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Thank you for mod so much, was helpful :3[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
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[General]Added new hitsounds
- why don't use custom hitsounds? They can help your map much sexier ;3
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:02:455 (5,6) - make sure that this vertical pattern's angle is same as 00:01:655 (3,4) - since I saw your 00:02:455 (5) - isn't balanced between 00:02:055 (4,6) - Okay
- 00:04:055 (2,3) - this blanket can be fixed Yes
- 00:07:255 (2,4) - it should be same y axis Yes
- 00:09:655 (1) - wao overlap. this should be stacked with 00:08:055 (4) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4314089 Okay
- 00:27:255 (4) - pretty strange flow imo, try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4314095 Okay
- 01:00:909 (7) - add NC? Added
- 00:07:655 (4,5,1) - it should be mirrored with 00:06:455 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4314111 Yes
- 00:30:455 (1) - I'm pretty sure that it should be 1/2 reverse Yes
- 00:40:455 (1,2,3) - lmao use DS here, we're not on the insane diff yet m8 What is wrong with it here?
- 00:48:655 (2,3) - and 00:49:255 (4,5) - why x1.4? Use x1.5 DS m8 Yes
[Insane]
- 00:09:654 (1,3) - you can blanket them Yes
- 00:11:555 (2,3,4) - this jump? uh, maybe no. Why not? :c
- 00:18:855 (4,2,4) - you can maybe align these right. Yes
- 00:20:455 (5,6) - these kind of jumps are kinda forced based on the diff name and it's bpm imo esp. like 01:33:768 (4,5) - ;3 (well this is my last in pointing 1/4 jumps) Okay
- 00:21:455 (3,2) - stack plz Done
- 00:39:855 (7) - it should be balanced between 00:39:655 (6,8) - Why? This is a jump.
- 00:44:255 (6,7) - why u shrink the distance lmao Looks cool to me.
- 00:45:855 (4,1) - avoid touching Okay
- 00:59:688 (3,6) - nazi stack Yes :p
- 01:28:968 (7,8,9) - should be same y axis with 01:28:368 (3,4,5) - Yes
- 01:39:368 (2,4) - stack Okay
2016-01-12 17:51 Maakkeli: ok i'll tetsplay and stuff now
2016-01-12 17:53 CircleChu: :3
2016-01-12 17:54 Maakkeli: hmm i don't really like how you emphasize downbeats with a triple
2016-01-12 17:54 Maakkeli: doesn't really fit with the song
2016-01-12 17:54 Maakkeli: imo
2016-01-12 17:55 CircleChu: ._.
2016-01-12 17:55 Maakkeli: since the song is like the calmest thing ever and like ya
2016-01-12 17:55 Maakkeli: i really hate stuff that's not in the actual song
2016-01-12 17:56 Maakkeli: but your flow seems good
2016-01-12 17:57 Maakkeli: try to put more effort into proper emphasis
2016-01-12 17:57 Maakkeli: 00:14:055 (6) - like why is this spaced the same as the others?
2016-01-12 17:58 Maakkeli: it's clearly more "audible" than the others
2016-01-12 17:59 Maakkeli: 00:15:655 (6) - this would work better as a 1/2 slider imo
2016-01-12 18:00 Maakkeli: also about the hitsounds
2016-01-12 18:00 Maakkeli: i don't really think normal hitsounds fit cuz the song is only mostly only guitar
2016-01-12 18:00 Maakkeli: 00:17:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - these triples are overmapped af
2016-01-12 18:01 CircleChu: why?
2016-01-12 18:01 Maakkeli: well there isn't anything in the song that justifys those triples
2016-01-12 18:02 Maakkeli: like almost the whole song is just 1/2 picking
2016-01-12 18:02 Maakkeli: except that one part
2016-01-12 18:03 Maakkeli: 00:11:555 (2,3) - almost forgot to mention but this kind of jumping is pretty much a nono since it's just too damn unexpected in an insane
2016-01-12 18:06 Maakkeli: oh yea +30 to first red point
2016-01-12 18:07 CircleChu: timing is wrong?
2016-01-12 18:07 Maakkeli: at least that's how it sounded for me
2016-01-12 18:07 Maakkeli: maybe a little less like +25 or something
2016-01-12 18:09 Maakkeli: +21 omg i suck at timing
2016-01-12 18:09 Maakkeli: confirm this with someone better lol
2016-01-12 18:09 CircleChu: okay ._.
2016-01-12 18:12 Maakkeli: also i think you should nc every time there is a new bpm
2016-01-12 18:12 Maakkeli: and it was a bit dumb to read this because of that ar9
2016-01-12 18:13 Maakkeli: maybe something like ar8.5
2016-01-12 18:13 Maakkeli: it's kinda like cosmic cortex and that tidious low bpm start that is just picking
2016-01-12 18:13 Maakkeli: but cosmic cortex is on a whole different scale lol
2016-01-12 18:16 Maakkeli: also i think this is a bit boring visually but that's on a whole subjective level and my maps are boring visually too lol
2016-01-12 18:20 Maakkeli: yea i think that's about it imo your just repeating the same stuff