Shadren wrote:

[General]
lol, that tags
Remove widescreen
5% of hitsounds volume is rankable? (In my opinion minimum 10%) yes

[Normal]
I would change HP to 4, because there are a lot of objects
02:19:090 (1,2) - and 02:21:699 (1,2) - this stack may be difficult to read, because there are absent 1/2 rythm, and players could try to tap this 1/2 these are actually quite playable for beginners, since the bpm is very slow
02:51:047 (2,3) - and 02:56:264 (2,3) - I reccomend to change this rythm to http://puu.sh/mp4tB/dfa2983326.jpg it's better to read actually that changes the rhythm here, which would be the wrong emphasis
02:54:308 - what about to use simple rythm here? for emaple 1/1 slider + circle http://puu.sh/mp4xU/3bc4b4b786.jpg same idea
03:26:264 (6) - what about to change this slidert to 1/2 slider + circle (NC), because I'd singled out big white tick

[Countless]
00:32:134 (1) - this slider goes beyond and overlaps with HP bar its fine on default skin
01:15:503 - and 02:28:547 - NC each change SV
02:07:351 - NC, changed SV
03:02:134 - what about to follow vocal here? http://puu.sh/mp58y/e7b6d4fecb.jpg (this time starts on (4)) i think instrumentals feel more natural to play here
03:52:677 (2,3,1) - just a suggestion, this stack is badly reads for me, I'd unstack

[Countless PP]
00:51:699 - as I said about overlap with HP bar in previous diff
01:37:351 - NC this is a structured combo, so NC doesnt make much sense
02:55:123 (3) - what about to move it farther from the lateral objects? Would be good jump
02:59:525 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - just suggestion, make it full cycled jumps? i tried a different flow here
03:52:188 (1,2) - this may be difficult to read after spinner, what about to change it to reverse slider or something else?
also, pls check other places with change SV to NC it

Thats all that I was able to find. Rly beautiful patterns c:

Shad0w1and wrote:

lfj vocal作图美
M4M
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/390619

[PP]
01:05:232 (4) - 坑，这是蓝线滑条啊。。
01:05:721 (5,6) - 顺带这两个最好也降低一点DS
01:13:384 (5,6) - 稍微降低一点点DS会好很多 this should be fine
01:15:503 (5) - DS可以再加大也行的，并且我推荐NC，当然不改也没问题
01:18:601 (8,1) - blanket
01:21:699 (1) - 我总结的经验是这种滑条在1/3处折断最好看，尾巴翘的话1/4也不错。当然只是我的一厢情愿

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01:52:025 (7) - 不是很喜欢这种红线滑条冲上3x DS， 建议降低一点点到2.6左右比较舒服 its pretty playable imo

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01:54:634 (6) - 这个也是，降低一点2.6x会舒服很多 as above
01:56:916 (5,6) - 相反这种白线滑条跳大一些也会比较爽
01:59:525 (4) - DS加大也会爽 01:59:851 (6) - 相对的调低

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嗯。。后面类似的我不说了，感觉是美观牺牲了一点打图的舒适性，如果是我的话我会牺牲美观吧_(:3 因为我叒比
02:28:547 (5) - 前面假如你改了nc了这里也要改，当然我是推荐改的
02:39:960 (1,2) - 03:31:482 (8,9) - 03:39:960 (1) - blanket

[Coun]
01:04:416 (2,4) - 感觉比较坑，读图比较差的这里不一定能看懂1/4，毕竟spacing误导大于DS，除非给01:04:743 (3) - NC lol
02:44:362 (7) - 重音在后面的滑条头，后面的DS比较高才舒服
02:54:308 (1) - 切音轨了，有nc的话会舒服很多
03:44:688 (7) - 蓝线音DS太远了。。03:44:525 - 这里clap怎么着给个click算了dont want consecutive circles

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[Normal]
03:08:003 (4) - blanket

apaffy wrote:

kagen no tsuukiii

[really hard DT farm map]
Settings

1. I don't think this needs to be AR9. It's very jumpy yes, but it's not really dense enough to support that AR at this bpm - AR 8.5-8.7 would fit better. this is effectively 184bpm, i dont think AR9 is considered too fast (try this with HR and you will see)

