jonathanlfj wrote:

translation for reference

Collab Insane

00:00:830 - 50% sounds too loud, 30-25% volume sounds nicer I'll see what jonny thinks because i ripped the hs from his lol
00:02:134 - add break?, 00:07:351 - same here already is a break there, second one is too short for a break imo
00:09:308 (3) - this slider should be more emphasized how exactly
00:09:797 - should have emphasis with clickable object ill consider this if mentioned again
00:23:982 (6,1) - can look better looks good to me
00:39:634 (4,1) - i think the DS is too large for an insane whaaat its ok
00:42:243 - insane shouldn't ignore this vocal sound, 00:47:460 - 00:52:677 - 00:57:895 - same
01:07:677 (5,7) - a little out of bound LOL? not really
01:10:286 (4) - ^ ^
01:15:829 (2,3) - speed change recommend NC, can also emphasis vocals I don't feel like spamming ncs, wouldn't look nice imo
01:27:895 (4) - a little inconsistent with the sudden slider, 01:27:895 (4,5) - make into two 1/2 sliders to follow vocals it's fine
01:35:721 (1) - remove NC nah

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

嗯？总感觉你以前好像做过这首歌...
原来是做过一个GD..

[Insane]
03:28:221 (1,2) - 类似这样？感觉挺合适..嗯..因为找不到什么了所以只能提提这种建议了..仅供参考 i think current one is fine

gl

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

• [Insane]

1. 00:00:830 - 跟Collab Insane一樣, 小聲點 current volume sounds fine to me, don't want too quiet
2. 02:10:612 (1) - 別NC這, 02:11:264 (2) - NC這邊, 這樣跟其他一樣的地方才一致, 像這樣
3. 02:54:145 (4,1) - 只有這邊的節奏跟其他不一樣呢, 把這邊改1/1滑條來跟其他地方一樣 following piano
4. 03:26:590 (7) - 跟我在Collab Insane的03:26:264 (7) - 一樣的問題 intentionally did this to create better build up
5. 03:28:547 (2) - 改1/4滑條來跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 跟02:28:547 (1,2,3) - 一樣 this is following the stronger drum in the music which is different from previous kiais

• [Countless]

1. 00:00:830 - 一樣
2. 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4) - is the most difficult diff, i believe you can map sth more interesting here :\ that would be overmap here, i don't want to abuse it
3. 00:26:916 (1,2,3,4) - ;w; increased distance here
4. 01:59:525 (4,6) - 小小小overlap
5. 02:10:286 (3,1) - 跟insane一樣
6. 02:26:264 (5) - NC來強調這邊的鼓聲?
7. 03:26:590 (7) -
8. 03:28:547 (2) - 跟insane一樣
9. 03:44:362 (1) - 我覺得可以不用NC, 如果硬要NC的話也應該NC在03:44:525 (2) - 才對 putting more emphasis on the pattern
10. 03:58:221 (1,2,3,4) - ;w;
11. 04:08:656 (1,2,3,4) - :p this one is fine pretty large jumps
12. 04:13:710 (11,1) - 沒貼好lol

好圖 先給顆星xd
睡覺去
map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436611

Mercusheigan wrote:

Hi jonathan, M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427471

they grey combo colour would look better if it were a bit more darker :3 its supposed to mimic the colour of the moon xD

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Insane

01:26:590 (8) - something about this slider position makes the flow weird for me ;w;

04:16:645 (1) - same as in the previous diff current position is more appropriate imo

and that's pretty much it on this one, lol

2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: Countles:
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: 01:58:873 (2,3) -  blanket
2016-05-11 03:29 jonathanlfj: ayy blanket mods
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: 03:10:938 (6,1) -  isn't better to use less spacing ? since 1 isn't strong at all
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: ok fixed
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: second one i did that cause its an NC
2016-05-11 03:30 Natsu: Collab insane: OD 7.5? 
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: sure
2016-05-11 03:30 Natsu: 03:08:982 (1,1,1) -  why the NCs?
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: 04:13:873 (1) -  shouldn't the moon be white? 
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: captin did that and he said its cool
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Okay
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fixed the colour thing
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Insane: 02:40:612 (3,4) -  blanket
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: i have the collab parts in map description
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: cant really sb when there is a video
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Hard: 04:13:873 (1) -  now white moon :c?
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fyi insane is just countless rearranged LOL
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fixed both
2016-05-11 03:32 Natsu: man best mod 2016, tell me when ready ahahha
2016-05-11 03:32 Natsu: oh there is some osb 
2016-05-11 03:33 jonathanlfj: there is no osb in my local folder
2016-05-11 03:34 Natsu: oh wdf xD
2016-05-11 03:34 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/oNPRq.png
2016-05-11 03:34 Natsu: ya maybe I clicked design or something lol
2016-05-11 03:35 jonathanlfj: wow 11% bug let me researt client