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96Neko x KurousaP - Kagen no Tsuki

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SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
M4M

  • [Collab Insane]
  1. 00:00:830 - 我覺得50%在這邊有點大聲, 換成30%或25%比較剛好, 還有怎不做00:02:134 - break :|?, 跟00:07:351 - 也做一下八
  2. 00:09:308 (3) - this slider should be more emphasized
  3. 00:09:797 - 還有這邊的鼓聲不應該用滑條尾來express, 應該用note或是滑條
  4. 00:23:982 (6,1) - 用好看一點?
  5. 00:39:634 (4,1) - 我覺得這邊達間距對insane來說太大了
  6. 00:42:243 - insane難度不要忽略這個vocal音, 00:47:460 - 00:52:677 - 00:57:895 - 一樣
  7. 01:07:677 (5,7) - 有點超出範圍了LOL?
  8. 01:10:286 (4) - ^
  9. 01:15:829 (2,3) - 變速滑條建議NC, 而解這邊還有vocal可以emhpasized
  10. 01:27:895 (4) - 我覺得這邊突然放個來回滑條有點inconsistent, 可以把01:27:895 (4,5) - 改2個1/2滑條跟vocal跑
  11. 01:35:721 (1) - 別NC, 完全incnosistent
  12. 01:56:916 (5,7) - blanket?
  13. 02:08:656 (1) - 把這滑條用的對稱一點, 原來的看起來歪掉了XD
  14. 02:10:938 - 加個note, 02:13:547 (6,6) - 都加了, 這邊怎不加一下, 這也有個vocal音可以跟, 不然突然空一拍有點怪:o
  15. 02:28:547 (5,1,2) - 把這邊的NC usage用的跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 03:28:547 (2,3,4) - 一樣(如果你沒修01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 的NC
  16. 03:26:264 (7) - 把滑條尾改note, 滑條尾的聲音不應該比滑條頭重, 而且滑條尾的vocal是個突然升高的音, 更需要被強調
  17. 03:29:525 (1) - 有點超出範圍XD
  18. 03:31:482 (7,1) - 可以用得好看一點:3
  19. 03:46:319 - 加個note吧, 這邊突然控一拍很奇怪, 因為你似乎都把kiai塞得滿滿的OWO
  20. 每個kiai最後一小節的NC usage都不一, 把他們都用的一樣吧 01:34:743 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:47:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:46:482 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3) -
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:00:830 - 跟Collab Insane一樣, 小聲點
  2. 02:10:612 (1) - 別NC這, 02:11:264 (2) - NC這邊, 這樣跟其他一樣的地方才一致, 像這樣
  3. 02:54:145 (4,1) - 只有這邊的節奏跟其他不一樣呢, 把這邊改1/1滑條來跟其他地方一樣
  4. 03:26:590 (7) - 跟我在Collab Insane的03:26:264 (7) - 一樣的問題
  5. 03:28:547 (2) - 改1/4滑條來跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 跟02:28:547 (1,2,3) - 一樣
  • [Countless]
  1. 00:00:830 - 一樣
  2. 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4) - is the most difficult diff, i believe you can map sth more interesting here :\
  3. 00:26:916 (1,2,3,4) - ;w;
  4. 01:59:525 (4,6) - 小小小overlap
  5. 02:10:286 (3,1) - 跟insane一樣
  6. 02:26:264 (5) - NC來強調這邊的鼓聲?
  7. 03:26:590 (7) - :o
  8. 03:28:547 (2) - 跟insane一樣
  9. 03:44:362 (1) - 我覺得可以不用NC, 如果硬要NC的話也應該NC在03:44:525 (2) - 才對
  10. 03:58:221 (1,2,3,4) - ;w;
  11. 04:08:656 (1,2,3,4) - :p
  12. 04:13:710 (11,1) - 沒貼好lol
好圖 先給顆星xd
睡覺去 :)
map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436611
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Mercusheigan
Hi jonathan, M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427471

they grey combo colour would look better if it were a bit more darker :3

warning: may contain pieces of broken english

Collab Insane

Pls add a SB so people know who mapped what

00:07:351 - maybe if you do some pattern like this will help with this sound that doesn't deserve a break but "is there"

example


00:39:634 (4,1) - this feels a bit stretched when playing, imo

01:15:177 (4) - not stacked properly

01:22:351 (3) - maybe curve it down a bit so it flows better to the next slider?