Map

1. 00:00:830 (1,2) - Pretty large gap there for the intro. I don't think we need to be jumping right at the start of the song.
2. 00:06:047 (1,2) - Same as above. There's very little going on in the song here, and you've put in almost two cross-screen slider jumps
3. 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure I really enjoy this, it's really inconsistent with the previous jumpy patterns. Not that everything has to be represented the same way, but it's such a break with the previous patterns that it looks out of place to me. i'd like some variety here, but i did bump the spacing a bit
4. 00:34:743 (1,2,3,4) - This section starting here, is pretty jumpy for being such a calm part of the song. this is a step up for insane afterall, if you think of this as a 184bpm map it will be a none issue
5. 01:13:710 - I feel like you could stick a note here, sounds like the background drums are still going. Would also sync up with her voice - could maybe put it to the right of 01:13:873 (1) - somewhere. i cant hear anything here tbh
6. 01:20:232 (5,6,7) - I don't hear a triplet there - I think it's a continuous tone. I think you're better off sticking to like a 1/4 slider. ...but there is lol it sounds like a normal sample
7. 02:18:927 (7) - I'd rather it something like this.
8. 02:33:275 (4,5,6) - Same thing as earlier; this is a continuous tone, not a triplet. Use a 1/4 slider to represent it better. asdf do i need to check my headphones
9. 03:33:275 (4,5,6) - ^
10. 03:52:188 (1,2) - Now this one I think would be better off as just a triplet lol. The 1/4 slider just makes the pattern feel kinda jerky I feel.
11. 04:11:264 (1,3) - Aw man, that flute in the background - I think you could have done something more interesting than that.
12. 04:13:873 (1) - mouth slider lol

[hard DT farm map]

1. 00:00:830 (1,2,1,2) - Again, what's with the spacing at the beginning? Just way too high for that part, in my opinion.
2. 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same problem as above, it's inconsistent to the point of sticking out in the map. there is one at the end too, its to give it more rhythm variety
3. 00:43:221 (2,3) - I feel like this sort of spacing is not appropriate for this part of the song or a hard difficulty.
4. 01:36:047 (5,6,7,8,1) - I'm just not sure what to make of jump patterns like these. Yes, we have slider leniancy to help us out, but it's still really big for a hard difficulty. This difficulty in general I feel is just too jumpy at times for what would otherwise be appropriate.
5. 03:37:351 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Ahhhhhhhhh. It's just... You don't even need to change the pattern, just nerf the spacing.
6. 03:56:916 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing too large for the song intensity there; it just doesn't fit very well.
7. 04:13:873 (1) - nice meme

Both the difficulties are fun to play, though I think the hard has some spacing issues that need to be ironed out. this is actually the insane tho, ryan hard when

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

[Collab Insane]

02:03:764 (2,3,4) - as what I said in Hard diff. I meant to follow the vocals here, and leaving a gap there feels quite empty to me D:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

• [Collab Insane]

1. 01:56:916 (5,7) - blanket? sure
2. 02:08:656 (1) - 把這滑條用的對稱一點, 原來的看起來歪掉了XD sorry, hope it looks better now ;w;
3. 02:10:938 - 加個note, 02:13:547 (6,6) - 都加了, 這邊怎不加一下, 這也有個vocal音可以跟, 不然突然空一拍有點怪:o added note
4. 02:28:547 (5,1,2) - 把這邊的NC usage用的跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 03:28:547 (2,3,4) - 一樣(如果你沒修01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 的NC oops, changed NC thank you
   

Mercusheigan wrote:

Collab Insane

01:54:634 (5) - move a bit so it makes a better shaped triangle (considering the spacing between 4 and 2. 466, 235 looked nice) ok

02:33:764 (6) - stack this is a recurring problem for me, fixed

02:39:471 (9) - move a bit so it has the same distance from 6 as much as 8 has from 5 i tried my best to

jonathanlfj wrote:

translation for reference

Collab Insane

00:00:830 - 50% sounds too loud, 30-25% volume sounds nicer I'll see what jonny thinks because i ripped the hs from his lol
00:02:134 - add break?, 00:07:351 - same here already is a break there, second one is too short for a break imo
00:09:308 (3) - this slider should be more emphasized how exactly
00:09:797 - should have emphasis with clickable object ill consider this if mentioned again
00:23:982 (6,1) - can look better looks good to me
00:39:634 (4,1) - i think the DS is too large for an insane whaaat its ok
00:42:243 - insane shouldn't ignore this vocal sound, 00:47:460 - 00:52:677 - 00:57:895 - same
01:07:677 (5,7) - a little out of bound LOL? not really
01:10:286 (4) - ^ ^
01:15:829 (2,3) - speed change recommend NC, can also emphasis vocals I don't feel like spamming ncs, wouldn't look nice imo
01:27:895 (4) - a little inconsistent with the sudden slider, 01:27:895 (4,5) - make into two 1/2 sliders to follow vocals it's fine
01:35:721 (1) - remove NC nah

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

嗯？总感觉你以前好像做过这首歌...
原来是做过一个GD..

