1. 根据其他的diff设定，Easy和Normal的Audio Lead-in应该放在1000比较合适
2. 另外我觉得这张BG不适合开Letterbox——正好把额头挡住一条……

1. 00:53:344 (1) - 有些莫名的节奏，应该是1/2或者1/1的折返而不是3/4
2. 00:54:644 (2) - 这个从蓝线开始的折返也完全没有道理，这里的节奏正常来说不应该是这样么……
   
3. 00:59:744 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 01:18:944 (1) - 直角拐的不好看，感觉弯成和前面类似45度或者60度的都会好一些
5. 01:44:819 (2,1) - 这种直来直去的地方也不是很舒服……
6. 01:57:944 (1) - ^，建议如图
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:03:086 (2,3) - 依然是直角拐弯的问题……不觉得这么放很僵硬么…………后面也一样，不重复说了

1. 00:10:944 (4) - 感觉上这里可以带一点弧度，不会显得太生硬
2. 00:40:544 (1,2) - 这两个也是感觉可以带一点点弧度或者形状，不用这么直来直去的……不是很好看
3. 00:50:944 (3) - (nazi)形状歪了
4. 01:05:744 - 我觉得这段结束在这里刚刚好，Break可以延迟到01:06:144 - 开始但是多了个Slider的话就感觉有一点拖沓了不够干净
   [img]puu.sh/19zMk[/img]
5. 01:12:544 (1,3) - 依然是不太好看的大直线…………
6. 01:37:694 (6,1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:44:444 (2) - ^，其实我觉得，这种直线和3号圈的搭配效果真的很一般……除非特别合适，哪怕加一个折线也能让视觉效果好很多～这一点上Easy的直线比你用的要好一点
   
   SPOILER

   
   后面那些长长的连续的直线我也是类似的建议，就不跟你来回说了

1. 00:07:944 (7,8) - 这里可以考虑合成一个reverse slider~
2. 01:10:244 (4,5) - Stream中间这两个突然没了打击音感觉不太舒服
3. 01:40:506 - 感觉这里可以加个note或者把前面slider延长到这里结束

1. Slider Tick Rate 2? SV这么高的话STR1有一点空的样子
2. 00:40:344 (9) - 顺着方向下来的话感觉这个应该在144:240附近
3. 00:59:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I want you 即视感…………这么放有点…………2
4. 01:36:006 (7,8) - 交换下位置的话打起来更舒服一点～
5. 01:39:569 (4) - ctrl+r for better flow?
6. 01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wa...wat happened here...
7. 02:23:658 (1) - 这种的……我能吐槽你slider没认真拉形状么……其实有很多这种的不过这个算是很明显的一个……
8. 02:33:729 - 感觉上这里可以加个note~

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~~
please reply this post to tell me where you fixed or not, thanks :>

[General]

1. 根据其他的diff设定，Easy和Normal的Audio Lead-in应该放在1000比较合适 都3000吧避免各种事情233
2. 另外我觉得这张BG不适合开Letterbox——正好把额头挡住一条…… 修正

[Easy]

1. 00:53:344 (1) - 有些莫名的节奏，应该是1/2或者1/1的折返而不是3/4 他是压后面的声音倒也不是不可 只不过音效配的有点.
2. 00:54:644 (2) - 这个从蓝线开始的折返也完全没有道理，这里的节奏正常来说不应该是这样么…… ^
   
3. 00:59:744 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
4. 01:18:944 (1) - 直角拐的不好看，感觉弯成和前面类似45度或者60度的都会好一些 鉴于他后面大量使用这种类型就还是不修改了
5. 01:44:819 (2,1) - 这种直来直去的地方也不是很舒服…… 已修
6. 01:57:944 (1) - ^，建议如图
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:03:086 (2,3) - 依然是直角拐弯的问题……不觉得这么放很僵硬么…………后面也一样，不重复说了

最后一段的直线Slider用的有些过了，建议考虑加一些小的弧线来柔化一下。

[Normal]

1. 00:10:944 (4) - 感觉上这里可以带一点弧度，不会显得太生硬 感觉略是老许的风格到还看得过去
2. 00:40:544 (1,2) - 这两个也是感觉可以带一点点弧度或者形状，不用这么直来直去的……不是很好看 ^
3. 00:50:944 (3) - (nazi)形状歪了 fixed
4. 01:05:744 - 我觉得这段结束在这里刚刚好，Break可以延迟到01:06:144 - 开始但是多了个Slider的话就感觉有一点拖沓了不够干净 我感觉是提前一点好所以修正了下
   [img]puu.sh/19zMk[/img]
5. 01:12:544 (1,3) - 依然是不太好看的大直线………… ^
6. 01:37:694 (6,1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:44:444 (2) - ^，其实我觉得，这种直线和3号圈的搭配效果真的很一般……除非特别合适，哪怕加一个折线也能让视觉效果好很多～这一点上Easy的直线比你用的要好一点
   
   SPOILER

   
   后面那些长长的连续的直线我也是类似的建议，就不跟你来回说了

[Insane]

