Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days · forum

AlneCraft

Joined January 2014

AlneCraft 2016-02-10T10:53:19+00:00

hi~! from my modding queue

a pretty short mod, sorry if it's not good enough, i'm not that good at modding (´・ω・`)

legend: blue - my own preference, not a "must" change. red - large mistake, or something that i don't understand

general

1. decrease the offset slightly? some notes feel like they are too late. something like -~5 should be good
also if you'll decrease the offset you also have to decrease the time of every single timing point

Easy

1. 00:12:492 (3) - that slider starts too late to sync with neither drums nor guitar.
2. 00:13:527 - this empty section could use a spinner or a break. if you will add a spinner then remove the circle at 00:14:906 (1) and make the spinner end at this moment (just like in Hard diff).
3. the kiai section is incosistently timed, sometimes it's synced with lyrics, sometimes it's synced with drums or guitar, but it's still playable. just pointing that one out to you.

Normal

1. 00:06:113 (2,3) - the slider is too long to sync with the guitar, and the circle is random if that segment is supposed to sync with drums. if it's supposed to sync with both it just feels clunky.
2. 00:13:527 - same as Easy, could use a spinner or a break.
3. 01:01:458 (5,6) - if that fragment is supposed to sync with lyrics then you should remove the circle. if it's supposed to sync with drums, then change the repeating slider to a regular slider or remove the circle and move the slider beginning to the spot where the circle was.

Hard

couldn't find anything really sticking out.

Fizz's Insane

everything seems fine here as well.

that's a pretty good mapset you got there, good job!

achyoo

Nomination Assessment Team

457 posts

Joined January 2016

achyoo 2016-02-10T11:37:28+00:00

from #modreqs

Normal

00:43:527 (2) - This feels out of place, maybe you could change it from

to

?

01:15:596 (5) - This note also feels out of place, suggest you change it from

to

01:10:423 (1) - slow down this slider or make it longer? the part after it is quite empty

Hard

00:24:561 (3) - This part feels empty, maybe add a spinner or a long slider (with a slower slider velocity)
00:50:596 (4) - This should be a new combo
00:51:113 (1) - This shouldn't be a new combo
01:10:423 (1) - slow down this slider or make it longer? the part after it is quite empty

Fizz's Insane

00:27:492 (1) - Change this to a 1/2 Slider, it fits the music better IMO
00:33:010 (1) - ^
01:10:423 (1) - slow down this slider or make it longer? the part after it is quite empty

Extra

I couldn't find anything weird/wrong with this difficulty, and it's really fun to play, Good job on this!

I hope this was helpful! I like this song so good luck with the map

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-10T12:00:54+00:00

i'll get to these mods when I finish hitsounds! thanks!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-10T21:34:15+00:00

AlneCraft wrote:
hi~! from my modding queue

a pretty short mod, sorry if it's not good enough, i'm not that good at modding (´・ω・`)

legend: blue - my own preference, not a "must" change. red - large mistake, or something that i don't understand

general
1. decrease the offset slightly? some notes feel like they are too late. something like -~5 should be good
also if you'll decrease the offset you also have to decrease the time of every single timing point I'll get a timing recheck

Easy
1. 00:12:492 (3) - that slider starts too late to sync with neither drums nor guitar. that part is where the finish is though; I'm mapping what I think is the most audiable/followable sound
2. 00:13:527 - this empty section could use a spinner or a break. if you will add a spinner then remove the circle at 00:14:906 (1) and make the spinner end at this moment (just like in Hard diff). I can't do it because of spinner recovery times and the space is too small for a break
3. the kiai section is incosistently timed, sometimes it's synced with lyrics, sometimes it's synced with drums or guitar, but it's still playable. just pointing that one out to you. again, following what I think is the most followable sounds

Normal
1. 00:06:113 (2,3) - the slider is too long to sync with the guitar, and the circle is random if that segment is supposed to sync with drums. if it's supposed to sync with both it just feels clunky. but I think it's fine as it ;_;
2. 00:13:527 - same as Easy, could use a spinner or a break. can't again because of recovery time limitations
3. 01:01:458 (5,6) - if that fragment is supposed to sync with lyrics then you should remove the circle. if it's supposed to sync with drums, then change the repeating slider to a regular slider or remove the circle and move the slider beginning to the spot where the circle was. following both guitar and vocals

Hard
couldn't find anything really sticking out.

that's a pretty good mapset you got there, good job!

DesuNuts wrote:
from #modreqs

Normal
00:43:527 (2) - This feels out of place, maybe you could change it from to ? good fix!

01:15:596 (5) - This note also feels out of place, suggest you change it from to done

01:10:423 (1) - slow down this slider or make it longer? the part after it is quite empty can't because I don't think I can change SV in normals

Hard
00:24:561 (3) - This part feels empty, maybe add a spinner or a long slider (with a slower slider velocity) can't because of recovery time limitations
00:50:596 (4) - This should be a new combo following NC per measure though
00:51:113 (1) - This shouldn't be a new combo ^
01:10:423 (1) - slow down this slider or make it longer? the part after it is quite empty I think it's fine as is :<

Extra
I couldn't find anything weird/wrong with this difficulty, and it's really fun to play, Good job on this!

I hope this was helpful! I like this song so good luck with the map

thank you for the mods!

greenwood0301

236 posts

Joined November 2014

greenwood0301 2016-02-11T02:09:31+00:00

Hi Rizen here the mod you ask for

INSANE

00:13:006 Ramdom combo

01:23:350 random combo

NORMAL

00:14:902 random combo

01:01:454 i don't think you need this note

EASY

00:14:902 random combo

Well GL HF for the rank

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-11T02:30:12+00:00

greenwood0301 wrote:
Hi Rizen here the mod you ask for

INSANE

00:13:006 Ramdom combo

01:23:350 random combo

although I am not Fizz, I can confirm that these combos are not random, they follow a NC pattern

NORMAL

00:14:902 random combo not random, following NC per 2 measure

01:01:454 i don't think you need this note moved it back one step

EASY

00:14:902 random combo nor random, following NC per 2 measure

Well GL HF for the rank

thanks

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2016-02-11T08:52:23+00:00

DesuNuts wrote:
Fizz's Insane
00:27:492 (1) - Change this to a 1/2 Slider, it fits the music better IMO
00:33:010 (1) - ^ there's a pause in the percussion here that I want to emphasise
01:10:423 (1) - slow down this slider or make it longer? the part after it is quite empty nah I like the empty

thanks for the mod~

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-02-11T09:19:48+00:00

Hi,

I made a GD for this, but the mapset is dead...

If you want to take it feel free

If you have problem with it I can remap some parts

Thanks

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/382870

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-02-11T09:42:59+00:00

I'm here because you know how to make beer~
[Easy]

this feels pretty hard for any easy with all the consecutive 1/1 clickable objects and notes on red ticks, but I guess it doesn't break any rules
00:08:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would move this entire segment up to [271, 205] so that 00:07:661 (4,1) - flows better
00:15:247 (1,2) - in general, 3/2 gaps are weird to play, especially during a vocal phrase. I recommend something like this instead: http://puu.sh/n3M0p/ce110a2927.jpg there's a few places places that this happens, so if you change it, be sure to change all of them
00:47:316 (4) - a little risky since these overlaps are hard to read for new players. also, minor thing but try to keep your DS more consistent (1.15x vs 1.2x)
01:10:419 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:592 (1,2) - DS (its at 0.9x because of osu autostack)

00:06:281 (3) - if you're going to follow the guitar, I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/n3Mxt/9e689c8837.jpg same thing at 01:15:937 (1,2,3,4) -
00:21:454 (2) - I would make this a 1/1 slider instead to remove 3/2 gap
00:54:902 (3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm suggestion so that the two vocal phrases play more consistent with each other http://puu.sh/n3MH8/71f206ea19.jpg
01:05:937 (3,4) - I think vocal is too important too skip http://puu.sh/n3MOG/67669ad6b9.jpg imo, it's ok to skip downbeat here since it isn't as strong as something like 01:04:902 (1) -

[Hard]

00:07:316 (2,3) - eh rhythm doesn't really match guitar. there's two identical notes at 00:07:661 - and 00:07:833 - and another set of identical notes at 00:08:006 - and 00:08:178 - which should be reflected in your mapping. I think something like this would follow the music better http://puu.sh/n3MXh/21184525a3.jpg http://puu.sh/n3MX5/02866e649b.jpg (you can reposition sliders if you want to keep DS, but I think you get the point)
00:09:385 (5) - replace this with a note at 00:09:557 -
00:51:971 (4) - maybe use 1/2 slider instead or add note to 00:52:143 - to be consistent with 01:03:006 (4,5,1) -
01:16:454 (3,4,5) - I think 01:16:626 - and 01:17:143 - should be clickable to support guitar. maybe try this? http://puu.sh/n3NpM/1ae67dbf43.jpg

[Fizz Insane]

I know this is a GD, but it's so weird that this and hard have the same SV
00:07:316 (2) - personally, I don't like extended sliders in this section, but if you're going to use them, at least lower the volume/mute the sliderends on the blue ticks since the music has no sound there. Same thing with all of the other extended sliders in this diff
00:11:454 (3,4,1) - I would enjoy a bigger DS here
00:16:454 (1,2) - 0.6 SV is too slow imo. it makes these sliders look almost like kicksliders. I think 0.7-0.75 SV would be better
00:27:488 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider since 1/1 gap is awkward and 00:27:488 - this sounds identical to 00:27:833 - same thing at 00:33:006 (1) -
00:41:023 (3) - I think 1/4 notes would play better than slider but that's just me
00:47:661 (1,2) - this stack totally caught me by surprise. why stack? it should be a big jump match the intensity of the song imo. and if you're going to argue that the stack represents the two identical drum sounds sound ], i would ask why you didn't stack 00:46:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - since all those notes sound identical as well.
01:02:661 (3) - make this a triplet instead, needs some more note density for an insane
01:06:626 (2,3) - why stack? I hear two different drum and vocal sounds here
01:06:799 (3) - break into 1/2 slider and note. note density is too low here, and you're missing some important beats imo
01:08:523 (2) - maybe I'm just bad at reading, but I assumed 01:08:178 (1,2) - was 1/2 rhythm just like 01:07:661 (1,2) - I would NC here to avoid confusion
01:14:385 (1) - 0.3 SV is overkill. pls at least 0.5SV. also mute sliderend

