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Topic Starter
Mystica
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月30日 at 23:46:57

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: EXEC_HYMM_BATTLESPHERE/.#Finnel extracting
Source: Ar tonelico III
Tags: pieces qoga knell of ar ciel tyria impossiblexu beren aabc271 ts8zs
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6452kb
Play Time: 02:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. aabc's Taiko (4.83 stars, 766 notes)
  2. Beren's Hard (4.88 stars, 482 notes)
  3. impossiblexu's Normal (3.14 stars, 186 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 643 notes)
  5. Ts8zs' Easy (2.19 stars, 143 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - EXEC_HYMM_BATTLESPHERE/.#Finnel extracting
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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AT3

[Insane] by Mystica
[Hard] by beren
[Normal] by impossiblexu
[Easy] by ts8zs
[Taiko] by aabc271

maybe my last map
Dotsu
~STAR~
eveless
NTR鸭梨好大

喂歌名和artist还没改啊
NatsumeRin
压力。红空那套行不行。。。
Normal音我还在想。几个clap试下来都不合适而我讨厌逼逼逼。
只有前面的一小段soft.

Download: 21809 Kitamura Eri With Mariya Ise With Hayami Saori - Yume Obono.rar
Topic Starter
Mystica

eveless wrote:

NTR鸭梨好大

喂歌名和artist还没改啊 等RIN大搞完了hitsound我再修整下SB在调些东西一起fullsubmit

NatsumeRin wrote:

压力。红空那套行不行。。。 其实我试过但是normal各种不合适咦
Normal音我还在想。几个clap试下来都不合适而我讨厌逼逼逼。
只有前面的一小段soft. 好吧NTR你是无敌的 RIN大人辛苦了嗯
Dotsu
ts8zs
irc骗kd
18:26 <ts8zs> : 最后这个转盘不合适= =?
18:27 <ts8zs> : 话说不是有另外一张么=w=
18:30 <ts8zs> : 最后那个转盘直接掐掉好了= =
18:33 <Mystica> : 怒吃飯晚上給你mod
18:34 <ts8zs> : 首先有个问题- -
18:35 <ts8zs> : 滑条倍数只能有3个
18:35 <ts8zs> : 01:05:744 (1) - 这个unrankable
18:37 <ts8zs> : 00:10:944 (4) - 这个滑条摆成半圆然后下一个放中间?
18:40 <ts8zs> : 01:18:144 (1) - 尾巴加上什么音效之类的?clap?
18:42 <ts8zs> : 02:28:801 (1) - 这个真的没问题么?我不确定……
18:43 <ts8zs> : hard↑
18:47 <ts8zs> : insane↓
18:47 <ts8zs> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343326
18:48 <ts8zs> : 00:40:344 (9) - 这个回摆有点突兀
18:49 <ts8zs> : 00:59:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - 这是上古图的摆法了= =
18:49 <ts8zs> : 话说好早之前的图啊= =
18:57 <ts8zs> : 01:36:194 - 这里加个note
18:59 <ts8zs> : 01:42:944 (7) - 这里变成0.5滑条然后变成向下的怎么样= =
18:59 <ts8zs> : 01:45:381 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - rank图这种不常见
19:05 <ts8zs> : 00:26:944 (10) - 上下颠倒下?
19:06 <ts8zs> : 01:19:881 (4,5) - 换成三往返
19:08 <ts8zs> : 01:20:444 - 01:32:444 - 把没有人声的Finish去掉
19:10 <ts8zs> : Easy↓
19:10 <ts8zs> : 01:32:444 -
19:10 <ts8zs> : 往返
19:14 <ts8zs> : 00:25:944 - 去掉
19:18 <ts8zs> : 就这样吧懒得动了QAQ
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....M4M~
EDIT:~非常感谢上次的建议!~。。。