01:26:264 (7) - not stacked properly

01:27:569 (3) - ^ (starting to think that these might be a glitch and I'm seeing it while it isn't actually broken.. oh well)

01:27:895 (4) - this flows weirdly.. not bad, but weird (maybe if the slider goes down instead of to the right..?)

01:33:764 (6) - stack (i'll just say stack now on ;w;)

01:37:351 (1) - the distance from 6 to 1 should be bigger than from 5 to 6, imo

01:54:634 (5) - move a bit so it makes a better shaped triangle (considering the spacing between 4 and 2. 466, 235 looked nice)

02:33:764 (6) - stack

02:39:471 (9) - move a bit so it has the same distance from 6 as much as 8 has from 5

03:31:482 (7) - stack

04:16:645 (1) - the slider should end on the hypermeasure, no?

Insane

01:26:590 (8) - something about this slider position makes the flow weird for me ;w;

04:16:645 (1) - same as in the previous diff

and that's pretty much it on this one, lol

Giralda's Hard

01:15:503 (1) - lone combo? ;w;

01:24:960 (1) - RNC

02:28:547 (1) - again lone combo (obviously this is intentional but isn't it a bit confunsing to a hard-level player? ;w;)

this is a really fun hard :o but the doubles on slider end at the beggining felt a bit underwhelming/boring to me (eg 00:19:579 (2,3) - ) maybe adding some spacing for these types of "doubles" would improve them a bit?
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
need that collab insane mod tl'd lol
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
mod responses

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

[Collab Insane]

02:03:764 (2,3,4) - as what I said in Hard diff. I meant to follow the vocals here, and leaving a gap there feels quite empty to me D:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

  • [Collab Insane]
  1. 01:56:916 (5,7) - blanket? sure
  2. 02:08:656 (1) - 把這滑條用的對稱一點, 原來的看起來歪掉了XD sorry, hope it looks better now ;w;
  3. 02:10:938 - 加個note, 02:13:547 (6,6) - 都加了, 這邊怎不加一下, 這也有個vocal音可以跟, 不然突然空一拍有點怪:o added note
  4. 02:28:547 (5,1,2) - 把這邊的NC usage用的跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 03:28:547 (2,3,4) - 一樣(如果你沒修01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 的NC oops, changed NC thank you

Mercusheigan wrote:

Collab Insane

01:54:634 (5) - move a bit so it makes a better shaped triangle (considering the spacing between 4 and 2. 466, 235 looked nice) ok

02:33:764 (6) - stack this is a recurring problem for me, fixed

02:39:471 (9) - move a bit so it has the same distance from 6 as much as 8 has from 5 i tried my best to
thanks for the mods~~

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317,150,165829,2,0,L|326:238,1,82,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,287,166156,2,0,L|243:300,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,349,166482,1,2,1:2:0:0:
89,215,166645,2,0,L|102:129,1,82,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,31,166971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,127,167134,2,0,B|198:165|156:102|95:136,1,164,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,239,167623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,178,167786,6,0,P|355:115|352:78,1,82,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,239,168112,2,0,P|219:291|245:333,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,221,168438,2,0,P|447:131|448:52,1,164,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,22,168927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,59,169090,2,0,L|89:49,1,82,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,244,169416,2,0,L|158:234,1,82,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,130,169743,2,0,L|422:120,1,82,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,315,170069,2,0,L|353:305,1,82,8|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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Collab Insane