[Extra]

spacing needs some work at the beginning and end sections imo. 00:07:661 (4) - is a strong beat since there's not much else to follow besides guitar. so is 00:08:523 (2) - but you do absolutely nothing to distinguish it from other notes. Either the spacing or the approach angle or something should indicate that it is a strong beat.
00:09:557 - start of guitar again, so make this beat clickable
00:39:385 (4,5,6) - in general, linear flows don't play well unless you have a specific reason to use one
00:41:971 (3) - move this to [38,98] so it's evenly spaced between 00:41:281 (1,2) -
00:43:178 (2,3,4) - yeah i really don't like linear flows
00:47:661 (1,2) - same comment as insane
00:54:212 (2) - is a stronger beat than 00:54:385 (3) - because of the drum, so I would use a bigger DS between 00:53:868 (1,2) - compared to 00:54:212 (2,3) - constant DS is boring and doesn't do a good job at emphasizing strong beats
00:57:488 (2) - NC for readability plz. I thought 00:57:143 (1,2) - was 1/2 rhythm just like 00:56:626 (1,2) -
01:08:523 (2) - ^
01:04:902 (1,2,3) - not going to comment on this anymore, but linear flows aren't good
01:15:419 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - shape looks kinda ugly to me

Good luck!

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2016-02-11T12:01:59+00:00

MokouSmoke wrote:
[Fizz Insane]
I know this is a GD, but it's so weird that this and hard have the same SV was made before hard was made
00:07:316 (2) - personally, I don't like extended sliders in this section, but if you're going to use them, at least lower the volume/mute the sliderends on the blue ticks since the music has no sound there. Same thing with all of the other extended sliders in this diff honestly i don't get everyone's problem with this; it's a sliderend and it provides good feedback
00:11:454 (3,4,1) - I would enjoy a bigger DS here increased slightly
00:16:454 (1,2) - 0.6 SV is too slow imo. it makes these sliders look almost like kicksliders. I think 0.7-0.75 SV would be better the slider before it introduces the SV change. this isn't a lower diff either so there's no real need to baby the player
00:27:488 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider since 1/1 gap is awkward and 00:27:488 - this sounds identical to 00:27:833 - same thing at 00:33:006 (1) - do you not hear the percussion pause?
00:41:023 (3) - I think 1/4 notes would play better than slider but that's just me
00:47:661 (1,2) - this stack totally caught me by surprise. why stack? it should be a big jump match the intensity of the song imo. and if you're going to argue that the stack represents the two identical drum sounds sound ], i would ask why you didn't stack 00:46:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - since all those notes sound identical as well. they aren't identical to start, and the guitar getting louder in the background stops at this part. it also serves to slow down the map a bit in time for the slow slider leading into the chorus. as for not stacking the previous notes, that would provide no distinction between the buildup and the breakdown
01:02:661 (3) - make this a triplet instead, needs some more note density for an insane the jumps (4 and 5) are what make the difficulty here, not the note density. since you pointed it out here you should've also said the same for 00:51:626 (3) -
01:06:626 (2,3) - why stack? I hear two different drum and vocal sounds here moved it
01:06:799 (3) - break into 1/2 slider and note. note density is too low here, and you're missing some important beats imo no percussion on these ticks, therefore I wouldn't classify them as important beats
01:08:523 (2) - maybe I'm just bad at reading, but I assumed 01:08:178 (1,2) - was 1/2 rhythm just like 01:07:661 (1,2) - I would NC here to avoid confusion NCs don't help to avoid the first time confusion. NCing would be effective here if there was another pattern like this later
01:14:385 (1) - 0.3 SV is overkill. pls at least 0.5SV. also mute sliderend no fun allowed I guess, i did mute the sliderend though

thanks for the mod

update

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SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-02-13T08:27:23+00:00

From my queue

1pc test play
[Extra]
00:19:040 (4) - stick the end of 00:17:661 (5) -
00:36:971 (8) - try 180 184
00:47:661 (1,2) - i think is fine but i prefer a 1/2 slider here
00:57:488 (2,3) - this confused player, since 00:56:626 (1,2,1) - is matching the music but 00:57:488 (2,3) - is matching the vocal, so 00:57:661 (3) - will easily be ignore cause player will think this part is matching the music, i highly recommend to delete 00:57:661 (3) - to make a better flow, just like this part 01:07:661 (1,2,1,2,1) -
01:15:247 (2) - NC
01:18:350 (6,7,1) - avoid straight jumps, is hard to play

GL~

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-14T08:38:32+00:00

MokouSmoke

MokouSmoke wrote:
I'm here because you know how to make beer~
[Easy]
this feels pretty hard for any easy with all the consecutive 1/1 clickable objects and notes on red ticks, but I guess it doesn't break any rules should be fine x()
00:08:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would move this entire segment up to [271, 205] so that 00:07:661 (4,1) - flows better ok
00:15:247 (1,2) - in general, 3/2 gaps are weird to play, especially during a vocal phrase. I recommend something like this instead: http://puu.sh/n3M0p/ce110a2927.jpg there's a few places places that this happens, so if you change it, be sure to change all of them I think the 3/2 matches the song's vocals nicely... I don't really have to baby the player all the time do I? xd
00:47:316 (4) - a little risky since these overlaps are hard to read for new players. also, minor thing but try to keep your DS more consistent (1.15x vs 1.2x) redid patterns
01:10:419 (1,2) - ^ this one should be fine imo because of the long break
[Normal]

00:05:592 (1,2) - DS (its at 0.9x because of osu autostack) shouldn't really matter, it's not a very noticeable difference
00:06:281 (3) - if you're going to follow the guitar, I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/n3Mxt/9e689c8837.jpg same thing at 01:15:937 (1,2,3,4) - I want the normal diff to start off relatively easy so the player can kinda ease into it... the second "beginning" bit at the end is just a mimic
00:21:454 (2) - I would make this a 1/1 slider instead to remove 3/2 gap ok
00:54:902 (3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm suggestion so that the two vocal phrases play more consistent with each other http://puu.sh/n3MH8/71f206ea19.jpg no thanks, the current pattern covers the drums while the proposed pattern does not
01:05:937 (3,4) - I think vocal is too important too skip http://puu.sh/n3MOG/67669ad6b9.jpg imo, it's ok to skip downbeat here since it isn't as strong as something like 01:04:902 (1) - agreed and fixed
[Hard]
00:07:316 (2,3) - eh rhythm doesn't really match guitar. there's two identical notes at 00:07:661 - and 00:07:833 - and another set of identical notes at 00:08:006 - and 00:08:178 - which should be reflected in your mapping. I think something like this would follow the music better http://puu.sh/n3MXh/21184525a3.jpg http://puu.sh/n3MX5/02866e649b.jpg (you can reposition sliders if you want to keep DS, but I think you get the point) ok, did something similar to this
00:09:385 (5) - replace this with a note at 00:09:557 - sure
00:51:971 (4) - maybe use 1/2 slider instead or add note to 00:52:143 - to be consistent with 01:03:006 (4,5,1) - the difference between here and there is that there's actually an audiable sound at the second time and not in the first time
01:16:454 (3,4,5) - I think 01:16:626 - and 01:17:143 - should be clickable to support guitar. maybe try this? http://puu.sh/n3NpM/1ae67dbf43.jpg
[Extra]
spacing needs some work at the beginning and end sections imo. 00:07:661 (4) - is a strong beat since there's not much else to follow besides guitar. so is 00:08:523 (2) - but you do absolutely nothing to distinguish it from other notes. Either the spacing or the approach angle or something should indicate that it is a strong beat. will rework that section xd
00:09:557 - start of guitar again, so make this beat clickable ^
00:39:385 (4,5,6) - in general, linear flows don't play well unless you have a specific reason to use one ok
00:41:971 (3) - move this to [38,98] so it's evenly spaced between 00:41:281 (1,2) - ok
00:43:178 (2,3,4) - yeah i really don't like linear flows [k/b][o/color]
00:47:661 (1,2) - same comment as insane
00:54:212 (2) - is a stronger beat than 00:54:385 (3) - because of the drum, so I would use a bigger DS between 00:53:868 (1,2) - compared to 00:54:212 (2,3) - constant DS is boring and doesn't do a good job at emphasizing strong beats ok
00:57:488 (2) - NC for readability plz. I thought 00:57:143 (1,2) - was 1/2 rhythm just like 00:56:626 (1,2) - ok
01:08:523 (2) - ^ ok
01:04:902 (1,2,3) - not going to comment on this anymore, but linear flows aren't good fixed
01:15:419 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - shape looks kinda ugly to me i'll think of something better xd
Good luck!

SnowNiNo__

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
From my queue

1pc test play
[Extra]
00:19:040 (4) - stick the end of 00:17:661 (5) - sure
00:36:971 (8) - try 180 184 plays nicer, thanks
00:47:661 (1,2) - i think is fine but i prefer a 1/2 slider here nahh, can hear the two finishes
00:57:488 (2,3) - this confused player, since 00:56:626 (1,2,1) - is matching the music but 00:57:488 (2,3) - is matching the vocal, so 00:57:661 (3) - will easily be ignore cause player will think this part is matching the music, i highly recommend to delete 00:57:661 (3) - to make a better flow, just like this part 01:07:661 (1,2,1,2,1) - I really don't think this will be much of a problem, but if this is brought up again by someone else, I will consider addressing it
01:15:247 (2) - NC done
01:18:350 (6,7,1) - avoid straight jumps, is hard to play done

GL~

thank you for mods!