[General]
♪~
hmm~没有kiaitime可以么。。?~0.0~

[impossiblexu's Normal]
00:10:544 (3,4) - overlap不是很好看~试试这样?~
SPOILER
144,96,10944,2,2,B|331:95,1,180,2|0
368,120,11744,6,0,B|423:159|493:131,1,120
408,216,12544,2,2,B|379:276|422:330,1,120,2|0
312,328,13344,2,0,B|192:328,1,120
144,304,13944,1,0
120,256,14144,2,2,B|86:210|132:190|97:136,1,120,2|0
144,40,14944,6,0,B|176:76|253:93|323:80|380:29,1,240,4|8
424,136,16144,1,0

01:02:944 (1,2) - 这里的距离~~~嘛。。。。
SPOILER
168,160,63744,2,0,B|127:107|172:48,1,120,2|0
264,0,64544,1,10
336,80,64944,1,10
336,80,65344,2,0,B|393:123,1,60,10|0

02:11:658 (2) - 移动到x:264 y:256?~然后02:13:372 (1) - 移动到x:264 y:40?~

[Beren's Hard]
01:07:044 (4) - 删掉这个note?~然后把01:06:744 (3) - 延长到这个时间上?!~感觉那个地方没有明显的节奏。。。总是会漏按~
01:08:344 (3,4) - ^
01:19:506 (1,1) - 这两个的距离~~~~hmm.....也许可以在拉开一点。。。老是按快~just suggestion~
....找不到明显的问题。。。orz~

[Insane]
00:04:344 (4,5,6,7,8) - 向←移一格?~
00:38:544 (3,4) - 改成一个slider?!~。。。。每次都在这里卡一下~xD....手指按不过来。。。orz~

。。。。。。真心。。。找不出什么太大的问题。。。初心者~。。QAQ~
BG已经PM了~我拿不定主意。。如果没有中意的就ignore掉吧~
Star!~☆♪~
Good Luck~

话说考完试了么0.0.~~~final exam~xD~
KRZY
[impossiblexu's Normal]
01:38:444 (1,2) - Try this instead to better fit the music:

[Beren's Hard]
00:08:144 (8) - Move this slider to 00:08:044 and add a note at 00:08:344 to better fit the music.
00:10:944 (4,5) - Not a neat pattern, I suggest the 5 note be placed outside the slider, maybe like this:
00:29:944 (1) - Here, the gold combo color is used to indicate a slowdown in the slider velocity. However,
00:33:344 (1,2) - the gold combo color here is used to indicate s speedup in the slider velocity. For better readability, I suggest using different combo colors for speedups and slowdowns. Same goes for the rest of the map.
01:11:544 (3) - Make this slider begin at 01:11:444 and end at 01:11:644 to fit the music better.
01:56:444 (1,2,3,4) - As a player, I found triplets placed at the endpoint of the slider that chronologically do not immediately follow the end of a slider to be very confusing to read. I suggest you place the triplet (2,3,4 notes) somewhere else. (I know this particular bit of modding sounds a little confusing; if you can't fully understand what I mean by this, contact me via forum PM or message me in-game and I'll try to explain more clearly. Sorry for not being able to give a better explanation :<)
02:31:372 (4) - Listening to the music without the notes, I felt that the end of this slider was not necessary to have a normal hitsound. Like the rest of the slider, use the soft hitsound for the end of this slider.

[Insane]
00:43:144 (5,6,7) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/4 here to better fit the music.
00:49:544 (6) - Try and put a repeating 1/6 slider here instead of a none-repeating 1/4 slider. The rhythm is 1/6, so it fits the music better. A suggestion would be:
02:28:801 (1,2) - Try this to better fit the music:
02:35:872 (2,3,4) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/4 here to better fit the music.

I see great potential in this mapset, with the right creativity this could turn into a masterpiece. Good luck with this!
Topic Starter
Mystica

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....M4M~
EDIT:~非常感谢上次的建议!~。。。

[General]
♪~
hmm~没有kiaitime可以么。。?~0.0~ 可以的OTL

[Insane]
00:04:344 (4,5,6,7,8) - 向←移一格?~ 好像現在剛好對稱?
00:38:544 (3,4) - 改成一个slider?!~。。。。每次都在这里卡一下~xD....手指按不过来。。。orz~ OTL 所以是難點啊 看後面再有人說的話就改