00:00:830 - 50% sounds too loud, 30-25% volume sounds nicer
00:02:134 - add break?, 00:07:351 - same here
00:09:308 (3) - this slider should be more emphasized
00:09:797 - should have emphasis with clickable object
00:23:982 (6,1) - can look better
00:39:634 (4,1) - i think the DS is too large for an insane
00:42:243 - insane shouldn't ignore this vocal sound, 00:47:460 - 00:52:677 - 00:57:895 - same
01:07:677 (5,7) - a little out of bound LOL?
01:10:286 (4) - ^
01:15:829 (2,3) - speed change recommend NC, can also emphasis vocals
01:27:895 (4) - a little inconsistent with the sudden slider, 01:27:895 (4,5) - make into two 1/2 sliders to follow vocals
01:35:721 (1) - remove NC
01:56:916 (5,7) - blanket?
02:08:656 (1) - a little more symmetry here XD
02:10:938 - add a note, 02:13:547 (6,6) - has it
02:28:547 (5,1,2) - NC like 01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 03:28:547 (2,3,4)
03:26:264 (7) - use circle here for the slider end, emphasis the higher pitch vocal sound
03:29:525 (1) - out of bound XD
03:31:482 (7,1) - can look a bit better:3
03:46:319 - add a note, the sudden pause seems a bit weird
every kiai's last verse NC usage is different, make them the same 01:34:743 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:47:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:46:482 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3) -
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jonathanlfj wrote:

translation for reference

Collab Insane

00:00:830 - 50% sounds too loud, 30-25% volume sounds nicer I'll see what jonny thinks because i ripped the hs from his lol
00:02:134 - add break?, 00:07:351 - same here already is a break there, second one is too short for a break imo
00:09:308 (3) - this slider should be more emphasized how exactly
00:09:797 - should have emphasis with clickable object ill consider this if mentioned again
00:23:982 (6,1) - can look better looks good to me
00:39:634 (4,1) - i think the DS is too large for an insane whaaat its ok
00:42:243 - insane shouldn't ignore this vocal sound, 00:47:460 - 00:52:677 - 00:57:895 - same
01:07:677 (5,7) - a little out of bound LOL? not really
01:10:286 (4) - ^ ^
01:15:829 (2,3) - speed change recommend NC, can also emphasis vocals I don't feel like spamming ncs, wouldn't look nice imo
01:27:895 (4) - a little inconsistent with the sudden slider, 01:27:895 (4,5) - make into two 1/2 sliders to follow vocals it's fine
01:35:721 (1) - remove NC nah

Fixed the stretched part and some stacks from the second mod, thanks!
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jonathanlfj wrote:

03:26:264 (7) - use circle here for the slider end, emphasis the higher pitch vocal sound want to keep this as a normal slider for the vocal sound in general
03:29:525 (1) - out of bound XD it's actually not in game
03:31:482 (7,1) - can look a bit better:3 seems fine to me
03:46:319 - add a note, the sudden pause seems a bit weird would rather not, to give the sense of the music slowing down
every kiai's last verse NC usage is different, make them the same 01:34:743 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:47:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:46:482 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3) - 03:48:438 (1) - removed this nc in mine

Mercusheigan wrote:

03:31:482 (7) - stack moved down 1 pixel lol

04:16:645 (1) - the slider should end on the hypermeasure, no? what
so for jonny, just take out nc on 03:48:438 (1) - and move 03:31:482 (7) - down 1 lol

ty
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Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

嗯？总感觉你以前好像做过这首歌...
原来是做过一个GD..

[Insane]
03:28:221 (1,2) - 类似这样？感觉挺合适..嗯..因为找不到什么了所以只能提提这种建议了..仅供参考 i think current one is fine

gl

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:00:830 - 跟Collab Insane一樣, 小聲點 current volume sounds fine to me, don't want too quiet
  2. 02:10:612 (1) - 別NC這, 02:11:264 (2) - NC這邊, 這樣跟其他一樣的地方才一致, 像這樣
  3. 02:54:145 (4,1) - 只有這邊的節奏跟其他不一樣呢, 把這邊改1/1滑條來跟其他地方一樣 following piano
  4. 03:26:590 (7) - 跟我在Collab Insane的03:26:264 (7) - 一樣的問題 intentionally did this to create better build up
  5. 03:28:547 (2) - 改1/4滑條來跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 跟02:28:547 (1,2,3) - 一樣 this is following the stronger drum in the music which is different from previous kiais
  • [Countless]
  1. 00:00:830 - 一樣
  2. 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4) - is the most difficult diff, i believe you can map sth more interesting here :\ that would be overmap here, i don't want to abuse it
  3. 00:26:916 (1,2,3,4) - ;w; increased distance here
  4. 01:59:525 (4,6) - 小小小overlap
  5. 02:10:286 (3,1) - 跟insane一樣
  6. 02:26:264 (5) - NC來強調這邊的鼓聲?
  7. 03:26:590 (7) - :o
  8. 03:28:547 (2) - 跟insane一樣
  9. 03:44:362 (1) - 我覺得可以不用NC, 如果硬要NC的話也應該NC在03:44:525 (2) - 才對 putting more emphasis on the pattern
  10. 03:58:221 (1,2,3,4) - ;w;
  11. 04:08:656 (1,2,3,4) - :p this one is fine pretty large jumps
  12. 04:13:710 (11,1) - 沒貼好lol
好圖 先給顆星xd
睡覺去 :)
map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436611