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2016-02-14T10:41:50+00:00

irc for you homie

2016-02-14 22:12 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/899432 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Easy]]
2016-02-14 22:12 Kuki: 00:15:247 (1,2,3) -this is so nice
2016-02-14 22:13 Rizen: thankss
2016-02-14 22:13 Kuki: 00:58:695 (4,1) - blanket iz ov
2016-02-14 22:14 Rizen: ok fixed
2016-02-14 22:14 Kuki: 01:10:419 (1,2) - fix stack it's ugly
2016-02-14 22:15 Rizen: moved by pixels
2016-02-14 22:15 Kuki: just spitballin but maybe http://puu.sh/n7oS7/c2296363f5.jpg
2016-02-14 22:15 Kuki: for 01:14:385 (3) -
2016-02-14 22:15 Kuki: it just looks too rigid imo
2016-02-14 22:15 Kuki: 01:20:075 (3,4) - mega no
2016-02-14 22:16 Kuki: two curves on the exact same x axis
2016-02-14 22:17 Rizen: ok, changed that
2016-02-14 22:17 Rizen: http://puu.sh/n7oWC/d8f2524495.jpg
2016-02-14 22:17 Kuki: so much better
2016-02-14 22:17 Kuki: nice
2016-02-14 22:17 Kuki: cool
2016-02-14 22:17 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/898109 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Normal]]
2016-02-14 22:17 Kuki: 00:06:971 (4) - this looks slightly off by like 1 px if you even care
2016-02-14 22:19 Rizen: fixed anyways
2016-02-14 22:20 Kuki: k epic
2016-02-14 22:20 Kuki: 00:13:006 (6) - nc i think here
2016-02-14 22:21 Kuki: 00:23:350 (7) - fix stack dude
2016-02-14 22:21 Kuki: just needxc dto snap 2 fix
2016-02-14 22:21 Kuki: 00:43:868 (3) - same here
2016-02-14 22:22 Rizen: ok applied all so far
2016-02-14 22:22 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/897395 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Hard]]
2016-02-14 22:23 Kuki: 00:24:557 (3,2) - stack fix
2016-02-14 22:23 Kuki: hold up league
2016-02-14 22:24 Rizen: ok
2016-02-14 22:28 Rizen: fixed all upcoming stacks btw
2016-02-14 22:44 Kuki: 00:43:178 (2,3,4) - this dont make no sense
2016-02-14 22:44 Kuki: ok cool
2016-02-14 22:44 Rizen: hold on
2016-02-14 22:44 Rizen: watching someone testplay
2016-02-14 22:44 Kuki: k
2016-02-14 22:49 Kuki: 01:23:350 (4) - nc?
2016-02-14 22:49 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/900631 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Extra]]
2016-02-14 22:49 Kuki: extra soon
2016-02-14 22:49 Kuki: im in another gam
2016-02-14 22:49 Kuki: e
2016-02-14 22:49 Rizen: ok
2016-02-14 23:37 Kuki: ok
2016-02-14 23:37 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/900631 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Extra]]
2016-02-14 23:38 Kuki: have u fixed stacks on this
2016-02-14 23:38 Kuki: eg 00:32:316 (3,4) -
2016-02-14 23:38 Kuki: 00:36:454 (3,1,4) -
2016-02-14 23:40 Kuki: 01:22:143 (5,2) - may as well stack these
2016-02-14 23:40 Kuki: and then maybe 01:23:350 (4) - nc
2016-02-14 23:40 Kuki: uhh well like
2016-02-14 23:40 Kuki: that's it
2016-02-14 23:40 Kuki: ur map is ready for rank
2016-02-14 23:40 Kuki: if i'm being honest witchu

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-02-15T02:57:18+00:00

hi there

extra
00:11:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - pp jumps. nice. but they feel too drastic lol. make them smaller. xilver will kick your ass if you get this ranked with this
00:17:661 (5) - place this in 144:275 so that this distance is the same. more of a aesthetic thing http://puu.sh/n8khH/3825aaf6c2.jpg
00:19:902 (4,5,6) - lol why not make same DS? and if not fix, why is the DS descending LOL
00:20:075 (5,1) - no stack, im upset
00:32:316 (3,4,5) - dont manual stack. looks and plays bad imo. try doing this instead http://puu.sh/n8kpw/222b155ad1.jpg
00:37:316 (1) - try finding a hitsound for this sound.
00:37:661 (2,2) - stack properly
00:39:902 (7) - imo a kickslider looks too out of place :l make it a triple lol http://puu.sh/n8kZZ/f0a9d4564d.jpg
00:50:764 (5) - space this more (aka move closer to 6) coz emphasis on 5 is alot :l
00:51:971 (6) - dude just add a slider here lol... theres a really soft beat. well the part sounds empty anyway :L
00:53:523 (4) - copy previous slider, and stack it to 00:54:212 (2) - should look like this http://puu.sh/n8l9q/77734d533d.jpg
00:53:868 (1) - copy this 00:52:316 (1) - scale it down and place it in here 105:201. recommended fix if you apply the above mod http://puu.sh/n8lfe/7c8416df71.jpg
00:54:730 (4) - sliderend to represent a strong beat is no good :c
00:57:833 (1) - i would place this down more so that it plays better, like around 410;353 http://puu.sh/n8lld/c1d3469d56.jpg
01:04:557 (4) - 01:04:212 (3) - use this slider and flip it around. place it in here 293;17. plays better imo :l http://puu.sh/n8lr2/695ec846f8.jpg
01:28:350 - slider ends here bby

good luck!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-15T05:57:26+00:00

Anxient wrote:
hi there
extra
00:11:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - pp jumps. nice. but they feel too drastic lol. make them smaller. xilver will kick your ass if you get this ranked with this I will change this if a BN says this is abusive
00:17:661 (5) - place this in 144:275 so that this distance is the same. more of a aesthetic thing http://puu.sh/n8khH/3825aaf6c2.jpg sure thing grandson
00:19:902 (4,5,6) - lol why not make same DS? and if not fix, why is the DS descending LOL the jump there is for the vocals o.o
00:20:075 (5,1) - no stack, im upset i'm sory
00:32:316 (3,4,5) - dont manual stack. looks and plays bad imo. try doing this instead http://puu.sh/n8kpw/222b155ad1.jpg okk
00:37:316 (1) - try finding a hitsound for this sound. I will look
00:37:661 (2,2) - stack properly k
00:39:902 (7) - imo a kickslider looks too out of place :l make it a triple lol http://puu.sh/n8kZZ/f0a9d4564d.jpg added triple but not the same as screenshot
00:50:764 (5) - space this more (aka move closer to 6) coz emphasis on 5 is alot :l ok
00:51:971 (6) - dude just add a slider here lol... theres a really soft beat. well the part sounds empty anyway :L empty indeed
00:53:523 (4) - copy previous slider, and stack it to 00:54:212 (2) - should look like this http://puu.sh/n8l9q/77734d533d.jpg no thanks, that slider is more of a transition and it ruins upcoming flow xd
00:53:868 (1) - copy this 00:52:316 (1) - scale it down and place it in here 105:201. recommended fix if you apply the above mod http://puu.sh/n8lfe/7c8416df71.jpg didn't fix the previous one so no fix this one ;d
00:54:730 (4) - sliderend to represent a strong beat is no good :c who circles instead
00:57:833 (1) - i would place this down more so that it plays better, like around 410;353 http://puu.sh/n8lld/c1d3469d56.jpg no thanks, but I did reposition circle 2
01:04:557 (4) - 01:04:212 (3) - use this slider and flip it around. place it in here 293;17. plays better imo :l http://puu.sh/n8lr2/695ec846f8.jpgnice, fixed
01:28:350 - slider ends here bby thanks bby

good luck!

thanks Anxient!

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-02-15T16:20:59+00:00

rizen is baka!

[ez]
00:07:661 (4) - rotate -15 degrees because parallel looks kinda strange to me xd

[normal]
01:08:523 (3) - spacing looks unbalanced

[hard]
00:24:557 (3,1,2) - i kinda like this idea, but you should do some manual stacks to make sure they are sight readable
01:06:626 (2,3) - plain straight sliders are kinda boring
01:09:902 (5,6) - imo holds on blue tick is a little bit hard to catch. maybe a triplet before one hold?

[fizz is a nice fish]
00:16:281 - this suggestion is dumb - add a note here for polarity.
00:47:143 (2,3) - it's probably a way to brought 00:47:316 (3,4) - up with stronger feelings, but the spacing looks too small and unpredictable. You just did increase the spacing step by step before this one.
01:22:143 (1,2) - this jump is pretty close to flat. why not make 01:23:178 (2,1) - into a vertical jump, so you can provide something different for a finisher?

[extra]
00:10:075 (3) - maybe Ctrl+G. your slider head is always on the opposite side, and that's kinda weird to play sometimes
00:19:730 (3,4,5,6) - seems like a symmetry jump, but that curve/obtuse on 00:19:902 (4,5,6) - is really strange. not really good to play imo.
00:36:626 (4,5,6,7,8) - just do a straight near-vertical stream, don't really have to force it into a curve
00:39:212 (3,4,5,6) - same as above, maybe try this

image

01:08:523 (1) - useless NC, delete it so you can be guided by follow points
01:18:695 (1,2) - maybe Ctrl+G, and you'll get a short spacing on (1) for emphasizing, and a back-and-forth jump pattern.
01:20:764 (4) - actually it can be more close to the center of that triangle

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-16T03:28:36+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
rizen is baka!

[ez]
00:07:661 (4) - rotate -15 degrees because parallel looks kinda strange to me xd

[normal]
01:08:523 (3) - spacing looks unbalanced

[hard]
00:24:557 (3,1,2) - i kinda like this idea, but you should do some manual stacks to make sure they are sight readable
01:06:626 (2,3) - plain straight sliders are kinda boring
01:09:902 (5,6) - imo holds on blue tick is a little bit hard to catch. maybe a triplet before one hold?