。。。。。。真心。。。找不出什么太大的问题。。。初心者~。。QAQ~
BG已经PM了~我拿不定主意。。如果没有中意的就ignore掉吧~ 噗 我會說好多AT2么 依然很謝謝啊~
Star!~☆♪~
Good Luck~

话说考完试了么0.0.~~~final exam~xD~ 考完了XD

ts8zs wrote:

irc骗kd
18:26 <ts8zs> : 最后这个转盘不合适= =?
18:27 <ts8zs> : 话说不是有另外一张么=w=
18:30 <ts8zs> : 最后那个转盘直接掐掉好了= =
18:33 <Mystica> : 怒吃飯晚上給你mod
18:34 <ts8zs> : 首先有个问题- -
18:35 <ts8zs> : 滑条倍数只能有3个
18:35 <ts8zs> : 01:05:744 (1) - 这个unrankable
18:37 <ts8zs> : 00:10:944 (4) - 这个滑条摆成半圆然后下一个放中间?
18:40 <ts8zs> : 01:18:144 (1) - 尾巴加上什么音效之类的?clap?
18:42 <ts8zs> : 02:28:801 (1) - 这个真的没问题么?我不确定……
18:43 <ts8zs> : hard↑
18:47 <ts8zs> : insane↓
18:47 <ts8zs> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343326
18:48 <ts8zs> : 00:40:344 (9) - 这个回摆有点突兀
18:49 <ts8zs> : 00:59:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - 这是上古图的摆法了= =
18:49 <ts8zs> : 话说好早之前的图啊= =
18:57 <ts8zs> : 01:36:194 - 这里加个note
18:59 <ts8zs> : 01:42:944 (7) - 这里变成0.5滑条然后变成向下的怎么样= =
18:59 <ts8zs> : 01:45:381 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - rank图这种不常见
19:05 <ts8zs> : 00:26:944 (10) - 上下颠倒下?
19:06 <ts8zs> : 01:19:881 (4,5) - 换成三往返
19:08 <ts8zs> : 01:20:444 - 01:32:444 - 把没有人声的Finish去掉
19:10 <ts8zs> : Easy↓
19:10 <ts8zs> : 01:32:444 -
19:10 <ts8zs> : 往返
19:14 <ts8zs> : 00:25:944 - 去掉
19:18 <ts8zs> : 就这样吧懒得动了QAQ

KRZY wrote:

[Insane]
00:43:144 (5,6,7) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/4 here to better fit the music.
00:49:544 (6) - Try and put a repeating 1/6 slider here instead of a none-repeating 1/4 slider. The rhythm is 1/6, so it fits the music better. A suggestion would be:
02:28:801 (1,2) - Try this to better fit the music:
02:35:872 (2,3,4) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/4 here to better fit the music.

a little uncertain with 1/6 beat.let me think.
I see great potential in this mapset, with the right creativity this could turn into a masterpiece. Good luck with this!
some mod fix yeh.easy leave to xu.Thanks for your guys
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hi

[*]From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[*][impossiblexu's Normal]

00:08:544 - 这里用个soft的finish吧
最后的spinner不全程无声?做个渐出吧

[*][Beren's Hard]

00:48:144 - 微下移一些,碰到hpbar了
02:16:801 - 再外移些..现在有些完全遮住了 x 204 y 72
02:28:801 - 这个移动些位置,sliderfollowcircle近一半出屏幕了 看起来很不舒服的..

[*][Insane]

01:00:344 - 这里起的一些4分1 note..有些突然吧,每个应该往里收两格,不过这样就破坏了排列了,不过这里的排列样式也太方方正正了吧..和图的其他部分感觉不够统一协调

其余没什么了..