Mercusheigan wrote:

Hi jonathan, M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427471

they grey combo colour would look better if it were a bit more darker :3 its supposed to mimic the colour of the moon xD

warning: may contain pieces of broken english

Insane

01:26:590 (8) - something about this slider position makes the flow weird for me ;w;

04:16:645 (1) - same as in the previous diff current position is more appropriate imo

and that's pretty much it on this one, lol
Thanks for the mods and stars! No comment = fixed

Also, not doing collab parts sb because it kinda disturbs the video
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啊

[General]
  1. cw可以写下collab是谁做的
  2. 那个aimod说drum-hitnormal.wav有延迟 看看能不能弄下
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:438 (2) - 这里好像没清楚的音 我觉得可以把前面的00:32:134 (1) - 换成滑条然后把这个圈去了
  2. 01:31:482 (4) - 可以包好看点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5066147
  3. 02:04:743 (4,5,6) - 感觉节奏可以换下 让人声在圈上
  4. 02:19:416 - 好像一直都在跟人声 这里可以加个圈跟下?
  5. 02:21:699 (1,2) - 一直都是隔半拍的两个圈叠一起 这里一拍感觉不太好 可以考虑把02:21:699 (1) - 换成一个一拍的滑条?
  6. 02:41:264 (3,4) - 可以弧度大点包好看点
[Hard]
  1. od 6 is a little high imo, consider to decrease it to 5?
  2. widescreen is unnecessary, uncheck it
  3. 01:36:047 - try this rhythm to follow the music better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5066179
  4. 02:28:547 - 1.5 sv is not suitable for here, it's better to use it from 02:29:525 - . 02:29:036 - also here has no clear 1/4 sound, so try this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5066184
  5. 02:54:308 (4) - this slider is sounds weird, you'd better to split it and follow those drum sounds 02:54:471 - 02:54:960 -
  6. 02:59:525 (4) - same as 02:54:308 (4) -
  7. 03:28:547 (1) - it's better to use a circle instead of this slider imo, 1 and 23 are different sounds
[Insane]
  1. 01:05:721 (5) - 感觉这个有点太远了 前后都是差1/4拍的 看着和1/2一样远了
  2. 03:51:536 - 后面跟了这个音这里没跟感觉有点奇怪 考虑把前面的转盘换成一个长滑条然后也跟下这里的1/8的音?
[Collab Insane]
  1. 03:09:471 (1,1) - these nc is unnecessary imo, consider to remove them?
  2. 04:06:536 (2) - remove this circle? seems most similar place was empty
[Countless]
  1. 00:18:927 (7) - 感觉这个圈有点多余 而且音乐这里也没音
  2. 00:26:916 - 看低难度的时候以为最高难度会跟下这里1/4的音... 我觉得类似的音也许可以跟一下比如00:43:873 - 00:49:090 - , 感觉会让节奏丰富点
  3. 03:42:406 (9,1) - 是不是有点太近了 可以移远点
  4. 03:48:927 (4,5,6) - 把56的ds也弄到0.6吧
好了喊我吧
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ZZHBOY wrote:

啊

[General]
  1. cw可以写下collab是谁做的
  2. 那个aimod说drum-hitnormal.wav有延迟 看看能不能弄下
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:438 (2) - 这里好像没清楚的音 我觉得可以把前面的00:32:134 (1) - 换成滑条然后把这个圈去了
  2. 01:31:482 (4) - 可以包好看点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5066147
  3. 02:04:743 (4,5,6) - 感觉节奏可以换下 让人声在圈上 这里主要想简化节奏，要不然stack会很难把握
  4. 02:19:416 - 好像一直都在跟人声 这里可以加个圈跟下? 这里其实是跟钢琴的见02:08:656 (1)
  5. 02:21:699 (1,2) - 一直都是隔半拍的两个圈叠一起 这里一拍感觉不太好 可以考虑把02:21:699 (1) - 换成一个一拍的滑条?
  6. 02:41:264 (3,4) - 可以弧度大点包好看点
[Insane]
  1. 01:05:721 (5) - 感觉这个有点太远了 前后都是差1/4拍的 看着和1/2一样远了
  2. 03:51:536 - 后面跟了这个音这里没跟感觉有点奇怪 考虑把前面的转盘换成一个长滑条然后也跟下这里的1/8的音? 这里故意弄成跟13年的图一样的节奏，可以看看 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/84698
[Collab Insane]
  1. 03:09:471 (1,1) - these nc is unnecessary imo, consider to remove them? captin said its for emphasizing the finishes and the slider velocity
  2. 04:06:536 (2) - remove this circle? seems most similar place was empty
[Countless]
  1. 00:18:927 (7) - 感觉这个圈有点多余 而且音乐这里也没音 这里有那个提琴（？）音的
  2. 00:26:916 - 看低难度的时候以为最高难度会跟下这里1/4的音... 我觉得类似的音也许可以跟一下比如00:43:873 - 00:49:090 - , 感觉会让节奏丰富点 其实这里不跟也是为了丰富，而且之后的一些1/1是跟着视频的切换的
  3. 03:42:406 (9,1) - 是不是有点太近了 可以移远点
  4. 03:48:927 (4,5,6) - 把56的ds也弄到0.6吧
好了喊我吧
没写的都改了
等hard
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http://puu.sh/oGFXY/24f704f206.zip

Applied everything, thanks!
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bub
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Thanks ZZH xD
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咦原来已经泡了 莫名有人让我摸这图;0.0
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Nice song, :)

IRC
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: Countles:
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: 01:58:873 (2,3) -  blanket
2016-05-11 03:29 jonathanlfj: ayy blanket mods
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: 03:10:938 (6,1) -  isn't better to use less spacing ? since 1 isn't strong at all
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: ok fixed
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: second one i did that cause its an NC
2016-05-11 03:30 Natsu: Collab insane: OD 7.5? 
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: sure
2016-05-11 03:30 Natsu: 03:08:982 (1,1,1) -  why the NCs?
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: 04:13:873 (1) -  shouldn't the moon be white? 
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: captin did that and he said its cool
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Okay
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fixed the colour thing
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Insane: 02:40:612 (3,4) -  blanket
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: i have the collab parts in map description
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: cant really sb when there is a video
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Hard: 04:13:873 (1) -  now white moon :c?
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fyi insane is just countless rearranged LOL
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fixed both
2016-05-11 03:32 Natsu: man best mod 2016, tell me when ready ahahha
2016-05-11 03:32 Natsu: oh there is some osb 
2016-05-11 03:33 jonathanlfj: there is no osb in my local folder
2016-05-11 03:34 Natsu: oh wdf xD
2016-05-11 03:34 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/oNPRq.png
2016-05-11 03:34 Natsu: ya maybe I clicked design or something lol
2016-05-11 03:35 jonathanlfj: wow 11% bug let me researt client
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nice
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<3
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Yay! Congratz :D
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Satellite wrote:

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ahhhhh, one of the maps which I like most. It really reminds me about the first days played osu !
jonathan <3
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YAYYYYy my first collab
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感动哭，gratz!
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Satellite wrote:

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Satellite wrote:

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I'm having an orgasm :3
Gratz~ i remember that song <3
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This is the song I listen to when I take a shower all greased up in head and shoulder body wash. Feelsgoodman :o
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I love how every diff has a banana at the end
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LunarSakuya wrote:

I love how every diff has a banana at the end
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
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☾BANANA☽™
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LunarSakuya wrote:

I love how every diff has a banana at the end
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OH MY GOD!!!!!! I LOVE THIS MAP!!!!

Hey didn't you make a map of this exact song with different difficulties and whatnot already? Edit: just checked the other map, made by Nyquill... Still, you did a hard beatmap on it so maybe that's where I thought you made the last one? I dunno *le shrug*
Either way, I really like how this extends and stacks on top of the old one, and Countless was really awesome to play!

10/10. would give a star if I had kudosu to give points with!!
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