[extra]
00:10:075 (3) - maybe Ctrl+G. your slider head is always on the opposite side, and that's kinda weird to play sometimes the change in flow is on purpose, also to keep consistency with 00:06:971 (1,2,3) -
00:19:730 (3,4,5,6) - seems like a symmetry jump, but that curve/obtuse on 00:19:902 (4,5,6) - is really strange. not really good to play imo.
00:36:626 (4,5,6,7,8) - just do a straight near-vertical stream, don't really have to force it into a curve
00:39:212 (3,4,5,6) - same as above, maybe try this
image
01:08:523 (1) - useless NC, delete it so you can be guided by follow points that NC there is to tell the difference between 01:07:661 (1,2) - and 01:08:178 (1,1) - , which are spaced the same but rhythmically are not the same
01:18:695 (1,2) - maybe Ctrl+G, and you'll get a short spacing on (1) for emphasizing, and a back-and-forth jump pattern. the want to continue the clockwise flow here spiiirals
01:20:764 (4) - actually it can be more close to the center of that triangle not meant to be in the centre of triangle, instead a straight line at 01:20:419 (3,4,5,7) -

no reply = fixed
~~applied everything so far except for extra because I haven't applied it yet (will tonight)~~ , thanks Nerova!

Last edited by Rizen 2016-02-16T20:07:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2016-02-16T11:20:06+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
[fizz is a nice fish]
00:16:281 - this suggestion is dumb - add a note here for polarity. i know exactly what you're going for here but I'mma keep it how it is
00:47:143 (2,3) - it's probably a way to brought 00:47:316 (3,4) - up with stronger feelings, but the spacing looks too small and unpredictable. You just did increase the spacing step by step before this one. increased spacing slightly
01:22:143 (1,2) - this jump is pretty close to flat. why not make 01:23:178 (2,1) - into a vertical jump, so you can provide something different for a finisher? i changed up the patterns a lot here

thanks for the mod nrg~

update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:空色デイズ
Artist:Nakagawa Shouko
ArtistUnicode:中川翔子
Creator:Rizen
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Source:Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann
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309,182,70419,6,0,B|343:179|343:179|359:211|359:211|363:178|389:131|457:107|532:153|546:212|526:293|449:351|406:263|438:209,1,448,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,80,72833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,80,73178,6,0,L|139:162,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,103,73523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,266,73695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,211,74040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,211,74385,6,0,L|160:190,1,178.499994552612,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,190,75937,6,0,L|254:183,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,268,76281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
33,159,76454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
33,159,76540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
33,159,76626,2,0,P|28:111|38:74,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,29,76971,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,111,77143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,111,77316,6,0,L|314:103,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,47,77661,2,0,P|451:52|477:123,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,135,78006,2,0,L|453:213,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,230,78350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,230,78523,6,0,L|309:160,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,47,78868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,47,79040,2,0,P|191:90|200:153,1,105,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,182,79385,2,0,L|107:166,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,286,79730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,251,79902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
43,286,80075,6,0,L|32:200,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,120,80419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,253,80592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,253,80678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,253,80764,6,0,P|153:286|241:266,1,120.750002303124,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,81109,2,0,L|334:256,1,80.5000015354157,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,347,81454,5,4,0:0:0:0:
496,232,81626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
369,364,81799,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,175,81971,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,269,82143,5,8,0:0:0:0:
261,238,82316,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,30,82661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,30,82747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,30,82833,6,0,L|169:26,1,70,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,83178,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,27,83350,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83437,12,0,88350,0:0:0:0:

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-02-16T19:36:45+00:00

Hi, I was in a rush while doing this, so my mod might worse than ususal, sry for that in advance

[General]

Hitsounds with possible delay >5ms -->
drum-hitfinish5.wav
drum-hitfinish2.wav

[Easy]

01:14:385 (3,4) - Maybe this rhythm and mute the end of 01:14:385 (3) instead? Since the clickable object here 01:15:592 (4) isn't landed on vocal.
01:09:730 (4,1) - Can you improve the angle between sliders? What you have in Normal looks better imo.

[Normal]

00:33:868 (7,8) - 01:09:902 (7,1) - DS
00:48:006 (5,1) - Might confuse some players since most stacks are done with a 1/2 beat spacing.
00:58:695 (6,1) - Not really nitpicking, make them pararell? Feels like a pixel off to me.

[Hard]

00:24:557 (3,1,2) - Personally I'm not a fan of sth like this but if you want to keep it then please overlap both circles evenly.
00:56:109 (4,5) - Not sure about the flow here cuz it makes this triangle 00:56:454 (5,1,2) really hard to notice, I would ctrl+g this thing 00:56:109 (4) .
01:06:109 (5) - Not sure if it's just me but I never notice this thing every time I played lol.

Good luck~

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-16T21:38:59+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, I was in a rush while doing this, so my mod might worse than ususal, sry for that in advance

[General]

Hitsounds with possible delay >5ms -->
drum-hitfinish5.wav
drum-hitfinish2.wav

they look fine when I checked them ;d I'll ask an expert about it
[Easy]

01:14:385 (3,4) - Maybe this rhythm and mute the end of 01:14:385 (3) instead? Since the clickable object here 01:15:592 (4) isn't landed on vocal.
01:09:730 (4,1) - Can you improve the angle between sliders? What you have in Normal looks better imo.
[Normal]

00:33:868 (7,8) - 01:09:902 (7,1) - DS
00:48:006 (5,1) - Might confuse some players since most stacks are done with a 1/2 beat spacing.
00:58:695 (6,1) - Not really nitpicking, make them pararell? Feels like a pixel off to me.
[Hard]

00:24:557 (3,1,2) - Personally I'm not a fan of sth like this but if you want to keep it then please overlap both circles evenly. the circles are spaced out like that so they're easier to read
00:56:109 (4,5) - Not sure about the flow here cuz it makes this triangle 00:56:454 (5,1,2) really hard to notice, I would ctrl+g this thing 00:56:109 (4).
01:06:109 (5) - Not sure if it's just me but I never notice this thing every time I played lol. did some hacks so you can read it now
Good luck~

no reply = fixed
thank you!

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-02-17T02:49:28+00:00

ticket m4m.
[general]
You don't use storyboard. You should turn off 'widescreen support'.
http://puu.sh/naN1I/66cae8a9ef.png
00:58:868 - ~00:59:385 - I prefer turn off kiai

[easy]
00:53:178 (4) - stack error

[normal]
00:20:075 (6,1) - how about mke a blanket? http://puu.sh/naLY8/e6908687eb.jpg
00:55:764 (5,2) - they are too near.
00:59:385 (1,2) - I think this is bad flow. my suggestion is http://puu.sh/naM4M/c728fcb3bb.jpg or http://puu.sh/naM5q/4b037a40b3.jpg
01:06:971 (5,6,1) - It is hard to play for beginners. my suggestion is http://puu.sh/naMaz/46d698f9a3.jpg

[Hard]
00:08:006 (4,1) - 1.33x
00:11:454 (2,2) - I think stack is better
00:11:109 (1,3) - ^
00:21:971 (1,1) - ^
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1) - too many overlap pattern. 00:45:506 (7,1) -
00:57:488 (4,4) - stack.
01:05:419 (3,5) - this overlap is bad...
01:12:833 (1) - why this is NC?
01:13:695 (3,2) - stack is better, too..

[Fizz's Insane]
00:13:092 (1) - check the slider's end
00:51:454 (2) - ovelap...
00:59:040 (4,4) - how about stack?
01:07:661 (1,2,1,2) - This is verrry hard to read. my suggestion is 01:08:178 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/naMFq/0bb4044a51.jpg

[extra]
00:10:764 (6,2) - stack error
00:13:092 (1) - how about make a slider?
00:35:075 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/naMPY/3f5c96ccb9.jpg

Good luck

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-02-17T06:58:20+00:00

ex
nice diff.
some jumps imo are too big which degrades the emphasis provided by strong points in the music;
00:09:730 (1,2,3) -
00:36:281 (2,3,4) -
00:50:592 (4,5,6) -
--
00:19:902 (4,5,6) - motion here would be better if you made it snappier (more angle) 00:20:247 (6) - lower this i think
00:20:419 (7) - dunno if ur a fan of these but an extended slider would fit this part well
00:47:661 (1,2) - uhh stacking these ends up being kinda anticlimatic imo, especially after u built up so much momentum, this almost calls for a huge jump imo.
01:08:523 (1) - dont think u need this nc tbh
01:11:281 (3) - space this further from 01:10:419 (1) - to match the spacing of 01:10:419 (1,2) - . for asthetics
01:14:385 (1) - i think u can try something like this here

SPOILER

most annoying fish NA
00:56:454 (1) - i think its much more effective if u mapped the percussion here tbh u can do the cool antijump stuff here q:
00:13:092 (1) - i think the spinner should end on the white tick, yes im aware that the drum does start on the blue tick, but the strong part is on the white most definitely

hard
01:07:661 (1,2) - tbh i was more expecting a sharp change in motion here but u just made a linear pattern :X
00:46:971 (1) - gets kinda crowded here >< but i guess it looks fine in gameplay :S
00:47:661 (3) - u could at least put a kink in the slider for the drum here 00:47:833 -
00:50:247 (3,4) - slider would be better here imo to make the flow feel more connected.
01:01:281 (3,4) - ^

normal
00:15:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm can be more simplified here to fit the calm music, too many 1/2 here imo for a calm part that is
00:22:661 (5,6) - ^
00:54:902 (3,4,5) - try ctrl g'ing the rhythm here, i would fit better imo

easy
uhh this blanket could be better 00:27:488 (2,3) -
01:10:419 (1,2) - honestly i wouldn't stack these, kinda hard to react to for an easy diff since the circle appears b4 the slider disappears with this AR

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-17T13:18:54+00:00

no reply = fixed/applied

Neoskylove wrote:
ticket m4m.
[general]
You don't use storyboard. You should turn off 'widescreen support'.
http://puu.sh/naN1I/66cae8a9ef.png
00:58:868 - ~00:59:385 - I prefer turn off kiai I don't like flashing kiai twice, espeically in a tv size ;d

[easy]
00:53:178 (4) - stack error

[normal]
00:20:075 (6,1) - how about mke a blanket? http://puu.sh/naLY8/e6908687eb.jpg
00:55:764 (5,2) - they are too near.
00:59:385 (1,2) - I think this is bad flow. my suggestion is http://puu.sh/naM4M/c728fcb3bb.jpg or http://puu.sh/naM5q/4b037a40b3.jpg
01:06:971 (5,6,1) - It is hard to play for beginners. my suggestion is http://puu.sh/naMaz/46d698f9a3.jpg should be fine, I think it's easy enough for normal ;d

[Hard]
00:08:006 (4,1) - 1.33x
00:11:454 (2,2) - I think stack is better
00:11:109 (1,3) - ^
00:21:971 (1,1) - ^
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1) - too many overlap pattern. 00:45:506 (7,1) -
00:57:488 (4,4) - stack. can't or else it breaks DS
01:05:419 (3,5) - this overlap is bad... nothing really bad about it imo
01:12:833 (1) - why this is NC? keeping with NC per measure, this is NC'd as a result
01:13:695 (3,2) - stack is better, too..