good luck!
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hey ^^

[impossiblexu's Normal]
SPOILER

  • Diff set:
    4/6/5 for easiest diff in mapsett o.o?
    this one rly should be much lower for 160 bpm song....
  1. 00:02:144 (1) - this one bug i guess, add NC manually here
  2. 00:08:544 (1) - should be some kind of finish here (custom or not custom, but smth should added imo )
  3. 00:08:344 - 00:14:744 why not use same SC1 clap here ?
  4. 00:10:944 (4) - a bit not good loking overlap, mb change shape ? http://puu.sh/EWJj
  5. 00:45:744 (4) - x:116 y:276 just to make it blanket
  6. 00:40:544 - 00:52:744 this part, i guess it would be fine if you add whistle on every big white tick
  7. 01:02:944 (1) - remove NC here, ur previous NC all 4-5 this one is short, also NC here 01:04:544 (3) - fitts much better, cause changing of music
  8. 01:02:944 (1,2) - do this ? http://puu.sh/EWKZ for better looking and avoid changing spacing from 0.9 to 1.1
  9. 01:38:444 (1,2,3) - move them all in the middle http://puu.sh/EWML ? haha
  10. 01:53:444 (5) - missed whistle i guess o.o!
  11. 01:56:444 (3) - why not add whistle at both tail and head ?
  12. 02:30:515 (1) - x:176 y:176 blanket

    I would increase volume overal...ecpecially at those parts wich dont have SC1 clap and NC2 finish
    +Ai mod showing some spacing errors o.o?

[Beren's Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:01:944 (1) - for hard diff it will be better if you remove this note
  2. 00:16:544 (1,2,3) - i prefer to see larger spacing here, to prevent notes touching each other http://puu.sh/EWQu
  3. 00:18:744 (3) - hmm a bit close to next slider, better to move it
  4. 00:22:944 (1,2,3) - well same here
  5. 00:29:944 (1) - this one is quite confusing actually and NC dont help to see changing in SV, mostly because music dont give you any clue that this slider will be slower then others (same goes to ur next slow slider)
  6. 00:40:544 - 00:53:244 this part surrely need some hitsounds.....i almost dont hear that normal-hitnormal....try to copy hitsounds from [Insane] diff.
  7. 01:05:744 (1) - this slider 1/8 slider TAT, 2 MAT/BAT said its unrankable, 1 said its ugly and better to fix it, so i guess you got 3 good reasons to change it xD, 1 of the option is increase SV here to prevent stacking head and tail of the kickslider, or just use different pattern.
  8. 01:18:144 (1) - this NC is really unnecessary, u already showed rhytm changing on this antijump 01:17:344 (1) -
  9. 01:17:344 (1,2,1) - as i said before, increasing spacing here looks much better http://puu.sh/EWZU
  10. 01:19:226 (1,2,1) - unnecessary NC u will get same msg from MAT/BAT about NC spam
  11. 01:27:194 (5,6,7,8) - personally i think triple at #6 note fits better http://puu.sh/EXaL
  12. 01:30:475 - u can try to add note here, i think 5 note stream sounds good here o.o!
  13. 01:31:694 (3) - if u change playback rate to 25% u will clearly hear that there is no sound at 01:32:350, i suggest you to remove 1 arrow here http://puu.sh/EXdF
  14. 01:35:256 (5) - grid left, to prevent overlap
  15. 01:36:006 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, mb do this ? http://puu.sh/EXfn its also fit music + its much easier ==!
  16. 01:42:944 (1) - mb mute tail o.o?
  17. 01:57:569 (5) - since changing rhytm starts here, so why not start NC from this note o.o?
  18. 01:59:658 (6) - NC here 100%, changing music
    02:25:801 (3,4,5,1) - dont like this triplet, mb duplets o.o? http://puu.sh/EYgn
  19. 02:32:122 - plz move this green line to 02:32:229 because last tick of this slider 02:31:372 (4) - sounds not good ==
  20. 02:38:444 (1,2,3) - hmm mb, a bit large jump for hard diff
  21. 02:39:086 (5) - NC here i guess
  22. 02:40:372 (1) - i prefer to add note here 02:40:372 and start spinner at 02:40:801 cause changing in music starts here o.o!

    I could say smth like * hey AR-8 OD-7 is too high for [Hard] diff in 160 bpm song*, but i wont say that cause this diff is [Insane], high amount of triplets/streams/jumps, its just not a good way to make [Hard] diffs like that....
    But as additional Insane this diff is very good !