[Insane]
03:28:221 (1,2) - 类似这样？感觉挺合适..嗯..因为找不到什么了所以只能提提这种建议了..仅供参考 i think current one is fine

gl

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

• [Insane]

1. 00:00:830 - 跟Collab Insane一樣, 小聲點 current volume sounds fine to me, don't want too quiet
2. 02:10:612 (1) - 別NC這, 02:11:264 (2) - NC這邊, 這樣跟其他一樣的地方才一致, 像這樣
3. 02:54:145 (4,1) - 只有這邊的節奏跟其他不一樣呢, 把這邊改1/1滑條來跟其他地方一樣 following piano
4. 03:26:590 (7) - 跟我在Collab Insane的03:26:264 (7) - 一樣的問題 intentionally did this to create better build up
5. 03:28:547 (2) - 改1/4滑條來跟01:15:503 (1,2,3) - 跟02:28:547 (1,2,3) - 一樣 this is following the stronger drum in the music which is different from previous kiais

• [Countless]

1. 00:00:830 - 一樣
2. 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4) - is the most difficult diff, i believe you can map sth more interesting here :\ that would be overmap here, i don't want to abuse it
3. 00:26:916 (1,2,3,4) - ;w; increased distance here
4. 01:59:525 (4,6) - 小小小overlap
5. 02:10:286 (3,1) - 跟insane一樣
6. 02:26:264 (5) - NC來強調這邊的鼓聲?
7. 03:26:590 (7) -
8. 03:28:547 (2) - 跟insane一樣
9. 03:44:362 (1) - 我覺得可以不用NC, 如果硬要NC的話也應該NC在03:44:525 (2) - 才對 putting more emphasis on the pattern
10. 03:58:221 (1,2,3,4) - ;w;
11. 04:08:656 (1,2,3,4) - :p this one is fine pretty large jumps
12. 04:13:710 (11,1) - 沒貼好lol

好圖 先給顆星xd
睡覺去
map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436611

Mercusheigan wrote:

Hi jonathan, M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427471

they grey combo colour would look better if it were a bit more darker :3 its supposed to mimic the colour of the moon xD

warning: may contain pieces of broken english

Insane

01:26:590 (8) - something about this slider position makes the flow weird for me ;w;

04:16:645 (1) - same as in the previous diff current position is more appropriate imo

and that's pretty much it on this one, lol

2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: Countles:
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: 01:58:873 (2,3) -  blanket
2016-05-11 03:29 jonathanlfj: ayy blanket mods
2016-05-11 03:29 Natsu: 03:10:938 (6,1) -  isn't better to use less spacing ? since 1 isn't strong at all
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: ok fixed
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: second one i did that cause its an NC
2016-05-11 03:30 Natsu: Collab insane: OD 7.5? 
2016-05-11 03:30 jonathanlfj: sure
2016-05-11 03:30 Natsu: 03:08:982 (1,1,1) -  why the NCs?
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: 04:13:873 (1) -  shouldn't the moon be white? 
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: captin did that and he said its cool
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Okay
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fixed the colour thing
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Insane: 02:40:612 (3,4) -  blanket
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: i have the collab parts in map description
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: cant really sb when there is a video
2016-05-11 03:31 Natsu: Hard: 04:13:873 (1) -  now white moon :c?
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fyi insane is just countless rearranged LOL
2016-05-11 03:31 jonathanlfj: fixed both
2016-05-11 03:32 Natsu: man best mod 2016, tell me when ready ahahha
2016-05-11 03:32 Natsu: oh there is some osb 
2016-05-11 03:33 jonathanlfj: there is no osb in my local folder
2016-05-11 03:34 Natsu: oh wdf xD
2016-05-11 03:34 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/oNPRq.png
2016-05-11 03:34 Natsu: ya maybe I clicked design or something lol
2016-05-11 03:35 jonathanlfj: wow 11% bug let me researt client