[extra]
00:10:764 (6,2) - stack error
00:13:092 (1) - how about make a slider? but spinner = spin = spirals
00:35:075 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/naMPY/3f5c96ccb9.jpg no need, that will only make the slider harder to read ;d

Good luck

thanks neoskylove!

Kibbleru wrote:
ex
nice diff.
some jumps imo are too big which degrades the emphasis provided by strong points in the music;
00:09:730 (1,2,3) -
00:36:281 (2,3,4) -
00:50:592 (4,5,6) -
--
00:19:902 (4,5,6) - motion here would be better if you made it snappier (more angle) 00:20:247 (6) - lower this i think
00:20:419 (7) - dunno if ur a fan of these but an extended slider would fit this part well I would rather follow guitar at this part ;d
00:47:661 (1,2) - uhh stacking these ends up being kinda anticlimatic imo, especially after u built up so much momentum, this almost calls for a huge jump imo. good reasoning. and also, wow SR shot up bu 0.08
01:08:523 (1) - dont think u need this nc tbh
01:11:281 (3) - space this further from 01:10:419 (1) - to match the spacing of 01:10:419 (1,2) - . for asthetics
01:14:385 (1) - i think u can try something like this here
SPOILER

hard
01:07:661 (1,2) - tbh i was more expecting a sharp change in motion here but u just made a linear pattern :X
00:46:971 (1) - gets kinda crowded here >< but i guess it looks fine in gameplay :S
00:47:661 (3) - u could at least put a kink in the slider for the drum here 00:47:833 -
00:50:247 (3,4) - slider would be better here imo to make the flow feel more connected.
01:01:281 (3,4) - ^

normal
00:15:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm can be more simplified here to fit the calm music, too many 1/2 here imo for a calm part that is
00:22:661 (5,6) - ^
00:54:902 (3,4,5) - try ctrl g'ing the rhythm here, i would fit better imo

easy
uhh this blanket could be better 00:27:488 (2,3) -
01:10:419 (1,2) - honestly i wouldn't stack these, kinda hard to react to for an easy diff since the circle appears b4 the slider disappears with this AR

thanks everyone!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-02-17T20:27:27+00:00

Rizenn as your Request. sorry it came a bit late x(

[General]

i'd put the Source name with the Kanji one instead the Latin one, which means Replace the current one with 天元突破グレンラガン then add into the tags "Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann". people use the kanji nowadays instead the latin's x3

[Easy]

I Dont found any Issues on the diff so it'll be just a nazi mods lol. as always it is very Neat Style.
00:27:488 (2,3) - nazi, Blanket could be nicer
00:34:212 (4,3) - i know this is fine since people wont notice this but this keeps bothers me tho xd try to not overlap them i suppose
00:39:385 (3,1) - blanket xd
00:42:488 (5,1) - spacing is a bit consistent here. Also, might want to change 00:42:833 (1) - into 1/2? fits nicely imo
00:44:902 (3,1,2,3,4) - the transition over those objects are bit dense imo. especially on 00:46:281 (2) - to 00:47:661 (5) - i do place it diffrently rather like this because it is a bit hard to play imo for newbies
00:58:695 (4,1) - blanket ;_;
01:10:419 (1) - move third slider point to 244|140 to prevent a better wavy part x)
Awesome as always!

[Normal]

ayy i can't mod a Normal diff help me ;A;. so i only say the diff is really nice but try to reduce some 1/2's on it because it keeps strugling me ;_;

[Hard]

00:32:316 (2,3,4,1) - the part here are too dense imo. especially when you play it with DT. might want rearrange this part? xd
01:05:419 (3,5) - aaa overlap here is bothering me ;A; can you place (5) into somewhere that would'nt be overlapped with (3) x(?
01:07:316 (4,5,1,2) - this is a bit too dense imo plus, they could be a triangle tho x)
SPOILER
meh your lower diffs are good, can't even find a issue on it xd

[Extra]

00:04:902 (1,1,1) - yeah i know this is an Extra diff but this is a little confusing to Play, notice that 00:05:247 (1) - is a 1/4 repeated slider then after it a sudden 1/2 jumps makes the diff more confusing to play ;_;
00:11:281 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - can you nerf this jump a bit? this is a bit forced to play imo

00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - err to be honest i dont really get any flow on these jumps. so i try to rearrange the jump here. might want to try this? cuz i find this one is better but besides that, it'll highly reduce the SR lol. or you could do a similiar one like this i suppose haha

SPOILER

45592,-100,4,3,2,60,0,0
45678,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
45937,-100,4,3,2,65,0,0
46281,-100,4,3,2,70,0,0
46626,-100,4,3,2,75,0,0
46971,-100,4,3,2,80,0,0
47316,-100,4,3,2,85,0,0
47661,-100,4,3,5,70,0,0
48006,-125,4,3,1,70,0,0
48264,-125,4,3,1,10,0,0
48350,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,95,0,1
51626,-90.9090909090909,4,3,2,95,0,1
51971,-90.9090909090909,4,3,6,95,0,1
52057,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,95,0,1
52316,-90.9090909090909,4,3,2,95,0,1
52402,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,95,0,1
56626,-90.9090909090909,4,3,4,85,0,1
57833,-90.9090909090909,4,3,2,95,0,1

01:15:419 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ahh im a bit confusing on this stream, please dont make it like this cuz i find it's hard to aim xdd

That's all i guess because its already Perfect for Ranked \o/

Sorry if its not that Helpful

i tried my best lol
[]
Good Luck Rizen <3

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-02-18T04:39:39+00:00

Hello. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Extra]

00:11:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) – I really like this. I really really do. Osu needs more maps of this bpm with this kind of spacing. However, this spacing introduces some subjective problems with the pacing in your map, which the following suggestions relate to:

00:34:557 (1) – These cymbals start to increase the intensity. The jumps into them are very low though (with the above spacing in mind). I'd like to see some bigger jumps here, 00:35:075 (3) – and 00:35:764 (1) - (not too big obviously, but enough to re-engage the player after a relatively calm section)
00:48:350 (1) – This doesn't feel like a kiai section in the map. The section at 00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) – is build up. It's supposed to build into something stronger than itself. The average DS in the kiai though is pretty weak, and as a result, this supposedly “strong chorus” feels like just a mildly spicy interlude. So for example, 00:48:695 (2) – feels better with a DS of 2.8x instead of 2.3x. 00:50:592 (4) – Feels better with a prev of 3.2x, which sets up 00:51:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – to be a very strong measure, then bringing it back down with a “rest” measure at 00:52:316 (1,2,3,4) - . Basically, increase the DS everywhere by a lot except on the “rest” measure which you should increase by only a little. This map might be a good model to see where I want the kiai to go if you keep the current spacings at 00:11:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) – and 00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) – . (comments below related)
An SV of 1.2x might also be more appropriate. We clearly agree on the idea of an SV increase, but I think you don't go hard enough on that idea given the high spacings mentioned and the suggested DS increase.
If you do increase the DS in the chorus, you're going to run out of room quite a lot. It might help to lower the circle size (by which I mean the circles should be physically smaller) to give yourself the more space by not needing the DS to be so big in order to get the same intensity of spacing.
Consider doing this regardless of any DS changes in the kiai. At 00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) – try starting 00:45:592 (1,2,3,4) – off with a DS closer to ~1.5x, and subsequently lowering each combo a bit so that you still get your dramatic increases, but the end result would be a bit lower DS which could be beneficial if you want to change your pacing for reasons above.
If you decide not to increase the DS in the chorus, I would suggest decreasing the DS at 00:11:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) – (as much as I don't want you to do this, I also don't want to be given expectations of high spacing and then being let down).

Here is a graph from automod that shows the level of spacing throughout the map (bottom one): http://puu.sh/nc5lP/86703aecf3.png. This is what I mean by having your pacing all wonky. After the second big spike comes the kiai section, which turns into a valley instead of staying on a similar level or increasing. This is wonky pacing to me.

You flow and structure are pretty great, so not really much else to say. I could talk about more spacing issues like 01:20:764 (4,5) – being a little low and 00:55:592 (2,3) – being a little low, but these have a lot less impact than the above.

Since I mention pacing a lot, I might as well share this video that talks about pacing in other mediums. It's kind of cool food for thought if you're interested in the discussion above

[Fizz's Insane]

00:47:833 (2,1) – Consider lowering this spacing (to maybe ~2.3x?) to give more of a rest to the player after the hard jumps. (one way to help achieve this is by doing ctrl H on (1) ).

01:07:661 (1,2,1,2) – I don't see the logic behind repeating the flow. What's repeating in the song? The ½ rhythm versus the 1/1 rhythm give these two combos a pretty different feeling in the song, so I suggest some kind of flow change. If you want a somewhat rushed example: http://puu.sh/nc3TV/2c0c102de2.jpg

01:14:385 (1) – This slow SV stops working at 01:15:247 - . I'd like to see some objects here, so maybe try http://puu.sh/nc42u/37b9fa36b6.jpg? If so, then increase SV a bit because it might be too slow.

01:22:316 (2,3) – Increasing the DS between these would feel nicer to express the 1/1 rhythm change, so try moving to ~264, 328?

[Hard]

00:08:954 (3) – Going into ¼ rhythm feels a little odd with all the 1/1 breaks you make. Why such a variable rhythm in this section of the map? It's also a little odd reading it since the stacks at 00:06:454 (4,5) – are ½, but this similar looking stack is ¼.