[Insane]
SPOILER
  1. 00:07:144 (1,2,3,4) - wow im sure at 100% that jump pattern should starts a bit earlier o.o! http://puu.sh/EXoW
  2. 00:11:544 (6,1,2,3) - hmm, same here, i prefer to see jump on white tick, i think it fits music very good here so mb (extend 00:10:944 (5) - a bit and add jump note at 00:11:744 ? http://puu.sh/EXqK
  3. 00:26:144 (7) - NC here i guess, its a bit long compare to others + some BGmusic changes here
  4. 00:38:744 (5,6,7) - what i wanted to see here o.o http://puu.sh/EXui
  5. 00:53:244 (8,1) - some unexpected jump here, i think u can easy remove 00:53:244 (8) - cause there is no sound at BG music here
  6. 00:56:344 (1,2,3) - all previous triplets placed correctly in the middle so mb do sam for this o.o? http://puu.sh/EXvi
  7. 01:04:344 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, some unnecessary NC spam here....mb u can figure it out o.o?
  8. 01:36:194 - it was rly strange when i heard this note but didnt saw it www (+note)
  9. 01:38:444 (9) - NC here
  10. 01:57:944 (1,1,2,3) - combine them in 1 combo color ?
  11. 01:59:658 - 02:13:372 this part a bit strange ussage of NC
    01:59:658 (4) - first NC should starts here cause changing in music then add NC on every big white tick (its rly fit here o.o!)
  12. 01:59:658 (4) - i think u should add smth on the head of slider
  13. 02:06:515 (4) - same here
  14. 02:08:229 (7) - whistle i guess ? like u did here 02:01:372 (1) -
  15. 02:16:801 (5) - NC here like u did 02:23:658 (1) -
  16. 02:25:372 (4) - NC
  17. 02:40:372 - prefer to add note here and start spinner from 02:40:801 - cause music changes and start fade here o.o!


[offtop]
SPOILER

  • #A bit strange to see such high diff set in easiest diff, if impossiblexu dont want to change it i think u will need another 1.5-2 star diff
    #Same with Beren's diff, its not hard.....its insane, and AR-8 OD-7 obviously to high in [Hard] diff for 160 bpm song.....
    #Audio lead in 3000 is way too much, 1500 is enough, also make sure to keep this in every diff, cause right now impossiblexu's diff dont have any o.o
Mystica prooooo \o.o/
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Mystica

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

[Insane]

01:00:344 - 这里起的一些4分1 note..有些突然吧,每个应该往里收两格,不过这样就破坏了排列了,不过这里的排列样式也太方方正正了吧..和图的其他部分感觉不够统一协调

其余没什么了.. 這段不知道如何改看看下面情況

good luck!

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hey ^^

[Insane]
SPOILER
  1. 00:07:144 (1,2,3,4) - wow im sure at 100% that jump pattern should starts a bit earlier o.o! http://puu.sh/EXoW actually not know how to do it well...leave for suggestion
  2. 00:11:544 (6,1,2,3) - hmm, same here, i prefer to see jump on white tick, i think it fits music very good here so mb (extend 00:10:944 (5) - a bit and add jump note at 00:11:744 ? http://puu.sh/EXqK 00:11:544 (6,1) - this place is normal distance.I just make jump at 00:12:344 (4,5) - this
  3. 00:26:144 (7) - NC here i guess, its a bit long compare to others + some BGmusic changes here yeh added
  4. 00:38:744 (5,6,7) - what i wanted to see here o.o http://puu.sh/EXui yeh change to another part
  5. 00:53:244 (8,1) - some unexpected jump here, i think u can easy remove 00:53:244 (8) - cause there is no sound at BG music here oh my careless
  6. 00:56:344 (1,2,3) - all previous triplets placed correctly in the middle so mb do sam for this o.o? http://puu.sh/EXvi yeh.I haven't noticed that
  7. 01:04:344 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, some unnecessary NC spam here....mb u can figure it out o.o? k.some change
  8. 01:36:194 - it was rly strange when i heard this note but didnt saw it www (+note) where my lost note!
  9. 01:38:444 (9) - NC here some change
  10. 01:57:944 (1,1,2,3) - combine them in 1 combo color ? yeh
  11. 01:59:658 - 02:13:372 this part a bit strange ussage of NC some change
    01:59:658 (4) - first NC should starts here cause changing in music then add NC on every big white tick (its rly fit here o.o!)
  12. 01:59:658 (4) - i think u should add smth on the head of slider
  13. 02:06:515 (4) - same here
  14. 02:08:229 (7) - whistle i guess ? like u did here 02:01:372 (1) -
  15. 02:16:801 (5) - NC here like u did 02:23:658 (1) -
  16. 02:25:372 (4) - NC
  17. 02:40:372 - prefer to add note here and start spinner from 02:40:801 - cause music changes and start fade here o.o!
    all fixed except last.cause I think that more fit..