1. Slider Tick Rate 2? SV这么高的话STR1有一点空的样子 2的话音效有点..而且1的话看起来问题也不大
2. 00:40:344 (9) - 顺着方向下来的话感觉这个应该在144:240附近 最后打一个绕圈隐藏中间
3. 00:59:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I want you 即视感…………这么放有点…………2 啊哈哈哈我蠢B不解释
4. 01:36:006 (7,8) - 交换下位置的话打起来更舒服一点～ 好
5. 01:39:569 (4) - ctrl+r for better flow? 应该是跟下面那个ctrl+r的
6. 01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wa...wat happened here... 折返连打233
7. 02:23:658 (1) - 这种的……我能吐槽你slider没认真拉形状么……其实有很多这种的不过这个算是很明显的一个…… 不我只是为了一点点的弧度有弯曲感啊
8. 02:33:729 - 感觉上这里可以加个note~ 感觉是顿下比较好...看看下面怎么说

That's all~~~star & good luck with the rank =v=

MMzz wrote:

Modding as requested!
[Beren's Hard]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 01:53:544 fixed

00:01:944 (1) - Delete this note to keep consistent with the Insane. Having a note 1/2 away from the end of a spinner is too close for a Hard anyways.fixed
00:29:944 (1) - This needs to be 1/2, the slider tail should land on the white tick to stay on beat. This is also too hard to understand for a hard diff.fixed
00:36:344 (1) - ^fixed
01:06:744 (3,4,5,6,7) - This does not fit the music at all. Listen closely and you'll hear the beat goes: http://puu.sh/1jK4p You're skipping over the blue tick with a slider and completely missing the rhythm of the music. This applies for every other time you do this: 01:08:344 (3,4,5,6) - , 01:10:144 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - fixed
01:11:144 (2) - Again you've got the wrong rhythm here.fixed
01:12:544 (1) - Why did you stop using the custom hitsound kick here? This part sounds super empty without it. ?
02:16:801 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You've also got the rhythm here completely wrong. Please follow the melody's rhythm, this will cause too much confusion.no i like this design
02:23:658 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

MMzz wrote:

Modding as requested!

[General]
Lower the Lead-in time to 1 or 1.5, 3 is way to long of a wait. ok.1.5s may more fit

[Insane]
00:03:144 (4,5,6) - This is 1/6 not 1/4. You should change this to a 1/6 slider or even a stack if you want. actually I don't wanna use 1/6 here cause I find some player to test,Most feels 1/4 fit more.
00:06:444 (4,5) - ^
00:09:644 (5,6) - ^
00:38:244 (1) - I would delete this note. The constant stream sounds ugly and floods the music with those custom hitsounds, and if you slow down the song you'll hear no beat there connecting the two streams. (If you do this make sure you move the new combo to 00:38:344 (2) - ) good idea
00:39:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Honestly this would be better with a slider. But if you want to keep the stream it should start on 00:39:944 (5) - because that's where it actually makes sense musically. 00:39:544 (1,2,3,4) - Have no music to represent a stream. um...I think this stream just make a feel isn't it?
01:14:944 (4) - Now I didn't have a problem with these sliders when you did them previously but this one isn't working so well. After it ends there is an awkward pause that leaves the player unsure of whats going to happen next. (Unlike before when these holds lead right into another note) If you swap this for a slider that turns up to the next stream it would play better. Also you could make the slider .50, it would fit very well. the slder follows the rhyme yeh.this pattern also comes from the map anizaki-suzaku .I think players may play it well01:18:944 (1,2) - Try making these note stacks instead. These can get easily mistaken for a slider-stream jump. ok.
01:38:819 - add a note here? The stop kills your flow and momentum. ummm.I think the break is the higtlight of this rhyme..Also make people remind this/
01:39:569 (4) - Reverse this? Could make a nice jump into the next combo. good idea
01:42:944 (7) - New combo? Represents the speedup slider and a combo fits here anyways with the downbeat. k.
01:54:944 (1) - Touching HP bar. >_> some grid down

That's all. No issues with the Normal and Easy. Good taiko as always aabc!
Fix this up and i'll give you your bubble back.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:30:544 - add a note here it follows the lrc
00:44:144 (4) - nicely done!
00:54:544 (2,3) - no stacking notes in Easy. too hard for beginners. It's easy to see for a easy diff.
00:56:144 (4,5,6,7) - this is a very confusing pattern for new players it follows the distance.
01:00:944 (2,3) - no stacks ^
01:03:744 (5,6,7) - confusing pattern ^

[impx]
00:07:744 (5) - this'd flow a bit better if you moved it to be above 4,6: http://puu.sh/1ljJr ...now follows.

[Beren]
00:18:744 (3) - move this out from under 2
00:25:144 (3) - ^
00:28:944 (5) - ^ 4
00:59:744 (1,1,1,1,1) - the varying slider velocities...I suppose they are meant to look cool but they really arent.
01:36:006 (2) - move out from under previous slider
01:42:944 (1) - this is illegal as it currently stands. make the wiggle wider
01:54:006 (2) - move out from under 1
02:10:801 (2) - extend this to the blue tick to fit the music maybe?
02:16:801 (1) - move out from under previous slider
The reason you don't want notes under slider track is because its visually unappealing and disrupts the flow of your map.

[Insane]
01:07:344 (7) - these very short repeats are totally unnecessary nya.It fits.
01:08:944 (6) - ^
01:13:744 (6) - ^
01:14:944 (4) - ^
If it weren't for all the overmap this would be a very nice map. As it is, you could stand to take out 50-100 combo ~.~

_Kiva wrote:

你可以删OSU了