00:18:006 (1) – This might have nicer flow coming out of the previous note if you move it like so: http://puu.sh/nc4p0/3197d67c27.jpg

00:24:557 (3,1,2) – It might be nice to have less overlap on these for a little bit easier readability, and personally I think it looks nicer like: http://puu.sh/nc4tO/fc5c5c8023.jpg

00:26:281 (1,2) – With the way stacking works in osu, these are not blanketed, and instead 00:26:971 (4) – is what is actually blanketed. This isn't really a problem since this is subjective and could go either way with what looks nicer, but I just want to make sure this is intentional.

00:45:247 (5,6,7,1) – This however does get you into a little bit of a problem with the stack because the DS now isn't your consistent 1.3x, which feels a little odd.

01:03:006 (4,5) – Consider making this a ½ slider instead?

01:05:419 (3,5) – This overlap looks funky. I'd try to go for a triangle instead on 01:05:419 (3,4,5) - . To make room for this, it's probably better to abandon the triangle on 01:04:730 (5,1,2) – and go with a slightly more natural flow of: http://puu.sh/nc4P5/3e84ac3c44.jpg

[Normal]

00:34:385 (8) – Consider deleting this to give more rest to the Normal player

00:37:316 (1) – Consider this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/nc575/058013f2dd.jpg

00:46:281 (2,4) – Such a funky overlap. Consider rotating (3) to make it not overlap: http://puu.sh/nc5aT/1124f80fdb.jpg. If you dislike the flow into it, try angling 00:45:592 (1,2) – differently

and I'm out of time (Note to self: going on long subjective rants about the harder difficulties means I won't have time to mod all the difficulties).

Good luck!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-18T10:21:07+00:00

will reply to mods when I'm not tired

(like within 24h of this post)

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-18T13:51:30+00:00

Hi~ I'm here!

[General]
* NC of the notes on 00:13:006 - is inconsistent throughout the diffs. I suggest to not NC any of it, to avoid NC spam on like Normal 00:13:006 (1,1,1) - .
* 01:10:419 (1) - Except Extra, I think reducing this to 01:11:626 - would fit better. There's nothing prominent on the downbeat, so why not end it on where the vocal ends? Also only on Hard 01:12:833 - is NC'd.
* It would have been good if the distance and the sv on Normal was a little bit bigger since right now it's almost the same with Easy... 0.8*1.2=0.96, 1.0*1.0=1.0, and it gets suddenly really big on Hard 1.4*1.3=1.82. So Normal is basically just more clicks than Easy while the intensity of movement remains almost same. Hard's movement is indeed really intense compared to the easier diffs.
* 00:36:626 - Remove finish? There's no cymbal sound and feels a bit spammed there.

[Easy]
* 01:22:833 (3,1) - This isn't really comfortable for newbie players. The flow goes outer and then spinner is right there, so they have to struggle to get to the center and try to spin properly. So try something that goes inside.

[Normal]
* 00:46:281 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern looks really shrinked. The atmosphere is getting wild but it requires very little movement. Also the overlap 00:46:281 (2,4) - looks bad because this map is a clean style, and all other overlaps just indicated 1/2 gaps but this one just looks like a random overlap.
* 00:50:075 (4,5) - 01:01:109 (4) - Try to use consistent rhythm
* 01:08:178 (2) - Overlaps with the HP bar. Pull it down a little.
* 01:15:247 (5) - How about 1 circle and 1 1/2 slider? You started to represent the drums on 01:13:178 (1,2) - so it would be consistent to care about the drums afterwards too.

[Hard]
* Reduce OD to 6. Insane is 7. Or tell Fizz to increase his diff to 7.5
* 00:13:006 (4) - 01:23:350 (1) - NC consistency
* 01:09:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks too intense. Especially successive 1/4 sliders are hard to read combined with streams. So maybe use a repeat slider.
* 01:19:730 (5) - Use 2 circles like 00:09:385 (5,6) - . Both of the beats are quite important imo.

[Fizz' Insane]
Long time no see after p/4683718
* 00:08:695 (3) - Why not http://puu.sh/ncqhU/401db0c4dd.jpg ? You used a triplet on 00:06:109 (3,4,5) - and same for 01:19:040 (3) -
* 00:13:092 (1) - omg I know why you ended there, but let's make it consistent throughout the diffs. I think it's not even on the blue tick though, it's maybe a 1/8 starting on 00:14:859 - . But well, white tick is a better choice imo, as it's a regular rhythm.
* 00:45:247 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - It's undoubtedly the hardest part than any other parts of this map. This map is 4.12* without it lol... If you wanted to put these big, succesive jumps here than the kiai should have been much harder than now.
* Also the kiai IS really easy. Kiai is the highlight part, which means it should have the biggest scale and preferably be the hardest(Well this song's kiai is not really gonna be the hardest but still way too easy). I don't see any difference of scale on the kiai compared to the rest of the map. (Not even increased the sv, uhh, even Hard did that)
* 01:04:557 (4,5,6,7,1) - You've followed the drum sounds well but this one is... just overmapped. The triplet on 00:53:695 (5,6,1) - is enough. (I don't like it either, I think jump fits better)
* 01:06:971 - Ignoring this vocal feels really awkward. Even though you're focusing on the drums, this one is too strong and high to neglect.
* 01:14:385 (1) - What are you trying to represent here? It just neglects all the vocals&drums like 01:15:247 - 01:15:419 - 01:15:592 - 01:15:678 - 01:15:764 - . I don't understand why you just pass through all those rhythms. It's unnecessarily boring imo.

[Extra]
* As like Fizz' Insane, I hope the kiai was harder than how it is now. It's not any challenging on the 'highlight' part at all. Use more circles and bigger distances. It looks like you used too many sliders where circles can be used, like 00:56:109 (4) - . And the jumps can be bigger, at least than 01:13:178 (1,2,3,4) - .
* 01:15:506 (3) - I think without this is better. At least, it follows the drum better.

Good luck~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2016-02-19T07:36:50+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
ticket m4m.

[Fizz's Insane]
00:13:092 (1) - check the slider's end fixed
00:51:454 (2) - ovelap... fixed
00:59:040 (4,4) - how about stack? nah it's good
01:07:661 (1,2,1,2) - This is verrry hard to read. my suggestion is 01:08:178 (1,2,1) - i like how it is but i might change it later

Kibbleru wrote:
most annoying fish NA
00:56:454 (1) - i think its much more effective if u mapped the percussion here tbh u can do the cool antijump stuff here q: i did some stuffs
00:13:092 (1) - i think the spinner should end on the white tick, yes im aware that the drum does start on the blue tick, but the strong part is on the white most definitely yep, dones

pinataman wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]

00:47:833 (2,1) – Consider lowering this spacing (to maybe ~2.3x?) to give more of a rest to the player after the hard jumps. (one way to help achieve this is by doing ctrl H on (1) ). increased previous jump and lowered the next

01:07:661 (1,2,1,2) – I don't see the logic behind repeating the flow. What's repeating in the song? The ½ rhythm versus the 1/1 rhythm give these two combos a pretty different feeling in the song, so I suggest some kind of flow change. If you want a somewhat rushed example: http://puu.sh/nc3TV/2c0c102de2.jpg imo the rhythm type is irrelevant here; you have the guitar and the lyrics (the guitar playing the same note, and the lyrics are apart of the same vocal line)

01:14:385 (1) – This slow SV stops working at 01:15:247 - . I'd like to see some objects here, so maybe try http://puu.sh/nc42u/37b9fa36b6.jpg? If so, then increase SV a bit because it might be too slow. i'm willing to miss out on the percussion for the feel of this part.

01:22:316 (2,3) – Increasing the DS between these would feel nicer to express the 1/1 rhythm change, so try moving to ~264, 328? cool i like this

Doyak wrote:
[Fizz' Insane]
Long time no see after p/4683718
* 00:08:695 (3) - Why not http://puu.sh/ncqhU/401db0c4dd.jpg ? You used a triplet on 00:06:109 (3,4,5) - and same for 01:19:040 (3) - you're not referencing the same part of the measure for comparison. also the way the rhythm is set up here I just think this is better (i.e, the song starts on the white tick but the pattern in question's measure technically starts on the red tick before it)
* 00:13:092 (1) - omg I know why you ended there, but let's make it consistent throughout the diffs. I think it's not even on the blue tick though, it's maybe a 1/8 starting on 00:14:859 - . But well, white tick is a better choice imo, as it's a regular rhythm. yep changed with the other mods
* 00:45:247 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - It's undoubtedly the hardest part than any other parts of this map. This map is 4.12* without it lol... If you wanted to put these big, succesive jumps here than the kiai should have been much harder than now.
* Also the kiai IS really easy. Kiai is the highlight part, which means it should have the biggest scale and preferably be the hardest(Well this song's kiai is not really gonna be the hardest but still way too easy). I don't see any difference of scale on the kiai compared to the rest of the map. (Not even increased the sv, uhh, even Hard did that) the jump section is definitely the peak part of this song and deserves the jumps. kiai time really only sounds a little bit more intense than the rest of the song, so it's a bit harder than that. concerning the hard sv thing, I made this before hard diff was a thing and i ain't bothered to change it
* 01:04:557 (4,5,6,7,1) - You've followed the drum sounds well but this one is... just overmapped. The triplet on 00:53:695 (5,6,1) - is enough. (I don't like it either, I think jump fits better) so there's a triple on the white tick here, and 01:04:816 (7) - this is a stretch to map, but honestly considering nowhere else in the map has the awkward feeling white-tick triple, I want to have this here to make it feel a bit smoother
* 01:06:971 - Ignoring this vocal feels really awkward. Even though you're focusing on the drums, this one is too strong and high to neglect. agreed, fixed it up
* 01:14:385 (1) - What are you trying to represent here? It just neglects all the vocals&drums like 01:15:247 - 01:15:419 - 01:15:592 - 01:15:678 - 01:15:764 - . I don't understand why you just pass through all those rhythms. It's unnecessarily boring imo.dude there's that super intense mrawrwrwrwrwr sound from the guitar and it sounds awesome and I wanna map the build up

thanks for the mods guys phew that took ages /w\

update

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Rizen

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Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-02-21T11:08:16+00:00

