01:37:795 (1,2,3) - 同第一个
01:39:924 (3,1) - spacing(应该是直接复制了ctrl+h ctrl+j的……后面还是全在红线上)


Easy

01:08:957 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的排列对新手有点难……
02:12:441 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这个复制过来的也是……
03:08:183 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 同上。似乎适当提高slider速度能好读一点(当然这样需要REMAP了- -,就这样问题也不大)

good job 8-)
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