[offtop]
SPOILER

  • #A bit strange to see such high diff set in easiest diff, if impossiblexu dont want to change it i think u will need another 1.5-2 star diff It's hard to find someone to do the easy >_>
    #Same with Beren's diff, its not hard.....its insane, and AR-8 OD-7 obviously to high in [Hard] diff for 160 bpm song..... haha.beren is humankind
    #Audio lead in 3000 is way too much, 1500 is enough, also make sure to keep this in every diff, cause right now impossiblexu's diff dont have any o.o 3000 makes people have more time to prepare I think..may wait other suggestion.
Mystica prooooo \o.o/
Good luck :)
God like modder cRyo[iceeicee] :)
Thanks you guys.
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
[Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:]
- [Beren's Hard] : 3000
- [impossiblexu's Normal] : 0
- [Insane] : 3000



[impossiblexu's Normal]
00:25:944 (3) - delete
00:45:744 (4) - try to move to x:128 y:280


[Beren's Hard]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:53:544 - snap to 01:53:537
00:18:744 (3) - try to move away from 00:18:144 (2)
00:25:144 (3) - ^?
00:33:744 (2) - move to x:512 y:212
00:45:144 (1) - try to jump?
01:11:744 (1) - why 1/8?
01:14:944 (1) - too noisy :<
02:16:801 (1) - suggest moving to x:160 y:92


[Insane]
00:04:044 (2) - spacing略小
00:06:144 (3) - 建议和(8)重叠
00:07:744 (4) - .-. 对称没错啦 不过这样感觉不好看.. 被00:06:544 (5) 挡一下总感觉...
00:40:344 (9) - 移动到x:136 y:240
01:05:544 (1) - 和下面的重叠?
01:19:881 (4) - spacing呢=-=
02:22:372 (8) - 考虑加个note?
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没什么大问题
Great Mapset
Good Luck :3
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
If you won't use SB, I suggest you delete your osb file.
02:40:801 (1) - too long

[Normal]
AR-1~2
02:40:801 (1) - fade out(like Insnae)

[Hard]
You must set Kiai Time!
00:25:144 (3) - separating slider and circle is better.
00:28:544 (4,5) - not natural
00:30:344 (1) - remove NC
01:09:744 (2,3,4) - not good placement.
01:34:506 (2) - separate slider and circle.
01:36:006 (2) - ^
02:06:086 (1) - remove NC
02:06:515 (3) - add NC
02:16:801 (1) - separate slider and circle.
02:19:158 (2) - ^
this diff look like Insnae...

[Insane]
02:37:372 (7,1) - add and remove NC
01:50:444 (8,1) - ^
02:02:229 (1) - remove NC
02:03:086 (3) - add NC
02:04:801 (1) - remove NC
02:06:515 (4) - add NC
02:08:229 (1) - remove NC
02:09:944 (3) - add NC


Good luck!!
ts8zs
我想试试easy diff不要期待啊( # ▽ # )
http://puu.sh/ItoN finished 音效你下吧……我搞不懂你那个音效……其实这样挺好?(slap
background
不太清楚歌曲背景所以告诉我我再找找……?
我签名里的第一个皮肤其实挺适合……?雾
半滑条的灵活运用=w=
Kiiwa
yooooo Beren tells me to mod...