~~ok, I promise to do this soon (tomorrow night), uni is already biting into me~~ I broke it...

no time, probably one diff per night

Everything accepted unless mentioned
easy: mostly applied everything (
normal: remapping with new DS... Rhythm will be simplified if needed to keep "N" icon
hard: applied everything and remapped!
extra: will be answered in later post

this is Doyak, pinataman, Haruto

Last edited by Rizen 2016-03-02T21:52:32+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2016-02-25T19:39:14+00:00

im really really sowwy

[General]

Looks fine

[Easy]

Minor details here, good and easy flow throughout

00:15:333 - Greenline doesn't change anything? (unless im missing something)

00:16:454 (2,3) - nazi blanket - slider tail x:186 y:264

0:25:592 - What does this greenline do? I can see it changes custom set, but theres nothing being played here in this diff

00:29:040 (1,2) - Double check these are parallel

00:40:075 (1) - nazi blanket - slider tail x:254 y:178

01:23:695 (1) - Move spinner to 01:23:523 - here and extend to current ending point? Theres a slight gap which feels a little bit weird if i'm honest

[Normal]

00:49:385 - Missing circle here? Pretty heavy snare missed here imo, although maybe you're following the vocals here and idk, probably pointless suggestion really

00:53:178 (5,1) - Double check these are parallel

Really good normal diff

[Hard]

Minor aesthetic changes again

00:10:075 (2,3,4) - Blanket is off, slider middle should be moved more inwards x:63 y:201

00:15:764 (2) - I would move this to x:184 y:286 for a cleaner shape and flow

00:54:212 (2,3) - Blanket is off - slider middle x:243 y:49 / slider end x:300 y:2

01:12:833 (1) - Any reason why this is NC'd? Easier difficulties don't NC this and since it's part of the same figure of music I'm not sure why it's NC'd

[Fizz's Insane]

00:13:092 (1) - Shouldn't this end 00:14:902 - here? just noticed this has been addressed in other mods, sorry q.q (although i don't think your diff has been updated yet)

00:51:626 (3) - I would move this slider end to x:272 y:68 since it creates a nice right angle shape with 00:51:109 (1) - and also gives a better indication of the flow direction

01:08:178 (1,2) - I found this misleading to read because of how 01:07:661 (1,2) - was, maybe switch (1) with (2) (as in on the timeline) or maybe change the angle?

01:14:385 (1) - Instead of ending this at 01:15:850 - why not end it at 01:15:247 - and take advantage of the drum fill thats played here?

Nice difficulty

[]

I didn't mod extra since I can't reliably play 5.2*+ Diffs and give decent feedback on them (sorry)

Hope this helped

im so sorry im so late pls frogiv mi

Rizen

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Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-03-03T01:40:14+00:00

Haruto wrote:
[Extra]
00:04:902 (1,1,1) - yeah i know this is an Extra diff but this is a little confusing to Play, notice that 00:05:247 (1) - is a 1/4 repeated slider then after it a sudden 1/2 jumps makes the diff more confusing to play ;_; removed it
00:11:281 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - can you nerf this jump a bit? this is a bit forced to play imo nerfed slightly
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - err to be honest i dont really get any flow on these jumps. so i try to rearrange the jump here. might want to try this? cuz i find this one is better but besides that, it'll highly reduce the SR lol. or you could do a similiar one like this i suppose haha there is a flow pattern ;_; I can tell you ingame if you want to know more
SPOILER
45592,-100,4,3,2,60,0,0
45678,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
45937,-100,4,3,2,65,0,0
46281,-100,4,3,2,70,0,0
46626,-100,4,3,2,75,0,0
46971,-100,4,3,2,80,0,0
47316,-100,4,3,2,85,0,0
47661,-100,4,3,5,70,0,0
48006,-125,4,3,1,70,0,0
48264,-125,4,3,1,10,0,0
48350,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,95,0,1
51626,-90.9090909090909,4,3,2,95,0,1
51971,-90.9090909090909,4,3,6,95,0,1
52057,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,95,0,1
52316,-90.9090909090909,4,3,2,95,0,1
52402,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,95,0,1
56626,-90.9090909090909,4,3,4,85,0,1
57833,-90.9090909090909,4,3,2,95,0,1
01:15:419 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ahh im a bit confusing on this stream, please dont make it like this cuz i find it's hard to aim xdd ok

To pinataman and Doyak, I made MAJOR changes to the Kiai time part of the song so it follows the "intensity" of the song build up. :<
Doyak, removed that circle at 01:15:00 -

Log Off Now (will update this post later today for these changes)

Log Off Now wrote:
im really really sowwy

[General]

Looks fine

[Easy]

Minor details here, good and easy flow throughout

00:15:333 - Greenline doesn't change anything? (unless im missing something)

00:16:454 (2,3) - nazi blanket - slider tail x:186 y:264

0:25:592 - What does this greenline do? I can see it changes custom set, but theres nothing being played here in this diff

00:29:040 (1,2) - Double check these are parallel

00:40:075 (1) - nazi blanket - slider tail x:254 y:178

01:23:695 (1) - Move spinner to 01:23:523 - here and extend to current ending point? Theres a slight gap which feels a little bit weird if i'm honest

[Normal]

00:49:385 - Missing circle here? Pretty heavy snare missed here imo, although maybe you're following the vocals here and idk, probably pointless suggestion really

00:53:178 (5,1) - Double check these are parallel

Really good normal diff

[Hard]

Minor aesthetic changes again

00:10:075 (2,3,4) - Blanket is off, slider middle should be moved more inwards x:63 y:201

00:15:764 (2) - I would move this to x:184 y:286 for a cleaner shape and flow

00:54:212 (2,3) - Blanket is off - slider middle x:243 y:49 / slider end x:300 y:2

01:12:833 (1) - Any reason why this is NC'd? Easier difficulties don't NC this and since it's part of the same figure of music I'm not sure why it's NC'd

[]

I didn't mod extra since I can't reliably play 5.2*+ Diffs and give decent feedback on them (sorry)

Hope this helped
basically applied everything in easy/normal. Nothing in hard because I remapped it

im so sorry im so late pls frogiv mi

thank you so much for the mods guys!

Last edited by Rizen 2016-03-11T02:50:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-03-04T21:28:47+00:00

hOI!
from da qUEUE!

most things will be minor because map is 2gud

Extra

00:12:316 (7,8,1) - maybe you can make this triple spread out a bit instead of a stack, would make it more interesting
00:17:316 (4,5) - these two dont connect very well when playing, maybe angle 4 up a bit
00:17:143 (3,1) - overlap problem?
00:36:626 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - the curve looks really incosistent, maybe make it bend more
00:43:350 (3,1) - euh overlap?
00:44:902 (4,5) - place 5 so that it is in the line of 4
00:48:006 (1) - a little higher sv?
01:04:730 (5,2,4) - constantly returning to this spot feels kinda awkward, maybe make them overlap for just half a note
01:07:316 (4,1) - very awkward, maybe angle 4 down
01:17:661 (3,4) - put 4 in line of 3
01:22:661 (7,8,1) - spread out triple?

ok thats it, map looking gud man
if any questions just feel free to contact me, will always be helping out
gl ranking

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2016-03-08T11:21:25+00:00

HighTec wrote:
hOI!
from da qUEUE!

most things will be minor because map is 2gud

Extra

00:12:316 (7,8,1) - maybe you can make this triple spread out a bit instead of a stack, would make it more interesting ok
00:17:316 (4,5) - these two dont connect very well when playing, maybe angle 4 up a bit ctrl+g'd
00:17:143 (3,1) - overlap problem? suppose to be like that
00:36:626 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - the curve looks really incosistent, maybe make it bend more tried to
00:43:350 (3,1) - euh overlap? on purpose
00:44:902 (4,5) - place 5 so that it is in the line of 4 downward angle on purpose
00:48:006 (1) - a little higher sv? slow SV to build momentum
01:04:730 (5,2,4) - constantly returning to this spot feels kinda awkward, maybe make them overlap for just half a note did something different
01:07:316 (4,1) - very awkward, maybe angle 4 down ctrl+g'd a slider
01:17:661 (3,4) - put 4 in line of 3 made straight sliders curvy
01:22:661 (7,8,1) - spread out triple? ok

ok thats it, map looking gud man
if any questions just feel free to contact me, will always be helping out
gl ranking

