Hey ^^
[impossiblexu's Normal]
[Beren's Hard]
[Insane]
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Good luck
[impossiblexu's Normal]
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Diff set:
4/6/5 for easiest diff in mapsett o.o?
this one rly should be much lower for 160 bpm song....
- 00:02:144 (1) - this one bug i guess, add NC manually here
- 00:08:544 (1) - should be some kind of finish here (custom or not custom, but smth should added imo )
- 00:08:344 - 00:14:744 why not use same SC1 clap here ?
- 00:10:944 (4) - a bit not good loking overlap, mb change shape ? http://puu.sh/EWJj
- 00:45:744 (4) - x:116 y:276 just to make it blanket
- 00:40:544 - 00:52:744 this part, i guess it would be fine if you add whistle on every big white tick
- 01:02:944 (1) - remove NC here, ur previous NC all 4-5 this one is short, also NC here 01:04:544 (3) - fitts much better, cause changing of music
- 01:02:944 (1,2) - do this ? http://puu.sh/EWKZ for better looking and avoid changing spacing from 0.9 to 1.1
- 01:38:444 (1,2,3) - move them all in the middle http://puu.sh/EWML ? haha
- 01:53:444 (5) - missed whistle i guess o.o!
- 01:56:444 (3) - why not add whistle at both tail and head ?
- 02:30:515 (1) - x:176 y:176 blanket
I would increase volume overal...ecpecially at those parts wich dont have SC1 clap and NC2 finish
+Ai mod showing some spacing errors o.o?
[Beren's Hard]
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- 00:01:944 (1) - for hard diff it will be better if you remove this note
- 00:16:544 (1,2,3) - i prefer to see larger spacing here, to prevent notes touching each other http://puu.sh/EWQu
- 00:18:744 (3) - hmm a bit close to next slider, better to move it
- 00:22:944 (1,2,3) - well same here
- 00:29:944 (1) - this one is quite confusing actually and NC dont help to see changing in SV, mostly because music dont give you any clue that this slider will be slower then others (same goes to ur next slow slider)
- 00:40:544 - 00:53:244 this part surrely need some hitsounds.....i almost dont hear that normal-hitnormal....try to copy hitsounds from [Insane] diff.
- 01:05:744 (1) - this slider 1/8 slider TAT, 2 MAT/BAT said its unrankable, 1 said its ugly and better to fix it, so i guess you got 3 good reasons to change it xD, 1 of the option is increase SV here to prevent stacking head and tail of the kickslider, or just use different pattern.
- 01:18:144 (1) - this NC is really unnecessary, u already showed rhytm changing on this antijump 01:17:344 (1) -
- 01:17:344 (1,2,1) - as i said before, increasing spacing here looks much better http://puu.sh/EWZU
- 01:19:226 (1,2,1) - unnecessary NC u will get same msg from MAT/BAT about NC spam
- 01:27:194 (5,6,7,8) - personally i think triple at #6 note fits better http://puu.sh/EXaL
- 01:30:475 - u can try to add note here, i think 5 note stream sounds good here o.o!
- 01:31:694 (3) - if u change playback rate to 25% u will clearly hear that there is no sound at 01:32:350, i suggest you to remove 1 arrow here http://puu.sh/EXdF
- 01:35:256 (5) - grid left, to prevent overlap
- 01:36:006 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, mb do this ? http://puu.sh/EXfn its also fit music + its much easier ==!
- 01:42:944 (1) - mb mute tail o.o?
- 01:57:569 (5) - since changing rhytm starts here, so why not start NC from this note o.o?
- 01:59:658 (6) - NC here 100%, changing music
02:25:801 (3,4,5,1) - dont like this triplet, mb duplets o.o? http://puu.sh/EYgn - 02:32:122 - plz move this green line to 02:32:229 because last tick of this slider 02:31:372 (4) - sounds not good ==
- 02:38:444 (1,2,3) - hmm mb, a bit large jump for hard diff
- 02:39:086 (5) - NC here i guess
- 02:40:372 (1) - i prefer to add note here 02:40:372 and start spinner at 02:40:801 cause changing in music starts here o.o!
I could say smth like * hey AR-8 OD-7 is too high for [Hard] diff in 160 bpm song*, but i wont say that cause this diff is [Insane], high amount of triplets/streams/jumps, its just not a good way to make [Hard] diffs like that....
But as additional Insane this diff is very good !
[Insane]
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- 00:07:144 (1,2,3,4) - wow im sure at 100% that jump pattern should starts a bit earlier o.o! http://puu.sh/EXoW
- 00:11:544 (6,1,2,3) - hmm, same here, i prefer to see jump on white tick, i think it fits music very good here so mb (extend 00:10:944 (5) - a bit and add jump note at 00:11:744 ? http://puu.sh/EXqK
- 00:26:144 (7) - NC here i guess, its a bit long compare to others + some BGmusic changes here
- 00:38:744 (5,6,7) - what i wanted to see here o.o http://puu.sh/EXui
- 00:53:244 (8,1) - some unexpected jump here, i think u can easy remove 00:53:244 (8) - cause there is no sound at BG music here
- 00:56:344 (1,2,3) - all previous triplets placed correctly in the middle so mb do sam for this o.o? http://puu.sh/EXvi
- 01:04:344 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, some unnecessary NC spam here....mb u can figure it out o.o?
- 01:36:194 - it was rly strange when i heard this note but didnt saw it www (+note)
- 01:38:444 (9) - NC here
- 01:57:944 (1,1,2,3) - combine them in 1 combo color ?
- 01:59:658 - 02:13:372 this part a bit strange ussage of NC
01:59:658 (4) - first NC should starts here cause changing in music then add NC on every big white tick (its rly fit here o.o!) - 01:59:658 (4) - i think u should add smth on the head of slider
- 02:06:515 (4) - same here
- 02:08:229 (7) - whistle i guess ? like u did here 02:01:372 (1) -
- 02:16:801 (5) - NC here like u did 02:23:658 (1) -
- 02:25:372 (4) - NC
- 02:40:372 - prefer to add note here and start spinner from 02:40:801 - cause music changes and start fade here o.o!
[offtop]
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Mystica prooooo \o.o/-
#A bit strange to see such high diff set in easiest diff, if impossiblexu dont want to change it i think u will need another 1.5-2 star diff
#Same with Beren's diff, its not hard.....its insane, and AR-8 OD-7 obviously to high in [Hard] diff for 160 bpm song.....
#Audio lead in 3000 is way too much, 1500 is enough, also make sure to keep this in every diff, cause right now impossiblexu's diff dont have any o.o
Good luck