how cute

impossiblexu's Normal
00:00:544 - 00:01:744 - You want nothing here? Not even a slider? lol
00:16:544 (3) - 00:22:944 (3) - It would be better as somthing else...?
01:04:544 (3,4,5,6) - Could use new combo somewhere
02:18:515 (3) - Make better please ahaha

Beren's Hard
Even with OD so low, I feel you could make some parts easier...
00:13:744 (3,4,5,6,7) - This dosen't have to be a stream...
00:29:944 (1) - End at 00:30:344 - please
00:36:344 (1) - ^
01:01:344 (1,1) - Move to X:184 Y:84 for perfect aliignment with 01:04:944 (1,2) - (you may also want to move 01:02:144 (1) - closer now ^^)
01:08:644 (4) - Useless note
01:17:344 (1,2,1) - Make this all just green combo
01:43:319 - Make this timing point Soft please :o
02:16:801 (1) - Start somwhere else? So hidden..
02:25:801 (3,4,5,6) - Unpredictable spacing

Insane
00:01:944 - Why not use this sound?! lol so cute
00:04:344 (4) - 00:05:144 (8) - center please
00:19:344 (6) - Remove whistle ;)
00:26:544 (3) - Add whistle
00:40:244 (8) - Delete note
01:43:319 - Make this timing point Soft please :o
01:45:662 (1) - New combo should not start on a blue tick, I would suggest remove new combo all together
Topic Starter
Mystica
yeh...fixed the mod already..sorry for not post it because I've edit the post and It get closed when I finish it...It takes me half an hour >_>
I got lazy to edit again so sorry for not post.
thank your guys kiiwa hibarirailwayz and Snowy Dream
For ts8zs:
我去看看那皮膚如何 >_>
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
话说标题的斜线后面是不是有个点 EXEC_HYMN_BATTLESPHERE/. 这样
Topic Starter
Mystica

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

话说标题的斜线后面是不是有个点 EXEC_HYMN_BATTLESPHERE/. 这样
沒吧 我記得我直接copy的ost裏面的名稱
ts8zs

突然发现点东西……莫非是新加进去的……?我记得有这条啊……
Topic Starter
Mystica

ts8zs wrote:


突然发现点东西……莫非是新加进去的……?我记得有这条啊……
圖裂了 >_>
edit:你發錯圖了吧lol
ts8zs

Mystica wrote:

ts8zs wrote:


突然发现点东西……莫非是新加进去的……?我记得有这条啊……
圖裂了 >_>
edit:你發錯圖了吧lol
我的意思是这个rank图有这么多滑条速度=w=b……我是不是mod错了什么的
Topic Starter
Mystica

ts8zs wrote:

Mystica wrote:

圖裂了 >_>
edit:你發錯圖了吧lol
我的意思是这个rank图有这么多滑条速度=w=b……我是不是mod错了什么的
3slider速度只是guide line 如果運用的好而且十分出彩的話可以無視的
Dusty
oh boy, Ar tonelico!

[Title]
EXEC_HYMM_BATTLESPHERE/#.Finnel extracting
yes, really, that's a double M...
vgmdb evidence, for what it's worth

[Tags]
add "Kazuki Yanagawa" and "gust"? those are the composer and the company that made the game

[Background]
uh... that's Saki :P oh well

[Beren's Hard]
AR+1?
00:29:944 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The stacking in this section is weird...
00:36:344 (1,1,2,3) - ^ :/
00:37:344 (1,2,3) - yeah, maybe play around with stack leniency
01:19:881 (1,2) - kinda confusing?

[impossiblexu's Normal]
00:29:344 (3) - imo would be better as a 1 beat slider and then a 1.5 beat slider, maybe something like this? i dunno
01:03:744 (2) - why didn't you just copy (1) and horizontal flip? :P
02:08:229 (2) - I don't get what rhythm this slider goes to

[Tz8zs's Easy]
01:21:944 (4) - combobroke because I couldn't see the repeat :( please change it, that's really not OK in an Easy
if you change that one thing this is one of my favorite Easy diffs ever!

yeah, this definitely deserves a star
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