thanks for the mod

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-03-09T07:56:50+00:00

Bubbled~

IRC

2016-03-09 15:20 Karen: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899432 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Easy]]
2016-03-09 15:20 Karen: first, there are quite a lot unused green lines in all diffs
2016-03-09 15:20 Rizen: ah yeah
2016-03-09 15:20 Rizen: i'll clean through those shortly
2016-03-09 15:21 Karen: easy
2016-03-09 15:21 Karen: 01:11:626 - can end the slider here?
2016-03-09 15:21 Karen: here is a vocal o.,o
2016-03-09 15:22 Karen: 01:23:523 - and start the spinner here like Normal?
2016-03-09 15:22 Rizen: ok to both
2016-03-09 15:22 Karen: won't be that hard
2016-03-09 15:22 Rizen: is it ok if it breaks DS for a short while?
2016-03-09 15:23 Rizen: 01:10:419 (1,2) -
2016-03-09 15:23 Rizen: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/NvgwkhC.jpg
2016-03-09 15:24 Karen: you can but why break it
2016-03-09 15:25 Rizen: to conserve the slider pattern at https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/NvgwkhC.jpg
2016-03-09 15:26 Karen: it's ok
2016-03-09 15:29 Karen: other diffs look great :x
2016-03-09 15:30 Rizen: ;k
2016-03-09 15:30 Karen: in the highest diff
2016-03-09 15:30 Karen: 00:47:488 (4,1,2) - this flow somehow looks a bit 
2016-03-09 15:30 Karen: not that good
2016-03-09 15:31 Karen: [00:47:661 (1) - would be better if you put (1) between those two notes]
2016-03-09 15:31 Karen: err
2016-03-09 15:31 Karen: 00:47:661 (1) - 
2016-03-09 15:31 Karen: ..
2016-03-09 15:31 Karen: http://puu.sh/nA7Vz/288c0a1bfc.jpg
2016-03-09 15:32 Rizen: yeah that does look better
2016-03-09 15:32 Rizen: flows better*
2016-03-09 15:33 Karen: 01:04:557 (4,5,1) - this also a bit
2016-03-09 15:33 Karen: so subjective :x
2016-03-09 15:33 Karen: nothing else to say
2016-03-09 15:36 Karen: 00:53:868 (1,4) - this overlap is on purpose?
2016-03-09 15:37 Rizen: quick question
2016-03-09 15:37 Rizen: would i be able to raise the OD of this to 8.2?
2016-03-09 15:37 Rizen: since AR is 9.2
2016-03-09 15:37 Karen: sure
2016-03-09 15:37 Rizen: (because i always tend to think OD = AR - 1)
2016-03-09 15:38 Karen: ok
2016-03-09 15:38 Karen: change then update
2016-03-09 15:38 Rizen: i'll weed out those greens first
2016-03-09 15:38 Karen: did you get 00:53:868 (1,4) - this
2016-03-09 15:38 Karen: oh
2016-03-09 15:38 Karen: wrong paste
2016-03-09 15:39 Rizen: 01:04:557 (4,5,1) - ?
2016-03-09 15:39 Karen: yes
2016-03-09 15:39 Karen: http://puu.sh/nA8gl/602605b06b.jpg
2016-03-09 15:40 Karen: 00:53:868 (1,4) - and this
2016-03-09 15:40 Rizen: did both
2016-03-09 15:40 Karen: okok
2016-03-09 15:41 Karen: poke me when updated
2016-03-09 15:50 Rizen: done

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-03-12T14:24:49+00:00

SPOILER

2016-03-12 15:39 Rizen: hey, what's up?
2016-03-12 15:39 Avishay: hey
2016-03-12 15:39 Avishay: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/900631 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Super Galaxy GIGA DRILL BREAK!!!]]
2016-03-12 15:39 Avishay: saw your req on #modreqs and you were like gojne
2016-03-12 15:40 Avishay: I can like check it now with you through IRC
2016-03-12 15:40 Rizen: ah yeah, i normally do that before i sleep ;k
2016-03-12 15:40 Rizen: sure
2016-03-12 15:40 Rizen: lemme just redl
2016-03-12 15:41 Avishay: I like the song so I want to push it ahead but if you could mod something of mine I'll appreciate
2016-03-12 15:41 Avishay: it
2016-03-12 15:41 Rizen: i'm actually just about ready to quit osu tbh
2016-03-12 15:41 Rizen: i can take a quick peeve though
2016-03-12 15:42 Rizen: i mean
2016-03-12 15:42 Rizen: peeve isn't the word... uh...
2016-03-12 15:42 Rizen: quick look
2016-03-12 15:42 Avishay: like
2016-03-12 15:42 Avishay: quit playing osu completely or just for today? lol
2016-03-12 15:42 Rizen: quit playing osu completely
2016-03-12 15:43 Rizen: that's why i'm trying to push my last 2 mapsets haha..
2016-03-12 15:43 Avishay: I see
2016-03-12 15:43 Rizen: is your map this one?
2016-03-12 15:43 Rizen: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/921369 (K)NoW_NAME - Knew day]
2016-03-12 15:43 Avishay: yeah
2016-03-12 15:43 Rizen: ok
2016-03-12 15:44 Avishay: but first let's just get over your set quickly
2016-03-12 15:44 Avishay: and then you can take a look on mine if you want to
2016-03-12 15:44 Avishay: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/900631 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Super Galaxy GIGA DRILL BREAK!!!]]
2016-03-12 15:46 Avishay: well yeah this diff is great, a bitnitpicky but 00:57:661 (2,1) - overlap could be avoided
2016-03-12 15:46 Avishay: 01:12:143 (2,3) - is the non stack intentional?
2016-03-12 15:47 Rizen: ok lowered angles of sliders for first one
2016-03-12 15:48 Avishay: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/894471 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Fizz's Insane]]
2016-03-12 15:49 Rizen: second point, adjusted overall pattern to eliminiate overlap
2016-03-12 15:49 Rizen: stack*
2016-03-12 15:49 Rizen: oh wait
2016-03-12 15:49 Rizen: i read that wrong
2016-03-12 15:49 Rizen: fixed nonstack
2016-03-12 15:50 Avishay: is the metadata confirmed by someone or do I need to check?
2016-03-12 15:51 Rizen: not confirmed by someone, but i took metadata from an existing mapset
2016-03-12 15:51 Rizen: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/184786
2016-03-12 15:51 Rizen: oct, 2014
2016-03-12 15:52 Rizen: i will be removing character names from the tags though
2016-03-12 15:52 Avishay: you can keep those if you want, it shouldn't really be a problem
2016-03-12 15:52 Avishay: the Insane is okay too, nothing worth mentioning
2016-03-12 15:54 Avishay: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/897395 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Hard]]
2016-03-12 15:54 Avishay: 01:09:902 (5,6) - I don't really find this acceptable
2016-03-12 15:55 Avishay: completely unexpected and non-intuitive
2016-03-12 15:55 Avishay: you could do a triplet into a 2 repeats 1/4 slider
2016-03-12 15:57 Rizen: [http://i.imgur.com/nMKSRbk.png like this?]
2016-03-12 15:57 Avishay: no I meant that the last note in the triplet is the slider
2016-03-12 15:57 Avishay: starting 1/4 sliders on the blue tick when the music doesn't really support that is meh
2016-03-12 15:58 Avishay: I'd understand a niche in an Insane or Extra but I can't let this go through in a Hard
2016-03-12 15:58 Rizen: I'll simplify it actually
2016-03-12 15:58 Rizen: the reason why i used two sliders before was because it would be less strain on tapping fingers
2016-03-12 15:58 Rizen: but i'll simplify it to [http://i.imgur.com/1GOEZyY.png this]
2016-03-12 15:59 Avishay: that's great too, don't forget to hitsound what's needed
2016-03-12 16:00 Rizen: ok, changed
2016-03-12 16:00 Avishay: 01:10:419 (1) - this slider is rather odd, ending on basically nothing, could end it 1/2 beat earlier on the vocals or extend it until 01:12:488
2016-03-12 16:00 Avishay: eitherway, you should also lower the hitsound level and perhaps even change the set to soft
2016-03-12 16:01 Avishay: in the sliderend I mean
2016-03-12 16:01 Avishay: because it doesn't really contribute
2016-03-12 16:01 Rizen: ah yeah
2016-03-12 16:01 Rizen: I shortened it to 01:11:626 -
2016-03-12 16:01 Rizen: where the vocals change over
2016-03-12 16:02 Avishay: 01:23:437 (1) - I could suggest lowering audio / changing sampleset to soft on the ending spinner too
2016-03-12 16:02 Avishay: if you do that please do that in all of the diffs
2016-03-12 16:04 Avishay: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/898109 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Normal]]
2016-03-12 16:04 Avishay: 00:37:833 (2,3) - please stack properly to avoid problems in stack leniency
2016-03-12 16:05 Avishay: 00:53:178 (5,1) - perfect alignment would be nice
2016-03-12 16:05 Avishay: ah I'm blind lol it was fine ignore the last one
2016-03-12 16:07 Avishay: 01:10:419 (1) - same like on Hard
2016-03-12 16:07 Rizen: changed anyways, lol
2016-03-12 16:07 Rizen: it was out by like 1 deg
2016-03-12 16:07 Rizen: applied that one
2016-03-12 16:08 Rizen: fixed alignment of 01:22:833 (5) - too
2016-03-12 16:08 Avishay: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899432 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Easy]]
2016-03-12 16:08 Avishay: 00:29:040 (1,2) - alignment too :3
2016-03-12 16:09 Rizen: fixed
2016-03-12 16:09 Avishay: 01:10:419 (1) - funny how on Easy it was just fine lol
2016-03-12 16:09 Rizen: mmm
2016-03-12 16:10 Avishay: alright that's it, did you change the spinner?
2016-03-12 16:10 Rizen: yeah
2016-03-12 16:10 Avishay: alright then just update, I'll recheck and if everything is fine I'll heart it
2016-03-12 16:10 Rizen: thanks /o/
2016-03-12 16:11 Rizen: will this be your first heart?
2016-03-12 16:11 Avishay: nope
2016-03-12 16:11 Avishay: second
2016-03-12 16:11 Avishay: heh
2016-03-12 16:11 Rizen: ok updated
2016-03-12 16:13 Rizen: i'll probably check your map tomorrow, it's 3am where I am ;_;
2016-03-12 16:14 Avishay: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/898109 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Normal]]
2016-03-12 16:15 Avishay: 01:10:419 (1) - soft here too please
2016-03-12 16:15 Rizen: whoooooooooooooooooooops
2016-03-12 16:15 Avishay: on Fizz's diff too xd
2016-03-12 16:15 Avishay: 01:10:419 (1) -
2016-03-12 16:15 Avishay: shortening the slider here will ruin it so just put the soft sampleset
2016-03-12 16:16 Avishay: and he has different rhythm choices so that's okay
2016-03-12 16:16 Rizen: updated both
2016-03-12 16:18 Avishay: apparently I can't qualify because I have a qualified map today :O My last qualified map was 19 hours ago
2016-03-12 16:18 Avishay: eitherway it's fine
2016-03-12 16:18 Avishay: I'll qualify it when Ican
2016-03-12 16:18 Avishay:

2016-03-12 16:18 Rizen: thank you!
2016-03-12 16:19 Rizen: make sure to post logs and say you got the icon or else someone else might snipe it by accident
2016-03-12 16:19 Rizen: because that has happened before .-.
2016-03-12 16:20 Avishay: alrighty
2016-03-12 16:23 Rizen: ok i need to sleep now (3.20am), i'll check your map tomorrow!
2016-03-12 16:23 Rizen: thanks again--
2016-03-12 16:24 Avishay: alright gn